Spider-Shim and her Amazing Friends! Issue #23

>>27813942
>(official thread cumdumpster)

How long until bloke posts his address?

I say thread #45

>>27813942
H-How do these titles keep on getting worse!?!?
>>27813969
Wait no please!!

A-Ah, um, still, for the new thread...
The Shimmering Spider-Woman!
Issue #9!

http://pastebin.com/EAmz5P2u

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>>27813992

>>27814036
For real, tone it down a notch

>>27814196
Nyet

>>27813992
If sombrero is the dad, who's the mum?

>>27814270
spoilers~

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>>27814289
Spoilers?

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>>27814289

>>27814300
extra spoilers

Side note, I feel kinda bad for psuedo-glossing over Anon and Sunset's chat regarding his identity, but I felt that we've already seen so much of it lately that it would be passe to do it directly

>>27814307
Well, isn't that an interesting idea~

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>>27814311

>>27814401
He knows too much

Take the shot

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Now we bate the trap
For Beans...

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>>27811824
>You exit the interrogation room as Gordon brings in the next witness in.
>You’re left to sit on the couch out front, alone with your thoughts about your Dad.
>What if he’s being trafficked right now?
>Was he part of a gang and forgot to do something?
>Did he accidentally kill someone or go into hiding?
>Is it Doc Ock trying to lure you out?
>Questions like these spin around your mind for what seems like hours.
>The worry makes you feel awful, and each possibility that you conjure up makes the bottom of your stomach churn sickeningly.
>Your friends are probably worried sick, too.
>...
>You should talk to one of them to ease off your mind.
>It’d be even better if Spidey was here to make you feel better with those soft yet muscular arms embracing you.
>In fact, you’d even accept a hug from Harvy just about now.
>Realizing Dad isn’t here makes you feel isolated and unprotected, sort of like being abandoned in a theme park with nowhere to go, or similar to a person going to a horror movie by him/herself.
>The vastness of a theater, the darkness surrounding them, and no one to confide with during the scary parts—it’s truthfully horrifying.
>Sheesh, your chest just aches thinking about thanks to your damn anxiety.
>You attempt to distract yourself and begin pulling your phone out of your pocket.
>You need someone right now to makes this feeling of isolation float away, even if just for a minute or two.
>The screen turns on with a list of unanswered calls, voice-mail, snap-chats, and probably some text messages too.
>With a swipe on the device’s screen, you type in your password and proceed to look through your contacts list for whom it is you wish to seek comfort from.
>The list is pretty short; everyone on it you just met recently, and they’re the first people you’ve actually kind of communicated with.
>One name, though...
>Sunset.

>>27814742
Did somebody say hips?

>>27814908
aw yisssss, delicious Beans greens
didja like my new Issue, Beans-sempai?
my bait worked!

>>27814908
>Sunset
Who?

>>27814948
I'm sorry, superkeaton, because I think you're pretty cool, but I'm way too busy to read other writefag's greens. I'm an actor/writer after all. I'll see if I can read your issues right now. I can't sleep anyways...

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>>27815016
A-Ah
Silly me...
not actually upset, just kidding around
the world and your time doesn't revolve around my green, haha
still, I really hope you like them

>>27815052
>http://pastebin.com/u/superkeaton
I'm reading these, and I love them. I'm tempted to do a reading on one of them, actually. I like your interpretation of this Anon's internal dialogue, and I like the sense of quirky humor he has. I'm enjoying them.

>>27815262
>Bean's mouth might say my words with the good voice
Omigoshomigoshomigosh!
This makes all the anonymous molestation worth it!
Just like Hollywood!

It's ah, I mean... thanks, dude, glad you like it!
Hopefully I can still tickle your fancy with the progressively more serious stuff as Shimmering goes on.

>>27815326
>just like Hollywood
So that's how Kirsten Dunst got the Mary Jane role

late night bump.

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>>27815002
Best human.

page 9

Mmff, good morning, everyone~!
How are we doing today?

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>>27816846
Thinking off you.

>>27816877
of*

Fuck you phone.

>>27816846
Taking time out of my schedule to actually write, you'll get more than just a simple trainride's worth of green today.

upload as I finish 2000 characters or when stuff is finished?
This can go ~ 5 hours

>>27816926
Woah!
Ah, well, post whatever you think is good, yeah?

>>27816971
Okay, then let's tease you guys like I suggested we do on you how I explained in last thread >>27810033

your thoughts?

27809374
>Your spider sense hadn’t gone off when he touched you, but the mockingly gentle gesture angered you more than you had thought.
>It didn’t go off either when he swung these metal extremities along the wall.
>You still managed to jump from the wall in time using your other enhanced senses.
>“Where are you going? We were just about to have fun!”
>While in mid air you wonder why your trusty Spider-Sense™ didn’t warn you about what had clearly been an attack.
>You gesture for elastic string and shoot some webbing up above your opponent, then use the force of having jumped off and gravity to bungee yourself back up to him.
>He swipes up to cut the string, but only averted your path.
>Not even far enough to not counteract it.
>The kick you had planned lost some force through it though, so him-
>He jumps towards you.
>Maybe if you use his own momentum-
>One of the metal legs connects hard with your left ankle.
>A moment later you were... in his arms?
>“I knew you came back! You do love me. Aww...”
>He lands on the building opposite of your starting position.
“You’re a bad habit I’m trying to quit, okay?”
>You easily break free and drop down.
>“No! Baby!”
>The playful banter had a bad aftertaste since his voice was so horrible.
“I gotta be honest with you. It’s not me, it’s you.”
>You grab a hold of the wall yourself just a bit underneath him, far enough outside his reach, with enough time to get away would he decide to drop down himself.
>“Laugh track plays.”
>How do you fight him?
“It’s over, Charlie.”
>“Close up of my sad face, cue Jimmy Ruffin.”
>You take in your surroundings.
>You were already pretty close to the ground, you need to gain altitude.
>He seems to excel at jumping from building to building as a means of transportation.
>These legs of his have a much higher span than yours, so he’d be faster at wall crawling.
>So far... you dropped in altitude and have gotten immobile.
>You need a strategy.

>>27816990
link previous post... >>27809374

live commentary is welcome

>>27816990
If he starts chasing her and you don't play the benny hill theme. Then you're doing it wrong.

>>27817047
Are you under the impression I do this to amuse you?

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>>27816846
Thinking of lewd things

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>>27817067
Are you serious or are you trying to make a Goodfellas reference? I can't tell.

>>27816990
>You’d easily catch up to him if he would decided to go down any street.
>Swinging from a web is much faster than his jumping, so you’d at least not lose him.
>But fighting him?
>He has the appendages advantage on you.
>And he doesn’t really want to fight you, does he?
>No, he swung at you first and your ankle continues to hurt.
>He’s... a menace, worse than you were.
>You never fought a Wonderbolt or the police, even if they hunted you (to a degree).
>You always choose to avoid a fight and escape.
>He’s going down.
>You shoot sticky web to his legs, trying to secure them to the building.
>Next you web on him, and jump to the side, trying to get at least a bit of momentum in your swings.
>“So we skip the sad montage throughout this episodes credits?”
>You see him pulling at the sticking-web trying to get his leg free and lashes out at you with another.
>Again your spider-sense fails to inform you of the source of danger, but you still manage to get a hold of the leg.
“I never stay for the credits.”
>You crawl up his leg to reach him, but he shakes it quickly, forcing you to focus on holding on harder.
>“Then how will you know what superhero movie they are going to tease for next?”
>God, you’re getting dizzy.
>You need to find a way to immobilize these arms.
“Well, obviously I stay for marvel movies.”
>You put some web on the leg you’re holding onto.
“I have them on my calendar until 2019 after all.”
>Then you shoot at the wall and connect the two.
>“You’re a woman of excellent taste, I see...”
>Your heads still spinning while you look at you.
>“I have four of these, you know?”
>He places the leg down and lifts the other two.
>The already webbed in place leg, and the one just now secured form, together with his real legs now the standpoint.
“Aww, we had so much fun and you want to trash talk now?”
>Okay, you got him in place.
>“My apologies.”
>You shoot some more sticky web at the base of his legs.

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>>27816846
>>27817124
I also just got done praying to our lord and savior

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>>27817185
>>27817176

>>27817147
me neither

>>27817156
In case anyone is wondering, by now I think we saw 3 different kinds of webbings Sunset uses
A strong almost unelastic string for swinging
an elastic string to bounce, and
a sticky stuff to hold stuff together for longer.

>>27817226
Anon should try some psychological warfare. Use what he knows about her to throw her off.

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>>27817429
That would be terribly mean.
And also hilarious.

>>27817475
Oh no, I wouldn't do something keaton thinks is mean.

>>27817156
>That should slow them down.
>A quick acrobatic jump later you were out of his reach.
>You smile under your mask, even if he couldn’t see it.
“Apology accepted.”
>You won.
>He lowers the metal appendages and tests how much he can still use them.
>At least you think you won.
>“You’re always so understanding.”
>He’s still up for banter.
>You’re not going to let your guard down just yet.
>Sadly you have to do the grown up stuff now.
“I’ll have to take you in.”
>He moves in a position where he can sit on one of the immobile legs.
>Yet he does not respond.
“Cat got... that tongue of yours?”
>“Not quite. It’s just... you stated something I already know.”
>You put your guard down a little.
“Yeah... then... I won, haven’t I? You’re tied down.”
>“And what? The Wonderbolts come, tag and bag me?”
“Come in on your own terms and... seriously, it’ll look better than being a caught super-villain.”
>“Give me a kiss and I’ll come willingly.”
>Wha-?
“A kiss?”
>“With tongue.”
>He wiggles that monster of a tongue at you.
>Ew... ewww.
>The longer you think about it the worse it gets.

It's times like this, just sitting at home thinking about my green. That make me wish I could write.

>>27817504
go out, sit in a cafe and think about your green.
At home you might just stop to masturbate.
They stop you if you do it at a cafe, so you can focus better

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>>27813942

>>27817515
A harsh but noble truth.

>>27817527
Look at that fat purple horse.

>>27817515
Oh so that's why writers go there

>>27817553
well, did you think it's because of 7€/liter softdrinks?

Man, that teaser I posted last thread really boosted the view count for Issue #9

I should do that more often
There's a very base satisfaction in seeing the numbers go up

>>27817578
Issue 8: 56 views
Issue 9: 82 views
I'm not saying it's bots, but... it's bots

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>>27817569
You're speaking in tongues
I'm from the land of freedom. We don't use your monopoly bills as currency and what is a liter? Are you talking about a litter? Like of puppies?

>>27817613
Shit I don't know if I can like untitled's story anymore now that I know he's a filthy foreigner.

>>27817656
Well why didn't you just say that the first time?

>>27817660
I'm totally american. I'm obese, have multiple guns, own illegal firework, have 13 pet eagle named after former presidents, have had plastic surgery, only speak one language, tear up everytime I sing the national anthem and only wear star and stripe spangled clothing, am arrogant and boastful, and have a lack of understanding for other cultures or the environment.

>>27817660
I'm muslim too

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>>27817717
>Nothing about NASCAR
>Nothing about football or Baseball
>Doesn't list what guns he owns

Spotted the commie

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>>27817762
Dropped

>>27817599
Oh, the bots help too

>>27817496
“You should also consider to stop saying super-villainy things.”
>“Hmm...? Do super-villains like a piece of your plentiful body?”
“I- ahh...”
>You clear your throat.
>A compliment by that thing was entirely different from when Anon does it.
>“Ahh~ She’s shy.”
>This one is only trying to mess with you.
“Enough!”
>You take out your phone and send your Wonderbolts signal.
>“What do we have here?”
“The tag and bag crew is alerted.”
>“I guess this is good bye then.”
>Does he think you’ll leave him alone until someone picks him up?
>Well... to be honest...
>You had always done it like that so far, but now you’re looking to gain the Wonderbolts favor.
“I’ll stick around so you don’t do anything stupid, like trying to escape.”
>“But isn’t the thrive for freedom in any creatures nature? You can’t blame me if I try, can you?”
>You smile weakly.
“I guess not, but-”
>He suddenly jumps.
>The sticky webbing rips the facade off the wall, sending debris falling down.
>Dammit!
>You jump down and quickly make a big web from a lamp post to the building to catch everything before the debris hit any pedestrian.
>You yourself land on a the lamp post and look up to your fleeing opponent.
>He scales the building, and was over it.
>By the time you are up there he most certainly has dropped in between the streets again.
>And you have no idea in what direction he would have gone.
>...
>He got away.
>”Hey, Spider-Woman! Who in the heck was that?”
>You'd normally ignore the pedestrians, but...
>Superheroing was your profession now...
>You jump down.
”Don't be afraid of him. He's quite the ruffian, but never hurt a citizen...”
>”O-Okay...”
>The pedestrians take a step back, obviously surprised by your approach.
>”But who was that?”
>You look up to the building where he had dissapeared
”I think he goes by the name of ”Spider-Man... no relation.”

>>27817717
Hey listen you patronizing piece of shit, fireworks are not illegal.

>>27817824
Newt
Anon's spree continues!

>>27817849
in my state they are. The only thing we get that comes close are those dinky hand sparklers.

>>27818157
*Neat

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>>27818157
A newt?

>>27818273
Shhhh, I typed the thing bad...

>>27818292
It got better>>27818240

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A reminder that thread's waifu a lewd

>>27818600
>your waifu is baconhair
>you want to pork her
>burn in hell

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>>27818637
I'd pork her

>>27819177
It's a sin

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_______hail hydrate_________
good night bump

>>27819425
Night, untitled

Empty thread bump

What's better. Sunset having wen shooters or organic web?

>>27820037
Organic.
Because that is my fetish

>>27820037
I'd go with the tech, personally.

>>27820037
Web shooters. They can be thrown in a pinch.

>>27820037
Organic, 100%

>>27820037
>>27820337
>>27820064
Organic is the best. Prove me wrong.
You cant

>>27820375
Organic vaginal web shooters

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>>27820648
This guy gets it. Keaton, we need another one shot of Sunny doing web things with her vag

>>27820665
I'll see what I can come up with, tease out issue 9's cliffhanger a little long with some cute smut.

>>27820707
Page 7 bump.

>>27821056
So, Klyntar, any comments on that last issue?
I need feedback. Delicious, tasty feedback.

>>27821313
I'll give you something tasty...

>>27821313
>http://pastebin.com/EAmz5P2u

Perfect execusion of the Shakesperean twist.

It was inspiring and I liked it.

>>27821731
I was worried about giving Osborn too much dialogue, but I couldn't really think of anything Anon could add to what was essentially a plot and motivation dump, a linking of threads from throughout the story that finally connected
I hadn't really teased much of Oscorp's involvement before this, which I really, really regret, but I'm glad this was at least well received.

Was there anything kind of off or didn't quite mesh with it?

>>27821965
I still think that Osborn treating anon like shit felt off. The real mr Osborn loves Harry but just ignores him. Will it be explained later on?

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>>27822001
Yeah.
Partly it's just character flanderization (though pic related makes it hard not to just portray Norman as a straight up psycho), part of it is him not just being Norman but also Sombra, a power-hungry sorcerer king who really, really doesn't play well with others, and part of it is his favorite desk ornament, which will have significantly more impact on the story as it continues.

Sombra sees Anon as a disappointment. A waste of potential who never really did anything with his life (granted, kid's still in high school, but he's comparing Anon to his OWN accomplishments), who bit the hand that still feeds him, and as of late, is only valuable because of a sheer accident.
Remember, Sombra made a totally open "we can rule together" offer that Anon naturally rejects, and was let go without any further fuss., so he's not without some amount of generosity (and might have been his best attempt to reach out) but it's twisted by his own ego and greed.

And I'mma spoiler all that for people who haven't read muh story yet.

>>27822071
Yeah, but he feels a lot more like "IMMA BE KING, FUCK ASGARDIA" Osborn than "Yes Harry, your B+ is amazing, but how come that even with Peter's help you can't reach an A?" Osborn.

I might be exagerating here, mind you.

>>27822141
Eh, fair criticism.

>>27822071
But this is the human world, so Sombra isn't the sorcerer king that is pony counterpart is

>>27822254
Megacorporate billionaire was the closest I could figure
I know Sombra would be better as Doctor Doom, but I wanted a solid analogue for Norman and when looking over MLP antagonists, Sombra stood out to me as the kind of guy who could manage the day-to-day of an evil megacorp powered by the soul-crushing despair of faceless corporate wage-slaves.

>>27822295
But Oscorp is a legitimate business with no secret evil projects of any kind

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>>27822312
certainly none that anyone still alive or not wanted by the law could prove

>>27822327
In fact, I heard that Norman Osborn is some kind of superhero. Iron Patriot, they call him

>>27822349
I'm still amazed by how flimsy that suit is versus the power weapons it packs.
The thing could lay waste to a city, but can't stop a teenage mutate from opening it like a tincan.

I wonder what that says about the man in the armor...

>>27822401
http://youtu.be/gG5OmOBQcYc
Still more durable than Iron Man's Mark 42 armor

Spiderman vs Booker Dewitt
http://youtu.be/rF_0eKT8Vl8

Repostan' comfy weeb music
http://dl.forunesia.com/mp3/06/%5BForunesia%5D%20Chiisana%20Boukensha.mp3

>>27822895
My soundtrack is superior
http://youtu.be/iZSUp5Nb1Dw

>>27822973
My version is better.
Also: >TFW no Spider-shimsham to cuddle with at 1:52 am.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OSCiMbMVDLI

>>27823026
Feels bad man.

page 9

>>27820064
>>27820337
>>27820375
>>27820648
>>27820665
Organic it is then. I should have a small update later tonight

Good morning, all!

>>27824467
Morning raep is best raep

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Did someone try to summon me?

>>27824467
How’s your day so far?

>>27822295
>I know Sombra would be better as Doctor Doom
it's what I was about to post

>>27824756
actually... no we kinda didn't
you showed up a few threads ago and acted as if you'll green
feels like you want an ego boost by us going madshitcrazy about a brand name writefag, but...
this isn't /soc/, no attention-whoring, please. It's disrespectful to established writefags of this thread.
It doesn't matter what your trip is.
If you'll write green, do so if you want, but we are not going to beg you to do it, okay?

>>27824867
I've been exceedingly lazy today

>>27825003
That’s cool. I'm gonna write some green for tonight. At least finish up the part I'm on

>>27825244
Is it Infamous anon or anti-venom anon?

Continued from last thread.

>be Anon
>for the second time today be late
>Mrs. Harshwhinny had you clean her chalkboard on top of taking notes for the lesson you missed
>all 45 minutes of it
>now you have 20 minutes to make it from school to your grandma's house two and a half miles away, before she decides to break out the sandal
>lucky for you a bus just pulled into the stop
>you board and pay the fair
>for once the universe throws you a bone
>then you remember the closest bus stop to your grandma's house is still a 15 minute walk from her house
>[hopelessness intensifies]
>maybe because the driver senses you're despair, or maybe the dude is incompetent, you don’t care which, he blows through three red lights

>17 minutes later you find yourself at your grandma's
>you steel yourself for the beating of a lifetime
>having finally gathered the testicular fortitude for the coming belting you cross the threshold into hell
>you await the shrieking of your undoubtedly pissed off granny
>you stand alone in silence for five minutes as you wait
>at this point you realise that grandma Anon is not home
>you sigh in relief as you make your way up to your room

>>27825272
Anti, it pains me to say this but Infamous has hit a dead end for the moment. It won't die there but the ideas aren’t fotying together. Still gonna work on it till something good happens

>>27825315
she's obviously out to search for her poor grandson

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>>27825349
It's k, I like sym-bromance

>>27825349
>>27825437
Yeah, different green is better than no green.

>>27825349
want me to write the next few lines of infamous?

>>27825464
No thanks, i have the ideas but no motivation. I'm just gonna write More Anti for another week or so.
Give myself a break from Infamous.

Mole-Man when?

>>27825653
Ant-Man when?

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>>27824975
Um, sorry, I guess.

>>27826297
I've been gone a while. You've made stuff for the threads before, yeah?
If so, glad to have you back. If not, welcome!

>>27826321
no, he only once namefagged in the thread, but didn't make anything

>>27826297
It's okay. But you gotta understand how it appeared to be when a tripfag comes to a thread claiming we yearned for him to come and save us from perdition.
You're welcome to stay of course, but 4chimp etiquette is to drop your name if you don't write anything when your identity doesn't further the narrative of a conversation (or if you do it ironically or you're trolling)

Trapped at Work Bump

Page 9 bump

For some reason, I never bothered to read these, but I wanna get into them. Can anyone link the beginning?

>>27827852
Pastebins are in the OP.

>>27827868
Thx

>>27827880
Welcome to the club

>>27828171
He'll never leave

>>27828438
I hope not

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>>27828438
>>27828490
Femanon left.
Roommate left.
Why live?

>>27828533
They've been gone for a while, tho

>>27828533
You shouldn't morn them, but rather live as they would have wanted.

Bop

From the last thread

>Crouched down on the edge above you was Spider-Woman, the bane of all super villains.
>Looking over her, you could see the form fitting black and red spandex covering her body.
>The spandex even showed off her child bearing hips and her amazing breasts.
> ‘Host, is this..’
‘Talk. Later.’
>You stand up slowly as Spider-Woman shot a webline at you, which you dodged.
> “So you a fan or a copycat?”
>You glare at her while standing at your full height.
“Neither, and do you mind. I was about to take care of them.”
>She looks at the two villains and raised her hand, shooting another web at you.
> “Sorry but it’s my job to put them away, not kill them.”
>She pulls on the web and launches herself at you, her leg extended at you.
>Your sense goes off as you grab her leg and throw her away from you.
“Why’re you trying to kick me?”
> “Because killing them won't solve anything.”
>She ran at you with her fist raised.
>You bat her fist away from you by backhanding it.
>Ducking under a spin kick, you punch her in her side and send her skidding against the ground.
>She looks up at you with her fists raised.
> “You're not bad.”
>You raised an eyebrow at this.
‘Why isn't she taking this seriously?’
>You block a few more punches and jump back as she tried to kick you.
> ‘Host?’
‘What, Tonic?’
> ‘The two robbers?’
>Your eyes go wide, not that she could see them.
>Looking just behind Spider-Woman, you could see the remains of your web but no Clash.
“FUCK!”

>>27829502
>You jump over the masked hero and onto the building.
>Looking around, you tried to see if you could find any sign of the two villains.
>Sadly you couldn't, meaning they got away.
>You growl and turn to face Spider-Woman.
“What the fuck is wrong with you?”
>Spider-Woman flinches at your loud voice.
> “What’re you talking about?”
>You point to the pile of webs you made.
“You let them get away.”
>She looks at the webs and all around her, not seeing any villain near her.
“Now if you don’t mind. I'm gonna find those two and make sure they get what they deserve.”
>You shot a bit of webbing and begin swing through the town.
>You pass by a few apartments and a couple of stores when you saw it.
>Spider-Woman was right behind you.
“Doesn’t she have anything better to do?”
>You make a hard left turn and she follows you.
>Looking behind you and see that she’s still following you.
“I need to lose her.”
> ‘I may have an idea, Host.”
‘Well I’m listening.’
>He tells me a fairly simple idea that could work.
>With a plan in mind, you start to slow down a bit.
>She gets a little closer as you stop using your web and flip under her.
>While you flip, two tentacles form from your back and wrap around Spider-Woman.
> “What the-”
>You then grab her and throw her as far away as possible.
>On the plus side, you see her spin like a human top and you managed to get away from her.
>After a few minutes of looking, you decided to call it quits.
“Better go back and get my clothes.”
>It doesn’t take you long to get back to the mall and change back into your regular clothes.
>Pulling out your phone, you dial a number.
“Hey Pinkie. You girls still at the mall?

>>27829620
Small update and yes a small fight/meeting. I want to make then sort of question each other's morals in a sense.
So thoughts?

>>27829636
quick, dig the action
why is the thread so dead today?

>>27830182
Yeah. I was in a bad funk for a couple of days and couldn't think. This was the best I could do.
And don't know.

>>27830199
I'd have been more active, but the signal at my job is fucking garbage tier

>>27830239
Rewriting plus a particulary shitty day for my internet.

Before-Bed-Bump

>>27830864
DnD night bump

>>27830182
I was busy remembering lines fr a scene all day. Sorry I haven't delivered today.

>>27830864
I still haven't forgotten that reading I promised you.

>>27831648
can you read my palms too?

>>27831706
No, but I can try? Maybe I can give you a sense of reassurance.

>>27829620
Was he going to kill them?

>>27829636
I like it, it showed that they're not direct enemies but unsure and uneasy about eachother.

>>27832027
No but Spider-Woman saw it was possible Anon would.

>>27831648
Yay!

>>27832202
That's what I was going for

I

>Quick steps echoed through an empty school corridor.
>The girl was in hurry. Her friends called her to the school library just after she finished her last period, yet they didn’t tell why.
>At this hour the school was dead silent, and all she could hear wandering was the sounds of her muffled steps.
>It didn’t take long before she reached the library doors and took a look at the empty corridor for the last time before she went through them.
>She entered a vast hall; book shelves were as high as the ceiling, and the room was made originally as a sport hall.
>That view had startled her the first time she had came there, but that was years ago and she had gotten used to it.
>After so many hours spent here, the scenery was too familiar for her to make an impression like that.
>The girl walked into a circle of light that greeted every visitor.
>Her hairs were long and reminded a fire with all the yellow and red streaks.
>Her name fit her appearance.
>Sunset Shimmer directed her steps deep inside the library.
>In the middle of it stood an old table marked by time and generations of students.
>Her seven friends were already waiting for her.
>All of them, but one, were her classmates - other teenage girls.
>The seventh companion was a green haired man in mid of his forties wearing a suit.
>All of them were leaning over the table and discussing something in a hushed tone, as if someone could eavesdrop.
>She came to them and received some warm smiles from everyone, except the man, who only acknowledged Sunset’s presence by a nod.
“So.” started Sunset Shimmer looking at a pink girl called Pinkie Pie. “Why did you call me?”
>“Yeah, why this time?” Rainbow haired girl shifted in her chair balancing it on only two legs.

>>27833538
>“Oh! You know.” She casually waved her hand and pointed at a purple girl wearing binoculars. “Twilight asked me to, since her phone account is blocked and all. No cash, no call, heh.”
>“Yeah.” Said Twilight Sparkle. “Sorry about that, but I have some cash problems recently- but it doesn’t matter. The point is, I called you-”.
>The pink girl gave her a frowned look.
>“Yes, you called them, Pinkie, because I found out that according to these books there is an incoming threat.”
>The little crowd stayed rather quiet as their features had not changed.
>At least for a while.
>“But what kind of a threat?” Asked the white girl with long violet hairs.
>“I… I don’t know.” Twilight Sparkle let out a frustrated sigh. “At least not yet.”
Sunset Shimmer looked at her rather annoyed friends. “It’s ok, Twilight. We know how hard it is to decipher these books and that you’re usually right.”
>It triggered a giggle from Twilight Sparkle.
>Applejack, the orange skinned and blond girl caught Sunset Shimmer’s intentions. “So, heck, fix me if I’m wrong, but we don’t know what’s gonna happen but we know it gonna happen soon and it’s serious enough to be found in the books? Damn, for me it sounds like every Thursday!”
>At that joke all of them laughed a little.
>Even the man smiled.
>“Is there anything we can do to help you with these codes?” A voice came from the only girl that didn’t speak yet. “Because, you know, Twilight, we really want to make it easier for you. If you don’t mind our help, that is.”
>Even after these years it was natural to shut up when Fluttershy spoke.
>Just to make sure she didn’t end up too startled to continue, or casually stifle her.
>It took a second but in the complete silence everyone heard some kind of weak noise coming from the center of the room.
>Something like scratching.
>When all of them, except Fluttershy, looked around with horrid expressions her face turned red.

>>27833544
>Not long after that, the man caught a glimpse of her face and asked with his low trembling voice.
>“Are you sure your bunny isn’t suffocating in your backpack?”
>It stopped everyone from searching for the source of the sound, and made Fluttershy to pick up her backpack.
>Two white bunny’s ears emerged from the girl’s backpack followed by the bunny’s head.
>Some of the girls made sounds of annoyance, and Twilight Sparkle gathered the books on one high pile, protecting them from her friend’s bunny.
>“I told you to not bring him here. He can eat our books. Or piss on them.” Added Twilight Sparkle.
>Fluttershy just kept the trying to run away bunny petting his head. “My Angel Bunny would never do such a terrible thing.”
>Pinkie Pie rolled her eyes. “Oh, you.”
>The rainbow haired girl leaned on the table on her elbows. “Mr. John, can you help Twilight to read these incoherent doodles? Or anyone else?”
>The man raised an eyebrow thinking. “I wish I could, Rainbow Dash, but…” He fixed lapels of his coat. “Shame on me, but even as a Librarian I never really got into this dialect. I must admit, with a small dose of jealousy, Twilight Sparkle has already surpassed me in Solarian.“
>Saying that, he winked playfully to the purple girl. “But if you remember the oracle, she could help, I think. Of course if you would find her and pay her. An actual tribute this time.”
>Applejack nervously laughed. “Yeah, about that… Do you think she still keeps a grudge against us?”
>“No way! We made her a ‘we are so sorry’ party, after all! No one keeps grudge after that kind of party.” Pinkie Pie exclaimed confidently.
>“Maybe, or maybe not.” Said Rarity. “Perhaps we should first ask somebody if it’s safe for us to go there. We may not be welcomed but tolerated is all we need.”

Still At Work Bump

>>27833555
“Maybe we just should keep positive attitude and ask her for help? She wasn’t very aggressive the last time we met her.” Sunset Shimmer winced at the memory.
>“Uh, maybe, but we burnt her house anyway. Who could know she’s not an evil witch but an oracle? Right? And if she’s as smart as you say she is then she already understood our point of view? Right?” Rainbow Dash smashed the table to emphasise her statement.
>A silence leaned in the library once again.
“Actually, you have a point but…” Began Sunset Shimmer but Twilight Sparkle interrupted her with a load groan.
>“Fine! We will just go there and ask her if she’s willing to help us for whatever she wants in exchange. If we can’t do that, then I may as well strikeout sleep from my schedule.”
>Girls looked at each other and the Librarian turned his back to them.
>“You know what to do, girls. I really hope I could be more useful for you, but-” The man got interrupted by a hug from behind.
>“It’s ok, Mr. John. We know what you did for us and we’re thankful. We always will be. And you’re still the best advisor we could hope for.”
>After that, the other girls loudly awww’d and joined in a group hug.
>Mr. John was trapped in the middle of it and had to save himself from the oppression before he would lose his composure.
>“Hey, hey. You have a job to do, you leechers. A-And you should watch over your bunny. Knowing him he’s already long gone.”

>>27833563
>The girls giggled as Fluttershy jumped away from the man just to see that her bunny was still in her backpack, sleeping as best he could.
>All of them let go of him and gathered their backpacks before quickly leaving.
>But he wasn’t observing them.
>When the doors shut closed behind them, the Librarian turned around to the table and collected the books hiding them under the librarian’s counter in a small cubby.
>Passing his powers was the one of the most natural things to him, but he would never admit how happy he was that it had to be them.
>He felt much younger than he was.

>>27833556
awkward bump is awkward

>>27833538
F-Faps is writing...is fucking writing.
WHAT THE FUCK? WHAT'S HAPPENING?

From pastebin.
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>Be Anon.
>BE FUCKING TERRIFIED.
>All your life you have been sharing the joy and woes of the people near you.
>A lot of the time, it gave you an uncanny insight in what they were doing and why.
>It made it practically impossible to lie to you.
>It made it so that you could see who to trust and who trusts you.
>But it also forced you to feel their anger and rage.
>Yet they were always mixed.
>You felt hate and pain born of others, but always tempered with a cause, such as the love for a lost one or at the very least the joy of revenge.
>Even the most ravenous of junkyard’s dogs cared for each other, or for their territories.
>And that is not what is happening now.
>You can feel it, in your skull and throat and chest and bones and veins…
>It’s alive.
>And it’s curious, you can feel your skin ripping in multiple parts of your body and the ooze forcing itself in.
>And it burns.
>It burns so bad.
>Pure anger and hatred.
>No love, care or remorse.
>It’s not hurt or afraid, it just sees you as an oddity, there is no reason for it’s rage.
>You are a thing to it.
>It’s not angry at you.
>It’s just angry at the world.
>You don’t understand, how can such a single minded creature exist.
>Then you feel it.
>The fire oozing through your insides and over your skin.
>You are floating, suspended inside the black sludge.
>Your limbs move by a will not of your own.
>And your skin burns like acid.
>You are not sure if it’s actually eating part of you or is just the empathic burn.
>No.
>A cut near your kidneys.
>It’s searching.
>It’s turning everything in your body inside out and then back again.
>And yet you can’t even scream.

>But between all the pain, something keeps you conscious.
>You can’t help but remember the tall man who gave it to you.
>You can’t recall what he looked like, but you know he took care of you and your friends…
>When?.. What friends?..
>You can feel your pinky finger brush against the knife’s handle.

>>27833846
I'll post as I re-write, because if I'm left to my own devices, I'll keep rewriting in a mad ride into obsession until the green has no beginning nor end.

>>27833555
Go on, am intrigued

>>27833568
You use very weird sentence structure which makes it hard to read, and sometimes just uncanny phrases which are almost right yet aren't.

>>27833696
is he like a big deal or something?

>>27833869
Rad
More of Klyntar-Anon is always nice
I can't help but pity the poor bastard

>>27830182
Honestly I'm just trying to figure out how best to write my next part. I think I've written it out three times now before I scrap it and start over.

Basically writers block just as my story was picking up

>>27830182
cause I was too lazy to post what I have written today because I was busy, now it just sits on my laptop and I'd have to stand up.

>>27835139
Well, so long as you're trying, it's okay

>>27835228
....

>>27835275
I forget about it every time I do stand up...

>>27835287
.....

>>27835332
Do I really have to stand up now?
It's not an important update either, the one after it is again

>>27817824
>Be Anon.
>So they send Sunset to catch you...
>Do they know?
>They have got to know, otherwise it wouldn’t be Sunset.
>How long have they been on your tail?
>They must have already known about you before got into their system, or not?
>Your aunt was in on it too...
>And that woman with the familiar voice and south american accent...
>Was she your aunts hydra contact?
>You were looking around in the Wonderbolts system.
>And just after a “Wonderbolt” tried to take you in.
>Sunset should be in college right now, just like you do.
>Why would she skip it just to randomly run across you.
>This had been deliberately planned out.
>Can you even go home now?
>Officially it’s the Wonderbolts who want you brought in.
>You don’t think Sunset is with Hydra.
>Heck you don’t even think Sunset is with the Wonderbolts.
>And that Hydra woman had protected you.
>Maybe... the official Wonderbolts don’t know all the thing that Hydra does.
>Officially they probably think Anon West, the hacker interested in Hydra, and the Superior Spider-Man are three different people.
>...
>Maybe Sunset coming to fight you had been coincidence too
>Your aunt did raise you to be paranoid...
>It was stupid of you to go out and search for a fight, but it still got you some good intel.
>Your aunt knew you hacked into the Wonderbolts’ system.
>She was told so by her ‘contact’
>A Woman then tells you that you are no longer protected if you continue, but when you told her off she seemed amused.
>Amusement means she doesn’t care about you and thinks it’s funny that you’re in way over your head.

>>27835666

>Or... it was a confirmation for her that you didn’t want to be protected anymore and... are now ready for what they have planned for you.
>Dammit.
>What do they have planned for you?
>If they have planned something to begin with.
>Until now you assume they only know about your healing factor...
>Was there anything that links Anon West to the Superior Spider-Man?
>...
>But something to link Anon West to the Hacker.
>And she contacted you after the hack...
>It’s Twilight’s password, and you did manage to crack it.
>You probably are on her list of former friends, someone able to guess it right.
>And there are probably not a lot of people smart enough to pull it off.
>Best case scenario for you, only your aunts contact, this hydra woman knows that you’re the hacker.
>Worst case she knows you are the Superior Spider-Man too.
>No.
>Even worse: one person noticed the hack, another is your aunts contact and the woman who spoke to you are all different people.
>If it’s one than this woman is someone your aunt trusts, and she has protected you, and...
>Wait...
>She protected you.
>Someone protected you by doing what exactly?
>Keeping you a secret?
>From both Hydra and the Wonderbolts?
>Auntie had told you to lay low because your Dad had made a deal with Hydra.
>But if they had been actively looking for you, wouldn’t they have easily found you at your aunt?
>There is just too much that didn’t make any sense.
>You shake your head and snap out of your train of thought.
>Looking around and taking in the scenery you notice you’re at the edge of midtown with cheap shops around.
>You spot an electronics store and smile.
>You could use a thing or two really quick.

I already have as much written for the next scene, but want to finish it first

>>27835332
It's not that I like you or anything

>>27835666
oh neat satanic trips

>>27835690
Good untitled~!

>>27835796
you have to do some serious butt stuff now, you know that , right?

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>>27835842
I know, I know...

>>27835842
>>27835927
*A wild Bloke has appeared*

>>27835948
you're only jealous because keaton and I have something special

>>27835948
Hmmff, so HIPS summon Beans, keaton lewds summon Bloke, tsundere summons Untitled, and Treps is always here.

>>27835959
There's plenty of Keaton to go around

>>27835961
Is there anything wrong with me?

>>27835993
no, but if you are mentioned you respond in like 5 minutes

>>27835972
keaton and I share a special bond, though

>>27835993
Nope.

>>27836016
No you don't

>>27836016
Is that a bad thing?

But to be serious, it seems to happen everytime i refresh the page.

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Fuck it posting what I finished over the last few days.
>>27825315

>Be Sunset Shimmer.
>Or as you are known by the broader public, the sensational Spider-Woman, agent of S.H.I.E.L.D., honorary Avenger, and hip-tacular web-slinger.
>For the last two weeks you have been staking out the hideout of one Wilson Fisk, aka the Kingpin, well as much as your high school schedule will allow.
>Every night for the the past two weeks, you have been watching an empty warehouse.
>Tonight however your patience finally pays off.
>Several of Fisk’s goons are loading crates of weapons and other contraband into at least three non-descript white vans, most likely to move them to buyers all over the city.
>You grab a camera from your backpack, and web it to a nearby lamppost.
>Girl’s got to make money somehow.

>Be Anon.
>You are thankful that your Grandmother was at yoga when you got home.
>Now that she’s returned and you’ve had dinner, you decide to binge-watch Guyver.
>The 2005 one not the 1980’s OVA.

>Be Sunset Shimmer.
>After beating the Kingpin’s thugs and webbing them to various parts of the loading dock you grab your camera and backpack and swing off.
>Such is your life ever since you ran away from equestria, almost turned the high school you were hiding at into an army of mind controlled zombies, were defeated, and subsequently bitten by a radioactive spider.
>Your life is fucking weird.
>At least working with S.H.I.E.L.D. has kept the cops off your back.
>well back to the apartment of solitude for a post patrol snack and some well deserved rest.

>>27836035
It's cause we love you.

>>27836038
>sensational Spider-Woman, agent of S.H.I.E.L.D.
which raises an interesting question
Spider-Man simply should not be an agent of anything.
but Peter was Team Ironman, so he should have signed the sokovia accords, right?
What does that mean for Spider-Man Homecoming?

but you 2099bloke, keep it up


>Guyver
...
We all have our guilty pleasures

>>27836057
So I get love, huh? I call dibs on it and use the no Take-Back accord.

Also gonna have a couple of Sunset’s friends know her secret and gonna have Sunset have the same experience with symbiotes as Peter Parker

>>27836074
I'm trying to set something up with that.

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>>27836084
You mean where she thinks Venom is only it for Venom from observing it's misguided way of protecting her when she's sleeping to the point where she confusedly antagonizes Venom instead of trying to research and understand it's actions before writing it off as pure evil? That sounds fun.

>>27836373
I meant that Sunset had a symbiote before, ripped it off and had a villain named Venom.

>>27836421
Oh shit sorry, I should have used past tense with my last reply. I already knew what you meant, I was trying to ask about why she may have done it in case you wanted to make her reasons for ripping it off and views of him just any different from Peter's.

>>27836548
Yeah, and i get it. I'm gonnatry and make it were she’s more or less undure of who Tonic is and his motives are.

>>27836601
She kinda seems unsure already after being grabbed and chucked by a pair of tentacle-like arms. And he told her he's not a fan or copycat, so I'm sure she's as as confused as can be atm.

>>27836649
That’s the point. She has a feeling it's a symbiote but doesn't know of the peopl making them.
Add the fact that Venom and Carnage basicly want to kill her, she doesn't know if the symbiote is a friend or foe

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>>27836675
Or whether he just wants some of the puss puss. This story is going to go a long way for me, you did pretty alright considering you were in a funk for a bit.

>>27837038
I write out the main ideas i want to do. It's making the details and all, that's the challenge

>>27837071
Ain't that the truth.

>>27837071
Ain't no truer words on this site.

>>27837071
Yeah, I spend 5% of my writing focus on the big picture and 95% on context, articulation and word variety to put in the most in between the lines.

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Fluttershy is,
Squirrel Girl!

>>27837302
Would totally use this if I knew more about the character.

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>>27837421
http://marvel.wikia.com/wiki/Doreen_Green_(Earth-616)

>>27837452
Thanks f@m. Now the Question is, Should Shim-sham and friends know? Or should she keep her identity remain a secret?

>>27837527
Honesty is the best policy

>>27837527
>>27837535

I expect comments on her "conspicuously awesome butt."

>>27837452
I always forget about her. Wish she was in more comics

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>>27837623
She has an ongoing
it's... kinda shitty
If you like cute, fourth-wall breaking girls, go with the new Gwenpool
It's deceptively good and it doesn't make your eyes bleed like... this

>>27837641
Thanks, was meaning to check that one out.

Also Update soon.

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>>27837659
Seriously, it's pretty good

Also, yay!

>>27837670
Oh, come on Kamala! How come you can coexist in a perfectly friendly manner with an unrepentant murderer and not tolerate Sam "I use my mouth as a sock" Alexander!

I bet it's the costume.

>>27837706
Sam is for bully
Poor Sam... I'm waiting for him to find out that while he was out Avenging, a robber broke in and killed his mom or something
The boy's a hero, he needs a break...

>>27829620
>Be Sunset Shimmer.
>The Spider-Woman.
>You just got out of the shower and dried yourself off with a small white towel that barely covered you.
>Walking out the bathroom door and into Twilight's bedroom, you put on a simple purple shirt and tight black shorts.
>After getting dressed, you leave the room and walk to Twilight's workshop or the basement.
>Doesn't matter what it’s called.
>Walking down the stairs to the basement, you see a few machines on shelves near a desk and computer.
>From the stairs you could see Rarity, wearing a simple blue dress, was holding your Spider-Woman outfit away from her with her nose wrinkled in disgust.
>Twilight, wearing a lab coat, black shirt and pants, was near Rarity and on her computer while going over a few programs you guess.
> “What happened to your outfit, darling?”
>You walk over to Twilight and sit in a chair while sighing.
“The guy threw me into a garbage truck, Rarity.”
>She looked at you confused and a bit horrified.
> “But how did it-”
“Can we please not talk about it? I can still taste some of that crap.”
>Rarity opened her mouth to ask but decided not to.
> “Anyways I should have this cleaned and smelling like roses by tomorrow.”
>You nod tiredly, thankful that you won’t smell like a trash can when you don your suit.
>You hear Twilight tapping away at the keyboard for a program you don't know about.
“So what're you working on Twilight?”
>She looks up from the computer to show you a blueprint of a right hand with a bunch of schematics and stuff.
> “I'm trying to put the finishing touches on a little project, but I can do that later.”

>>27837875
>She minimizes the window and brought up a different window.
>In this window you can see a list of names.
>Names of all the super powered villains you’ve faced.
> “Now, can you tell me what were you dealing with? I thought the symbiotes just disappeared.”
>You lean back in the chair.
“That’s what I thought, but it looks like we were wrong.”
>Twilight looks thoughtful and clicks on two of the names.
>Two windows open, showing a crimson tall man and a dark blue bulky man, both with wide mouths and sharp teeth.
> “You think that was Venom or Carnage?”
>You shake your head, barely giving the screen a glance.
“No, whoever it was that stopped Oct and Clash was more worried about stopping them than killing me.”
>Twilight and Rarity look at one another, confused at that.
> “So we don't know who or what he is?”
“No and it's getting on my nerves. Is he a new hero trying to help or a villain who doesn’t want any competition?”
>You grab a fistful of hair in anger as you close your eyes.
“For all I know, it could be someone from the future with symbiote powers or something.”
>Someone puts their hand on your shoulder, as you open your eyes to see Rarity next to you.
> “You shouldn't worry about that. I'm sure the next time you see him, you'll show him what for.”
>Despite how stupid it sounded, you smiled gratefully at her little speech.
> “You should also let go of your hair before you ruin it.”
>You laugh at the typical Rarity response, glad someone there to help you.
>Twilight smiles as well, happy you're not being some kind of emo kid.
> “Well do you have a plan, Sunset?”
>Thoughts of starting a fire or bringing Pinkie’s air horn enter your head, but you shake it.
“I'll deal with him when I see him. I’ve faced tougher situations before and this won’t be any more difficult.”
>Your two friends nod and go back to what they were doing before.
“Hopefully he won't be like Carnage.”

>>27837886
Not a lot for this part but just enough to give you a look at Sunset and her friends. Yes I made Twilight and Rarity know who she is. So thoughts?

>That moment when you're watching Agents of Shield and it becomes fucking awesome.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tWX3qJhm3-A

>>27837910
some of your wording is off, also, how does Sunset know about the symbiote? If it was mentioned, I've forgotten.

>>27837910
Why only them?

>>27837997
She had the Venom symbiote for a bit. Just put Sunset in Peter's place when he gets the symbiote and gets rid of it. I'll add a bit of that before I update the pastebin.

>>27837998
I figured having all her friends know would be a bit cliché. Also I was thinking one of Sunset's friends would be a hero as well

>>27838033
It'd make sense for all of them to know with how close they are. I feel like it'd cause a big rift if the rest of them found out and knew they'd been keeping it from them

>>27838048
Well, I'll make it were they all know but the reason why I have Rarity and Twilight is so they help her by making either tougher armor and gadgets.

>>27838086
makes sense.

>>27838105
Yeah, not saying the rest are useless, but the two have skills to help Sunset to survive .

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>>27838086
>gadgets
Does that include the amazing spider-tracers?

>>27838195
Yes, but they won't come into play till another few posts

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>>27838195
I wonder, whats the point in making them back traceable? You don't even need to know how to windows to see it's Spide-man's.

Is it only for the pun of being bugged?

>>27833846
---

>Þ And unseen and unnoticed by all but the raging ooze, the ‘scratches’ on the ‘knife’ spark and fill, for its master’s pain rouses the artifact and it in turn starts parting the mists twisting its master mind.
>Þ But it also calls for its brothers, those that were forged in kind, and those that wield them.

---

>Blue. He was blue. He taught you and your two friends.
>You remember.
>In the theater of your mind a memory plays.

>A hall of gold and silver, where even the sunset’s last lights glimmered against the pillars and ceiling in a sparkling show of lights and shadows.
>And three boys, looking at the golden aurora shimmering on the silver ceiling, while the blue man told the tale of how the real one was caused by the reflections of the starlight on the armor of the valkyror returning.

>You can feel it now.
>A fog bank on the back of your head where no memories dwell.
>But aren’t those of a game? Imaginary friends?
>But you remember a mother, always loving.
>And a father, a… Conman? Criminal? … Liar.
>And thus your hand is the one part of you that’s comfortable, calm and cold in the vicinity of the knife...

---

>Þ The blue light pulsing of the knife and into Anon’s hand would be ignored by all on the scene…

>Φ ...Were the ooze not distilled from Spider-Woman’s D.N.A.

>Φ And thus, latently magical.

>Φ The ooze, feeling a strange energy on it’s already anormal, but efficient host starts thinking of how to purge this new infection or maybe poison.

--

>...But you see what you are doing.
>You can’t stop moving your arms,
>You can’t stop yourself from grappling Nova.
>You can’t stop your knife from prickling her, nor your tongue from licking her.
>You can’t stop yourself from kil…

---

>Þ Still unseen, the knife pulses again, brighter and faster when it gets near enough to its master’s hand once again.
>Þ This time not so much dispelling the mists as it was rendering part of them into naught.

>>27838343

Anon is for bully by forces beyond his control.
---

>Þ Still unseen, the knife pulses again, brighter and faster when it gets near enough to its master’s hand once again.
>Þ This time not so much dispelling the mists as it was rendering part of them into naught.

---

>Another memory crashes into the front of your mind, of the same man and boys.
>An older man, a full grown adult in crimson armor stood bloodied in front of you, his iron sword dented and blunt, his shields shattered, all three of them.
>You were holding a splintered spear, with the shaft shortened and chipped and your last allowed shield.
>The both of you were in the middle of a holmgang, dueling in a circle of furs and taking turns at attacking the other.
>With your turn being at hand you finally manage to finish the duel.
>You feint a legsweep with your shortened spear and, when he sidestepped to parry you bashed his helmet in with the rim of your shield.
>As he had challenged you, you were proven just, and were allowed to kill him and take possession of his belongings.
>Yet from the sidelines, one of your friends, the Just one, tells you not to.
>You left him lying on the furs.
>You learnt days later why he targeted you.
>He had, in fact, accused you of a witnessless crime you didn’t commit. But he just wanted to avenge his brother and really thought you to blame, and acted as the law mandated.
>As you and your friends came to work together, you saw to a peaceful solution for all disputes.
>Your shining halls, everclean.

---

>Φ The ooze is confused.
>Φ This infection does not register in the bloodstream, bile, lymph, sebum, cerebrospinal fluid nor any part of the digestive tract, nor does any abnormal poisons. It only jolts the memory centers and emits a radiation unknown to it.
>Is this confusion that causes it to double up on the thought processes concerning the infection, and thus weakening its grasp on its host.

---

>>27838360

>NO!
>YOU ARE NOT GOING THERE.
>NEVER SHALL DEATH BE DEALT WITHOUT TRIAL!
>It’s with an oddly specific mental shout that you wrestle the control of your mouth back, locking it open and keeping Nova’s head safe and unbitten.
>You aren’t watching and you are ignoring every sound, but think you head Spider-Woman taunting the thing burning you and can most DEFINITELY feel yourself flying through the air and crashing onto something.

---

>Φ The ooze’s research finds finds no solution to deal with the infection, and shifts its focus back.
>Φ Instead of any particular antitoxin it could synthesise, it resorts to what amounts to an easy fix for a being such as itself.
>Φ It cranks the heat up.
>Φ Pyresis.
>Φ It has nothing to fear from a full blown hyperthermia, for it can easily keep its host’s alive micromanaging it cellular functions, preventing protein denaturalization and enzymatic failure.
>Φ It decides to settle on 55 degrees celsius.
>Φ That should kill whatever may be causing the radiation.
>Φ As for the disturbances it may be causing on the memory centers, it decides to check on them itself.
>Φ Its constituent matter has no problem slipping through the blood-brain barrier.
>Φ It finds itself rather surprised at what it finds.
>Φ The presumed infection is, in fact, acting there.
>Φ But is not the only radiation there.
>Φ There is a different one, a green one, keeping a mayor neuron network isolated and dormant.
>Φ The blue one, the assumed infection, is shaving away the green one.
>Φ An antidote then?
>Φ The ooze finds itself compelled to help.

> The problem is...
> A being with the capability to just regenerate neural tissue doesn’t care, nor know, of the term ‘collateral damage’...

>>27838427
This is... huh. Very intriguing.

>>27838528
It's the first and probably only time when 'what the fuck' is actually the expected reaction.

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>>27838572
Well. Mission Accomplished.

Plotting Out Future Issues in My Bed and Giggling Bump
Night, ya'll

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>>27838854
sleep tight slut

>>27838572
I huh'd.

>>27838086
I thought with the idea of having rarity in it too for the costume, but the went with only twi because i thought its unfair to only pick two of her friends who are useful to her as opposed to telling them all.

>>27838427
>>27838911

>I huh'd.

I decided to jump the shark and just post.
It's not the best I can do, but I wanted to post within july.
If you see my post, 90% is just me saying I'm polishing and or rewritting and that I would post 'later'.
---
>The new memories and the thing covering you are making a mess out of the insides of your skull, making you quickly lose control of your own mouth once again.
>You feel the accursed black liquid heating up like a fever.
>Every nerve in your body is searing and your guts feel like they had been filled with napalm.
>Why you? Why does it burn?!
>And why you.
>You were only going to ask a girl out! Why does it burn?!
>At least you aren’t grasping Nova anymore…
>But it’s too much.
>A monster attack? To see that was a dream come true.
>Being the victim? That’s no longer fun.
>Being possessed by the monster? Welcome to Breakdown Border! 100% Wall Free!
>Remembering events that can´t fit in your timeline while feeling like you were doused in kerosene and lit aflame? That border wasn’t crossed, it was jumped over in shark themed motorcycle at max speed.

>All your eyes relay to you is a mosaic of senseless shapes and impossible colors, your every nerve is burning and you don’t feel Spider-Woman nor Nova getting any closer.
>You take a running start in the direction they went, as if to jump out the window.
>But something makes the ooze doubt.
>You can feel yourself turning and running, your knife retracting into the goo, with the handle brushing your palm.
>So close, but the goop doesn’t let you close your fingers around the handle.
>You can feel the goop on your hands shift into razor claws.
>The only one presence getting closer, as if to meet your charge, is much smaller than any hero. It’s tired and near fainting...
>And it’s bursting with a feeling of suicidal confidence.

>>27838924
---
>Þ The knife ‘feels’ the ooze’s interference, but doesn’t react.
>Þ The fog is boiling in the fever and is ever easier to remove.
>Þ The knife keeps working its labor, cutting carefully and letting the memories settle without overloading its master’s mind.
>Þ The ooze’s method of savagely ravaging the fog is of no concern to the knife.
>Þ After all, it is an inanimate object and even the mightiest of magical relics knows to not meddle in the affairs of sorcerers.

>Þ Instead, it does what it can do, and once again calls to the heavens for its brethren.
---

>>27838924
>>27838944

>That feeling kickstarts something in you. Another memory.

>No. A flurry of memories.
>Like a video sped up to hellish (and seizure inducing) speeds of over x10000 you see what may very well have been either over a thousand years of live or a rather extensive YouTube collage. It felt remarkably like a brain freeze, really.

>Your mind is a mess, and you are starting to doubt where and who you are.
>Stupid right?
>You are Anon! The orphan adopted by a kind man, with an amazingly bad luck at parties.
>You are fifteen years old, you had a friend in Jonathan at the Moose House for Wayward Children after he woke up.

>Yet the new memories are too real for you to ignore.
>And they provide such a sweet escape fantasy…
>How great would it be to have the power to save yourself.
>Friends to stand beside you.
>Maybe is the lucidity of the memories, or maybe just a fever dream, but you really would like to have friends at your side right now.

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>>27838854
I'll be watching you sleep

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This update is put on hold in favor of me doing what I ought to do the remaining 5% of the time I'm not complaining about rewritting/posting.

Messing with keaton.

Sleep snug, slut.

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>>27838960

Try to guess before opening the image.
---

>Φ The ooze knows not.
>Þ The knife acknowledges it, but can do little about it.

>The all-seeing had been fooled, and Dómrgandr’s wielder and Harthald’s wearer snuck through the Rainbow Bridge.

>Help was on it’s way, being chased by the Crusher wielder, but on it’s way.

---

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>>27838960
>>27839015

---
>Through the hellscape that your senses show, you feel Spider-Woman coming in, fast.
>Your run towards the window is stopped abruptly.
>But why?
>Spider-Woman isn’t here yet.
>Someone else?

>It takes a lot out of you to focus enough to recognize who it is, but you have more trouble BELIEVING who it is.

>It’s Flash Sentry limping towards you, feeling both confident and tired.
>You aren’t used to swearing, but GOD FUCKING DAMN IT IS THIS RETARD TRYING TO GET HIMSELF KILLED?!

>Suicidal confidence.
>Not suicidal OVERconfidence.
>He knows how fucking stupid he is being and has embraced it fully.

>He knows he is trying to be an hero.
>Why though?
>...The baton.
>This thing recoiled violently in the bathroom when he poked it with it!
>For a brief moment you let yourself hope that he can make it.

>You don’t meet in the middle of the room, but almost where he started, both of you roaring.

>Sadly, you are way faster and stronger than Flash is right now.
>He can barely stand, and you have to assume his swings are similarly slow.
>But the ooze learnt from the shock on the bathroom.
>It avoided the baton effortlessly.
>You feel you arm perform a raking motion at chest height and your hope dies.
>He stands no more.
>You can feel the blood dripping from ‘your’ digits.
>You roar.
---

>>27839130
I'll stop here today.

I'd ask for comments and stuff, but I'm tired. Can I have (you)s'

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Reminder that this man has done nothing wrong

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>>27839130
I'm gonna be honest here.
I think Flash abuse is wrong

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>>27839590
>>27839612
And I called you my friends...

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>>27839707
Well they aren't entirely wrong. I mean Flash did nothing wrong, just the writers for creating him without any real emotion,or a purpose other than to be a "popular boy" for Sunset to date for power, then for Twilight to get a crush on. (Cause, you know, high school.)

>>27839740
He never apologized to Twilight for being an asshole in Rainbow Rocks and hugs her like he did nothing wrong.

>>27839753
Oh yeah, I forgot about that.

>>27839740
>>27839753
To tell the truth, I'm more indifferent towards him.
Don't like but don't hate him in a sense.

>>27840258
Same, I just forget about him half the time.

>>27840259
This is why I'm using him in that Venom part I'm adding onto the pastebin. And It's not bashing.

But yeah that happens

>>27835672
>Washington DC, the Triskelion – Wonderbolts HQ
>Be Spitfire.
>As soon as the meeting with the World Security Council was over you almost slump down and sigh.
>...
>They mean well.
>You know they do.
>But why is it that every time you talk to them you want to strangle at least one of them.
>You also understand that allowing Princess Twilight Sparkle and her envoy from another dimension to come to Earth is a pretty big deal.
>One of the first alien races with which you could have lasting contact with is friendly.
>Showing oneself cautious is one thing, but denying them to make proper contact would be plain stupid.
>Earths people need to evolve.
>So far whenever an advanced civilization met a more primitive one, the primitive one got eradicated or enslaved.
>When every Equestrian citizen has at least some form of magic, a form of energy you still barely know anything about, you know which civilization was the more primitive one.
>You absolutely need to be on Equestrias good side.
>But you also know that there are others out there, so having Equestria as an ally would prove invaluable if one of those decided Earth looks like a place to set up shop.
>The few aliens who have come to Earth had always been incredibly powerful, even a single one or small group had been immensely difficult to handle.
>And if they had been friendly they had clearly been uninterested in helping Earth, or were deliberately neutral.
>You take the elevator down far underground where the portals energy could not be measured from orbit anymore.
>After it’s source, a brightly glowing cube, had been found in Canterlot it was brought here where it could be contained.
>None of your scientists know how to use it yet, but three years ago Princess Twilight Sparkle assured you she would work on stopping the portal from opening.
>Back then you had known that Sunset Shimmer was in possession of some sort of transmitter to call her friend.

>>27840966
>But you had been happy to keep everything related to alternate dimensions a secret from pretty much anyone, even within the Wonderbolts.
>True to her word, the Princess somehow stopped the portal from opening regularly.
>She was even able to open it at will, and, after just a day of knowing, she had modified the portal.
>Originally it had changed any traveler to fit the appearance of the new dimension, and taken their magic as well.
>Which explains why Sunset Shimmer, originally a unicorn (don’t ask) with magical capabilities was now human without any.
>Well, sort of...
>After an incident with an artifact called the Element of Magic, she, and five others, now have some ‘low tier’ magic which they can combine and supercharge to one of the most powerful magics even Equestria knew.
>But by themselves they were rather weak.
>What neither you nor Princess Twilight knew was why the portal has had this properties in the first place.
>It would have been much easier to make one which simply transports a person.
>It can only mean someone deliberately used it to hide among the people of Earth...
>Your head hits the glass wall of the elevator.
>You barely even took in the sight of the helicarrier dock.
>You’re just tired..
>Taking out your phone showed you that you had been awake for roughly 35 hours now.
>No matter what you are, you still need sleep.
>Especially if you have this much on your mind.
>You go through your recent calls and find Treehugger.
>You’re not really in the mood to talk right now, she will have all kinds of ideas about the boy.
>Anon West.
>...
>You can’t assure a happy end for everyone.
>When the elevator goes down even further you put a text message on your private server to eventually reach your old friend.
“1878.”
>She’ll know what you mean.
>Your forehead leaves the glass pane and you take out a handkerchief to wipe away the imprint of your sweat.
>You’ve got to go freshen up in the bathroom before meeting royalty...

>>27839612
>>27839590

About what happened to him in my story...

It is kind of abuse now that I think about it, but it had reason to happen. It's even mostly writen already, but I had to cut my posting short due to sleepiness.

You all know I hate cliffhangers.

>>27840970
>>You can’t assure a happy end for everyone.
Oh dear...
Also, good morning!

>>27839612
I don't hate him. I just don't care about him.

>>27841009

Dropped the trip, thats me.

>>27841014
Is it really?

>>27841312
You wound me, Mr. keaton.
But of course is me!
I forgot to trip up my phone.

>>27841342
I have to wound someone. Can't take all this keaton abuse lying down!

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>>27841372
I... Bwaah?!

How the tide has turned!

>>27841420
Get bullied, nerd!
I'll hold your hand while I shove you!

>>27841731
Give into your hate.

Wait, wrong thread to say this in.

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>>27841731
Do you feel in charge?

>>27841009
>it had a reason
What reason do you have for gutting young Flash?

>>27842229
...Stuff.

>>27842517
He was a brave young man who had his whole life ahead of him
And you killed him...

>>27842565
Should i xhange my idea rhen?

>>27842625
So you're also planning on having venom murder-fy him? Shame on you