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Fingerbang: The All-Purpose Humanized Thread #201 - Full Circle

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>Rarity gives you this look, telling you to describe your deepest darkest fantasy about her. She doesn't care what it may be and just wants to hear from you what you really, really like.
>"I know you fantasize about me, Darling." She softly hums to you. "And I... I just would like to know what it is that goes on in your... special dreams about me." Her mouth gently twists into a lip bite.
>She seems eager about this.
>Rarity won't judge you and is willing to encourage whatever it is you desire to do with her.
>She adds: "Give me every single solitary detail, Darling. Hold nothing back." Her eyes glowing and cheeks blushing.
>It doesn't even have to be fingerbanging under the gym bleachers this time, it can be literally anything your mind can imagine.
>Doesn't even have to be realistic, just literally every possibility and non-possibility imaginable.
>No limits, just dreams. No worrying about plot holes or restraints on one's physical abilities. No common sense, no fears, nothing like that.
>Rarity wants anything your mind can imagine. Go crazy with it to your heart's desire.
>What is it that you tell her?
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Welcome to the Equestria Girls & Humanized Thread! Anything with >no hooves is welcome and encouraged here. If you like to write, draw, read, or critique the humanized versions of the ponies, then this is the thread for you.

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>>27341643
thread 201 of 10000.
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>>27341654
we will get there eventually.
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>>27341676
>eventually
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>>27341643
>That prompt
Can someone write this? I'm too lazy to do it myself
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>>27341643
Could you imagine the contrast from Rarity's pink pussy and her snow white skin?

Wew!
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>>27341756
Every night
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>>27341756
She's so fragile looking in EQG. Imagine slowly penetrating her while you tenderly cradle her lithe body
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>>27341756
>>27342677
We are getting some good green material here.
...Writefags?
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>>27343092
I'll try if no one else does, tomorrow after work (so like 5 pacific time
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>>27343461
Well then,let's keep the thread bumped.
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>>27341643
"You sure, Rarity?"
>"Yes, go ahead Darling, don't hold back." Rarity says seductively.
"Alright..."
"Well basically I dream of me and you doing a standing anal full nelson on top of Mount Everest while you have anal beads and an octopus inside your pussy and you're squirting and screaming while I keep fucking your ass as hard as I can. Then I before I cum I turn super saiyan and bust a nut that rips through your insides with such a force that it gets Sweetie Belle pregnant."
>"Uh-uhm... Well, Darling, that sure sounds l-like fun..." She says in the most nervously confused manner.
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>>27343882
"Well basically I dream of me and you doing a standing anal full nelson on top of Mount Everest while you have anal beads and an octopus inside your pussy and you're squirting and screaming while I keep fucking your ass as hard as I can. Then I before I cum I turn super saiyan and bust a nut that rips through your insides with such a force that it gets Sweetie Belle pregnant."
What the actual fuck.
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>>27343882
>Then I before I cum I turn super saiyan and bust a nut that rips through your insides with such a force that it gets Sweetie Belle pregnant.
I don't even
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>>27343882
>Then I before I cum I turn super saiyan and bust a nut that rips through your insides with such a force that it gets Sweetie Belle pregnant.
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XD that's hilarious any other weird dreams we should know about?
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>>27343882
>Then I before I cum I turn super saiyan and bust a nut that rips through your insides with such a force that it gets Sweetie Belle pregnant.
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>>27343882
Without the super saiyan and octopus part, I would totally like to see this go down. Preferably deep down.
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>>27318845
"How, um, are you doing okay, Twi?"
>Sunset almost started when Twilight's hand squeezed hers lightly, and she glanced over to see the other girl regarding her.
>"I'm... Conflicted. Thish isn't going how I thought it would. Shomewhere between projected worst and best case scenarios..."
>'There's always shades of gray where people are concerned, Twi...' Sunset thought, still surprised by the girl's naivety, sometimes.
"Well, that's not all bad, right?"
>Twilight slowly nodded, Sunset's eyes focusing back on the road and downshifting to take a turn.
>"I'm not... I'm unshure. Everything's shtill... Nothing feels like it'sh changed." Sunset grimaced as Twilight's struggles to make herself understood clearly frustrated her.
>Flexing her fingers wide, she waited.
>Eventually, Twilight's slipped between hers, and she closed hers gently.
"Some things are different, now, Twi..."
>They drove in silence as they navigated the broad streets of Canterlot, but Sunset could tell some of the tension had bled out of Twilight.

That's all for this one for now. Since the theme's Rarity this thread, I'll switch back to the Lemon story, as she has a scene coming up.

Pastebin for this one is http://pastebin.com/L1s2rSdW
Tentative title is Dewdrops
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>>27343882
More
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>>27343826
Sorry, I don't speak Greek.
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I want to suck on your trans bitch dick do hard and have you come all over my tits in front of your parents when I first meet them.
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>>27343882
Wait, what?
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what are some of the best stories posted? or atleast some of your all time favorites
the girls doesnt matter, i just want to read something
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>>27346697
Look for anything by Sergeant Nonymous. He's the only writefag that doesn't fool around with his green.
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>>27346697
AlexanderGrey's stuff is pretty good.
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>keep looking for relation and emotion focused rarara greens
>literally all smut and nothing but
It hurts to live...
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>>27347604
Well this is the fingerbang general.

Also I said I'd get off at 5 but friends want to see civil war so I delay the writing

It wasnt goong to be posted tonight anyway, I was going to start writing at 5
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>>27347604
Write it yourself
>inb4 I can't
gg
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>>27348400
Shit >Avenger movies
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>>27341756
I think Rarity, Applejack, Sunset and Twilight would have the best looking pink pussies

Pinkie Pie's would look weird because she's pink all over pink pussy, pink pubes and pink skin

Fluttershy has pink pubes too (if see doesn't shave) but other than that would look alright

Rainbow Dash's pussy would be too much
Pink pussy, blue skin and rainbow pubes
Too much going on down there
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Been a while, so here.
I'll be working on this intermittently tonight, probably get a couple posts in.
http://pastebin.com/CTKfug3d

>"I just... Come on, you guys were 'discussing' me, what am I supposed to think?" He glances into Octavia's worried eyes.
>Vinyl presses her face into Flash's crotch, and he stiffens.
>She takes a deep, drawn out sniff, her breath coming out in a gusty sigh.
>Flash stares at her as her eyes wander a bit before focusing on his.
>"Vinyl, what the fuck is wrong with you?" Flash asks with a chuckle, and Vinyl blushes slightly before giving him a rueful grin.
>"Just, um, you know... Dammit, I'm fucking horny, okay?" She looks past him to a flustered Octavia. "Can you just tell him, already?"
>Octavia, slightly lost in thought, snaps back to attention with a start. She gives Vinyl a cross look before hesitantly meeting Flash's questioning eyes.
>"Sorry, love, I'm just woolgathering, I suppose. Well, you remember our intent was to, get you back on your feet?"
>Flash nods slowly. "Yeah, and try to set me up with someone."
>Octavia smiles hesitantly. "Well... Yes. Forget about that part."
>Flash's eyes narrow slightly, and Octavia reaches out, her hand brushing his cheek.
>"What do you mean? Forget about finding someone I can be with? You two don't feel comfortable doing that for me?"
>Octavia smiles slowly at him. "Well, we already have, haven't we?"
>Flash feels Vinyl's arms slip around him from behind, and Octavia leans in, her mouth gently covering his.
>"We think we fit the bill pretty well, hmm Flash?" Vinyl murmurs into his neck as she nuzzles him lightly, and he shivers as her teeth graze the nape of his neck.
>"W-wait, what?" Flash's voice is small and confused When Octavia slowly breaks off the kiss.
>She smiles softly at him, thumb rubbing his cheekbone as Vinyl's hands slowly caress his chest.
>"We decided to do what we should have the moment this occurred to us." Octavia murmurs, watching Flash's face slowly relax.
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>>27333142
>Nobody in the gym is brave enough to make a sound during the first couple of minutes of darkness. They all remain frozen in the same position they were in before the blackness engulfed the room, tensing their muscles and doing everything they can to sharpen their hearing.
>Anything to know whether or not they’re safe enough to not need to run through the dark. Everyone quickly discovers that doing so is among the last things they want.
>The gunshots become more distant with an increased amount of echo with each shot.
>Sunset quiets down her shaky breathing, expecting literally anything to happen next. She soon hears the others in the gym start to murmur in a collective panic, and desperately tries to get her eyes to adjust to the darkness so she can see… anything.
>”…Rarity?” Sweetie Belle’s voice croaks.
>A little bit of shuffling around can be heard before the young girl’s sister responds. “Shhh… I got you, darling. I’m right here.” Rarity’s voice would have sounded more reassuring without the crying soon erupting out of many sources in the blackened room.
>Sunset listens for any hints that people might be getting up and moving around.
>”Get your phone!” Norman’s voice calls out to someone.
>Soon after Sunset hears this, she notices numerous rectangles of light appear, speckling the darkness like stars in a clear night sky.
>The total darkness is gone for now.
>It may be hard to make out everyone’s faces even to the point of it being hard to tell who is who, but the expressions of terror are more recognizable than familiar features of the faced of loved ones.
>”HAZEL!” April’s voice soon echoes throughout the halls. “HAZEL ANSWER ME!”
>A rancid growling soon comes after, prompting April to call for Officer Silver and Officer Rust next.
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>>27341643

>Rarity gives you this look, telling you to describe your deepest darkest fantasy about her. She doesn't care what it may be and just wants to hear from you what you really, really like.
>"I know you fantasize about me, Darling." She softly hums to you. "And I... I just would like to know what it is that goes on in your... special dreams about me." Her mouth gently twists into a lip bite.

Rarity as Bettie Page. In lingerie, long gloves, seamed stockings & ultra-high fuck-me heels.

She has me photograph her; all the while, her lewd poses get me hard. She notices this, strips me naked and proceeds to screw me senseless.
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>>27350521
Wew lad, that is some good taste there.
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>>27349740
Yessss.
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>>27349505
there for the friends
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>>27342677
There all like that
EQG girls are like 80% legs, which is sexy as fuck.
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>>27351566
her especially. Because she's so prissy and her ,mannerisms give a gossamer feel
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>>27341643
bump
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>>27349740
>"So anyway, Flash, you feel like taking on a couple girlfriends? We're house trained." Vinyl whispers jokingly, her tongue lapping his earlobe. 'Mostly.'
>He shivers at the contact, his eyes closing briefly before opening back up to see Octavia staring into them.
>"I know it will be complicated, and we'll have to work hard to get it to work, but..."
>Octavia glances down, the hand not tenderly stroking Flash's cheek balling up in her skirts.
>"... I think we could be happy together. All three of us."
>Octavia's head jerks back up, the words in her mind coming out of Flash's mouth.
>She watches as his lips slowly curl up, giving her a lopsided smile.
>"Oh, Flash, I'm so happy you feel that way..." Octavia sniffs lightly, and Flash can see tears start to well up in the corners of her eyes.
>Vinyl sighs softly in relief. Her arms tighten around Flash, and she nuzzles into the crook of his neck.
>She's glad she's not going to have to give this feeling up.
>Knowing there would have been a big hole in her heart if this had gone differently, Vinyl rests a little easier against Flash.
>Although the insistent feeling spreading from her crotch is keeping her from really relaxing.
>She fights the good fight, but her needs win out after a depressingly short time.
>With an annoyed huff into Flash's back, Vinyl's hands slide slowly lower, her chest insistently rubbing into his back.
>Octavia's eye twitches as she watches Vinyl's southern progress.
>"Just, stop." Octavia murmurs, Flash's eyes narrowing as Vinyl's hands ruck up his shirt, stroking his belly.
>He leans into Octavia's neck, nuzzling, his own hands roaming slowly over her back.
>"What? Who's gonna see? Mac and Rainbow are off in post coital la-la land. Anon, Lemon and Flutters are busy..."
>Octavia glances cautiously back, seeing that Vinyl's correct.
>The three sitting behind them are huddled together, low groans punctuating their languid movements.
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>>27353916
>She blushes fiercely, and it doesn't help when Flash nips at the long stretch of neck her turned head is exposing to him.
>"Flash..." She turns back, a hand slipping off his side to turn his face up to hers.
>Vinyl grins over his shoulder as she watches them kiss. 'Oh yeah, Thundercats are go...'
>"Besides, even if they do see us, think of it as a preview for our... Huh, does six people make it a sextsome?"
>Flash breaks off the kiss, looking blankly into Octavia's equally bewildered face.
>Their lips quirk almost in unison, and they both burst out laughing
>"What?" Vinyl asks, pouting as she feels Flash's abdomen flex against her hands.
>Flash grins at Octavia, his eyes twinkling with mirth.
>But she can see something else smoldering in his blue orbs.
>"I think it's just an orgy at that point..." Flash mutters distractedly, his hands falling to Octavia's waist.
>She hums throatily as she feels his hands slip under her shirt, rucking it up as they slide up her sides.
>Octavia mirrors his hands on Vinyl, biting her lip as she feels her smooth skin against her palms.
>"That's what I'm talkin' about..." Vinyl mutters happily, her fingers sliding lower, working at Flash's waist to divest him of his belt.
>She grins happily over his shoulder, watching Octavia's eyes follow her progress as she unbuttons Flash's pants, zipping down his fly.
>Vinyl frees his manhood with a tug, feeling it pop up out of his boxers.
>Octavia's eyes take on a hungry cast as she watches Vinyl's hand stroke their man's shaft languidly.
>'Ours...' She thinks to herself, a giddy feeling bubbling up in her chest.
>"Jeez, Flash, you're ready to rock, hmmm?" Vinyl murmurs throatily, feeling him throb in her grip."You-ooohoohoo!"
>Vinyl's cut off as Octavia's fingers trap her nipples, pinching them tightly.
>"Oh course he is, Vinyl... He knows where this is going..." Octavia whispers, leaning forward and sighing into Flash's neck as she feels his hands start to massage her breasts.
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>>27356031
That's it for now. Gotta go to work soon, and I don't want to have to toddle off for ten hours right in the middle of the scene.

I'll attempt to get this whole scene out tonight, but it might not be done until Sunday. I'm actually glad I took time off from the story, now. It feels fresh to me, and I feel like I can push it closer to it's conclusion.

Yall have a good day!

(This picture is fucking hilarious)
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>>27341643
bump
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>>27357787
And again
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I'm back from the dead assholes. Congrats on breaking the big 2 hundo, btw. I've got a bit of inspiration that I typed up a couple days ago. Just gonna test the waters here in a few.
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>RIIINGRIIINNGRIINGRIINGRIING
>In a daze, you draw your eyes open slowly, eyeing the alarm clock.
>6:50am
>Time to prep up for school.
>An arm extends from under the sheets, reaching out to the clock. When it reaches its mark, you slam it down on the “snooze” button.
>With that, music starts playing from the radio, making your endeavor to resume your sleep futile.
>https://youtu.be/B8NCwteej8Q
>Although you love this song, you rise up from the bed and yank the plug from the socket.
>Daily morning routine for a certain Mr. Anon Y. Mous, 1st year of PVHS.
“Anon!”
>Something hits the window of your room, presumably a pebble. Stepping over to look out, you see Norman, dressed and ready for school, leaning against your older sister’s car.
>You wave, signalling you already know the typical message.


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>”Man, that party was lit, Anon. All the girls…the fine collection of tits and ass…….”
“You don't tire out being a pervert, now do you, Norm?”
>”Huh? What do you mean ‘pervert?’”
“Fine, ‘blossoming adolescent.’”
>”That doesn't seem right, either!”
“Good lord, shut it.”
>You casually pull your hand out of your pocket and you fist makes contact with Norman’s chin, resulting in him flying about 20ft in the air.
>You don't question the physics of the results of your attacks, due to your rather violent childhood. People have told you that your mother was the same, but you don't see it.
>Norm lands next to you and immediately is back on his feet, “The fuck was that about?!”
“It was too early to deal with you being a pervert.”
>”Again with calling me a pervert?”
>The two of you walk through the gates of Ponyville High School. Rather desolate and covered in graffiti.
>PVHS is known for holding a large number of delinquents. The majority of the student body are expulsions from other schools and summing up to a largely female school.
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>>27359713
>Not even two steps through the gates and you're already stopped by a small group of students.
>Typical high schoolers hootin and hollerin.
>The thing that sticks out like a sore thumb is the rather huge man in the front of the group.
“Is there any reason why y’all are stopping me from getting breakfast?”
>You cock an eyebrow.
>The man steps forward and you catch a closer look at his face.
“Damn you're fucking ugly.”
>”Here we go again....” Norman sighs.
>The small band of boys starts shouting and going crazy over your remark.
>”I've heard stories about you, Anonymous, and you come into this school walking tall and proud like you’re above the upper classman.”
>You lean over to Norm.
“Any idea what this guy is going on about?”
>”I think he wants to fight you, Anon.” Norman states.
“Oi, are you gonna cut to the chase or what, Jason Voorhees?”
>The crowd gets even wilder at your savagery.
>“BIG MAC IS GONNA DO YOU IN, NOW!”
>”WHEEEEW”
>”Anonymous is a savage!
>Your blood boils at the sound of you being called by your full name.
>“...E’nuff talk, Anonymous, let's f-”
>You cut Big Mac off with a punch to the face. You finish him with a drive into the ground, making him resemble an ostrich or emu, you don't really have time to remember bird, right now.
>Everyone is cut silent. The shock of a second year being put down.
>The homeroom bell chimes, signalling the start of class.
“Looks like we didn't get to score some breakfast before homeroom, eh, Norm?”
>”Yeah…” he sighs, “seems about right.”
“Any idea how we got stuck with this school again?”
>”Something about the bus not wanting to drive through the neighborhood.”
“Right…..I keep forgetting.”
>”You always forget….”


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>Later, by a river.
>Lunch time.
>You and Norm are chilling by the bank.
“I think it was a good idea to have lunch here.”
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>>27359724
>”Sure thing…..if I could say the same for that little group you've done in right there.” Norman shoots a thumb in the direction of beaten and bruised classmate.
“What? They came at me first.”
>You state with a full mouth.
>”They always come at you first….”
“At least it was just one group, instead of practically the whole school. I don't get why everyone has a bone to pick with me. I'm only one guy.”
>”Yeah….one guy who took on 10 guys on his own and proceeded to use the river to water board the frontman of the group.”
“He did provoke me.”
>”I really don't get the saying your whole name, deal.”
“I just find it disrespectful. Like, if it's not close friends or family.”
>”Seems legit, I guess.”
>You spot something floating down the river.
>Upon a slight focus of sight, it seems like it's a flour sack containing something…..and that something is moving in a panicking fashion.
>Shit.
>You start and run for the river. You jump in just ahead of the sack and catch it by the drawstring.
>Pulling you and the cargo back onshore, you open it and make a rather dark discovery.
>An infant.
>It seems like it's living and breathing….but rather...peacefully.
“What the -”
>”The fuck was that about, Anon?”
>Norman spots what in your arms.
>”Uhhhh….what's with the baby?”
“I honestly have no clue. It was just in this sack.”
>”Are you fucking kidding me? An abandoned baby? This is the most cliché Monday possible.” Norm facepalms.
>Could've been worse, at least the baby isn't dead the both of you aren't accused of murder.
>You sense someone's shadow loom over you.
>With that, you spin on the ball of your foot and kick the side of the grunt that was standing behind you, child still in arms.
“Burying Kick!”
>With that the man flies into the side of the hill is is stuck in like a lawn dart.
>'Asshole, no one puts me in his shadow.'
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>>27359741
>You feel the baby stir in your arms. Looking down, you find that it's awake and cooing happily, as if it found its parent or some shit like that.
>In an instant, it jumps and crawls around to your back, holding onto your shoulder.
>”Okay, I think I've seen this in an anime.”
“I was thinking the same, bruv.”
>Your phone suddenly vibrates and https://youtu.be/gnnIrTLlLyA begins playing.
“Time to head back, so much for lunch.”
>You pick up your trash and dump it on the still unconscious bodies of the gang that attacked you.
>Later that evening.
>”uhhh….Anon?”
“What is do, sis?”
>”What's with the baby on your head?” She points worriedly.
>You shrug
“I dunno, just found ‘em in the river near by the school. Then it kinda just stuck with me the whole day.”
>”Well you’re being rather nonchalant about that.”
“Eh. Just go with the flow of things.”
>Your sister’s eyes widen. “Go? With the flow?!”
”Yeah, go with the flow.”
>She let out a sigh and walked off, dropping the conversation.
>You check the time and notice it's time to head up to bed.


>Opening the door with a yawn, you stop.
>Reasoning, the woman dressed like a maid in your room.
>’Now I really think I've seen this in an anime.’
>”It's highly likely.” She states.
>’Did she….’
>”I see you've found a friend, Master.”
“Master? You mean me?”
>”No,” The maid sharply responds, “I'm referring to the child on your shoulder, imbecile.”
“Excuse, me?”
>”Now,” she extends her arms out, “come on, it's time to head on home, Master.”
>The baby looks away, and coos in a rejecting manner.
>With this, you die of laughter.
>The maid doesn't seem very amused, though. “This is no laughing matter, human.”
>Well that brings a change of mood.
“What do you mean by that? We're not LARPing in my room, toots, unless you want some of this in bed.”
>”Cute, flattering even.” You see a small flash and dive away.
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>>27359754
>Recovering, you see that your nightstand have been cut in half, along with the alarm clock.
“Thanks, I've been wanting to break that for the longest.”
>”I don't care for sarcasm, scum.” She holds up a rapier at a ready.
>This bitch is off the rocker.
“Looks like you take LARPing too far, mate. I'll say this once, get out of my house, before you regret it.”
>”Oh?” A smirk forms on her face. “So the worm wants to fight, now.”
“I swear, I've seen this in a fucking anime, somewhere.”
>In a teal blur, she lunges at you.
>’She’s quick!’
>You step to the side and stick your leg out and trip her.
>With a yelp and a crash, your bookshelf bit the dust. So much for your Harry Potter collection.
>At least she isn't holding that rapier, anymore.
>Sprawled out on the floor, in the rubble of books and wood, the maid looks up, with a scared innocent look. “What are you?”
>Judging from her shock, and viewing angle, you probably look extremely menacing.
“It ain't my style to harm a girl, especially one who’s name I didn't catch. I'll give you a second chance, will you please leave my house?”
>She looked you in the eye, this may not end well. “Eat shit, fool.”
>You grab her by the collar of her blouse.
“Alright, just give me your name.”
>You feel a sharp pain as her heel hits you in the gut, sending you into the bed.
>’Getting rather noisy here.’
>You remembered something….where's the kid at?
>Cheerful cooing in your ear indicates that it is obviously still on your back.
“I really don't get why you find this any fun.”
>You grab your bed sheet and quickly wrap the baby in a makeshift bag and hang it out the window.
“Alright, now that the kid is out of harms way, I can really deal wi-”
>The maid jumps on top of you, pinning you down.
>You blush heavily as her tits lightly smother your face.
>’This isn’t fair in anyway, shape, or form.’
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>>27359774
>You push her off of you with your legs into the wall.
>Judging from that gasp, the wind got knocked out of her sails.
>Pinning her arms behind her back, you win.
“Alright….”
>You draw a deep breathe.
“....you’re fucking name, asshole.”
>”Angry, I see?” The maid snarks.
>You smack her across the back of her head.
>”Ow, what happened to “hitting girls whose name you don't know?’”
“You're testing my patience.”
>You slam her face into the floor.
“And you destroyed my room.”
>”We destroyed your room.”
“And you used your tits on me.”
>”I WHAT?!”
“Do I need to?”
>”No you don’t, I've heard right.”
”About your name, now.”
>”What the Hell is so important about knowing my name?”
>You stop and think it all over.
“Well…for one. You clearly did some breaking and entering into my home. Two, you're rather beautiful, regardless of the maid outfit. Three, you're the first woman to get me winded.”
>Her face turns red. “Okay, my name is Trixie, designated maid servant to Princess Flurry Heart, Archangel heir.”
>You've seriously gotta find out the anime you've seen this from.
”You're crazy, so much for you being a 10/10.”
>”Excuse, me, you cur?” She begins squirming in your grip, “I gave you my name AND title, can you please let me go and get that protrusion from your gro-...”
>Damn, you didn't know faces get redder than apples.
>She stays frozen, with her jaw dropped. Pretty sure she realised what it was.
>”....Is that…?”
>You nod your head
“Yes, that’s my hard-on. Impressed?”
>You sit there and witness her mental breakdown.
>Poor soul must be a kissless virgin, just like Norm….without the perversion.
>You forgot something.
>Shit, the kid is still hanging from the window.
>Jumping up and reaching for the bed sheets, you find the baby asleep.
“I need to find a spot for you to sleep.”
>You step on over to the still body of Trixie and poke her side with your foot.
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>>27359801
Welp, that's all I've got for y'all at this time. Don't really have a name for it since it kinda just sprung up in my mind a couple days back. Laters, hopefully I come back with more.
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>>27359801
Christ all this anon needs is a tendency to talk in the third person, and he'd be the punchmaster.
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>>27359833
>>27359801
Holy hell, I'm glad to see you're back. This green is looking really good, I'm very interested to see more.
Promise me you won't disappear like sleepover anon. Please?
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>>27359833
Absolutely based
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>>27359724
>"Hey you, lets fight"
"Them's fightin' words"
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>>27362238
I'm daring you to cross this line

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zkzWyOaS8kU
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The one with the maid seems interesting
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>>27350372
>Everyone grows quiet as the growling draws closer to the darkened room. Some point the screens of their phones towards the entrance, giving it a slight spotlight that does little to ease their fears from wondering what might await them in the dark.
>The only indication of any new developments taking place is April’s panicked yelling. “Silver! Silver!”
>None of the people she calls out to respond.
>The officer can be heard running around through the hallways in search of something. Her pace quickens with each step, and the light from her flashlight soon flooding the surfaces of the walls and ceiling. This light is a lot dimmer than the flashlight she left behind at Canterlot High.
>The people in the gym start to call out to her as she gets closer.
>”Snow?” Officer Silver’s voice distantly sounds from somewhere outside.
>April stops dead in her tracks and spins around to try to face the voice of her comrade.
>”Snow! Rust and I need help right now!” His call is followed by a couple of gunshots.
>April looks back at the civilians in the gymnasium, knowing from the fearful looks on their faces that they heard the same growling rolling through the halls that she had heard. She knows that the last thing they want to see is her leave them behind when there is a prominent threat right here in the station.
>Not to mention any of the other zombies that could enter with that door April remembers being wide open during the last hectic minute. She wants to kill Silver for opening it to kill one of the zombies, though she can’t blame him since the zombie he shot was following some cables over to a fuse box.
>No more growling can be heard in the hallways.
>”Yo Snow…” Another officer’s voice sounds from around a corner. “I can see here from my post. You’re good.”
>”SNOW!” Officer Silver is now sounding a lot more terrified as April starts back over to the garage area. “Help!”
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>>27317418

>”Anyways gorgeous…would you get mad at me if I invited you to the dancefloor?”
>You turn your head over your shoulder and spot Anon dancing with Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash and Applejack.
>If Anon saw you like this he’d probably get angry and make a scene if he saw you dancing with Chad.
”I-I don’t know Chad.”
>”Aww, too shy to dance? Come on…”
“I can’t.”
>”Well then, perhaps we can find another way to have fun, if it’s okay with you?”
>You ponder about the outcomes of his proposal.
“How well do you sing?”
>”Sing? Oh, you want me to sing you something at the karaoke booth right?”
>You smile at him in a seductive way.
“How did you know?”
>He lets out a chuckle.
>”Alright then…”
>You don’t see Fluttershy or Sunset Shimmer at the dancefloor.
“Oh, I forgot that my friends are still in there.”
>”Then my buddies and I can join them as well, it’ll be fun! I promise!”
>Fluttershy always gets nervous whenever a cute boy is around her.
>But she’s been telling you how much she desires a boyfriend.
“I suppose that’s true.”
>Chad waves his arm at two guys who were talking to each other to attract their attention.
>All of a sudden, those same two guys who are just as big and muscular as Chad walk towards him.
>”Rarity, meet my friends. Shining Fury and Sparkling Blitz.”
>”Yo.”
>”Sup…”
“Hello there…wait a minute,” you say before looking at Chad, “I assume Chad is not your real name.”
>”It’s short for Chaos Diamond, but my friends and myself prefer Chad.”
“Alright then Chad. Perhaps I can introduce your friends to some of mine. They’re in the Karaoke Room by themselves.”
>”They won’t be for long.” Shining Fury says in a flirty tone, joined by Chad and Blitz’s laughs.
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>>27363864
Hopefully Anon smashes a chair onto Chad again
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>>27363864

>As soon as you enter to the karaoke room you find Fluttershy and Sunset Shimmer having fun with the karaoke machine.
>”Whoo! I got 96% for this song Fluttershy!” Sunset Shimmer happily says, “I’m close to beating your score.”
>As soon as Fluttershy notices you accompanied by the three handsome guys she goes silent.
>”Oh! It’s you Rarity…” Sunset Shimmer says before noticing the guys, “are these some friends of yours?”
“Oh, hey girls. Let me introduce you to my new friends Chad, Shining Fury and Sparking Blitz…they wanted to try the karaoke machines.”
>Sunset Shimmer lifts an eyebrow.
>”Your ‘new’ friends huh?”
“Yes, I supposed you wouldn’t mind if invited them to join us and perhaps sing a couple of songs right? All they want is to have some fun, isn’t that right boys?”
>”You bet…” Shining Fury says while giving Fluttershy a flirty look.
>Fluttershy does not feel flattered, in fact she looks a bit uncomfortable.
>That poor girl…when will she stop being afraid of her own shadow?
>You walk over to the karaoke machine and grab the microphone Sunset was using.
>Chad closes the door behind him and locks it.
>”Umm…R-Rarity?”
“Stop being so rude Fluttershy, get over here and have some fun with us!”
>”Yeah, fun…” Shining Fury says while giving Fluttershy another flirty look.
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>>27364461
>and locks it
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>>27364461
The club fight looks like an even more daunting prospect this time around. Rarity can defend herself, but her effectiveness in past confrontations has been contingent on being underestimated, so she could probably incapacitate one of the guys before being taken out of the fight. I don't know about Sunset and Fluttershy, but the assumption is that they don't have the greatest odds, even with Rarity momentarily assisting. It comes down to how soon Anon can intervene, but I don't think we can count on Anon or the girls getting out of this unscathed.
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>>27364461

>Minutes later.
>You’re Anon once again.
>And you’re done dancing for the night.
>Pinkie Pie pulled some moves that left you exhausted.
>Applejack and Rainbow Dash have not stopped teasing you.
>”What? Is that the best you can do Anon?” Applejack asks.
“I-I need some water.”
>”Whoopsie, sorry Nonny. I guess I went way overboard on you.”
“It’s okay Pinkie…it’s not your fault. I’m not used to this, that’s all. Don’t worry for me.”
>”Perhaps you should try the karaoke room dude, Fluttershy and Sunset always go there.” Rainbow Dash suggests.
“Yeah, I guess…by the way. Have you seen Rarity around?”
>”I-I don’t think I have sugarcube.”
>”Nope!” Pinkie Pie adds.
>”Pffft, I’m sure she’s in the restroom. She always gets gassy whenever she eats Burger Shot’s food,” Rainbow Dash says, making Pinkie Pie giggle uncontrollably.
>That’s data you didn’t need to know.
>”Now where on Earth could she be? I haven’t seen her on the dancefloor at all. Well done Anon, what did you say to make her so angry towards you?” Applejack nags, “she really loves to dance, and not seeing her dancing with us is quite suspicious.”
“Nothing! I said nothing!”
>”Forget about her dude! You don’t want to listen to her complains after what happened earlier now do you?”
>As if you gave a damn in the first place.
>Rarity’s got some annoying habits, but the pussy game is just ridiculous.
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>>27364461
>and locks it
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>>27364685

>You check your watch and realize it’s almost two o’clock.
>Rarity’s parents will kill you if you bring her daughter home this late.
>And probably Rainbow Dash’s dad as well.
”Girls? Do you know what time it is?”
>Applejack and Pinkie Pie gasp in horror as you show them your watch.
>”GAH! It’s late! Mah Granny and Big Mac are going to kill me!”
>”Let’s go home Nonny! Mom and dad don’t even know that I’m here!”
“W-what?! Ugh, never mind…Pinkie? Could you please call Fluttershy and Sunset Shimmer? Tell them that we’re leaving.”
>”Okie Dokie Loki!”
“Applejack? Could you check if Rarity’s in the girls’ restroom?”
>”Sure thing pardner.”
”Cool, I’ll see you guys outside. Let’s go Rainbow…hope those valet parking dudes don’t mess my dad’s ride up.”
>”Hah, you worry too much dude.”
>Once you’re outside and get your dad’s SUV from the valet parking guys you hear Rainbow Dash mumbling something with a low volume, as low as Fluttershy’s normal voice.
“Did you say something Dash?”
>”T-thank you dude, I had fun tonight.”
“Yeah, me too Dash, you’re all such great gals.”
>”Here’s a thing I don’t understand dude…why are you so nice towards us?”
“Hmm?”
>”I mean…you taught Rarity how to defend herself, you decided to be my hopeless team’s coach, you even paid for Pinkie’s expenses today! What’s that all about?”
“What do you mean?”
>”I want to know why are you being so nice to us, what do you want from us?”
“What?! Nothing! I mean, we’re friends aren’t we?”
>”F-friends? Oh yes! Friends…and nothing else, ha ha.”
“I just want you to be happy and tight with each other…I have a confession to make.”
>”A confession?”
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>>27364705

“Back in Mareami, I didn’t have friends that cared for me just as much as you do. So I want to return the favor. Take this as my way of saying ‘thank you for sticking with me’.”
>”Really?”
“Especially you Dash.”
>”Me?! B-but I’m the one that has given you lots of trouble back when you started coaching my team! I’ve been giving you nothing but a hard time. Do you remember what happened the day we went to the mall?”
>You let out a chuckle.
“Yes, and do you remember what happened afterwards?” You say in a flirty tone.
>”Oh my gosh~” Dash says with a smile and with both hands placed on her rosy cheeks.
>You let out a chuckle.
>”Stop it Anon! It’s not funny, what you did was terrible! Asking me to kiss you like that…and then putting my panties on your head. You pervert!”
>She punches your arm.
“Ow! Rainbow?!”
>”D-don’t do that again…idiot.”
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>>27364710

>Applejack exits the club, alone.
“Ready to go Applejack?”
>”Sugarcube…I can’t find Rarity anywhere.”
“What?”
>”I searched everywhere, the dancefloor, the drinks bar, the restrooms. But I just couldn’t find her…perhaps she went home already?”
>As soon as you were about to say something, Pinkie Pie bursts out of the club yelling.
>“NONNY!!! AAAHHHH! HELP THEM!”
“Pinkie?! What’s wrong?!”
>”SOME MEANIES LOCKED THEMSELVES IN THE KARAOKE ROOM AND ARE DOING THINGS TO RARITY, SUNSET AND FLUTTERSHY!”
>Both Applejack and Rainbow Dash loudly gasp in horror.
>”W-what sorts of things sugarcube?” Applejack asks, trying to keep calm and collected.
>”DO YOU REALLY HAVE TO ASK!? I HEARD FLUTTERSHY SCREAMING AND CRYING!”
“SHIT!”
>You run back into the club and head straight to the karaoke room.
>As soon as you get there you take a quick peek through the tiny circular window on the door.
>You find some guys taking advantage of your friends.
>Fluttershy is trying her best to push the big guy away from her, but her efforts are futile.
>The guy has already exposed her breasts and right now he’s pulling her panties down.
>Another guy is touching Sunset Shimmer’s breasts, and while he tries her best to punch him in the face, the guy just laughs.
>You also find Rarity, who has been knocked out by the third guy.
>Wait a minute…
>[“Fucking hell, this bitch hits hard…”] he says as he cleans the blood running down his broken nose.
>IT’S THAT GUY!
>This time he got to bring friends!
>As he starts to undo his belt and lift Rarity’s skirt you feel rage building inside of you.
>[”HEEELP!”] Sunset Shimmer desperately cries.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_7uDB0mOwpA
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>>27364819
HERE WE GO
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>>27364819
He prioritizes remembering Gilda's situation but not the incident that tuned him into Rarity's helplessness as well as the reason he's been teaching her how to fight. Probably got careless, but even so, anon is not a smart man.
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>>27364819
Well, it's even darker this time around. Good job, Anon.
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>>27364819
NaOH, don't you fucking dare to cliffhanger on us here.
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>>27364881
The track he linked us to should be enough of a clue as to what's about to happen.
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>>27364819
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Tdu4uKSZ3M
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>>27364888
Let them fuck Rarity then, nobody cares about that slut. Sunset must remain PURE ;_;

>>27364893
... so Rarity dies?
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>>27364908
Future Club plays during 'Take Over' when The Son lays waste to the Colombian mafia's headquarters. No one gets raped last time I checked but I understand where you're coming. I don't like Rarity either.
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page 10 save
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>>27359741
Holy shit you watched Beezelbub. loved that show.
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>>27364819
This song is appropriate to the rage right now.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e8-sMJZTYf0
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>>27365972
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>>27356031
>Vinyl grins, her fingers fluttering over the head of Flash's shaft, and slips a hand under her waistband.
>"...And I know just where THIS is going..." She whispers into Flash's ear, giving his rod a squeeze as her fingers slip inside her.
>'Not this time, Vinyl..." Octavia thinks to herself.
>She pulls back a hand, plunging it under her skirt and practically tearing her panties off.
>Slipping them down her legs while her other hand mauls Vinyl's tit to keep her distracted.
>"Flash... Slide a bit forward, hmm?" Octavia murmurs breathily into his ear.
>She slips out of his arms, and he turns in his seat, scooting forward.
>"Hey..." Vinyl murmurs, pouting as Octavia attempts to climb up on Flash.
>Getting up, she slips behind her, steadying Octavia as she awkwardly slides her legs behind Flash's back.
>"I'm the one that's super horny, dammit..." Vinyl grumps, slipping back into her seat.
>She watches as Octavia settles into a lotus position in Flash's lap, her hand straying back to her waist.
>"Oh, fuck this." Vinyl mutters, simply stripping her pants and over-skirt off.
>Her hand plunges between her legs as she leans over, kissing Flash's shoulder.
>"You'll get your turn, Vinyl..." Octavia says softly, looking into Flash's smiling face.
>He leans forward, a hand slipping behind her neck as his other one settles on her thigh.
>"Well, fancy seeing you here, Octy." His lips brush her cheek, and she shudders.
>Her hand slips down, slowly caressing his shaft as she cups his cheek with the other.
>"What, in your lap?" Octavia ventures teasingly.
>"Oh! I hadn't noticed!" Flash feigns shock, his hand running slowly up and down her thigh.
>"Mmhm, you aren't exactly the most observant fellow..." She murmurs consolingly as she pulls his cock down, sliding it up and down her distended lips.
>Flash nods haltingly, biting his lip.
>"You're not the first to tell me so." He turns to Vinyl. "Why, just the other day Vinyl wa-ahahaha..."
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Página diez.
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>>27363864

>Filename
>'large'

Yes. Rarity's are large.

She has very fuckable tits.
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>>27364908
>>27364974
I think Rarity is easy to hate in general because she has a lot of unpopular characteristics--fascinated by clothes, focused on appearance and impressions, and a bit flirty depending on the episode which is as close as a kids' show can get to sluttiness. Not evil as such, but definitely a lot less appealing outside the target demographic. Sometimes I feel just a little sorry for Rarifags.
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>>27364819
Don't give a shit about Rarararara, SAVE FLUTTERS!
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>>27359801
>You sit there and witness her mental breakdown.
desu, senpai, this shit is like best manga or anime or this kind of shit. I want more.

>>27363864
>”Then my buddies and I can join them as well, it’ll be fun! I promise!”
And here comes the rape.

>”It’s short for Chaos Diamond
Oh, fuck

>>27363999
Trips of removeness!

>>27364461
>and locks it
pic related

>>27364684
I like your opinion, Anon. In fact, I like it so much, I share it.

>>27364685
>Minutes later.
Soo... Is it happening right now? Or it already happened? Because these guys didn't look like willing to wait.

>>27364705
>”Girls? Do you know what time it is?”
'Crying after rape time' time?

>Cool, I’ll see you guys outside
Soo... will he be not able to help due to his position on the outside, or he'll witnessed chad's pack trying to smuggle out the girls?

>”I want to know why are you being so nice to us, what do you want from us?”
~Whetever I want.~

>>27364819
>perhaps she went home already
god dammit, fucking shit, it hurts

>You also find Rarity, who has been knocked out by the third guy.
Best. Self defence. Ever. Eh, desu, this makes a perfect sense.

The morals are short and commonly known; nothing good comes from partying at town.
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>>27367185
>Flash's banter is cut short when Octavia scissors her legs, pulling him inside her.
>"Oh, god, that's what I needed..." She chokes out, throwing her head back and grinding her hips into him.
>"That's what I needed..." Vinyl mutters, pouting again.
>Flash turns to her, a hand falling behind her head and pulling her insistently toward him.
>She doesn't resist, and their lips come together, exchanging a passionate kiss.
>"D-don't pout, Vinyl. Plenty of me to go around." Flash murmurs breathlessly after he breaks off the kiss.
>"That's so fucking cheesy, Flash." Vinyl says, grinning at him as she leans in, pressing into his side.
>Her free hand roams his chest as she keeps her fingers busy inside her.
>"Damn, watching you guys is so fucking hot..." She rasps out, her breath already ragged from the stimulation she's giving herself and taking from them.
>Octavia silently curses the cramped conditions.
>It might be driving her a little wild, knowing there are people mere feet away from her as she rides Flash, but she wishes she could feel Vinyl's skin against hers right now.
>She groans as Flash's hips buck, spearing her on his rod, and she grabs his hand, pulling it to her ass which he squeezes appreciatively.
>Vinyl grits her teeth, reaching out and unbuttoning Octavia's blouse despite her weak protests.
>She pulls Octavia's shirt open, shucking up her bra and leaning in to capture a nipple in her mouth.
>"V-vi-! Angh..." Octavia chokes on the words as she feels her lover's tongue swirl around her nipple, while Flash's hands clutch her ass, pulling her deeper onto his shaft.
>She feels another mouth capture her other nipple, and looks down weakly to see Flash's head beside Vinyl's, both suckling on her breast as they look up at her.
>Octavia watches their eyes crinkle in delight, the sweat on their foreheads, the small sounds of pleasure emanating from them.
>She's losing her fucking mind.
>She wraps her arms around her lovers, pulling them against her.
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>>27368793
Sorry, but I may not get the chance to do more on this today.

I know, I suck. Going over to a friends house now, might stay the night, so not much chance I'll be able to smut up his comp. He's quite the prude. Well, sorta. Interwebs prude. No one cares.

My rambles aside, chance of more tonight, more likely and definitely tomorrow. I don't want to take a million years in this fucking theatre =/
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>>27364819

>You exhale for a moment and think of a way to save your friends from those assholes, check your environment and listen to your friends’ cries.
>In that moment…
>You recall the same memories when you killed Dark Ember.
>You felt no mercy.
>And you will feel no mercy for those who harm your friends…
>You stand on one feet and take position to kick the door open.
>And when you do, you break the lock separating you from your dearest friends Shy, Sunny Bunny and Rares.
>[KRAK!]
>”What the-?!”
>As soon as your friends see you, their faces make the biggest smiles of relief you’ve seen.
>”ANON!” Fluttershy yells before his assailant muffles her mouth with his hand.
>Rarity is still out cold.
>The guys look at each other before menacing you with their fists.
>”Beat it you little shit! Can’t you see we’re busy?”
>You grab a cider bottle that was placed on a small glass table and throw it at the guy who just insulted you.
>”Why you…get him!”
>The guys fasten their seatbelts and pull up their zippers.
>It seems you got here on time.
>Fluttershy shuts her legs and Sunset Shimmer covers her breasts as fast as possible.
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>>27370028

>The guy who was bothering Fluttershy charges at you, but you simply dodge his attack, make him trip and kick him in the ribs as soon as he lands on the floor.
>”AGHHH!”
>The other ones grab their root beer bottles and throw them at you.
>”WATCH OUT ANON!” Sunset Shimmer yells.
>You manage to dodge one of the first bottle, but the other one breaks on your face, and the glass cuts your forehead.
>You wince a bit in pain, and feel some blood running down your right temple and cheek.
>The guy on the floor quickly recovers and makes you trip as well, he makes sure the back your head smashes against the laminated dance floor.
>Finally, some clubgoers hear the commotion and direct their attention to the karaoke room.
>You get punched in the face once.
>Twice.
>Three times.
>But you refuse to give up so easily.
>When the guy appears to give his final blow you quickly dodge his attack and hear the bones inside his hand shatter when he punches the dance floor, breaking the colored LED.
>”AAAHHH! MY HAND!”
>You kick his stomach with your knee to take him off your body, after that you stumble to get up.
>You turn your head over your shoulder and see many teens filming the fight with their smartphones.
>You hate this age you live in.
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>>27370044

>You can even hear some idiots yelling that dreaded website’s name you used to hear back in Detrot whenever two ‘students’ got into a fight.
>The guy who was harassing Sunset Shimmer approaches you and raises his fists in a menacing way.
>”Alright, you want to be a tough guy? Let’s see if you can handle yourself…” throws a very hard but easy-to-avoid punch.
>You lift your left arm and block his punch, leaving his right side exposed. You take your chance to kick him in the ribs using your right knee.
>Then you use your left hand once again to punch his nose.
>”Fuuuuck…m-my nose. It’s broken!”
>The guy tries to gives you a high kick, but you catch his leg in mid-air using both your arms and hands and then you make him lose balance by kicking the inside part of the leg he was standing on.
>He stands up pretty quickly feeling humiliated at the unison voices of ‘OOOOHHH’ and gives you yet another high kick.
>Once again you grab his leg with your hands, pull him closer to you and punch him in the face using most of your strength.
>The dumbass feels like kicking you in the stomach once again, and you grab his leg once again, make him trip and fall on his back with your right feet while you still hold his leg.
>Once his back makes it to the dance floor breaking more colored tiles you release his leg and punch his face the same amount of times he punched yours.
>You see blood coming out of his mouth and a mix of blood and saliva landing on the colored tiles.
>When he tries to stand up, you decide he’s had enough so you quickly kick his stupid face with your right foot.
>He’s out like a light.
>”WHOOOO!”
>”DAAAAMN!”
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>>27370052

>The other ones who were harassing Rarity and Sunset Shimmer rush at you, one grabs you by your jacket.
>You see a good opportunity to counter this attack as well.
>You slap his arms away by sticking yours through the space between the inner part of his forearm, then you slap his ears at the same time with your palms.
>The guy harassing Rarity charges at you and tries to push you to the floor, you resist the attack, raise your arm and hit the back of his neck with your elbow.
>A nasty hit, but you don’t care.
>”ARGH!”
>You throw the asshole on the dance floor, breaking more colored floor tiles.
>As soon as the guy lands on the now broken colored tiles you feel confident in winning this fight.
>But as soon as you turned your back on the guy harassing Sunset Shimmer he got up and punched you…in the wound Dark Ember left on your body.
“NNGHHH…!”
>IT HURTS!
>You try remain calm and collected, but fail.
>This guy really made you angry.
>You turn around and make the guy fall on his back by kicking the back of his knees.
>As soon as he lands on his back you stomp his ribs and stomach four times.
>When you’re done you grab him by his jacket and punch him three times in the face, you grab his shoulder and arm and pull them in separate angles until you hear a painful snap.
>”AAAAAAH!”
>Then you kick the back of his knees to make him fall on his back once more.
>He’s out.
>2 out of 3.
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>>27370067

>2 out of 3.
>The guy who was harassing Rarity kicks you in the head and makes you fall on the ground.
>SHIT.
>Before he charges at you you quickly stand up using nothing but your legs and a jump.
>Time was vital back in Detrot, so you mastered this technique after several years of beatings.
>The guy stops himself when he sees you standing up like that. But decides to kick your face with a high kick.
>You grab his leg in mid-air and push it in the same direction he was trying to hit you, letting his back exposed.
>You quickly subdue him by grabbing his face from behind with one arm, pulling him a few inches down, kicking his back strong enough to make his knees bend.
>This will be the final blow.
>You prepare your free arm’s elbow and hit his chest with all your strength.
>The guy is out…
>You won.
>You spit some blood and pant, grabbing your knees.
>Each hit and blow that made its way to your body hurt a lot.
>Seems you need a bit more practice and to work more out at the gym.
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>>27370072

>Rainbow Dash makes her appearance.
>”DUDE! DUDE! Are you okay?!”
>You only nod.
>”What happened to-“
“They’re fine…”
>Sunset Shimmer and Fluttershy emerge from the karaoke room.
>Rarity seems to be awake now, tears and mascara running down her cheeks.
>Their ripped clothes are a mess.
>It doesn’t take long for the clubgoers to realize what the fuck just happened. So they add two plus two and finally cheer your actions.
>”Holy crap dude…look at your face,” Rainbow Dash says while caressing your face with her tender hands, “are you sure you are gonna be okay?”
>You only nod.
>Pinkie Pie and Applejack do their best to cover Fluttershy’s and Sunset Shimmer’s exposed parts with their coats and even Applejack’s hat.
>You offer Rarity your jacket, but she doesn’t accept it.
>”I’m sorry darling…I’m so sorry. This wouldn’t have happened if-”
>Sunset Shimmer and Fluttershy give Rarity a glare that could kill. And Rarity looks way too accepting of that glare.
>You offer Fluttershy your jacket instead, which she gladly accepts.
>She’s the one who was almost half-naked from the upper part after all.
>She gives you a sweet peck on the cheek and asks you to drive her home, if it was okay with you.
>It appears she doesn’t mind the taste of your blood landing on her pretty lips.
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>>27370089

>You agree and quickly exit the club with your friends to avoid talking to the cops, witnesses or the owner of the club.
>You’re pretty sure he’ll want to charge you the damages you did to his club.
>Most witnesses were people you knew from school, while the rest were teens from Crystal Prep High.
>You even spotted Snips and Snails. They gave you evil looks as they finished recording everything with their phones.
>The girls quickly jump inside the SUV as you hear sirens in the distance.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T9LInwR0_ZA
>You get inside and start up the vehicle.
>At last, you drive away from the club and barely escape the consequences of staying in the club.
>The police will charge the teens that you beat the ever living shit out of them.
>If the witnesses talk, hopefully they’ll show the cops the recordings they took.
>If the cops decide to investigate further…guess it’s up to Sunset and Fluttershy to save your ass after you saved theirs.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HvKy0MHbwGA
>You still want to know…how did those guys get into the karaoke room?
>Who brought them in?
>And where was Rarity the whole time?
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>>27370111
Oh shit. Rarity done fucked up.
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>>27370111

>”Nonny! Are you okay? Those cuts look horrible!”
“I’m fine…” you mumble.
>Rainbow Dash, who was sitting next to you the whole time tries to clean the blood running down your forehead with a hanky.
“Thanks Dashie…”
>”Shh…don’t talk dude.”
>She keeps cleaning your forehead and at the same time, caressing your face. Trying to find more
“Haha…careful Dashie, I’m driving and you’re tickling me…”
>Rarity, who is sitting at the very end of the SUV tries to stifle her sobs.
>She observes how you and Rainbow Dash are getting along, and cries a bit more.
>“There there Rarity. Will you be alright?” Pinkie Pie tries to say, “did they hurt you?”
>She doesn’t answer back.
“Rarity?”
>”I’m sorry…”
>Fluttershy and Sunset Shimmer scoff.
>Uh oh…that’s not good.
>You are predicting that you’re going to have a bad time with the strange silhouette with the creepy voice.
>You let out a sigh.
>”Thank you so so much Anon…I was so scared back there,” Fluttershy says, “I’m glad that you’re our friend.”
>”Unlike a certain someone I won’t mention her name…” Sunset Shimmer coldly says.
>”Huh?” Rainbow, Pinkie and Applejack say at the same time.
>Shit…
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=phL6fDiYNJk
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>>27370137
Oh come on she was drunk, it wasn't that bad. The guys got caught and had their shit kicked in.
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>>27370244
>got drunk
>literally drinking apple cider and root beer,

Rarity is a ho.
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>>27370089
>It appears she doesn’t mind the taste of your blood landing on her pretty lips.
That sounds pretty fucking creepy.
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>>27370244
It's not trauma from the almost-rape, it's regret and envy.
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>>27370660
when someone saves you from being raped and possibly worse, you don't care how you show your gratitude.

>>27370244
she wasn't drunk, just stressed from this stupid debacle and made a really huge mistake. At least she realizes what stupid mistake she did too. no one forgives someone that quickly without some time to think about everything.
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>>27370660
Clearly you've never participated in Metzitzah B'peh.
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Does anyone have the paste bin link to NaOh's current story cuz I can't find it in that list for some reason
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>>27371370
See: >>27363864
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>>27341643
bump
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another page 10 save
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>>27370137
I really enjoy your action scenes NAOH.


>there will never be a version of this story where sunset gets a happy ending
I know that a happy ending would completely ruin the point of the story, but still.
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>>27373047
>imblyign
Stay tuned
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>>27363311
>”It’s okay… I’ve gotcha.” The officer who has been guarding the gym entrance assures the people inside.
>For a split second, his heavy breathing is the only thing to be heard, that is, before the gunshots from April’s direction start to sound once again. The officer shines his flashlight into the gym, almost entering the door so he can guard form the inside.
>”Officer Snow’s a good shot. Those things are gonna have a hard time dodging her.” He musters up a fer reassuring words as he notices the tears on more of the faces in front of him. “Everyone listen up. I’m Officer Willow. And until the others get back, I’m going to be right around this corner.” He points towards the hallway behind him with his chin, keeping both of his hands on his gun. “If anyone hears anything… and I mean anything, holler. I’ll be right-”
>A sudden snarl cuts the officer off, and he spins around in an instant to confront whatever made the noise.
>He’s tackled to the ground before he can point his gun.
>It takes less than a second for the people in the gym to figure out what just happened. The panic spreads through the room like wildfire, except half of the civilians are standing up this time.
>Already feeling extremely intolerant to darkened rooms, Rarity stumbles in the direction of the only other gym entrance with Sweetie Belle tightly in her grasp.
>”Somebody do something!” Trixie’s voice calls out as Officer Willow’s screams start to become louder.
>Sunset, not knowing what else to do, calls out for April.
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>>27373779
Oh damn son.
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>>27373107
Staying tuned.
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>>27356120
WOOP WOOP MORE ZESTY FROM PHENO! Glad you're getting your groove back, writers block is a pain.
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>As soon as your friends see you, their faces make the biggest smiles of relief you’ve seen.
This is so cuutee! In the end, the mafia will kill everyone.

>Fluttershy shuts her legs and Sunset Shimmer covers her breasts as fast as possible.
That's... not very useable in this fight, but Ia gree, it's so fucking nice to see that you care about details like this.

>>27370044
>You manage to dodge one of the first bottle, but the other one breaks on your face, and the glass cuts your forehead.
Immunity spell is lost. Fuck.

>When the guy appears to give his final blow you quickly dodge his attack and hear the bones inside his hand shatter when he punches the dance floor, breaking the colored LED.
HYE HYE HYE! Does Anon look like a beat ham now?

>You turn your head over your shoulder and see many teens filming the fight with their smartphones.
Oh, god fucking, dammit.

>>27370052
>You see blood coming out of his mouth and a mix of blood and saliva landing on the colored tiles.
You receaved 1 Bad Karma. Put a coin to know the total amount of your Bad Karma.

>>27370067
>But as soon as you turned your back on the guy harassing Sunset Shimmer he got up and punched you…in the wound Dark Ember left on your body.
Don't worry. You'll gain another nasty wound during this fight.

>As soon as he lands on his back you stomp his ribs and stomach four times.
>When you’re done you grab him by his jacket and punch him three times in the face, you grab his shoulder and arm and pull them in separate angles until you hear a painful snap.
That's how you turn evil. I onder, will the people be afraid of him after seeing that?

>>27370072
>The guy who was harassing Rarity kicks you in the head and makes you fall on the ground.
You could say, you got deleveled.
Pic related

>The guy is out…
No, he is Patrick.
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>>27370089
>It doesn’t take long for the clubgoers to realize what the fuck just happened. So they add two plus two and finally cheer your actions.
Finally!

>It appears she doesn’t mind the taste of your blood landing on her pretty lips.
Fucking vapire! Hue.

>>27370111
>You agree and quickly exit the club with your friends to avoid talking to the cops, witnesses or the owner of the club.
But they recorded him.

>If the cops decide to investigate further…guess it’s up to Sunset and Fluttershy to save your ass after you saved theirs.
Literally.

>You still want to know…how did those guys get into the karaoke room?
>Who brought them in?
>And where was Rarity the whole time?
WAHAHAHAHAHA. Good one.

>>27370137
>She keeps cleaning your forehead and at the same time, caressing your face. Trying to find more
>Trying to find more
of his face?

>You are predicting that you’re going to have a bad time with the strange silhouette with the creepy voice.
I like this.

Moar!
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>>27373779
>on guard duty
>allowing yourself to get distracted
Got what he deserved.
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>>27360233
I can't really make promises as far as progress goes with this story. Normie life is slowly drawing me away from fun things and keeping me busy on a day to day basis.
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>>27370137
Fluttershy and Sunset need to lay off blaming Rarity for the whole thing; she didn't know what would happen, or have much reason to believe that anything like that would happen. It was a traumatic experience, to be sure, but misdirected resentment and anger will only damage their friendship. Presumably, the next update will deal with the fallout.
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>>27377297
Look at this faggot and his comment. Their friendship is all but gone at this point.
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>dick-riding: the thread
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>>27341643
bump
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>>27341643
bump
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>>27341643
bump from 9. good night folks
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>>27379099
waste of good dubs
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>>27373779
>Rushed footsteps can be heard hurrying towards the exit. Had it not been for the small amount of light coming from everyone’s screens, those footsteps would have been running straight into each other. By the time Sunset herself stands up, half of the people have left the gym.
>”Somebody help him!” Derpy’s voice sounds out from somewhere in the gym.
>A few of the people collectively answer her over each other, but the fact that their voices are either outside the door or moving towards the door says enough. Derpy soon follows them after she realizes that even Bulk Biceps is out there with the crowd.
>Three of the remaining cops guarding the station try to escort the crowd back into the gym before they learn what just happened. Two cops take the long way through the hallways to confront the situation while another tells everyone to line up against the wall and quiet down.
>Bulk Biceps takes a countless amount of looks at the crowd to make sure that everyone made it out of the gym. Those bloodcurdling screams he heard back there meant nothing other than bad news for whoever was unfortunate enough to stay in the gym once the danger reached the room.
>At the other door on the other side of the gym, Officer Willow can still be heard fighting for his life. No one can tell exactly how dire the situation is, but the worst is assumed no matter what.
>”We need to leave.” Cadence shudders as she glares back into the gym that’s now back to complete blackness. “They’re getting in here.”
>Trixie perks up and spins around to answer. “What? Are you kidding?”
>”We have to!”
>”I’m not g- Trixie’s not going out there with those things running around!” Trixie almost violently points out the window.
>”Didn’t you see what happened when we tried to secure Crystal Prep?”
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>>27382592
>”Didn’t you see what happened when we tried to secure Crystal Prep?”
>securing a school
>massive, lots of space to cover
>god knows how many windows
>numerous doors
>trying to secure this
I can't imagine many places worse than a school to try and secure.
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>>27382710
>This

Secure a bank, or a county jail. Somewhere with bars you can poke pointy things through.

It always amuses me that for a zombie apocalypse to actually be a threat, you have to create a universe where all zombie culture is essentially retconned. Most people this day and age know the generalities of surviving zombies, through movies, TV, whatever. An outbreak only becomes one through the original period of panic, and recognizing the threat. If everyone knows what's happening from the outset, most zombie outbreaks would be contained by the citizenry.

>Don't let it touch you.
>Destroy the brain from a distance.

Operating under these rules of engagement, your average PTA meeting could quell an outbreak before it got unmanageable.

It's hard to acknowledge something as a credible threat when it's dependent on a lack of foreknowledge we already possess.

Always good for a story, though =D
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>>27383943
I think there is an actual "Zombie Survival Manual". I don't know why, but I have a copy in my library...
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Hey faggots, I don't know where to ask so I'll do it here, anyone knows where Slazors is ? I've been away for a while now but I've seen he returned by checking desustrorage. He said he would continue his stories in a general, and I'm thinking it must be Fingerbang. Thing is I can't see any post from him in the archive. Any one knows where he is ? [/spoiler] Did he quit ? [/spoiler]
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>>27384987
>those spoilers
Shit, I forgot how this place works it seems
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Just popping in to say Congrats on 200 threads Fingerbang. You guys earned it.
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>>27383943
I can see this happening in the near future of the story, but I believe this is still within the first 24 hours after the outbreak,and not to mention, at nighttime, so panic like this were most likely to happen, especially in a nice quaint neighbourhood that is Canterlot
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>>27341643

Would Rarity wear these?
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>>27385100
come back leman.
I miss u
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>>27385100
is it really you? the rage king?
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>>27384854
There is a Zombie Survival Guide. It has a companion piece of sorts called World War Z which is pretty fascinating in the way it incorporates global politics into the outbreak
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>>27384987
Who?
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>>27385100
dude i really want you to finish the wrestling one
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>>27385100
that trixie story was pretty hot bruh
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>>27386455
link
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>>27388192
http://pastebin.com/4UqsLLxa
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>>27388181
go for it, bb.
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>>27388181
Just do it. There have been a lot of people coming in here saying that they are going to write something and then never actually do it. A couple of others come in and start writing only to burn out and stop after the first few posts. Like Sleepover Anon
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>>27385100
Please come back lemon
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>>27385100
great to hear from you, are you planning on coming back and writing again?
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I am quitting because of all you faggots dont appreciate my hard work
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>>27389116
Dont quitting please , i honestly like your history really , pls continue
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>>27388961
>>27386455
>>27388868
>>27386266
>>27385396
You know that someone is getting desperate when they take the time to come back at different times of the day to samefag. And the fact that it's getting more and more obvious with each reply is cringeworthy as fuck.
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>>27389252
All these flavors. And you chose salty.
Go away Ekans and leave lemon alone.
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>>27389366
>That suspiciously bold 1.
>Immediately blaming Ekans.
>Victimizing Leman.

Why hello there, Leman. What a lovely day for now confirmed samefagging.
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>>27389366
And to follow up on >>27389399, another thing I just noticed.
You even have paint open on your fucking toolbar. That is just embarrassing.
Are you even trying?
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>>27389399
>>27389441
#rekt
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Just want to say I have no part in this.
All I wanted to do was wish fingerbang well and then someone wants to start shit all over again.
This is the exact reason I left.
Because all you people think is I'm some sort of joke.
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>>27389679
You didn't answer any of those "replies" to you.
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>>27364908
>>27364974
>>27368389
Faust said Rarity was best pony btw. All other ponies are shit tier characters
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>>27385100
>>27389679
>>27389116


Leman.
I'm sinserly sorry about this.
Maybe it's just the jealousy, but i think that you should need to continue.
Everywhere we go, there will be people that just don't like or critic everything we do.
(I know i will be cruzified for this)
That's the catch, you decided to start this, and no matter what happened, you still posted your work.
I know the internet can be hard.
I've lost like 3 different WriteFag names just to make ends met and let everything wither.
But you no man, i know you can do it, even if we are not in the same home, distrit, city, country, continent, you made it.
Just like Our friend NaOH.
I readed his stories from a long time, and when i found out that he was Liquid Plasma, i got really happy.
I wasn't the only one that got so overwhelmed with live and everything that had to give up what's most good of one.
I want to be a good write fag, but between work, life and family, i can't make ends meet with the green.
And the fact that there is no place to practice without being made fun of it's bad enough.
But one way or another, i try to keep writing.
I still want to make a story about shit that happens to a faceless green boy who represent us, trying his damn best to score with any gurls or thing that move from another dimension.

So please, NaOH and Leman, i'm sorry that maybe you are the only ones that keep this thread alive, but don't give up.
I belive in you.
No Homo
...Well... maybe a little homo
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>>27341643
If you came on her face it wouldn't even show. Imagine her walking around with your cum on her face and nobody noticing. That would be pretty hot.
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>>27390117
P.S. but if you really are tired of this.
Then there is no really more to do that just leave.
Like i said, we have lives, even if you are a basement dweller, you have things to do.
But please, i know that we are too much of both of you, but, could you please put the bow and seal of finished to you stories?
We will miss the both of you when you are gone, and just when people die, could you put closure to your stories?
Just to let our spirits free and continue with a smile, even if it's just half done, we will be happy.

It was a pleasure to write this down.
Sorry for the sap.
Good night
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>>27390117
>>27390190
It's rather hard to take you seriously when:
A. You've only named 2 of the 5 writefags who posted in this current thread so far as "the only ones that keep this thread alive".
B. The tripcode of the "NaOH" you replied to isn't even NaOH's tripcode.

I'm not entirely sure whether these posts are bait or damage control, but they were very poorly put together no matter which way you look at it.

"Good night"
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>>27390205
Sorry, still learning the ways of 4chan, all i had before this was Fimfiction.
I'll shut my keyboard.
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>>27390205
>>27390222
Wait, I was partially wrong about one part of that.
Leman didn't post any green in this thread :^)
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>>27390149
Needs more Rarity stories, this thread does.

Not sure what NaOH's is about but she seems uncharacteristically flippant and reckless. So fags are taking it as an opportunity to denounce her
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>>27388502
ouch, that stung. I really should go back and finish that story, huh? I did lose steam when everyone else started posting and everyone stopped giving a shit about what I wrote, so I decided to let everyone else get the spotlight and not get in the way.

If you really want me to continue... I will probably have to find a way to show what the hell I wrote previously before continuing my story in the first place. I gotta remember to save what I write sometimes.
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>>27382592
>”Why do you think I was there when that happened?”
>Cadence steps closer to Trixie. “Do you realize how nearly impossible it is to secure a school?”
>”Stop right there!” One fo the cops’ voices sounds on the other side of the gym.
>The ruckus that follows sounds like something straight out of a movie. A couple of shots are fired and the sound of a limp body hitting the floor soon concludes the first series of loud noises.
>”It isn’t safe here! The cops are good protection, yes, but we’re setting ourselves up for destruction if we stay in one place! We need mobility!” Cadence turns to some of the other students and starts to tell them the exact same thing, like a broken record.
>A pair of hands slams against the window behind Rarity as she leans against it. The glass damn near shatters behind her, startling her enough to spring forward and fly right into the wall of the other side of the hallway.
>Everyone shrieks and migrates to the middle of the hallway. The two cops who had ventured to the other side of the gym have yet to be heard from.
>”No! Leaving is stupid!” Argues Trixie as she tries to regain Cadence’s attention. “We could easily secure this place! Aren’t there jail cells in police stations?”
>”That doesn’t matter!” Cadence carefully watches the windows, remembering events that happened last time she and a few others were next to a window when her group was larger. “They learn. And they lean fast. I don’t think you understand.”
>”We will be fine here! We have… COPS! Okay? Cops protecting us! They have guns!”
>”One of the officers was just caught off guard, Trixie! It’s only a matter of-”
>April’s voice cuts Cadence off from down the hallway. “Hey!” She’s waving her hands in a frantic gesture for the civilians to come towards her direction, but her silhouette can hardly be seen in the near pitch blackness. “They got in!”
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>>27390786
>”What?” Trixie freezes. “But… but how?”
>”Just get away for there now! NOW!” April’s voice is slightly overshadowed by a sharp snarling sound from the other end of the hallway.
>Nobody needs to take the time to question what it was, they need to leave now.
>The entire group turns into a cramped cluster of panic as everyone tries to escape in the same direction all at once. Luna and Celestia try their best to stay near one another, as do Rarity and Sweetie Belle. Fluttershy hold into Bulk’s arm for dear life as she lets him pull her to the front of the fleeing crowd.
>The people cannot get away from the noise quickly enough, especially when they can hear it sound off again.

So I was writing for a little bit longer this time. Which is weird, because I actually had more to do today than any other day. I guess I'll be available to do more things starting tomorrow and write all the things Ive been dying to do for like weeks now, lol.
More updates coming soon. Shit will continue to get real.
>>27390750
I encourage you to continue. I might be posting a lot more in the coming days, but not at all times during the day, as I'll be away from the computer. I'm sure that you'll get the spotlight if you go on, I've seen people enjoy your sleepover story too.
>>27389116
That's a pretty neat meme. Gif somewhat related.
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>>27389116
You'd like that wouldn't you?
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>>27391254
Some shitposters can't be bought, bullied, reasoned, or negotiated with.
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>>27391254
You likes the Rarity? You post her a lot.

She is the most memeable
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>>27391254
I wouldn't...
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>>27359801
Oh hey, I guess imitation is the sincerest form of flattery.

Beelzebub is a badass anime, so I'll give you that.
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Here come the smurfs
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bump
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>>27341643
"I dream of tenderly making love in the missionary position while we tell each other how much we love each other".
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>>27390237
oh shut the fuck up already
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>>27393439
I'd call you ass blasted, but you being hours late to the party is pitiful enough. Practice what you preach, fuccboi.
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>>27390237
thats because he quit, because you guys are ungrateful little shits.
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>>27393450
we all know its you Luci, get a freaking life already.
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>>27393468
>>27393473
I can tell it's still you. You replied to the same post in just over 5 minutes and then replied to a new post 1 minute and 1 second after that. If that doesn't reek of samefag, then nothing does.
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>inb4 a brand new salty reply from Totally-Not-Leman 20 minutes to a couple of hours later to cover up samefag hotel
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>>27393521
>Samefag hotel
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Bumping for great justice.
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jesus christ, it will never stop will it?
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>>27390750
Please continue. I really liked your green.
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>>27388567 I vote telekinesis. The hard part is keeping himself in check when his mind wanders.
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Anybody got some green Rainbow Dash pastebin ?
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>>27396286
>>27396340
I want more Cosmic Butthole
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>>27396473
powers fext physiology http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Fext_Physiology
and a crush on rainbow
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>>27396473
POWERS OF AMERICA
FUCK YEAAAH
AMERIFLAUGE GO
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>>27396473
Mr. Cranky Doodle Donkey
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>>27396473

http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Cosmic_Manipulation
Have crush on Moondancer
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>>27396473
Winona
jk, maybe Flutters?
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>>27396562
forgot pic
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>>27396473
Illusion powers, and a crush on sunset.
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>>27396473
Sunnyyyyy
also anon just suddenly finds kame house going to the beach one day and becomes a martial arts master
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Is there a facebook group for MLP? Or Rarity lovers
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>>27397466
You're doing great keep going!
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>>27397120
>Sunset
Seriously? You have chosen the most used character of the EQG greens, I know that probably you aren't gonna change that (and tbph I hope you do) but PLEASE at least try to have an original idea.
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>>27396473
>I'm gonna let you all decide who the crush is and what his powers are gonna be

How about able to summon a cold black flame to intimidate/surprise people?
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>>27390869
>”Follow me!” April continues down the dark hallway, already surging ahead of those who follow her.
>But the rest of the terrifies people catch up to her after she slows down a little bit on account of the weight of all of the new ammunition she just picked up.
>Every second that goes by feels like the very last second in everyone’s life with the darkness hiding nearly everything. That presence of the danger forces each mind to imagine a pair of claw-like hands and hungry teeth waiting for them inches away in every little bit of the darkness.
>It’s extremely difficult to fit everyone into the storage room.
>After recognizing where she is, Sunset starts to question why April led everyone to here instead of somewhere she imagines is more safe. The battered corpse on the floor only prompts the group to migrate to the side of the room where there aren’t pools of blood.
>In this moment, no one can think of themselves as an individual. Despite fearing for their lives, the danger still somehow establishes, in everyone’s minds, that they are a single group of people waiting to be overrun by hordes of zombies. That’s all they see — clusters of terrified faces that reflect every single thing they’re feeling.
>Just as shaken and fragile as they are. Just as doomed.
>April runs around the room, dragging around a number of the cardboard boxes that fell off of the shelves and pushing them in front of the door. The boxes are lined up all along the bottom of the door except for about three feet of space.
>After this is completed, April trots over to the red button on the wall, thinking to herself that she is about to go on a suicide mission. But she doesn’t waste a second, and slams her hand onto the button twice, a few seconds apart to create a tiny rectangular gap.
>The group watches her slip through, screaming something along the lines of “Stay away from the door!” as she pulls her gun out.
>A cold gust of wind hits April’s face as she aims before doing anything else.
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Here are some HM2 levels I made for WFD. Check them out if you want!

How to install: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ebe4Cpn8Eow

1/2 - Hideout
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>>27399967

2/2 - The Search

These are based on WFD's future chapters. As soon as I can figure out how to make cutscenes without crashing this game with no survivors I'll make more.
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>>27399967
>>27399985
played them and thought they were good. not bullshit hard, but hard enough
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>>27399503
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>>27399967
>>27399985
I have gog version so that video does not help me
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>>27399967
>>27399985
How cute, now write
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>>27399967
Why HM part 2 tho
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>>27401541
try making levels for HM 1
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seriously why do you guys like NaOH's stories?The pinkie childhood story was alright but this guy writes stories like a horny 13 year old
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>>27401928
no u
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>>27401928
You write something then
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>>27398706
>Not even one current Sunset story
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>>27401960
k

>be anon
>be new to school
>meet 6 girls
>shag them all
>Major problem happens
>anon fixes it
>fug (insert waifu here)
>win prom queen and king
?tenouttaten.
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>>27401994
So gud
I wish I cud rite lik this
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>>27402051
Some one who isn't a part of the main shits
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>>27402051
Maybe twilight or rarara.

Btw power should be illusion like some other anon suggested, so he can do shit like project his voice from someone else's mouth and even make simple visual illusions
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>>27402060
here I'm thinking this fits you more.
https://boards.4chan.org/mlp/thread/27377956/the-bradical-adventures-of-normal-norman-back#top
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>>27401541
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=svyCX2qHWXU
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>>27341643
bump
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>>27401928
If that's an honest question, may as well give it some sort of answer. An old writer that has stuck around longer and fits in better than most writers here, so there is some sort of special treatment.

Or they are trying to spark something like this. Maybe there is more to this than I know. Either way, there is some sticky shit that's going on.
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>>27401928
It's because this thread is filled with horny 13 year olds.
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>>27402303
No
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>>27341643
bump
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here some canon lore from the girls
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>>27405036
Pinkie Pie you dumb slut, text can be read at any speed.
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>>27405036
And what a load of shit it is.
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>>27391254
I appreciate your work NaOH, it's a nice read when I'm bored
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I miss Grim Reaper.
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>>27406131
IS IT DAT BOI
OH SHIT WHADDUP
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bunp
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>>27407347
Write, attention whore. Leave the bumping to everyone else.
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>>27407388
Had my trip on, page 10. Mind your own business.
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>>27407347
NAOH pls continue your history pls i loved :D
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>>27407347
[banjos begin playing]
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>>27407347
NAOH pls continue your history i loved :D
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Gonna post more of the story, soon. Sorry about seeming dead. The past few days were....tiring.
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“Hey, you're a woman, any idea where I can put this kid to bed?”
>You hold the baby out to her.
>The maid finally breaks out of her shock and comes to. “Huh….oh, about time you let me handle the Archangel Princess.”
>Again with the crazy act. You move the baby out of her reach and point a questioning finger at her.
“Alright, what's going on here? First, I find this kid floating down the river, then you come into my home and stir shit up. I need answers. Particularly as to what the Hell you're going on about with this Archangel business.”
>The aim of your finger draws down from her face to her chest.
“Your jugs are out again, by the way.”
>The maid yelps and twists her chest away from your view. “You're such a perv!”
>A grin breaks across your face.
“Oh, you've gotta meet Norm. If you’re calling me a pervert, you don't know nothing, yet.”
>Trixie fixes herself and lets out a sigh.
“The infant in your arms is a Princess. Princess Flurry Heart, heir to the designation of Archangel of Love. Though...it doesn't seem to show in her likings and demeanor.”
>Totally saw this in a anime somewhere.
”So….basically that one little girl that's rebellious in the rich, happy, white family?”
>”What?”
“Nevermind, continue.”
>”It is very rare that the Archangels breed and have an heir, but due the the Heavens Accords, it is a requirement that heirs are raised within a contracted family. The choice is the heir's”.
”So….I was contracted by a child of one of God’s right hand men?”
>”Women.”
“Huh?”
>”The birthmother of Flurry Heart is Archangel Cadence. The Archangel of Love. I was hoping that she would've found a different contractor, other than a brute like you, but….things went awry.”
“So you're the one that dropped her in the river?”
>”I DID NO SUCH THING, SOME THUGS THOUGHT IT WOULD BE AMUSING TO OVER POWER ME AND I LOST SIGHT OF THE PRINCESS DURING THE ENCOUNTER!!”
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>>27407480
>You take your hands off of your ears.
“Pipe it down, will ya? My sister is sleeping. You should be lucky that you were dealing with me and not her.”
>”I care not for any filthy human, they're all the same.”
>Well, that's very nice of her to say.
>”Digression over with, are you satisfied with the enlightenment?”
>You yawn and scratch your head.
“Sure, I guess I can believe it.”
>You put the Princess in her arms.
“Take care of her while I catch some z’s will ya?”
>Not a word is uttered from the maid afterwards. She simply begins the process of ensuring that Flurry is asleep.
“By the way, this ‘brute’ won't kick you out, ‘nite.”


>Later, that night.
>You eyes open half lidded and eye the clock….4:37am….
>You suddenly sense movement on your bed.
>You normally sleep with barely any covering so you get a full view of what your new guest in bed is doing.
>It’s the maid, Trixie.
>It doesn't seem that she has noticed that you're awake, so you keep watching for her next move.
>She slowly creeps up over your crotch.
>sweatingman.jpg
>She grabs your briefs by the waistband and gently pulls them down.
>Really can’t help not getting hard at this point.
>When she finally brings your underwear down past your junk, her eyes widen when it flops out at 68%.
>The humidity of her breathing down on you makes you twitch a little.
>Suddenly a small teal, aura-like glow appears on her forehead. You don't remember seeing anything there that would cause it.
>You feeling a gentle pressure on your balls as if she was holding them in her hand.
>You stifle a groan which immediately stops everything.
>She looks up at you. The glow disappeared along with the sensation on your gems.
>Convinced that you haven't awakened, she resumes playing with you. This time, using her hand to massage your sack.
>’Lord, this is fucking sensational.’
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>>27407405
Nope.
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>>27407498
>Wrapping her hand around the base of your now fully erect dick, she lowers her mouth and begins sucking on a nad.
>You don't know how you're able to hold back every reaction possible through just sheer will.
>You feverishly twitch in her hand as she keeps on the assault of your balls.
>You can't help but move your legs from the bliss and it seems as though the maid doesn't care about whether you're awake or not at this point.
>With a “pop!” she releases your nuts and with that breaks your verbal ministrations as you let out a loud groan.
>Trixie looks up at your strained face with a lustful grin as she rises up and pulls her blouse down, revealing her bust.
>”I see that you're awake.” She breathes with tone that feeds the demon within.
>You remain silent, waiting for her next move.
>The maid wraps your heated pole with her tits and slowly begins tit fucking you.
>”I've been wanting to use these on you when I first laid eyes on you, Contractor.”
>Contractor
>The word ruined it until she speed things up and began fellating the tip.
>You toss your head back as your hands shoot up and on her head.
>So much for believing she was a kissless virgin.
>A pressure builds up the base of your cock and you make your final stand.
>Trixie takes notice of this and runs your full length down her gullet.
>Your grip on her head tightens and you buck your hips as you release your load down the maid’s throat.
>She gags from the initial burst and a glob escapes from the corner of her lips, yet she continues to keep her face planted against your crotch.
>When you are emptied of every drop, she slowly releases you and lets you go with with a wet “POP.”
>The last thing you bear witness to is the maid kissing the side of your length before your refractory period pulls you back into your slumber.


>https://youtu.be/xVjOK2KCwqg
>You wake up to your phone alarm.
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>>27407513
>Checking the time, it seems as though you over slept.
>Realising this, you shoot up and look out the window. Norman isn't outside waiting for you, confirming your suspicion of being fucking late.
>A hand lightly grips your shoulder and pulls you back down.
>Startled you throw a punch, only to have it caught by the maid. Judging from the steam coming off, you threw something that Mike Tyson would look up to.
>”Had a good night, Contractor?”
>Again with being called “Contractor.”
“Aside from sleeping in, it was nice. Care to explain the fun you had with me in the middle of the night?”
>”That? Oh…” the maid breaks eye contact and blushes. “....I left out the part where it's the duty of the maid servant to aid in the growth of their respective master, didn't I?”
>You give her a stupid look.
>”I'll be taking that as a ‘yes.’”
>You still need to know about this crazy bitch and the kid that you picked up.
“So…..sexual acts aid in the growth of Flurry? That's the craziest shit I've ever heard.”
>”I'm afraid it is true. She i-”
“Is the daughter of the Archangel of Love, blah, blah.”
>A stinging sensation hits your cheek.
>’She’s definitely quick.’
>”Don't you dare interrupt me when I am speaking, cretin!”
>You laugh it off.
”Okay, mom, sorry.”
>With a huff, Trixie crosses her arms, “Now I'm sure your filthy race of people know what the respective Archangels represent.”
>Rubbing your cheek thoughtfully, you reply
“No, I clearly don't.”
>”Fine, let Trixie fill you in. For starters, the Archangel of Love represents and overlooks pharmacists, nurses, doctors, guardian angels, and (of course) love.”
>You raise your hand.
>”What is it?” the maid fumes.
“What do you mean by guardian angels?”
>”I will get to that at a later time.”
>So much for learning about mythical creatures.
>”The Archangel of Knowledge is for your basic news, mail men, telecommunications, and such.”
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>>27407524
“Now ain't that a shitty job.”
>”SILENCE!”
>You shrink back and put your hands up.
“Sorry, don't shoot!”
>”Last warning, Contractor.”
>You don't like the look in her eye.
>”The final Archangel is the Archangel of Wrath.”
>You like the sound of this one.
>”She represents police, military, and generally anything that you don't want to fuck with. Which leaves guardian angels.”
>’About time.’
>”Guardian angels are basically angels that carry attributes from all three of the Archangels, speed, defense, and power. You don't want to encounter one if you wish to stay in the world of the living.”
“Why is that?”
>”Because they have received special training and blessings from all three of the Archangels. Consider them as a militia that carries out the whim of the three.”
>”Where do you stand with them?”
>The maid crosses her arms, “Hmph, they bear no match for a maid servant of the Archangel of Love.”
“I bet that you hardly stand a chance against one.”
>”What?!” Her face is completely red, “Trixie can so take on a group of five and come out standing on top.”
>You cock an eyebrow.
“Yet you couldn't put me down.”
>”The Princess was on your shoulder! I cannot put her in harm’s way!”
“Yet, you still fought me.”
>The maid looks away, “S-shut up….”
>You get up and the maid grabs your arm to stop you. “By the way, you can't get more than 15 meters away from the Princess, otherwise, it won't end well for you.”
>You’ve gotta find out that anime, tonight.
>Letting out a sigh
“Fine, it shouldn't be a problem. Can you let me get ready for school, now. I'm running a tad bit late.”
>Looking like the world was wiped out before her eyes, Trixie reluctantly let your hand go.
“Since you’ve seen what I've got, already, I won't hafta push you out of my room. In short, you can watch.”
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>>27407535
>”As if I want to see that disgusting body of yours again.” The maid crosses her arms and looks away. You couldn't help but laugh.
>’She digs me.’


>After going through a few debacles unscathed, you finally make it to your 3rd period, catching odd looks when you go and take your seat.
>”Uhhh, what's with the kid on your back?” Norman leans over.
>You kick your feet up and lean back in the chair.
“Nothing important to you.”
>”It kinda is considering that the whole class is starting at you.”
>You scan the room and find out that Norm is right.
“They should take a picture, it'll last longer.”
>Norman turns back forward in his seat, shaking his head.
>You sense that you're being watched and look out the window.
>Nothing
>Just trees and grass.
>You dismiss it as paranoia from the story that Trixie gave you earlier.
>Looking back down on your desk, you find a note.
>Upon opening, the first impression is that it clearly isn't a guy that wrote this message. Hand writing is too clean.
>’Meet up at the school yard at 4:30.’
>Literally two hours after school. Who the fuck stays out that late.


>Later, at the school yard.
>This is bullshit.
>It's 4:30 and no one is in sight.
>Flurry is getting agitated on top of that. You might have to get home very soon.
>When you turn for home, there's a woman waiting at the gate.
>She is wearing a white trench coat with the school uniform underneath. Though, instead of the standard skirt as a bottom, she’s wearing joggers.
>The most oddball thing about her is that large mass of hair she has.
>”It is my best guess that you're Anon.”
“Perhaps, and it is my best guess that you're the one who called me out here.”
>”Perhaps. The name is Adagio.”
“Cool…”
>You thumb at Flurry
“My friend here seems to be getting hungry and I was about to start for home. Care to cut to the chase?”
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>>27407546
>”My close group of friends notified me that a first year is catching a rise.”
“And?”
>”I’ve wanted to see you in action myself.”
>In a blink of an eye, Adagio is standing next to you. You sense the attack and see it, but it doesn't make contact with you.
>’What the Hell is going on here.’
>Adagio jumps back a distance away from you. In her hand is a wooden sword.
>You forgot to Google that anime again.
>”What the fuck was that?! My sword made contact and you didn't even budge!”
“And you're asking me?”
>Princess Flurry coos excitedly on your shoulder.
>’Could the kid be behind this?’
>Adagio dash towards you again, sword at the ready to put you down.
>Waiting for the right moment, you just out of the way.
>In a flash, the swordswoman pivots on the ball of her foot and goes for the jab.
>’Shit, should’ve dove.’
>Before your very eyes, just before the tip hits your gut, you see a pink layer form between you and the weapon.
>’What the fuck is going on here?!’
>The sword sticks, and the girl struggles to pull it back out.
>”What in the Gods name is going on here?” Adagio’s eyes widen in shock.
>Who gives a shit. You just need to get home.
>Grabbing hold of the sword, you break it.
“Sorry about this.”
>You bring your fist to her diaphragm and knock the wind out of her.
>When she falls to her knees, gasping for air, you book it. Trixie has more explaining to do.
>Surprisingly enough, Flurry is giggling with joy.
“I'm gonna take an impromptu rain check on that duel you want. Laters!”


>You run up the stairs and burst through the door of your room.
>The maid is quietly sipping tea and reading a book on your bed.
>The one thing you notice is that the mess from last night is nonexistent. As if it never happened.
>You decide not to bother with asking.
>Trixie looks up and sees the two of you with a smile her face.
“Princess! Contractor! Welcome home!”
>Now why is she…?
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>>27407572
And that is all for now. Cheers.
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>>27407598
It's shit
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>>27407415
>NaOH scene
>vaporware starts playing
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>>27407598
I liked it.
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>>27407388
That's a pretty neat meme.
>>27398828
>A slight movement in the shadows catch’s April’s eye before she points and shoots, squeezing the trigger with even the force of her forearm tensing. It’s hard to make out the zombie getting blown back in the darkness of the night air, but April’s sight makes it out just fine with the fire in her eyes.
>It turns out that there are at least two more zombies opposite of the direction in which April faces, and the officer knows from the sounds of their hungry groaning that the first thing that turns around to meet them is her elbow.
>Which she delivers directly to a snarling face the very second she sternly hold her arm up and spins around to confront the danger. The blow sends the zombie falling back more than April thanks to her sturdy footing.
>And with her other hand, April pulls her trigger just as hard as the last time. The zombie is hit in the neck at first, but gets a metallic kiss on the lips from the immediate follow up bullet.
>With an almost calm sense of focus, the officer turns again and counts the remaining visible targets. Two more out in the distance so far, about to come close enough for April to aim with confidence. After delivering one round into the elbowed zombie that almost succeeded in rising back up to its feet, April turns her barrel to the two approaching zombies an instant before the get within arms reach. Her breathing remains steady — not in a relaxed fashion, but even despite being heavy and labored.
>She could have sworn the very next bullet fired sent one’s head spinning, until the head itself never hits the ground on account of what looks like a single tendon forcing it to dangle over the edge of its shoulders.
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>>27407744
>Stumbling a little bit as April sweeps its leg, the last zombie to have been fully standing straight up ruthlessly grabs into the cold open air. This is the first one that actually got close to April for long enough for her to make out any details on its face. That soulless gaze in its eyes… there’s no way there could be anything human behind that.
>The only life that’s given to those eyes is the glow of aggressive hunger that lightens the zombie’s entire face as it charges towards the officer. Those predatory eyes remain focused on April, until a bullet soars it way right between them and puts that light out.
>A disoriented last zombie standing can’t find out where April is standing, despite hearing the gunshots right next to it. April trots up to the wandering beast, cautiously pointing her gun directly at its dangling head. A hint of mercy crosses April’s mind for the slightest second.
>That hint of mercy tells her to save the bullet, that this last zombie deserves to waddle around a little bit longer as long as it doesn’t prove to be a thorn in April’s side.
>But April wouldn’t have had a change of heart if rushed footfalls from the dark behind her barely rose above the moaning sonority of the wind. A final gunshot interrupts and silences that hint of mercy, sending one bullet into the dangling head before the new attacker gets close enough to become an easier target.
>The footsteps make it within accurate firing range of, and April Snow spins around to deliver a quick shot right into the zombie’s forehead just like (almost) all of the others. Two things are discovered the very instant after April pulls the trigger.
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>>27407749
>The gun clicks; out of ammunition. And right during the very echo of this initially deathly click, officer Silver’s voice calls out from the target’s direction. “Whoa!”
>A shock crashes into April before she realizes that Silver didn’t come face to face with Brass.
>”Sorry…” April blurts out without thinking about anything else to say.
>She finds herself in a state of utter shock as she realizes how lucky Silver was just now.
>”It’s fine, whatever. Let’s get the van.” Officer Silver is already striding along the side of the building towards the cluttered parking lot.

More coming later on, just needed to get something out before midnight.

>>27407347
>Mfw Rarity of all of the girls is the only one completely clothed.
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>>27407776
Moar
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Another p10 bunp

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R7jpbcFiq8w
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>>27407776
>>27408804
Both of you are memes.
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>>27408872
They need to go on a double date with Kitty and Pheno.
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>>27408872
And you're degenerate duty.
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>>27407776
Im just had to reply to this again after reading I Am A Hero. Good shit mane
Keep Riding, Greeny
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Anybody have any images of sexy Chrissy? Her as Cadance is fine too.
pic related
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>>27407612
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>>27407776
Fuck that guy is lucky.
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>>27407405
dont become a fucking bitch AND a cuck
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>>27409545
who?
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>>27408872
EVERYTHING IS A MEME
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Hey NaOH are you planning on continuing the Pinkie Pie green? It's pretty comfy.
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>>27411357
Yee
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>>27411407
shut up faggot.

You will continue lustful temptations with busty twilight and sexy applejack.

DEW ET NOAW
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>>27411697
Good so far
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>>27407347
>Pants off
>Boots still on

What kind of witchcraft is this?

Also what's wrong with rarity's eye?
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>>27411697
Moar.
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>>27411697
Doing good. You should explain what exactly defines the laws of the universe. Do you mean like crime, or like going faster than the speed of light?
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>>27412213
Personally, I'm not quite sure about the power you chose. You better surprise me faggot...

Other than that, I like your writing style
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>>27412584
>tfw I can't think of anything that would be cool, but also not OP
Only thing that I think of would be the powers from Dishonored
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>>27412684
Thanks and don't worry.
I'm not the anon you were originally talking with.
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>>27412584
the ability to shoot lasers of varying power. They can come from wherever, eyes, hands, dick etc.
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>>27412737
>>27412751
Shooting energy or lasers from your dick -does- sound very impractical but at the same time it's the best super power I've ever heard of.
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>>27413064
See if he just had lasers it would be easier to make him non-op. But when he can do shit like manipulate the entire known universe, who the fuck can stop him? I get that they weren't supposed to be threats, and you might have him go up against someone who might pose a threat, but I'm just saying he could easily become a mary sue.
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>>27413517
Great, now keep going. I'm enjoying this, and don't want to stop.
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>>27412584 I still said earlier, telekinetic powers. A) he could have fun or find out that letting his thoughts wander could be dangerous...or arousing. B) if he had to confess about them to someone later, I imagine Sunset the former unicorn could totally relate and help him channel his mental powers.
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>>27413747
Fluttershy a cute.
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>>27413637 ah, I just saw "need a power" and one that he would have problems with. I'll see if I can think of a more unique power in a bit
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>>27415792
Try to aim as close to 2000 characters per post. Otherwise you're just increasing the post limit for no reason.
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Bump from 10
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>>27407776
>Everyone in the storage room tries to stay quiet as they await the return of the cops outside. Whatever it was that April had planned, it better have worked. That gap in the door is still there, and there’s no telling what things out there could hear the rustling around in the room.
>The gunshots they just heard from before have ceased, and the silence outside that follows leaves it to their imagination to decide what it was that happened to cause the noises to stop.
>Nobody is speaking quietly enough to each other when the faint uneven footsteps of another zombie barely skim past along the wall outside, heading towards the garage. Nobody hears it approach the gap in the door, speeding up its pace.
>Only when an arm reaches under the bottom of the door does the screaming start up, directing the entire crowd’s attention towards the gap.
>It’s as though death is grabbing each person by the arm, tightening its grip as the zombie’s grimacing face appears next as it dips under. Bulk Biceps springs into action, tackling the zombie back down to the floor after it makes it all the way into the room except for its feet.
>He bear-hugs the zombie as it squirms around, but not to get out of his grasp. The zombie is turning its head in attempt to get a bite into Bulk’s arm.
>An attempt to grab the zombie by the neck does little to no help as Bulk struggles to get the zombie to face away from him. The zombie lowers his face the instant Bulk’s hand reaches the throat and take a slow, gradual bite into his wrist. The pain shoots through Bulk, somewhat giving him enough of a shock of energy to throw the zombie out of his grasp and start stomping on its head before it can stand back up a second time.
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>>27416686
God damn it people, is there nothing heavy to smash shit with around them? And Fucking Bulk got bit. He was one of the good ones.
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>>27416686
>Just leaving the fucking door open
I hope Bulk punches that bitch in the cunt before he dies.
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>>27416686
Did we ever decide on how long it takes to turn? Or is this a "you're good 'till you die" thing?
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>>27341643

Bump
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>>27416686
Welp they lost the Tank...
They're soooo fucked.
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>>27418793
Who are you.
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>>27418793
I'd like to see Anon make some more male friends. The girls are nice, but it seems a little strange that most main characters in these kinds of stories never have more than one or two male friends, even after coming out of their shell and developing social skills. I think the main reason for this is that most male characters in EG are almost completely uncharacterised, and hardly anyone can fit a face to their names.

I'm interested in seeing how you'll handle Anon's discretion when it comes to telling people about his powers. Maybe the Sentinels have some rule about how publicly they can use their powers, like their own sort of 'Prime Directive' to prevent one of their own from subjugating a planet with their god-like abilities, and Anon gets pulled up on this. Perhaps Twilight finds out that strange things are happening and comes back to mobilise the girls in case something really bad is happening, unintentionally creating tension between Anon and the girls when she mentions giving whatever it is a "friendship blast to the face".

By the way, which canon are you going by? If direct movie canon, then before/after which film?
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>>27341643
bump
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ayy
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>>27418793
who the fuck are you
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>>27421285
bump from 9
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>>27424463
Not the original anon, but I think I found a real fuck up in your story (or maybe I'm just retarded.

You see, when you mentioned twilight in the story, and your going by canon, it makes no sense for you to write that "people say she's from equestria" and even less sense writing "she had to go back to equestria" because THE TWILIGHT THAT STUDIES AT CANTERLOT HIGH IS NOT THE SAME TWILIGHT!

She is not a princess, she doesn't need to go to equestria.

And if you're writing about the fim twilight, then what the fuck is she doing in canterlot high studying?

Explain this to me please
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>>27425024
And you're* going by canon

Maybe I am retarded
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>>27425276
OK, well, not trying to poke more holes in the story because I do enjoy it, I do need to know this:

What did the fim twilight do in canterlot, it doesn't make any sense to me cause it was implied that she studies there I think, which is weird. Maybe we aren't supposed to know what she was doing there yet?

Also, the eqg twilight possible fuck up is going to be something you should really work on in my opinion, considering the fact that if eqg twilight studies at canterlot high, it's only rational to assume the two twilights finally met, which is very interesting in and of itself, but needs to be addressed.
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>>27425705
>Meanwhile, EqG Twi is at home sick, so she's gonna show up the next day

Well how fucking convenient!

But on a serious note, I really like this story, and I'm trusting you to continue the green.
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>>27341643
Where is Greentext Savant's newest story?
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And I appreciate your writing.

Btw, if you don't mind saying, because I'm really interested, how old are you, and where are you from? (Man I sound really creepy)
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>>27341643
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>>27427624
Surely you jest, cause by saying that you are gonna get underage b&.
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>>27427777
Good. Nice quads m8 btw
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>>27427777
Quad bump
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>>27416752
>>27416780
>>27416790
>>27418004
He's not screwed just yet... I guess.
>>27416686
>The zombie largely ignores the blows it receives to the head as Bulk continues. The thing’s only objective is to sink its teeth into Bulks arm, nothing else even coming close to crossing its mind.
>”Hey!” Luna’s voice sounds from behind, almost throwing Bulk off guard. “Take this!” Luna can be seen holding a shovel in her hands after Bulk turns around to look at her.
>The man hadn’t even noticed the thing when he threw the zombie halfway across the room.
>Swinging motions towards the zombie’s head are almost uncontrollable when the shovel reaches Bulk’s hands. Feeling the urgency pushing him to eliminate this zombie as quickly as he can, Bulk pummels the zombie’s head with something immediately a lot more effective than the sole of his shoe.
>Had Bulk been paying more attention to his surroundings rather than immediately taking out the zombie, it’s flailing arms would have ceased grabbing a lot sooner than just now. Those who had turned away slowly allow their eyes to find the aftermath after the noises have stopped.
>As it hits the concrete floor, the metal head of the shovel makes an ear piercing clanging sound. The first thing Bulk does next is take a look at his upper forearm.
>That bite… despite how painful it was, just didn’t have enough force to break skin. The teeth marks don’t look like anything short of severe bruises, but nothing more either.
>He can’t dwell on it for long before a loud engine roars right outside the garage door, sounding like it’s approaching the building. Bulk and the others immediately jump out of the way.
_____

To be completely honest, I'm tired of writing this one story and want to write the other five or so stories I wanted to write in this thread. Not including the sleepover story since Biggs still wants to do it. But despite it's edge, FriENDship was the only one you guys seemed to like, so I only continued that one.
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>>27429139
We wanted all the stories you had, sorry for giving you the impression of only wanting this one.
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>>27429139
Is Biggs even still around? He hasn't posted in a while.

I liked Listen and the demon huntress. You could also post some Time after Time.

Your call man. Do what you want to do.
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>>27429528
yeah, I'm still around, but for reasons I refuse to state, it is becoming increasingly difficult to write at all. I need to retrace my steps to even figure out where I was in the story in the first place. If I get back on track, focus on where I was even taking this story in the first place, and stop reading D&D books I should be able to continue my story. If not, then I will eventually just let Savant take over, since he seems eager to write and still has some fire in his step.
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>>27429139
>I'm tired of writing this one story
Then just stop m8, the worst nightmare of a writefag is being a slave of a bunch of Anons screaming: "MOAR". Focus on another story and don't drop the quality of this good green.
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Awww man where the hell NoaH go? I rally wanted to read the rest of the stories. This is almost like when liquid plasma left.
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>>27431283
Give him time and he'll deliver.
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Oh wow, gj mods.
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>>27427702
Let this be a lesson to all those who see this

never joke about your age
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>>27432591
Or, dropping the hammer on people joking about being 16 is somehow more urgent than stickying an episode thread in advance.
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>>27432784
>implying he was joking and not being serious
ok

I never read his story because the first post didn't interest me.
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>>27433275
His quads proved he was actually 22.
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>>27433444
>His quads proved he was actually 22.
go back to /b/ faggot
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>>27429285
>>27429528
>>27430584
You guys have a point. It's a little embarrassing to admit that I've had this same dilemma with Time After Time in the past regarding which direction I wanted to take the story in and that I didn't learn anything from the time that happened.
Anyway, here's an update of 'Listen', and I guess you guys can suggest what things could happen when teacher Anon meets with Lemon Zest as she arrives at the school.
>>27429139
>After you lock yourself into the mode of giving the impression that you’re listening, Cinch gives you a specific set of instructions to get the girls to behave.
>These instructions basically consist of you taking more and more of their things away and replacing them with detention slips.
>Not exactly considerate when one os trying to make a learning environment a fun place to be in. Every ounce of your well-being is against this, but you know when Cinch has her mind made up beyond any hope of being convinced otherwise.
>She wants you to take away what seems to be the only thing this girl truly loves in order to get her to pay attention in class and raise the average test scores… or something like that.
>You’ve honestly tuned about by now.
>Get up out of the chair and walk out after the lecture is finished, conversation over. Time to go to work.
>The last thing you remember Cinch saying is something about catching Lemon Zest right as she walks through the front doors before school begins. You have a homeroom class to look over, but still have enough spare time to linger by the front hallway of Crystal Prep and wait for the girl to appear, presumably with her headphones on her head.

More on the way, along with other stories once I get some god damn sleep before continuing.
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>>27370137

>The next morning.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xIQXmvtY9xo
>Saturday, 9:12 A.M.
[”And that’s what happened…”] you tell Rainbow Dash, who minutes ago just demanded to know what exactly went down at the club.
>[“Sheesh, those guys were stronger and bigger than you. Weren’t you scared a bit?”]
[“Not really, when I got hurt they made me feel angrier with myself instead.”]
>[“What?”]
[“I realized my skills are getting rusty. I guess I have to brush up on them as soon as my parents let me out of the house.”]
>[“They grounded you?! Why?!”]
[“They lost their shit when they looked at my cut face. Fortunately my mom has experience on healing my wounds. They advised me to stay out of trouble.”]
>[“But you didn’t do anything wrong!”]
[“Hey, I know my parents very well to know that it’s futile to convince them otherwise. When I get into trouble they ground me and then ask questions later.”]
>[“Well that sucks…and I think of my dad as a bit of a jerk whenever he grounds me just because I forgot to clean my bedroom.”]
[“Forgot? Yeah right…”] you say with a laugh, [“speaking of wish. How’s your dad?”]
>[“The PTA meeting with Principal Celestia went better than I expected. I thought that my dad would be mad at me when he returned home because I failed the math and Spanish tests. But instead he looked so happy…I don’t understand what happened.”]
>You let out a chuckle.
[“I’m guessing that you’ll have to thank Principal Celestia for saving your butt this time.”]
>[“Oh shut up Anon…”]
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>>27434852

>You shake your head and keep reading the magazine you are holding in your hands.
>[“By the way dude…how’s Rarity?”]
[“You mean Ms. That-time-of-the-month? What about her?”]
>[“She’s your girlfriend isn’t she?”]
>You scoff.
[“Sunset told me all the things that happened in that small karaoke room. Apparently I’m an idiot because I prefer to hang out with you rather than her.”]
>[“Uhh…”]
[“And the first thing she does is flirt with a better-looking, taller and stronger guy who turns out to be some sort of rapist. Rarity can apologize all she wants, but the fact that she decided to backstab me in a fit of jealousness tells much about her.”]
>[“Dude…”]
[“Fighting with you, cheating on me and almost getting Fluttershy and Sunset into an sticky situation and expecting me to forget all of this in a blink of an eye…really?”]
>Rainbow Dash lets out a sigh.
[“What was that for? You’re not going to tell me that everything was all my fault now aren’t you?”]
>[“No dude, it’s mine…I know how Rarity feels, and that incident with Thunderlane left her-”]
[“Wait, what incident with Thunderlane?”]
>[“O-oh…it’s nothing really, long story short; they used to date. Thunderlane wanted to get Rarity into bed and when she was about to fall under his pressure she finds him cheating on her with one of her friends.”]
[“W-what the!? Which one of you-“]
>[“HEY! It was none of us! It was a girl she used to call her friend…she even flipped her off.”]
>You shake your head.
[“So she does the same thing Thunderlane did to her, to me? I must be dreaming!”]
>[“Perhaps she felt it was going to happen once again…this time with you and me, so she thought she wouldn’t feel betrayed once again if, you know…cheated on you first.”]
[“Ugh…this is so sickening. After all I did for her…and you know what’s the worst part of this? I have to make Sunset and Fluttershy forgive Rarity. Or else I could be in trouble.”]
>[“Wait what?”]
>Oops, you talked too much…
[“N-nevermind.”]
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>>27434948
I hope writing this is making your morning/afternoon as much as reading it has made mine.
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>>27434948
>Anon hoaxes Shimmer and Flutter into third wave feminism
>all blame shifted to Chad and away from Rarity and Anon
>also convinces them that dressing how he tells them to is feminism
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>>27341643
bump
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>>27341643
bump
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bune bunp
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bomp
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Bedtime bump.
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>>27439491
goodnight bump
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Quick question,

Maybe not so quick

Who are the current active writers and what do you like about them?

Who are the best writers that are dead and their best stories (completed or not)?

Just curious
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>>27438660
Oh my god that's cute
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>>27438660
Cool
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>>27434714
More?
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>>27434948
>>27434948
Been reading the entire green since day one, and this also happened to get me into HM. Honestly, this got me out of depression whenever the worst days happened to me. Whenever I've had a shit day, reading this just makes me happy.

From one anon to another, thank you ^^
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>>27440335
leman is best writer
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>>27443128
I agree. Leman tried way too hard to keep this general afloat before Luci tea bagged him.
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>>27443128
Same
I love how his trixie story turned out
Got me so hard
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>>27443128
Is he coming back? I loved his work and he's like Fingerbangs only hope
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>>27443128
Leman was better than Sarge
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>>27443191
I hope he is
>>27443128
Always dude
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>>27443128
I hate Ekans so much for making fun of him I wish he was still here with us
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>>27443128
Best writer hands down
>>27435527
>>27435396
>>27442641
Samefag
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>>27443128
I want him to come back. I miss his delicious glorious green.
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>>27440335
Lemans Trixie story was the best one of 2016
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>>27440335
I really like Super Anon but really anyone is good except Ekans Monev
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>>27443268
I actually helped him come up with the Trixie story.
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>>27440335
All the current writers suck ever since Leman left
>inb4 NaOH fanboys
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This isn't your average everyday samefagging
This is
Advanced samefagging
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>>27443297
Stay salty kiddo
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>>27443297
>I wear a fedora and suck cocks
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>>27443297
>Being this jealous of Leman
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>>27443297
Your butthurt is delicious
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>>27440335
Anything by Leman, really
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ass hole
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>>27438660
Aww that's so cute.
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>>27443128
>>27443182
>>27443186
>>27443191
>>27443196
>>27443231
>>27443239
>>27443258
>>27443263
>>27443268
>>27443279
>>27443323
Leman was a rising star, totally not a ego maniac self indulged paranoid asswipe. We need him back better then ever. We need him to make delicious green everyday.
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>>27443690
Leman was fucking terrible.
He had one story that was good and it wasn't even that good.
When he left he was writing that awful story about fake wrestling.
and also that rainbow dash story that was horrible,
Then he tried to repost a dazzlings story to make it seem he was doing something.
He was bad and everyone who liked him should feel bad.
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>>27440335
Leman is greatodaze

>>27443734
Have sex
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>>27443690
Leman 2016

Make Greentext Great Again!
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>>27443814
Nah
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leman is awful
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Fapman's the best.

: ^)
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>it's a pointless drama shitpost
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>>27440335
Naoh is good, so is Greentext.
Pheno's okay when she gets off her ass and actually writes.
Cosmos' new, but seems pretty good.
Scoots is also good, and seems to be back at it again.
Leman was, well, not great, but getting better. He's also dead, so get over it all you mewling plebs.
There's a semi-serious answer to your question, to go with all that tasty cancer.

Sarge is deadish, but his stories are good, check em out in the paste. Also, Alex, Ekans/Lucifer, they've got some good stuff in there. Just rolling through the paste and checking out anything with a High amount of views wouldn't be a waste of time, if you're just looking for content. Anything marked as [FF] in the paste is on Fimfiction, so I''d just check it out there, since the formatting's easier to read than a paste.

Textual diarrhea over.
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>>27444856
Alex and GreentextSavant are the same guy.
He's also Serenity (the OP of this thread) Hyperactive, Systematic and a couple others.
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>>27440335
Don't trust this faggot for anything >>27444856
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Title: 'Trixie the Tumblrite'.
>Trixie scrolls through the rows upon rows of posts on her Tumblr.
>The same thing as every time; no re-blogs, no notes, nothing.
>With a pair of clouding eyes, she seeks out the homepage for her blog. A couple of clicks of the mouse is what it takes to accurately select the little icon correctly with the cursor over it.
>Now the girl is searching through the sidebar for any notifications, anything that had happened when she was away. At the same time, she thinks up the new ideas for her next post or two, maybe more than that if today turns out to be another bad day.
>So far, Trixie is following 23 Tumblrs, which is 23 more than the number of other Tumblrs that follow Trixie.
>She doesn’t say anything this time… just looks at that one big zero on her screen. She then proceeds to go to her dashboard to see what everyone else has posted.
>All of these magnificent works of art. Some of the most unimaginable things Trixie has ever seen. No real words to describe the difference between them and the things that Trixie has done.
>Can’t bear to look at the page anymore, click back to the dashboard. Trixie open up her own drawing program and begins scribbling down whatever she can.
>There had been many many times when she could have practiced, and took time into learning how to draw something that didn’t look like chicken scratches for a change. Trixie had seen that opportunity for many years time and time again, but she never took it.
>And to this very day, she still understands why.
>Spending so much time sitting down and going over all of these drawing techniques, all of those confusing instructional videos, all those graded assignments, all of those things that turned the girl away from wanting to learn. The problem was the aspect of learning.
>It was always so tedious and boring, planning a seed of disdain in Trixie’s heart whenever she ever heard the phrase “Learning how to draw”.
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>>27445044
>Trixie saves new document after new document, unrealistically waiting for some notification.
What does she see on the screen next?

Damn character limits.

Seeing that writing one of my usual stories isn't enough to get any good back and forth between the Anons here, how about a full-on CYOA, hmm? I kind of figured doing this would work out a bit better.
So what do you guys say? Anything you want to see happen next?
>>27444856
And just for confirmation, >>27444930 tells the truth.
>>27410080
Oh, darn. How did I miss this post? Welp, looks like I gotta continue FriENDship too while doing this. Here we go again.
>>27408872
That's a pretty neat meme.
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>>27445083
You're still a meme Grey
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>>27445044
I hope Twilight triggers her in some way.
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>>27444930
>>27445083
I know that, but if I tell someone to read GreentextSavant, how is said person supposed to know I mean read Alex and his slew of pseudonyms unless I mention them?

Didn't remember you were Serenity, as well, though.
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>>27444931
Yeah, that guy's a shit. Calling me okay? He's giving me way too much credit. Besides, I tend to have to be on my ass to write.
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Leman is best fngerbang writer
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>>27445821
You're fine for all I can care
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>>27445821
this one is worst fingerbang writer because women cannot write
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Did I miss something? Why did everyone start shitflinging at NaOH? Has been one of the most consistent writers here...I get everyone liked leman...but wtf?
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>>27446070
Get used to it, no one is immune to shitflinging.
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>>27446110
Of course but the circlejerking/samefagging over leman is hilarious. If he wants to write again he will. Meanwhile we have awesome writers here being shat on because of a couple guys opinions. It's like you guys don't want stories
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>>27343916
Bitch
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>>27399967
Well, I'm too dumb to get this to work on my version of Steam but thanks anyway.
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I WANT TO ASSIMILATE HER INTO THE GREATER HIVE MIND
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>>27444483
At dicksucking.
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>>27446411
Then why are you crying over it? If the writers are stalling, then you have every right to complain.
>It's like you guys don't want stories
Srsly? How long have you been here?
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>>27446885
And the answer for that is dicksucking a writer who doesn't want to write while putting down the ones that are?

Granted I don't mind actually, it's the samefaggotry on this thread that struck me as odd
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>>27446913
What writers? Who knows if they really don't want to write or not? Although there is one writer who does fit that category, but no one gives a shit.

It has been going on for many threads, if you haven't noticed.
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>>27446951
Obviously no one knows...oh well.

Enjoying the stories so far
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>>27447135
Just one, but he keeps on writing just so that he can finish the story and retire, but the dumbass rehashed one of his older stories for a "butterfly effect"
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>>27447171
who?
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>>27447194
The inorganic compound.
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http://pastebin.com/tNGcwGq6

>This isn't right. You can't leave her here.
"I just remembered; I need to give her my homework."
>"Then go get it." Sunset bickers.
"The last time I gave her a fake, she slapped me."
>They look at each other, questioning it by raising their eyebrows.
"She wanted to watch me grab out the actual homework from now on."
>Fluttershy stands up.
>"He's right." She tries to say in an menacing way.
>They just watch as you are being led out by Fluttershy.
>"How did you--"
"Wait until we're out of here."
>Aside from the usual people watching, Norman discreetly points a finger at you.
>You and Fluttershy made it outside, but continue to walk away from the cafeteria doors for safe measurement.
"What the fuck happened in there?"
>"It wasn't my idea! They pushed me to do it."
"How?"
>She itches the back of her hand.
>"They wanted to see how far I can take this by proving to them that you belong to me."
"So taking my food when I left was enough?"
>"I had my doubts on grabbing it, but I didn't have much of a choice."
"Why did they take it?"
>"I was already full, but the rest weren't."
"And you just gave it to them?"
>"Well, they sort of asked."
"How?"

>You take all of Anon's food and place it on your tray.
>This is bad, but Anon should jump on the idea of what's going on, right?
>You walk back and sit right back down. All of your friends look at you, waiting for you to do something.
>"So?" Rainbow asks.
"What?"
>"Aren't ya going to eat any of it?" Applejack suggests.
"I'm not hungry."
>It's true, you just ate a small meal a few minutes ago and don't feel like eating anymore.
>"Care to share some of his stuff?" Sunset encourages you to give up Anon's meal.
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>>27447280
"Sure, I guess."
>"Thanks." Rainbow Dash swipes the hamburger right off of your tray.
>One by one, your tray starts to come into view.
>Sunset takes the pudding cup, whereas Applejack grabs the apple and Rarity snatches his milk carton.
>At the end of it all, you're left with nothing.

>"That's when you came back and noticed--"
"That my shit was jacked."
>You stop by your locker and play around with the lock.
>"I'm sorry, Anon."
"It's fine, you couldn't do anything. HOWEVER, we can string this to our advantage."
>"How?"
>With a good tug, you take off your lock and open up the locker.
"Follow my lead."

>A few minutes have passed.
>The two of you are waiting for the bell to ring so that you can put on a good show.
"So, how's the cupcake?"
>She munches down on the fluffy dessert.
>"Bretty good."
>The bell rings.
"Okay, here we go."
>She finishes it up and rolls the paper into her leather jacket.
>You crouch down and shuffle some of your things inside your locker, pretending as if you're looking for your homework.
>In the distance, there is people walking down the hallway; all of them chatting away about what they're going to do tomorrow and the following weekend.
>"Hurry up, slowpoke!" Fluttershy shouts out while smacking the back of your head.
"Okay, ow." You comment when rubbing the back of your head.
>"Sorry." She whispers.
>"Enjoyed your lunch, Anon?" Rarity calls you out from behind.
>You pull out a sheet of paper filled with chicken scratch and an offensive image on the bottom right corner.
"Aside from starving, it could have been better."
>You get up to hand the paper over to Fluttershy, but notice Rainbow Dash and Rarity standing right beside her.
"But really, it's nice that the most powerful girl in the group proves it by feeding the rest."
>Rarity and Rainbow Dash instantly drop their smirks and replace them with a rather upsetting frown.
"It not only shows how dominant she is from all the rest, but how charitable she is to help others."
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>>27447305
>That frown is now much worse, especially with the fact that they are showing some teeth.
"Here, Fluttershy."
>You hand over the paper.
>"What class is that?" Rarity asks.
>"English, why?" Fluttershy answers while holding the paper.
>"I just think that it would be wonderful if you would allow us to have a look at it, wouldn't you agree, Rainbow Dash?"
>"Uh, yeah!" She follows Rarity's lead.
>"Fine, just give it back to me after class." Fluttershy then hands over the paper to Rarity.
>Rarity gains that smug look back, but as quickly that came by, the same could be said as it vanished when she took a look at it.
>"What is that?" Rarity holds the paper close to Rainbow Dash.
>Rainbow Dash giggles. "Dick butt."
>Rarity was so disgusted that she crumpled up the paper and tossed it at the ground.
>"I couldn't even make out any of that gibberish. It would as if Anon gave you a fake." Once again, she has that smile from before. "What are you going to do about it, Fluttershy?"
>To their surprise, Fluttershy grabs you by the shirt and pushes you right into the set of lockers.
>"What did I say!?" She nearly shouts, but it was good since the metal clang is still ringing in your ears.
>You rub the side of your head and look around, noticing that the people passing by stop for a moment to look at your suffering.
>Rarity and Rainbow Dash are the ones that are mostly shocked by the outcome.
"I don't have it! I thought that you needed math!"
>Fluttershy grabs your shirt and pulls you in. "Next time, I WON'T be so forgiving." She lets you go.
>You fumble around, but you manage to keep your balance.
"Alright, I'll get it to you--"
>"Now, Anon."
>You go back and take out some old math homework.
>Fluttershy doesn't even bother to look at it as she stuffs it into her jacket.
>"Is everything fine, Fluttershy?" Rainbow Dash asks.
>"Just Anon here needs some discipline one in a while
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>>27447338
>"Just Anon here needs some discipline one in a while, isn't that right?"
"Yes, Fluttershy."
>"Sorry, I didn't hear that. What was it?"
>You rub your thumb around your fingers, trying to focus your fury on something else.
>This is the part on where you need to swallow your pride, only to keep this going.
"Yes, Miss Fluttershy."
>She has a fiendish smile crawling on her, whereas her friends look disturbed by the whole scene.
>"We'll, erm, be going now." Rarity uncomfortably says to Fluttershy.
>"Yeah, don't want to be late for class, do we?" Rainbow Dash slides in a weak excuse.
"You never gave a shit about class, Rainbow--"
>The bell rings.
>"Welp, now I do. Later, asshat!" She takes off. Rarity follows right behind her and the crowd scatters everywhere.

>When the hallway checks out to be clear, you and Fluttershy walk around.
"When I said make it look convincing, I didn't mean it literally."
>"Next time, clarify it."
"Fine. Maybe next time, I'll give you a glass bottle and we'll go from there."
>"You really do have a weird sense of humor." Fluttershy states her view on you.
"You're not wrong, but that's not the case." You hold the part of your head that slammed into the flimsy, yet hard metal. "Christ, I didn't know you had that much of a throw."
>You lead Fluttershy to turn left in the upcoming corridor.
>"Sometimes you shouldn't judge a book by its cover."
>As the hallway comes into view, vice principal Luna is standing right around the corner.
>"Listen to your friend, Anon, there is a lot in every single one of you."
>The two of you scoot back from Luna.
"Do you need to be creeping up like that?"
>"Not necessarily, but it comes with practice."
>"H-hello, Vice Principal Luna." Fluttershy sounds as if it was her usual "frail" self.
>"Good afternoon, Fluttershy. How's everything at the shelter lately?" Luna shifts her voice into a much more positive manner.
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>>27447374
>You idly stand by, listening to their mundane conversation.
>"Very well, Anon has greatly improved it for the last few weeks."
>"I see, I wonder on why that is." Luna subtly mocks. "You seem different, Fluttershy."
>"Uh, I have been using a new conditioner?"
>"I suppose so." Luna quickly replies. "This has been an enjoyable conversation, but the two of you need to head for class. I'm sure Anon wouldn't mind going back to doing some physical education, wouldn't you agree?"
>You know what she's doing, but this isn't the right time or place. You never know if there is someone else watching from the sidelines.
"No, I wouldn't mind at all."
>"That's good. Let's go, Anon. I most certainly wouldn't want you to get lost."
>She puts a hand on your shoulder and guides you away from Fluttershy.
"You want to explain to me on what are you doing?"
>"Just sending my students back to class." You tried to turn around, but Luna shoved you forward. "Oh no, you're going back to class. I'm sure the rest are eager for another player."
>Oh shit. As long that it's football, you should be safe.
>"Spitfire expects you to be outside in four minutes. Get going."
>You step into the boys locker room, debating if you should just wait in here or possibly bail.
>They are good ideas to you, but you should stay on Luna's good side for a while.
>With a half-assed effort, you find your locker and take out your P.E. clothes.
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>>27447280
>>27447305
>>27447338
>>27447374
>>27447389
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>>27434948

[“Anyways Dash, don’t feel responsible of Rarity’s tantrum. I wish she wasn’t a jerk to you though. Bet she made you have a bad time in the restroom.”
>[“Mmhm…Anyways dude, let’s change the topic and forget about Rarity for a little bit. Now that you’re grounded won’t you be able to coach us?“]
[“My parents gave me special permission for coaching your team, according to them it’s, what’s the word…healthy? Yeah! That. Healthy for me that I get involved in sports and they don’t want to get in the way of our winning streak. So you won’t have to worry about me.”]
>[“Cool! I’m glad your parents have some common sense for once in a while.”]
>You let out a goodhearted chuckle.
>[“So, are your parents home?”]
[“Nah, they won’t be home for hours…wanna come over and play something?”]
>[“What? Are you serious…”] Rainbow Dash says in a surprised tone, but doesn’t hesitate to say [“-okay!”]
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>>27448838

>Minutes later.
>https://soundcloud.com/totallyluv/save-it-4-me
>A knock on the door is heard.
>As soon as you open it, you’re greeted by the rainbow-haired beauty.
>”Heya dude!”
“Hey Dashie, welcome! Come inside and have a seat over there,” You say while pointing at the comfy couch in front of the big flat screen.
>”Thanks dude,” Rainbow Dash says while looking at her surroundings and wolf-whistling, “cool place…”
“Heh, my parents do well in their jobs, I hope I can earn as much as them in the near future.”
>”Where are your parents anyways?”
“Never mind about them. They won’t be here for a long time. Even though they forbid me of going outside they never said that I couldn’t bring friends over.”
>She smirks.
>”Heh…clever. So, are we playing or what?”
>You show her your newly purchased games.
>”WOW! You got this one!? Put it in dude!” She says as soon as she spots your copy of Drift King.
“Huh, I never thought you’d like this one Dash.”
>”Are you kidding! I love anything speed related. I’m gonna beat you everytime to make you cry.”
“Save the trash talk for later Dashie. Let me get you a drink while the game loads.”
>”Awesome, thanks dude!”
>You place her favorite soft drink on the coffee table in front of you.
>”Huh? How’d you know I love this brand?”
“Lucky guess…”
>Yeah right.
>You quickly input all the videogame’s settings and both of you select your vehicles.
>”You’re going down Anon!”
“>implying.”
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dv13gl0a-FA
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>>27448848
>Multi-player drifting
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>>27426101
Anyone?
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>>27449061
>>27445044
That?
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>>27448848

>Several minutes later.
>Both you and Rainbow won and lost a fair share of races.
>She was so happy the whole time.
>Bragging, complaining and yelling at you after each race.
>What a cutie.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yM9QRbTg6ZQ
>”Well, that was fun dude. Now what?”
“What about a round of penalty shootouts in my back garden? I know you can’t spend a day without playing sports.”
>”That’d be great! You got a ball?”
>You nod.
“It’s in my bedroom. Be right back…”

>A few moments later.
>”Ready?”
>You nod at her.
>Rainbow Dash kicks the ball pretty hard, but you manage to stop it.
>”Nice!”
>You throw the ball at her and she prepares to kick it once again.
>”Anon, mind if I ask you a question?”
“Yeah?”
>Rainbow Dash kicks the ball and you stop it once again with your hands.
>”What do you think of us? After all we’ve done nothing but bring you trouble…and yet you’re still nice to us.”
>You let out a chuckle.
“What do you mean?”
>”I mean; my team, Rarity, Snips and Snails, those guys, Pinkie Pie…Silver Fang’s gang. You know, everything. You’ve put your butt on the line because of us and we haven’t repaid you at all.”
>You scoff.
“I don’t want you to repay me or anything…well, except for Pinkie Pie. She owes me a lot of money.”
>Rainbow Dash giggles.
>”Yeah but- don’t you hate getting harmed or involved into petty issues because of idiots like Snips, Snails and Silver Fang?”
>You sigh.
“Of course not Dashie, in fact I’d blame myself everyday if you or your friends were harmed instead. Especially you of all people.”
>”D-dude?”
“I’d never forgive myself if I let something happen to you or the girls. I’ve never had such amazing friends like you. And I’d be willing to give everything I have to keep you safe and sound, no matter the cost.”
>”…Why?”
“Let’s just say…do you promise to keep a secret?”
>”Wow…if that’s how it’s gonna be, then I promise to keep it a secret.“ She says.
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>>27449336

“Well, here it goes. Something happened back in Det-Mareami that made me realize how I never had someone I could rely on. And it was mostly because of the rough environment I was raised back there.”
>”Go on…”
“I had great friends back there, but it was…somehow my fault those friends split up and the bonds between each other broke. Fortunately I was given another chance, but it was too late. The damage was already done.”
>”Mmm…so that made you a goody-two-shoes?”
“Nah, a girl who was exactly like you…except she was a little less prettier-“
>”Why thank you Anon,” Rainbow Dash says with a blushes.
“-Always trusted me, and even stood up with me when everyone else turned their backs on me over something really stupid.”
>Rainbow Dash smirks.
>”Well, whatever you did in the past doesn’t matter now. You’re a pretty hands - I mean - cool guy! Yeah…”
>You let out a chuckle.
“Thanks Dashie.”
>”I’m glad you’re here with us dude. I wish you had moved to Canterlot earlier.”
“One thing is for sure, I’m never moving away from Canterlot. No matter what happens…”
>”Cool! Now let’s see if you can stop this one!”
“Wha-?”
>Rainbow Dash kicks the ball, but the effect in the ball makes the ball fly straight into your nuts.
“AAAAAAAHHH!”
>”OH SHOOT! I’M SORRY DUDE!” Rainbow Dash says after letting out a loud horrified gasp.
>Rainbow Dash runs towards you as you wince in pain. Trying to help in anyway she can.
“It hurts…so bad.”
>”I’m sorry I’m sorry I’m sorry I’m sorry I’m sorry!” Rainbow Dash cries in an embarrassed tone, “I’ll go get some ice!”
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>>27449336
>>27449352
why the double posting?
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>>27445083
you dont have to cotinue that zombie rite now nigga,i posted that one >>27410080 like days ago
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>>27448848
>Come inside
>have a seat
Alright, this website has ruined my ability to read anything seriously.
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>>27449352
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZshsrMVYgCE
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>>27449336
This music and the atmosphere it brings is so beautiful, but all I can think about is how this all ends. I can't even cherish any of the happy moments in the story anymore, in fact, these moments hurt more than if some shit happened like back at the club. Fuck, I wish I hadn't played HM before reading this, I'd love the climax. You're doing a good job.
Fucking great artist though, I like your taste in music.
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>>27449836
Something like this perhaps?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=16VpZ7w0KpY
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>>27449885
Yeah.
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>>27449081
nah, it was in the last thread
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http://pastebin.com/DYrfXYSy
Please r8

Yes, that's humanized r63
Yes, Gleaming is a fat nerd
Yes, this is my fetish

Please r8
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What did you do to cause her to make this expression?
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>>27451268
Smacked her with my dick. She thought it was small.
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>>27451268
"I don't like you, and I never did you ugly slut"
This actually hurts a lot when it's said by somebody you love and trust. I should know, it's happened to me.
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>>27451226
Not bad. You've got the dialogue down pretty well. While you're constantly combining first person thoughts with second person dialogue, it manages to get by without too much of an issue. If you're planning on continuing this story, unless you want nothing but sexy moments, then I suggest broadening the events that will transpire. Sex gets old fast, as contrary to what most people think. Give a bit more personality to the current male character too. He seems a bit bland. At least you made the relationship between the two siblings apparent and it seems natural.

Overall, 6/10. This is not a bad score because I use the actual 1 through 10 rating system instead of the 7 through 10 system that most people use nowadays. You've got potential, so make the most out of it
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>>27451385
I got the entire story planned out already, and you were hoping for spoilers weren't you.
I'm also making an alt for each chapter from his point of view, mostly to challenge myself into taking care of two inner monologues at the same time, and to keep them from blanding the fuck up.

I hadn't noticed the first person-second issue yet, and in fact, I still can't. Could you give me an example of what you mean?

sex doesn't happen until the last chapter. Until then, sexual tension will be building in the corniest and least mentally advanced manners
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>>27449642
NaOH likes to reference memes occasionally. They're more subtle compared to others.
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>>27451666
Alright, Satan, perhaps I am not using the correct words to describe it. Look at some of your sentences when Gleaming Shield is, for lack of a better phrase, talking to herself. It seems as though you threw in second person words instead of first person just to keep everything in a second person viewpoint. Normally, it gives the impression that an author is telling you the story from a second person point of view, but in this case, it seems as though you tacked on second person words to avoid anything to do with first person. In fact, I felt as though the story is being told by a teenager, would be fine if it was first person because of the main character, but it's not. Maybe I'm over analyzing this, but I think I think if you want that whole, "different point of view," thing you seem to be willing to try, then it makes more sense for this to be in first person rather than second person. It would also sound better too, even though it's tradition to make greentexts in second person. It works if your main character is Anon, but in this case it seems to fall flat.

Here's something you can do for the time being. Try to recreate some of the sentences you made in your story that heavily use second person words, but instead use first person. See what happens. Remember, if what I said really doesn't sound right to you, then you do not have to go through with my critique. This is just a possible way of helping you write more efficiently.
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>>27451773
thank you for the advice wise anon, gonna try it
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>>27451381
That hurts Anon.
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>>27341643
bump
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What happened to cosmic butthole's story?
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>>27454785
He said he was underage, not sure if he was joking, but he got b&
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>>27445223
I'm a better meme than you.
>>27449440
Thanks, but I'm probably going to end up doing it anyway. I don't want to suck at writing anymore, but I also don't have the patience to write something better.
>>27445044
>>27445083
>>27445292
>Trixie still doesn’t know why she does it, but she clicks on the little icon with Twilight’s picture on it. She stares at the screen ad the images load, knowing what terrific and terrible things await her. Perhaps it some sort of self-punishment, but that’s still too far from a definite answer for Trixie to put her finger on it.
>It turns out that Twilight likes to write about as much as she likes to read. If anything, that does make perfect sense.
>Now, it was one thing when Trixie found all of the people online who were better than her at art. At least she had a semi-decent excuse for not being at their level. Being terrible at art was pretty much something that Trixie had come to terms with for a while, despite it mostly tearing her heart apart on some days anyway.
>But this… this is completely new.
>What Trixie notices is something indirect… at least to the original thing that Twilight had done.
>A short story. Having been finished not too long ago.
>All of that praise… all of those positive things Trixie has seen before… now seemingly all happening at once. All of those positive things she wish she had seen when people viewed her work.
>All of those things Trixie has never seen in response to something she did that wasn’t just her sock-puppeting from her phone.
>Everyone loves Twilight’s story… and Trixie knows exactly why. For years upon years, Twilight had read, and read and read. Knowing what people love to read.
>And Twilight has written, and written and written, gaining all of the experience she can get. Breaking her plateau long before Trixie even started trying to be good at anything. And all that makes Trixie feel is trapped.
>Trapped inside of her own limits that she wants nothing less than to put up with.
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>The limits that Trixie holds no patience to slowly lift away from her day by day… week by week… year by year.
>No.
>Trixie doesn’t want to wait. She wants the praise now… that praise that she sees being beamed towards Twilight. It’s right there in front of her face, and she can’t grab it.
>The girl picks up her laptop and throws it across the room.

Does she throw it hard enough to break it, or really lightly and onto her bed?
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Idea:
>pony Discord comes through the portal and tries to prank the first person he sees, Anon
>forgets about superior human tech such as pocketknives
>gives Anon a portable magic circle that can expand and contract to anywhere from 4" to 4' in diameter and allows him to see anywhere in the world and stick anything through the portal in exchange for Discord's life
>rape in some cases ensues in funny situations like in class or in the gym (dicking a chick while they're lifting)
>eventually a girl finds out
>?

Should I write this?
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>>27455674
don't know or care, I hate tumblr on principle and its your story.
>>27455786
Magic public fucking fun times. WRITE IT NOW!
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>>27455674
Lightly and onto her bed next to her porn of Alex Grey
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>>27455904
Fuck fifty shades.
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>>27455674
No such thing as a better meme, idiot.
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>>27455572
God damnit. I was enjoying it.
Fucking people say that they're underage all the time and never get banned
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>>27456639
Really? I've never seen them miss one, even obvious jokes.
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>>27455572
Kek
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>>27449792
Daily reminder that there will never be more of this.
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>>27455983
I was referring to the writefag m8. But now that I think it would be weird having porn of a writefag
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>>27447389
>You quickly jog outside and stand by a set of cardboard boxes.
>"What took you so long? You just missed warm-up." Spitfire points to the students who just finished stretching their legs. "Either do some real quick or get in there."
>You couldn't care less for that, so you joined along with the others.
>Spitfire takes a box from the small stack and drops it.
>"For most of you know, we will be playing flag football." She takes out a familiar shaped pig skin and spins it around in one hand. "Rules are the same as the original, only one thing," She reaches into a box and pulls out a belt covered in flags stapled to the sides. "Pull down the flags to stop them IF they are the opposite gender! If they are the same gender, you are clear to tackle them down."
>Fuck, you expected the other kind of football, not this one!
>"The team that wins gets full credit for the day. Now, let's get this going. Lightning, Soaren - you two are team captains." She kicks two boxes towards their direction.
>They take their own box and walk into the open space. For a few moments, they look at you and then to each other.
>Some of the students begin to chatter, whereas Bulk focuses on his muscles.
>Spitfire blows her whistle.
>"Alright, get your teams and lets see some action out there!" She shouts out. "Rock, paper, scissors for who gets the advantage."
>Soaren throws rock, and Lightning tosses scissors.
>"Who do you want first?"
>Soaren scans over the group and smiles. "Bulk, you're with me." He points at him.
>"I'll take Coco." Lightning Dust calls her out.
>You were normally picked out somewhere in the middle, but this time is different.
>Today, you were the very last to be selected.
>"Come on, Anon." Lightning Dust says in a low voice.
>When you walk over to her, she tosses you a worn out belt.
"You have a spare?"
>"Sorry, we're all out." She hands the box back to Spitfire.
>Fucking bitch. If she was on the other team, you would drag her down, regardless of the rules.
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>>27458900
>They start to huddle up, but Lightning pushes you away.
>"Wait a minute, we'll tell you what to do later."
"This better be good."
>"It is, trust me."
>You allow her to share whatever plan she has to the rest of your team.
>In the pit of your stomach, you sense a bad feeling to what's going on.
>It might just be a hunch, since she is hiding the game plan away from you and you see that Bulk has a ominous smile over at the other team.
>"Alright, break!" Lightning chants. "Anon! You stand over at the farthest left side."
"Hold up, what am I really doing."
>"Glad that you asked; when we toss the ball at you, catch it and run towards the goal post."
>It just can't be that simple.
"That's it? No details?"
>"That's all on you." She slaps your shoulder. "No pressure, we have faith in ya."

>You stand at your position, quickly stretching your arms.
>You'll need them prepped for when the football comes over. You can never be too sure on what they have in store for you.
>You're not ready to let your guard down, and you won't for quite a long time.
>"Blue, 24!" Lightning shouts out. She scans the crowd, but takes some time when looking at your general direction. "Blue, 24! Hut, hut, hike!"
>You watch as they work their magic. A good chunk are holding their position. The rest run around, almost as if that they were chickens with their heads cut off.
>At the corner of your eye, something brown was approaching, and at an alarming rate.
>You swipe your arm up and bring it down, successfully catching it.
"Heh. Wait..."
>You look around and notice three guys starting to charge at you.
"Motherfuckers."
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>>27458915
>"Run, Anon! RUN!" Lightning Dust shouts out, almost as if she was cheering you on.
>You jump to the side as one leaps over to take you down, but ends up eating the dirt below the grass.
>As the other one tries to do the same, you run past him and weave to the side.
>The third one snags your arm, but you counter it by pushing him away.
>You hear a whistle blowing in the sidelines.
>"What was that!? I said tackling, not hand-holding!" Spitfire shouts at the other player.
>"But I wasn't--"
>"Paying attention!? You TACKLE them down!"
>Spitfire grunts while walking away. The other player goes back to his team, looking rather heated when he looks directly at you.
>"Good going there, Anon!" Lightning says in a positive manner. "Looks like we're getting a kickoff for that."
"If I didn't push him away, he would have damaged my arm."
>"Quit complaining, you're being useful for once." She insults you.
>You'll somehow get her back.

"Fuck... this..."
>Six minutes in and you're sweating like a fat girl at her sisters wedding.
>Lightning Dust will toss you the football at any chance that she gets, and it's practically non-stop.
>You've already been tackled down twice and you're not really up for a third time.
>"Hey, cheer up! We're winning!" Lightning gloats.
"How about you give the ball to other people, sounds like a nice idea?"
>"Ever heard of a phrase; if it ain't broke, don't fix it?"
"That has nothing to do with this!"
>"Tell that to the scoreboard."
>Okay, that does it.
>You can either take a few more falls, or play this your way.
>The former already hurts, including the possibility that you might have a broken rib as of right now.
>Still, that won't stop you from taking a few of these pricks down.
>"19! 32!" You prepare yourself in a starting position as Lightning finishes her countdown. "Hut, hut, hike!"
>She ready's her throw, and so does a small group of guys to take you down. In the far back of it all, Bulk Bicep is set to finish you off.
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>>27458925
>The moment the football flew over, you knew it was game time.
>You grab the football and go head on to the charging group.
>After speeding by the first guy, you elbow him in the stomach.
>When you're speeding past the second guy, you "mistakenly" kick him on the shin.
>The third and forth did their best to tackle you down from each side, but crashed into one another.
>Bulk wasn't stopping; in fact, he was speeding up.
>You tuck the football in your arm and--
>Spitfire blows into her whistle.
>"Hold it, hold it!"
>She walks over and stands right in between you and Bulk.
>"This is football, not battle royale!"
>She snatches the football away and points at the group of guys that are groaning in pain.
>"Anymore of that and I will take you to the Vice Principal."
>There's just no way you can win this.
>She hands the football to Bulk.
>The group of injured guys get up and sit on the side of the field.
>"What the heck was that!?" Lightning smacks you upside the head.
"Improvising."
>"Well don't, now they get to start off!"
"Too bad."
>She grunts in anger.
>"Don't mess this up, Anon, especially when we try to turn this around, you got it?"
>You're ready to call her out, but stop when something comes to mind.
"Yeah, I got it."
>If she wants a game plan, you're going to give her one.

>"27! 42! Hut, hut, hike!" Soaren yells out.
>You try to go between two guys, but they keep you from passing through.
>Spitfire doesn't even struggle on passing to two girls who barely did much to keep her away.
>Thunderlane passes by to get Soaren, but he passes it to Coco.
>Lightning slips the football away from Coco and is more than ready to toss it at you.
>You back away and run off to get some distance, noticing Cloudchaser is clear and out in the open at the far side of the field.
>Irregardless of Cloudchaser's existence, Lightning still tosses it to you.
>Almost immediately, everyone in the opposing team is turning their attention to you.
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>>27458935
>Cloudchaser still waives her arms, demanding for the football.
>As multiple people run over to take you down, you throw that shit back at Lightning Dust.
>She fumbles it around, but does catch it and was about to toss it right back, only to rethink that idea when you were tackled down by Nightingale.
>A part of the opposing team starts to chase her down, but she speeds pass them and heads for the touchdown.
>The only person that was in her way was Bulk Biceps.
>She manages to dodge him, but he starts to chase her down.
>Lightning pushes herself to leap for the touchdown.
>Bulk follows her by doing the same thing while reaching over to pull down a flag.
>She manages to score the touchdown and stands up, raising the football to bask in her victory.
>"AHA!" She gloats.
>"Not so-- fast?" Bulk questions as he holds out her gym shorts.
>Everyone, including herself, looks down to see a pair of blue and white striped panties.
>She covers it by moving the football over her frilly crotch, embarrassed as she takes them back.
>Spitfire just stares until she snaps out of it when Lightning puts on her shorts.
>A loud whistling sound blares through your eardrums.
>"You two; we're going to the vice principals office!" She orders them. "The rest of you; do something active until I get back."
>You feel proud, ashamed, and flaccid. All of this from watching the two of them leave the field.
>Lightning is beyond pissed and Bulk is purely ashamed.
>You slightly cough out of pain from the tackle.
>Lightning hears it and points at you.
>"I swear, you'll pay for this!" She screams.
>You respond by brushing off some grass clippings and showing her the bird.


Tarra for now.
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Needs more best grill
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Hey guys, popping in to let y'all know that I'll be posting at least something later tonight. Lately, I haven't been able to get down and dirty because of work and errands. But I'll have some time tonight.
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delicious green
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>>27459044
Neh
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>>27460978
Top pussy.
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>>27461748
Waid is dead and it's your fault.
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>>27461748
I hate you even more now that he's been dead for a month.
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>>27461939
>>27462033
He'll be back. I'm sure. You need to have faith.
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>>27462720
Whoops, forgot my trip.
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>>27462923
Slipping up mate
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>you sent a love letter to your crush, telling her to meet you by the statue in front of the school
>you spent a long time writing it, and you're sure she'll love it
>you're waiting, when you see her
>she's ecstatic, a huge smile on her face, your letter clutched to her chest
>with tears of joy barely held back, she tells you that yes, she would love to go out with you, that she was waiting for this moment for the longest time now
>but there's just one thing
>this isn't the girl the letter the meant for

What do?
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>>27463202
YOU TAKE HER OUT ANYWAYS.

unless she's ugoo. then just say you have to go to the bathroom and hall ass pass the bathrooms and go home.
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>>27463202
Oh shit, that hit close to home.
Don't take her out!
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>>27455992
That's a pretty neat meme.
>>27463202
To be honest, I guess ride the storm out and date the girl who came to you with the letter. Then start to let the relationship crumble after a while and befriends your crush in the meantime, showing that you're taken so you don't seem desperate and genuinely want to be friends. Break up with first girl and pretend to be sad and lonely from becoming single again. CrushFriend will now have a better chance at saying yes to you.
>>27455674
>>27455904
>>27455850
>With a soft thud the laptop lands on the surface of Trixie’s bed, still blaring the bright light of the screen in her direction. the light hurst Trixie’s eyes still, but not as much as what the light shows hurts her heart. Trixie can still see what people are saying about Twilight’s work.
>How much they adore her, how much work Twilight had put into her creations.
>It revs up a deep seated disdain within Trixie as she walks over to the bed to pick up the laptop once more. Everything inside of her is screaming to turn the computer off before she does something she’ll regret.
>Trixie folds the laptop closed and turns the light back on in her room. The relative brightness that almost stings her eyes gives her a good idea how long she had been sitting in her chair facing the screen with the darkness surrounding her. If anything, the sudden influx of light brings a gradually prevailing moment of common sense.
>The creaking sound of the chair soothes Trixie as she sits back down into it and lowers her shoulders. She breathes a lot more slowly and takes another glance at the laptop still on her bed.
>She can no longer see what she read on the screen, but she can still feel those words. Her hands ball up in to fists as she imagines Twilight reading all of those positive comments. All of that praise and feedback that Trixie had wanted to hear about her work for so long.

I'll come back in a little bit and get the next thread all set up. May continue Listen and FriENDship.
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>>27464403
>To be honest, I guess ride the storm out and date the girl who came to you with the letter. Then start to let the relationship crumble after a while and befriends your crush in the meantime, showing that you're taken so you don't seem desperate and genuinely want to be friends. Break up with first girl and pretend to be sad and lonely from becoming single again. CrushFriend will now have a better chance at saying yes to you.
damn, manipulative as fuck
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>>27464517
Nothing wrong with wanting to win the game of life.
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>>27464517
>>27464843
Thriving sometimes comes with a price.

>>27341643
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>>27465081
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>>27465095
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>>27465099
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>>27465106
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>>27465112
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>>27465112
>>27465106
>>27465099
>>27465081
>>27465095
Not you again...can't we reach the end of the thread without an image dump for once?
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>>27465130
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>>27465132
It's tradition.
>>27465133
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>>27465132
Start replying then.
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>>27465145
>>27465146
no.
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>>27465151
Why Anon?
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>>27465151
Okay, then. You win, buddy.
>>27465145
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>>27465145
At least post something good.
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>>27465158
I am reading other thing and don't want to look at spam every five seconds. I am looking at you by the way>>27465166
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>>27465169
Here.
>>27465166
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>>27465175
It'll be okay.
>>27465178
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>>27465178
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>>27464843
There is no winning the game of life. There are just better times and worse times as you go along. And holy shit Anon, schedule an appointment with a psychiatrist you absolute madman.
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>>27465191
die in a fire.
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>>27465198
Ouch, dude.
>>27465191
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>>27465209
I want one thread to decay naturally from actual conversation, not vanilla pic spam. sue me or fuck off and wait properly.
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>>27465221
Dang, you're just roasting me tonight.
>>27465209
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>>27465230
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>>27465230
don't patronize me, just finish the job or stop.
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>>27465248
That's a pretty neat meme.
>>27465245
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>>27465257
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>>27465257
your stoned aren't you?
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>>27465277
Nah.
>>27465270
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Why the flood of pics to end off a thread? And why marshmallows?
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New thread when?
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>>27465297
It's what we do every thread.

>>27465354
New thread:
>>27465347
>>27465347
>>27465347
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The reason for the image dump is so we don't hit autosage immediately after a writer provides new content, because then people would be more likely to miss it.
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>>27464403
>That's a pretty neat meme.
That's a pretty shit meme
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>>27463202
I did this once.

Although, it was more hauling a girl into my lap and kissing her as a joke, than a love letter.

Then the storm hit.

"Ermagerd! I can't believe you finally noticed me! I've been waiting for so long!"

Much groping ensued, and she might have had the nicest pair of tits I've had my hands on. Tasted pretty good, too.

That went down in flames when she literally let a guy from the band we went to go see fuck her in the ass in the room right next to me while I was getting wasted.

She really did have a damn nice body to snuggle up to, though...

Ah, memories...
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