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Spider-Shim and her Amazing Friends! Issue #18

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Blackest Night edition
>Previously on Buzz Lightyear
>>27536440
>Thread theme music
http://youtu.be/HG7Y33-526Q

Come one, come all, to the superhero thread, mainly starring Sunset Shimmer as the hiptacular Spider-Woman. Please, dump any and mlp superhero green, art, and discussions here.
As a wise man once said: Excelsior!
>Pastebin list
Voidborn - http://pastebin.com/VRcwJQfG
untitled 7 - http://pastebin.com/P4Mawhsw
treppahcs - http://pastebin.com/ps2Ts8J1
superkeaton - http://pastebin.com/u/superkeaton
Beans - http://pastebin.com/yNaJFuz0
Red - http://pastebin.com/hTFVft7x (currently in a coma)
Shocker Anon - http://pastebin.com/CYSHBCi1
Roommate Anon (literally dead, but I can't be bothered to remove his name)
FemAnon - http://pastebin.com/xkSzdr5V (literally dead as well)
3 Suns - http://pastebin.com/u/3Suns
The Rabble - http://pastebin.com/7awBpgv8
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Gotta love that new thread smell.
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>>27584387
>You will never hold her hand
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Is anybody even reading Bean's story anymore? No offense.
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>>27584438
When he can be bothered to update, yes
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>>27584438
I am. I read all the green.
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>>27584434
>you will never hold her metal tentacles
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>>27584438
I think it's only Spider-Bloke at this point, and maybe a few others. Beans is kind of our Brendan Fraser.
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>>27584434
>She will never be surprised and shoot her web causing your hands to stick to each other.
What happens next?
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>>27584453
Same.
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>>27584457
I prefer to think of him as our Nicolas Cage
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>>27584457
The only greens I'm not reading are the newest ones, but that's because I've been gone for the past week.
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>>27584488
Dubs confirm, Uncle Beans is now Nicolas Beans.
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>>27584438
No, not really. Why, did people read it at one time?
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All right everyone, before we get started...
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>>27584504
I remember way back when we found out Bean's real name was Nick because of that picture of the autographed poster he took of the green ranger.

POTTERY
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>>27584438
....is it bad if I say no?
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>>27584438
>>27584448
>>27584453
>>27584457
>>27584484
>>27584488
>>27584493
>>27584504
>>27584511
>>27584525
>>27584536
I think we should settle this before Beans gets here...

http://www.strawpoll.me/10419432
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>>27584573
what is this? survivor?
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>>27584587
No, but this is: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=btPJPFnesV4
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>>27584587
Apparently.
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>>27584573
...Really, guys?
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>>27584686
...Its no what it looks like?
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>>27584686
If it's any consolation, ~80% of those that have taken the poll think you are relevant still.
If not I give you hips as tribute for our transgression.
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>>27584686
This surs business.
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>>27584387
>TFW you will never cuddlefuck qt superhero spider gf.
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>>27584686
Dude it's a prank, it's a prank!
There's a camera right there!
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>>27584785
>you will never cuddle Spiderwoman after a long night on patrol
>you will never help her wash her hair and back
>you will never hold hands
feels bad man.
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>>27584824
>You will never help Sunset take off her suit and see it peel off her sweaty skin sheen to the moonlight.
>She will never softy push you towards the couch and crawl on top of you.
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>>27584686
I didn't vote.

Was busy playing Hearthstone.
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>>27584438
I actually read his and all greens. Granted his was also what got me involved to begin with. I like each of them for different reasons.
That aside, i have an art. I actually thought Mania's look would be harder. Hope you enjoy you old so-and-sos
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>>27585085
I-I want to touch it...

dem hips and dat slight camel toe
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>>27585085
saving that.
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>>27585085
More fapworthy than your naked superhero pictures.
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>>27585179
>>27585221
Thanks. I'm unsure if she would bite given the chance.
>>27585773
Ouch. Makes sense though... Granted the Sinister six were started and finished in one day. Maybe I will finally get it down right when i go for sunnybunny lewd
Anywho, got another request so far, then i think i will try for the spider hips proper
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>>27585179
>wanting to touch something with no hooves in a sexual manner.
KYS
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>>27584387
>woke up
>didn't realize it was time for a new thread
>tried to bump the old thread
fucking kill me
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>>27586139
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>>27586139
Fluttershy with messy hair got me diamond
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>>27586321
Wow you dumbass.
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>>27585085
Thanks!
>>27586139
Dude, we spent 1/8 of the last thread discussing how do symbiotes feel like. Even if there is no handholding we should touch her. For science.
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>>27585085
YES
YEEEEEEEEES
YES YES YES YES YES!
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>>27586762
Yup, now we have Indigo Zap as Mania. Gotta say, i like the goggles hanging around her neck
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>>27577120
>Be Anon.
>You’re standing alone in a drug store in the hair-care aisle.
>You feign interest in the instructions on the back of Sunsets shampoo.
>Lather, rinse, repeat.
>Forever.
>Just lather, rinse, repeat, until the end of time.
>You contemplate dropping them and hope they burst open, making a mess.
>You’d easily get away with it too, considering your cast.
>But you don’t want to make the life of someone else miserable.
>You end up buying them as time got too scarce as to make it back to the campus in time for class.
>Needless to say, your healing factor can’t mend the pain you feel right now.
>Sunset hasn’t come back.
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YES, I was the first to defile the thread with my green

>>27585085
too much mania, too little... wait who is it again?

>>27584573
have been meaning to catch up again, but he did manage to land the lowest on my priority list
What i take away from that poll is how many people actually read stuff here, not just the greens but the meta as well
more importantly to me: Am I still relevant after my week long absence?
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>>27587310
I feel legit pity for anon. Noone should have their first kiss end like that. None the less keep up the good work untitled 7
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>>27587328
Indigo Zap is Mania in that pic Untitled
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>>27587342
that was the joke, she's kinda unrecognizable
which is probably the purpose of having a symbiote, but... ya know
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>>27587382
True, still like the pic though
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>>27587332
>Lather, rinse, repeat
wash awaythe pain
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>>27587523
CRAWLING
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>>27587310
Poor guy...
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>>27587538
THROUGH THE NIGHT, FACING EVIL IN HIS MIGHT
HE'S A HERO IN OUR EYES, SEE THE HEADLIGHTS EVERY TIME
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>>27587382
Yeah sorry. Figured people wanted higher emphasis on mania vice indigo. Also she doesn't have many noteworthy features aside from hair.
Anyways gonna try to catch up on my remaining art. I got about a week till i fly out to persian gulf for a few months. So my updates will trickle down after that until i get back.
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>>27588252
it's not like anything was wrong with the picture
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>>27587310
>Be Sunset Shimmer.
>You walk back into college.
>And while you already having missed half the session you enter anyway.
>You barely recognize the professors voice telling you that you wouldn’t come far in life without some punctuality.
>No, your eyes were fixed on Anon.
>He’s sitting further in the back and had three bottles of shampoo standing on the place besides him.
>He doesn’t even look up as you silently sit yourself next to him and unpack your things.
>You had ditched him.
>Ditched him for absolutely no reason.
>If anything, you had made every problem in your life worse.
>Your relationship with Anon, with the Wonderbolts, and your educational career.
>You need to talk to someone, but now even Twilight falls away because she’s a fucking Wonderbolt herself!
*sob*
>You feel like crying but manage to hold yourself back.
>“Sunset?”
>He looks at you somewhat surprised.
>“W-What’s the matter?”
>Just all of it.
“N-Nothing, I-I’m fine.”
>He frowns.
>“Now if that wasn’t the least convincing ‘nothing’ I’ve ever heard.”
“I know... I know.”
>He doesn’t say anything to that, but his expression softens.
>It still doesn’t banish the afterimage of his profile twisted in a stern expression.
>You had hurt him.
>You hadn’t come back after you ran away from him
>Why do you keep ruining the things you have?
>Can you not, for once, make a decision you won’t regret?
>“Hey...”
>Anon scoots closer and puts his arms around you.
>You cower down and rest your forehead on his shoulder, your arms clutched together before your chest to make yourself as small as possible.
>“Shh...”
>Why does he have to be so understanding and act so good to you?
“I’m so sorry...”
>You retain control over your tear ducts.
>“You still hurt me.”
>That makes you flinch.
“I know... and I’m so sorry, I-”
>“There’s something else you’re going through. I understand.”
“T-thank you.”
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>>27588338
>“Doesn’t mean you didn’t hurt me.”
>You flinch again.
“I know, I know...”
>You retreat a bit and look up to him.
“And I’m sorry.”
>You look him in the eyes and right yourself up to match his level again.
>And before you knew it you leaned in and placed your lips on him.
>For a moment nothing happened, and this moment almost shattered your heart, were it not for the next as he begins to move his head a little and began to kiss you.
>You immediately returned the kiss you had initiated yourself.
>While feeling his soft lips on yours and his warm hand on your back you felt light again.
>As had a weight been lifted from your chest.
>You move your hands around him as well and-
>“Wooho!”
>You hear a cheer from behind you and someone else whistling a catcall to the both of you.
>Anon breaks the kiss and glares back, as do you.
>Realization set in again that you acted so shamelessly in front of others. People whom you know.
>“Miss Shimmer, you interrupted my class once already, and now you do it again. I have already marked you as absent when class started, so if you’d kindly behave like that.”
>The professor points at the door again.
>You gulp, but as you see Anon too beginning to pack his things you smile.
>As you two leave the class the professor spoke at you again.
>“That wasn’t meant for you, Mr. West.”
>“I know.”
>Anon tells the Professor, then takes you by your hand and pulls you out the lecture room.
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>>27588345
>>Anon tells the Professor, then takes you by your hand and pulls you out the lecture room.
I think you can get arrested for such a lewd public display of affection.
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>>27588345
Man, fuck whatever I write, you do romance the best, 7.
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>>27588447
something about taking someone by their hand and pulling them along, for them to cutely follow you makes me grow a big rubbery one.

>>27588454
thanks, that means a lot to me
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>>27588512
Most writefriends here do rom-com or cute or lewd romace. Yours is pure. Its what you would expect of a romance novel.
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>>27588571
Yeah, a romance novel, but with more hydra.
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>>27588571
He’s got a point. Hell I'm making up shit in mine
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for all writefags:
I'm making a reference sheet https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1VzzWeFvQ_ebwLH4d93ZnJclRreaTLaXEAQTzWSRI0Ao/edit#gid=0
editable by anyone for now, later writefriends get permission only

Useful? Yes? No? I'm bored, I don't care.


>>27588571
>>27588632
I kinda want to tell a story, but get sidetracked wanting to do their relationship justice

>>27588582
hail hydra
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>>27588673
It seems useful but I'll put my stuff in later
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>>27588673
I'm a fucking spastic who can't into Google Sheets
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>>27588715
you typo has been seen

>>27588795
it be k
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>>27588856
I know. Typing on a phone is a pain sometimes
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>>27588915
I typo'd pointing out you typo'd
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so, have the scales of anons to blankfags tipped?
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>>27589135
8 active writers, 18 people in last vote ( >>27584573 )
ehhh...
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So, you fuckers never gave me an answer to my question
Rate the writers?
Likes, dislikes of each?
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>>27584387
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>>27589557
Not that i'm asshurt over this but..how the fuck did this ship even started?
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>>27589636
Fanfiction were Twilight summoned Peter to equestria to fight Discord who tried to team up with the Green Goblin i believe.
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>>27589636
A bad crossover fanfiction and one extremely dedicated sperg with too much money to spend.
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>>27589472
most of them good
some of them not as good but still good
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>>27589748
I only liked one or two pics that came from it, but they're the symbiote Luna pics
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>>27578345
>the files are spread out across the table as you wake up the next day
>all the previous day and night you were reading everything you could
>every file, every page, every side note and scribble.
>most of it you couldn't understand, and what bits you could just seemed to be out of place or mixed up.
"Item DDC95..."
>picking up the cap from on the desk you look at the numbers and digits. As if they would just suddenly make sense
>but of course the don't.
"what time is it anyway?"
>you pull your phone out of your pocket and see you have a few missed calls
>most of them from your mother and various family members who you don't really know and only met after your father died.
>they can wait.
>but there is a missed call on your phone from a number you don't recognize
>you open the message and listen in
>"before you get any ideas, this phone has been made nearly untraceable, and will be destroyed immediately after this call has been made."
>great way to start a conversation
>"Your father has been working for us for a while now, and his project is long over due."
>your eyes glance over to the broken vial on the floor
>"what it does shouldn't concern you, but its very valuable to us. If you don't want another 'Drug Deal' to occur, you WILL find what he has completed and bring it to us."
>well that is more or less-
>"or alternatively..."

>you are Sunset Shimmer
>and as the name Sunset would imply, you hate mornings.
>as the combined assault of the rays of sunshine and the sound of your alarm clock beckon you awake from your slumber
>grudgingly you remove the blankets from your body and make your way to the bathroom and peer into the mirror
>your hair is scraggly and unkempt from a restless sleep and your eyes are slightly bloodshot
"I am still a hero... right?"
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>>27590099
>you failed to save two people in a row now, possibly even more that you just didn't know about.
>you force a smile just to see one in your reflection
"Yeah, of course I am. I cant save everyone, but I'm doing my best. That's what matters."
>removing your shirt and underwear in the laziest way possible you reach over and turn on the shower and set a reasonable temperature
>even though mornings suck, this is always your favorite part of the day.
>the nice, calm, relaxing feel of warm water running down your hair and skin is simply bliss
>stepping inside you are greeted by that exact feeling
>for a minute you stand there letting the water run down your body to the bottom of the shower before you reach for the shampoo
>stepping out of the shower you feel rejuvenated and ready for the day
>taking a towel you give your legs a quick wipe down
>then the same for the rest of your body before drying your hair and getting dressed
>you take your spider-suit and neatly fold it up to hide it easily in the bottom of your bag and set off to school
"Hope Anon is doing a bit better..."

>the bell rings at the start of first period and you take your seat at the desk next to Sunset
>you have a lot to think about.
>Harshwhinny begins class with attendance then without missing a beat starts to write notes on the chalkboard on today's topic
>nobody wastes time and notes are being copied as quickly as they can be without taking the time to really understand them
>Harshwhinny is known for being very efficient with class time and slowing down when its available on the board is a waste of time to her
>the only one who ever seems to be happy about the pacing of the class is Twilight since she can 'learn more and faster'
>you look over to her and see a smile on her face as she easily keeps pace while processing everything on the board
>it must be nice to be that smart-
>you look back to the chalkboard and somehow the notes start to make sense
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>>27590114
>the words leaving Ms Harshwhinnys lips only aid in your understanding
>why the sudden change?
>wait-
"Ms Hrashwhinny!"
>"If you have questions you can ask after the notes are finished. Please follow along until then"
"Its not that, you have made a mistake on the notes."
>the chalk in her hands stop and the classes eyes are all on you now.
>"I'm Sorry? Where do you believe I made the mistake Anonymous?"
"it just, yesterday we learned that output, or national income, can be described by the equation Y = C + I + G + NX where Y is output, C is consumption spending, I is investment spending, G is government spending, and NX is net exports."
>of course the only people who actually understand you are Twilight and Harshwhinny but you continue on anyway
"and on the notes here you say that the equation to represent taxes is Y equals C(Y - I) plus T plus G plus NX..."
>Harshwhinny turns to look at he board
"and, well.. it should be Y equals C multiplied by the product of Y minus T then adding I plus G plus NX."
>"ah, I see, thank you for bringing that to my attention Anonymous."
>she picks up an eraser and starts to correct the mistake and those who made it that far in the notes do the same

>you are Twilight Sparkle
>He... He was right.
>you were about to say the same thing but the fact that anonymous knew AND figured it out just as you did is crazy.
>its not that Anonymous isn't smart or anything like that, but you never thought he was as smart as you are.
>and from the look on his face right now, he didn't think he was either
>in fact, he has the same expression on his face as everyone else in the class.
>Confusion
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>>27590126
>Ho-Lee Shit
>what just came out of your mouth?
>you look down at your notes then back at the board
>you don't understand any of this! How did you manage to notice AND correct a incorrect equation?
>It doesn't make any sense, the only thing you thought of before somehow correcting a mistake was how smart Twilight was.
>looking over your shoulder you catch a glimpse of Twilight smiling and giving you a thumbs up
>she had to have noticed it if you did
>alright, time for a little experiment then.
>you repeat what you did before, and suddenly the board couldn't be simpler
>well, it could, but you understand it all the same
>quickly you scramble to take notes and catch up with Harshwhinny, making sure to put the notes in the simplest terms possible that you might understand them later
>time flies by and eventually the bell rings just as Harshwhinny sets down the chalk
>a few students take a few extra seconds to finish the notes while Twilight smiles and heads off to her next class with a few of her friends
>but you just stand there as the knowledge you possessed while taking the notes slip away leaving you with just what you wrote down on the page
>You are starting to get and idea about Item DDC95 and what it does.
>or rather... what YOU can do.

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end post.

How am I doin so far? anything I could improve on?
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>>27590132
As fair as I can tell you are doing good, but is strange to see you go so fast.

It's not too fast, but your previous pacing was relatively slow.
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>>27590212
yeah, I am going a bit faster than my usual speed but im trying to go at a nice middle ground since ive had people get turned off at it going too slow in previous works.

Not that I mind going slow, I just wanted things to pick up a bit so readers don't get bored
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>>27590212
but if people prefer the pace I had before I can always go back to that.
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>You are Sunset Shimmer
>Also known as the Spider
>And you've just woken up in your bed
>You feel great
>Refreshed
>Invigorated
>It's like you've been sleeping for 2 month
>It's strange how you can feel this good after a yesterday's rhinoceros incident
>You have to track him down
>You also have to check in with the commissioner
>What was stollen and what were the damages
>You jump out of bed and step in you costume
>Or at least a few red and black rags
>You pick it up
>It's beyond repair
>You should make yourself a new one
>Buy new yoga pants and a red sweater
>Or maybe you should try something else
>You remember you had a strange dream
>You were wearing a black jacket with a white spider on it
>A change of wardrobe might not be a bad idea
>You sit on your desk and take out some paper and a pen
>You make a quick scetch of a spider
>More angular than your normal one
>This will be your new symbol
>Black and white
>Stealthier
>A bit more menacing
>To scare the criminals
>Your alarm rings
>Good God!
>Has it always been this loud?
>You turn it off
>You take a quick shower, get dressed and leave for school
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>>27584415
a bullshit.
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>>27590427
>As you walk towards the school entrance, you see a familiar face
>It's that guy
>The one that gave his ticket
>...that he was going to scalp
>Norman
>When he sees you, he runs towards you
>"Good morning!"
"Morning"
>You walk past him, but he starts following you
>"Did you see what happened at the expo yesterday? I heard a rhino guy destroyed the whole place"
"Yeah, that's pretty much it"
>"I heard he was 20 feet tall and went trhough the walls like it was nothing"
"Well, he was shorter than 20 feet..."
>"And the Spider was there, and just ran over her"
"It wasn't like that..."
>"Like it was nothing!"
>You are going to slug him
>"Hey guys! Come to my concert tomorrow!"
>A young girl hands you and Norman flyers
>You take a flyer
>"Best beats you'll hear in this god forsaken town!"
>She walks away, promoting herself to the other students
>You look at the flyer
>DJ PoN3
>Is the 3 pronounced as an E or as three?
>You never could get the hang of those creative nick names
>You look at Norman
>He seems fixated on the girl
"Why don't you ask her out?"
>"Huh? Whats?!"
>He was completly lost in his day dream
"Why don't you ask her out? You like her, don't you?"
>"I...um...it's not like that"
>You really hit him bellow the belt this time
>"I can't just ask her out. It's not that simple..."
"Yeah, sure."
>You walk off
>Norman is hesitant for a second, but decides to follow you
>Again
>"How should I ask her?"
"Find common subjects to talk about. Find out what kind of music she plays and listens to. Read up on it. Go to her concert to show interest. After she's done congratulate her, make comparisons between her and some big names from the genre. Ask her what inspires her. Show her that she can rely on you and there you go."
>"I...what? H-how can you be so sure?"
"I read a lot of psychology books."
>"Part of your curriculum?"
"No, just for practical use."
>"Will you be going into business?"
"No. Criminology."
>"I...what?"
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>>27590439
>You just can't seem to shake Norman off
>Maybe you shouldn't have given him ideas on how to woo girls
>Or mention your interests in criminal anthropology
>You should slug him
>SWEET HOLLY JESUS!
>Your spider-sense is tingling
>But why?
You look through the window on the second floor
>You see police cars
>You have to do something
>You look around
>There's a fire alarm right next to you
"Norman! What's that?"
>You point to something imaginary behind him
>As he turns away from you, you pull the fire alarm
>Oh GOD! It's so loud!
>A panic envelopes every student in the building and they run off screaming
>You run in the opposite direction and get to the stairs that go directly to the roof top
>But on the roof, you are hit with a bit of a problem
>You don't have a costume
>You don't even have a mask
>You should have gone shopping today
>You rummage in your bag and try to find something
>Anything could work
>Nothing
>Great
>It would have been nice to have that suit from earlier
>You imagine it for a brief moment
>And
>You feel something
>Something crawling on you
>You look at your hands
>They are being covered in a black goo
>Oh shit!
>You try to pull it off, but with no avail
>You can feel it covering your entire body
>You feel restricted
>You can't breathe
>You try to rip it apart from your chest
>It you manage to do it
>But another layer covers the one you broke
>A big white spider appears on your chest
>The two pieces in your hands settle down
>You realize what this is
>It's the costume from your dream
>Or maybe it wasn't a dream
>Where did this thing come from?
>At this point you don't have much time
>You jump off from the building and web yourself in the direction of the sirens
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Hey guys
It's been a while, hasn't it?
Free time is scarce these days
Finally managed to sit down and write something
Alas, it isn't much, but I'll be trying to keep it up
I hope I'm not an old hat by now

Anyway, how's the drama coming along here? Anything new?
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>>27590481
Well you're a sight for sore eyes. Made me doublecheck your trip.

No drama, we're all pretty happy to see fresh new stories from new writefags.

And, of course, mamo's art helps.
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>>27590494
Glad to hear I'm still welcome here
Recommend me a reading order for the newer fellows. I need to catch up on everything here
Also
Dramaless Spider-shim is a madman's wonderland
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>>27590481
Glad to see you back and writing again
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>>27590557
I can't really give you a list of best to worst, that feels like doing a disservice to our numerous contributors

Also, editing while sleepy? Fucking sucks.
Hopefully I'll have Issue #8 out the door tomorrow.
But I promise nothing and may deliver less.
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>>27590829
Not from best to worst. Just a quick stylistic orientation. Comedy, drama, adventure, romance, dry wit, slapstick. That kind of thing
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>>27590884
Oh, okay, that I can do.
Beans is Action/Comedy/Smut
Treps is Action/Romance/Drama
Same for untitled 7, with a bit of Mystery
Rabble is Drama/Mystery
Void is Action/Lewds
3 Suns is Action/Drama? It's short so it's hard to tell
And last and least, mine is Romance/Comedy/Drama to come.
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>>27590983
drama to come, fear not!... when I actually build up the energy to write
>when you're feeling kinda burnt out in terms of writing, but really really want to keep going
it's a strange war inside my mind.
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>>27590983
That is surprisingly accurate on my green
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>>27591004
I know that feeling very well... it gets weird when the story keeps going in your mind but you just don't want to type it out.
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>>27591021
That's pretty much exactly it, I can picture everything clearly, but sitting my ass down and writing it is hard somehow.
I dun get it, why is my brain confusing itself.
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You're all a bunch of sluts and I love you
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>>27572720
>Be Anon.
>You just revealed who you were and it's taking all of your willpower not to burst out laughing.
>The looks on all their faces are priceless.
>You wish you could take a picture.
>You walk over to Sunset and wave your hand in front of her face.
“Hello. Earth to Sunny, can you hear me?”
>She comes to as she bats your hand away and looks at you.
> “How… What...You…..Fight... Glowing?”
>You chuckle at her cute yet confused look.
“Take a deep breathe, Sunny. Then ask a question.”
>Sunny and the rest of the girls follow your suggestion as they take a deep breathe and then release it.
> “Why’re you the Angel and how did you get these powers?”
“You just had to ask that first huh. Ok long story short i was born with these powers and I saved that one girl and then everyone was calling me The Angel.”
>You sigh and run your hand through your hair as you tell them a half truth.
>There’s no way you'll tell them you're Spectrum at the moment.
“Now it’s my turn. Were you even gonna tell me about this?”
>The girls look away as some either scratch their heads or try to look innocent.
> “Well i was gonna say something sooner or later…..Maybe. But I didn’t want to keep this a secret, it’s just...hard to...”
>Sunset looks a bit guilty as she said that.
“Whatever, I guess you had a good reason to keep it a secret.”
>They look surprised at your answer.
> “Y-You’re ok with that?”
>Applejack steps forward and beside Sunset.
> “Wait yer just gonna accept it? Just like that?”
“Don’t get me wrong, I’m a bit angry that you kept this secret from me, your boyfriend and friend.”
>Sunset looks down a bit.
“But I didn’t say anything about mine so I can’t say anything without sounding like a hypocrite.”
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>>27591601
>You begin to walk towards the edge of the building.
“Anyways I’m gonna get going, so see ya at school.”
> “But darling, we have so many questions.”
> “Yeah, like where you learned to kick ass?”
> “How do your powers work?”
> “Should we have a party for our new hero buddy?”
>You lightly laugh while shaking your head at their antics.
“I'll answer the questions later. Right now I'm tired and want to sleep.”
>You see the girls look at each other and then nod as Twilight looked at you.
> “Fine, but do you mind waiting for us after school tomorrow?”
“Sure, I'll answer your questions tomorrow.”
>The girls all say their goodbyes as they all leave using their powers.
>You were about to leave when you felt a hand on your shoulder, as you turn to see Sunset next to you.
“You need something Sunny?”
>She doesn’t say anything as she looks at the ground.
>You grew a bit concerned when you saw her eyes grew a bit moist.
> “Do you mind if I stay with you tonight?”
>You were about to say tomorrow but your girlfriend’s sad eyes pleaded with you to say yes.
“Sure, your place or mine?”
> “Let’s go to your place.”
>She smiles a little more as she puts her mask back on.
> “So I'll meet you there.”
>You wrap your arm around her shoulder as you put your other arm under her knees and pick her up.
> “Eehh.”
“I've got a better idea, Sunny.”
>You focused on creating your angel armor as jumped into the sky as Sunset puts her arms around your shoulders.
> “What’re you doing?”
“Giving you a break for one thing and letting you fly in style.”
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>>27591622
>Something flies over your head and into your arms.
>Looking at it closely, you could faintly tell it was a bodysuit, or more precisely Sunset’s spider suit.
>Turning around you see Sunset in a sports bra and panties as she stretched while looking at you slyly.
> “What? You saw that picture I sent you, this shouldn’t be any different.”
>You look away as you toss a shirt at her which she throws back at you.
“What the hell, Sunny? I don’t want my parents to see you like this. They’ll joke about this forever.
> “Don’t care. I’m to tired to change and I want to sleep.”
“Fine, I’ll be in the living room, sleeping if you need me.”
>You begin to walk towards your door when something grabs your arm and pulls you away from the door.
>You land on your bed as Sunset wraps her arms around you.
>You could feel her toned legs gently wrap around your as her breasts were pressed against your chest.
“What the hell Sunny? I was gonna-”
>She puts a finger to your lips, signaling you to be quiet.
> “This is your room and you’re gonna sleep in here.”
“Then where will you sleep.”
> “Here with you. Goodnight Anon.”
>She gently kisses your lips before letting her head hit your pillow and closed her eyes.
>You just give up at this point and pull her closer to you as you give her a small kiss to her forehead.
“Goodnight Sunny and sweet dreams.”
>You soon join her in dream land.
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>>27591649
Well here's my update. Not the best but all I got for now.
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>>27591590
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>>27591668
I like it, but the break between posts made me think of the angel carring an almost naked Sunset soaring over the city with the spidey suit falling behind them. Romantic but strange for the witnesses.
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>>27591711
Yeah, gonna go through them later and maybe add or edit a bit of this.
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>>27591590
I'm not a slut I just write smut!
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>>27591747
I love rhymes!
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>>27584387
I wasn't here when this became a thing, so I have one question: why?
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>>27591895
It's ShockerAnon's fault.
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>>27591895
For fun.
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>>27591895
Because it was interesting?

Also did we lose a lot of threads?
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>>27591895
It's an easy place for aspiring writefags to enter and begin their quest to become legendary greenwriters.
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>>27593021
Now if only we could wrangle in some more drawfags. Maybe take some pressure off Mamoru.
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Page 8? nah. heres a short green.

>"give us the purse lady!"
>"yeah we promise we wont hurt you too much"
>you turn to look down a dimly lit alleyway as a group of thugs are mugging a woman and her husband
>"here take it! just let us go!"
>the thug takes the purse and counts the money inside
>"what the hell? only fifty bucks? what kind of woman only has fifty bucks in her purse?"
>one of the other thugs punch the man in the stomach making him kneel over out of breath
>"that's not going to pay the toll for OUR streets!"
>"looks like we are going to have to take payment another way..."
>a wave of anger surges up inside you as you set down your athletics bag and take out a damaged hockey mask
"These creeps picked the wrong town to do this shit."
>you put on the mask your magenta eyes peering through the openings towards the alleyway
>before you walk down you pick the bag back up and sling it over your shoulder
>your footsteps are drowned out by some of the thugs beating the kneeling man down while another struggles to pin the woman to the wall
"Hey assholes..."
>the two guys beating the man stop and look over to you while the one with the woman finally pins her before looking over to you
>reaching behind your back you pull a bat out of your bag
"Why don't you pick on someone your own size?"
>...
>"who the hell is this idiot?"
>"it isn't Halloween girly, take off the mask and go home, this doesn't concern you"
>your mask stares on at the goons while underneath you smile as two of them approach you
>one pulls a knife from his pocket while the other picks up a metal pipe next to a trash can
>"this is your last chance girly, get lost!"
"that's not going to happen"
>you reach to the bag again and pull out a baseball
>the two men give you a confused look as you toss it up and down twice before one takes another step
>he's the target
"Batter up."
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>>27593434
>you toss the ball and swing the bat striking the ball sending it flying at the goon
>it collides with his forehead and knocks him to the ground with a grunt
"strike one"
>the other charges at you and the one holding the woman drops her to join his friends
>"Now you're in for it!"
>he raises the pipe and swings it hard and fast at your skull
>you block it with the bat like some street version of a sword fight
>as the mugger starts to put too much force on his side you step back causing him to fall
>you raise your bat to bludgeon him but the bat is taken from you by his friend
>"Baseball seasons over kid!"
"if you say so"
>you pull the oldest move in the book
>you kick him square in his crotch making him keel over in pain as you pull out one of your hockey sticks along with a puck
>taking a few steps back you set the puck on the ground and watch as his eyes look up at you
>"don't you fuckin-"
>you raise the stick for the shot
"Three seconds left on the clock. Dash is alone at the net!"
>with all the force you can muster you shoot the puck right at his face
>it hits right in his teeth shattering almost all of them and knocking him out
"strike two!"
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>>27593439
>you now turn back to the mugger who is starting to get back up
>with the hockey stick you grab his leg and pull him back down to the ground
>"p-please! we'll give back the money! just stop!"
>you flip him over so he can face you as you stare at him through your mask
"should have thought of that before you threatened and beat those people back there..."
>you raise the stick and smash it into the mans face over and over until its broken and bleeding
>once you notice all three criminals are down for the count you smile
"and the games over folks, that's three outs!"
>you reach down and pick up your bat from the ground and put both it and the stick back into your bag after a quick wipe down with a sports towel
>as you walk off you hear the man and woman behind you speak
>"thank you, thank you so much."
>"who are you?"
>you look back at the two your hockey mask covered in splatters of blood
>reaching up you grab the mask and reveal your face with a smile
"the names Rainbow Dash."
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>>27584387
>TFW no QT 3.14 spider hero gf to cuddle at 1:30 am.
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>>27593492
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>>27593492
I am ashamed to admit it took me a long time to realise that qt3.14 is cutie pie.
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>>27593492
Don't let your dreams be dreams.
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>>27593497
>You will never wake up in a web cocoon directly above the bed with Sunset snuggling you.
>She will never say "Man I didn't know I could those positions even with my abilities."
>She will never make her signature Eggs and bacon.
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>>27593566
All the eggs?
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>>27593578
Yes all the eggs. The tables have turned.
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>>27591895
Because it needed to be done
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>>27590427
>it's like you've been sleeping for 2 months
(You)
http://youtu.be/MFYHMfF4oIY
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Guys I know that this is not Sunset related but I'm doing a essay about Roman society and I found this.
These are real.
>TFW when 4chan as existed for over two millennia.
http://www.pompeiana.org/Resources/Ancient/Graffiti%20from%20Pompeii.htm
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I love this thread!
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>>27593746
>mfw not even Rome's emperor could stop people from liking stuff he didn't
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>>27593746
>Epaphra, you are bald!
>Phileros is a eunuch!
I can't help but think that these two from the basilica are part of an argument.

4chan through the ages.

"You're bald!"
"At least I have a dick!"
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>>27588673
should I include Human Twilight being able to rip through the fabric of spacetime and create portals into other dimensions?
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>>27588345
>Be Twilight Sparkle of Earth dimension 812.
>You’ve come to enjoy flying.
>You get to see all the things out of a vastly new perspective.
>In training you have had your freedom, sure, but it had usually been over some grasslands.
>And while they were beautiful, you lacked the sense of proportion.
>But here, through the skyscrapers of New Yoke, you certainly have that.
>Misty Fly gave you a bit of a free pass to goof around with your techwear.
>She’s under the impression that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
>Especially with something akin to super powers.
>While they should come with the sense not to abuse them and use them only for good, you are allowed to use them for your own good too, if nobody else pays the price.
>She herself would love to ride some monster waves, but they would disrupt wildlife.
>Not to mention what they do if they reach the coast.
>Downside to your ‘powers’ is that you run on a battery.
>“Broad daylight robbery going on. Ready to make your first official appearance?”
“A robbery?”
>“I sounded to happy about that, didn’t I? Fly over to-”
>She gives you the address and the helmet opens you a navigational system.
“I’ll be right over.”
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>>27594472
>You enter the small convenient store.
>“-in the fucking bag or she gets it!”
>You just hear someone say before he suddenly shuts up because the door had a small bell behind it.
>The robber immediately spins around to take a look at you.
>He was holding a woman onto him and had a gun at her head.
>He himself was wearing a skimask.
>“What the-?”
>As he sees you he immediately pulled the gun to you.
>You take a more secure stance and try to speak with all the confidence you can muster.
“Release the hostage and put your gun on the floor. Surrender peacefully and a judge will let you get away with a small sentence. I’m Iron Mage of the Wonderbolts, and you’re under arrest.”
>You hear Misty over the earpiece.
>“Tell me you didn’t go in there alone.”
>It makes you flinch but you keep your attention on the gun.
>You’re crapping your pants right now.
>“What the fuck are you?”
>You are at gunpoint, that’s what you are.
>Maybe if you...
>... just pull the safety of his gun.
>“Wha-?”
>He’s not very articulate, and almost drops the gun as it lights up in the purple glow of the exit-point of the magical manipulation of the gun.
>A shot resounds through the store, and all you could think of was that gun.
>You need to... You need to disarm him.
>Your magic lashes out, not from the gauntlet through which the magic is supposed to be channeled, but from the pendant itself.
>A wide arc flew and spews unfocused magic around the store, trying to find the former exit-point of your magic.
>At the location in question the magic fulfills your wish of disarming the shooter in a way you’ve done before.
>Not your proudest moment...
>A tear is ripped into this universe and swallows the gun, the shooter, and his hostage before disappearing again.
>This all happened, before the the pain began to set in, before you go deaf from the ringing in your ears, and before your knees hit the floor.
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>>27594476
>Your shaking hand tries to reach out to the spot where the tear had been for the blink of an eye.
>But soon you topple over and had to support yourself on that outstretched arm.
>You cough blood as you look down to inspect your wound.
>You know you’re going into shock and probably not have many seconds of consciousness left.
>Feel... feel...
>Yes, you can’t feel blood spreading on your back as you do on your chest.
>The bullets still inside then.
>And figuring from the blood you coughed it penetrated your lung.
>What about your heart...?
>No...
>Wrong side.
>Good...
>Now as to decide. Fall down with the hole down or up.
>Bleed out, or have your lung filled with blood?
>You still have another lung.
>Let gravity help you.
>You let yourself fall on your shoulder, face-planting while you were at it.
>Then manage to roll around to lay on your back.
>You’re not gonna die here!
>You’re not gonna die.
>...
>Your vision goes black but you were still awake.
>Robbed of your hearing and sight, all you have left to focus on was the pain.
>Rest now.
>Please let me pass out...
>An eternity later your prayer was answered just as you felt someone press down on your bullet wound.
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considering how anon is green i have one question. How come there isnt a green about anon being the mask?
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>>27594503
You haven't written it yet
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>>27594525
but i dont think im good at writting i always get ideas that lead into nowhere and end up coming up with new once and the circle continues
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>>27594549
Well it's my first time really trying romance
You can do it, if all else fails, change your name and lather rinse repeat, wash off the shame
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Bumping the good bump

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GFzA_JNzXUQ
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>>27594876
Still a better fight than Batman vs Superman
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>>27594893
good thing we deal in spiders and not in bats
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>>27594478
Nice, cant imagine the confusion the robber is in when he arrives in equestria and suddenly is seized by magic ponies bringing him before their princess
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>>27593746
>VIII.2 (in the basilica); 1826: Phileros is a eunuch!
>VIII.2 (in the basilica); 1820: Chie, I hope your hemorrhoids rub together so much that they hurt worse than when they every have before!
>I.2.20 (Bar/Brothel of Innulus and Papilio); 3932: Weep, you girls. My penis has given you up. Now it penetrates men’s behinds. Goodbye, wondrous femininity!

It's like I'm really on 4chanus.organius
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>>27584387
>#18
>this pastebin list
I remember this starting as one of those dumbass shimmer shitpost threads.

I still miss femanon. Stone Free is an awesome stand.
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>>27595196
I took a gamble, and it paid off
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how would you guys feel if someone started some DC universe green?
the annoying shits (at least one) in the Shimmer thread are starving for content but don't want superhero greens there
frankly, I feel like if I did do a green here, it would get drowned out from all the established writefags that are already here
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>>27595290
I feel like marvel is just the easier starting point, but it shouldn't matter if you want to try DC stuff. Hell there's already bits and pieces sprinkled around.

I would kill for some hellboy or doctor strange, desu though
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>>27595290
Can I haz Celestia as Supergirl?
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>>27595312
>You will never see a heroic Tirek as Hellboy
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>>27595345
is that Hellboy fighting a Titan with derpy as his agro?
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>>27595290
If you've got something to write that fits then go ahead and write, you're concerns about being ignored over other writes has no real ground seeing as we've been getting a whole bunch of new writers recently.

Also for future reference it probably isn't a good idea to insult a thread that you're wanting to join/write for >>27593209
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>>27595622
>>27595290
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>>27593746
The mediums may of changed but shitposting has not.
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i really am thinking about trying to wirte a green about anon with the powers of a german (http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/German_Physiology ) with a oc who is a fext (http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Fext_Physiology) but i have no idea where to go with that
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>>27593746
>IX.8.3 (House of the Centenary; in the atrium); 5213: My lusty son, with how many women have you had sexual relations?
Hey kid you want to /ss/
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>>27595910
Shitposting. Shitposting never changes.
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"Sunset?"
"Who the hell is Sunset?"
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>>27596161
the person who, when is randomly said "sunset" to, doesn't think of a sunset but thinks it's somebodies name
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>>27596166
Well it's a world that consists of names like Twilight Sparkle and Starlight Glimmer, so it's not out of the question for someone to assume that the person is saying a name
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>>27596161
That watermark pains me.
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>>27596179
Longing
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So, I'm probably going to throw you guys some lewd in a bit
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>>27596220
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>>27596220
I'll show you lewd
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>>27596258
DELETE THIS!
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>>27596278
Never
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>>27596258
Blue board you sicko!
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>>27596292
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>>27596299
You all made me do this!
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>>27596258
2lewd4school
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>>27596220
Do it.
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>>27596340
Muffin first. Then costumed ShimSham lewds.
Man's gotta have priorities, y'know?
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>>27596389
Muffins are definitely a big priority
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"Babe, are you gonna get undressed?"
>Be Anon
>"Actually..."
>Be the very, very lucky boyfriend of one Sunset Shimmer, the Spider-Woman
>She stands at the foot of your bed, still in costume, her hands resting on her generous hips as you lay on the sheets, wearing only your Spidey-themed boxers
>She'd thought they were funny when you'd bought them
>"I was thinking we could try something else tonight~"
>That velvety voice never fails to send a shiver down your spine as the whites of her costume's eyes locked with yours while she slinks onto the bed with unnatural grace
>The silky material of her outfit outlines every curve on her body, leaving her practically naked but still tantalizingly covered
>Something told you that Rarity had a hand in making this particular outfit
>You owed that girl something fierce
>Sunset's body stretches over yours as she straddles your waist, her delicate movements belying muscles that could lift cars and batter baddies
"And, ah, what did you have in mind...?"
>You can just barely make out the shadow of a smile on her lips as you feel her fingertips brush over your clothed length
>"You'll see~"
>That hidden smile becomes a smirk as her quick fingers fish you from your boxers, letting your length angle back towards you before she makes herself comfortable once more
>Then, she starts to rock back and forth, slowly, your cock trapped between your own body and her already wet lips
>The sensation of her warm body and the soft cloth drags a gasp and a low groan from your tongue and your hands latch onto her hips in an effort to ground yourself
>Noting your approval, she picks up the pace, grinding against your hardness in earnest
>You can feel her hot breath on your face, the eager panting from behind her mask
>"Having fun~?"
>Instead of talking, you give her ass a squeeze
>Sunset might not be the bustiest, but her rear was godlike
>You get a breathy giggle and she begins to ease off the pressure on your dick

>cont
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>>27596419
>Fucking tease, she knew you were close too
>"Well, since you like my butt so much, why don't we switch things up, hm~?"
>You lift your eyebrow as Sunset lifts her hips, turning away from you so that her perfect cheeks now frame your cock
>Your groan of frustration becomes a moan of pleasure as Sunset rolls her hips, picking up where she left off
>Fuck, you loved this girl
>You can't even bring yourself to raise your arms and touch her, trapped in a warm, pillowy hell you never want to leave
>Each stroke brings you closer and closer and your eyes crack open to see her looking back at you over her shoulder, watching and enjoying just how much power over you she has
"F-Fuck, Sunny"
>That giggle again
>Teasing you
>"Already~? We've barely started~..."
>You feel her start to lift her hips again, ready to torture you with pure heaven until you beg her for release
>A fire lights in you, spurring your body to action
>Before she can get away from you, your hands latch onto her hips and pull her back down, your hips thrusting angrily to achieve your nirvana
>"H-Hey!"
>Not this time!
>You know she could get out of your grip if she really wanted to
>You don't care
>Finally, after a few, desperate thrusts, you tilt your head back and let out a low, wordless groan, shot after shot covering her clothed rump and your bare stomach
>Slowly, you come down from your high, flopping back bonelessly onto the bed
>With the little strength you have, you look up to see Sunset pouting at you, her gorgeous ass painted with strands of cum, her brow furrowed
>"Anon...."
>Totally worth it
>"Do you even know what it's gonna take to clean this? Rarity's going to kill us..."
>"Anon?"
>"Hello?"
"Zzzzzzzzzzz..."
>Definitely worth it
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So there's my short little lewd thing
Wanted to put a little spin on the hotdogging request
Also to make up for not having Issue 8 of Shimmering Spider-Woman out the door yet
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>>27596004
ok im gonna try to give a test to writing some green but be warned its most likely gonna be shitty

>be the ghost or how you actually are named: anon, preventing a bank robbery
>be doing what gave you your name as a hero. Fucking up the shit off criminals.
>nothing out of the ordinary really just tying their shoelaces together and turning on the safety switch of their guns etc
> its kinda funny how they just dont realize you doing all that shit
> once you are done with your work you go to you leave the bank unnoticed and and go to your partner in the next alley
> there you see your partner who does the more violent part of your work , brawl or smile how he is actually named
whos also the reason why you arent flying naked through the city anymore
"Well everything is done brawl. just go in and knock them out."
>the 2 meter giant with the stone mask and the coat just looks at you before he gets in motion
>"Lets hope they can take some rough petting"

so how is it so far? garbage or Auschwitz level of terrible?
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>>27596680
I'm going to say slow it down, add details, check your grammar, and be sure not to repeat yourself.
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>>27596630
Yiss.
Can we get a epilogue with Rarity's reaction to it?
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>>27596644
that image is quite bad
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>>27596979
>You are Rarity
>And you must remind yourself that a lady does not contemplate murdering one of her best friends and said best friend's boyfriend
>Your gaze sweeps from their sheepish, apologetic faces to the.... unsavory stains that mar your most recent creation
>That particular outfit had been a labor of love, a marriage of risque and heroic
>A masterpiece, birthed from your mind like the goddess Athena
>And there were... stains on it
>It was less than a day old
>No, you won't kill them
>Their punishment must be more severe
>Anon opens his mouth
>You look him in the eyes
>The mouth shuts
>Good dog
>"We're... really, really sorry, Rarity..."
>Sunset, it seems, is not nearly as well trained as her mail companion
>No, no she's not
>Not yet
>You give her a soft, friendly smile, a smile of forgiveness
>It is a lie
>She knows it's a lie
"It's quite alright, darling. I'll simply have to make another. Of course, I'll need the materials, expensive as they are, time to fit you, needles, lots of needles. And, because I am so, so generous, I'll devise something for your charming beau. This too, of course, will take time, materials, and a reasonable amount of needles. All I need is for you to get them for me and arrive, on time, for you... fittings."
>The shameful duo blanches
>You won't kill them
>That would be unladylike
>No, their punishment must be more severe
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>>27597138
holy fuck, these grammatical errors
fuck me to death

>>27596981
Yeah, doesn't help that it's the Spider-Woman costume, which I've never really cared for
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>>27597155
http://pastebin.com/8NHeZVMG

fixed the mistakes that were most obvious
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>>27597202
and you say you don't write good romance
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>>27596680
so i went ahead and wrote a bit more to show a bit of Brawl's personality but it might be the last for a while but feel free to tell me what you think so far.

>still be anon
>be following Brawl since you want to see the dumb looks on the faces of the robbers
> as Brawl enters the bank, he immediatly catches the attention causing the criminels to point their guns at the hostages.
>“Listen up pal, if you don't get lost theres gonna be a bloodba-“
> He's cut off by the punch of a forward leaping Brawl who aimed for the bank robber's jawbone
> You crinch as you hear the sound of bone being utterly cruhsed.
> While Brawl now focuses his attention on the second robber who's desperately trying to fire his gun, you see that the third and last robber has lifted is gun, aiming at Brawl's head, the safety already turned off and pulling the trigger finally getting the attention of your partner....

>The worst thing possible happened as you see the red dots appearing on the clothes and spreading, as the robber falls over already being dead.
> Shooting at Brawl with normal bullets is more than just dangerous, its lethal. The bullets will be reflected by his skin in such a way that they will kill the attacker instantly...
> After you recovered from the shock caused by the death of the criminel you realize that the remaining robber at thrown away his gun and was now punching your partner
>“Oh, that was a mistake. Now I feel challenged.“
> The very next second you feel the ground shaking after Brawl tossed the criminal to the groundand started punching him mercylessly over and over again, his right fist already soaked in blood.
> You didn't think it would end but then you heared a sound coming from the corner of the room right to you

>*thwip*
> be Brawl punching an un conscious bank robber
> but you were interrupted by something connection to you right hand which feels like...
> silk?
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>>27597214
> „Don't you think you are overdoing it, Mister Steroids?“
> a female voice, judging by you the sound of it, its at the other end of the string
> you pull at the string to get the woman in your reach and try to land a hit with the hback of your hand
>however you you feel her hand touhing your underarm as she pushes herself off in the direction of the ceiling
> as you look hope you see something that fills you with hope
> Spiderwoman, a capable fighter who might be able to bring you some joy and if she fails, well theres a good chance that her friends the Power Ponies will come after you including someone you've been burning to fight, Saddle Ranger. , if she isn't able to puit up an entertaining fight than who is?
> a wide grin finds its way on your face under the mask as you realize that you can only profit from fighting Spiderwoman
„I'm gonna enjoy this!“
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that's all for now folks!
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>>27597212
Nope, only half-decent smut
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>>27596161
glad the artist knew enough about safety and trigger discipline. to have both the safety set and her finger off the trigger. only thing is the safety is on the wrong side of the weapon
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>tfw no one has written Rainbow as Falcon yet
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>>27597715
because shes better as Casey Jones. :^)
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>>27597727
>not Storm
>not Jesse Quick
>not Angel
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>>27597754
honestly i was expecting the "different universe" argument.
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>>27597781
If the ninja turtles can crossover with the power rangers, I don't see why it's not possible here
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>>27593746
>VIII.2 (in the basilica); 1904:
>"O walls, you have held up so much tedious graffiti that I am amazed that you have not already collapsed in ruin."
There is so much shitposting that I'm surprised you are still standing.
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>>27593746
VII.9 (Eumachia Building, via della Abbondanza); 2048: Secundus likes to screw boys.
>VIII.2 (in the basilica); 1816: Epaphra, you are bald!
>VIII.2 (in the basilica); 1826: Phileros is a eunuch!

fucking SAVAGE!
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buncha lazy nerds 'round here, can't even be bothered to bump?
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>>27598514
I'm trying to write two stories right now. So i can't watch the thread all the time
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>>27598514
I look like a nerd to you?
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>>27598539
No, you look like a bloke
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>>27598555
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"People are gonna die, Sunny"
"Please don't make me do this"
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>>27598870
The watermark!
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>>27598870
>that watermark
maximum wew
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>>27598870
that drawing a shit
A SHIT!
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>>27598870
Watermarks ruin pics
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>>27591649
>It's the end of the school day and you’re waiting for your boyfriend, so you must be Sunset Shimmer.
>After sleeping with Anon, you woke up early to return home to change into some regular clothes.
>You were able to get into your house and put on a teal sleeveless dress before your mom knocked on your door.
>You told your mom that you stayed at a friend's house because you were having too much fun with them.
>She believed you and let you get ready for school.
>The school day went by as it normally does but you made sure Anon wouldn’t forget to meet the girls after school.
>So now you’re waiting for him to show up at the school's entrance.
>You saw him walking towards you while wearing a grey hoodie and blue jeans.
>You should take him clothes shopping later.
>Maybe get the girls and the Dazzlings to help you with that.
> “Hey Sunny.”
> You stand up and walk towards him.
“Anon, just follow me. The girls are waiting in a classroom.”
> “Is it too late to run away?”
>You giggle as you wrap your arms around his arm and kiss his cheek.
“Sorry but the girls asked me to make sure you get there by any means necessary.”
>He just sighs and let's you drag him to the principal’s office.
> “Um Sunny, not saying anything but why’re we at the principal’s office?”
>You don’t answer him as you open the door and walked inside to see the girls and the principals sitting down.
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>>27600292
>The principals look at you smiling and giggling at you dragging Anon.
> “Hello Sunset, Anon. Why don't you have a seat?”
>You and Anon take a seat in front of Celestia’s desk while Anon looks confused.
> “Sunny, I thought we were going to talk about my …..late night activities with just the girls.”
>You open your mouth to speak but Celestia beats you to the punch by gasping with a hand over her mouth.
> “Anon! You're a bit too young to be going that.”
>It takes him a moment to figure out what she meant and was blushing.
> “Wait, I didn’t mean that Principal Celestia. I meant something else.”
>The principal waves her hand at Anon while giggling lightly.
> “I know Anon, I'm just having a little fun.”
>He looks confused as the others smile at Celestia’s joking nature.
> “Ok, can someone tell me why the principals are here? I thought I was just gonna talk to the girls.”
>She clears her throat.
> “Allow me to explain, You know me as Principal Celestia of Canterlot High School, but I'm also Director Celestia of S.H.I.E.L.D.”
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>>27600302
>He's quiet with a stony expression.
> “Ok. So Sunny and the girls work for you? Also how can you be a principal and director at the same time?”
>Celestia gives him a gentle yet teasing smile as she crossed her fingers together.
> “They don't work for me, it's more of a partnership. And how I can do both is a secret.”
> “Alright, so I'm gonna take a guess and say that you know what happened last night?”
>Celestia just nods.
> “Fine let's get the obvious over with. My powers involve making hardlight constructs.”
>Anon raises his hand towards the computer monitor.
>You couldn’t see what was happening from the other side of the monitor but you could see a bunch of large pixelated shapes and colors flew towards Anon’s arm.
>The shapes are then absorbed into his arm making it glow for a moment.
>Celestia looks back at the screen and opens her mouth slightly before Anon cuts her off.
> “The computer isn’t broken, don’t worry.”
>Celestia looks at him, studying his every move while Luna moves her hand behind her.
> “With this I can make nearly anything I want.”
>He holds out one hands and a small bird appears in it.
>The bird is then replaced with a sword and then with a small angel.
> “So what’s next?”
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>>27600310
The next update and meeting Celestia. I'll update the pastebin once I fix the sleep scene
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>>27600361
nice update. I was reading along as you were posting.


about to post mine in a second. Just contemplating the last bit.
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>>27600375
Thanks, had to redo a few lines to get them how I liked them
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>>27600391
>"Anonymous."
>Sunset stands next to you with her books in hand and her bag
>"you feeling any better today?"
>you stand up from your seat and get your own stuff ready to go
"Yeah, I'm feeling great."
>the two of you kinda stand there awkwardly the little event from last night still fresh in your minds
"again, I'm sorry about that-"
>Sunset gives you a slight shove with a smile on her face
>"I already said its okay Anon, don't worry about it. You were under a lot of stress and that's how you dealt with it at the time"
>the two of you share a smile before Twilight calls to Sunset from the hall
>"Sunset you coming?"
>she signals 'just a sec' to Twilight before turning back to you
>"and like I said Anon, I'm here if you need to chat."
>she reaches into her pocket and pulls out a piece of paper with her number on it and hands it to you
>"Seriously, let me know if you need me."
>and with that she walks off to join Twilight
>does sunset have a thing for you? or does she honestly feel bad about what you are going through?
>you look down at the paper and put the number in your pocket just as Norman makes his way over to you with a grin on his face
>"Well well Anon, are you getting close with Shimmer?"
>you smile back at your friend and laugh a bit
"Yeah, I guess you could say that."
>"what was that paper she gave you? It was her number wasn't it?"
>the two of you are now walking out of the classroom and into the hall leading to the locker room
"Wouldn't you like to know."
>"Uh, Yeah! What kind of friend wouldn't want to know if his best buddy was making it with one of the most popular girls in school?!"
"its not like that, I dont think anyway. See last night she-"
>Norman smiles back at you
>"Oh I was there, I remember what happened."
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>>27600391
oops, that wasnt to you. Kek

>>27590132
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>>27600506
>>27600511
>Norman does his best to mimic Sunsets voice
>"Anon, you're looking so upset. please let me take you home and 'take care' of you. We can have our own party just the two of us~"
>you give him a push and he accidentally bumps into another student who he quickly apologizes too
"Yup, that's EXACTLY what happened."
>"I bet, now seriously, whats going on with you two?"
>the two of you enter the locker room where Bulk is waiting for you already changed
"She is just offering to be there if I need someone to talk to."
>"that's pretty cool of her. I still think shes got a thing for you though."
>you start to change into your workout clothes
"really? Whys that?"
>Norman finishes changing about the same time you do and turns back to you
>"Its not like she offers to be there for everyone in school, right?"
"Maybe you have a point."
>"Of course I do."
>the three of you, now including Bulk, head into the weight room where the rest of the class has started to do their routines
>in the corner you see two squat racks facing the same direction
>you did it once, why wouldn't it work again?
"Hey Bulk."
>Bulk looks over to you as a grin forms on your face
"How about leg day?"
>He grins back understanding your challenge
>Norman looks back and forth between the two of you and takes a step back with his hands up to get out of your way
>"uhh... you guys go ahead, I think ill just take a few dumbbells over there."
>Bulk and yourself take positions at the squat racks add apply the same amount of weight as the other
>Bulk smiles and pops his neck as he gets ready staring you down
"Three... two... one..."
>Lift
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>>27600518
>"So what did you Anon talk about?"
"Huh?"
>Twilight smiles at you as Rainbow and Fluttershy join you on the way to class
>Rainbow is quick to join in the conversation
>"Oooh, talking with Anonymous huh? Did you ask him why he ditched Pinkies party that we worked hard on?"
>Twilight gives Rainbow a disapproving look that you share
>"What? We did!"
>"Anon had a perfectly understandable reason to not want to go Rainbow."
>"I know, I'm just annoyed that we put all that effort into it and he didn't want to go"
>your voice is almost as quiet as Fluttershys
"He's going through a lot right now. I just offered to be there if he wanted to talk about it."
>you barely hear Fluttershy over the other noise in the halls
>"that was really nice. I'm sure Anon really appreciates it."
>Honestly just hearing that from someone else makes you feel glad about your choice
>You hope he does decide to talk to you
>It might help you make up for your mistake, even if its just a little bit.

>When did Anon start to get so damn strong?
>you sit next to Norman and grab a set of dumbbells to join him
>the two of you don't really say anything to each other besides "hello" before you are both watching Bulk and Anonymous going at it
"When did Anon suddenly get so competitive?"
>Norman looks around to see who you might be talking to before he realizes its him
>"Oh, you're talking to me?"
"Yeah. Who else would I be talking to?"
>he stops his reps to talk to you
>"I just wasn't expecting it, sorry Flash"
"No problem, but seriously, Anon."
>you motion over to him and Bulk
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>>27600527
>"Not sure, he's been getting like that since he came back."
>you nod understanding
>He's probably just using his anger and emotions as motivation.
>Still, being able to match Bulk suddenly is strange.
>"Did he ever talk about doing any training or workouts or anything like that before coming back?"
>Norman shakes his head
>"Nah, but he really didn't talk about anything, He might have started to work out to help cope?"
>you smile, set down the dumbbells and pat Norman on the back before standing up
"Yeah that's what I was thinking too"
>...
"Think he's any good at football?"

>looking ahead at Bulk you see he is straining just as hard as you are right now
>you both have reached your limit and are doing everything you can to do just one more squat than the other
>you've never felt your legs burn this much before
>and the sheer amounts of sweat pouring down your face makes you feel like you have been standing in the rain
>the two of you go down once more and you can feel the weight getting to you
>this is it
>whoever finishes this one wins
>you hear the clank of the bar lock into place along with the one at Bulks machine
>falling to your knees you look over to Bulk to see his bar all the way up as he smiles back at you
>you turn to look at your own
>its also at the top, but yours locked into place first
>you laugh despite the protest in your lungs
>each laugh escaping you burns like fire but you don't care
"I-I cant believe it."
>from your place on the floor you smile back at Bulk
"I cant believe I won!"
>in the mirror behind Bulk you can see your eyes slowly change back to their original color and the strength you had possessed leaves you
>Bulk raises his hand and gives you a weak thumbs up in response
>"Y-Yeah!"
>you hear the bell ring for the end of class as Bulk and yourself take a few extra seconds to breathe
>everyone else files out and the teacher waits by the door
>"Come on boys."
>the two of you respond with the same amount of enthusiasm
"yeah.."
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>>27600537
>Meanwhile somewhere outside of the city...
>"He's listened to the message Ma'am."
"When?"
>"This morning. It was the only message on the phone he listened to."
>you lean over the uniformed man at the computer to see the details
>the glow of the screen illuminates your face and that of the man in the dim room
"He knows the offer now. The only thing we are authorized to do until a response is given is wait"
>"and what if he doesn't give us one within the allotted time limit?"
>you smile like that of a predator eyeing a meal
"Then we will have to get in contact with him without making our presence known."

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end post.


Man, had a rough start with those links huh? must be getting tired.

anyway, there's my update. enjoy!
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>>27600548
wooo, mystery~!
It'll be interesting to see Anon ever clash with Sunset, given that he not only copies powers but can even exceed the user's abilities, if even only a tiny bit.
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>>27600548
>>27600756
I hope he doesn't get to full of himself like pic related.

Although it would still be interesting to read
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>>27600783
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>>27600548
I'm confused. Is this Anon have Infamous powers or is he like Taskmaster?
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>>27600814
He is based off the Marvel character "Mimic" as seen in >>27600783 and >>27600806

basically he can adsorb the power and skills of those around him if they are within a certain distance, or if he has had extended periods of time with the person.
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>>27600830
Ah gotcha. Thanks for the clarification m8.
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>>27600852
no problem.
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>>27600830
Is supersmarts a super power one can absorb?

>>27600814
Thats what I made the sheet for
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>>27584387
I still find it a funny concept to think that Sunset sometimes shoots webs when she gets really excited or nervous.
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>>27600527
didn't that party explode?
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>>27601375
the comic Mimic can. So I don't see why Anon/Mimic cant. I'm pretty much doing a copy and paste of his abilities and weaknesses then just making a story around it.

>>27601488
No the party didn't. Just a building downtown.
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>>27601504
or was it?!
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>>27597225
so does anyone want me to continue the story?
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>>27599232
>>27599425
>>27599824
If you can find a way to remove it, go ahead
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>>27602492
Sure.
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>You will never wake up in the morning to see this
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>>27602492
I say go for it.
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>>27602547
You fucking monster.

Burn in hell.
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>>27602547
W-why live.
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>>27602547
>you will never wake up
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>>27602504
Never said the pic was bad
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>>27597225
>be Sunset Shimmer also known as Spiderwoman
>and right now you are looking at one creepy looking guy
>extremly tall, a black coat, a freaky stone mask and worst of all those red eyes
>they are just staring at you with this intent to harm you for the sake of harming you like none of your previous enemies did
>it doenst take long for him to try to start an attack by jumping towards you with a raised wfist but you simply shot some webs in his face to blind him and simply jump behind him
> it doesnt take him long to come to a haltand rip the web of his face
>“Where are you? Stop hiding!“ is what he screams as he looks at you, how uncreative can someone be?
>however, his uncreativity put aside you still havea strong feeling you should take him out quick
>right now his back is turned to you so a kick against the back of his head should be enough to take him out
>but as you jump up and try to kick him with your right leg, the brute just turns around grabbing your leg with his right hand and gives your foot and twists your foot with the loeft in a painful manner.
>“Did you think i wasnt expecting that? You gotta be real stupid.“ is what comes from him as he lets you fall to the ground like a hot potato
>you try to stand up only to see that he had raised his fist preemptive and going right for your head
>you manage to dodge the attack by throwing yourself to the right however you still hear is fist connect with something
>you look in the giant direction to see what he had hit
______________________
ok small update and i gotta say, for the fight being nothing special or maybe even pretty lame it was hard to wrote for me
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>>27603315
You need to take your time, double-check your grammar, capitalize, and use punctuation

work smarter, not harder
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>>27602547
>Still no comfy green about waking up with Sunset.
>She will never open the fridge using her webbing and grab something she wants while still sitting on the couch.
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>>27603798
Uuuuuuuugh
I'll add it to the list...
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>>27603798
how would she close the fridge?
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>>27603815
Maybe shoot a large thing of web to hit the door?
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>>27603815
by making Anon go do it
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>>27603798
>You will never go to Pinkie's house with Sunset for a sleepover.
>You will never be the only person to know about Sunset's abilities.
>Pinkie Pie will never give you a spare sleeping bag to share.
>You will never be woken up with a soft tap from Sunset.
>She will never say "I accidentally webbed all over the sleeping bag. You gotta cover me on this one. I'll owe you one.
What do?
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>>27604068
Gotta take the blame, she'll give you sexy time later
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>>27604068
I just wonder how the girls will react.
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>>27603845
creative problem solving
I like

first after sitebreak hail hydra
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>>27602691
I prefer this to not being with sunset
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>>27604473
Never!
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>>27604531
>Who are you?

>Sunset?

>Is not you...

>Is it?
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>>27604531
Which of the main six would be in the cobra unit
I vote for Rarity to be The End
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>>27604672
The Joy-Pinkie
The Sorrow-Twilight
The Pain-Applejack
The Fear-Fluttershy
The End-Rarity
The Fury-Rainbow
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>>27604937
So Sunset kills them?
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>>27605376
That's the mission
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>>27605403
I know, i played the game. Gotta play it again sometime
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bermp
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bumpy
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>>27605902
R.I.P. Lasher. You deserve better than a dog that can't even eat chocolate.
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So, Jonah Jameson has been busy
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I had a thing based on lazy couch Sunset... but I deleted it...
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>>27606809
That sucks, i always wanted to read about a lazy hero/villain
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VOID
WHEN
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>>27606923
Well, there's always Baman Piderman
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I think I'll post later tonight.
I have way to much waiting to be posted, but I don't want to leave any cliffhangers.
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>>27607770
Cliffhangers keep people reading! Learn from "reality" TV!
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No update tonight but I'll have one tomorrow.

I had a crazy thought. How dangerous would Cadance be if she had symbiote?
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>>27608177
>Rape.
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>>27600548
>the shower after the workout was the most amazing thing you have ever felt
>alas, all good things must come to and end.
>after your shower and change into your gym class clothes you already feel like a million bucks
>In fact, after you dropped the strength you seemed to be copying from Bulk you started to feel better
>though at the time you were too exhausted to notice your body recovering
>and now you stand in the gym with the rest of your classmates ready to take on your next challenge
>and whatever it is, you plan on coming out on top.
>It doesn't take long for Rainbow, Applejack, Twilight and Sunset to come over and stand with you as attendance is being taken
>each of you sound off at the appropriate times and the class is lead out to the track
>you cant help but notice Applejack and Rainbow smiling at you as Sunset walks next to you out of the gym
>you give Sunset a nudge at point to the duo over your shoulder
"is there something going on that I should be worried about?"
>the two of you look back and suddenly AJ and Dash find everything else around more interesting than the two of you

>as Anon turns to look back to you AJ and Dash turn their attention back and give various approving looks and gestures
>you blush slightly before shaking your head 'no' to them
>"Uh, everything okay?"
>Anons voice brings him to your full attention
"Yeah, everything is fine. Just girl stuff..."
>Anon glances back at the two again receiving a wave from Rainbow before shrugging and returning his attention to the track the class was lead to
>"Alright class, we originally had this scheduled for our last session but we were unable to due to the contractors taking a day longer than planned."
>the new track looks amazing, the lines are all still perfectly visible and unworn, the Turf is bright and new, and the bleachers have all been replaced
>its looks like something you might see at Crystal Prep rather than Canterlot High
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>>27608461
>the teacher walks over to the starting positions with a timer and list
>"everyone will do one lap as quickly as they can and I will record each of your times, at the end of the year we will compare this time to your final time and see if you improved"
>seems pretty simple
>and the best part is your abilities as spiderwoman wont be a factor
>you can run your hardest and still look like an average student!
>for once gym is easy.

>you smile to yourself
>Ha! Gym will finally be easy.
>If your experiment with Twilight in first period and Bulk in second are anything to go by, then you can just replicate the agility of the fastest runner in class
>you turn your head to Rainbow Dash who already looks ready to go
>a challenge like this is right up her alley.
>her only natural competition would be Applejack but she isn't much of a sprinter, more of a long distance runner.
>your choice of who to mimic is easy...
>the class gets split into groups so the teacher can do more than one student at a time while not being overwhelmed with too many times to track
>and wouldn't you know it. you get grouped with Apple and Dash
>"don't worry Anon, it isn't a race so dont be too upset when I leave you and AJ in the dust."
>Applejack speaks up from opposite Rainbow
>"ha-ha whatever you say Dash. You don't know if you will finish first or not."
>Rainbow looks back at the two of you with a grin
>"well then what would you call before either of you in our group of three?"
>you just smile back as the teacher tells your group to get ready
"We will see about that crayon box, don't count me out just yet."
>the teacher raises her arm and places the whistle to her lips
>as she blows the whistle she drops her arm as a signal to go
>the three of you take off at about the same pace getting a feel for each other's speed
>while the purpose of this isn't to make it a race its been turned into one.
>"well its been fun running with you guys, but ill have to leave you now!"
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>>27608468
>Rainbow picks up her pace and starts to take a lead on the two of you
>"oh no ya don't!"
>Applejack does her best to speed up but falls just short of Rainbows speed
>now its your turn to make your move
>as your foot hits the ground you feel yourself increase in speed
>your strides feel longer and you push yourself further with each step
>you swing your arms and slightly bend forward and eventually you are neck and neck with Rainbow
>with a smirk you slowly begin to pass her and Applejack.
>as Rainbow pushes herself to her limit you match it equally and leave AJ in the dust as you near the end
>"w-wow! You have been. Really. Busy. I-if you can match. Me!"
"Ive. Had some. Real. Motivation!"
>the two of you can see the end just a few meters away
>then you have a sudden moment of realization
>slowly you start to lose speed, which Rainbow Dash quickly capitalizes on
>she passes by you laughing
>"it was a good try Anon!"
>it was more than a good try, its was just as good as her own
>only you had surprise on your side.
>your pace starts to slow even more as you let Rainbow get further and further away until Applejack passes you putting you in last
>"nice try partner! but ya'h better learn ta' pace yourself!"
>you breathe heavily and smile back
"y-yeah! god I'm tired..."
>you are the last of the three to finish, but even then your time is still impressive compared to most
>taking a seat on the bench you try to relax and take large breaths
>just as you lean back a towel hits your face and you nearly fall from the surprise
>as you remove it you see the girls standing or taking a seat around you
>you can feel your legs weaken slightly your copied agility leaving you.
>Rainbow punches you in the arm jokingly
>"nice going there Anon, you almost had me beat. Almost."
>taking the towel you wipe your face and neck of sweat as your body already starts to recover from the borrowed abilities of Rainbow
"It was fun while it lasted."
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>>27608486
>you are a onlooker inside the school
>the world has always been different through your eyes compared to those around you
>you remove your specially made tinted glasses and look out at the track from your desk in class
"that was pretty interesting to watch..."
>in the distance you can see the slightly glowing trails of sweat on the track along with the individuals running
>the last three were the most fun.
>from the looks of it, they were Anonymous, Applejack, and Rainbow Dash.
>and while Anonymous lost the race you have a feeling it was intentional.
>he didn't start to sweat until he let Rainbow Dash pass him.
>"Vinyl... Vinyl!"
>you remove your headphones so you can hear the teacher clearer
"Yea, Harsh?"
>Ms Harshwhinny glares over to you from her place at the front of the class
>"Please pay attention and follow along. You'll need this information when you come back here during study hall to make up for wasted time in class today..."
>with that she turns around and continues to write on the board about economics or math or whatever this class is.
>you just put your headphones back on and let the music take priority
>besides, you learned a lot already.
>Anonymous is a pretty interesting guy...
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>>27608486
smart play, Anon
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how does this thread have so many writefags with it being so "new"?
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>>27609375
I dunno
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>>27609375
All the latent /co/ had to go somewhere.
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>>27609375
who doesn't like comics and superheroes?
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>>27609448
hipsters.
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>>27609481
even they probably do anon.
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>>27608495
Impressive quality and quantity of your output
Thumbs up indeed
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>>27609506
Based __HS__ always delivers good green

>>27608495
Heil Manos
hope you continue that soon and that your grandmother gets better.
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>Be, as per your birth certificate, Lucky Star.
>Or if you are going by the race's paperwork of Canterlot's Runners' Asociation: ID 4-7.12.4.18.
>Or if you go by your slightly vandalized piece of paper taped to your shirt, 'Amon'
>You really need to work on your handwritting.

>You are currently on Canterlot's Outdoor Coliseum, finishing warming-up after a last minute questions and answers with Captain Dash (This time she insisted on the title).
>The Canterlot's Track&Field Interscholastic Championships starts today and last two days, with the unwritten tradition of becoming a brutal match between Crystal Prep's Shadowbolts and Canterlot High's Wondercolts.
>Earlier today Rainbow told you not to worry about that. That after the last Friendship Games they should have... 'pulled the flagpole out of their colective asses'.
>She also told you that she talked to Indigo Zap, the captain of the Shadowbolts' team to make sure no one ends wrapped in speedtape on the Fryburger's dumpster this year.
>'This year'.
>You filed away any questions not related to the race, but you are certainly going to ask later.
>Today are the Junior races, for boys and girls on the 15-16 age bracket.
>Of course, you'll be representing CHS at the boys 100m sprint.
>It was also a chance to see who was Captain Rainbow Dash training for the girls' division.
>She is next to you, so you watch her do her own warm-ups.
>A slightly tanned girl with purple-reddish hair, with a 'serious bussines' no-mask on.
>You know because she is in your class, the loudest of the troublemaking Crusaders if you are not mistaken.
>What's a no-mask? A feeling you have learned to recognize with your empathy.
>It's the glue that connects 'what you feel' and 'what you want to feel'.
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>>27573536
>>27610282
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>>27610282
>Is not a mask. You have seen people mask their emotions and look happy while they break down inside.
>The no-masks are when they try to force themselves to feel otherwise, like... ok, you don't have many examples for this, if you did, you would have come up with a better name.
>And right now Scootaloo feels both determined and euphoric, but is trying (very hard) to be serious and force her happiness down.
>She finnishes her warm-ups and looks at you.
>Why is she suppresing her own joy?
>Does she know not how precious happy moments are?
>And running is fun by itself?
>Why is she running if she doesn't want to have fun?

"I know I'm the second coolest thing you ever saw and all that, but your staring is starting to get creepy"

>Oh right.
>She's been looking at you looking at her for like two minutes straight.
>Fug.
>You decide to tell the truth. You tend to fumble your lies.

>"Sorry, just thinking about how serious you are about this."
>"Wait, second coolest?"

>Her no-mask cracks.

"I've got to win this. I have to show her that I can handle all of this."

>She strikes a pose, with one hand on her hip and the other one fully stretched out, giving you thumbs up.

"And I saw you go training with Rainbow Dash yesterday, and you were not here last year. So unless you have seen a superhero in person... Second coolest."

>You decide to see if you can completely destroy that no-mask.

>"And what is 'all this' you can handle?"

>She looks at you like you had sprouted a second head.

"The teams, you dingus! Rainbow Dash graduates this year!"

>"So you plan to be the new captain? Of everything?"

>You admire the enthusiasm, but is hard to believe that a sophomore would be alowed to do so.

"Nope, that would be impossible, the captains are chosen by vote each year. It took Rainbow three years to be the captain of them all"

>That makes sense. You have to wonder how does Rainbow find time for her studies though.
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>>27610319
"But when Rainbow graduates all of Cantelot High sports' performance will go down the drain! I heard her talking about it with Applejack last week."

>Broken! She stoped trying to be serious, in fact, she is giving you a broad grin.
>She is now sizing you up. It's actually a bit scary.

"But if I... No, if WE can win this, we can get her to stop worrying and to trust the rest of her team...s! Whaddaya say Lucky? Think you can keep up?"

>See?! This is why you consider only Rainbow Dash as a friend.
>A week.
>You have been a week in the same class as her and she still can't tell that you hate that name.
>Hell, you prefer Star if they aren't going to call you Anon.
>A fact you have been telling everyone pretty much every time they talk to you!
>And she isn't even doing it on purpose!
>She is just a ball of happiness and determination in the shape of a cute girl.
>...
>You bite your lip.
>Good, inner monologue is still on the inside.
>You didn't blush.
>At all.
>You turn around and look at your running shoes.
>Still, her determination and happiness are contagious.
>For you at least.
>So you focus on the determination, if you are not allowed to be angry, at least you'll be annoying!

>"No can do."

"What...?"

>Wait for it.
>Anger, and a little of betrayal.
>Now.
>You look at her in the eyes and imitate her earlier pose, smile, thumbs up and all.

>"I won't 'keep up', I'll make you all eat my dust!"

>YEAH!
>Ouch.
>She punched you in the shoulder.
>Why does everyone think that smashing other people is fun?

"That's the spirit!"

>The last minute siren rings.

>"You gotta go, and call me Anon, by the way"

"See you at the finish line?"

"Sure thing!"

>You go find Captain Rainbow 'Professional' Dash on the staff area by the end of the straight, and stand by her.
>There are another five girls standing infront of the blocks, and you don't know nor care about any of them.
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>>27610331
>Unlike longer races, the 100m sprint is run only on the straighaway so all the runners start side by side.
>All of them have dropped their sweaters and warming shorts and are sporting tight elastic tank tops emblazoned with the logos of their schools, along with tiny tight shorts.
>You'd comment on that, but you are wearing practically the same thing underneath your sweater and shorts.
>In Scootaloo's case, a cyan tank top with the Wondercolts' bronco inside a sideways horseshoe mimicking a 'C', all this in gold.
>The girl next to her was the Shadowbolts' runner was a pale girl with orange hair and a pink bow on it.
>Purple Tanktop with the Shadowbolts' 'S' in violet, rimmed with yellow.
>You don't care about the rest, the race is between the Shadowbolts and the Wondercolts.
>If the previous years' records are to be believed, the other schools don't even stand a chance.

>A white man with striped blue hair stands between the galeries and the track with the starting gun in his hand.
>Holy hell he is white.
>White as in 'I got sunburnt by moonshadow once' white.

"READY!"

>The girls move to stand in front of the blocks.

"GET SET!"

>Your valiant effort to not look at the line of raised asses is moot. Damned teenager-ness.
>You note with a chuckle that is still a competition between Shadowbolts and Wondercolts.
>You suddenly feel a hand on your shoulder.

"Eyes on the track champ. I wouldn't know, but I'm sure it would ruin your time to run with a stiffie."

>You look at the captain and almost swallow your tongue.
>She is crouching next to you in her running outfit with her face next to yours.

>"Is-Isn't the 4x400m relay race tomorrow?"

>She is enjoying this!
>Eyes on her eyes, eyes on her eyes...
>She winks at you.
>EYES ON HER EYES! EYES ON HER EYES! THIS IS NOT A DRILL!
>Oh, come on! She is full of happiness and mischief!
>...And a bit of something you really don't want to think about.
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>>27610352
"Yeah, I know I run tomorrow, but I decided to dress the part today. How can I expect anything from you lot of I don't even wear the team's uniform?"

>After that commentary she stands straight up and looks back at the track.
>You let your eyes wander for a bit on the captains body.
>She fills the outfit perfectly, which is no surprise considering these things are custom made.
>Her body is built for speed, full of toned muscles traced by the tight outfit, showing lightly marked abs on her bared midsection and a firm muscled ass on ther shorts.
>Her hips or breasts aren't very big, but you can say without a doubt that that her slim waist and and round perkyness make up for it.

"GO!"

>Mr. 'I can blind my enemies with my face' pulls the trigger and all speakers on the coliseum simulate the gunshot, specially those behind every set of starting blocks.
>Making you realice that you were eyeballing a girl at least three years older than you, who is also your captain and was also teasing you.
>You focus on your sixth sense.
>She knows. Mischief, happiness and a bit more of that third thing you won't think about.
>You try to think of cold things.
>Anyway, the race starts so you switch your focus again, this time to the track.
>And you can see instantly why is always between Shadowbolts and Wondercolts.
>Both the orange haired girl and Scootaloo start like pros, keeping their torsos low at the start and using the foward momentum from the starting blocks and their arm-swings to reach the 40m mark without tiring themselves.
>The rabble behind stood straight just after leaving the blocks, wasting the momentum from the blocks and getting full wind resistance.
>By the time Scootaloo and the Shadowbolt reach the 60m mark the rest of the runners are at least twenty meters behind.
>You can feel the steely determination of the two runner-ups, the hope of the middlegrounders and the rage and hopelessness of the stragglers. Damn.
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>>27610367
>On the final 30m both the Shadowbolt and Scootaloo rev-up to the max.
>What was a 20m distance with the rable becomes at least 25m when Scootaloo crosses the line, followed closely by the Shadowbolt.
>The Jumbotron shows the times instantly, thanks to the pixelwide camera on the finish line.

>1° CHS - Scootaloo: 12,49 S.
>2° CPA - Amber Wave: 13,53 S.
>3° CQC - Valiant Effort: 15,40 S.

>As the informative triptic you were handled said, you all wait for the last runner to cross the finish line before rushing to meet the winner.
>Captain Rainbow Dash beats you there.
>At least the view is nice.
>FOCUS, DAMN IT!

"Hey squirt!"

>Scootaloo walks up to the captain and.. Hugs her?

"Hey Dash! Did you see me on the track! Stupid question, of course you did!"

"That I did, well done squirt, you make the Wondercolts proud."

>She crouches and stage-whispers.

"And me too"

>When they break the hug up, you decide to add your congratulations to the two girl party.

>"Good going Scootaloo!"

>Welp, that was lame.
>You, Scootaloo and the Captain move back to the staff zone.
>Scootaloo is the first to talk when you arrive from your terrible 15m walk.

"What was that about 'leaving us all in the dust', Anon?"

>Damn, the sheer cockiness rushing from her is intoxicating.
>You are drunk on braggart-ness.
>You smirk.

>"The captain has seen me running, I WILL beat 'em all."

>"Just watch and see, today is the day I break my record. I tell you, I can get lower than 10.5 seconds!"

>The captain gives you 'that' smile.
>The smile that usually acompanies 'yeah, sure' and 'cool story brah'.

"You are fast champ, but that's not college scholarship time, that's straight up olympics qualifiers."

>If you were anyone else and/or were anywhere else, you would have seen the truth of those words.
>BUT YOU DIDN'T LISTEN!
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>>27610390

>Here in the coliseum, with a good chunk of the school cheering for you and your team, plus the happiness and determination of Scootaloo and the Captain herself you feel better than ever.
>You can take on the world head on with a hand beneath one of your feet.

>"I know, and I'm too young for the olympics anyway."

>You are not joking, you know you can.

>"Really! I could bet you I can do it."

"Champ, do you even know what you are doing right now?"

>"Setting myself for a bet against nominally impossible odds?"

"...Okay. Whatever, If you pull that stunt then my term at Canterlot High will end with a blast! We would get on the school's Wall of Honor!"

>She does it again.
>She crouched enought for her to look at your eyes and to give you an eyefull of her cleavage.
>Then she whispers to your ear.

>"I tell you what champ, anything if you cross that line."

>She pulls back and gives you a wink.
>You didn't think that far.
>You are not thinking at all right now.
>You answer.

>"You said anything."

>You blurted that out.
>She pales.
>Speechless.
>She is full of embarrassment, a bit of shame and a bigger chunk of that third thing you didn't want to think about earlier!
>FUCK IT, YOU DON'T CARE ANYMORE!
>IT'S LUST!
>YOU HAVEN'T FELT THIS WELL IN YOUR LIFE!
>Calm down...
>Breathe in, then out.
>LEave that EMPowerINg FEel foR The rACE.
>In and out.
>Remember that while the 'war on mutants' is 'over' you really don´t want to be exposed.

"Hey! Anon! what were you and Rainbow talking about?"

>Oh right, Scootaloo is here.
>Fug.

>"We were... Uhm... Setting a bet."

"You really think you can get under 10 secs, huh?"

>Hurray for confidence!

"I trust you. You were fast when you transfered to Canterlot High, and you trained with the Dash!"

>Say what?
>She raises her fist in front of you.
>Yeah!
>You don't doubt it.
>You bump the friendship out of that fist!
>A bit too hard. Ouchie.
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>>27610411
>The captain seems to recover from her small bout of catatonia.
>She is red and blazing with rage.
>Oh well, it was worth a shot.

"Okay champ, I did say any one thing. Think about what's it."

>Wha?!
>She said yes?

"Now excuse me, I really need to go throttle Rarity before your race starts."

>What.
>You look at Scootaloo, who looks and feels confused.

"She is going to what?"

>You were about to answer when a new voice does so for you

"Strangle. She is going to strangle Rarity to death."

>You turn back to see who the speaker is.
>A fair skinned girl with stipped blue hair stands in front of you.
>She is wearing a pair of orange googles and the same thight running uniform all runers wear, but hers is a bit... Overflowing.
>While Dash's body is sleek and built for speed, lowering body fat to the minimum, this girl has built herself to compensate for her more abundant... Assets.
>Chiseled muscle on forearms, arms, legs and tights, along with wide hips, a nice waistline and an ample and round bust pressed a bit too tightly by her tank top splaying quite a bit of her breast to the sides, giving you a nice sideboob view from your angle.
>Unf.

"Oh! You two haven't met yet! Anon, this is Indigo Zap, captain of the Shadowbolts' Track&Field and soccer teams, and awesome biker. Zap, this is Lucky Star, he prefers Anon though. He is really fast, but this is his first actual race. I think."

>Scootaloo saves you from being caught staring with a great introduction.
>You decide to buy her an ice cream later today.

"Call me Zap, nice to meet the one running against Green Arrow."

>She signals with a thumb above her shoulder.
>You see who she is talking about. A gray boy of about your age and build, with gray skin and green, well combed hair.
>He is evidently checking her ass.
>Understandably.
>You can't even find it in yourself to criticize him for it.
>It wouldn't be fair, after all.
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>>27610419

>Zap turns her atention towards Scootaloo.

"And nice race against Amber Wave Scoots. I guess she'll need harder training to beat you next year."

>She then turns towards you again.

"Even if you Wondercolts got the girls gold for the 100 meter sprint, you have always been way sloppier at the boys division and I don't think Dash would have a new student ready this fast.

>"How is Green Arrow ready, then?"

"The junior race is for both freshmen and sophomores, with Arrow being the later. He has been training two years, and won the race last year."

>She leans forward and rests her arms on the barrier.
>You bet Green Arrow is getting an eyefull.
>Wait.
>She is doing it on purpose!
>The background happiness is messing with your sixth sense, so you actually have to focus on her.
>You look wide eyed at Indigo Zap.

"You figured out already? You really are fast, kid. I doubt he actually knows whats going on"

>Scootaloo on the other hand looks like you would imagine a fish suddenly finding itself on the palomino desert looks like.
>Except for the existencial dread you like to imagine causes the fishes' log faces.

"What's going on?"

"Not much, I was telling Anon that I promised a date to Green Arrow if he wins, as motivation. The uniform helps, too."

>You easily push back the dread you feel.
>You would like to say that the prospect of Rainbow just playing with you to boost your performance teared you apart from the inside.
>But the 'downside' of your sixth sense is the fact that you can get overwhelmed by outside emotions.
>And right now, you are happy. Happy because you KNOW you are going to shatter the ten seconds barrier, and going to take a senior to a date in a reckless display of misplaced bravado.
>And you are enjoying every second of this.

>"Yeah, it sure does."

>...
>Fug.

"I know, I've got it, and I surely flaunt it."

"I thought you were going to slap him."
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>>27610426
>"Gee, thanks Scootaloo. And here I was going to invite you an ice cream for winning."

"Don't slap him too hard, I'd like that ice cream."

>Et tu, Scootaloo?

"Relax kids, I ain't gonna slap no one for looking at me. If I cared about that, I wouldn't be wearing last year's uniform."

>Not only hot, but also really cool. Nice.
>You avoid thinking of thermodynamics.

"Hands off, though."

>You have no doubt she would break you if you were to try anything. Not that you would.

"I assume Dash did the same?"

>"Kind of, I think, I was bragging I could get under 10 seconds and..."

"Kid, that's straight up impossible, you should be hitting eleven at least, maybe ten dot nine. You can't get under ten."

>After her interrumption is done you continue anyway.

>"Well, she told me that I could ask for any one thing if I managed to do it."

>Indigo Zap is staring at you with a face splitting grin.
>Quite sharklike really, with your mind filling the gaps (with even more teeth).
>You need an adult.

"She really said anything?.."

>"Yes..?"

"Kid, I know Rainbow Dash, and while I don't know why she is suddenly trying the sexy way of motivation, she won't weasel out of her word."

>Ok, you are quite confused right now.

>"So..."

"You may hold a blank check. Quite a lot of guys would kill to get that."

"Shame on her for dragging you by your pants with something unreacheable though."

"Rainbow wouldn't do that!"

>Scootaloo: Ace Attorney: Devils Advocate.

"Sorry Scoots, but she didn't just show him some booty, she put it withing reach. I wonder why though, this isn't her style. Though to be frank, I'm kind of wanting to see Anon break that mark now. Her face will be priceless."

"Rarity."

>"What?"

"You haven't been here for long, but Rarity usually uses her cleavage to get boys to do her heavy lifting for free! You had to go to her workshop at school for the uniform fitting, so you probably saw those huge rolls of fabric she needs to get there."
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>>27610442
>Scootaloo might not have your ability to feel what the others do, but your confusion must have been written clearly on your face.
>She pinches the bridge of her nose.

"White, with purple wavy hair? Blue eyes? More make up than skin on her face? Rings any bells yet?"

>"...No?"

"Throws glitter at everything she gets her hands on? Gives every guy, no that's wrong, there was Spike too, every male a sultry half lidden stare?"

>"Nothing yet."

>Scootaloo gives you a tired stare.
>She sighs and changes her face to a half lidden stare, fluttery eyelashes and all.

>"Oh mah stars dahling! Whatevar happened to yar coffin'?! Let mua fix that fer you! There! Are you simply dahling! Oh, whatevar do yah mean, dahrlin'? No, that'd look ridiculous dahlin'. Dahlin Dahlin, Dahlin!"

>"Oh! I get it now, the tailor!"

>Both of you turn back to see Indigo Zap holding her sides trying not to laugh.

"Oh my SIDES! That was GOLDEN! I wish I had my phone to record that. I think Rarity would have an aneurism at all that!

"Pleasedon'ttellSweetieBelle!"

"You sound like you hate her!"

"I don't hate her, is just that she is soooo uptight!

>"What were you saying about Rarity, Scootaloo?"

"She said she was going to go choke Rarity right? And she was acting al girly and sexy! That isn't Rainbow's style, her stile is being cool! She was probably told by Rarity to do this!"

"Nice theory kid, but Rainbow wouldn't do anything anyone says just like that, specially Rarity, I've never seen her in a dress outside formal parties. Ow, good thing I run tomorrow, my sides stil hurt."

>Before you can think more about that, the siren calls for your presence on the track.

>"It seems I gotta go!"

"Remember, leave'em all in the dust!"

"Give your best kid! I'll have a camera ready for Dash!"

>As you leave the staff area you hear some last words.

"And I really should have been talking to Green Arrow!"
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>>27610456
>You snicker a bit at that.
>Just before you reach the blocks, Captain Rainbow Dash catches you.

"Hey champ, sorry for being late, someone told Rarity and I had to chase her halfway back to her house. Luckily Sunset caught me and told me what I needed."

>"That you needed to be present?"

"That, and her schedule for the week. Including tonight's party."

>"That's... great?"
>You are no longer sure the Captain was exaggerating about the choking bussiness.

"Anyway champ, go and beat your record, I want to see Zap's face when she sees you humiliating Green Bolt's brother!"

>She turns and looks back at the staff area.

"Where is she... Where did she got that polaroid from?"

>"She said she wanted to get a snap of your face if I get less than ten seconds."

>Captain Dash's face went pale at that. Oops?
>You just managed to find what happens when you turn cyan's saturation to cero.

"You told her?"

>A Half truth is not a lie, right?

>"She figured it out herself, I just specified the terms of the bet."

"She 'figured it out'?

>You point at her clothes.

"Oh, right."

>The last minute siren rings, telling you to get your ass in gear and to the blocks.

"Remember! Less than ten seconds champ!"

>You stand behind the blocks, waiting for Mr. "I lost a tan competition to Dracula" to call the start routine.
>You take this moment to look at your momentary nemesis, Green Arrow.
>He seems to be doing the same.
>When your gazes cross, you can feel the determination radiating from him.
>You answer to the best of your abilities, trying to show him that you won't back down either.
>He nods at you and you return the gesture.
>You assume that Indigo Zap told her of your bet with Captain Rainbow Dash, and that you know of his.
>Your respect for him will be tested during and after the race, but you feel some understanding right now.

"READY!"

>You, Green Arrow and the rabble step in front of the blocks.

"GET SET!"
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>>27610466


>You break all visuals with your opponents, and take position on the blocks.
>Well placed and spaced feet, head low and arms ready to swing.

"GO!"

>You shoot foward as always.
>The first leg is always determined by technique, and this week you have been doing nothing but training technique with Captain Rainbow Dash.
>Body low, you keep the momentum of the block-kick the most efficient way your body allows you.
>Long arm swings and long strides, body rising slowly, applying more and more strength to each stride.
>Soon you are pumping with all you've got.
>You think you are doing well.
>You can't afford to look sideways, but you have yet to see anyone at neither your side or front.
>You let go.
>You can feel the wonder and exitement of the sizeable part of the student body of Canterlot High cheering for you.
>You can pinpoint exactly which one of the bursts of emotion is your dad, which one is Fluttershy, the two side by side being Rainbow and Scootaloo, and on the other side a very surprised but cheering for you Indigo Zap.
>If Zap is cheering for you, then you must be close!
>YOu FEEl THe CheERs.
>You TAKE THEM!
>IT'S MAGNIFICENT.
>FUCK TEN SECONDS, YOU KNOW THAT SHIT IS MORE BROKEN THAN THE ANTIQUINERA MECHANISM!
>YOU FEEL REFRESHED.
>AND YOU RUN.
>ALL THE STRENGTH, ALL THE TIME!
>YOU FEEL IT. THIS ENEREGY.
>YOU TAKE ACCOUNT OF YOURSELF.
>YOU ARE NOT STRONGER.
>YET, YOU DON'T FEEL TIRED AT ALL.
>YOU PUSH YOURSELF.
>YOU PUSHED YOUR SELF OVERBOARD.
>yOU StARt jOGGing IN placE.
>You calm down.
>You passed the finish line five meters ago.

>You stop and stumble forward a bit, before grabbing your knees for support.
>The cheering has not stopped, but the world seems silent to you.
>You turn to the screen.

>1° CHS - Lucky Star: 9,59 S.
>2° --- - --- ---: -,-- S.

>You turn to the track.
>There, starting his last 10m, is Green Arrow.
>He is irradiating pure dispair.
>He must know that he already lost.
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>>27610474
>The world suddenly goes back to normal, you can hear the cheering, and some chants mocking the losers and stragglers.
>You turn towards the bleachers and the people on them.
>You raise your right hand.
>And pump your fist.

>You bask on the wave of happiness that reaches you.
>You could live for this.

>You wait around five seconds for the last of the stragglers to leave the straightaway before leaving towards the staff zone.

>You don't manage to reach it.
>The colors rushing at your sight are the only indication that the tackle-hug was effectuated by Scootaloo and not a springtrap.
>Luckily for you is a short hug, so you don't need to catch your breath again.

"You actually did it!"

>"I told you I could."

"And you were worrying about a scholarship! Son, look at this!"

>Dad is a huge man.
>He often appears on the morning news.
>How did he manage to sneak on you?
>Still you look a what he is holding in his hand.
>At least seven differently colored sets of cards and panphlets.

"All universities in the area had a representative here and some of other cities too! This are only the ones that extended their invitations right now, the rest are going to keep an eye on you during highschool"

>You were just planning on having a nice sanctioned time table and applying after coursing twelfth grade...
>You look at your dad.

"I told you kid, you have someone looking over you. It was only a few calls, most of them were on the city already."

>It matters not who is watching, that calls for a hug.
>After a full minute of hug, you let go.
>He pulls another slightly smaller stack of cards and pamphlets.

"Girl! You are Scootaloo, right!?"

"Yessir!"

"They couldn't find your parents, so I thought I should make sure this reached you."

"They never come... Thanks sir!"
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>>27610485
Liking the storyline and premise, but there are a lot of errors in changing perspective and spelling which make it hard to tell who is saying what. Try and make it clearer who is speaking.
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>He places a hand over his brow, sighing heavily and dramatically.
"Son, be honest, I'm not that old, am I?"

>"Dad! You aren't even forty."
>You try to answer seriously, feeling the resingnation now dripping from Scootaloo, but his brand of sillyness always gets a chuckle out of you.

"Hey! Anon!"

>You don't even have to turn to recognize the owner of the voice.
>Still, you turn to see her.
>Indigo Zap is jogging towards you.
>While the running uniforms are really revealing, they are made with the special purpose to avoid any kind of jiggling, so you can safely consentrate on what's important.
>The photo on her hand, and the fact that Captain Rainbow Dash is coming right behind her, hastily putting on a sweater.

"Look at it before she catches up!"

>You take the photo the moment it is within reach.
>Like Zap said, its the face of Captain Rainbow Dash when you crossed the line.
>Beyond being wearing still the running uniform, she managed to blush and pale at the same time, leaving her looking rather lavender, with her expression on the fence between pride and utter dispair...
>You only manage to get that info before Captain Rainbow Dash takes it from your hand.

"Got it!"

"What's this?"

>To your, and Zap's amusement, and Rainbow's embarrasement, your dad snatches the photo from her hand.
>You see him comparing the Captain Rainbow Dash on the photo with the sweater wearing Captain Rainbow Dash in front of him.
>Then to the shameless Zap next standing in front of you.

"Is this some track team captain stuff?"

>Captain Rainbow Dash jumps to the chance.

"Sure! lets go with that."

>On the other hand, Zap couldn't care less.

"Only the winning ones though, It does wonders for morale."

>You see her eyes widen.

"And I gotta go find Arrow before his brother flays him!"

>Yikes.
>You then feel a known hand on your shoulder.

"That was awesome champ! You actually made me Zap eat her words! You did great today."

>"Hey Captain, do we have to stay here?"
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>>27610592
"Not really, you don't compite on the coming relays. But before you go anywhere..."

>You watch her struggle a bit with the sleeve of her sweater before pulling two purple cardboard cards.

"Here, invitations to Twilight's Penthouse Party tonight! You earned it. And don't worry about the medals, or trophy if we don't screw up the relays, me and the team can accept them and bring them to school."

>"Thanks Captain."

"Thanks Rainbow!"

>"Say dad, I owe Scootaloo an icecream so..."

"Say no more, I don't think I could deny you an ice cream now, and Scootaloo, we can drop you home if you want too."

>"We'll go get our things!"

>You run to the boy's locker room and change into a pair of loose jeans and a green hoodie, while stuffing everything else in your gym bag, even your spikey shoes.
>When you leave the locker room you find Captain Rainbow Dash waiting for you.
>"What's up, Cap"

"I just came to ask if you have thought about that anything I said I would do."

>"Can't I tell you at the party?"

"Okay, but please, think about it."

>After those so encouraging words, Captain Rainbow Dash retreats.
>You reunite with Scootaloo, now wearing green cargo pants and her own red hoodie before meeting with your dad at his truck.
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>>27610593
>As you sit shotgun, you feel a black pit of ice on your guts.
>Your sixth sense was just assaulted by pure hate and agression.
>And it wasn't even aimed at you.
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>Even with the clatter of the lab equipment, it would not be hard to hear the voice, for it was not merely speaking, but shouting to the world about it's lastest creation.
>On a table, in a transparent container, a black mass boils and shakes, shriekes and strikes against the containers walls.

"The darkest atributes of Spider-woman, taken directly from her blood. Made into new life. A half-life."

"What are you, my little symbiote?"

"Were do come from, and where to go?"

"YOU ARE DESTILLED AGRESSION! You are pure VENOM!"
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>You are Sunset Shimmer, and right now, your spidey-sense just decided to hit you like a sledgehammer.

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Done for tonight, tomorrow I'll set up the pastebin, I swear.

>>27610584
Thanks, I'll pass it through a better spellchecker than notepads, and will try to read it whole before posting.
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>>27610485
Continues here:
>>27610592

Now I'm going to sleep.
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>>27610609
Notepad doesn't have spellcheck, does it?
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>>27610645
No.

No it does not.

It's really annoying.
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>>27610782
Try google doc. It has spell check and stuff
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>>27605909
Kek
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>>27610609
I forgot to ask toughts.
so... Thoughts?

Also, Pastebin.
http://pastebin.com/mk5ymZ7V
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>>27611774
needs some corrections and it can be hard to tell who's talking at times (black text usually indicates the main perspective is talking, at last, as a standard) but overall I'm really excited to see more.
Anon's sympathetic, I actually LIKE Dash for once, and I really want to see where things go.
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>>27611774
Not bad, I'm liking how it's focused on recruitment in a sense instead of just jumping into heroic deeds
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>>27611894
Thanks, I'm afraid I swapped the black/green text dynamic by accident, but I will try to clear the ''who is talking'' problem.

>>27611992
Thanks, I want to tell the story of how they get to the heroics/rampages.
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>9
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Who would Magento be?
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>>27609375
Hard to say, maybe it's an interesting idea or something. It could be about sexy hips as well
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>>27612607
Kibitz?
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>>27584387
>IMPORTANT UPDATE ABOUT MY GREEN

So...My computer's broken, and it has everything on Spider-Shimmer. Like, everything. I don't think it'll all be lost, but be prepared for the worst. Don't be too worried though, I got a feeling it isn't as bad as I think it is.
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>>27613305
Vel, fug.
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>>27613305
>beans
>drama
...

Just continue, please
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>>27613305
Hopefully it's nothing to bad
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>>27603315
>lying on the ground where you just stood was a man, wearing a fullbody suit in green and white, the colours fading into one another like fog.
> as you look at where the face should be you see a black dot spreading
>“Dammit Ghost! Next time just stay put!“ you hear the brute say in a quite annoyed tone
>Ghost? Was that the name of the man in green and white? Where did he even come from? You didn't hear the door opning and there was no one else in here besides the bank robbers, this giant and some hostages
>“Anyway, you may call me Brawl....“ this colossus, or Brawl apperently, had already turned to you and had picked up Ghost, carrying him on his shoulder
>“....and you were quite the disappointment. Oh and you better get going, I can hear police sirens heading this way and as far as I know the daily bugle gave you a shitty reputation.“
> and as if on cue you too start to hear the police sirens and see Brawl leaving the bank through the main entrance, making you decide to make an exit aswell to avoid any further trouble

> be anon, a pretty pissed off one on top of that
> as you tried to pull spiderwoman down to make her avoid the punch from Brawl she just jumped aside causing you to greet his fist head on.
> but how should you have known she could still jump aside?
>...
> ok, maybe the sight of her hips made your brain work alot slower. What? It happens....
>however getting punched in the face is NOT what made you angry
>“Hey do you think you can fly?“
„Uh? Oh, yes wh-“
>you dont get to talk any further as Brawl simply tosses you into the air
>however you manage to catch yourself mid-air and fly directly infront off him
„ Oh, by the way, what was that just now?!“ is what you practicly spit out like venom at your friend
>“Ok, sorry. Next time I toss you off i'll warn you.“ is his only responds besides shrugging.
>“Or do you mean the punch in your face? Because that's definately NOT my fault.“
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>>27614386
>is he being serious? You had an agreement for fucks sake!
„No, I mean the unnecessary violence you just used! You know, like hitting someone who's laying on the ground mercilessly or starting a fight for no reason with someone who just kept you from killing someone and breaking their foot! We had a deal that you wouldn't do such things!“
>„Well, actually I didnt break her foot, I just pulled a M. Night Shyamalan and gave it a bad twist, also I just promised to not be unnecessary violent, it never was a deal.“
„That makes it even worse asshole!“
>you sigh, realizing you wont get any sense in him anyway, you decide to use your energy to calm yourself down.
>it doesnt take you long to get to the part of your ways where you have to seperate and say good bye to each other
>arriving at home you realise two things, first of all its quite late and you should better go to bed immediatly and secondly, you arent tired at all.
>you wonder what you could do to get yourself tired and let your mind wonder, eventually coming to think about spiderwoman or to be more precisely, her hips
> welp, guess it cant be helped. You are gonna watch porn till you are tired
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ok i got something done and already now what to do next. you can expect:
smile and anon how they behave when in school and the interaction between flash and non aswell as sunset and anon
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>>27614411
Some errors from what i can see but it's interesting
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How is everyone doing today?

Doin a bit of mobile green at work during the slow day.
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>>27615490
I unintentionally bit my lip hard 3 times at the same location today. It got increasingly more swollen and easier to bite.
I want some untitled and, yes, you, put you already posted today.
but I guess I have to settle with catching up on voidborn and klyntar
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>>27615542
>and, yes, you, put you already posted today.

W0t?
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>>27615604
...
timezones
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>>27615490
Well I thought today was going pretty well, but I just checked my pulse, and it seems like I'm dead inside.
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>>27615490
Well enough, just got off work
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>>27615490
Trying to get the next part written but not doing so well with it. Will post tonight regardless
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>>27615490
I suppose I should have said "during the down time." Ah well. Mistakes were made
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Gonna have an update soon hopefully
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>>27616924
Change of plans gonna post in the morning. I keep getting a connection error
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Stranger danger!
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>when class ends you are one of the first in the hall
>the music in your headphones constantly playing drowning out the noise of the students around you
>as the hall fills up with more and more students it gets more difficult to see things clearly
>beads of sweat, droplets of saliva, and even fingerprints are clearer the more recent they are.
>when you were younger this would have been overwhelming and likely painful to see all at once
>but you have found ways to cope with this over time
>music was one of those ways.
>you scan the halls looking for someone
>finally you spot him walking with Sunset in your direction
>casually you walk towards them much like any student in the hall
>and as you walk up to him you give him a pat on the shoulder
"that was a pretty nice trick out there."

>The words you just heard send a slight shiver down your spine
>Relax Anonymous, she might just be talking about passing Rainbow for a while
>But still, her wording "nice trick"
>She walks down the hall giving you a wave as she turns down a hall
>You start to follow after her her telling Sunset you will see her later
>You make it to the hall just in time to see her turn down another
>Again you follow her and as you turn the corner she stands there in front of the door to the auditorium leaning against the wall.
>"Ha I knew I was right."
>You step forward closing the distance between the two of you slightly
"Right about what?"
>The girl takes off her headphones and the music echos quietly in the hall
>"About if you were, different."
>Then she removes her glasses
>Her eyes reflect your face in them perfectly but there is something different about it
>Then you notice her pupils are incredibly small as if reacting to too much light
>"Different... like me."
"I don't know wha-"
>the girl puts up her hands in a mock surrender with a chuckle
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>>27617712
>"heh don't worry, I wont be spouting your secret to the world or anything. But you cant deny it bro. You wouldn't have followed me unless I was on to something."
>she smiles putting her glasses back on
>"and you wouldn't have started to sweat as much as your currently are either."
>It seems she has you in a tight spot
>even if you continually denied it, her logic is sound, and she would always have suspicion.
>but that brings up another question
"You said different like, you? What is-"
>she steps back opening the door to the auditorium and motions for you to follow her inside
>hesitantly you do so.
>"You're Anonymous, right? The guy who's been having a bit of bad luck recently?"
>you could say that.
>being kidnapped and losing your father for it to broadcasted on the news as a drug deal gone bad along with being seen running into a burning building for apparently no reason might be seen as 'bad luck'
"Yeah, that's me... the unlucky guy..."
>she turns back to you with a bit of worry in her voice
>"oh, shit. that's right. I'm sorry about your-"
"Thank you, but its fine. You seem to know more about me than I know about you though."
>the girl takes a seat in one of the chairs and relaxes
>"well everyone in school knows you because of recent events. I just happen to know a little bit more because of my... condition."
>condition?
>she lowers her glasses slightly, just enough to peer over them as she smiles
>"the name is Vinyl Scratch by the way. I was the DJ for your party that you decided to not go to."
>you raise your voice slightly
"Vinyl, you said you had a condition, and that I was different like you. What did you mean by that?"
>"waoh relax Anon, I don't have anything to hide, all you had to do to find out was ask"
>you think you already did previously.
>"I see things differently than everyone else."
>Vinyl points to the open auditorium ceiling
>"for example those lights."
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>>27617724
>you turn to look where she is pointing but see nothing there besides a plain old ceiling
>"I can even change them and the different aspects of them. Heh, if I wanted too they could be as hot as the sun, and don't ask how i found that one out. That was a interesting day of third grade for sure."
>honestly at first you think shes bluffing, or at least a bit crazy
>but then you look back at her and see her honestly smiling at the sight before her as her music still echos in the room
>"its kinda why I do what I do now... I can see these beautiful lights everyday, like a never ending party."
>her tone has changed from her earlier joking and half caring one to on of honesty and sincerity
>"and when I play my music, and work these lights in a blacklight room. I can share that experience with others."
>she takes a moment to let her words sink in
>and they do.
>she has done something with her abilities that isn't making her be some hero in the news, or having to make choices between life and death of innocents.
>shes bringing joy to those who appreciate her skill
>"So, big guy."
>your thoughts of her are interrupted by her voice
>she smiles at you noticing you got lost in thought
>"whats your special talent?"

>you look at Anonymous from the slightly less than comfy seat in the auditorium
>he moves to take a seat next to you
>you don't really mind, you did just have a feelsy heart to heart kinda moment just then
>"so, you say you see things differently then everyone else, and that you can manipulate lights like that at a party?"
"manipulate and create. Usually when I tell people about this, they assume its part of my rig at the event, but it isn't."
>the lights around you start to swirl and dance onto the floor making various shapes then vanishing and returning at your will
>"right."
>you lean in pretty closely to Anonymous you face just a few inches from his and you pull your glasses down again so you can look into his eyes
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>>27617732
>you getting a good deal of enjoyment out of finally meeting someone different
>"Just like Snapchat big guy. I showed you mine, now show me yours."
>Anonymous smiles at you and looks down to the floor where your lights continue to dance
>"so you weren't lying then."
>huh?
>wait
"can.. can you see them?"
>you change the lights to the formation of a middle finger pointing at him
>and to your astonishment he raises his hand and does the same thing to you causing you to laugh
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>>27617769
"no way! How can you suddenly see them?!"
>you change the lights again to a very intricate image of a DJ booth shooting lights out of it
>Anon smiles at you and laughs at your excitement
>"like my trick? You said you saw me do it on the track. Why couldn't I do it here?"
>the DJ booth suddenly gets its own operator in the form of a little DJ vinyl whose hair changes color to match the lights
"so that was your trick?! You can literally mimic someone else's? dude that's the tits!"
>looking at him his eyes look similar to yours
>his pupils are small like your own even here in this dark room
>you find yourself pointing at his eyes
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>>27617776
"just like mine.."
>you take your glasses off completely and the two of you look into each others eyes
>then his eventually return to normal and the little DJ at the booth vanishes
>"exactly like yours. So? happy with the Snap?"
>you cant help but laugh as you stand up and put your glasses back on
"I've seen bigger... But that doesn't mean I didn't like it"
>you give him a wink before making your way out to the door
"See ya round, Mimic. I have a class to show up late to."
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HA take that connection errors! I made my post for the day anyway!
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>>27617769
>"Just like Snapchat big guy. I showed you mine, now show me yours."

should be Vinyl saying that. just... just so we are clear.
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>>27617842
Awesome, glad to see another update
Now I wonder what Anon's got himself swept up in by showing off his power...
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>>27600310
>Be Anon in a large empty room.
>The room itself was basically an empty gymnasium.
“So explain to me again what I'm doing.”
>The voice of Principal Celestia, i refuse to call her director, bounced off the walls.
> “This is just a simple test to see what you're capable of. I'll be giving a few obstacles and you just deal with them however you like.”
>Ok that made sense but one thing still bothered you.
“No I got that part, what I don’t understand is why I'm wearing this.”
>You moved your hands to show the strange grey spandex suit you were wearing.
> “I thought you decided to wear that.”
“No, I found a note on the door telling me to change into this.”
>You could hear some giggling and someone say, “Nice but.”
>Before anything else could be said, you create your angel form over the suit.
> “AWWW, why did you do that Nonny? Me and the girls were enjoying the view.”
“Can we start this so I can change sooner?”
>A loud buzzing noise goes off as the room starts to shift.
>The walls open to show cannons and spikes while some parts of the floor rise to reveal humanoid robots.
“Oh fuck me.”
>The robots ran at you as the cannons took aim as you summoned a couple of angels to your side.
>The angels start to shoot their lasers at the cannons while you created a large sword in your hand.
>You raise your arm and swing at the approaching robots, destroying all of them as one jumps at you.
>You duck under the robot as it soars over you.
>Turning to face the robot, you throw the sword impaling it to a wall.
> “Since you clear level one easily, I'll raise the level a bit.”
>You see some bigger robots and larger guns pop out as many different structures started to form around you.
“This is gonna suck.”
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>>27619039
>Still be Anon.
>You’re in Celestia’s office you think but an hour later.
>You’re glad that your powers can heal you or else you’d be in pain right about now.
>Those robots hit hard.
>You sit in front of Celestia as she smiles, typing on her computer.
>That smile is irritating you more than usual.
> “Well Anon after a few rounds in the Danger Room, we've scored your performance. And I'm happy to say welcome to the team, Anon.”
>You stare at her in silence.
“I didn’t know this was an interview.”
>She laughs at that.
> “Don’t think of this as a job, it’s more of an opportunity to help better the world. We can have untrained superpowered kids running around when they could be a danger to everyone. I don’t expect you to drop everything you’re doing to help us.”
>Well at least you still have some freedom.
> “But you will be expected to at least go on patrols every so often with your team or superior officer.”
>You nod as it makes sense.
> “And we decided that you'll be partnered with Sunset and the girls.”
“And that means?”
>If you’re gonna be working here, you might as well know what's gonna happen.
> “We're not forcing you to go on any patrol, as I said, but you work with the girls unless I say otherwise.”
“And any reason why you assigned me to my girlfriend then?”
>Her hands go up to her mouth as she gasps.
> “You and Sunset are dating? I didn’t know.”
>You’re beginning to wonder if you could hide her body somewhere before they find out.
“Just tell me where the girls are.”
>She hands you a card.
> “They’re just down the hall in the rec room. The card will be your key for here.”
>You get up and walk towards the door.
> “Oh and Anon.”
>You look at your principal/boss in confusion.
> “Please treat Sunset right. Recently has been the happiest I’ve seen her.”
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>>27619046
>You just stand there waiting for her to laugh or joke around but it doesn’t come.
“Don’t worry. I’ll treat her like a princess if I have to.”
> “I’m gonna hold you to that.”
>You walk out the room and head to the rec room.
>As you get closer you begin to hear your friends talking in there.
> “Try this Darling.”
> “But it’s so revealing.”
> “C’mon Shy. the sooner you try it, the sooner you can get out of it.”
>You reach the door and open it.
“Hey girls so what’s the...plan?”
>Inside the room were the girls but you stumbled onto a strange scene.
>Applejack, Twilight and Pinkie were wearing their skin tight bodysuits while putting on their masks and shoes.
>Though Pinkie was putting snacks in her suit…..for some reason.
>Rainbow Dash was sitting to the side in her normal skirt and shirt while spinning a ball on her finger.
>But the craziest thing was Rarity who was in half her spandex/latex suit and her bra and she was putting a green military dress on Fluttershy that looked a couple sizes to small.
>And they’re staring at you.
“I’ll come back later.”
>You close the door and lean against the wall as Sunset walks into your view.
> “Hey Anon. Is everything ok? You look like saw something crazy.”
“Just Rarity using Fluttershy as a dress-up doll.”
>Sunset just nods like this is normal.
> “Well you better prepare yourself.”
>You look at her confused.
> “Cause now that you’re here, she’ll be wanting to make your suit.”
>Before you can say anything, the door beside you opens and Rarity grabs your arm.
> “Anonymous since you don’t have a suit, let’s get you fitted for one.”
>She pulls you inside.
“That’s fine. I’ll just wear this. I don’t need a costume. SUNSET HELP ME!!”
>Sunset laughs at you while walking inside.
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>>27619084
That's all for now. Thoughts?
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>>27619112
is that image of fluttershy really what you want us to have in our heads when reading your story?
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>>27619116
Why not and It's more on what he's wearing. Is that a problem?
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>>27619112
Not bad. That last part was downright hilarious.
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>>27619112
When will he tell them that he is Spectrum?
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>>27619123
>he
ok, I can't get that image out of my head now
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>>27619138
Sorry just woke up, meant she.

>>27619137
I have an idea for that and it'll happen soon enough. But not to soon.
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>>27619141
too late, it's futashy now
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>>27619144
Fine by me, Fluttershy isn't getting any huge part in the story anyways. Well compared to Sunset anyways
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>>27619144
Headcanon accepted

>>27619112
>Recently has been the happiest I’ve seen her.

This line is a little awkward, though
And I would have liked to see more of Anon showing off his powers in the Danger Room
Still, good and fun and cute
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>>27619783
I didn't want to have the test go on for long, and an action scene is next on the list.
The line is suppose to be based on Sunset being tired at times.
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Are there any good f2p games to play besides warframe? i want off this ride.
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>>27619867
the game
you lost
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>>27619880
Really dude.
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>>27619893
just play tetris
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>>27619867
>>>>/vg/
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>>27619925
>Implying /vg/ likes games
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>>27619112
Needs more nanomachines son!
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>>27620029
wait, nanomachines?
damn, i need to catch up on treppy again
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>>27620037
No Nanomachines in my green.

Yet
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save from episode fallout bump
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>>27621906
again
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>>27621906
At least we have someone watching the thread to bump it
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>>27617786
>"ma'am. our time is running short. Do we have orders?"
>its only been two days.
>are the higher ups really THAT impatient?
>you sigh loud enough for most of the room to hear you
"fine, if they are really that impatient and require an answer this quickly I suppose we will need to step in"
>the room of various uniformed men and women respond with a "yes ma'am!"
"get me a list of possible covert contact locations, along with his most likely routine, I know we have only been tracking him for two days but get me what you can."
>the screen in front of you lights up with possible locations with images provided then another screen gives you a likely timetable for contacting him
>"Ma'am we have a few additional numbers recently added to his phone, along with the most called numbers, they are likely friends we could use to get more information or contact"
>the list of numbers add themselves to your personal monitor with images of the phones owners
>the list is pretty typical of a teenage boy.
>his best friend, Norman.
>a relatively attractive female with red and yellow hair named Sunset Shimmer
>then a party girl with blue and white hair who seems to always be sporting the same style of glasses
>followed by a list of all contacts in the phone, most of whom are female.
>you smile softly and place your hand over your heart
"its a great feeling when a mother finds out her son is popular with the girls."
>you remove the list of regular contacts and decide its best to focus on these three
>"do you have a plan ma'am?"
>you cant go and contact him yourself, that would raise too many questions from him
>and questions lead to doubts...
>you scratch your chin slightly before a plan starts to form in your mind and a wicked smile on your lips
"how are our captives from the Wonderbolts? doing?"
>"ma'am?"
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>>27623400
>damn these bastards!
>how did they discover your base of operations so quickly?
>you sit in your cell beaten burned and bruised.
>looking to the cell across the room you can see Soarin slowly beating his head against the wall out of boredom
"Soarin.. Soarin!"
>he looks over to you
>"yeah Spitfire?"
"what do you know about these guys? they had you questioned the longest out of all of us."
>he takes a seat on the floor facing you before rubbing his head
>"uh, not much really. Clearly they are not a big fan of us though."
"did you see anything on their uniforms that might give them away? Do they work for someone or-"
>Soarin stands up in his cell and shouts back at you
>"I SAID I DON'T KNOW! I- I don't know anything"
>you see a few tears streaming down his face
>"I don't know anything"
>he takes a few steps back before going back to his wall and slowly starts to beat his head against it again
>with each impact you hear him repeat himself over and over again
>you hear the voice of Misty Fly one of your newer members from the cell next to you
>"I think they've broken him Captain."
>you place your hand on the cells containment field in a attempt to reach out to Soarin
>a few armed guards enter the holding area
>the stop in front of several cells, but not your own and raise their weapons at those inside
>"We require your uniforms resist and you will be eliminated with extreme prejudice!"
>you stand closer to the containment field and your arms start to produce flames as you shout to the guards
"Hey leave them alone!"
>one of the men walk over to your cell and stand in front of you
>"We plan to. Trust us on that this world has far too many things dividing us from uniting as one."
>he leans in closely as he presses a few buttons on the panel next to your cell
>a gas starts to fill your cell and your powers slowly drain away as you fall to the floor
>"but for now we will have to settle for you and your team."
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>>27623417
short update i did before work. hope it is interesting!
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>>27623417
>"Hey leave them alone!"
>>one of the men walk over to your cell and stand in front of you
>>"We plan to. Trust us on that this world has far too many things dividing us from uniting as one."

shit deleted a part by mistake.
>hey leave them alone
should be
>"Hey why don't you pick on someone your own size huh?! leave them alone!"

guess i accidentally deleted it when i was posting. Ill be more careful in the future.
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>>27623417
>>"We require your uniforms resist and you will be eliminated with extreme prejudice!"
wat
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>>27623493
does that not sound right? seemed fine to me besides a missing comma
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>>27623550
look up prejudice in a dictionary
also, you should put a comma after uniforms, or even a period
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>>27623611
harm or injury that results or may result from some action or judgment.

definition two mate.
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>>27623631
thats the noun version anon. the Verb is used here meaning "cause harm to"
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>>27623647
same difference

>>27623611
its used properly
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>>27623631
prejudice (countable and uncountable, plural prejudices)
1. An adverse judgment or opinion formed beforehand or without knowledge of the facts.
2. Any preconceived opinion or feeling, whether positive or negative.
3. An irrational hostile attitude, fear or hatred towards a particular group, race or religion.
4. (obsolete) Knowledge formed in advance; foresight, presaging.
5. (obsolete) Mischief; hurt; damage; injury; detriment.
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>>27623682
prej·u·dice
ˈprejədəs/
noun
1.
preconceived opinion that is not based on reason or actual experience.
"English prejudice against foreigners"
synonyms: preconceived idea, preconception, prejudgment
"male prejudices about women"
2.
LAW
harm or injury that results or may result from some action or judgment.
"prejudice resulting from delay in the institution of the proceedings"
synonyms: detriment, harm, damage, injury, hurt, loss
"without prejudice to the interests of others"
verb
1.
give rise to prejudice in (someone); make biased.
"the statement might prejudice the jury"
synonyms: bias, influence, sway, predispose, make biased, make partial, color
"the article could prejudice the jury"
2.
LAW
cause harm to (a state of affairs).
"delay is likely to prejudice the child's welfare"
synonyms: damage, be detrimental to, be prejudicial to, injure, harm, hurt, spoil, impair, undermine, hinder, compromise
"this could prejudice his chances of victory"
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>>27623682
Kek you missed definition 5 anon. The definition that is used in that sentence
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>>27623746
look up obsolete in a dictionary
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Grammar Nazis the thread
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>>27619084
>Be Matterhorn or Twilight Sparkle.
>After Anon’s little fashion show as Rarity called it, it was time for everyone to go one patrol.
>Everyone split into two groups with you, Sunset, Anon and Fluttershy in one group and everyone in another group.
>You had to carry Saddle Ranger on your back.
> “C’mon Angel, you can’t still be mad at me can you?”
>Angel said nothing but continued to fly as Spider-Woman swung from building to building with her webs.
> “It was just a joke Angel.”
> “A joke huh?”
>You don’t like his tone.
> “Maybe you’re right. It’s not like I didn’t enjoy being frozen and everyone laughing at my predicament.”
>Sunset flinched at the accusation.
> “I’ll owe you?”
>Angel glares at her, from what you could tell.
> “You’re gonna owe me alright and we’ll talk about it later. So anything I should know Matterhorn?”
>You clear your throat and fly a bit closer to him.
> “All we have to do is just stop any small crimes like robberies or purse snatching. If we see anything involving a superpowered villain, we could take care of it ourselves or call the others for support. Most of the times nothing happens though.”
>At that point an alarm goes off.
> “I’m gonna take a stab at it and say that wasn’t planned.”
>You could only sigh as everyone flies towards the sound of the alarm.
>You arrive at the bank?
“What would someone want from here?”
>Fluttershy stays behind you as you walk towards the door.
> “M-Maybe whoever’s i-inside is making a deposit?”
>You hear Angel scoff at that.
> “More likely a withdrawal. And just saying this is cliched as hell.”
>Spider-Woman and Angel are right beside you as you open the door and go inside.
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>>27623811
I need a villain , so can someone tell me who would rob a bank?
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>>27623831
any scientist needing funds or person motivated by material gain
so...
almost any villain
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>>27623831
Well Shocker for one. Maybe Electro, Doc Ock, or Mysterio.
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>>27623874
True. Just have writer's block on what to do at the moment
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>>27623915
If you need petty crime, use Batroc.
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>>27623915
see how you want to further your story, what damage you want your heroes to take, what should be at stake if they lose and how the fight makes them grow as people.
then figure out what type of villain they should fight for that purpose

Do you think I shot Twilight for shits and giggles? No, I need a portal to equestria, for that I need an excuse, and luck has it to...
you know
just plan ahead
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>>27624003
I have a plan but to many ideas
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Man if my choice of WORD was that triggering to anons I have to keep it now.
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>>27624116
hey, at least your story creates conversation, right?
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>>27624141
I suppose so. There is no such thing as bad publicity.
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Nine
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>>27624154
Bad publicity is always a bad thing
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>>27590455
>You managed to catch up with the police cars fairly quickly
>Much quicker than you would have expected
>The cars stop in front of a bank
>From what you can gather, there seems to be a hostage situation
>You know exactly what to do
>You web yourself on top of the bank and search for a ventilation shaft
>It didn't take you long to find one
>You pry open the metal grind and climb inside
>After a minute or so of navigation, you reach the other side
>You carefully pull the grid off and poke your head outside
>You are in the water closet
>Great
>At the very least you will have the element of surprise
>You slowly descend in the bathroom
>You go towards the door and just as you are about to exit, you hear one of the toilets flushing
>A masked man in black comes from one of the stalls
>Machine gun thrown his back
>He fixes his pants when he sees you
>There is a moment of shock as he just stares at you
>He is about to open his mouth, when you web it shut
>You pull him towards yourself and knock him out
>You take apart his gun and web him up
>That's right
>You know how to take apart weaponry
>You also just now notice that your webbing has turned from grayish white, to black
>After this, you should really figure out what you are wearing
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>>27624844
>Red
always makes me so happy to see you again
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>>27624758
Here's my arguement....

Trump
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>>27624844
>You exit the bathroom
>Turns out, it was behind the counters
>Luckily, nobody noticed you
>You see three people in the hall, keeping an eye on the hostages and the police
>Two near the vault
>The speed with which bags of money get thrown out of the vault, you figure that there should be around 3 people inside
>First off you better deal with the vault crew
>You jump on the ceiling and crawl towards them
>You are right above the two robbers
>Time for you to perform your spider take down
>Based on the ever so popular Belgian take down
>You web both of the robbers feet and pull them up
>They hit their heads pretty hard so they fall unconscious
>Finally, you web them to the ceiling
>Nothing to it
>Jump down and throw yourself inside the vault
>As you fly in, you grab two robbers and smack their heads on the ground
>You quickly look around
>The vault is empty
>Turns out, it was jsut these two
>Nothing to worry then
>Only the three guys in the hall are left
>You've got this
>You run full speed and jump over the counters
>You kick one of the robbers in the face
>The other two turn towards you
>Mid-air, you web away the machine gun from one and hit the other with it
>You safely land on the floor
>You turn you attention towards the last man standing
>He's pulled out a gun and he's about to fire
>That was not part of the plan
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>>27624869
>You stick your arm out and try to web him
>But from your sleeve what looks like a tentacle shoots towards him
>He is too dumbfound to react in any way
>He gets hit in the chest and flies out of through one of the windows
>The tentacle retracts back
>Um...
>Whoops
>The bank gets stormed by the police
>Guns are being waved around
>Front and center is commissioner Jeremy Wordon
>Every cop has their gun pointed at you
>The moment the commissioner sees you, he orders them lower their weapons and search the bank
>They know better than to disobey him and spread out
>The commissioner walks up to you
>"Meet me on the roof in 10 minutes"
>You nod and run to the bathroom and jump up the shaft
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>>27624878
>Ten minutes pass and the commissioner comes up with a cup of coffee
>"8 thieves neutralized, no casualties and you even did it unarmed. Maybe I should offer you a job"
>You blush a little behind your mask
>"Didn't expect to see you for some time after yesterday's brawl. I like the new threads."
"It's just something I improvised...heh..."
>"Right. Well, turns out, yesterday, we didn't have an arms deal. They were selling the schematics."
"Schematics?"
>He takes a sip of his coffee
>"Mhm. Turns out our people might preffer building their toys instead of buying."
"I see. Do you have any leads on who might be behind all of this."
>"Sadly, no. But I'll check with you if something comes up. Any way to reach you? Phone? Peiger? A big spider signal?"
"No. I can just come around once a week."
>"That could work. I'll be sure to be on time each day."
>He smiles and takes another drink
>"You should get back to class, Sunset"
>What?!
>Oh
>Yeah
>He got you home last night
"School's canceled today. The fire alarm went off."
>"Is there a chance that you were behind it?"
"Mr. commissioner. I enforce the law, but I am not above it."
>"Heh...well, take care then. You've earned some rest"
>The commissioner walks towards the door
"Wait!"
>He turns around
"What...what were the damages from yesterday?"
>He scratches his head
>"A few injured, zero casualties, a couple of scientists got fired. Over a billion dollars of equipment got destroyed."
"Did anything get stollen or go missing?"
>He takes his final sip from the coffee and smashes the cup
>"Pff...living space goo."
"What?"
>"Oscorp recently found something they believe to be an extra terrestrial life form"
>Oh no
>"It resembles black slime"
>Oh no no no
>"And after your fight, they couldn't find it"
>Nononononono
>"They believe that it most likely died, because of the outside conditions. Why do you ask?"
"I...um...well...just curious. I should be going now, chief. I'll see you around"
>You jump off the building and swing
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>>27624889
>This is bad
>This is really bad
>You are covered with alien goo
>You should take it off
>Immediately
>This will in no way end well
<Although, it did prove itself useful today
<The improvised costume
<Even the tentacles
<Furthermore, last night's dream wasn't a dream, was it
<You actually fought off a gang with the help of this thing
<It's probably best to keep it
>At least for a little while
>Just until you can figure what you can do with it
>Since you have the entire day to yourself
>You figure it would be best to explore this new costume of yours
>You head towards the abandoned railway station on the edge of town
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>>27624856
Always happy to make people happy, Anon
Also happy to make people sad, Anon
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>>27624898
><Although, it did prove itself useful today
><The improvised costume
><Even the tentacles
><Furthermore, last night's dream wasn't a dream, was it
><You actually fought off a gang with the help of this thing
><It's probably best to keep it

AHAHAHAHAHA
you make me very happy
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>>27624937
I figured the reverse sign would fit nicely with the symbiote. A way to track its influence and not break the flow
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>>27624898
Awww, symbiote is adorable when he's trolling
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>>27624910
I'm watching you
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>>27625986
I like being watched
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>>27623811
>Be Anon in the museum with Spider-Woman, Matterhorn and Saddle Ranger.
>Almost sounds like a game.
“So what now? We split up?”
>A large explosion goes off causing the ground to shake and the walls to crack.
>The fissure causes you to stumble a bit as you look at Matterhorn and Spider-Woman as Saddle Ranger peaked from behind Matterhorn.
“It’s a super villain isn’t it?”
>They nod wordlessly.
“Any idea on who?”
>One of the walls explodes before anyone could say anything and three figures covered by smoke and darkness emerge from the rubble.
>You’re able to see them once the smoke clears up.
>The first Is a girl with purple and pink hair, who was wearing a dark blue unitard and black thigh highs and two gauntlets with a spike on each of them.
>The next girl wore a flame covered body suit and helmet and had her aquamarine and rose colored hair in a ponytail.
>The last was also a girl with a hidden face but had whitish blue hair peaking out of a hood.
>She wore black thigh highs, a sleeveless bodysuit and long black gloves with long blade like nails and a sword on them.
>The one with the gauntlets has a smile on her face while carrying a bag of what your prosume is money.
> “Now let’s get out of here before ….those annoying heroes get here.”
>She glances at you and the team as her hooded friend looks at her nails while carrying a similar bag.
> “You really should have stopped the alarm.”
>The flaming girl has a smile on her face.
> “But if she did that, then we wouldn’t see our heroic friends.”
>She seemed to nice to be robbing a bank.
> “And we wouldn’t get the chance to crush them.”
>Ok, you take that back.
>Looking at your friends, you point at the three.
“Who the hell are they?”
>Matterhorn sighs as she waves her hands at them in a dramatic fashion.
> “They’re Fault Zone, The Wink and Solara. And they’re part of the Shadowbolt 5, a simple group of villains.”
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>>27626420
>You raise your eyebrow at that but it went unnoticed.
> “Oh did you get a new friend?”
>Solara almost sounded cute like that.
> “To bad, he’s gonna die tonight.”
>You were about to say something when Solara’s flames get bigger.
> “Let’s just kill them and leave. I have better things to do than to than sit here and talk.”
>She jumps at Saddle Ranger ready to hit her with her flames.
> Matterhorn shot a beam at Solara, knocking her away and went after her with Ranger following.
>Spider-Woman used her web to throw a brick at The Wink as she teleports away while Spider-Woman followed.
>Fault Zone stares at you and does a ballerina twirl towards you.
> “I guess i’ll have to deal with you.”
>She raises her gauntlets as she bows.
> “May I know the name of my opponent?”
>You stay silent for a few moments.
“They call me Angel.”
>Dark purple energy surrounds her spikes as you created a couple of angels flying above you.
> “I guess I’ll have to clip your wings, so to speak.”
>She ran towards you as you sent your wingmen towards her.
>She jumped over them while twirling gracefully.
>You formed a blade in your hand ready to strike her.
>She slams her gauntlets on the ground, destroying the floor and causing me to stumble.
>Taking advantage, Fault Zone struck my chest and sent me crashing into a desk.
>You could feel a nail or two pierce your back.
> “Are you dead yet?”
>You groan and try to get up.
>You rise to your feet as Fault Zone stabs your remaining wingman.
> “There you go. It would be boring if you died to soon.”
>You focus your energy to form the hardlight armor around you, as the downed angel disintegrates.
>She smirks while performing a curtsy.
> “Let’s try that again.”
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>>27626680
That's the next update. gonna have a fight scene tomorrow. Thoughts on this part?
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>>27584387
>"When Camp Everfree is in danger of closing down, the MY LITTLE PONY EQUESTRIA GIRLS use their newfound super abilities and throw a Crystal Gala fundraiser to show their support and help save camp!"

>newfound super abilities
>Super abilities
GUYS!
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>>27626720
Fix your dialogues m8. You write all in first person and then you convert it to second person right?
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>>27626720
Bretty güd mate, just a bit of person slip here and there.
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>"Sweetie, guess who wants some d--honey? Where are you? ...My boyfriend's missing, and there's a note lying on the table. Yeah, that's TOTALLY not ominous. 'Spiderwoman, I have stolen your boyfriend. I'll be waiting at the usual place. Ahahahaha. Sincerely yours, Octavia.' That BI--oh wait, there's more. 'P.S., please see me to discuss you grades.' Ugh. I just HAD to have one of my college professors as my archenemies, didn't I?"

"Not that I don't appreciate being treated to some coffee, but are you sure it was a bright idea to 'kidnap' me? You know how Sunny can get."
>"Quite sure. This way ensures that not only will she show up, but also more quickly as well. Sunset, while bright, seems to have developed...an unfortunate taste for you. Not that there's anything wrong with you, mind. Simply, she's been indulging in you far too often that her work's suffering for it. Hopefully, we can come to a compromise."
"Yeah...so, uh, just gonna address the elephant in the room, how the hell did I not notice that you're a chick?"
>"An unflattering suit and trench coat usually meant for mean, my hair being tucked away enough that I could possibly be mistaken for a pretty man...it's hard to say, really. Lord knows I certainly wasn't trying to conceal myself in anyway. And before you ask, no, I'm not interested in you..."
"Thank you god."
>"Much."
"What?"
>"Nothing."
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>>27627024
>>27626936
I'm trying to work on it. I have a problem were I always start a sentence with "You".
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>>27627025

Fuck, forgot my name!
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>>27627059
I have the same issue. I also use "you are so and so" too much in my other greens.

Trying to work on it with this one
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>>27627252
It's one of the reasons why I'm writing this green.
I'll go though it tomorrow and update the pastebin.
Find it weird no one pointing out the 3 villains I introduced
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>>27627294
well I mean, it's kinda obvious who you picked to be under the masks, and I'm confuzzled who they're supposed to be so I can't say anything
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>>27627315
The names are from Marvel: Rise of the Imperfects.
I looked up some villains and remembered the game and decided to use them.
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>>27627352
I loved that game!
I have to get Hazmat in here now...
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>>27627360
I say go for it. I'm trying to think of who Lemon and Indigo will be from that game
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We went a bit low here.
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>>27628239
Ye
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>>27627352
Oh man, now there's a fucking game I haven't heard of in a while
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>>27627025
I'm fucking dying.
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>>27628239
Fuck that's hot.
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I found a very lewd image
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>>27630848
belly button!
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>>27630848
Have a cookie.
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>>27630848
L-lewd!
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>>27630848
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>>27614411
ok right now im working on a small update gonna post soon
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>>27614411
>>27631316
>Still be Anon, a sleepy one but still Anon
>just be eating cereals because you are too lazy to make a sandwich or something like that
>infront of you is your father reading the newspapaer, which suddenly claims your attention via the headline
>“Masked Hero saves Bank from Spiderwoman and her accomplice“
>after reading it you cant believe what the Daily Bugle is trying to pull off
>not only are they framing Brawl as undoubtedly heroic, they also claim that Spiderwoman and most importantly (to you) YOU were trying to rob the bank
„WHAT. THE. FUCK?!“
>“Well I was wondering how long it would take you. So, what did really happen? Did Spiderwoman really attack him first?“
„No, she just tried to keep him from beating a criminel to death, but apparently he thought she might be a worthy opponent and started attacking her.“
>this causes your father tu huff „Typical fext, no good for anything except violence.“
>instead of commenting about that remark of your father you just finish eating, grab your schoolbag and make your way to school
>you wonder how Smile will react on that headline, but you will have to wait for lunch to talk to him about it

>besides that nothing really that special happened until luch
>as you enter the cafeteria you look areuond to spot Smile
>and then you spot him
>like always, ath the end of the hall and sitting alone at a table
>you sigh and sit yourself down right next to him
„So, have you read the Daily Bugle today?“
>guess you should have started with a „hi“ first, since he just perked up at hearing your voice
>“Well, you know i dont read nor watch the news. Why are you asking anyway?“
„Okay, long article short: You are a hero without any flaws and me and Spiderwoman are bankrobbers.“
>this casts a puzzled look on Smiles face
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>>27631542
>“And?“
>sometimes you just dont know what to do with Smile...
„And?! They are lying dude!“
>“OH MY GOD! Everyone hold on, newspapers are lying!“ is the only respond coming from him besides an exaggerated look of surprise and shock on his face
> you were going to insult him for not taking this serious if it wouldnt have been for you seeing Rainbow Dash, captain of most sportteams of the school, heading towards your table and almost all of her friends looking in your direction,especially Pinkie Pie whos not even trying to hide it
>“Hi Anon“
„Hi Rainbow Dash, what are you doing here? Is there something you want to talk about?“
>this causes Rainbow to be nervous for some reason
>“Well yeah, but not with you, but with him.“
>she simply points at Smile whos more than just irritated
>“What? Me? Why?“ is all he gets out
>“Look, I dont know how to say this. I know about you declying all those invitations to parties from Pinkie and I think you should better accept atleast ONE.“
>Smile still has he bit of a puzzled impression on his face
>“Why? You make it sound like she would harm me if I dont go to a party. What is she gonna do? Follow me on my way home and tranquilize me with a rug of chloroform and then drag me to a party while I'm unconscious?“
> Rainbow Dash just scratches her kin. „Well... She never did something like that, but on the other hand no one ever refused to go to parties as hard as you did so.... maybe?“
>as you look at Smile you see he had a 10 mile stare
>and then you hear him say something that you almost didnt catch
> “....uh.... thats kinda hot“
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>>27631549
You're getting better, keep it up
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>>27632118
thanks though i just realised i kinda slightly messed up for example i wanted to mention that smile is infact an albino since i did not get a chance to address is actual appeareance besides height and eyecolour aswell as muscle mass
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>>27632189
plus one of my bigger problems is i want to have smile hook up with someone eventually but have no idea who
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>>27632385
Good luck with that
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Hope everyone is having a good day. Enjoying some nice green while I sit around at work waiting for a call.
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>>27633252
My day is going alright.
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Anyone here?
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>>27633798
I'm here and will have some green posted soon
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>>27624898
>After around half an hour of swinging through the city, you reach the train station
>You take a look around
>Rusted old carts
>Decripit tanks filled with rain water
>This place brings back memories
>Here is where you trained when you gained your powers
>You partially lifted carts
>You practiced your zip-linning
>Sharp shooting cans and bottles
>Good times
>You decide to start your new training course with a strenght test
>You walk up to one of the carts
>You slide your hand on it
>Good old Molly the trolley
>How many times you tried lifting her
>Never quite could
>You could turn her over
>But that was it
>But today
>Today things are different
>You grab the cart and slowly lift it
>It's easier than you remember
>You barely strain yourself
>You put it back down
>You walk around it, examining it
>Finally you stop
>You jump into the air
>Surprisingly, you almost double your usual length
>You shoot two strands of webs on roof of the cart
>You try to pull it up
>Although it isn't as easy as you lifting it, you easily manage to lift the cart in the air
>You let it go and you fall on your feet
>You look around
>You see a nice looking tank, around 30 meters from you
>You shoot a web at it
>And you hit it
>You giggle with excitement
>Turns out this suit does amplify your powers quite a lot
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>>27634266
>Next up is something you have no experience in
>Producing tendrils
>Sure you've done it twice, but it was by acident
>Time for the real deal
>You look at your hand
>You concentrate
>Foce
>You visualize the tentacle appearing from your hand
>Nothing
>Huh...
>You look at a cart, realtively close to you
>You shoot a web at it
>Nothing special
>You swing your hand again, like you'd shoot a web at it
>But without actually shooting one
>Again nothing
>You breathe deeply
>You throw your hand towards the cart
>Without much intention, just pure reflex
>A tentacle shoots out from your sleeve and dents the side of the cart
>It slowly retracts back
>You do it again
>Again it shoots out and hits the cart
>This time you focus on it staying and trying to move it around
>Surely enough, it works
>You can barely lift it, but you are showing progress
>It feels like limb that has gone numb
>For now your control over it is rather limited
>But you are getting the hang of it
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>>27634270
>You manage to retract it back
>This time you do the same with your other arm
>Again it works
>And again, you can barely move it
>You retract it back
>You walk around the station
>Whenever you see a can or a bottle, you use your new found tentacles to pick them up
>It's tedious, but with each one you pick, it gets a little bit easier
>After the 15 or so, you can honestly say that you got the hang of it
>You place everything you've gathered in a row
>Standing back around 10 meters from your make-shift shooting range, you shoot a tentacle at the first bottle
>You barely hit it and in the process push the can next to it on the ground
>The speed of your tendrils isn't that impressive as well
>You put your focus on the other side of the shooting range
>This time you try to be more precise
>You throw your tentacle at the can and hit it
>Although it was more of a tap really
>But baby steps
>You do the same with each target you have
>Each time you use your tendrils, you get more precise
>You rearrange the gallery a couple of times, before finally deciding you've reached a sufficient level of bottle pushing
>You walk up to one of the cans and pick it up
>You throw it your hand a bit, looking around
>You decide to lightly throw it at one of the carts
>Before it hits the cart, you web it and pull it back to your hand
>You take a deep breath
>You throw it
>You extend one of your tentacles
>The can hits the cart and your tentacle is barely half way there
>You web your can back
>You the same thing, with much of the same effect
>You continue to do this more and more
>Each time getting a little bit closer to grabbing it
>When you finally manage to grab it, you do a little jump with joy
>You throw the can again, this time extending the other tentacle and repeat the whole process again and again
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>>27634275
>After somewhat mastering the art of can grabbing, it's time for the main task
>Getting the suit off
>You remember that it just sort of started oozing from somewhere and covering you
>Surely, you can take it off in much of the same manner
>You close your eyes and breathe
>You concentrate for a bit
>You can feel the suit taking a more liquid form and revealing your skin
>You open your eyes
>It's gone
>You decide to do it again
>This time, eyes open
>You focus a bit and you feel yourself being covered
>You can see it crawling on your hands, forming the sleeves of the jacket and gloves
>You look at your chest
>The jacket is closed up, with a big, white spider in the middle of it
>No zipper on it
>You focus a little more and the jacket opens itself up
>The alien has formed a black shirt underneath it
>You take off your hood, just to see if you can
>But with this look, you think the hood suits it better
>You put it back on and focus on retracting the suit
>This time it was quicker
>You do it a couple of times
>Finally, with the suit off, you walk off
>You have completed your training
>After a few steps a crazy idea hits you
>You put the suit back on and concentrate
>From within the jacket, about ten tentacles spur out
>With each one you start picking cans from the ground, throwing them and catching them
>It turns out the more they are the harder it is to do it
>In the end, you retract six of the tentacles and leave four out
>You are going to be scaring some evil-doers these days
>You take off your jacket and walk off
>You decide to visit a friend
>He's about 20 minutes away and you could use a walk
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>>27634289
"You'll never guess what happened today!"
>The room is silent
"I managed to stop a bank robbery! The commissioner even congratulated me!"
>You are met with the beeping of machines
>
>
"Also, yesterday, during the fight, an alien attached itself on me! Crazy right?"
>You are met with the beeping of machines
"When I want, it covers my body like a costume! It boost my powers and I can have tentacles if I want to. Plus, it doesn't look too bad either"
>
>
"Once a week, I'll be swinging around the commissioner's office to see if he has any intel on the arm dealers. "
>
>
>Although there is a lack of answers, you feel a sense of joy that you can share your day
>You hope that he can hear you
>You stand up and walk to the door
"I'll see you again soon, I promise."
>
>
>You walk out of the room


>You are sitting on the rooftop of your house
>Carving a small octopus figure
>In honour of your new found companion
>The thought of a living organism attaching itself to you might disturb some people
>But you've decided to look at it as part of your body's fauna
>You have bacteria in your stomach to help you process food
>Now you have an alien slime to help you fight crime
>Some might say it's not the same
>But some don't have tentacles
>You stop carving and look at the stars
>You are filled with a sense of cosmic justice
>Yesterday, you may have been pulverized
>But today you have a swanky new suit
>You smile and get back in your house
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Self-promotional bump
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>>27626680
>You stand there as she does a perioet.
> “Are you gonna stand there all night?”
>You glance around in every direction, trying to see for anything that could be used against her.
> “I’m starting to get a bit bored here.”
>You decided to try sneak up on her so you activate your shroud, completely disappearing from sight.
>She looks surprised as you run not at her but around the desks and try to get behind her.
>Before you could even reach her, she slams her gauntlets down causing another earthquake.
>The sudden quake and your running caused you to hit one of the tables causing your to deactivate your shroud.
>You saw her running towards you with her hands raised and the spike extending.
>You cross your arms over your head creating a shield to stop the attack but didn’t finish in time.
>As her spike touches your incomplete shield, you’re forced back against the wall.
>She walks calmly towards your downed form as you try to get up.
>Once she reaches you, she slams her foot into your chest.
> “You really aren’t good at this, are you?”
>Despite the pain you feel, you turn your head and look up at her.
“First official day on the job.”
>She looks at you in pity as her hand covers her mouth.
> “It’s sad that this is your first and last day on the job.”
>You hear a faint cracking and see a bright light flicker.
>Looking to your side, you see a broken wall and a busted control panel.
>You move your hand towards the panel.
> “Just to be clear. I don’t hate you but you’re just in my way.”
>An electrical current flows to your hand, changing the flow of power within you.
> “Any last words Angel?”
“Ever got tazed?”
>She looks confused as she lowers her arm slightly and you raised yours.
> “No I-”
>You released an electromagnetic shock wave, pushing her away from you.
>She lands on a desk as you rise to your feet.
> “Ever got tazed? Last time I fall for that.”
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>>27634816
>You look at your hand as lightning danced over it.
“Well at least you won’t be shocked the next time it happens.”
>You could see her just stare at you in a disappointing kinda way.
> “Did you really…”
“Yes, and I feel bad for saying that. Let’s just forget it and fight.”
>She nods and ran towards you while extending the spikes.
>Raising your hand, you begin to fire lightning bolts at her as she effortlessly dodges them.
>As she got closer, you gathered more energy and swung your arm forward.
>A bunch of grenades fly from your hand, landing in front of her path.
>Fault Zone continues to run while your grenades start to glow brighter.
>Once she gets close enough, she jumps as soon as the grenades explode.
>She twirls over the explosion like a graceful ballerina.
>The lightning around your arm grows brighter as she lands in front of you with her right arm raised.
>She swings her arm down intending to impale you on the spike.
>You toss a grenade in her face as you duck under the spike as pass her.
>The grenade explodes once you’re behind her.
>She was sent flying over you as you shot bolts at her while she was in mid-air.
>She lands on a desk, breaking it in many pieces.
>You stand still, waiting for the moment when the villain rises up and declare vengeance on the hero.
>......
>You really need to stop playing those games.
>You walk towards Fault Zone and find that she’s still awake but she’s just laying there.
“Not gonna get up?”
>She glares at you, frowning.
> “I can’t feel anything, you ass.”
>You hold your hands up in mock surrender.
“Sorry for asking, you’re the first superpowered villain I had to fight. All I fought before you were some thugs, muggers, the Power Ponies and Spider-Woman.”
>She gives you a dry look while raising one eyebrow.
> “You expect me to believe you fought the Power Ponies AND Spider-Woman.”
>Before you could say anything, The Wink appears with blades drawn.
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>>27634841
> “Die.”
>You move backwards to avoid the blades.
>The Wink grabs Fault Zone as you raise your hand and shot a shock wave at them.
>They disappear as Spider-Woman, Matterhorn and Saddle Ranger enter the room.
“Shit.”
>They looked around the room, at the destruction that was caused as Spider-Woman walked up to you and looked you over.
> “You ok?”
>You nod your head.
“I’m fine Spider-Woman.”
>She’s still looking you over.
> “Fault Zone might not be the strongest but she still can crush a person fairly easy.”
>You grab her hands and squeeze them gently.
> “I’m fine, my powers also heal me. So stop worrying.”
> “......OK.”
>Looking at Saddle Ranger and Matterhorn, you see them looking around the room.
“Everything ok?”
>Matterhorn looks up at you and waves you off.
> “Just looking at the damage you caused.”
“Sorry.”
> “Don’t worry, you caused less destruction than Zapp did when she first started. But something’s bugging me?”
>You grow a bit worried.
> “I don’t see any hardlight weapons you’ve thrown during your test. And I don’t see any trace of your blasts.”
>You knew she was smart but you didn’t think she was this observant.
> “So how did you beat her?”


Here's my next part. gonna take a day to figure out what will happen next. So thoughts?
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>>27634862
Not namefagging/10 :^]
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>>27635199
Thanks for pointing that out
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>>27634862
Forgot to put my name on this. Sorry
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NEIN!
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>>27594478
>Be Sunset Shimmer again.
>You’re currently being pressed against some random locker, not far from the lecture room you and Anon just hopped out of.
>To think you’ve just had your first kiss an hour ago, and now were heavily making out with the same person while being in a somewhat compromising position.
>It’s not like you couldn’t break free from his grasp at any time, it’s rather that you don’t want to.
>Your movements were limited just to the place where he’d like you to be.
>And it wasn’t his hands that hinder you, but his tongue.
>You wish to be guided into the position he’d know you and him would enjoy.
>Ever increasing your physical contact, but he was yet to grow bold enough to place his hand on your ass.
>You’re not sure how it would even feel.
>Just like how you were never able to imagine what kissing feels like.
>The soft feelings of someone elses lips on yours, the taste, the moisture, the closeness to someone whom you...
>Whom you...
>...
>Whom you care about.
>You ruined your own moment and break the kiss to place your head in his neck, taking in his scent.
>You could feel his accelerated heartbeat and slight panting from the kiss.
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>>27637187
>Just like your own body was doing to you.
>You care for him.
>Even just in your head the L-word is hard to use, because what if it’s not?
>You think you’re falling for him, but what if that’s not it.?
>What if...?
>“Sunset?”
>Him asking why you broke the kiss like that was no surprise, yet you had not good answer to give him.
>You look up to him (you’re actually about the same height, but from the way your body is angled at the moment you have to look up)
“Your heart is racing...”
>“Is it?”
>How can you take this..?
“Mine too...”
>You take his hand in yours and raise it up to your chest, not yet making it touch you..
>If he wants to, he’ll-
>He places the palm of his hand just in your cleavage.
>“Mhm...”
>He hums in confirmation of what you’ve told him, but you couldn’t help but be disappointed.
>You gave him the chance to get a feel, but he didn’t take it.
>You have to be more brazen about it.
“I can’t help but feel a little exposed here...”
>Do underline your words you look around the hallway.
“Maybe go somewhere more private?”
He pauses for a while.
>"My dorm is nearby."
>Jackpot
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>>27637195
2200 characters again, I have to split up stupidly again
god damnit.

So anyway, I have other material, but this time want to place it better, not to break this "scene" again
The other thing involves Spitfire and Misty Fly, but I push it back...
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its 2:04 am and I'm writing green instead of sleeping to be ready for work tomorrow.

again...
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>>27637223
I know that feel, bro
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Bumping the good bump
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>>27634841
>“I can’t feel anything"
Did Anon just cripple one of the shadowbolts?
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>>27638391
shocked her nerves. I'm not that cruel to the shadowbolts, I have plans for them
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>>27638416
If I know you, those plans er of a sexual nature.
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>>27638460
Possible, I already admitted to Sunset not being the only one who wants Anon
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Hey, I've been around here for some time and I just want to ask
How would you define a superhero?
Because there were some ideas about the kamenriders
In any case I'm asking because I'm thinking about a Yu-Gi-Oh! green in the style of the original 7 volumes. No card games, just bar games that end fatally.
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>>27637209
Your wording for these parts was kind of awkward.
And not cute-awkward, more weirdly worder awkward.
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>>27638622
Honestly i think anything is fine personally. Granted others have stronger opinions than my own
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>>27638969
You got that right.

How you been Mamoru?
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>>27638622
You are off your meds again, aren't you?
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Hi
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>>27638861
would you point out the flaws?
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>>27639251
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>>27639231
Should I take that as a "No, don't do it" ?
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>>27639314
if it makes you see things like that, stay off them, go ahead
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spider-bloke here?
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>>27639260
>>You wish to be guided into the position he’d know you and him would enjoy.
>>Ever increasing your physical contact, but he was yet to grow bold enough to place his hand on your ass.
>>Do underline your words you look around the hallway.

these are all really weirdly worded
they don't sound like things someone would think in their head during a heavy make-out session
Like, that first bit could just be "You want him to take charge" or something
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>>27639415
in my defense, the last one is a simple concentration error I had then spotted myself

we need some spider-blokyness
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>>27639398
No
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>>27639438
The bloke is dead, long live the bloke!
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>>27639455
I will never die
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[New thread loading, please hold...]
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>>27639468
Might want to get started on a new thread
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any love for this one?
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>>27639535
Xddddddddddddd
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>>27639497
>elf
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>>27639497
>>27639547
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>>27638622
I love me some season 0 Yami-no games
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>Do not go gentle into that good archive,
>Old threads should burn and rave at close of day;
>Rage, rage against the archiving of the thread.

>Though the bumpers at the end know dark is nigh,
>Because their words had forked no lightning they
>Do not go gentle into that good archive.

>Good writefags, the last bumps by, crying how bright
>Their frail writtings might have danced in a green text,
>Rage, rage against the archiving of the thread.

>Shitposters who caught and sang the greens in flight,
>And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way,
>Do not go gentle into that good archive.

>Readers, near death, who see with blinding sight
>Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be fags,
>Rage, rage against the archiving of the thread.

>And you, my thread, there on the last pages,
>Curse, bless, me now with your last posts, I pray.
>Do not go gentle into that good archive.
>Rage, rage against the archiving of the thread.
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im working on an update gona post it in the new thread
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A last hail for the lost thread!
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