give me a greentext prompt. i need something to write to train

>>28014774
Write a story with a self insert OC that kills himself.

>>28014774
Write a story about being a crime lord or a lich king in equslestria.

Those are rare and you'd score points just for novelty.
You get bonus points for including sex.

>>28014774
Here OP >>27948538
Come to our thread and see what you can do. You have some competition, so it'll help draw out your skills better. We're pretty chill over there too, so no intimidation.

>>28014774
Anon celebrates Luna's 1023rd birthday. He is the only person to show up during the day, since everyone assumed it would be at night.

>>28014785
>Bonus points for including sex.
You are shit.

>>28014804
>Come to our thread!
You are also shit

>>28014774
>Making a new thread
And you are the biggest shit

Go find a general or thread that interests you and come up with an idea or ask for a prompt there. Maybe the Luna threads since your waifu a shit

>>28014804
oh thanks. will check it out
>>28014781
thats not something that interests me at all sadly
>>28014785
yeah i think i could do that
>>28014809
will give it a try

>>28014785

Here's the story of how i became the most wanted man in equestria.

>I was transported to equestria on a Monday evening.
>When i jumped into my pool, a portal suddenly opened and I was teleported straight to the center of Manehattan (what a stupid name)
>As it turns out, almost all inhabitants there are sentient ponys.
>Most of them even have weird colours like blue, green and even pink.
>Anyways, I was as confused as them at first.
>That is, until one of those fuckers started throwing rocks at me.
>She shouted "Get out of here you monster!"
>As i was more of a coward back then i started to run.
>Meanwhile a mob has gathered which gave chase.
>I managed to hide in the sewers though, and was hiding till sunset.
>In the cover of the night i sneaked out of the city.
>Find myself in the wilderness.
>It was some rather mysterious forest.
>Decided to make myself a campfire to keep myself warm for the night.
>Next day.
>Wake up early due to the cold.
>The fire went out over night.
>Decided to search for some food.
>Managed to gather some berries.
>Also starting to build up a small house,
>A few weeks later.
>Living in a relatively comfortable loghouse i built myself.
>While gathering food every day, I managed to find a pony who was driven out of society.
>Living together now.
>We talk a lot about our former lives.
>She is a criminal.
>She doesn't judge me.
>Together we commit small crimes, like theft, to make our lives a bit better.

part 1/?

How are you liking it so far? Any tips on what to change? (Have to continue working for now, so ill be back in about 10 minutes, i think)
I personally think i could have done how anon got into equestria a lot better

>>28014909
Hm.
I cant really put my finger on it, but it reads kinda wierd and awkward?
Like you written prose and hammered it into green format?

As to story itself its way to early to say.
I dont like how you skipped over meeting pony companion, or how he just build himself a house.
House building is not easy matter, even if its just a log cabin. Did he have previous experience?
Gathering food also isnt trivial as finding some berries. Stealing food would be easier, more reliable and less time consuming.

Keep on going and keep in mind that I may be talking out of my ass about autistic things that dont really matter.

>>28014945
yeah i am a native german speaker so that may have quite a bit of influence.

I may rewrite the first part at a later date to expand on it.

you are quite helpful. thanks for taking the time to read it

>>28014774
Just trying's what's important.