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After a certain incident, Rarity is now your maid. What kind

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After a certain incident, Rarity is now your maid. What kind of stuff will you make her do?
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>>28056188
Yeah right, like I'd trust that cunt in my room.
She'd probably unbox my collectible figures and dump the wastebasket that's full of crusty kleenexs that I sometimes re-use to bust in.
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She can fuck off is what she can do
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>>28056188
I will make her clean up my mistakes.
:(
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>>28056228
Haha

N-nice joke
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>>28056188
>After a certain incident
No, OP, you're going to put more effort into this than that. I want at least five sentences of backstory, pronto.
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>>28056188
Dusting, vacuuming, doing the laundry.


Without panties.
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>>28056247
lood
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>>28056244
Good thing I have some backstory right here
>>28044291
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>>28056243
No.
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>>28056247
>Only in panties
FTFY
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>>28056277
Alright, that's two. Three more. Try to relate why she's your maid.
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>>28056212
Sounds like you have some issues you need to work out
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>>28056303
Because she isn't willing to do manual labor.
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>>28056303
If you look through that thread, you'll find the answer
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>>28056188
Tell her to go home.
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>>28056283
>Only in stockings
FTFY
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>>28056247
You're going to regret that when she's on her period. Shit will be dripping all over your clean, white carpet. Sure, she'll attempt to clean it up, but like wine, nothing gets out a period blood stain.
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>>28056388
what are tampons
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>>28056388
superbad pls
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>>28056317
Nips Fuck yeah!!
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>>28056317
Sure, I'll help you out of those tattered clothes
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>>28056405
Something from Star Wars, I think.
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>>28056405
I legitimately forgot about those.
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>>28056315
But Anon
She's already home
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I'd love to have Fluttershy be my maid for a week. Id have her walk around in only lingerie and it's be cute seeing her get all nervous and embarrassed being so exposed.
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>>28056188

Scrub toilets. Scrub floors. Scrub the toilets again. Every day.
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>>28056188
Polish my cock with her mouth
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>>28056831
Fuck's sake Anon, how bad is your aim?
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>>28056188
I'd force her to dress in only panties, stockings and a skirt. I'd have an egg vibe inside her pussy all the time, a wireless one that I'd control. Keeping her lactating would be a must, so I'd constantly play with her nipples, or have her do it if i couldn't. In that state is how I would make her wait on me and do my chores, and if she makes even one little mistake she'd be face or tit fucked. She'd be expected to service my guests just the same as myself, and my guests would also get a turn in her punishment. In fact, most days she would be to busy cleaning cum off of herself than cleaning the house.
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>>28056188
the ultimate torture
give her a uniform that is practical for cleaning duties, and no part of it matches
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>>28057288
You monster.
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>>28056188
Beat her with a crowbar while pretending to be Gordon Freeman.
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>>28056985
Id only want her to fuck me. Not any of my guests.
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>>28044291
Original Thread
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rib in pib
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>>28056388
>implying that isn't what I want
>Implying I don't want her to walk around, embarrassed as she bleeds all over the place
>Implying I don't want to make her clean the blood constantly in a futile struggle as she keeps bleeding where she cleans

Fucking casuals man
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>>28056188
I'd make her spend time with me after she's done cleaning and stay longer than she'd like to combat my crippling loneliness and desperation for female attention.
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>>28056188
I'd get anal with her. I'd force her to clean my room spotless, so clean I could eat her ass off it.
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>>28058704
>You will never turn Rarity into your maid slave
>You will never reveal your crippling depression to her
>You will never slowly develop a friendship with her
>You will never decide to free her from servitude one day, only for her to say that she doesn't want to leave
>She will never reveal how she's fallen in love with you
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>>28058906
>She will never reveal how she's fallen in love with you
That's called Stockholm's syndrome Anon.
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>>28058928
Spike has it for Twilight
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>>28058990
That is plausible.
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>>28058928
This is the closest anon will ever get to love
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>You will never make her change the tapestry again and again
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Anon who wrote >>28051593 here. After posting that I had to leave for the entire day. Didn't think anyone would be interested. But if you guys still care, I can write some more in a few hours.
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>kill self
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>>28059739
I care for it more than I care about my well being.

Which is not very telling, but hey
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>>28057418
I'd want her degraded and broken, begging for whatever cock she can get till everyone knows her as a classless slut.
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>>28058928
Whatever gets the nookie, baby
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>>28056228
t.funnychanner
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>>28059739
Please do, kindly writefriend
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>>28056305
Shut up, faggot.
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Well, I've got good news and bad news.

Good, I've gotten an idea of the overall story. It'll be kept relatively short and sweet.

Bad, more things have come up again, and I've got another full day to deal with. So I can't write anything until late tonight.

But don't worry about keeping this thread alive if you don't want to. If it dies before I get back, I'll make another thread for it myself. On the other hand, feel free to write maid themed green of your own if you want. It's always good to have multiple stories going in a single thread.
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>>28060374
Delicious salt confirms
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>>28060729
>lelele saltyyyy af my meme
make the most of these weeks you got left before you go back to school, junior.
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>>28060746
>meme recognition
>en meme-ues rez
>via memeing
>memeception
>memepocalypse

Notify Morton. There's been quite the spill
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>>28058906
>>You will never decide to free her from servitude one day, only for her to say that she doesn't want to leave
>>She will never reveal how she's fallen in love with you
immersion lost
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>>28060543
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>>28056188

Light housecleaning and being decorative, of course.

It's not like I'm a disgusting neckbeard with an apartment full of filth, but I'm sure having a cleaning service will improve things.

It's almost as if MLP dreams of having the characters but would be incredibly uncomfortable with them anywhere near them to begin with.
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>>28061539
Lame
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>>28061548

This is Rarity we're talking about here.

Having a pretty girl in a lace-bedecked maid's outfit at your beck and call is nice. I happen to find that rather attractive, so I'm not going to fuck up the sight of my ivory-skinned servant by making her clean up pig digusting messes and turning her into a sex slave.

Maid doesn't equal fucktoy, but it sure is nice eye candy and I expect my maid to dress "traditional French" and since she's an expert, she'll look absolutely fantastic.

Servants reflect their master/mistress- ruin them and you only show you're trash in turn.
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>>28061643
http://youtu.be/uiCf_Urxggc
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>>28056188
Mostly thank her for cooking some nice meals and generally tidying things up.

Granted, it's sometimes in latex lingerie. But that's pretty much it.

I don't live in a rat-warren of garbage. The rest of her time is pretty much her own, unless she honestly wants to talk or hang out.

I don't have much time, patience or energy for anything else, currently, but the eye-candy is nice.
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>>28061643

this right here.

We're not all hypersexual fanbois around here..
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Make her sing the Rules of Rarity whenever she works.
Every.
Single.
Day.
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>>28061708
>ellipses
I can feel the tipping from here.
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>>28061708
Like hell we're not
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>>28061643

Plus, perfectly mended and tailored clothing along with similar household repairs.

People that only wear sweatpants and stained T-shirts (perhaps a hoodie) might not appreciate that, but I do. Likewise laundry, regularly done.

A maid keeps a house. Bonus, I do Renfaires so I now have someone who not only keeps my garb in tip-top shape but I can have come along for good measure, since she's apparently permanently employed.

I'll take Rarity Belle in a bodice with plentiful cleavage for $500, Alex.

I swear, "X is a maid" is like some random poorfuck winning the lottery. The only thing most people do is try to beat the record on destroying their good fortune as fast as possible.
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>>28061643
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>>28061643
This guy gets it. Just look at her when she was Nightmare Moon's servant.
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>>28061828
She was a stuck up bitch
And a racist
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>>28061827
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>>28061726

Okay, SOME of us are.

And there ain't nothing wrong with that.
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>>28061845
>t. A smelly uncouth dragon
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>>28061722

ellipses equal fedora? when did this happen?
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>>28061722

Joke's on you, I'm naked as a jaybird!
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>>28056188

>you are Anon
>and Rarity is your maid after "winning that trial service for Workhorse Maids"
>she is, however the Worst. Possible. Maid.
>comes to work in outfits that barely cover her tits and ass
>bends over while doing as little actual work as possible to show off her lacy thong
>like you don't know she'd love a sexual harassment charge to get out of working for you
>"I expected better than a lingerie shop outfit from my maid, Miss Belle."
>the next day, she's in something out of a Japanese meido flick
>now at least you can have the windows open without someone calling the police for indecent exposure
>you treat her precisely the way she hoped you wouldn't given the cheesy outfits and posing
>like a professional
>for weeks
>after five weeks, she finally breaks
>Rainbow Dash had bet her she couldn't have you wrapped around her finger in sixty days
>the loser has to maid out for two months for the winner
>...arrangements are made for day 60.
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>>28062384

>Day 60 has arrived and Rainbow Dash is on her way over to your (spotless) apartment
>you'd given Rarity a day off in your apartment to procure some bait
>Rarity serves something on toast
>Dash demolishes the entire plate in under two minutes
>"I'm soooo happy with my lovely Maid Rarity, Rainbow Dash! She's said she'll be mine, y'know."
>Rarity almost manages to keep a straight face behind her friend
>"So...you're saying that she managed to-"
"We're getting married in October!"
>"I'll be his little maid for the rest of my life!", Rarity chips in.
>toast crumbs dribble to the pristine carpet from the slack-jawed Dash
>"He asked me just before the contract ended at noon, and I said yes, YES!" she continues.
>Dash appears to have been hit over the head by a mallet. Perhaps two.
>"Y-you're serious?"
>you and Rarity look at each other
>and demurely give each other that little smile she's been coaching you on for weeks, straight out of any number of cheesy romance novels
>Rainbow Dash has gone monochromatic
>"Oh, and DARLING, I took some pictures for tomorrow when you come over!
>"C-come over?"
>"Yes, dear, when you come inside here at what's going to be our little love nest. Master Anon suggested I take a few pictures with it on, just so you'll know."
>which she took herself without you getting so much as a look, darn it
>the greytone Rainbow now has a thin trickle of red from her nose as Rarity shows her what has to be that original outfit, suitably disarrayed
>"Don't you think you'll look WONDERFUL like that, Rainbow Dash?"
>*k-thud*
>and that's the KO
>you high-five over the comatose Dash
"Give her a week before we tell her the truth?"
>"Only if she gets to wear more than those...scraps, darling. I only dress Rainbow Dash in STYLE."
"Deal. Now that you don't have to wear that outfit, up for dinner tonight with Fluttershy?"
>"Dinner? Yes. But I think I'll keep this on for tonight. I know SOMEONE likes it."

~END
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>>28061643
Booooorrrrriiiing
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>>28056317
is there a full nude of this?
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>>28063430
Rarity is not lewd
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>>28060543
Ok...
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>>28062384
>Miss Belle
RARITY'S NAME ISN'T RARITY BELLE THIS ISN'T HOW NAMES WORK IN EQUESTRIA AND EVEN IF IT WAS HER NAME WOULD BE RARITY FLANKS AS HER FATHER'S NAME IS HONDO FLANKS

YES I'M MAD OVER THIS
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>>28065114
>Flanks
Who names their son ass?
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>>28065942
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>>28065478
I know a guy named Butts.
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>>28065478
Apparently Hondo Flanks' dad. That or he was a male stripper.
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>>28066460
When something smells, it's usually the Butz
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>>28065942
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>>28058928
That's the best kind of love, anon.
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>>28066962
Indeed. It's how Discord fell in love with Fluttershy
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>>28059739
Pastebin?
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>>28056212
This. I don't care how much the help is being paid. The help is the help, and you can't really trust them. I'll clean my own messes and make sure everything is safe, thank you very much. I know some people have an issue being a fucking human and keeping their living space tidy, but I take pride in it.
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>>28056405
>she purposefully leaves them out to get back at you for making her go around without panties
"Rarity! The carpet!"
>"I'm so sorry, darling. i must have forgot my tampon today."
"How do you forget a tampon?!"
>"The same way I forgot my panties, it seems."
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>>28067115
Rub her nose in it.
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>>28058906
That's LITERALLY the plot to Bob the Butler
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>>28067126
You mean Bob the Builder?
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>>28067182
that show always creeped me out.
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>>28064226
She is mega lewd you fool
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>>28067224
This pic is freaking me out.
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>>28067182
No, Bob the Butler. It came out in 2005. Good movie as I remember it.
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>>28067224
Rarity is pure...at least until I have her do something more than clean the house
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Save from the invasion bump
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>>28067489
I like Glimglam as much as the next faggot, but what the fuck is going on with those 15 threads right now?
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>>28067550
I counted 30
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>>28067093
No pastebin yet, since I've decided to rewrite the beginning for a clearer intro and to fix the typos and mistakes.
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>>28068062
Remember to portray Anon as the piece of meat that he is
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>>28067489
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>>28056188
>On what should be a typical friday for Canterlot High School, a certain incident has occurred.
>If this incident were to be become public knowledge, the consequences would be high indeed for those involved.
>Including the school itself.
>But for now, the egregious act is being kept behind closed doors.
>One of those doors is the gateway to the head office of CHS itself.
>It's here, in this sun drenched room, that our story begins.
>"Peeping is a serious offense. We cannot show any lenience because of your gender, or because it is a first time offense."
>The radiant 'goddess,' Principal Celestia, explains in a firm tone.
>"The only case in which we could let you off easily would be if the victim, Mr. Mous, were to express as such."
>A ray of hope is given to the offender sitting across from the authoritative figure.
>This miscreant just so happens to be a young woman, Rarity Belle, who was undeniably caught red handed by the second highest power within these walls, Vice Principal Luna.
>"Principal Celestia, I never intended for this to happen! I thought he liked it! What red blooded, equestrian young man WOULDN'T?"
>The principal's eyes widen for a moment.
>Rarity could swear she saw a hint of... excitement?
>"I see the problem runs deeper than I thought. Should Mr. Mous accept your apology, you could avoid a suspension-"
>"Oh th-that's wonderful! I'll apologize to him right away!"
>"Let me finish, please. You could avoid the suspension if he accepts, AND if you undergo counseling for this... condition."
>"Pardon me? Condition?"
>"Ms. Belle, do you think Anon should have been 'grateful' for your comments?"
>"Well, I-"
>"Did you or did you not tell him, and I quote, 'you should be thrilled I'm even giving you the time of day, darling, what with that sub par package.'"
>Rarity deflates and looks down
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>>28068995
>"Furthermore, Anon was not outside the boys locker room as a present for you. Some of his peers thought it would be humorous to lock him out. You just happened to be walking past the gym shower rooms as the door was closed on him."
>The ray of hope has now turned into a blinding and suffocating heat.
>"Principal, I can assure you, this is all just a misunderstanding. I was mistaken, but I was only hoping he would find it enticing!"
>Celestia suddenly perks up.
>"Enticing, you say?"
>Worried she may have spoken too much, Rarity recoils.
>"Y-yes, ma'am, that is to say-"
>"I suppose I can't completely blame you for having a moment of weakness."
>Celestia says as she stands up from her chair and begins to pace around the room.
>"Ma'am?"
>"Anon IS a fine, strapping young man, after all. It becomes easy to find yourself mesmerized when faced with such a splendid example of masculinity."
>Rarity stares in confusion, as her principal's tone has become serious, yet lustful.
>"I wasn't there to witness it myself, unfortunately, but my dear sister told me as much as she could."
>The pacing has led her to standing in front of the office's large window, where she looks out to gaze at the sun.
>Somehow, staring at the unbearably bright light doesn't effect her at all.
>"Those perfectly chiseled muscles, covered in the sweat of rigorous, physical activity. Activity that would only pale in comparison to the kinds of physical trails you'd like to put him through. That you can imagine putting him through, as he stands there with nothing but a piece of barely hanging cloth between you, and the firm, hard key that can unlock your gates of womanhood."
>Celestia says this with a burning passion that rivals the sun itself, her hand raised up as if to... grab onto something.
>Rarity finds herself feeling warmer and breathing harder, but most of all, in shock.
>"P-principal Celestia?!"
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>>28069033
>The middle aged woman realizes what she's just said, but simply brushes it off with a clearing of her throat.
>"Yes, well, in any case, your fate now rests on Anon's shoulders. Those strong... capable shoulders."
>She picks up a clipboard and pen off her desk.
>"While I would prefer to avoid a scandal like this, if Anon chooses to pursue punishment, school procedure must be followed. That includes taking a statement of what happened from your point of view."
>Rarity is given the writing tools, filling her with despair.
>"Be sure to give as much detail as you can."
>"Yes, prin-"
>Celestia places a firm hand on Rarity's shoulder, while giving her that stern, yet lustful look.
>"I mean it. ALL of the details. Especially of what you saw."

>Meanwhile in vice principal Luna's office...
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>>28069041
whew lad
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>>28069041
Keep going, dammit!
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>>28056188
giver her a skimpy french maid outfit and simple works. Naturally while she work, I watch every angle of her body until i cant resist and kiss her (and the rest).
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>>28069041
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>>28062701
Loved it
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>>28069041
>You are Anon.
>You're currently sitting down to vice principal Luna's desk in her office.
>The room has been darkened considerably, but this doesn't reflect the warmth of the principal's heart.
>"Anon, are you quite alright?"
"I think so, Principal Luna, thanks to you. I'm glad you came just in time to see what happened. If not for you, no one would've ever believed me."
>"Think nothing of it, Anon. It is I who should be thanking you for the wonderful view I received."
"Excuse me?"
>"I said I should be thanking you for being so truthful about all this. I know it's hard for you, but is there anything else you would like to tell me about what happened?"
"I... I keep thinking back to t-the look in her eyes, Ma'am, ...sh-, it was like she was staring right through me!"
>The vice principal gently pats your shoulder, as she stands behind you.
>"Shhh, there there."
"Like I wasn't even a person to her?! J-just some slab of meat?!"
>The single, gentle hand of your principal becomes two, as they both start to massage your muscles.
>"She shouldn't treat you like that, Anon."
>Leave it to your caring vice principal to put you at ease.
>She truly has your best interests in mind.
"Yeah! Exac-"
>She suddenly leans down to your ear and whispers.
>"A young, inexperienced girl has no right to such a FINE hunk of meat like you."
>The massaging has become much more sensual now.
>"No, you need the touch of an older woman. Someone who knows how to... tenderize you in all the right places."
"I'm sorry, what did you say, Ma'am? I couldn't hear you."
>She quickly straightens up again.
>"I said, I can assure you, she's going to be punished to the fullest extent."
>You look back up at her.
"She is?"
>"Oh yes, especially if she doesn't apologize to you. And if you feel that her apology isn't sincere, we may still punish her in some way."
"What... what'll happen to her if she doesn't?"
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>"She will be suspended, and receive counseling for her behavior."
>The principal tells you while going over a folder in her hands.
>You look down at the table, cluttered with more folders.
>The paperwork for all this is being written up as you speak.
>"You can agree this is a satisfactory outcome, correct, Mr. Mous?"
>You give yourself a few moments of deep thought before you answer her.
"Actually, Principal Luna, maybe this is the wrong way to handle it?"
>She raises an eyebrow at you.
>"What do you mean?"
>You start rubbing your left arm to calm your nerves.
"Well... I just feel like suspending her, and even sending her to counseling, would only make things worse. What if she becomes bitter instead?"
>She pauses briefly.
>"That... is a possibility, yes."
"If she does apologize, why not forget about the punishments, so that she and I can talk things over. If we can come to an understanding, maybe we could even be friends?"
>Surprised, the principal places the folder she was holding down onto the table.
>"Anon, you would be willing to do that?"
>You nod.
"This is the first time she's done anything like this, and I believe everyone deserves a second chance."
>The vice principal grows a proud smile.
>"You really are a fine young man, Anon. Very well, I'll go discuss this with my sister and Rarity herself."
>She walks over to her office door and opens it.
>"In the meantime, go about your school day. We'll call you to the main office when we're ready to make a decision."
"Yes, ma'am."
>You rise from your seat and walk over to the door, but just as you're about to step out, the principal places a firm hand on your shoulder to whisper to you again.
>"Of course, you could choose to stay here with me. Your selfless actions deserve a reward after all, and the darkness of my office chambers tell no tales."
"Pardon me? Again, I couldn't hear you."
>"I said come visit my sister and I if anything else happens."
>She says with a beaming smile.
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>>28056188
Give her lodging in the servants' quarters and never think about her again. You have people for that after all.
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>>28056188
Make her wear no panties and have her tits out. Have her clean everything with a buttplug and vibrator in her. When she's done I pay her by fucking the shit out of her. Repeat every day
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>>28070013
>Vice principal Luna will never be tenderize you in the right places.
C-can someone make a spin-off green?
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>>28069041
oh lawd im kekking
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>>28070532
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>>28070033
"Thank you, Principal."
>What a nice woman.

>Sometime later, after the last period of the day, you spot Rarity beckoning you from down the hall.
>You've seen her a few times during these past hours, but she avoided any contact with you until now.
>She must be pretty scared about all of this.
>You follow her to a more secluded section of the school.
>A hallway that ends abruptly.
>And strangely enough, the ceiling lights aren't working at all here.
>It's pretty dark, but you can see some of the locker doors are left open and empty.
>Seems this dead end isn't used at all anymore.
>Kinda creepy... you had no idea there was something like this in CHS.
>But this is useful.
>No one will be able to hear your conversation.
>Rarity looks really nervous.
>After clearing her throat she speaks up.
>"Darling, I can't tell you how happy I am that you're willing to let this all go. I know I've made a terrible mistake, and I'm deeply sorry."
"You're willing to take responsibility?"
>"Of course! That's actually why I've come to get you. The principals want us to come to their office, and they sent me to find you."
"You were going to apologize in front of them, right? Why are you doing this now?"
>She places a hand on her chest.
>"I just wanted to tell you before hand how thankful I am. If this had gotten out, and I were to be expelled... well, I don't know what would've become of me."
"So then, you really are sorry?"
>She nods with misty eyes.
>"Yes, I really, truly am!"
>After a moment of silence, you let out a small chuckle.
"...That's a good start, but it'll take more than that for you to get out of this."
>"E-excuse me?"
>You move over to the lockers and lean back on them, letting your posture loosen while a smile suddenly appears on your face.
"I said, it's going to take more than an apology to settle this. You'll have to sweeten the deal."
>Rarity's expression becomes a mix of confusion and anger.
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>>28071296
>"Wha... what are you saying? I'm doing exactly what you told the vice principal you wanted!"
"Oh, come on! Did you really think it would be THAT easy? After what you did, there's no reason I should want to help you. It's only because I wanted something in return."
>Her confusion is now replaced by apprehension.
>"...What do you want?"
"Turns out, my parents are going on a month long vacation tomorrow. I'll have the whole house all to myself."
>Rarity gives you a look of contempt.
>"Congratulations. What does that have to do with me?"
"Well, nice as it is having the castle to myself, that doesn't mean the chores will be going away. So, I was thinking, maybe you would be interested in fulfilling those duties."
>You explain with a smug grin.
>Rarity recoils in disgust.
>"Y-you want me to be your sex slave?!"
"What?! No, no!"
>You say with raised hands.
"Let's get this straight, I don't mean anything like that! I'm not a pervert like you, Rarity!"
>"P-pervert?!"
"Look, I'm talking menial tasks. Stuff like cleaning the house, doing my laundry, homework, and cooking. You know, actual chores!"
>Rarity's mistaken disgust becomes offended realization.
>"You mean a maid?!"
>You point at her with another grin.
"Bingo, you got it."
>Rarity grits her teeth as she blushes with anger.
>"This...this is preposterous! This is blackmail! Why shouldn't I just tell the principals about this?!"
"You could, but I wouldn't if I were you. I mean, even if they do believe you, what would happen? I get a slap on the wrist and detention? No big deal. You, on the other hand, will get suspended, receive counseling, and the entire school will find out. It'll be way worse for you."
>Her anger subsides as the reality of what you tell her settles in.
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>>28071308
"But, if you do the smart thing and take my offer, you spend all your free time for the next four weeks doing some housework, and I'll stick to my end of the deal and keep it a secret. Once it's all said and done, it'll be as if it never happened."
>She regains her contempt.
>"Anon, you... I can't believe you're-"
>You suddenly snap at her.
"I'm what?! A horrible, disgusting person?! I'm still better than you! I should be thrilled?! With my sub par package?! Really, Rarity?!"
>She steps back, her anger and contempt melting into pure guilt.
>"I... I seriously am sorry for that. I didn't actually mean it... I was just teasing."
"Doesn't change the fact you said it. I respected you, Rarity, for your creativity and generosity. I never thought you would ever say something so mean."
>She doesn't reply, but instead, looks down at the ground.
"Believe it or not, this is my way of forgiving you. Like I said, I don't have to do this. ...So... what'll it be?"
>Her eyes dart around for a bit, before they finally look up at you.
>"I... I have no choice. I agree to your terms."
>You reach out with an open hand, and she takes it to give you a half hearted handshake.
"Glad to hire you, Maid Rarity."
>You say with a cocky smile.
"Well, we don't want to keep the principals waiting. Ready to begin your tenure?"
>She sighs.
>"Yes."
"Then come along, my housemaid."
>You briskly walk out of the strange hallway with Rarity in tow.

>After some time with Celestia and Luna, it was agreed that Rarity would not be punished, but instead, the two of you would work on forgiveness and friendship.
>With that settled, you were both allowed to leave school.
>You and Rarity walk out to an empty front courtyard.
>Everyone else has already gone home.
"There ya go! No punishments and no records! Just like I said."
>Rarity doesn't seem too happy though.
>"Yes, wonderful. It's only going to cost me my dignity."
"Welcome to the club, I lost that myself recently."
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>>28071326
>She lets out an annoyed sigh.
>"Alright already! Just... tell me what you want."
"Well, first of all, from now on you will refer to me as 'master.'"
>"You're joking."
"Second, every time you come over, you must bring a complete, legitimate maid outfit to change into."
>Rarity's eyes nearly jump out of their sockets.
>"WHAT?! That's ridiculous! I refuse!"
>She shouts with a stomp of her boot.
"You can't refuse. Remember, this is an actual job that you've accepted to pay off your debt to me. Unless of course you'd like to go back in there and get signed up for those punishments."
>She quickly answers.
>"No, no! That won't be necessary! I'll..."
>Another deep sigh.
>"I'll do it. What do you... want it to look like?"
>She asks crossing her arms with a deep blush before turning her back to you.
"You're the best clothes designer in all of Canterlot. I leave it's design up to you."
>She turns her head, still wearing that blush.
>"You... you mean that?"
"Absolutely. Make it how you see fit."
>"Fine. But it won't be ready until tomorrow."
"That's okay, since you can't come over until my parents leave tomorrow. They'll be out the door by eleven in the morning, so you can show up at one o'clock."
>"I was going to spend the weekend with my friends."
>She pouts.
"You'd better use today to tell them you won't have much free time for these next few weeks."
>You step closer to her wearing a smug face.
"So, you understand your orders, right?"
>She recoils away from you.
>"Y-yes."
>You lean in towards her while your smugness intensifies.
"Yeeesss what?"
>"...Yes... Master."
>She hisses through clenched teeth.
"Good! See you tomorrow, my housemaid."
>You say with a big smile, before turning around to start your walk home, leaving a very miffed Rarity behind.
>The next month is going to be pure fun and bliss, and you're going to enjoy it thoroughly.
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>>28071337
I like this. This is good.
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>>28071337
Are you going to keep up with this? You wouldn't go through all the set up for it and just drop it, r-right?
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>>28071458
I'll keep up and finish it, since I'm planning it as a short story anyways. Like I said, if I have to I'll make another thread sometime later when I'm ready. Or I might just move it to fingerbang or a Rarity thread if they would allow eqg.

I've run out of writing time for today though. In the meantime, I've made a pastebin since someone asked for it.

http://pastebin.com/wurFhdvs

Bad story name, I know. If anyone can come up with something better, let me hear it. By the way, credit goes to >>28046336 for writing the setup that I used.
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>>28073099
>The Taming of the Lewd
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>>28073099
>Or I might just move it to fingerbang
dropped
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>>28073180
Don't worry, it's just an option in case a dedicated thread like this one can't be kept alive. I'd try going to a Rarity themed thread before that.

We seem to be doing fine here though, so I think it'll be okay.
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>>28073695
A qt
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>She will never clean your drawers
If you know what i mean
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>>28074896
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>>28056212
>wastebasket that's full of crusty kleenexs that I sometimes re-use to bust in
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>>28056212
The fuck?
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>>28056212
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>>28056188
My basement got pretty messy after I cute the brake's on my wife's car, whoops, I mean my ex-wife's car, oh yeah and also forget the part about cutting the breaks
anyways I need my basement to get cleaned but I'm always too busy watching To Catch a Yeti and eating some pizza rolls, do you like pizza rolls, they're all I ever eat
just make sure to ignore the skeletons and decomposing humans and half eaten cats
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>>28073695
Oh god that's cute. It's been really hard to find pics of Rarity as a maid.
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>>28076194
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>>28056188
>You cross your arms and shake your head.
>Rarity stands before you in a skimpy maid outfit, fidgeting with the skirt, tray held close to her rather generous bosom.
"Pick them up."
>"Please Anon, can't we arrange something else?"
"PICK THEM UP!"
>She flinches at your raised voice, and begins to sob while slowly bending over.
"That's right...put them into a neat stack slut."
>"Do you have to call me names?"
"STACK EM UP WHORE!"
>She closes her eyes, tears flowing freely, ruining her makeup.
>With a loud, sad sigh the white bitch stands to full height and outstretches her arms.
>You nod in approval, and take off sprinting in the opposite direction.
>Once at the wall you two step wall jump off it gaining massive air, and scraping the ceiling with your chin as you grab the back of your legs.
>Rarity cringes knowing what's coming next.
>With force akin to a Falcon Punch, you Shaquille O Neal the shit out of the books she was holding in her hands.
>"EEK!"
>The books hit the ground like thunder, while Rarity shivers in fear, and pain.
"Pick them back up."
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>>28077498
You're a bad person
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>>28076194
I suggest getting six cans of Raid, the Fast Kill Low Irritant kind
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>>28056388
One more reason poni>human. Horses don't have a period.
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>>28056188
Clean up
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>>28071337
>Saturday.

>You are Rarity.
>Fashionista extraordinaire!
>Who will one day become the top clothes designer in all the world!
>You park your car, get out, and take hold of the heavy dress sized garment bag inside the trunk.
>Fame.
>Fortune.
>Recognition for your talents!
>Everyday is a step forward towards your goal.
>You walk up to the front door and ring the bell.
>It's all just a matter of time before you make your big debut onto the world's stage!
>You're young!
>You're chic!
>You're living the dream!
>And today you're...
>"Coming!"
>Today you're...
>"There she is! My lovely maid, right on time!"
>You're a high school boy's servant.
>"Good afternoon, Rarity."
>Anon smiles brightly as he motions for you to come inside his house.
"Good afternoon, Anon."
>You take one step, but he suddenly blocks you.
>"What was that?"
>He asks sternly.
>Oh for god's sake.
"...Good afternoon... Master."
>You say with a hateful tone.
>"Better."
>The smile returns as he lets you through.
>Not even a minute into this and you already can't stand it.
>So here you are, inside your 'workplace.'
>It's just a typical, decent sized suburban home.
>Nothing out of the ordinary.
>Anon seems excited by the large garment bag you're holding up.
>"You're prepared to change, I see."
"Not in front of you!"
>"Of course not. Go into the guest bathroom. First door on the left."
>He points towards a hallway.
>You open said door, revealing a complete shower bathroom.
>Plenty of room to change.
>You lock the door behind you.
>Can't trust Anon to not try and get some revenge.
>After carefully putting on each piece, you look yourself over in the large mirror.
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>>28079291
>You're ready.
>Ready to die of embarrassment.
>It's not wearing the outfit that bothers you.
>You've created, and worn, costumes and uniforms for you, and your friends before.
>Truthfully, you're proud of this dress you've made.
>No, what's killing you inside is that once you open this door...
>You really will be his maid.
>Your hand hovers and shakes over the doorknob.
>Dignity and pride screaming at you to take this off and storm out.
>But that's not an option.
>You have to do this.
>It's better than the alternative.
>Breathe in and out.
>Steady your hand.
>This is a job.
>This is just a job.
>A short term, month long job.
>...
>You open the door and walk into the living room.
>You spot Anon before he sees you.
>He's sitting on one of the couches, looking like an overly excited child on his birthday.
>"Oh wow."
>He jumps up from his seat as you stride into his view.
>"Oooh wow, Rarity! You look..."
>Anon has the biggest smile you've ever seen from him, repeatedly looking you up and down.
>Your hand made outfit.
>It's a traditional black and white french maid dress.
>With all the frills and details that go along with it.
>Including a lace bonnet, black stockings, and black mary janes on two inch heels.
>You chose to fit them with a small heel so you could comfortably stand and walk around in them all day, but still look the part.
>"You look great!"
>He gently touches and holds some of the dress' fabric.
>"I've seen maid costumes before at halloween parties, but I've never seen one of this quality!"
"Of course not. This was all carefully hand stitched by me, and custom fit for me."
>"It even feels expensive. How much would something like this cost?"
"Made to order from a tailor? With these materials and this thread count, over a thousand dollars."
>"I can believe that."
>He starts walking a circle around you.
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>>28079314
>"Though I have to say, I'm surprised at you, Rarity."
"How so?"
>"I left the design up to you because I wanted you to be comfortable, and I was curious to see what you'd choose. I thought you would go for something more modern and low key."
>You cross your arms with a huff.
"If I'm going to do something, I may as well do it with style and class. And besides, I figured you wouldn't be happy with anything less."
>"You did this to make me happy?"
>He asks surprised.
"Not for your benefit!"
>You snap.
"It's just so I don't have to hear any complaining!"
>"I see. Well, I'm happy with how it turned out, and I really do think you look amazing."
>His smile and tone is so genuine, you have to fight against blushing.
>You're able to keep up an air of indifference.
"Thank you."
>You say nonchalantly.
>He places a hand behind his ear.
>"Thank you, what?"
"...Thank you... Master."
>He's actually serious about this 'master' shit, isn't he?
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>>28056188
I kinda sorta wrote a short story about this scenario once, I think. 2013 I think. Plenty of cheeky cuntness and wordy description. They fucked at the end.
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>>28079378
Also, somebody read it with a fairly decent voice, which gave me the happy for a good few minutes.
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>>28079378
Paste?
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>>28079340
More?
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>>28079416
Fuckin wish. Maybe somebody will remember or even have it. I'm really just on this board to pass time, maybe get back into things. I need stuff to distract me so I don't get sucked into alcoholism.
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>>28056188
>be richfag appaloosa native in ponyville because weird obsession with place I lived as a foal for a few years
>dad pays for house and whatnot
>does not mention maid who is constantly pissy about her sewing business that bottomed out
>this conflicts with my obsession with keeping my house a certain form of messy
>the kind of messy where I know where all my shit is
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>>28079972
It's called organized chaos
Rarity also likes it this way
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>>28079972
>come home to my living room all organized and fucked up
>maid is doing her shit, dusting the shelves
>it's been three weeks
>I need to say something
"Hey, uhhh. Maid, whatever your name-"
"Rarity."
"Miss Rarity. Yes. Well."
>spaghetti a-brewin
"I like to keep my stuff organized a certain way that looks like a mess."
"Your father pays me to clean. That is what I do."
>she looked slightly miffed, as usual
"I know, but can you just not?"
>she thought for a second
"This is literally the only house I clean. I need something to do to occupy my time. Please-"
"Then do whatever. Just stop messing up my system."
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>>28080145
>her brow was flat as could be
"I really do need something to occupy my time. Doing that takes most of the day while you go doing whatever it is you do."
>I thought for a second
>well, this ought to work
"I'll buy sewing supplies. You make me some suits. How's that sound?"
>her ears snapped forward, eyes wide
>she did this weird little fast paced dance/trot toward me a few feet
"I would love to do that, and I don't need you to buy anything. I still have my own supplies at home and I am more than willing to occupy my time doung that."
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>>28080265
>three hours later
>there's a table in my den with a grid and rolls of material on it
>Rarity isn't in a maid's uniform anymore
>she isn't even on the clock
>I'm standing stock still, waiting to get all measured up
>if I move an inch, this hyperactive horse somehow notices from the bathroom
>she comes back in the room, immediately magicking her measuring tape off the grid table and slapping it on my back
"Tell me, what kind of clothing is missing from your closet, darling?"
>stand there, blankfaced, not knowing what to say
"I guess a winter coat."
>the measuring tape stops halfway around my chest
"It's August."
>oh
"Oh. Uh. Getting prepared early I guess."
"Sweetie, you're probably going to gain or lose a few pounds, your taste may change, you may want to try a certain trend-"
"I like things for very long times."
"Oh. Like classic styles that simply never go out of style or are you an uncultured colt?"
>uhhh
"Uhhh."
"I've seen your closet. I understand. Maybe you should try something new."
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>>28080556
>possible undiagnosed high functioning autism kicks in and makes me say something inappropriate
>measuring tape just so happens to be on my upper thigh
"Heh. You're still kinda new."
>oh fuck oh shit oh fucking what
>you are not alpha enough to say that
>you drink iced tea at the park, pretending you're a philosopher
>she didn't make it any easier as she slipped the measuring tape a smidgen higher
"Am I now?"
>respond, fucker
>fuckin say something
"I mean, you've been here for three weeks, so not really."
>the tape slipped up a bit more
"I ran my shop for about six years. Three weeks and I'm not new? I disagree with your evaluation of what 'new' means."
>you fuckin
>GOD DAMMIT
>FFFFFFUCK
"Well. I guess you are new then."
"So what do you mean by you want to 'try' me? Hmmm?"
>she doesn't sound happy
>can't look to see her facial expression though
>that would end badly somehow
"Be honest with me, dear. Were you implying something lewd?"
>FUCK. SHE SAID SOMETHING LIKE THAT.
>NOW MY CROTCH FEELS DIFFERENT
>I AM PAINFULLY AWARE MY DICK EXISTS
>FUCK
"Ye-. Um. Yes. No. No."
"Don't lie to me. That's just rude."
>the measuring tape pulled up against where my leg meets my crotch, whatever the fuck that's called
"It was a sexual implication. Implied. Fuck, I mean."
>feel my dick swelling
>no stopping this shit
>wish I had ED just for this occasion
"Hmhm.. I'm sure."
"Yeah.."
"I mean, you look like meant it."
>mostly chubbed out weiner pulses up to a full throb
>feel awkwardly comfortable, now that the situation is here
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>>28080832
>feel something cool and obviously not pony on my member
>feel one end go out to the tip and the other push softly into my balls
>feel it wrap around my shaft a second after
"I'll be back to start cutting fabric for your coat tomorrow. Is it okay with you if I leave my things here?"
"No problem."
>my heart sank as she trotted out the door, not saying bye
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feedback pls. I am a selfish prick who lusts for acknowledgement.
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>>28056188
>shoot next to her head again
"SAY MY CUM TASTES LIKE THE SUGAR MILK AT THE BOTTOM OF THE BOWL."
"y-h-h-our cum tastes ll-*hic*"
>shoot again
"FUCKING START OVER."
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>>28080893
>next day
>Rarity shows up
>wearing uniform
"I thought-"
"I still have to do the job I'm paid for."
"Ah. Good idea."
>sit on couch, reading
>don't internalize anything for a bit
>pick up newspaper
>article about rape rates not going down
>article about another scandal involving royal guard
>article about
"What is this?"
"Whuh-what?"
>she holds a tissue a few inches from my face
>it looks like a wadded up tissue that was unfolded
>oh shit
"Oh, uh. My nose got runny."
"Are you lying?"
"N-um.."
"If I told you I would lick this, would you change your story?"
>oh lordy
"Yes."
>she stuffs it in her mouth
>is muffled when she speaks
"Good to see you aren't getting sick."
"Yeah.."
>boner already roaring to life
>she walks away again, leaving me alone with the classifieds
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>>28081157
"I need to go pick something up."
>her uniform was neatly folded
>magicky floating by her side
"Okay.."
"It will take me about an hour."
>still have a raging boner
>she doesn't acknowledge it
"I'll see you then, I guess."
>she leaves
>can't take this shit
>decide to fap

>dart into my room
>rifle through drawer for porno mag
>find the one with the white coat, painted blank flank centerfold
>find marker
>draw Rarity's cutie mark on the pretend underage mare's ass
>flop onto my bed
>start jerking it like a cracked out Parkinson's patient
>reach climax the fastest I ever have
>don't even care about mess
>shoot all over my torso
>some of it smacks the headboard
>most of it lands on my face, chest, and pillow
"I forgot the duster in here. Noowww I'll go pick that thing up."
>heart pounding
>embarrassed out of my mind
>she licks off the bit of cum that got on my right eyelid
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still no daggum feedback?
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>>28056188
Give her a gun and make her shoot me in the back of the head
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>>28081310
Check your capitalization and punctuation, Anon's dialogue is "Like this" and any other character is >"In green". The majority of greens are written in second person (if you want). Try to describe more the environment/places.
Keep it up m80
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>>28081389
consider it my writing style to have dialogue in quotations and everything else in green.

and this is all just as I go, so I apologize for spelling and whatnot. it breaks emersion a wee bit.
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bumperino
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>>28079340
Come back
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>You will never feel her behind while she is cleaning
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>>28082957
>She will never squeak in surprise
>You will never whisper to her
>"Keep cleaning"
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>>28082379
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>>28084520
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>>28062701
>>28084753

"Now, wasn't Rarity nice to make you a NEW outfit after I asked her so nicely? Thanks for bringing me lunch at school, by the way. Photo Finish says she'll have the roll developed by Sunday."
>"imgonnastuffrarityinahamper"
"What was that Dash?"
>"I-I have to go empty the hamper!"
"Remember to take a break before you take care of Rarity!"
>"gonnaneedtwohampers"
"What?"
>"I said I might need two hampers!"
"Well, don't let the dirty clothes pile up till the end of the week!"
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>>28081432
No problem m8
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The new episode is today. We may get bumped off if something big happens in it. I'll try to get some more green out before then.

>>28081432
There's nothing wrong with having your own writing style. You should use whatever makes you comfortable. The more green you write, the more you'll figure out the style you prefer.
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S-So this the resurrection of the Maid General, r-right?
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>>28087245
It can be, if there's enough interest. I've always liked the subject, and this isn't my first green about it, I also had a short lived maid cafe idea.
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>>28087245
Man i forgot all about the maid general
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>>28079340
"Well, now that I'm in 'uniform,' what is it you would like me to do?"
>"Ah yes, your first assignment. From what I hear, it's one you should be all too familiar with already. Follow me."
>What is he talking about?
>You follow behind as he leads you down the hallway, passing multiple doors, until you reach the last one at the end.
>"As you know, my parents just left for their vacation."
"Yes, and?"
>"Why don't you see for yourself?"
>He encourages you to open the door.
>With a raised eyebrow, you do as he suggests, and just like he said, you find an all too familiar, and awful sight.
>Behind the door is his parent's master bedroom.
>Typically sized and furnished like the rest of this average house.
>But it's not the bland decor that causes you to gasp out loud, it's the state of the room.
>Clothes, various accessories, and all manner of travel bags and containers are strewn about all over.
>The bed, which is in a terrible state, is covered in piles of clothes.
>So is the floor, to the point you can't do anything you would refer to as 'walking.'
>Tip toeing carefully is your only option.
>Even the dressers and draws are in disarray.
>And the master bathroom, which you can see inside of thanks to it's door being left open, is no better.
>Towels everywhere.
>Puddles of water on every surface.
>Wrappers and travel supplies littering the counter.
>All of this combined.
>It's as if a hurricane ravaged this room.
>You narrow your eyes with a seething anger.
"Parents leaving vacation messes for their children to clean up is >>28056188 The. Worst. Possible. Thing."
>"I know. They decided ahead of time that this would be my way of earning the house to myself. You're parents take a lot of vacations, so you have plenty of experience dealing with this, don't you?"
"More than I'd care to admit."
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>>28089487
>"I've been dreading having to clean this all up... but that's what you're here for now!"
>He gently slaps your back with all the enthusiasm of a fellow teammate.
"...Yesss... Master..."
>You hiss through gritted teeth with a twitching eye.
>"Good! I'll leave this in your capable hands. Meanwhile, I'm going to spend my newly gained free time catching up with all the cartoons and anime I missed this week."
>Your time and effort is the equivalent of children's entertainment.
>How flattering.
>He makes it halfway through the hallway before he stops to add to your misery.
>"Oh, and you will, obviously, have to do laundry later, so keep that in mind."
>Wonderful.
>Well, might as well get on with it.
>First things first, and as always, it's the clothes.
>You search for and find all the pieces that are clean, and stack them up in a neat pile on the bed.
>Next, you toss all the dirty pieces into a hamper.
>With all of that cleared up, you can now freely move around the room.
>Which makes it much easier to organize all the draws.
>Once they are, you're able to put away the neat stack of clean clothes.
>Making the bed is the last part of the bedroom itself, before you move onto the bathroom.
>You clear the counter space, putting the various objects in their appropriate draw.
>All of the towels will need to be washed, so you use them to soak up as much water as you can, before you resort to using paper towel.
>Lastly, you clean the shower and toilet.

>It took you almost two hours, but the master bedroom and bathroom are completely clean.
>The storm is over.
>You walk back into the living room to find Anon lazing on the couch in front of the tv.
>Just as he said, colorful animations are on the screen.
"I'm done."
>You announce.
>He turns his head towards you.
>"Oh, good! Now that you're finished with that, go make my bed."
"You don't make your own bed?!"
>You shout.
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>>28089494
>"I usually do, but since I knew you would be here, I left it for you."
>He says with an almost proud smile.
>So you can't even consider that he'll do anything himself for the next month.
>He's going to use you for anything and everything.
>God damn it.
"Of course you did."
>You sneer.
>"Try not to take too long, I have something else for you to do."
>He says with his attention turned to the tv again.
"Yes, Master."
>You growl.
"And where is your room?"
>"Look around. You need to get used to this place anyways."
>He has a point.
>Into the hallway again.
>You open random doors until you find what can only be Anon's bedroom.
>Inside, you're surprised to find that, besides the messy bed, his room is actually quite clean.
>Making his bed is a simple task.
>Before you leave the room, you take note of the mostly filled hamper.
>Into the living room again to 'report.'
"Your bed is made... Master."
>"Great. Now you can go into the kitchen and make some pancakes."
"...Pancakes."
>You say in monotone.
>It's not even a question, you just can't believe you have to put up with this shit.
>"Yeah, I'm hungry, and nothings better than watching cartoons with a stack of pancakes."
"Very good, Master. A stack of pancakes, coming right up."
>You say with sarcasm and fake smile.
>Oh yes, you'll make pancakes.
>But more like... HORRIBLECAKES!
>If you make them bad, he won't have you cook for him anymore.
>"Make two stacks worth."
>You'll feel a tiny bit bad for purposely wasting so much food, but it'll be worth it.
>Hope you like the taste of char and poorly mixed ingredients, you ingrate!
>Before you can head off to the kitchen, he turns around to give you a very serious face.
>"And by the way, Rarity?"
>This can't be good.
"Y-yes, Master?"
>"I know you're a skilled cook. I've heard it before from your sister and her friends. So don't bother trying to pass it off as if you're bad in the kitchen. Understand?"
>FFFFFFFFUUUUUUCK!!
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>>28089520
>>"I know you're a skilled cook. I've heard it before from your sister and her friends. So don't bother trying to pass it off as if you're bad in the kitchen. Understand?"
>>FFFFFFFFUUUUUUCK!!
kek
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>>28089520
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>>28089520
Poor Rarity, all she wanted was to sexually bully this piece of meat
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>>28091182
I want a Fluttermaid.
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>>28092330
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>>28092689
Rarity wants to be dominated.
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>>28091196
unf
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>>28092721
I'm saving this for scientific purposes
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>>28092721
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i want maid gilda
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I wand Brincess Celebstia as my madee ::DD:DD:D:D
nd gar meghajic too :dD
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>>28095196
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>>28095738
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>>28094694
Are you having a stroke, buddy?
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I want to spank Rarimaid
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>>28081291
Moar
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>>28087321
I want to write about Fluttermaid. Maybe I will.
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>>28097996
Go for it man, I'd like to read more maid stories, and it'll add more green to the thread.

I'll try to write more of the Rarity story later today.
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>>28097996
Yes please.
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>>28100145
wew
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>>28056188
Just start somewhere, I guess.
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>>28056212
What the fuck, I laughed way too hard
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>>28100145
>You will never fuck a female discord.
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>>28101970
>discord
probably got a deformed crotch
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>>28102974
Or maybe femcords vag can gice you a blowjob while fucking her
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>>28104002
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from the depths of page 10
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Where's the green, guys? I need more to fuel my fetish
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>Rarimaid walks in on you changing
>She sees your dick
>"So, that's it, huh?"
What do?
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>>28105909
>rezips dick
YOU SAW NOTHING
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>>28105924
>"I saw enough, or rather, I didn't see much"
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>>28105938
Well played
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>>28105965
>"I'm done for today, maybe when I come back tomorrow I can help turn your boy down there into a man"
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>>28089520
>A few minutes later, you've made two stacks of pancakes.
>Good pancakes, unfortunately.
>You're surprised when Anon comes into the kitchen and pours two glasses of milk.
"What are you doing?"
>"Put each stack into it's own plate. You're going to eat with me."
>What is he getting at?
"I am?"
>"You must be hungry by now, so why not take a break. Come on."
>You both place everything onto the short coffee table in the middle of the tv and couch.
>He sits down on the floor, and puts his back against the couch.
>"Sit down."
>He pats the spot next to him.
>You frown.
"My dress will get wrinkled."
>"It's fine, iron it later. Sit."
>You slowly slink down, making sure to tuck in your dress and keep your legs closed as you do.
>When you're comfortable, he pulls the table over to the both of you.
>It's as if you're sitting at a makeshift highchair.
"Why don't we just eat at the dinner table?"
>"I've always eaten like this to watch saturday cartoons since I was a kid."
"But this is so childish."
>"And that's what makes it fun. Now eat up while they're hot."
>He turns up the volume and starts digging into his plate.
>Reluctantly, you go along with him.
>Watching cartoons.
>While eating pancakes.
>And sitting on the floor.
>Anon makes conversation with you by explaining the plot of what you're watching.
>And you both reminisce about the cartoons you watched as kids.
>It's all so silly, but somehow fun.
>Just a few hours ago, you wouldn't have even bet a penny that you'd feel anything resembling amusement while wearing this outfit.
>After you finished your pancakes, Anon had you stay with him to watch more cartoons, until you decided to get up yourself.
>"Where you going? Don't you wanna see the next episode?"
>He seems disappointed, as if he forgot why you're here dressed like this in the first place.
"Easy for you to say. I have to wash these plates and what I used in the kitchen, then start on the laundry, AND vacuum the house."
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>>28106270
>Anon silently watches you pick up the plates and utensils, but speaks up as you walk away.
>"Those pancakes were delicious. Good thing you didn't burn them, huh?"
>You scoff and continue walking.
"I have no idea what you're talking about."
>He smirks.
>"Suuure."

>After cleaning the kitchen, you gather up and separate all the laundry by color and materials.
>While each load is being washed and dried, you do some vacuuming and general tidying up in between.
>Time moves quickly, and before you realize, it's seven in the evening, you've changed out of your maid outfit, and you're standing at the front door with Anon.
>"Are you sure you don't want to take your dress home?"
"There's no sense bringing it back and forth if I'm only going to wear it here. It'll be fine in the hallway closet."
>You let out a long yawn.
"Anyways, what time do you want me to come over tomorrow?"
>"Never mind coming on sundays."
"What? Why?"
>You ask confused.
>"Everyone needs a day off from work, even maids. Consider sundays that day for you."
>He says with a smile.
"That's... quite considerate. I appreciate it."
>You say a bit flustered before clearing your throat.
"Well, I'll see you monday then. But remember! Not a WORD of this in school, you promised!"
>You point at him.
>"I know, I know."
>He chuckles.
>You open the door and turn to walk out.
>"Job well done today, my housemaid."
>You pause, but keep your back to him.
"Thank you, Master."
>You continue on to your car and drive home.

>When you get back, you talk to your parents for a bit and eat a late dinner with them.
>As usual, they ask about your day, and you have to keep up with the lie you've told them.
>Which is that you've taken a part time job as a waitress to learn more about work uniforms and the service industry.
>Not only did they believe it, they were proud of you for getting a job.
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>>28106274
>You also told the same lie to the girls.
>They all thought it was odd, and rightfully so, but being your best friends they decided to support you.
>You feel guilty for lying to everyone, but there was no way you could ever tell the truth.
>And besides, it was only a half lie, really.
>After dinner, Sweetie tries to ask you more about your job, but you brush her off and head to your room.
>You notice Opalescence follows you.
"Hey, baybeee! You want to be with mommy?"
>Your loyal cat meows her answer and walks inside.
>You close your door and let yourself fall onto your bed.
>A heavy sigh escapes you as the exquisitely soft, hand made by you, goose down blanket envelops your tired body.
>Opal jumps onto the bed and walks over to you.
>You pet her lovingly and she purrs in response.
>The stitching supplies, which you were using just this morning to make last second alterations to the maid outfit, remain right where you left them on your sewing table.
>Serving to remind you how exhaustive and stressful these past two days have been.
>Strangely though, you don't feel so bad about the whole thing after Anon's actions today.
>He had you eat and watch cartoons with him.
>And he's giving you days off.
>You thought he'd be more unfair.
>While you were cleaning, you had plenty of time to ponder how you got into this predicament.
>Why did you say those cruel things to Anon?
>You were actually enjoying seeing him in nothing but a towel.
>And you did find him rather attractive.
>So what made those words come out of your mouth?
>Perhaps it was your pride?
>Trying to hide that you were taking so much satisfaction in something so... uncouth.
>But that doesn't excuse what you did.
>Anon's feelings were obviously hurt.
>It's true he was spiteful in the beginning, but...
>What you did was wrong.
>It's your fault you're in this mess.
>Well, if doing some housework is what it takes to make up for your mistake, than so be it.
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>>28106277
>You're not going to complain or get aggravated about it anymore.
>That's why the last thing you said to Anon tonight wasn't in a sarcastic or angry tone, but instead, a solemn one.
>You've accepted it.
>...
>Your eyes and body have gotten heavy now.
>If you stay like this any longer you'll fall asleep.
>Off the bed and off with your clothes.
>Change into your softest nightie.
>Wash up in your own personal, thank-you-for-building-it-Dad, bathroom.
>Close the curtains.
>Turn off all the lights, except for a small night light.
>Finally, you slip into the sheets and fluff up your pillow.
>Opal has finished grooming herself, and curls up beside you.
"Goodnight, Opal."
>And for the finishing touch, you put on your favorite sleep mask.
>You haven't been this happy for a sunday in a long time.
>You're going to sleep in as long as you want.
>And relax... all... day...
>Zzzzzzz.
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That's all for now. Sorry if the story is slow and boring. I wanted to show what it was like to be a maid from Rarity's perspective with a day in the life. I was also aiming for comfy. From here on the story will move faster.
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>>28056188
I like the idea of being her maid, forced to wear the costume, stockings and all.
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>>28106281
You aimed for comfy and in my opinion, you got a bullseye. Nice work!
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>>28106281
I want anon to cum inside her for the sole purpose of procreation
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>>28106281
but i like slow and boring
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>>28106281
Cant wait for more mang
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>>28106281
I like where this is going.
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>You take a moment to look at your watch as you flip through channels
>12:35
>She’s five minutes late
>As the thought crosses your mind the doorbell rings.
>”Anon? Anon?”
>You make your way to the door and and greet your guest.
“Hello Rara”
>“Hello Anon, I do apologize for being late. No offense but I didn't expect-”
“Didn’t expect me to live in a house this big? No offense taken, I don't exactly dress the part.”
>”Forgive me for asking but how do you afford such a magnificent place?”
>You chuckle a little because people always expect you to be bullshitting when you tell them.
“Well you see, waaayyy back in the 1800’s a family member of mine invented the spork.”
>She give you ‘The look’
>The look that says “Okay, I know you’re lying”
>It’s expected at this point
“No I’m not kidding”
>”Well alright then, also...Anon are you sure about this outfit? The bust is a tad tight and I have no problems with miniskirts but, this is a strong breeze away from indecent.
>You shrug
“You're the one that agreed to the terms, costume and all. Anyway want me to show you around?”
>The whole tour takes about thirty or so minutes and ends at your room.
>You sit down at your computer chair and slowly spin in it.
“Any questions?”
>”Not really, I'm just a bit taken aback by how much there is.”
“Oh don't worry, you won't have to clean it all. We have housemaids for that. You're my personal maid.”
>”And that entails?”
“Just stick near me and you'll learn I'm sure.”
>She smirks and sighs.
>”That sounds ominous.”
“Rest assured nothing too lewd or..What's the word you use? Oh yeah, uncouth.”
“For now”
>You mumble the last part under your breath.
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>>28109283
"So Rara.”
>You grab a stress ball and throw it in the air and catch it repeatedly.
“Tell me how you've been.”
>She takes a seat on your bed and crosses her legs causing her skirt to slide up a bit exposing her milky, soft thighs.
>”Well first I should thank you again for helping me pass four of my finals.”
>You give her a warm smile eliciting one back.
“No problem, I was happy to help.’
>She fiddles with her skirt trying to keep it down as far as possible.
>The sight of her struggling is quite adorable.
>You can already feel how fun the next two months would be.
>Well for yourself at least.
>You accidentally throw the ball too hard and it bounces off the ceiling and knocks over half a can of soda.
“Shit. Well sweet maid o’ mine, looks like I have the first job for you.”
>As you walk past you run a finger under her chin.
>Her pale complexion becomes a deep crimson.
“Feel free to join me downstairs when you're done.”
>You can feel her embarrassment in the air.
>Almost palpable
>She kneels down to clean the mess and tries to keep her skirt down in a lady like fashion.
>Oh this is gonna be fun.
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>>28109295
>After watching TV for a bit you hear the creak of feet on stairs.
“Hello Rarity.”
>”Well, I cleaned that stain right up.”
>You can hear the half enthusiasm in her voice.
“Good girl. Here.”
>You dig in your wallet and pull out a fresh ten dollar bill and hold it in the air.
>”Oh Anon, I- I simply can't.”
“You can, and you will. Come on and get it.”
>She walks over and hesitantly pulls the bill out from between your fingers.
“There’s more where that comes from….if you’re good.”
>She smiles nervously.
“Be a dear and grab me a drink from the fridge.”
>”Um Anon, is there anything specific you want?”
“Something from the bottom shelf.”
>You look over the edge of the couch to see a million dollar sight.
>Rarity is bent at the waist digging through the cans at the bottom.
>Her lacey black panties present themselves for the world to see.
>You pull out your phone and take a picture incase of any...defiance.
>Part two of your insurance policy is going all according to keikaku.
>She stands back up and pushes her skirt down realizing her mistake, she looks at the couch to see if you noticed.
>Thankfully you slunk back down as she was turning.
>She returns, ice cold drink in hand.
“Thank you.”
>She nods and smiles uneasily at you
>The uneasiness to her body language is priceless
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>>28109306
>You pat the seat next to you
“Come on sit down, take a load off. How’s those dress designs you've been working on?”
>She take you up on the offer and relaxes her muscles but you can feel her tenseness.
>”Oh they've been simply marvelous to design. I have a designer friend in Manhattan that says she simply adores my designs.”
>You take a sip of your drink
“Have you thought about opening your own boutique?”
>”I've thrown around the idea but I just wouldn't have the resources for something like that.”
>You make a mental note of that.
“I'm sure you'd be able to do it if you put your heart into it. I know how driven you can be when you know what you want.”
>She blushes and covers up an embarrassed smile.
>”You're so sweet Anon”
“I try”
“So Rarity, how are you feeling about this arrangement so far?”
>She shifts slightly in her seat.
>”No offense but at first I was a little worried you'd try to take advantage of me.”
>You raise an eyebrow and take another sip, staring through her with cold eyes over the top of the glass.
>”N-Not like that, I meant in a make me do everything sort of way. Sorry for the confusion.”
“It's quite alright. I guess I've learned how you see me.”
>”Nonono Anon, I don't think of you that way.”
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>>28109327
"Well, I'm sure its just a misunderstanding.”
>You hand her your empty glass and put on your sweetest most innocent looking smile
“Be a doll and put this away please”
>From the look in Rarity’s eyes you can tell she's taken aback by how quick you changed demeanors.
>She gets up and takes the glass to the sink and washes it out before putting it into the dishwasher.
“So, what's the name you'd want for your dress store?”
>”I've thought of so many but one of them just seems to stick with me. Carousel Boutique.”
>She waves her hand across the air as if to reveal the name in lights.
“Hmm, not bad. It's got a nice ring to it.”
>You make a note in your phone of the name.
>You walk over and join her in the kitchen and place your hand on her exposed shoulder and look her directly in her crystalline blue eyes.
“I just wanna let you know you're doing a great job. You can take a little fifteen minute break and just relax for a bit. If you need me I'll be in my room.”
>With that you turn and head to your room
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>>28109339
>You plop down onto your bed and look through the pictures you've taken throughout the day.
>It'd be a shame if these got out
>You chuckle to yourself as you put them into a locked folder.
>A knock in the door makes you look up from your screen.
>Rarity is standing there with a smile on her face.
“Yes Rarity?”
>”I may have gotten a tad bit bored.”
“Can't get enough of me it seems?”
>She fiddles with the bottom of her skirt.
>It's almost like she enjoys the teasing.
“Wanna watch a movie or something?”
>”What movie?”
“Doesn't matter to me, but first we need movie snacks.”
>She picks up the hint and makes her way downstairs.
>Much to her surprise you accompany her.
>”Forgive me for asking but why did you come with me?”
“Well a Sir and his maid should never be too far apart.”
>”I'm just downstairs from your room.”
“True, but it's a shame to be unable to see such a beautiful maid. Especially your own beautiful maid.”
>You run a finger up the bottom of her neck and caress her chin.
>Goosebumps sprout across her skin like cracks running through ice.
>She looks up you, her eyes wide as she shivers
“Like that did we? Hmm, interesting.”
>You lean in till your lips are inches away from hers
“Or maybe we should skip the snacks and instead have dessert?”
>She doesn't move, she doesn't blink.
“But that'd be no fun.”
>You turn and look back at her.
“How did I ever get so lucky?”
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>>28109350
>You are Rarity.
>And you are currently sitting on the kitchen floor.
>What was that?
>Anon was..was..
>You've never felt anything like this
>You've never felt so helpless.
>So vulnerable.
>But as much as you wanted to, you definitely didn't hate it.
>His lips were so close to yours.
>From your upper thighs to your lower stomach was on fire.
>You stand yourself up and just breathe till the feeling passes but it doesn't seem to want to leave.
>You put the popcorn in the microwave, punch in the time and press start.
>You are Anon
>Sitting in your home theater looking through your movie collection.
>What would be a good movie that she would want to watch?
>The door squeaks open drawing your attention
>Rarity stands at the door, her gaze locked down.
>”Um hey Anon..”
“Something the matter?”
>She rubs her arm and looks all around the room but never at you.
>”Would it be alright if I took my leave a smidge early today?”
>You walk over and tilt her chin up forcing her to look at you.
“Leaving early on the first day? A strong impression that does not make.”
>You can feel her tremble against your firm touch.
>”I-i know and I do apologize I just need to think about some stuff.”
“Well, you have been pretty good, so I'll let you free for today. Just remember.”
>You pull her close and whisper into her ear.
“No one else can know about this, remember.”
>She silently nods
“Alrighty, off with you then. I will see you tomorrow darling.”
>And with that she takes off.
>You’re all alone.
>A shame she left, you could have forced her to stay but toying with her is too much fun
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>>28109368
>You will never lewdly tease Rarimaid
Why live?
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>>28109742
Sounds like a blast.
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>>28109368
I hope you don't expect us to be done with this bit
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>>28109368
good green so far
will there be more?
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>>28109327
>"I try."
>Not even saying "For you."
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>>28109368
>The next few days Rarity shows up and you treat her as nice as possible.
>No mention of night one.
>She starts to relax around you.
>Every conversation casual, every emotion genuine.
>Well genuine from one of you.
>It would be foolish to “Bare your fangs” so to speak at this point.
>She’s all good and comfy, just like you want.
>Well for now.
>She shows up at the door smiling and cheery.
>Her diamond eyes and pearly whites shine up at you.
“Hey Rarity, what’s up?”
>”Oh nothing much, just been working on my designs and such.”
“That's good to hear, I’m sure they’re just as fabulous as always.”
>She giggles.
“Well come on in.”
>You walk around the house and she doesn't leave your side.
>She probably just thinks that it was all just a bad dream.
>Good.
“Oh, did i ever show you the hedge maze?”
>”A hedge maze? That sounds interesting. Is it difficult?”
“Not at all, it’s barely a maze. Would you be interested in seeing it?”
>She takes a minute to mull it over.
>”I’d love to”
>Click click click
>You can almost hear the sound of the traps latch being set.
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>>28110992
Oops got distracted and forgot about the thread. Doom 4's a hell of a drug

>It only takes a few minutes to get out the door and to the edge of the ‘maze’
“Ladies first”
>You playfully bow forward pointing into the hedges
>SNAP
>The bait has been taken and the trap is swinging down.
>A few purposeful wrong turns later you come to a dead end.
>”It sure is beautiful in here”
“But it's definitely not the most beautiful thing out here”
>She cocks an eyebrow.
>”Oh and what would that be?”
>You close the distance between the two of you and place your hand under her jaw, putting pressure on the back of her jaw bone on each side.
>Her eyes widen and her heartbeat rockets.
“You of course.”
>You plant a kiss on her lips.
>To your surprise she doesn't fight or fidget in defiance.
>She stands, breathless, motionless.
>You lightly pull back to see her crimson, shocked expression.
>“I..uh..A-anon…”
“Ubupup.”
>You put a finger to her lips, your other hand still gripping slightly at the top of her throat.
“A good maid doesn't questions the will of her master.”
>”M-master?”
>You slightly increased the grip around the top of her neck.
>Not enough to hurt her of course but enough for her to feel it
>Every muscle in her body tenses and her eyes go from soft and bright to dull.
>”I-I trusted you Anon. Y-you always looked so sweet and nice and..”
“Ah yes but the prettiest frogs are the most poisonous, correct?”
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>>28111037
I'm scared now
This is getting spoopy
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>>28111037
>Anonymous grabbed at his cape and twiddled his mustachio betwixt the fingers on his other hand
NYAHAHAHAH
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>>28111037
I should've known...
He's a vampire!
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>>28111037
If you could not put your hand around her neck, I'd appreciate it, mmmkay?
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>>28111037
>You lightly plant another kiss
“Now you're probably gonna want to go tell your friends right? But you don't want the school to know how Rarity is a slutty little maid for hire do you?”
>”You have no proof of that.”
>You pull out your phone and show her the gallery of candid pictures of her in compromising positions.
>”F-fine...what is it you want?”
“What do I want? Well, that certainly is a good question.”
>You dig in your pocket and pull out a small leather strap and buckle it around her dainty soft neck.
“It does get rather lonely around the house with my parents gone. I think what I need is a pet.”
>You release your grip and stroke the top of her hair.
“I think you’d be a beautiful little pet.”
>You hook your finger into the small ring on her new collar.
“Well as beautiful as it is out here it’s a bit too warm for my liking.”
>You tug lightly and like a good girl she follows.
“Obedient already? Good we can skip the house training.”
>You lead her to your room and take a seat in your computer chair.
>You can see the panic in her eyes.
“Shh, don't freak out sweetheart.”
>You motion towards you.
“Come and sit.”
>At first she hesitates but starts to take a seat on your bed.
“No no.”
>You snap your fingers and point at the floor in front of you.
>”B-but..”
>She looks at you with somewhat somber eyes but behind them you can see a faint spark of enjoyment which makes you smile.
>You run your fingers through her hair and the blush across her face only grows more and more.
>You can even hear her breath hitch lightly when you tug on her hair.
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>>28111212
Alright that's it from me tonight. I promise I'll continue tomorrow
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>but behind them you can see a faint spark of enjoyment
oh my
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>>28111212
So wait, is this anon a vampire or a faggot vampire?
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>>28111240
Just a very manipulative rich kid with a master complex
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>>28111257
And from the sounds of it Rarity has a pet complex.

They're made for each other.
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>>28111257
>a faggot vampire
K.
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>>28073099
Get a name so we can tell which story is which
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>>28111212
>You can barely contain your devious smile.
>What to do, what to do.
>You can't go blowing your load all at once.
“Rarity, be a good little pet and get me a soda.”
>She starts to stand up so she can walk out.
“No no, doggies walk on all fours.”
>”B-but my skirt.”
>You lightly but firmly tug her collar.
>”Y-yes master.”
>She crawls out the door, her hips swaying side to side exposing her sheer purple panties.
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>You are a good little slave.
>No, you're Rarity
>Maybe both?
>Once you're out the door you stand back up and dust off your stockings.
>This shouldn't feel so good.
>You're a proper young lady and this is indecent.
>But the cool breeze across the wet spot under your skirt tells you other wise.
>You fan your face as you walk to the kitchen in hopes of cooling down.
>Once you grab his soda you walk up to his door frame and crawl back in.
>”Good girl”
>He grabs the soda from you and leads you by your collar onto the bed.
>Your heartbeat quickens.
>No, he wouldn't.
>He motions for you to sit so you do, tucking your legs to the side like a proper lady.
>You can feel yourself almost sweating when her crawls onto the bed with you.
>You close your eyes and brace yourself for whatever happens next.
>The bed wobbles for a bit but eventually stops and you feel a light pressure on your lap.
>You open your eyes and look down at Anon, his head in your lap looking up at you with his strong beautiful eyes.
>He reaches up and pats the top of your head.
>”What, did you expect me to do something crass?”
>He gently guides your head down and plants his lips on yours.
>Seconds keep passing but neither of you pull away.
>You relax your jaw only to find an uninvited guest wrestling with your tongue.
>Caught up in the moment you start to let your tongue wrestle back.
>Anons hand keeps your head down and your lips locked but you can also feel him tugging your hair firmly.
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Bumparino
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>>28115427
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>>28114833
oh my
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>>28114833
>Be Anon once again.
>You pull her hair harder, releasing the kiss
“Consider that a little treat for being obedient. If you're a good little puppy there's more where that came from.”
>Her face is blood red and she's practically drooling.
>Her glazed over sapphire eyes follow you're every movement.
>She spends the rest of the day with her head in your lap.
>Eventually your shared time comes to a end and you both make your way to the door.
>You pull her collar towards you and you give her a kiss.
“Now don't you dare let me see you without this.”
>”Y-Yes master.”
>You reward her with another kiss for calling you master and her face lights up.
>It's late and you have school tomorrow so you take a shower and retire to bed.
>The next morning you arrive early to school and see Rarity waiting at the gates.
>She see’s you and a smile spreads across her face.
>You look below her smile and like a obedient pet has her black collar.
>She's even personalized it with a triad of blue diamonds on the side along with some purple stitching along the top and bottom.
>You walk up to her and give her a peck on the lips.
“You wore it.”
>”Well of course, a pet should follow her master's wishes right?”
“Good girl.”
>You pat her on the head and lean up against the wall next to her.
>She just looks at you and cheeses away.
>After a bit the other girls she hangs out with show up and all smile and greet her.
>As they arrive you stand a bit back and watch out of the corner of your eye.
>Dash walks up to her and pokes at the leather strap around Rarity’s neck.
>”Um Rarity, is that a collar?”
>You can see in Rarity’s eyes that she absolutely abhors someone else touching it but she quickly regains her lady like composure.
>”No Dash, it’s a necklace and it means a lot to me so, I'd appreciate it if you refrain from touching it.”
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>>28118014
You forgot your name senpai.
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>>28118080
Shid
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>>28118014
This is so good! Don't you dare stop! Collar, consensual slaveplay, Rarity. Just don't make her do too much animal-like stuff and this will be amazing!
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>>28118014
great stuff, senpai
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>>28118080
>>28118181
>>28118477
Glad you guys are enjoying it. Sadly no more green for tonight. I'll post a bunch tomorrow to make up for it. I'd rather not ruin the story with my sour mood
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>>28106281
What happened to this green? It was really comfy.
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>>28056212
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>>28119475
I KNOW!
A mans collectible figures are his livelihood.
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>>28119388
It'll be back. Surely.
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>>28120754
I hope so, but don't call me Shirley.
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>>28056188
Have her clean my cock with her mouth, if you know what I mean
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I'd make her shit in the toilet and clean it.
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>>28121467
I don't
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boop
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>>28122573
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>>28122839
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>>28118014
>Dash pulls back like a puppy that's been yelled at.
>RD:”Geez alright, my bad.”
>AJ:”You alright sugarcube?”
>R:”I'm perfectly fine.”
>You walk up and rest your arms on her shoulders and your chin on her head.
“I would hope so, those two words do sum you up quite well.”
>You can feel the warmness in her cheeks.
>R:”Mast- Anon, hi there.”
“Hello sweetheart.”
>Her cheeks only grow warmer.
>You lay an arm across her back and hug her close to you.
“Oh and hello to you girls too.”
>Twilight raises an eyebrow.
>T:”What was she about to call you?”
“Just a slip of the tongue I'm sure. Right Rara?”
>R:”Yes, I do apologize. I was up a smidgen late last night.”
>The bell rings and you all split to your respective classes and meet back up during lunch.
>As you get to the cafeteria you see Rarity’s friends disengaging from a conversation with her and walking away so you walk up and rub her head.
“You ditched your friends for me?”
>She smiles.
>”Of course darling, I'd much rather spend time with my lovely master.”
“My my such a loyal little pet. I guess I'll have to reward you extra.”
>You rub your thumb against her cheek and she smiles and leans into it.
“You hungry?”
>”Not very.”
“Wanna just hang outside?”
>”Anything you want to master.”
>The two of you make your way back behind the school and sit on the benches.
>Rarity leans against your shoulder and rubs your arm.
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>>28125110
Forgot name, fuck
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>>28125110
>script like writing
NO STOP
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>>28125501
Why is this so hated on /mlp/? I've only been writing for a year or two. I feel it helps with showing who's talking but everyone seems to hate it
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>>28120754
Will it?
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Clean my house? What else to maids do?
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>>28125691
Because it is not a proper way of narrating your story and by writing even as little as a 5 word sentence you can easily convey who is it that is speaking and how they are doing so.
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>>28125743
Good point. I'll try to rectify that mistake in my writing from now on
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>>28126109
It sort of grows on you. The way in which your narration flows, action connects with dialog, and that in turn with the individual character quirks. All of it becomes more solid the more you write.
Try reposting that last part in a conventional style and just see how it goes.
Godspeed, dear anon.
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boop
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>>28056305
sounds to me like he works out his problems once a day if you're catching what I'm throwing (´・ω・`)
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>>28120754
>>28125716
It will, I've just been really busy these past days. I'll try to write tomorrow.

>>28125691
>>28125743
I've always thought the script format was fine for comedy/silly stories, since it helps to keep up a fast pace. But that's just me.
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>>28128027
I have no hands. I can't catch it.
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>>28056212
W0t?
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RIP
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>>28131168
It's not dead, we've still got Mr Grey anon
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>>28131534
but will he ever return?
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>>28131965
He hasn't been gone that long, has he?
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>>28132211
but it feels like it
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Why is there little to no art of Rarity dressed as a maid?
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>>28056212
>wastebasket that's full of crusty kleenexs that I sometimes re-use to bust in
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>>28132246
I'm not kill just working on getting through this story. Lost a little motivation for it but im workin on it. Hopefully i can wrap it up here in the next few days
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>>28132246
>>28132772
nah i was just kidding, great story man
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>>28133754
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>>28065478
Went to boot camp with a guy named cheeks
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>>28070033
>>28070013
we gonna get some hot /ss/ between Anon and Luna?
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>>28133754
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>>28056188
>ywn treat her decently, avoid making her job unnecessarily difficult, and befriend her over a nice dinner you cooked
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>>28125110
>You find yourself smiling
>She is rather adorable
>You put an arm around her and squeeze her tightly.
>She looks up at you with her beautiful bright azure eyes and just smiles away
“You are quite something, you know that?”
>”How so darling?”
>You laugh and pat her velvet soft hair.
“Oh nothing my lovely little pet.”
>The two of you sit and relax till the bell rings.
>”I wish we could stay out here.”
“I mean, we can.”
>She sits up and cocks an eyebrow
“We can just go home if you want.”
>”But wouldn’t that be skipping?”
“So?”
>You loop your finger into her collar
“Come on”
>She pulls back nervously at first but eventually gives in to your whim.
“Hey Rarity?”
>”Yes Master?
“You live close right?”
>She nods.
“Are your parents home?”
>”No, I actually live by myself.”
>A devilish smirk spreads across your face.
“Well puppy, show me the way.”
>You guide her in front of you and use a finger to hold onto the back of her collar.
>Her face is red from the embarrassment but you know deep down she enjoys it.
>After a few minuted of walking Rarity stops in front of what you presume to be her house.
>As she digs through her back pack for keys it affirms your suspicion.
>Once she finds them the two of you make your way inside.
>“Welcome to my humble abode.”
>It was a quaint little house.
>Nothing super fantastical but not underwhelming.
“Hmm, not bad Rara.”
>”Thank you, I do try to keep it tidy.”
“How about your room?”
>She blushes.
>”Wh-What about my room?”
“What's it like?”
>”Oh, y-you don't want to see that. It’s nothing interesting.”
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>>28137794

came here to see if it was real

it is real

holy fuck
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>>28128306
No sweat, mane
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>>28137847
Wot?
Where'd you hear about it?
Is that a good or a bad thing m8?
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>>28137794
>You raise an eyebrow
“Is that defiance I hear?”
>”No no, not at all. I just… Alright, this way.”
“Good girl”
>You follow her upstairs and to the last door in the hall.
>She sighs and opens the door to her room.
>To your surprise its an absolute mess.
>Fabric everywhere.
>’Toys’ scattered about.
>Most of the blankets aren't even on the bed.
“Well well, someone's a dirty girl.”
>”I-if I had know you were coming over I-”
>You stop her mid-sentence with a kiss.
>The tension in her shoulders relaxes and she calms down.
“Now, I did say I would reward you for doing what your master says. Correct?”
>”Correct.”
“But it looks like you've been ‘rewarding’ yourself. Maybe a punishment is in order.”
>”B-But I've been such a good girl..”
“Very true.”
>You pull her by her collar over to the bed and lay her down before crawling over top of her.
>She blushes and her breathing quickens.”
>You grab both of her wrists and restrain both of them above her with one hand.
>She doesn't resist or even tense up.
>”M-Master?”
“Yes?”
>”Is this my reward or punishment?”
>You can't help but laugh.
“Which one do you want it to be?”
>She smiles naughtily.
>You trail a finger down her chest and under her shirt.
>She shudders from your warm touch against her cold stomach.
>You lightly slide your hand up her stomach and into her bra causing her to gasp.
>In this moment she is more so yours than ever before.
>You pinch nipple in between your index and thumb and roll it around.
>With every gasp and moan she squirms with pleasure.
>An mischievous smile crackles across your face as you get an idea.
>You take your hand out of her shirt and sit up.
“Dont you move.”
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>>28137940
M-muh
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>>28137940
>You crawl off of her and make your way to the other side of the room and grab a long piece of fabric and walk back over to the bed.
>She cocks her head.
>”What's that for?”
>You snicker and grab her hands, using the fabric to tie them behind her.
>She bites her lip and looks at you seductively.
“So have you decided whether this was a punishment or not?”
>”If this is my punishment I should be a bad girl more often.”
Sheu grab the bottom of her shirt and pull it along with her bra up, exposing her pale perky breasts.
>She smiles
>”Don't hesitate dear. A toy should be played with should it not?”
“Right you are.”
>You lean forward and suck lightly on her breast.
>She moans and squirms beneath you
>You lift your head, the release of suction making a popping noise.
>At this point Rarity’s breath is ragged she's begging you for more.
“Well it wouldn't be fair if you had all the fun now would it?”
>You stand up and pull down your pants and boxers letting Anon Jr free.
>Rarity’s eyes widen.
>She opens her mouth and sticks her tongue out.
“Good girl, I don't even have to direct you.”
>You place a hand on the back of her head as she bobs her head up and down your length.
>Moans escape from both of you.
“Mmm Rara. Fuck.”
>Mascara runs down her face and spit drips off of her chin.
>You can't help but to squirm as you get closer and closer.
“Rarity ah, fuck. I'm gonna.”
>She forces herself all the way down causing you to cum down the back of her throat.
>She slowly pulls back dragging her tongue across the underside of your cock and coming off with a loud pop.
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>>28138048
Hopefully this makes up for my lack of writan yesterday
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>>28138048
l-lewd
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>>28070013
>>28070033
Luna /ss/ plz.
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>>28106281
Where are you?!
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Bumpsky
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>>28139325
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>>28138048
>She licks her lips and stares at you with bedroom eyes.
“Still hungry are we?”
>You put a finger against her forehead and push her back onto the bed.
>She tucks up her legs and brings her tied up hands in front of her.
>You grab them and hook her hands over one of the bed posts so that she's on her knees.
>She looks back at you and wiggles her hips at you.
>You pull down her skirt to reveal her firm ass in a black sheer thong.
“Naughty girl. Who said you could wear these?”
>You slap her ass hard leaving a bright red mark on her milky complexion.
>She loudly yelps and wiggles her hips trying to get you to do it again to which you happily ablige.
>You pull her lingere down exposing your prize.
>You crawl up to her on your knees and draw a line down her spine.
>She shivers at your touch
>She arches her back downward giving you a even better view.
>”Please rut me Master, I've been such a bad girl.”
>Her words make you diamonds
“Not so fast my little pet.”
>You rub your tip against her clit till she's dripping with her own cum.
>She wiggles around trying to get it inside but you continue to make every moment pleasure filled agony.
>”Master just fuck me already, please.”
>You pull away and she tries to follow only to be stopped by her arms stuck to the post.
“So demanding, maybe I should let you suffer
>”No no no, I'm so sorry Master. I'm a good girl I promise.”
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>>28141404
“Yes you are.”
>You thrust forward hilting inside her causing her to scream in pleasure.
>You lean forward and rub her clit with your fingers as you thrust in and out.
>”Mmm An-Master ahhh..H-harder.”
“Harder you say?”
>She bites her lip and nods.
>You reach forward and wrap her hair around your hand using it to pull her back towards you during every thrust.
>She moans loudy and you feel her tighten around you.
>You thrust as hard as you can, each loud slap of her hips against yours bringing you closer to orgasm.
“Mm Rarity, I'm close.”
>She locks her legs around yours
>”Come inside, fill me please Master.”
>You can feel yourself getting closer and closer until
“Rarity I'm, fuck. I'm cumming.”
>She holds you hilt deep inside her as you shoot your load.
>Her tight pussy milking every last drop.
>Eventually she releases you and you both fall over exhausted.
>She cuddles up against you, wrapping her legs around one of yours and laying her head on your chest.
>”I love you Master.”
>You kiss her on the forehead and squeeze her gently.
“I know Rara.”
>She giggles and snuggles closer before falling asleep.
>After a few minutes you check to see if she's out.
“Hey, you awake?”
>No response.
“Good. I love you too Rarity.”
>You lay your free arm under your head and drift off as well.

Fin
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rip thread no more green to come
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>>28141417
Http://pastebin.com/R0jPQ7G8
For if some reason y'all want to read it again
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>>28141490
nigger please continue this opposed to ending it, this is severely my fetish
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>>28141806
If I continue the quality will drop severely. I am sorry my friend
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>>28141417
absolutely bonerific
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>>28141925
thats okay mein nigger, thank you for writing what you did, it was good shit mang
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>>28141417
Oh my/10.
Hope to see you soon in another thread. I like your writing, keep it up fampai.
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>>28138929
I've been stupid busy, but I know I can write more tomorrow, sometime after the new episode. Hope the thread can stay alive, but if not I'll find somewhere to finish and update the pastebin.
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>>28056188
Normal maid things, without the slightest hint of romance or anything else. If she's as big of a fan of romance novels as she's portrayed to be, she'll lose her mind after a week.
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>>28141417
Nice one senpai
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^
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Page 10 ain't the end.
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Page 9 ain't fine.
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>>28076194
>I'm always too busy watching To Catch a Yeti
I'm glad someone else finds it concerning that there is a large, grainy, out of focus creature roaming the wilderness.
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Pre-work bump.

Keep this thread alive, Anons.
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bamp
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φ
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>>28145790
Plz do we miss you.
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>>28106281
Continue bud. This is fucking great. For the beginning the pacing was fine. I got hooked and it helped establish the setting and mood. If you want the story to be shorter, then do you dude, but if you got plans for a longer story, don't be afraid to throw in some side plots. Maybe Rarity gets caught by one of the girls on her way home from Anon's. Maybe Anon's parents come home early and find Rarity's outfit while they're at school. Maybe Anon has to deal with some lonely principles and Rarity finds herself angry "for some inexplicable reason." Nevertheless, you go ahead and do you man, all I'm pointing out is that your writing is top tier and your story has got a lot of potential.
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>Two weeks later.

>"---ter..."
>You feel yourself being shaken.
>"M--ter! Master, wake up!"
>Your vision is blurred, but you can see enough to make out a black and white dress.
>You grimace at the figure standing above your bed with a groan.
>"Master, get out of the bed this instant!"
>The frilly blob commands.
"Jus... Just give me another hour."
>You say as you roll onto your side.
>"No! It's already half past afternoon! You are getting up right now!"
>Your blanket is suddenly yanked away off of you completely, exposing you to fresh air.
>You curl up in your pajamas with a louder groan.
>You are Anon, and you've just been rudely awoken by your maid, Rarity.
"You're a bully maid!"
>You pout at her.
>But she remains stern.
>"I'm a maid who wants to get things done, and refuses to let her lazy master sleep all day! Besides, you're the one who gave me a key to the house so I could come over and start early."
>You now regret that decision.
>"I've already mostly prepared breakfast, so get up and drag yourself to the dinner table."
"I want to sit in front of the tv-"
>"You are going to sit at a proper table for breakfast!"
>She shouts down at you.
>Rarity turns and walks to your bedroom door, stopping to look back at you over her shoulder with narrowed eyes.
>"And if you're not sitting at that table by the time breakfast is ready, there WILL be consequences."
>With that, she leaves your room.
>You slowly rise up to sit at the edge of your bed.
>Things sure have changed since that first day Rarity started being your housemaid.
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>At first, you planned to be a jerk about it.
>You were going to make her do everything and rub her face in it the whole time.
>You thought she deserved it after what she said to you.
>But your feelings changed when you saw her handiwork for the first time.
>The maid dress she created by hand.
>The way she cleaned the master bedroom and bathroom.
>You took a peek at them when she was making your bed, and were blown away.
>You'd think they were cleaned by a professional service.
>But she did it all on her own, without cutting corners.
>Through her earnest, hard work, you could tell she was sorry.
>After that, you couldn't find it in you to be upset or treat her badly.
>...
>Anyways, you'd better get up before she yells again.
>You put on your slippers and head over to the table, taking a seat.
>Almost immediately, Rarity starts placing things down.
>"You're lucky you weren't one second slower."
>A plate of pancakes, eggs, bacon and toast is now in front of you, with a glass of orange juice.
>Across from you is a matching set, where Rarity sits down.
"This is great and all, but do you think we could at least turn on the tv and watch it from here-"
>"No! No tv!"
"But I'm missing cartoons!"
>You whine.
>"Master, you are a young adult! You should start acting like one occasionally!"
"You're actually saying that to me while I'm wearing Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles pajamas?!"
>"That's your own fault! I swear, once I'm done making you a new set of pajamas, I'm throwing out all your old ones!"
"Don't you dare! And I won't wear any you make unless they're cartoon themed!"
>"They will be classy, sophisticated, and cartoonless!"
"Nnnnoooo!!"
>You shout dramatically, fists in the air.
>Your whining and bickering with the maid dressed girl continues as you both eat.
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>>28155608
>To anyone else, it would be the strangest sight.
>But to you, it's just another day.
>After you both finish your meals, she starts picking up everything.
>"Don't just sit there, go wash up and change! I'm going to start doing laundry and I want all your dirty clothes gathered up!"
"Okay, okay."
>Rarity begins cleaning the dishes, while you sit and watch her with a smile.
>She really has taken over the house, hasn't she?
>Everything goes at her own pace, and she's the one giving orders now.
>Funny thing is... you really don't mind.
>These last two weeks have been some of the most fun you've ever had.
>When she isn't doing chores, you and her just hang out.
>You've even offered for her to stop wearing the maid outfit, but she declined.
>Her reasoning was that if she isn't wearing the outfit, then there's no point in her being here.
>She might as well stop coming over.
>And that's the one thing you didn't want.
>The truth is, you haven't just gotten used to her...
>You've grown fond of her.
>To the point that... you're more than sure you've fallen...
>But you could never say that to her while she's in that uniform.
>It wouldn't be fair.
>And though you know she isn't angry anymore, she's probably still a bit resentful for the situation you've put her in.
>So all you can do is enjoy the time you have left with her like this.
>And maybe someday, if you've become close enough...
>You'll reveal your feelings to her.
_________________________________________________
That's all for now. More to come later.
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>>28155591
i almost read that last line as housewife
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>>28155616
HE HAS RETURNED TO US!
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>>28141417
So I am really enjoying this green, but I can't help but be a little weirded out that their master/pet play started because of blackmail and heavy manipulation. Like, I see that it is now consensual and that is cool but at the same time it's almost.. I dunno, making me uneasy? Judging from how this started it seems like Anon is 100% in this just to use Rarity, which is strange for a consensual relationship. If it started with the blackmail and turned into abuse and forcefulness, I would have kept reading and not said a word. Right now, it's kind of... in the middle. Point is, I hope you build up to some kind of scene where Rarity confronts him about the fact that he used her and blackmailed her at first. Kind of like a "what am I to you?" scenario.

And then if everything works out Raripet can live happily ever after and master can buy her a brand new buttplug tail to wear around the house.
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>>28155616
Love your green. Good feels, super comfy, and Rarity in a maid outfit. What more could a human want?
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>>28156349
Nevermind, saw that it was finished. Guess I can pretend this all happened in my head
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Page 8 ain't great.
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>>28056188
>Consensual sex in the missionary position for the sole purpose of procreation
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>>28158155

You fucking degenerate! Get out of here with your sick fetishes!
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What would you do with a Rarimaid, Anon?
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>>28159626
Nothing.
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>>28159678
Who would you hire as your maid, then? Surely you would do something with your maid, even if it's just dusting
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>>28159703
why waste money on a maid if i live in a basement
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>>28159746
Because some of us have imaginations and dreams, Anon
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>>28161083
Be realistic, if you had her over as your maid, you'd be too autistic to even stay in the same room as her.
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>>28056188
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Where's muh meat puppet anon?
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>>28056188
I consider myself to be pretty tidy, so there shouldn't be much for her to do. I'll just ask to put the whole maid thing on raincheck and get someone else to do the cleaning when I need it.
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>>28164178
>Through a convoluted series of IOUs, Anon has managed to get Principal Celestia to do housework for him
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>>28155608
>Rarity won't let us watch cartoons
You fool, Rarity! We'll just watch Power Rangers instead!
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>>28165340
>not watching the superior kamen rider
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>>28165402
Implying that anything is superior to Time Force
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>>28165420
It's called Lightspeed Rescue
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>>28165437
>implying your kiddie shit is worth jack
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>>28165402
>>28165510
these guys know what's up
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>>28154881
Thanks for the story advice man. Those are some good ideas, but yeah, I'm going to keep it short and sweet like I originally intended. There are too many other greens I need to get to.
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>>28155616
>Six days later.
>Friday.

>You are Rarity.
>Tomorrow will be three weeks since your maid duties at Anon's house started.
>That means only a week more before your debt is paid.
>And considering how well you've gotten the hang of it, one more week isn't a problem at all.
>Soon you'll be celebrating the end of your part time 'waitress' job with a girls night out.
>You can't wait!
>"Looks like I beat you again, AJ."
>"Yeah, yeah, yer the fastest runner in our school, Dash, no surprise there. But just you wait till next week, when I cream your corn at weight liftin'!"
>"Ha! I'd like to see it happen! Right, Rarity?"
>Rainbow Dash asks as she and Applejack look back at you with cocky smiles.
>Gym period has just ended, and you're currently in the girls locker room along with everyone else.
"I'm sure it will be a close competition like always."
>You reply uninterested while going through your locker and taking off your gym clothes.
>"You sure don't care much for gym, do ya?"
>Applejack and Dash have already taken their clothes off and wrapped towels around themselves.
"Sweating profusely just isn't my idea of fun, Applejack, unless it's at the spa. I am in dire need of a shower."
>"Well, come on then! Let's hit those showers!"
"You two go on ahead, I want to organize my locker a bit. I'll catch up."
>"Alrighty, just don't take too long."
>They both go into the shower room, leaving you as the last one at the lockers.
>After sorting out the mess that's become your gym locker, you take out your extra soft bath towel and warp it around yourself.
>Time for a quick, but lovely shower.
>"Anyone still here?"
>A girl's voice, coming from the other side of the locker room.
>"Hey! Anyone there? I need some help!"
>That's odd.
>You could've sworn you were the only one still in here.
>In any case, someone needs assistance, and you're not the type to turn your back on them.
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>>28167975
"Hold on!"
>You walk to where the voice seems to be coming from, the locker room exit.
"I'm here, are you okay? ...Hello?"
>There's... no one here.
>What's going on?
>Wait!
>You spot someone behind the nearest row of lockers.
>Isn't she one of the girls who's jealous of you and your friends?
>And she's smiling.
"You! What's the meaning of this?!"
>She suddenly jumps from her hiding spot to run over and open the locker room door.
>And before you can even react, you feel two sets of hands push you from behind, causing you to shriek in surprise.
>You stumble out into the hallway, and hear the door slam shut behind you.
>Did that...
>Did that really just happen?
>You have to get back in quickly!
>The door is-!
>Being kept shut by those skanks!
>You pound on it with your free hand and hold your towel in place with the other.
"Let me in! Let me in this second!"
>You yell.
>You can hear them start to laugh behind the door.
"This isn't funny! Open the door!"
>You push and slam yourself upon the door, but to no avail.
>It's three against one, there's no way you're opening it by force.
>What can you do?
>Maybe you should hide before anyone sees you and-!
>"Well, well, lookie what we have here!"
>Oh no.
>No no no no!
>You look behind you to see a large group of boys on their way to their own locker room.
>They start whistling and cat calling at you.
>You tighten your grip onto the towel and sidle along the door.
>"Guess the girls heard about what we did to Anon, and decided to pull it on little miss fashionista here."
>"Lucky us then! Seems like we've got ourselves a show, boys!"
>You can hear those bitches laugh even harder now.
>They have no intention of letting you in.
>"You lookin' good, Rarity!"
>"Them hips and legs! Damn girl!"
>You've never been so embarrassed.
>Is this how Anon felt?
>Is this how you treated him?
>It feels awful.
>How could he not feel hurt?
>How could he not see you as terrible?
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>>28167978
>You want to run away, but they've circled around you.
>And you don't want to go near any of them, since you don't know what they'll do.
"Please, don't look. Can't one of you help me instead?"
>You plead.
>"Oh, sure, we can help you. Help you out of that towel."
>This isn't happening.
>"You look good now, but you'd look even better without it."
>This CANNOT be happening!
>You point at them with a face of anger and disgust.
"Don't you ruffians dare come near me! Stay back!"
>They start to snicker as three of them walk closer to you.
>You won't be able to fight them all off.
>They're about to grab at your towel.
>No!
>PLEASE GOD NO!
>...
>All of a sudden, you're pushed up against the door.
>But it isn't because you're being grabbed at.
>It's...
>"I wouldn't do that if I were you."
"Anon!"
>He's protecting you with his backside and spread open arms.
>You've never been so happy to see him!
>"Dude! What gives?!"
>They all start to shout at him, but he stands his ground.
>But even with all this noise, you can hear something happening behind the door.
>It sounds like a scuffle.
>"Move! We said move!"
>"Git yer butts outta here before we whoop em'! GO!"
>The door is opened by Dash and AJ!
>They quickly grab hold of you and pull you inside.
>Once you're back in the locker room, they slam the door shut.
>They're soaking wet, but wearing their towels like you.
>"You okay, Rarity?"
>AJ asks concerned.
>"You were taking so long we got worried. That's when we found those three keeping the door shut."
>Dash motions to the still laughing skanks as they walk away.
>You lean back onto the door and let out a heavy sigh.
"I'm...I'm fine. They didn't touch me thanks to-"
>"What the fuck, Anon!?"
>You and the girls can hear the group of boys voicing their anger at Anon on the other side of the door.
>"You ruined it!"
>"What's the deal?!"
>"You a fuckin' knight in shining armor?"
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>>28167982
>"Yeah! Or is it cause you got the hots for Rarity? Is she your make believe girlfriend?"
>They go on berating Anon, until he speaks up.
>"Naw guys, it isn't like that. I actually did that for you."
>"The fuck you talkin' about?!"
>"Well, ever since you assholes pulled the same stunt on me, Vice Principal Luna has made it a habit to patrol these halls around this time. With all this noise, she's probably coming right now."
>"Bullshit! Like we're gonna believe that!"
>"WHO GOES THERE?!"
>A loud voice booms.
>"Holy shit, he's right!"
>"Let's get outta here!"
>You feel the ground reverberate as the boys run away.
>Seconds later, you hear the clack of the vice principal's heels.
>"What's going on here?! Oh, it's you, Anon. What was all the noise?"
>You and the girls continue to listen with baited breath.
>"Just the guys being rowdy. You know how it is when a big game is coming up."
>"Ah, I see. Still, perhaps I should have a word with them... wait."
>You can hear Luna walk over to Anon.
>"Your arm, what happened to it?"
>"I just tripped during gym."
>"Are you alright? Do you need to see Redheart?"
>"It's just a little sore, no big deal."
>"Oh no, I wouldn't be much of a principal if I didn't try to make you feel better. Here, allow me to... message it."
>You facepalm while Dash and AJ give each other confused looks.
>So even the vice principal is like that?
>"Aw, that's nice of you, Ma'am."
>And the idiot isn't the slightest aware.
>"Mmm... yes... your muscles, they're quite well toned. Have you been working out?"
>She asks seductively.
>"Just the usual school gym routine."
>"Is that so? Well... you know, I could reach further and... message your more... lower parts."
>The girls expressions have become shocked disgust.
>But you just apathetically shrug at them, as you're not surprised by this anymore.
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>>28167986
>"I'm thankful for the offer, but there's no need, since I only hurt my arm."
>"Hm...? Oh! Of course! It's your arm, not anything else!"
>She clears her throat.
>"Well, Anon, as I've said before, if you need anything, don't hesitate to come find me. I'll always be willing to help you in any way I can. And I do mean, ANY way."
>"I know, Ma'am. And I can also go to Principal Celestia too, right?"
>"What? Y-yes... I suppose you could go see my... sister."
>Luna sounds disappointed.
>"But, if you ever do go see my sister for help, make sure to notify me as well. So that we can help you together. At the same time."
>"Uh... okay, I'll try to remember that."
>"Good! Well, since everything here seems fine, I'd best get back to my office. You should hurry and shower, Anon. And make sure you... wash throughly as you think of me-I-mean think of what I said."
>"Yes, Ma'am."
>You hear Luna walk away.
>Anon sighs wistfully.
>"What a sweet woman."
>He says before walking away.
>You and the girls turn your attention back to each other.
>"What the HELL?!"
>Dash exclaims.
>"That ain't right."
>AJ shakes her head.
"It's better to just forget about it."
>"But really, Rarity, are you sure you're okay?"
>Dash asks, both her and AJ giving you worried looks.
"I told you, I am perfectly fine. Now come along, girls, I want to shower while I still have time."

>You are Anon.
>School has ended, but you aren't going home just yet.
>Instead, you're headed for the soccer field.
>You got a text from Rarity asking you to meet her there.
>And just like she said, she was waiting for you, sitting down on the bleachers.
>As soon as you step onto the field, she gets up to meet you halfway.
>You can tell that she's been crying, and that she's about to start again.
>Her slow walk towards you speeds up until she runs into your arms.
>You embrace her, and she starts to sob.
>"I'm sorry, Anon! I'm so sorry!"
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>>28167988
>Her voice is muffled as she cries into your chest.
>Your response is the best thing you can do for her right now.
>Let her tears soak your shirt.

>When she finally calms down, you sit with her on the bleachers, where she holds onto your arm.
>Her head lays on your shoulder.
>"...Is this how you felt, Anon?"
"No."
>You quickly answer.
"Yours is worse. What you said hurt, but you didn't try to take off my towel."
>She lightly chuckles.
>"At least I was somewhat civil about it, right?"
"I'll give you that."
>"...I'm afraid. What if they try to do something again?"
"They won't. Not after almost getting caught by Luna."
>"I hope so."
>"Also, when the rest of the guys heard about it, they got really upset. If they step out of line again, they'll be in trouble. What about the girls who locked you out?"
>"Applejack and Rainbow said they're going to take care of them later."
"Sounds scary."
>"They won't be hurt of course, but they will be sorry, and I'll be front row."
>You both chuckle.
>A moment of silence passes.
>"...Thank you, Anon. If it weren't for you..."
>You smile at her.
"You don't have to thank me. If you ever need help, I'll be here for you."
>She smiles back.
>"That means a lot to me."
>Silence falls on you again, and you notice that it's just starting to get dark.
"Do you have your car?"
>"I told you, it's my mother's car. And no, she needed it today."
"Well then."
>You stand up and pull her with you.
"I'll walk you home."
>"You would do that?"
>She beams at you.
"Sure, just lead the way."

>And so, you walk Rarity home.
>You try to make her feel better as you do.
>By talking about cartoons, and asking her about fashion.
>The same stuff you've been running her crazy with these past weeks.
>Before you know it, you're on her doorstep.
>"Thanks for walking me home, it's quite grown up of you."
>She half jokes.
"It was like a fourteen minute walk, not really something to call 'grown up.'"
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>>28167990
>She giggles.
>"Still, I appreciate it."
>She seems nervous.
>She's playing with her hands and shuffling her feet.
>She must want you to leave, hoping you don't want to come inside and meet her parents.
>Best not to make this anymore awkward.
>"S-so-"
"Guess I'll be heading home now."
>"...O-oh... okay."
>She's gotten so quiet.
>"Then I... I'll see you tomorrow? Of course! Tomorrow!"
>Now she's excited?
>"I'll come over early, so you'd better be ready!"
>You don't reply.
>"...Anon?"
"I'm calling off the whole maid thing."
>"What? But I still have a whole week left!"
"After three weeks and what happened today, I think we're more than even."
>"B-but we made an agreement! We shook hands on it, and I have a responsibility to see it through!"
>You shake your head.
"No. Not anymore. You've done enough, so go spend your days how you want. When you're ready, come over and pick up your dress anytime this week."
>She seems to be in shock.
>"Anon..."
>You smile at her.
"...Goodnight, Rarity."
>With that, you start walking home.
>You notice that Rarity watches you travel down the street for sometime.
>What you don't know is that she watched you until you were out of sight, before she finally stepped into her house, with these words you couldn't hear.
>"...Goodnight, Anon."
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>>28167992
We've now come to a point in the story where you guys need to make a decision. So I ask you:

Do you want the story to have a lewd scene?

Or would you rather the story stay non-lewd?

It's up to you all. I'll check back later to see what you decided on.
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Voting for lewd
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>>28167994
lewd pls
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>>28167992
This was nice.

>>28167994
Intimate cutelewd.
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>>28167994
Honestly I don't care, just go with whatever you feel more comfortable writing m8.
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>>28167992

I'd like a heartfelt lewd.
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>>28167992
why not both?

but yeah I'd like lewd but I feel we need some kind of emotional pay out for all these feels
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Bumping for feels, I don't care where those feels emanate from.
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>>28167994
Comfylewd would be good
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>>28167994
Romantic lewd
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>>28167994
As much as I don't want lewd it doesn't matter what I say, because a lot of you wants lewd.
At least make it comfy,
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>>28167994
Second pls
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>>28167992
>She must want you to leave, hoping you don't want to come inside
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>>28169771
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>>28169133
Sick numbers m8
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>>28171698
Bamp
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>>28168015
>>28168160
>>28168177
>>28168354
>>28168576
>>28169115
>>28169771
>>28169885
>>28170563
>>28170577
Well, I expected lewd would be the majority vote, since it usually is, but I'm really surprised at what kinds of lewd you guys want.

Okay, I'll be working on it now. But I want to do it right, I won't be rushing it, so it's probably going to take me some time. And just to let you know, this won't be continued in another thread. The end is nigh.
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>>28173545
I'm okay with this. Rushed, forced lewd is the worst.
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>>28171191

SHE'S HOPING YOU DON'T WANT TO COME INSIDE.

Who does she think she's talking to?
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>page 8
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>>28173545
Comfy cuddlefuck?
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>>28171191
What did she mean by this?
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>>28176427
Yas.
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>>28176452
Facials
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>>28175708
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>>28173545
Godspeed faggette
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>>28065114
I AGREE WITH YOU!
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>>28178726
Why is there a second of animation followed by 10s of still image? Fuck kinda gif is that?
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Just checking in to confirm green is being written. Hopefully the waiting will be worth it.
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>>28065114
you sound mad.
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Bumping for Writefriend.
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Bump before bed
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Bumparooni
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>>28071296
>What a nice woman.

Kek
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Proofreading is being done.
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>>28183513
Cool.
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>>28183513
soon
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>>28167992
>Saturday.

>You wake up sometime in the afternoon.
>It was easy to sleep in, since no one was here to wake you.
>You move some of the bedding off you, but stay in bed for a while, to go over everything that happened yesterday.
>After replying the events in your mind a few times, you get up and stretch.
>As you do, you're reminded of what you're wearing.
>The new set of silk pajamas she made you a few days ago.
>They were not cartoon themed, just as she vowed, but they did feel great and fit you perfectly.
>You look back at your bed to see the other item she gave you.
>A thick, extra soft goose down comforter.
>She said it was a spare of something she already has, and wanted you to have it.
>It's warm and feels great, especially to lay on top of.
>But why?
>Why did she do these things for you?
>She didn't have to.
>...
>Looking at your bed isn't going to make it.
>And she's not here to do it...
>So, for the first time in weeks, you make your bed.
>It's not hard to do, but it lacks that flawless look it had when she made it.

>In the living room, the defining silence hits you.
>Gone are the sounds and smells of breakfast.
>You could cook something yourself, but you just don't feel like it.
>A bowl of cereal and cold milk is your meal, as you sit on the floor and watch your cartoons.
>You should be happy.
>No one is scolding you for acting childish.
>But it's not as fun as it once was.

>Later, after you wash up, you change into your casual clothes.
>You didn't have to.
>You could've just stayed in your pajamas all day.
>But someone got you into the habit of not doing that anymore.

>Laundry needs to be done, so you do some loads as best you can.
>But you're not certain which colors and materials should go together.
>And when it's time to stack and put away the clean clothes, you can't fold them as well as she did.
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>>28184152
>She made things look like they were on display at a store.

>All of these little things remind you that there is a distinct difference between you and her.
>It was her skill.
>Her touch.
>That's what made everything in your home so nice these past weeks.
>And you just didn't have it.

>You've been thinking about her all day.
>Is she okay?
>Does she feel better?
>You could call her...
>But, it's probably best not to.
>She's had to deal with you almost every day.
>She should rest without being bothered by her 'master' anymore.
>God, what were you thinking?
>Why did you force her to be a servant to you?
>You're such an asshole.
>You wanted revenge?
>Great.
>What good did it do you?
>You miss her.
>You have feelings for her.
>But you can never tell her.
>Not after the way you treated her.
>Not after what happened to her.
>Why couldn't you just try to make amends and be her friend?
>Maybe then, you would've had a chance.
>That chance is gone now.

>As your mind wanders through these thoughts, you've unconsciously opened the hallway closet, where the maid outfit hangs, quiet and still.
>What a showpiece of her talents.
>She looked great everyday she wore it.
>She wore it for you.
>But not because she wanted to.
>Because she had to.
>And now... she'll never wear a beautiful dress like this for you again.
>What have you done?
>...
>The doorbell rings.
>It's the early evening now, who could that be?
>You open the door to see it's the person you least expected.
"Rarity?"
>"Hello, Anon."
>She smiles.
"What are you doing here?"
>She gestures to the garment bag she's holding.
>"I've come to pick up my dress."
>The next day?
>...Of course.
>Why should she let something like this nag at the back of her mind.
>Best to get it out of the way now so she can enjoy her freedom.
"I see..."
>"You're not busy, are you?"
"Hm? Oh, no, come in."
>You make way for her and close the door behind.
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>>28184159
>"It's right where I left it?"
"Yeah."
>"Good. You mind if I use your room to pack it up?"
"Not at all."
>"Splendid!"
>She's so cheerful and energetic.
>Probably because she'll finally be over and done with this whole nightmare.
>She takes the dress into your room and closes the door.
>You should be happy to have her back in the house, but you only feel sick with guilt.

>It's been sometime since she went into your room.
>It doesn't take this long to pack a dress, does it?
>"Anon? Can you come help me with this?"
>Her voice echoes in the hallway.
"Just a second!"
>You reply.
>When you get to your door, it's closed.
>What's going on?
>You open it and step in slowly.
"What do you need-!"
>And that's when you're met with a familiar sight you thought you'd never see again.
>Rarity, standing in the middle of your room, wearing the maid outfit.
>"What can I do for you, Master?"
>She asks with a demure smile and tone.
"R-rarity! What are you?!"
>She giggles at your baffled reaction and steps over to you.
>That's when you notice something different.
>She's wearing black stilettos instead of the mary janes.
>"Is something wrong, Master?"
"I don't understand why you're wearing that. I told you, you're not my maid anymore."
>"But I can't quit yet, Master. I still have to give you my... 'special service.'"
"Wha-!"
>Suddenly, she takes the last step in between you, and places her lips onto yours.
>She's kissing you.
>Rarity is kissing you!
>You gently push her away.
"Rarity?!"
>Her smile fades, replaced with worry.
>"What's wrong? Do you not like it?"
>She asks in her normal voice, breaking character.
"It's not that I don't like it, I'm just really confused. Tell me, why are you doing this?"
>She takes your hands into hers and smiles again, but it's a gentle, warm smile this time.
>"Because I love you, Anon."
>Your expression and movement go still.
>You can't believe what Rarity just said to you.
"You do?"
>She slowly nods.
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>>28184168
>"Although I was upset at first, I've grown to enjoy being with you. And when you saved me yesterday, I was so happy, so relieved that you were there, protecting me. That's when I knew... I'd fallen for you."
>Her voice is sincere, she really means what she's saying.
"But, I already told you, you don't have to thank me for yesterday."
>She shakes her head.
>"This is more than thanks. Ever since you walked me home, I haven't been able to stop thinking about you. I've been longing to see and talk to you again. These are my real feelings... don't you share these feelings with me?"
>She asks with a hopeful look.
>Her hands still hold onto yours, but only now do you squeeze them back.
"I do... I do love you, Rarity. But I feel awful about how I've treated you. I wanted to get back at you, to humiliate you."
>"I made a mistake too. I made it FIRST. But it doesn't mean everything that's happened since then isn't real. Watching cartoons, making me laugh, the study sessions, encouraging my designs. Those are all precious memories to me now."
>Hearing this gives you a smile that matches hers.
>She lets go of your hand to raise hers to your cheek.
>"What is it about any of this that's wrong, Master?"
>Your smile falls and you look away from her in shame.
"Please don't call me that anymore. I can't stand the thought of forcing you to do something against your will. I never should have made you wear this dress."
>You're surprised, as her response is to laugh cheerfully.
>"Oh, Anon, you're wrong!"
"I am?"
>"I'm not being forced into anything."
>She lets go of your other hand to hook her arm around the back of your neck, and draws you closer to her face, that now has the most seductive look you've ever seen.
>"After three weeks of this game, I'm pent up. Maid Rarity wants this. Maid Rarity... wants her master."
>Your lips meet again.
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>>28184173
>But this time, you embrace her, running a hand through her hair to hold the back of her head, and the other to wrap around her hips.
>You kiss each other feverishly, tasting one another's mouth.
>Your loins have become hot and throbbing.
>She notices this, and breaks away to take off your shirt, unzip your jeans, and pull them down along with your underwear.
>You're then made to sit on the edge of your bed, while she gets on her knees and situates herself between your legs.
>This is all moving so fast.
>You've become a bit light headed and nervous.
"Rarity, are you sure-"
>"Shhhhhh..."
>She coos as she takes hold of your manhood, resting her arms on your legs.
>"It's alright, I'll slow down."
>She starts to slowly rub.
>"Trust your maid to take care of you..."
>The gentle rubbing continues for a few moments, before she begins to place soft, moist, kisses upon your shaft.
>The kisses slowly move from the base, all the way to your tip.
>Kisses then become licking, starting again at the bottom.
>She makes sure to lick every inch of you with her tongue, leaving a thin layer of saliva.
>She reaches your tip again, and pauses to brace herself, her hot breath tingling, as her lips stay pressed against you.
>Then, with a deep breath, she opens her mouth to slowly engulf you.
>Your entire body shivers as her lips pass down your length, causing you to gasp.
>When she makes it to the bottom, she stays still for a moment, before she begins to slowly rise.
>But she doesn't allow herself to leave past your tip, and instead slowly goes down again.
>She repeats this process, turning it into a steady rhythm, the curls of her hair brushing against your thighs, while she purposely moans.
>You instinctively place your hand on her head, as if to ride out the immense sensations you're going through.
>One side of you feels yourself sliding against her tongue.
>The other feels the solid, yet smooth, gentle graze of her teeth.
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>>28184179
>You would be content with just this, but after sometime, Rarity takes her mouth off you completely, making sure to leave a thick coating of saliva on your member, and stands up.
>"Lay down, Master."
>She gently pushes you to do so, and you comply by moving yourself into the middle of the bed.
>She takes off her heels and joins you on the bed, kneeling down onto you and straddling your hips.
>The plush comforter feels amazing at your back, but it pales in comparison to the softness of Rarity's inner thighs.
>Once she's situated herself on top of you, she takes the time to smooth out her large skirt, allowing it to cover your entire lower half, and almost reaching your chest.
>This blocks your view, but also greatly enhances your sensation to everything going on under that skirt.
>Like the feeling of Rarity reaching in to move her panties aside and-!
>You've just remembered something!
>You were so overwhelmed, you almost forgot!
"Wait!"
>You tell her as you sit up with an outstretched arm.
>"What? What is it?"
>She asks puzzled, but then blushes with a cute, embarrassed smile.
>"A-anon, you don't have to worry. I... I'm not a virgin, you know. ...Does... does that bother you?"
"We-"
>Her expression turns to panic, but the blush only deepens.
>"I swear, the rumors aren't true! I haven't been with that many-"
"That's not it! I was about to say... wait, how many does the rumors say? No, no, forget it! CONDOM. We don't have a condom. We can't do this without one."
>"Ooohhh! That? Not a problem at all!"
>She says with confidence.
"And I don't care if it's your 'safe day!' We are not-"
>"I'm on the PILL, Anon."
"Ooohhh..."
>You let out a sigh of relief and let yourself lay back down.
"...The pill, huh? ...So, how many do the rumors say?"
>"It helps with CERTAIN times of the month! That's why I take them."
>She explains agitated.
"O-oh... I, uh... I see."
>You smile sheepishly.
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>>28184186
>She huffs with a pout, before her smile returns.
>"I told you, didn't I?"
>She reaches into her skirt once again, this time taking hold of your shaft.
>"Trust your maid."
>She carefully guides your tip to her entrance, and once they're aligned, she begins to slowly descend while biting her lip.
>She emits a deep, low moan as your manhood easily parts her soft folds.
>The saliva she coated you with, combined with her own ample fluid, provide all the lubrication needed.
>You grab onto her hips, while her walls conform to you.
>Once you're completely inside her, she lets out another moan.
>"Aaaahhhh yesss! I've been waiting to feel you inside me for so long."
>She begins to slowly rock back and forth.
>Gradually, the rocking turns into lifting herself up, only to let herself fall back down.
>She speeds up over time until, just like before, she settles on a steady rhythm, leaning back slightly with her hands planted on the bed behind her for support.
>There's so much to the pleasure you're experiencing.
>First and foremost, obviously, is being inside her.
>It's warm, soft, and overflowing with her juices.
>And while she's not a virgin, she is extremely tight.
>So tight, it actually feels like she's pulling you up with her every time.
>Then there's the skirt.
>It bounces and moves along to her rhythm, and keeps everything inside warm.
>The lacy frills and soft, heavy fabric brush against your skin and the comforter, making a satisfying sound to go along with the sensation.
>Not to mention the silky feeling of her thigh high stockings rubbing against your hips and legs.
>She continues like this for a while, until her pace and expression suddenly becomes anxious.
>With an increased speed and her back arched, she reaches orgasm.
>"MMMMmmmmhhhhhhnnnnn!!"
>Her moaning is loud, her legs shake, her walls pulse and squeeze around your member, and her face tells you she's absolutely euphoric.
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>>28184193
>That's why she hasn't been talking anymore, she was concentrating on her orgasm.
>After a few more moments, her moaning dulls and softens, and she straightens out again... into a slump.
>Her breathing is heavy.
>It takes her a few moments to collect herself before she can even speak.
>"That... was amazing!"
"Still think my package is sub par?"
>You ask with a smug grin.
>"I'll... I'll let you in on... a secret."
>She places her hands onto your chest and leans down closer to you.
>"I was able to tell right away that there was nothing sub par about it. Like I said, I was just teasing."
>You both start laughing.
"Seriously?!"
>"Hey, I said I was sorry!"
>She leans back again and slowly lifts herself off you, freeing your member from her confines into the fresh air.
>She sits down on the opposite end of the bed, while you sit up.
>"Well... go on."
"What?"
>"I've had my fun, so do what you will with me. I'm yours, Master."
>She tells you with open arms and a smile.
"...In that case."
>You crawl over to her.
"First, no more calling me master. And second, I'm getting you out of that dress."
>She giggles.
>"As you wish... Anon."
>She turns her back to you and lifts her hair, revealing all the snap buttons and zippers that run along her back, keeping the dress clad to her.
>You begin to take it off piece by piece, starting with the bows and strings.
>The buttons make loud sounds when you unclasp them, so do the zippers as you pull them down.
>The process is slow, and surprisingly intimate.
>There are no words spoken between you, Rarity simply allows you to undress her.
>Soon enough, the maid outfit is on your bedroom floor.
>And Rarity herself is now in nothing but some sexy, lacy, black and white lingerie.
>It consists of the stockings attached to a garter belt, panties, and a corset.
>"How do you like them? I made this set to go along with the dress."
>She asks running her hands over herself provocatively.
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>>28184196
>You quickly unfasten the corset and rip it off her.
>She gasps at your sudden actions.
"I'm tired of fabric getting in my way!"
>You go on to roughly take off the rest of her lingerie, until she's wearing nothing.
"I just want you."
>You tell her with a devious smile.
>"Well fine then!"
>She replies playfully, taunting you by laying down in an alluring pose.
>"You have me."
>You lay on top of her with all your weight, the comforter more than capable of cushioning and supporting you both.
>The feeling of her soft, supple body under you, as she stares into your eyes lovingly is more pleasant than you ever could've dreamed.
>You kiss her passionately, before turning your attention to her perfect c-cups.
>Grabbing onto and kneading them with your hands, while you lick and suckle on her perky nipples, eliciting moans and giggles from her.
"Mmm... tastes and feels like marsh mellows."
>She giggles, but slaps your shoulder lightly.
>"Don't say that!"
>She blushes.
>You wedge and wiggle yourself between her legs, despite the resistance Rarity puts up.
>Seems she wants to keep her legs closed just tightly enough so that she can squeeze and rub you with them.
>She makes it a snug fit, but that makes it feel even better.
>Slowly, you insert yourself inside her again.
>She watches with baited breath, and throws her head back when your length is all the way in.
>You wrap your arms around her back, and she returns this in kind with her own arms.
>And slowly, you rock back and forth into her with short motions.
>You wanted to make this last as long as possible.
>This doesn't seem to be a problem for Rarity, who is giving you a warm, bright smile.
>You hug and cuddle her body, placing soft kisses all over her chest, shoulders, and neck.
>She giggles again happily.
>"Oh, Anon, this is so wonderful! It's just as I hoped it would be!"
>You reply by giving her a deep, long kiss.
>She licks her lips.
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>>28184200
>"Mmm... you must have missed my cooking today."
>She teases.
"I did."
>You admit.
>"Well, after this, I can make us a big stack of pancakes."
"One big stack?"
>"Um hmm! We'll share it~"
>She says with a much too cute voice and smile.
"Eeehhh... I dunno, I'm not sure I want to share with you."
>"Excuse me?!"
>You laugh, and she resists joining in by forcing a scrunchy mouth and nose.
>You go back to concentrating on your motions.
>Deciding that it's time, you add more speed and force to the rocking.
>This starts to evoke short, quiet moans from her with each motion.
>"Uhh... uhnn... uhhn... unnff... umnn... ummm..."
>You carry on like this for a few more minutes before moving on to actual, deep thrusts.
>Each thrust plunging her into the comforter, making crinkling fabric sounds all around you.
>Her hair now a disheveled mess, Rarity moans loudly to your rhythm.
>"Aaah! ...Ahhh! ...Uhhh! ...Aaahhh!"
>You feel near your limit.
>You can't hold it any longer.
>You squeeze Rarity tightly to your body, and make one final, strong thrust, expelling your seed into her womb.
>Your member throbs and pulses inside her.
>She gives out her last, low moan as the sensation fills her.
>"Yessss... such a warm feeling. I love it."
>She says with her eyes closed and a satisfied smile.
>After emptying your entire contents, you bury your head into her shoulder, panting.
>Everything you've just experienced finally catches up with the both of you.
>You're barely able to roll off of Rarity.
>Not content with that, she snuggles up to you.
>You do your best to return the effort, basking with her in the afterglow, the sounds of you both breathing deeply the only thing filling the silence.
>"...So... give me... a few minutes."
"...Uh huh?"
>"...And I'll... go make us those... pancakes..."
"...Okay..."
>She softly kisses your cheek.
>"I love you, Anon."
>And you love Rarity.

>The next day.
>Sunday.
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>>28184206
>Rarity comes back to your house in the early afternoon.
>She's here to pick up the maid outfit she'd left yesterday.
>She said she wasn't ready to take it home just then.
>But she's got it all packed up this time, and she places the garment bag containing it into her car trunk.
>You close the lid for her.
>"I suppose it's really over now."
"Good. I don't think my parents would be accepting of keeping something like this up. I'm afraid your tenure ends here, my housemaid. You are now retired."
>She smiles playfully.
>"Hmmm... I'm not so sure about that. Maid Rarity might appear again someday."
>That could be trouble.
"That would have to be in the far future. But, putting that aside, now that you've got your freedom and all the time in the world, what are you going to do?"
>"Actually, I'm quite hungry. I could go for a nice dinner. One that I didn't have to cook and clean after myself."
"Oh?"
>"And I would much enjoy it if you were to take me to said dinner."
>She hands you the keys to her car.
"And just where would you like to dine?"
>You both get in and buckle up.
>"I leave the choice up to you. Take me where you see fit."
>She says with confidence in the passenger seat next to you.
"WELL."
>You back out of your driveway, and start to cruise down the street.
"I just happen to know a really nice, FRENCH, restaurant downtown."
>Rarity takes in a deep, long breath, with a smile she's desperately trying to keep in check.
>"...Darling... don't even joke."

>You would never forget this day.
>It was the day you lost your first, and only, maid.
>And gained your lifelong love.


End.
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>>28184212
And that's it!

So, this was my first time writing lewd. And I have to say, it's fucking hard. Even harder than I thought. Seriously. But yeah, if it sucked and was a let down to you guys, I'm sorry, it's the best I could do.

I tried to keep in mind everything you guys wanted out of it. And I also tried to keep it from getting too raunchy. It's lewd, but I wanted it to stay classy as possible. I don't know how well I pulled that off.

With that said, I want to thank everyone who kept this thread bumped, be it late night bumps, discussion, or green of your own. I could NOT have finished this in a single thread, and the time I did it in without you guys. I feel bad posting lewd and ending the story in the middle of the day, but I can't help that.

Hope you were able to enjoy it.
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>>28184222
Loved it.
PS checked digits
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>>28184222
You did good son, real good.
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>>28061690
This is off topic but I have to say that AA v PL had the greatest soundtracks for both series. Bewitching puzzles is by far my favorite. They have just the right blend.
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>>28184698
>"What you just heard your honor...was logic"
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>>28184222
It was quite vanilla storywise but i enjoyed it none the less. Well done writefag
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>>28184222
Personally found the lewd unnecessary and a little detrimental to Anon being a super-kissless virgin, but that's what the people wanted and you delivered and did it well. Bravo, writefag. feels/10
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>>28184736
The story was totally vanilla, I agree. There were way more routes I could've taken it, but vanilla has the huge advantage that it can be kept simple and short.

>>28184948
I agree with you, lewd is usually totally unnecessary, and I make a habit to keep my stories non-lewd. Green doesn't have to be lewd to be good, after all. But I knew from the start everyone would expect it. Kinda comes with the theme of maids I guess.

As for Anon being a kissless virgin, I purposely tried to wrote it so that anyone can put themselves in the viewpoint of Anon. Is he a virgin? Is he not and just really fucking nervous about having sex with one of the hottest girls in school? That's up to the reader to decide.
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>>28184222
That was a cute ending.
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>>28184222
Pastebin??
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>>28185854
That picture is fucking perfect. Those are the exact expressions I imagined while I was typing.

>>28185972
Pastebin is here.

http://pastebin.com/wurFhdvs
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>>28184222
You did good work there son. It was an enjoyable read worth following.

It's okay that the lewd was a bit awkward, it was your first time after all.
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>>28056188
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>>28167994
Personally, I would go non-lewd, but you are your own writer. It should be left to you
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>>28056188
First ask her how I can get into the mlp universe, then go there with her.
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>>28184222
that was nice.

thank you
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>>28184222
It was prettyful <3
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