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FOE: A Post-Nuclear Pony Thread

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Wartime Nostalgia edition

Old thread: >>27198867

The original, read it first:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/119190/

EqD Side Story Compilation Post - March:
http://www.equestriadaily.com/2015/03/fallout-equestria-side-stor-updates.html

Tales from the Wasteland:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jjr70KyM4O4tilvWOPMbgT0c9hPnFK12xUQW6wGrCm8

PnP Document:
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0ApDd-Pi_fJGZdGZiN0U0ajdtR3dTZ0FVQUh4cnhqenc

Smut Collection:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LBe5FGXd2Fgj0CRbz8HDZ6fDC11aRB9O-KfYxCODjGM

FOE Bestiary:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1d6ZpDbbs6HWYBpoRwh1XZ0PB0TSxWaxtQODkRviq1KY/edit?usp=sharing

/foe/ Chatrooms:
#FOEchat (and #foefetish for you horsefuckers) on irc.canternet.org:6667
http://falloutequestria.wikia.com/wiki/Special:Chat

Recent updates:

The Chrysalis (April 26th)
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/288365/

Black And White (April 23rd)
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/44457/

ITT: We discuss the height of Equestrian living standards before the bombs fell.
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>>27269654
I sometimes wonder about what kind of foals toys were available for purchase in those days. Like action figures or dolls.

They also had TV didn't they? Did they have cartoons and shit too?
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I called PipBoy games long before Bethesda did.
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Fucking synths.
Fucking took all of our Anons.
We need you Anon to help us get them back.
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So with all that, does Murky just like the steel room and chains?
Cause I'm pretty sure there are quite a few mares and even some stallions that would pay to put him through that.
Like really, he knows whips, likes being chained up, ordered around...
I'm just saying, Glimmer is onto something here.

So with Murky being an ever the avowed thief, what led to this idea?
I mean at first it seemed a story element, but now its becoming more and more part of Murky.
I rather like it, but would be curious to know more Fuzzy.

I do like that you made Red Eye charming and interesting, many appros for actually making a worthy character.
Though it does bring the question, if Red Eye knows so much, then how are the slavers able to step out of line?
Shouldn't he see and clamp down on it?

Parasprites are brutal, not something to be run into.
So which chapter do they return in as a threat?

Aurora Star, I have a feeling her colleague the good Doc Weathervane is rather hiding something, especially if he is wanting that prototype orb back.

With the fact that Murky keeps escaping, does Red Eye just accept the fact that ponies want to be free as part of the business?
Kind of seems like he is straddling that line of let them be and making an example frankly.

So WHiplash never had Murky take his jurkan off?
Like, what?
That makes no sense, it also means Murky never got cleaned while at the fun farm.

Given that Sunny Days is alive, does this mean Murky is going to angst?
Please, lie to me if you have to, Murky was just starting to perk up.


Ok this needs to be discussed.
Wingboner is made of pegasi.
Most ponies hate pegasi.
Why the hell are they looking only at pegasi porn?
Why aren't they looking for something more to the racial taste, like Pyramids or Earth?
In fact, it makes it really wierd for how many then turn on Murky for being wierd.


What does Murky's head wound look like?
Does it get healed fast and that's why its in none of the art?
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>>27269849

Thats a good question.

In the show movies seem to exist, but the kind of movie reel stuff you show for a big audience, and no individual TV´s

But around the time the big wars going on, I can imagine them having black and white oldey time TV´s

Also I can imagine kids cartoons where the G.I. Horses beat up King Zebra and his croonies.
Buy Warbonds
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>>27271028
>G.I. Horses beat up King Zebra and his croonies
>Buy Warbonds
Pretty much.
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I cant remember, were Zebra-platoons in the forces a thing in the original or not?

I mean stuff like US-Japanese in WW2 who enlisted in the US Army.
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>>27271082
good question, not sure. There was definitely Zebra living within Equestria and also stigmatized because of it. Zebra Town and whatnot.
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>>27271157

Aye, but like Zecora was used as Spy. And I cn imagine having a few zebra troops may proof usefull to Equestrian platoons, for, say, negotiation with surrendering enemies, reading captured intell and so on.

I could imagine a system where Zebratown zebras are offered priviledges for themselves after their service and their close relatives for service.

helll, now I want a fic about a war-time platoon
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I'm dying a little with every hour that passes without another update to "The Chrysalis".

I need to know what happens next.
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>>27271445
Same here Anon. Same here
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>>27270146
Damn Synthony Orchestra
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>>27271333
Would have been great if more of Zecora's alchemy was involved in her ministry training than just the hoof to hoof stuff.
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Minute pip bump
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What are the limits on transformation magic in FOE?
Like is it limited to changing fur and eye color, or can it gender shift as well?
What of changing size, race, or changing others?
Could it be used to ponies into things, or things into other things?
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>>27273702

I unno, Twilight couldnt give/changes Applebloooms CM in the show, and Trxie was shocked about Twi genderbenderspell in that one episode ebcause even with the alicorn amueltt she wouldnt be able to do that
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>>27273744
Ok better part, where does it cross into fetish terrirtory?

Like if I have a unicorn change herself into an earth pony buck as a disguise, is that too much?
If its used as part of a romantic cover?

What of changing enemies into trees or friends into small items to easily carry them around?

How would be a good way to keep it from just being hit the target with the magic beam to turn them into something not a threat?
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>>27274549
It crosses into fetish territory when you make it fetish territory.
You can write five pages of sex and not cross into fetish territory if the intent of the writing is to show character progression or a relationship blooming.
It becomes fetish territory when you twist the setting and characters to reach the transformation.
If the setting contains a viable, believable means of gender swapping someone than it's use wouldn't be fetishistic.
If real life spies could readily change gender they would.
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>>27254295
>>27256085
>>27254391
>You could understand Nails wanting to get back at Pincer, but you were also a little dissapointed she wasted a good portion of that drink to do it.
>She also had the rest of the food and drinks you pilfered.
>But more important than that, there was a ton more stuff left at that house that your clan could probably use.
"Uhhm,"
>You stuttered a bit but nopony seemed to notice at first.
"There's more stuff at the house. Like food and drinks and firewater. C-clothes too."
>A few of your clanmates gave you harsh but curious looks.
>Pincer stomped with her good hoof and growled at you.
>"And you didn't think to come back and let us know? What, you want to keep it all for yourself or some shit?"
>Your ears pinned back from her verbal assault.
"N-no! We just, got distracted and wanted to have some fun."
>Buckshot's dad huffed and grumbled a bit before he spoke up.
>"We'd all like to a bit a fun filly, but you're almost an adult,"
>He then turned to his son with an accusing look and pointed a hoof at him.
>"And YOU are supposed to be one! Your first thoughts when scavving should be 'how can I help the clan,' got it?"

Continued...
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>>27273702
>>27273744
A pony could probably throw up an illusion to make others see them as [x], but physical changes would be too much.
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>>27275277
I have a part in my story that will be doing exactly this, and only people paying careful attention will notice the caster is concealing parts of itself.
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>>27275277
Well I mean in MLP, transformation is done multiple times, and Twilight's mom even recounts it in Canterlot.
So yeah, it can be done.
And then there are the chimeras...>>27275277
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>>27275503
>Well I mean in MLP, transformation is done multiple times
Weren't all of those times done by Twilight?
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>>27275503
That's the hitch. The only pony that has been shown to do it is either a unicorn with a talent for magic explicitly or an alicorn. It's possible but it'd be reasonable to assume that only high-level magic users could do it.

On the other hand most readers will forgive minor diversions from their headcanons as long as you don't focus on the event itself.
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Ok, what about magical charms?
Like a bracer of charms that when charged cause a personal change?
So she has a fixed set of personas to choose from as opposed to wildshifting?
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>>27275321
Adder pls
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>>27275791
No, but Adder is a good friend of mine, hue.
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>>27275503
Don't forget the shotgun stick.
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Horse Nationalism Bump
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Caps bump
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>>272775654
Birb Capitalism Bump
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Are people actually interested in the musings on Murky?
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>>27278090
I don't think so, anon.

Thread's dead, baby.

Thread's dead.
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>>27278128
Oh well then.
Guess I can stop.
Its not like this is important to me.
Nothing is, I can't find value in life whether friends or item.
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>>27278128
Then why don't you post some cute horses and talk about all the things you want to do to them?
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>>27278173
FoE is kill, anon. None of the authors are updating. I think Fuzzy was the last one to push a chapter out and considering how big his chapters are, that's saying something.
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>>27278192
Cough.
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>>27278155
you sound like you need a hug.
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>>27278209
I DON'T REMEMBER YOU SAYING ANYTHING HOERS
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>>27278192
Patience, anon. I'm sure all the writefags are hard at work on their latest chapters and definitely not loafing.
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>>27270191
>>27278090
I don't have much to say, anon. I can agree that the thing with Whiplash is dumb, but it could be said that he just never had the time or the interest in checking under Murky's jerkin. Though it does seem stupid that they don't search slaves when they buy them, or that the guy who sold him to Red Eye didn't tell the slaver that Murky is a pegasus. It's a big plot hole that nobody mentions often.

>Murky was just starting to perk up.
This happens a lot in the story, Murky will win a little, but then lose big. It builds sympathy for the poor guy, and makes his little victories feel huge.

>Most ponies hate pegasi.
They didn't hate them back when Wingboner was being printed, during the war. And wanting to hatefuck someone is a thing an angry slave or slaver would want.

>>27278192
/foe/ will pick up in the summer.
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>>27278241
This is true, early summer is finals season and everything slows down
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>>27278210
I frequently do.
Frequently do and don't get them.
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>>27278220
Thats because he's putting all his effort in making content to shove into our greedy, impatient, little mouths. Right, Hoers-senpai?
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>>27276837
>mismatching T-51
How could you
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>>27278257
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4N3N1MlvVc4
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>>27278287
Just noticed that too, oh god. What have you done. It's horrible.
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>>27278262
like the chapter i just published like ten minutes ago maybe
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>>27278192
Enough doomsaying, we're still here. It's a busy time of year for a lot of people. School semesters have just ended, or are ending soon. Con season is in. Lots of other stuff.
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>>27278301
Good gravy with dark turkey!

WHy are you making me more depressed?
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So, I had a idea for making a constant stream of content and updates: I take a fic I havent read yet, read it, and after ever chapter I make a sketch/drawing of one scene of said chapeter. Then, like, every 6th chapter or so, I ask folks which of the sketches to turn into a fully colored drawing.

Good idead? Horsecrap?Which fic would you like to see this treatment if you like the idea?
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>>27278495
Tell us which fics you have read first, so we can tell if the same old choices are just gonna be parroted at you.
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>>27278495
You won't. Don't give the authors false hope, anon.
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>>27278495
Well since art=readers generally, I say go for it.

But like >>27278526 said, what have you read?
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Just go read it you ungrateful fucktards

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/301900/5/fallout-equestria---make-love-not-war/i-get-around
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>>27278633
RUDE
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>>27278633
Would tottally shove a balefire egg up that ass and set it off.
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>>27278633
i wasn't gonna just whip it out like that but i'm not complaining
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>>27278633
Okay. But is it "lol fallout equestria is bad" like Duck and Cover was? Not that fallout equestria isn't bad, it just got old really quick.
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>>27278343
[/spoiler] I want to have your babies.
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>>27278670
Nah, there's actually like, a plot this time.
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>>27278697
Does it involve a section of being a pleasure slave?
With the master trying to do all the pleasure?
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>>27278697
Plot you say?

[Spoiler]share the pain[/spoiler]
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>>27278943
>>27278683
you guys are terrible at your spoilers
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>>27278662
Which would she rather have, a case of dynamite, 2 nerf mavericks, or a 12 pack of Mike's hard lemonade?
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>>27278526
>>27278606

Sorry had to go afk

Original, Pink eyes, PH until magic batcock apeared, Ditzy Do chronicles, MN7 and started reading The Things weve handed down.
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>>27278670

>Someone made a whole fic out of their Opinio

Literally somber "pip should have been raped in Filly" tier
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>>27279105
I think Riddles should have been raped for Somber's sins.
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>>27279054
So, you're guaranteed by at least four people in this thread to be told to read Outlaw/Wasteland Economics/Frozen Skies, regardless of other options.

Now that the low-hanging fruit is out of the way, let's see what else we can harvest...

...The Eerie, Wasteland Bouquet, Sisters, The Chrysalis, Choice Millionaire.

That should go to start.
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>>27279105
i only spent like a month on it and kkat's reaction was fucking priceless
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9 minutes into chapter 24 as read by CrazedRambling on youtube
non stop playlist
I have no idea what i'm doing with my life
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>>27279054
Fallout Equestria Occupational Hazards.
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>>27279054
fallout zootopia
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>>27279150
>>27279196

Huh neat, thanks, I will have a look at them. I gues asking for short summaries is a bit much.

>>27279207

I really love the Originall fic, but I dont think I would reread it with Pip as a bunny.
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>>27279141
every time someone makes a post like this, it makes me wish I had more Snowflake Slayer reaction images.

I would post an annoyed one right about now.

and I would call you a faggot.

faggot
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>>27279246
Your asshole was gaped for Stygius.
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>>27279224
The Eerie is a deep horror style fic about a remote region of the Wasteland.

Wasteland Bouquet details the life of a travelling caravan family and the difficulties and perks of that life.

Sisters is two Stable dweller zonies trying to make it against some of the best and most varied villains dreamed up in the FOEverse.

I don't know The Chrysalis or Choice Millionaire, they're on my read-later list.
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>>27279354

Thanks mate
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>>27279246
Hey are we going to see more of Steel Cherry and the iron staalion?

Also how was Babscon?
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>>27279419
De nada.
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>>27279508
Hi Datte
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>>27279538
No me llama.
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>>27279354
Sisters is shit tho don't read it.
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Would pickpocketing even be a viable source of income in the wasteland?

The chance of getting shot and the, relatively, small amount of targets compared to a prewar city seems to make the risk/reward ratio rather high
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>>27279572
I respectfully disagree.

Unfortunately, it doesn't look like it's gonna continue any time soon.
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>>27279580
It would only be a viable source of income if the pone is really good at it.
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>>27279224
Pip as a bunny, you say?
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>>27274791
follow up tomorrow
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>>27280281
would cuddle, put in a padded hutch with lots of straw and high quality aspen sawdust and feed many dandelions.
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>>27279580
I'd imagine only if the pony had access to many ponies he/she wouldn't meet again.

Perhaps a caravan trader with suspiciously low prices who pickpockets to make up the difference.

Or one that hangs around large settlements and preys against any travelers or wanderers.
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>>27281586
>preys on travelers and wanderers
I see Greecepone will be saved by her tourism-oriented economy
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LIVE, DAMMIT, LIVE
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>>27279224
The Chrysalis is a Fallout 4 esque beginning with a changeling waking up in an experimental stasis pod, who then sets out into the wasteland to find out if their hive still exists.
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Anybody want a CYOA?
If so, about what?
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Which nuke horse would you help with a suicide plan and which one would you stop?

If you try to off Blackjack, she just comes back as first cyborg form.
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>>27283923
Dice's MC.
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>>27284056
Seconding this.
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>>27284056
Who's that?
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>>27284374
Don't ask. Be happy in your ignorance.
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>>27284056
I would help her press a gun to her head, holding it firmly as she tries to will herself to pull the trigger.
I will look in to her eyes as she trembles with fear as she starts to have second thoughts.
I will slowly take the gun from her and reluctantly accept her hug,
before throwing her off a cliff into the ballpit of banishment, watching her fall and stare up at me in shock, as she realises that she has been betrayed, and as she hits the balls and is swallowed up into their multi-coloured embrace Dice will come to the realisation that his snowflake just got... slayed.
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>>27284864
I puked a little.
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>>27285165
what is this fresh hell
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>>27283612
Do a bat pony lending a wing claw to help ponies commit suicide.
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>>27285270
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E4q7xeS000M
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>>27285270
Is this really what you guys want?
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>>27285888
All we have left in the thread are the dregs of shitposters, anon.
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>>27285900
Its been two years, how am I still anon?
I thought my grammar was so poor that Bernie sanders was using me as a political plank?
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>>27278633
So is it just Atom's nature she is unable to maintain an effective cover?
Like legitimately she could have just panic run out of the outhouse shouting it wasn't her as something still funny for being such a bold face lie.

As things go, is the chapter length going to increase or continue this short fluctuation and small chapters?

I am guessing that from what Cal showed, this is supposed to be a take that about how everybody in fallout has shitter weapons when they're being dropped all over the place or just as a take that about how the protagonists are armies equivalent and the townspeople really are sharing the sharp stick and rock?


For all that beer that Atom drank, does she get to keep the bottles?
I mean it kind of seems odd to serve it in bottles if they're going to be kept by the barman, but its a righteous piss idea to just pitch them.
You can make moltovs and then make firefighting grenades with them to profit via being a firemare.

Rainbow is adorable, kudos for having a happy young married couple that actually works from what I've seen in real life.
High marks.

Given that miss pain in the neck hippie was going right with Atom to the base, are you going to make her a team member, or have her turn out to be like the base Ice cream parlor sales pony?
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>>27284374
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/263354/fallout-equestria-dance-of-the-orthrus

Their just acting all jelly, and looking for a new Sombra. I happen to just be an easy target, dispight there being more popular garbage characters out there.
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>>27286526
>dispight there being more popular garbage characters out there.
All garbage is created equal, friendo. :^)
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>>27286545
Broken Steel, and Influx. sure.
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>>27286508
I like the way the framing of my first story has just made everyone question absolutely every little thing like it's some kind of commentary. I really love it
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>>27286563
Nah that's just me.
I didn't get past chapter 2 for mad mare make many mulligans.
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Murky sounds like Fluttershy

Murky chapter 10 review tomorrow.
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Emergency caffeine bump.
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>>27286508
Yeah I wonder if it was such a good idea to let Hippie mare slink in there.

Ivy is wonderful and would probably make a great mom hahaha
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>>27269654
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You are sitting at the bar table of your local watering hole. It's filthy as ever but the dull murmur of chat and the smell of 200 year old cigarette smoke and moldy wood is like home to you.

The mare behind the bar, a young and pretty looking thing who's been the subject of more than one of your hopeless fantasies just served you another drink. You gave her a polite nkd and a smile, getting a smile from her in return.

It was a quiet evening, until a group of road-pounders came in, covered in dust and holding a loud conversation. You'd do your best to ignore them, but after a few rounds they got worse.

The big one was starting to cat call the bartender, and while she did her best to ignore him it was clear she wasn't comfortable. Even more clear was that he didn't like being ignored.

"Aye, missy! S'rude ta' ignore somepony," he slurred. "So why don' yew come over here and talk to me, eh?"

You didn't like his attitude, and she didn't seem keen on sticking close to him. His type was familiar, and likely to get physical if she didn't give him the attention she wanted.

You were armed with a familiar revolver you had used on more than one occasion, but the absent bar owner didn't like fights in his eatablishment.

What do?
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>>27288410
Subtly shove your revolver up his rear end. And politely ask him to leave.
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sleep tight and don't let the raiders bite...
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>>27278173
Just look how pretty she is.
Needs more submissive displays like that by mare protags or party members.
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>>27290158
Okay, who was too busy playing Fallout to feed Pip her carrots?
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>>27290189
Carrots? Or you mean.... mintals?
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>>27290251
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>>27271028
>G.I. Horses beat up King Zebra and his croonies

Is it sad that I want this?
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>>27288410
Offer pocket friendship cake.
Smear it all over his muzzle as you invoke the ancienct par'a'te ritual.
With his friendship now obtained give him a black leather trenchcoat and a semiauto drumfed 10 gauge.
The we should move to check out the warrens of Clen' Atachu and plunder for artifacts and treasure.
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https://www.anonpone.com/fimfiction/foe

Any need of updating with new fics or is it still good? I noticed that there's a weird gap between April and March.
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>>27290395
>PH, Homelands, and Dance of the Orthrus on that list
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God this thread is full with synths..
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>>27290395
I don't think any new ones come to mind yet.
Looks up to date!
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Would a short story about an outdoors pony finding an injured griffon and engaging in sex following healing be interesting?
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>>27290574
I imagine people who like short stories about outdoors ponies, injured griffons and sex after healing will find it interesting.
So me.
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>>27290830
Who is me?
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>>27292803
Me is a great guy. A real credit to the team.
Good cook too!
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>>27286696
Ok so I understand that Protege is all about helping and actually an all around pretty nice buck for owning other ponies and sending them into lethal situations on a regular basis as well as keeping the worst dregs of society on call, but what is it with the flowery and spontaneous loghorific fights with Murky?
Would it be so damn hard to just explain himself in simple words and not in the sort of stuff to be found on American propaganda posters?
Seriously, the typeface on his posters must be tiny enough that a free unicorn is chained to each one to provide the magnification spells.

Murky getting sentimental over the past is getting overplayed.
The only sex to happen on corpses is the one where you made the corpses!

But really, what is it with Protege and Murky not being able to spit it out?
Its not a bloody love triangle, would it be so hard to just provide a puppet show?

So if Shackles has slaves from recapturing them at the stable, how is it figured which ones were escaping and which ones were running to live?
Do you have to like run back to Filly and make it to your bed for it to not count as an escape attempt?
Die?
Kind of seems like the smart thing is run the hell away and then stay somewhere safe until getting picked up.

Even more so, if slaves are so useful, why does Shackles so mistreat his?
Or is it more like the Asian work ethic thing and working them until just short of lasting damage, but well beyond where they want to quit?

If other slavers fear Shackles, and Shackles can be turned in to dispose of him and get rewarded, why doesn't the donkey or any of the rank and file do so?
I mean sure a slave might not ever be allowed the chance, but it should be pretty easy to do so for anyone with freedom of movement.

So everything is about the Starr of the story?
Just checking, but that is a fucking awful pun.
Like really, that deserves some pain and suffering on your part Fuzzy.
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>>27290574
>>27290830
would you please fuck off. this isn't funny or even amusing.

it's like watching someone beg people to take interest in their fetish.

Stop it.
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>>27293696
>this isn't funny or even amusing
There's a difference?
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>>27293681
Okay so Murky is now SIN 7, neat and nifty.
But how the hell is he forgotten and ignored so quickly when wearing his fleece?
Like he is a green buck with an oversized ear, blonde mane and shackles on his ass, that's not the least bit mistakable for another pony.
Bond got caught numerous times for being Bond, wetworks guys regularly look like everybody else, hell I blend into a crowd so well that it makes people forget I am standing in front of them well when I shave anyways, but Murky stick out like the Green Giant had a foal.

Hidden secret lab with still untouched supplies in a 10 year old city rebuilding operation, worse one of the marked places and a slave holding point?
Are these guys just slouches out playing with their fetishes and dongs for a decade?

Murky sounds like Fluttershy, this is adorable and needs to be repeated.
Also the part where this comes about while watching a prewar sleeping buck that needs a kiss to wake up, and Murky acquires a prewar warbot that has a serious need for a pit hat, mustache wax, and arms like the Jim Carrey Mask's gun.

Further, if that whole room was known, and the bot was pinged as active, why was it left with a power supply in and on?
Shouldn't they have pulled it out as a precaution against exactly a slave taking it over?

The robot as well doesn't seem to understand Equestrian sentencing guidelines.
It can expect a number of legal suits and appeals from the family estates for breaking the law.

If Protege is aware if the distressed nature of Murky's pipbuck, and its importance, why hasn't' he seen to try and get it repaired for his favorite slave?
They're in Filly a place that made Pipbucks, and have regular supplies of stable repair parts.
If nothing else, get it a proper cover and strap for him.

Wow such a shock with the good old doc and his son, why in fact its as shocking as the reveal for Marvel Civil War.
Like this was supposed to be surprising or saddening?
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>>27293829
Alright, so Murky is soon going to be able to move his wings a bit and do things with them that are unexpected.
Does this mean Fuzzy supports wing fingers?

What is it with Glimmer and being so perky?
Is her mane actually a parasitic Pinkie Clone that has survived all this time and is taking her over like a brain slug?
Because that seems quite likely.

So Starr's entire project was not!memory orbs?
So then if it wasn't even done when the bombs dropped, how are there so many memory orbs all over?
Was the project just super delayed by the lack of funding and so stretched for years, or did Fuzzy just fuck up the timeline and miss the need for some time to pass to have memory orbs be as popular as horse apples?

If Shackles wants pets, or at least Murky, then how can it be a slave?
Like this syntactic violation actually breaks Shackle's point and purpose for me, and turns him from some big scary slaver to the world's worst pimp.
Now I see him less as something to be feared and more his whole thing is an act put on because nobody would give him respect if he really did his true life calling of running a whorehouse.

His beratement and beating of Sunny, is this just back to the work ethic thing and little different than getting docked pay or knuckles rapped, or just supposed to be something shocking as to how he treats his property?
Because it seems much more like slacking on the job coming from him than something cruel.

A cyborg minotaur.
Tell me, does it have a rocket launcher in an arm and a hatred for a stallion in a green shirt running around with a steel ranger mask and a shotgun?
Because that would be pretty good shoutout.

Moving further, how is the good doc keeping his basement lab secret?
Like I could imagine it working if he only stayed there and never left, but by being a practicing doctor, and in a hospital that even slaves know to check for meds, its rather a difficult to believe thing.
Would have been better to just have it be offlimits and his.
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>>27293696
Please.
My fetish is watching stallions in latex suits be teased by mares grinding on them and teasing their tiny cock size, then strangling them until they cum.
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>>27294259
that sentence started out just fine
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>>27294354
Yeah but its fun to watch them squirm around a dick in their mouth as they try to breathe.
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Radbits are cannon in Fallout now.
Anyone else seen this?
I feel happy.
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>>27294549
MAJESTIC RADFLOOP
>>27294498
okay that sounds kinda fun
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>>27294549
fuck off kip
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>>27294799
suck a dick

>>27294549
>mfw
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>>27294682
Wait were you thinking of snuff or something?
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>>27288410

id call the Mare over to serve me then let her know she can use me as an excuse to leave his table. if the pony has a problem with her serving other ponies. then it is on.
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No idea what the hell happened with that eyebrow.
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>>27297561
What's she lookin at?
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>>27297679
Thread traffic statistics.
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>>27297690
So that explains the look on her face.
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>>27297716
Exactly.
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>>27297690
>>27297716
QUICK. DEPLOY THE CRACKSHIPS
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>>27297690
Oi!
I gave me trifling lot to this sordid morass of busybodies and lackawits.
Come have a go at it then guv, given you think yourself with the bollocks.
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>>27297871
u awright m8?
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>>27297933
Prolly not all there in the space mate.
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>>27298165
cunt's a few chavs short of a footy riot innit
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okay get in fuckers it's crackship time i can't remember how this went before so here's the rules
1. reply to this post and then your own to roll twice
2. probably going to be sfw but ynever know i may just take the piss entirely
3. i reserve the right not to draw something if i have no idea who the character is or can't find reference
4. i probably won't draw every roll because i'm busy and they're probably going to be super quick sketches anyway
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>>27298311
ROLLING FOR DRAWFAG GOD
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>>27298311
Drawfag come on
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>>27298326
Sweetie Belle's alright I suppose...
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>>27298326
Don't know who the fuck he is, rerolling.
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>>27274791
>Poor Buckshot just hung his head meekly and mumbled an apology.
>But you felt determined to turn this around.
"He killed a Dead Trotter!" You blurted out, "and, and there's a bunch more stuff we can still take for the camp."
>The older ponies looked to you suddenly at the mention of such a danger.
>Longstanding clan tradition was to take care of Dead Trotters the way the Ember Fillies clan would.
>By burning the bodies.
>The Great Burning of the past was an evil, corrupting fire that made the bodies of ponies too impure to be buried.
>The bodies would poison the precious earth, and keep it from healing.
>Or the stories went...
>The short of it was that your clan had strong feelings against such monsters.
>But right now you were more concerned with trying to make your new buckfriend look good.
>The others, including Buckshot's dad, were tense and listening carefully as you told them how it had almost gotten Nails before Buckshot sprang into action and slew it.
>The green buck puffed out his chest a bit and smirked while you told them how he smashed it to paste.
>The others eyed the young stallion warily before his father spoke up.
>"Hmph, well I guess if thats true we'll just have to see about it tomorrow huh?"
>You and Buckshot grinned and nodded enthusiasticly.
>This was sure to get you both some reputation within the clan.
>"But first," he continued and pointed at you. "Go home to yer mother. She's probably worried."
>He was probably right, it was pitch dark out there, and the only sources of light left were the small fires dotted around camp or in ponies' tents.
>You promised her to be back before dark too...

What do?
A: Go home right away.
B: Say good night to Buckshot first.
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>>27298311
Would it be too much to ask for a BuckWild ship?
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Well I can sorta draw humans now, though only been practicing drawing people like anon in the anon pie comic
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>>27298462
lOOKS LIKE THE SORT OF GUY SHOWING ME AROUND A SPACESHIP'S COMPUTER CORE SENPAI.
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>>27298347
>>27298354
Decided to go cute with this one. I don't know anything about Brim apart from the fact that he's built like a brick shithouse and definitely was not alive at the same time as Sweetie Belle.
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>>27298404
B
It'll only take a second
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>>27298341
And the much needed second half to this ship
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>>27298415
I haven't been keeping up with your CYOA so I have no idea what the characters look like
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>>27298514
Oh my.
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>>27298311
Okey
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>>27298311
Rolling for more crackships part 1
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>>27298311
>>27298608
And for the second...
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>>27298610
>Spike
OKAY. YES. THIS IS PERFECT. ROLLING GODS HAVE MERCY.
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>>27298610
Fuck Erth, he left us. Rerolling.
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>>27298311
My aim be true, let this be a waifu
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>>27298729
This was a mistake, but costly
Let us see who enters the realm of Frosty
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>>27298311
The best parts of this is Tofu beneath the proper color of Astral being nervous, and I have nothing on it.

Feels good to be worth shit.
No it fucking doesn't but its all I seem to be of late.
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>>27298608
>>27298622
I'M GONNA WRECK IT
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>>27298774
>The best parts of this is Tofu beneath the proper color of Astral being nervous, and I have nothing on it.
>the proper color of Astral
>proper color

STAY YOUR TONGUE, CUR! WHAT YOU SAY IS HERESY!
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>>27298610
>>27298645
>>27298729
>>27298745
Glimmerspike and Glimmerwinds in the morning. It's late as fuck and I'm tired
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>>27298823
Green is soothing, just ask the US military.
They use it in their nvgs to help make the soldier feel better about murder.

In fact, green is so calming, I have coated where I hid all the bodies in a fresh layer of spinach and grass seed to help calm the police when they dig through it.
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>>27298311
Rollan
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So if raiders file their teeth to better eat meat, doesn't that mean their foals should come with filed teeth as well?
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>>27298311
>>27299772
Again.
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>>27299781
>>27299772
> Astral x Greaser
fucking bingo m89
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>>27298311
Rollie
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>>27299797
I dont even like these characters.
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>>27299801
>>27298311
Pollie
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>>27299808
Well now that's an interesting ship.
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>>27293681
>>27293829
>>27293959
I don't have anything constructive to add, I just want to say I enjoy reading this critique of Murky. Sometimes it's good to point out some of the flaws of what is usually seen around here as flawless. Doesn't mean I hate Murky or thinks it's garbage, if anything I tend to be critical of the things I love.
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>>27298311
Welp, here we go...
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>>27300047
and who gon be Shackle's cuddle toy?
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>>27300055
Never mind then.
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>>27300047
>>27300055
In which Shackle's discovers unbreakable is a real thing and has a very bad time.
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>>27298311
A'ight let's give her a whirl!
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>>27298311

>>27300150
rolling for who wants to do the thing inside RD I guess?
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>"Hey kid, gimme your lunch money."

God damn Spitfire was on point with poses in this episode. Spitfire best waifu.
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>>27300661
She's a cunt m8.
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>>27299905
I like the way you think. It's open minded.
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>>27300661
I want to buy drugs from that pone.
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Night bump
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Sensual improvised cuddle bump
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>>27298645
>>27298610
Every one of these so far has been ridiculous I haven't read MN7 so I'm fucked with this chart
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>>27302815
She gets him all flustered when he talks to her through spritebots.

And ony worsens this when meeting him in person!
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>>27300137
>>27300081
>>27300055
>>27300047
"You call that flagellating? If you don't start blending my kidneys I'm going to come back there and fucking do it myself!
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>>27302995
>HARER
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>>27303060
FUCK
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>>27302995
>>27303060
>>27303067
THERE
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>>27303075
I just wanted to be a pimp, but no momma said I was better than all the other ponies.
Why mama, why did you have to say that when we were in raider territory?
Why couldn't you have wanted me to be better for you when we were at Tenpony or Lippen Tea?
I was good at keeping contracts together, I could have been an actuary!
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>>27279580
It's barely viable in reality, I think the best pick-pockets scarcely make over 10k.
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>>27298823
But it looks like best ice cream, pistachio.
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>>27303120

I think you can survive of it, or at least earn a good amount of extra/get viable resources not up to sale in the wastes

http://ask.metafilter.com/175752/Do-most-pickpockets-really-make-a-viable-living-off-of-their-crimes
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How do you take care of a pegasus if you accidentally rubbed a hole through its belly?
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>>27303445
This kills the pegapet.
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>>27303445
>>27303450
Use lubricating lotion instead next time.
Or take breaks every 15 minutes of rubbing to facilitate cooling.

Rub responsibly so you can prevent abdominal friction burns!
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>>27303525
So, the Taint Fare post over on the tumblorama site reminded me...

Wasteland Mother's Day?

Anyone have thoughts on how it's celebrated, if it is at all, which characters mother's should be honored?
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>>27303678
>which characters mother's should be honored?
The prettiest one, of course.
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>>27303678
My story has like three moms that haven't been revealed yet
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Would griffons use unicorn slaves in dart games?
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>>27304086
Billards or lawn darts?

What if they hunted fishers like that?
Unicorn harpoons?
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Does anyone have a copy of chapter 11 in which Murky gets raped?
I would like to compare it with the current one.

And count the number of sex jokes wicked slit is the butt of.
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Ok decent question.
What would happen if Murky got an action fic makeover, but the rest of the story was left as is?
So he is now a capable fighter, has snarky lines instead of screams and filly whinnies, and zero stealth skills?
Would he still be able to keep to the meta concept Fuzzy is pushing?
Would the story still be as useful or interesting to be read?

As for how, the librarian gave up on trying to appeal to Murky's lack of reading and culture, and instead went for making him a much more capable dimwitted brute.
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>>27304564
He should be a mermaid with a keyblade
Mer key
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>>27304577
>mer key
Cheeky cunt
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>>27304577
Why not French and just have it be a corruption of Mercie?
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>>27304920
Or Asian and have it be a corruption of "milky"
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Hey, I'm going to have some free time this week, do you guys have any suggestions for what I should do?
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>>27305019
play vidya
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>>27305030
Uncharted 4 does come out Tuesday
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>>27305841
I have no consoles.
Last one I had was a PS2 that hit the floor and broke.
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Ok I just need to put this out now.

Fucks sake Fuzzy and Murky!
This shit is pathetic Mexican sitcoms made in Vancouver shit tier with the inability to name Shackles.
Just fuck, I would be happier if it just launched some super long term thing of Protege having to gather many many facts for the case, but just how the fuck am I to believe this?
Protege is Shackle's master, by dint of fact, Murky's internalized obedience means that Protege over rules Shackles.
That should have been Murky trying to resist and keep quiet to protect his stolen harem, not because Shackles somehow commands.
That would have made the scene much better IMO to have Murky choose, emphasis, to be the good slave that protects his friends.
But noo, its some shitty thing that isn't even a damn sight consistent, could even have been a fuck off huge truth that it was Barb at the end.
Then you could have at least had the current affair of not Shackles, and some humor of Barb being some emo dark lord on the net and Protege going who?
That would have been hilarious as Barb then takes credit in some fucked up rant of being a big shot and Protege just tapping him with a stun baton and motioning for Shackles to make an example of him.

No muss, no fuss, just some dark hilarity with the knowledge that Barb will get vengeance and it won't end well.
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>>27306169
I can barely understand what you're trying to say in these posts. Just write like a normal fucking person please.
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>>27306218
Or you could read Murky as well.
This is like complaining about how finances need to be dumbed down, rather than you ignore until you understand.

In fact, your claims are rather deterious to the thread, as they fail to add content, merely say the current material is wrong and here is how to fix it.
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>>27306169
Speak English fucknut.
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>>27306279
I have read MN7, and I've been one of the few people in the thread that responds to these posts. They were written normally before, but these last few read like they were written by a pretentious cunt.

And get the fuck down off of your high horse because you wrote a post that has "content" in it. We want good content, reviews and rambling that can be easily understood by a normal person without having to be deciphered. Not purple prose shit.

I like that you're discussing the fic and I hope you continue to do so, but like >>27306353 said, talk normally.
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>>27306406
You do see that its titled rant?
That's rather implicating its not meant to be something well thought through and of proper grammar.

Further what purple prose?
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>>27306459
>it's titled shit so it's not shit
heh
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>>27306478
>its titled warning its shit
>is surprised when its shit

And previous ones were better?
The murdered song lyrics or the tripe of a post with broken sentences that amounted to one or two lines to try and say something?
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>>27306494
You're the guy to said it was content.
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>>27306499
Yes.
Now where did I say it was good content?
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>>27306510
Saying it's content in defense of it implies you think it has worth.
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>>27306536
Yes.
If I didn't think had worth, I wouldn't be doing this.
By the same token, the lack of responses prior to this left me knowing it had very little worth, but I was encouraged to continue anyways as it did at least mean there was some content over "I rubbed a hole in my pegasus", "Random roll chart", continuous lewd shitposting.

So basically, as all that is content, and worthy, then so is mine.

>>27306541
this however is platinum content and well beyond it all.

Are they in a spa or sauna?
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>>27306573
Either really, didnt really put much attention into the background
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>>27306541

MUH DICK
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Why is there always so much drama on how somepony writes in here?
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>>27307329
dude...
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>>27307329
>somepony
You're either new here or Somber.
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>>27307329
You almost got me.
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>>27278090
I love reviews! Problem is, I come to /foe/ for the images and am too ADHD to read them on here. Video format or blog post plz.
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>>27307927
I have no idea what a blog post is or how to make one.

Video is out as my face looks like scrotal hair and pubic fur fucked and had tribbles.
Very much a horror to stare at.

So i would need to be walked through on just what any of this means, as I am not spending 131 USD for a college course on how to blog.
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>>27278952
[spoiler ]OR ARE WE?![/spoiler]
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>>27307927
I apparently need to go through the thread to see if the picture I'm adding is already in the thread...

Adding another!

>>27307956
Think of a blog as just a regular article. Do your review as normal and splice them together into chapter chunks since there's no character limit usually. Or keep them the same length. Do whatever you want, I'm anon, not a cop.

As far as hosting - or how to get it online - there are lots of solutions. I personally write a blog that I put up on bluehost, I use wordpress to manage the content and Google Drive to collaborate with my writing partner(s). You will literally never guess what the subject matter is, though. Literally never.

However, that's like $100 a year, so you probs want a free platform. Wordpress.org has free sections, and Blogger (from google) does as well. I'm sure there's tons of other free platforms too.

The one I think is probably more apropos here is Tumblr. Most of the artists/authors here have one to my knowledge. Just sign up, put the posts on your shiny new blog, share a link in thread, ????, profit.

If you have questions beyond that, ask and I'll try to help!
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>>27308064
But then there is little in this thread.
Part of why I did this was the lack of thread content beyond fetish posting.
Putting it off thread defeats that purpose.

I have no idea, that image has 4chan timestamp, so it can't be an original item.
So your blog is then devoted to the witticism of latex clad ponies?


SO basically in summary of this whole debacle:
I post because people said the thread could use nonfetish postings.
People have not been commenting so I was left to believe things were fine and the anons saying fetish gets responses were right.
Some anons confused a rant with a proper post, much to my failure.
You are attempting to help, but said help defeats the point of doing this.

'tis rather like why the anon picked up on my suggestion of Stable Calamaity and Pegapip.
He saw an increase in his work following that choice, which if the content moved to my blog, then its not here in thread where it matters.
As well, its hard enough to get people to visit the Stablequest backup I host, given they fear I have nefarious intent.
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>>27308410
Oh, I was just saying that for my own benefit. Not "don't post" so much as "take your posts and put them in a blog so I personally can read them later when I get so inclined/the thread 404's".

Also, stablequest what? I'm either drunk or skipped over it in thread.

Also also, my blog is actually about not that!
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>>27306541
Neuro, you're getting really good at this!
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>>27309105
Oh for that, i could make a Gdoc and later a webpage.

Bigger thing I could do is register a domain name, but I have little idea what I should keep as a permanent name.
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>>27308064
>>27309105
>>27309344
Pastebin
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So who here has actually created something unique to the FoE universe? It can be anything, a faction, weapons, armor, a character, a monster, whatever.

Any content creators left in this bitch?
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>>27309909
I'm still working on that Pre-war Equestrian Navy faction I shitposted about in the middle of the night when I was drunk before. Still haven't come up with a good name other than maybe 'The Mariners" or whatever.
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>>27309972
Kelpies, possibly?
(Scottish water-based mythical creatures, usually in the form of a horse.)
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>>27309909
Yo.
I'm the one doing weapons.
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>>27310032
>>27310064
>Riot
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>>27310022
...that'll work I think. Thanks.
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>>27309909
I've got a story that I've planned out start to finish, but I just haven't had the time to write horse fiction.
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>>27309909
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>>27309972
>>27310064
>>27310381
>>27310607
Have any of you considered sharing stuff you haven't before in detail or do you take particular pride in things you already have shared?
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>>27309909
Came up with a new martial art for the zebra so that every fic isn't using Fallen Caesar/Doom Bunny.
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>>27309909
i've probably come up with a couple of things
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>>27309909
I guess I made a faction and some magical lore.

Though I haven't finished my horse story yet.
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Someone wanted some Pips?
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>>27309909
Bunch of new critters and ghouls, except for the one that Bethesda ended up using in 4.
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>>27312018
But still no GlimmerWinds.

I want to see your take on what Frosty and Glimmer do.
Two mentally unstable individuals with extremely high sex drives.
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>>27312506
One of whom is straight and will likely be weirded out by Glim's advances, yay
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>>27312506
I'd rather >>27299797 than GlimmerWinds desu senpai
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>>27312642
So Greaser helping Astral out of that cold armored shell she is in and onto a bed?
Perhaps with a plasma cutter?


If a lesbian unicorn uses her horn, is it straight?
I mean unicorn horns were stand ins for dicks, and remain quite phallic.
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>>27312598
That just means Glimmer needs to trap Frosty in a memory orb before trussing the birb up for a good tasting and roast.
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>>27309909
I need to practice my draw-fu before I can make Cazadorelings a proper thing.

And by that I mean be able to draw well enough to do the concept justice.
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>tfw idea
>tfw not sure if should pursue it because people might get upset about sci-fi in their grimdark post-apoc
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>>27312774
Tell us about it, anon
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>>27312894
Taking the UFO Crash event and turning it into a protagonist.
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>>27312774
Reminder that UFOs are canon.
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>>27312981
Go for it.
Whether it be a pony staring into the extant ether core drive and gaining super powers from the narconian emissions, or a straight up alien come to equs, it shall be intriguing.
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>>27313010
The latter.

Just trying to figure out a decent design without it looking like "Pony with completely black eyes and antennae"
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>>27313014
Well, going off predictions for far future humans, a space faring race could be expected to be tall and thin.
Would likely have less or no hair too.
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>>27313014
Go for something faceted, like a waking ruby.
But give it unusual facial characteristics, like a bony crest running down its face, keeping its eyes separately.
Legs that come to a point, with a triangular dimension.
Perhaps less of a CM and more just an odd writhing mass of shapes that constantly but slowly morphs like a lava lamp used in a rorschach test.
Make the eyes rectangular, like a goat's.
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>>27313014
>>27313073
>>27313094
Sounds bad.
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From elsewhere:
>I engulfed FOE this past month and am halfway through FOE:Horizons right now!
Oh boy, if I had a nickel...
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>>27313126
This desu. Seems like a shit story. Plus people fucking hate ayy lmaos in Fallout, why would they like them in FoE?
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>>27313170
No, some people do, others enjoyed it.

You too will enjoy it when you go to Mars in FO4 and team up with Russians against the Chinese and their mind controlled Martian battle slaves!
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>>27313170
I never minded.
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If you coated a pegasus in fish oil and catnip, put them in a cardboard box, and then had laser pointers aimed at them, what would a griffon do?
Oh and the pegasus is wrapped in a paper bag.
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>>27313536
I'd find something else to do with my time because I clearly have too much of it.
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She's pregnant with Calamity's foals. Three of them.
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>>27311329
I already have, but my shame is that I haven't finished the one chapter in like 2 years now, just to keep the story going. I've been doing fairly terrible IRL so haven't had the urge.
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>>27313995

Im okay with that
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>>27311329

Probably gonna make a "part2" of this after Ive finished my recent commisionwork.

Not sure with whom yet though, maybe zeebemedy and Stable Xenith... or some other swap.
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So what's the decision on the Murky chapter 11 review?
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>>27314593
Do it, cause its interesting to have a log of your thoughts.
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>>27313811
Not enough since there is no fire yet.
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>>27315217
Isn't that a journal or browser history?
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>>27313995
Thanks, Cummo.
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>>27314144
>Not Calamicorn and Pegapip passionately fucking

Freckles pls
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Hey, everyone. Stop shitposting, I'm here to shill Heroes cause I posted a new chapter.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/662/37/fallout-equestria-heroes/chapter-36-convergence
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>>27316350
Better be better than the last one. Cause it was a little meh and that filly that was all like "you didnt know i was a crack shot" all cocky and shit was fukin cringe yo. and seriously no alicorn fukins yet? jeez man do you even horsefiction we're 30 chapters in and the best we got was flare sitting on a stallion witha big dick and the dick wasnt even in him. wheresour obligatory .5 fan service chapter where silver and haze get freaky and use serenity as a buttplug or some shit.
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>>27316305
Calamicorn's gay.
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>>27316435
You don't want me to write a .5 chapter. You don't. It'd be bad. Trust me.
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>>27316488
It's easy though. You just insert tab A into slot B and... uh.
I mean you insert slot A into slot B and... Put slot B on grip A and slot A on grip B.
There, simple!
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>>27316488

DO IT ANYWAY!
Besides im curious; What does a NoOne smut chapter look like?
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>>27298523
>You made to trot home quickly but stopped when your eyes met Buckshot's.
>There was that same soft, almost clueless look in there as he just stared at you.
"U-uh... G'night Buckshot!"
>Your cheeks felt warm as you stumbled your way through the goodbye.
>He did the same and his mouth twitched into an embarrassed smile as you started to hurry away before you made it anymore awkward.
>You managed a peek backwards before you lost sight of him around a tent.
>His dad was peering at him closely with a smirk on his face.
>Buckshot just looked wary.
>You would worry about that later.
>Hopefully if mom WAS mad, you could make her happy with the ink you found.
>Most of the ponies still left in camp were hunkered down in their tents, and some were already starting to snore by the time you found home.
>The front flaps were closed but you could see a bit of light leaking from the crack between them.
>You pushed one flap open and caustiously stepped through.
>Your mother was laying down by the little fire pit, near the back of the limited space the tent offered.
>Her hair hung down by her face as she stared into the small flame with a blank expression.
>You felt a little unsure for a moment and spoke up quietly.
"Hi mom..."
>She blinked and looked uo from the fire, still mostly expressionless.
>Your mom was always harder to read than your dad.
>She always had this sort of blank, half lidded expression in her eyes.
>You walked further inside, letting the flap close behind you as your mother got up.
>She walked over to you slowly, and gave you a little jab with her hoof.
>It was the same one she liked to give your dad when she was mad at him, but it only hurt a little.

Continued...
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>>27316350
Would you like me to review you as well?
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>>27312642
>>27312506
I have them noted down (along with the other rolls) and I'll do them some time when I can be arsed to do so.
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>>27316520
Too complicated for me.

>>27316697
A NoOne smut chapter looks bad. So bad.

>>27316990
Don't know who you are, or what you do, but sure I guess? Don't care either way.
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>>27317048
That means no then, also you would suck as a jedi, no binary thoughts and absolute statements.
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>>27317023
Are we still doing crazy ships?

How about:
Barb x Brimstone painal and high impact sexual violence barely begins to describe this

Kyra of Wasteland Economics x Mach
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>>27317199
>pairing a graceful birdcat with pony filth

no pls
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>>27317237
>graceful
As a cat in heat maybe.
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>>27317237
Ah but it gets better, pairing a young wide eyed idealist with a grim and hardened reality breaker.

Even before he pops her cherry, Mach will have broken Kyra into a sobbing wreck.
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>>27317237
I'd rather be an equestrian than a money-grubbing xeno.
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>>27317199
>mach
>not pretty catbirb x catbirb ship
- anon. See me after class.
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>>27317424
Because that is a nice ship, which is entirely not the point.

But how would lesbian griffon sex work?
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>>27317437
Very well.
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>>27317437
Their naughty bits are tougher than pony naughty bits to accommodate sharp griffon beaks.
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>>27316972
>She stood there, mostly in your space and stared you down.
>"You said you'd be home before dark."
>Your ears folded back and you smiled sheepishly.
"Sorry... We, lost track of time-"
>"While fucking?"
>Your mouth froze mid sentence when your mom interrupted you with a very accurate assumption.
>You weren't sure how ahe could have known, but she told you anyway.
>"You smell like sweat and pussy juice Flower. If your father was here he'd be waking up half the camp trying to fins the buck who did it."
>She turned away and went back to the mound of dirty blankets that made up her bed.
>You could only stand there and shift nervously, feeling like you had been caught in a lie.
>Her calling you 'Flower' was also a sign she was being serious.
>"I'm not mad at you for that though."
>You blinked and came closer when she beckoned you to lay down with her.
>She bumped your head with hers lightly.
>"I'm more upset that you didn't think about being safe and careful while you're out there. Raids aren't the only way to get killed."
>She put a foreleg around you and gave you a hug.
>"And you mean a lot to me and your dad."
>You smiled and nuzzled your mother back for a moment before remembering what you found.
"Oh, I think I found you something too."
>Your mom let go while you dug through your bag and produced the ink bottles and the pens.
"They mark things like on paper and stuff, can you use it?"
>You watched your mother taste the tip of one of the pens and then smell the contents of the little jar of ink pensively.
>She finally smiled after a moment and bumped your shoulder.
>"Good find. I was running low after I inked up that colt earlier."
>You smiled back at her but stayed quiet, relinquishing the bag and the pistol she had given you that morning.

What do?

A: Go to sleep.
B: Chat with mom some more.
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>>27315217
No I meant what format?
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>>27317981
B
Now that mom knows what we've been up to, we might as well talk to her about it.
Does she have any advice about stallions?
What does she think of Buckshot?
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>>27317981
>>27318124
B. I'm with this kid
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>>27317981

>>27318124
This, but also make sure we can confide in her exactly *who* it was. You know, so Dad doesn't try and pull his limbs off or something.
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>>27317981
Hah, so that's what we get for not bothering to wash!
B)>>27318124 's got a point. Momma might know best
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>>27317048
>>27316488
I could help if you want. Written a few pieces myself.

I'm no Kip though.
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sleepy wasteland ponies
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>>27319855
So cute.
Would attempt to cuddle her without waking her up.
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THE CHRYSALIS UPDATED
>THE CHRYSALIS UPDATED
THE CHRYSALIS UPDATED
>THE CHRYSALIS UPDATED
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>>27317199
Was doing them by rolling from a chart. However, the chart is ancient, has characters from stories nobody reads anymore, thread OCs I haven't seen posted in years, and way more MN7 and PH characters than is probably reasonable. I've been making notes for updating it but half the stuff I pen up for being changed (for like, WEcon characters, more recent CYOA characters, etc) someone turns around and goes OH YEAH THAT THING
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Have any of you fucking fags read Kipper shy's original FoE?
I mean seriously sat down and read it cover to cover, instead of just reading tv tropes summeries and shitposting ITT?

Do the names Littlepip, Crimson Wings and Blackjack mean anything to you mountain dew drinking, F4 playing, shitty spice and wolf snorefest reading, consensual sexing pansy fucks?
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>>27320377
Do you even fucking now who the Master is? The FEV? What Pre-F3 mutants, the enclave and brotherhood stood for?

Get the fuck out of my general you fucking autistic fucks. Go back to lereddit with your fucking snorefests and murky cry fics. Suck a dick and die you fucking retarded faggots.
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>>27320377
>>27320383
For real though, who's Crimson Wings?
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>>27320430
Suck a dick, fall in front of a bus and die of aids you fucking flaming faggot newfag
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>>27320430
I think he's a special order one can place at KFC


he's the protag of Kip's fic, Broken Steel
uh, Broken Bonds
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Thinking about it, a fic about a pegasus and griffon best friend both trying to survive the war could be interesting.

Whether it be them fighting each other for country or trying to keep the other safe and hidden as civilians.
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>>27320921
What if the pegasus shrinks the griffon and wears her as a mane ornament?
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>>27320921
>>27320973
i fucking swear to god
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>>27320996
Come now, it'd be adorable.
Certainly better than trying to hide out in an attic.

Alternately, what if the griffon is bigger, about plushie sized, and hides as some sort of comfort doll.
Then you can have the adorable scene of walking the griffon.
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>>27320377
>>27320383
>>27320461


The shitposters are a little lively today.
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>>27321209
Clearly this means I should stop Murky and review Project Horizons
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>>27321219
I frankly would if I didn't get frustrated over how good it could have been, had Somber put a bit of effort in his pacing and toned down some of his fetishes. Such a fucking waste.
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>>27321886
It does sound that way.
I will admit the description tickles my nipples, but from the application?
Blegh, no thanks.

Sort of like reading through 60 minutes of Hell right now in Murky.
I don't like senseless violence, war fighting, death, nah that doesn't get me.
Its just out and out sadism solely for that purpose, even more so when you know what is going onto the victims.


Ah well.
So post the Murky story 11 review here?

I have to wait a minimum of 24 hours to see if my website propagated properly.
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>>27321928
Violence is ok providing it serves a purpose. If its just violence for the sake of it then its needless, but if it is used correctly, for example to help move the plot or develop characters then it serves a purpose.

The same applies to rape, though it's almost more important to get right and not be perceived or intended as fetish pandering or edginess for the sake of edginess.
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>>27322017
What if I enjoy those scenes more and take my time writing them?
Like how some artists put loving detail into blood splatters or gryphon dicks?
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>>27320973
>>27320921
Is there a fetish out there for griffons and pegasi together?
Is it like the FOE race mixing thing?

No good Birdpaw should have to sully itself with squirrels that think they are fish in the sky.
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>>27322353
>"what if I enjoy those scenes more"
>intended as fetish pandering
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Here's a good one for edgy and violence:
Implanted magical shape charge.
Designed to go into a pony's chest and be used as part of an assassination plot.
Some chance of the bomber surviving the detonation and being able to escape.
Its meant as part of a taking you with me against a raider chieftain who has special interest in the pony.
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>>27317437
They have fingers. Kinda. Just pointier and more capable of deading a thing. Lots of consensual fingering that does not end in deading.
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>>27322353
I mean griffin dicks are pretty hot...
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>>27322353
Its fine to put detail in, provided it has a good reason to exist and it works in the scene. You don't have to make it vague, providing it isn't the only place you put great detail in, then it sticks out.
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>>27317437
How do you spot a lesbian griffin? They have one or two talons clipped/rounded
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>>27323221
Or they like to keep their claws clean more than others
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>>27323197
STEALTH PLS
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>>27323197
There's really nothing hot about bird or cat dicks.
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Speaking of griffons, are there any stories with griffon sexy times?
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>>27323318
Anywhere But Here.
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>>27323323
Opinions are divided on whether the fornication in ABH is sexy.
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>>27323403
Why's that?
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>>27323237
Try again, nerd.
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>>27323274
Yeah but griffin dicks are different, more like dragon/dog dicks with a knot and stuff.
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>>27323673
>furry headcanon
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>>27323693
Aren't furries pretty much the leading experts on animalistic dongs? I mean, look at bad dragon or something.
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>>27323739
No, furries are the ones that stuck a dog dick on an animal with no dog traits at all, because they love dog dicks and couldn't think of a way to make griffon porn with anything approaching accurate anatomy.
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>>27323797
riddles pls
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>>27323829
Riddles knows full well what a horse dick looks like from his time with Brisneo in Utah.

Dog dicks from when he was at home with his sister.

But he's never seen a gryphon dick and is bitter over it.

All you have to do is make love with a griffon OC...
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>>27323829
No, and stop doing that.
You're not clever trying to catch a namefag.
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>>27323872
I don't think anyone who has ever said Riddles pls has been trying to feel clever. I sure as hell haven't.
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>>27323897
I don't care why you do it, it's retarded anyway.
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>>27323897
Purple prose anon probably did.
Got a big enough rise out of Riddles it beat out the bulge in his pants.
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Ok, so before all this starts, I want to do a meta talk.

Why do writers keep doing this game of having deals with the devils and people knowing its going to take them straight to hell?
Especially while saying they have no other choice?

It worked in the past because people really did believe in magic beings, it wasn't the devil showing up so much as a wish granter that reveals himself the devil.
This is especially an issue when you have a character who has been shown to be a fount of wisdom on the devil, and suddenly ignoring or going along with the plan.

It'd be much better if the devil character orchestrates a boon to the heroes, then takes advantage of the ensuing issue, all without the heroes ever agreeing with a known enemy.

And especially, what is it with the heroes not just killing the devil from the start?
It just ends with heartache, yes, and I get you need a story, but try something better, like the devil faking it or simply stop having devil characters making faustian deals.

Ok, now then on with the actual talk.
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>>27324024
Alrighty, so tunnels filled with gribbly monsters, possible magical what the fuck areas, and trains?
Dear god I'm having Metro flashbacks!
No not the game, actual metro rides, DC is weird.
But really, the plan here is to get into a bunch of tunnels known to be filled with horrors that couldn't be killed, just banished?
Glimmer needs to deal with her orb addiction, she seems to have gotten rid of her self preservation.

Murky as the leader of the chain gang due to his hearing is a nice touch.
So why then did Wicked Slit leave him on cart duty?
As efficiency loving as she is, I am rather stretched to believe that Murky was the best cart puller there was.
Especially when she chucks ponies dropping from heat exhaustion into the furnaces, particularly as its shown here that ponies can get protective gear.
Does Filly work on the RPG system?
Armor only drops in later areas and everything early in your stay is hell?


The only piece of equipment they have, it has no replacements, and two idiots can't even remember their boss came by with the fixit pony?
Really?
Seems like they wouldn't be allowed near the controls at all given proper lock out tag out procedures, much less needing the machine repaired.
Further, why are there so many casings in the machine?
If they have had time to repair it, certainly they would have cleaned the machine out beforehand.

Oh look, haha, Wicked Slit getting laughed at for more sex jokes.
Its still funny.
Especially as it matches quite a few work obsessed Germans I know who play dominatrix after work to relax.
Also, if goggles are resizable normally, why does she have such a hard time finding a pair?
More so, why can't she just commision fresh ones?
Kind of odd it took her this long without them.
Even better, now that she knows Murky has them, why not go to the mall and get them back?

Oh look Barb cares!
He's not even raping Murky here, just going to have him vigorously pounded! until he can't walk straight and
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>>27324121
So with that said, what is it with Barb having this love affair with Murky?
He offers Murky nothing, but expects a lot from Murky, then gets pissy when Murky doesn't deliver stuff without incentive?
Normally its offering protection and getting stuff, but somebody has to make that first offering.

Barb just OHKOs the two slavers.
Its rather over the top really, and while I get that its supposed to show Barb as nobody's bitch, it does lead to the question of why more ponies don't cause shit given the slavers are stupid enough to die to knives easily or en masse.
More so, what happens when the slavers are found?
Somebody is going to care about the bodies, or the fact they went missing.
Little big thing.

So,
Shackles is seen here with barb.
Barb knows Murky is going to come this way.
Why doesn't he keep the clandestine meetings clandestine?
Even more so, what is with Shackles doing Ghost of Future Present here?
Like, he knows Protege is still around, so fucking with Murky can backfire.
Even more so, what was the plan?
Make him a pegapet for the night and take Murky for a walk outside the wall while whistling?

Actually that would be funny and in character of fucking with Murky to break him.

Protege has EFS, and could catch onto the alarm clock through a locked door and several walls.
Why doesn't he get that somebody was after Murky, even if he doesn't know who?

Caduceus, yep totally dead here.
Doesn't appear on the cover art, midstory character, black, medic, hopeful, nice to a female, gentlemen, untouched by horror, seeks to help...
Like that's enough to block any other protagonist from dying in the rest of the story, regardless of importance.
Oh and has sex, multiple times, even more so shortly before a fight starts.

Again, deal with Barb, Barb just being a fucking magic creeper here.
Wonder what he would do though if you coated the floor in glue traps or something with paint.
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>>27324226
So the plan here is to grab a key from the guard, then hope a big scuffle breaks out and then get data off the computer.
What, no food fight or something to pull in the target guards?
Even more so, how do they not expect this to go wrong?
Raiders with guns are going to ensue, and at best the heroes will be trapped outside with slavers swarming to put things down.

-a few chapters later-

Whelp, at least the mall and everything else isn't on fire for how horribly bad that part went.

Good job heroes, you got all those ponies killed horribly in your quest to find something most important, a metro guidebook.
You know, something that's going to be on giant print at every fucking station?
Slow clap everyone for the murdering 4 and the corpse.

This riot doesn't even make much sense in terms of stopping it.
A small lock on a gate is all that keeps them in?
Where are the mantraps and heavy barred doors to make sure the raiders and slaves stay in?
Hell, its a fucking mall, this shit should be there already!

But moving forward, the raiders get to keep knives inside the mall, many are unicorns, why isn't the whole affair solid walls and standard locked out portions?
How many slavers have died to a thrown knife now?
Or been strangled by TK, shot by magic or anything else?
Like teleportation?
In fact that's a good point, shattered hoof has antiteleportation wards, its a common enough spell to justify a whole prision covered in them.
What stops unicorns from just popping around?
Much less escaping Filly in general?
Or is it they're not an issue since they don't get caught very long?

Ok moving on, why are there guns and a lack of protection for the slavers, but the raiders can erect it all in minutes and less?
In fact, how does it get so bad in only a few minutes?
The slavers have shown no hesitation in killing before, so why now?
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>>27323451
Because gratuitous =/= sexy.
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>>27324293
>sudden heart touching letter about how evil person wants the world to be better and knows suffering by once being a slave, but now reformed into a slaver, and still wishes to be good unlike his evil fellow workers

Fuzzy, that is some heavy Somber animu shit right there.
Just why?
Idealists working in the system has happened before, some of the leading slavers in the world thought they were saving the souls of blacks through slavery and enforced Christendom.
Well that or saying fulfillment of contracts does not mean you have fulfilled the contract.

But going further, this is a very jarring and out of character way of expanding protege.
Its something that should have been upfront or more developed before hand, such as explaining to Murky that he knows so much, because he was a slave as well!
Which really would have done a lot to defuse tensions early on, and a lot some more confidence in the whole not colt cuddling affair.

Moving forward to the effects section, why do slave belongings remain with them?
Like why is the stuff not divided up and bartered around by the slavers?
It doesn't seem like Filly would really have a baggage storage for 2 years as part of the deal, particularly for good shit like usable weapons, armor, and equipment.

And then Brim has his extremely ornate armor still around.
Armor made of useful materials, and frankly something that he doesn't really want nor does the rest of the wasteland want to see.
Particularly so, why is this stuff not in the armory?

So slavers have cubbyholes to store their stuff.
And Shackles has a computer locked one with some goodies, and a list of all his victims.
Way to be stereotypical here.
Like, Shackles should really have just had an open air covy, where it just sits there, letting anyone who wants to take from it, just at the obvious consequence

>Glimmer gets raped
But she is willing?

Coral with Glimmer scene
Nice development of both, but it does then ask if this is still the same Glimmer as then
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>>27324363
Basically, since a person is defined by their memories, in as much as their behavior, then how is Glimmer still the one from the village?
It kind of seems like a proper answer here is that Coral is roughly yelling and raving at some random person on the street that looks similar.
Even more so when she admits GLimmer did this before.

Also, Glimmer has the best food stealing technique.
Kiss them so long you get cheers from the background.

Which brings to a point on Glimmer, she is too sexual.
There really is little so far showing her as a steel ranger initiate, much less anything else.
That her character is less of a techie, or happy, or anything, just endless sex and sexual content.
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>>27318902
>>27318525
>>27318501
>>27318124
>You were both quiet for a few moments, enjoying each other's company before you spoke up.
"You're not gonna tell dad, right?"
>She smirked slightly and flicked her mane to the side.
>"That depends on if your little escapade is going to make grandma or not."
>She paused for a moment to peer at you curiously while you fidgeted nervously.
>"But then again you haven't told me who it was so it could have been your cousin licking you out for all I know."
>You huffed and sputtered at the thought.
"Ugh, mom!"
>You may have thought she was pretty in her own way but you never wanted to have sex with your cousin.
>Your mother just chuckled and sprawled out, propping her head up with a hoof to her cheek.
>She pushed a bit of her mane out of her face with a free hoof and gave you an expectant look.
>You grumbled a little and shifted into a laying position to face her.
"Promise you won't tell dad?"
>She closed her eyes and nodded slowly.
>"He may be stubborn as a mule but he isn't stupid. He'll probably figure it out on his own Wild."
>You couldn't hide your grimace at the thought, but you would cross that ravine when you got there.
"It was... Buckshot. The stallion you were tattooing this morning."
>Your mother stayed silent but she cocked an eyebrow at you slowly.
>It felt like eternity before she finally sighed and closed her eyes again.
>"Could have done worse. Not the brightest buck around, but he's got the potential to be a good mate."

Continued...
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>>27323829
Sorry but that wasn't me. faggot

>>27323864
First of all there's a horse ranch within walking distance of my house and my friend lives on it so i can look at all the damn horse dick i want if i was so fucking inclined you nigger.

Secondly Bris came to cali, not the other way around.

Thirdly you can take your birdflu victims and fuck yourself with em. Unicorns and Earth Ponies are vastly superior.

>>27323872
>>27323897
>>27323928
FUCKING, THANK YOU.
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Senpai noticed me
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>>27324799
>faggot
Rude.
>Unicorns and Earth Ponies are vastly superior.
Dang riddles what does it feel like to be so wrong.
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>>27324799
Fuck you pony masters races
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>>27324827
>Siding with the winged traitors
How does it feel to be a heretic?
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>>27324854
>implying
Who said I was siding with anyone? All pones are equal you faggot.
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>>27324874
So you are with the Glimearians then.
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>>27324874
Of course they are.
It's just the wingless ones are slightly more equal.
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>>27325013
They're really not, though. And this is coming from someone whose favorite pone is a unicorn.
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>>27325082
Suuuuure it is, birdchaser.
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>>27325093
Let's show the exhibit shall we?

On the left we have bird pone, a simple mare that is hiding being a rocket scientist, with a group that did not actually obliterate 3 empires and send significant parts of the countryside into a decades long civil war that culminates in vastly more deaths than letting the events transpire normally.

On the right we have progressive racial diversity and mary sues.
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>>27324850
Found the mudpony. Or the cloud fucker.
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>>27313995
I'd much prefer it be from Homage after a gender-bender spell
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>>27325193
On the left you have satire of the right m8.
You don't really get to wave it around as proof of anything.
Besides, Atom a shit.
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>>27325274
I can wave it far more proudly than your tent post sonny.
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>>27279172
I stopped at chapter 26
what the fuck is even happening
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>>27325359
Probably nothing good.

Sit down, take a seat, grab some brandy, come over by the fire, let's talk about it.
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>>27325274
>Atom a shit

You better take that back, you filthy cretin, before I shove my foot so far up your arse you can clip my toenails with you teeth!

Atom is a sexy scouseburb who deserves love and affection in the form of belly rubs and ego stroking.
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>>27325378
No i mean I've literally lost track of whats happening
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>>27325380
Why not offerings of scrap metal, propane, old newspapers, and industrial spark batteries?
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>>27325390
Exactly, hence the talk about what you remember.


>>27325397
Please tell me that is spike and pegapip's son.
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>>27325290
Hey, I never said you had to stop being stupid.
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>>27325404
>Pip is from Stable 2
>Drunk mum
>Has crush on liberal star who wants to make everyone feel good so joined a slave group like a tard
>Probably got fucked by all of them
>Meet ghoul who cant take off armour (forgot how she met him)
>Meet Country dude
>Meet pegasus who did something to not be with the pegasus pussies in the sky (Unless country guy and pegasus are same person)
>Meet spike
>Spike is big
>Spike protecting computer thing and elements
>Meet pinkie obsessed pony with a FUCKING BOMB
>Also derpy ghoul. i like derpy ghoul. She picks up Pinkie obsessed pone with ded family
>Now Pip has broken into (Fillydelphia?) as a slave to get at a guy named Red Eye who has all these alicorns who are his bitch
Thats pretty much everything i remember, not including small details. I feel like i should stop listening to it as I write green for other threads.
Whats with the alicorns. Has this been explained and I missed it, or will it be explained later
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>>27325416
Its because I follow horn heads.
They are not bright at all.
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>>27325454
Alicorns are semiexplained now.

Simply put, Twilight couldn't stand not being ready to friendship the shit out of everything with her sparkle dog home and made a potion to turn any unicorn into an alicorn.

THis goes horribly wrong when Trixie becomes the Joker thanks to it and develops her own laughing gas, except instead of giving smiles, it steals dicks and gives wings.
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>>27325469
And yet, brighter then birdbrains!
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>>27325487
Yeah, I mean look at Flightless here, all caught up in a-
what even are these things?
Oh well, master wants him down, so down he'll go.
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>>27325486
>it steals dicks and gives wings.
hot
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>>27325193
>...I really need to read these....
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>>27325504
>calamity fucking with the little camera "hey pip!"
topkek. I'm not overjoyed by the story so far, but little things like that blindside me JUST enough
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Let's talk about the ministries and how they are portrayed.

99% of the time in sidestories The Ministries are used simply as the justification for project xyz or for some weird quirky location. But we can do better I think. The one advantage that the Ministries have over the various Pre-war companies and institutions in Fallout is that they have a clear identity. Each of them are lead by none other than the Mane 6, the most recognizable characters in the series. Each have a specific purpose, goal, and philosophy. I think just simply using them to justify your Cybernetic Zony with 7 vaginas existing in post-war times or your funhouse that forces a brother and sister to rape each other This is an actual story Somber was thinking of writing is doing a great disservice to them.

For example, in normal Fallout the US were testing biological weapons to infect the commies with. The one Ministry in FoE that would probably have the tech to make biological weapons would be probably the MoP. But it wouldn't make any sense in the lore, because we know for a fact that Fluttershy would never allow it to be made. She wanted to win the war peacefully, and thus would never ever make a weapon of mass destruction (intentionally at least).

A lot of Pre-war Projects also tend to have really flimsy justifications for their existence. Some seem kind of redundant or seem like a huge waste of resources, such as the infamous Crystal Eclair. Her reason for existing is that she was to be a spy for the MoA. But the MoA already had Zecora. Not only that, assuming Eclair was made to replace Zecora, it still doesn't make any sense for them to make a fucking terminator for a spy. Ignoring the fact the Cybernetics shit, the MoM had tons of captured Zebra spies and soldiers. It would be infinitely more cost effective to just mind rape a few of the prisoners and use them to infiltrate the Zebra government again.
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>>27326539
originally Crusty Ecunt was going to be an MoM spy until I told Applecunt they were wrong.

I still regret it.
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>>27326539
We know removing memories is possible, and that MoM was attempting to 'fix' prisoners, so it's fairly plausible that this may have happened. Dash likely would have tried to keep it a secret from Pinkie since I doubt she'd be happy about what she's doing with her 'fixed' zebras.

TL;DR I want writers to not treat the Ministries as faceless creators of Pre-war technology with no consideration for their identity or philosophy.

>>27326584
I remember that. Was pretty funny.
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>>27326539

Yeah. Not quite. That was the Pinkie Pie Party Paradise Plaza. Essentially, robot drones kidnapped 'naughty foals and zebras' and took them to be 'educated'. The maneframe computer that ran the place became corrupted and demanded perfection. Every 'guest' had pipbucks with 'points' and you got more points by doing and saying things that supported equestria. Lose all your points and you'd be punished (beaten to death). Get 1000 and you get released... into being converted into 'staff' for the park, a mindless cybernetic drone. Bits of the theme park are controlled by various tribes of foals (think lord of the flies) with a ghoul foal, Ascot, the most powerful and perverse. He gives Rusty the choice of either raping his sister, or being killed. Rusty does it, not because he wants to, but because he's pretty sure Ascot will do it anyway once he's dead. The story ends with Rusty sacrificing himself to destroy the malfunctioning computer, Ascot, and the theme park while letting his sister and the rest of the foals escape.

Oh, the computer wasn't made to be this way. It just copied pinkie's mind, and after 200 years of no maintenence, becomes MPD. Rusty actually gets help from Shadow, which is actually Party Central trying to 'help' him escape, then instantly punishing him when he accepts it. After all, trying to leave without a parent is naughty! (of course all adults are killed for trespassing.)

Yeah. I come up with fucked up stories.
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>>27326539
>>27326824
I agree wholeheartedly here, but I wasn't aware it was actually "a problem" among a lot of the writing that goes on. It's gotten me self conscious now. I suppose that comes with the territory.

part of me feels bad for having created scenes even involving the ministries, but for all intents and purposes I'm wondering if I've incidentally satisfied these ideas brought up in writing them. The delivery of course will have to make sense, but all in all I tried to consider the attitudes of the characters and what events they would put into play, not have the events and make up bullshit for why they did it. It only heavily involves two ministries, however, with distant and less important connections. MoAS and MoI. If you'll indulge me.

spoilery example for pic related: There is a scene involving an unpublished interview with Photo Finish, which explains both the existence of the White Tails and Photo Finish's expulsion from Equestrian media.This is a huge thing for the MC, a photographer, who has largely gone uncensored in the wasteland and gathers some resentment toward the MoI.She was forced from fashion photography by the MoI (Rarity specifically) and into photographing the war, which was heavily censored anyway. Fluttershy intervened with this decision, having Photo Finish take nature pictures instead, to show a more "positive" side of things. Rarity agreed because it would hide the spreading industrialization from the war. Photo Finish became disillusioned with this, getting fans to protest and leaking images, and the MoI promptly forced her into retirement. Fluttershy, feeling sorry for her old modeling mentor, ensured Photo Finish had a small plot of land that was to be considered a nature reservation, so PF could take photo's there if she wanted to and release those. She lived out the rest of her life secluded there, and the interview is one of the last things Photo Finish ever does.
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>>27327076
I personally think that's pretty good. I can see how the events would take place. Rarity/MoI shutting Photo Finish down like that makes sense. Even though Rarity was usually shown to be understanding with her censorship, like how she gave all those banned books to Twilight or how she tried to hold her friendship together, I think she could act harshly against Photo Finish because of the whole 'leaking sensitive images'

It's nice to also see a well known content creator respond to one of my posts. I rather enjoyed the bits of Tartarus Contingency I've read and I hope you continue it sometime. It seems it's been taken off Fimfiction, which is a shame because I personally thought it was a lot better than most of the other junk out there. I hope you continue it sometime.
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>>27327076
there is a level of implied back-and-forth between Rarity and Fluttershy, over the events of Green Isn't Your Color. Photo Finish is essentially the pathetic ball in the scenario between two ministry mares, with only one actually disliking her, and is fully aware of that fact. The interview exposes some of the background stuff that was going on, like displacing original residents of areas (the plot of land she was given had it's "local populace relocated" - the White Tails), political shenanigans involving those residents and the Crystal Empire, and MoI censorship binges that could be considered focused personal grudges on Rarity's part that were exercised through her ministry.
It's also an excuse for the MC to upgrade his camera.
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>>27327154
>Fluttershy trying to do a nice thing, but doesn't think things through and ends up causing more harm than good.

Seems par for the course to me.
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>>27327143
>well known
^:)
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B8sVWTfo4cDCbFN3MlI5N1F5YkE

Fimfiction IS garbage, this place is literally the only place to get some decent, unrelenting critique on fanfic that's crapped out. Whenever it actually happens, anyway.

I have to get back into a place where I can reasonably write, shit's pretty bad for me atm (mentally). I'm hoping to get more out, as this place is getting worse for content I never liked murky, it seems it's all that's left. I have almost all of the rest of TC planned, it's a matter of getting into the right spot to sit down and make it.

>>27327164
All I really hope is that I got the personalities correct, which is why I went on what feels like a shilling binge.
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>>27327188
No worries m8, take your time. It's better to put out something you are proud of anyway. Though don't always wait around for the 'right moment' to write. It's a very powerful procrastination tool I've found. Once your problems are more or less sorted you should probably start writing a bit. Maybe do a few rough drafts that suck and you hate a lot, but at least you can maybe salvage some of it.

Even though I agree that Fimfiction is hot garbage I think removing it was probably not the best move. It's a well known and easily accessible site, and of course the story used to be posted there so most of your former readers, myself included, would conclude you've totally dropped the story entirely. I didn't even think about it possibly being alive until your post.

Also there are no real alternatives now. EQG front page isn't as strong as it once was. Golden age of pone has finally withered out and we are now in the decline. FoE was completely and utterly decimated by the blunder of the fucking milena that is Fallout 4. Etc.

You can't always counting on us to leave decent feedback either too. You are well known here mostly, so you might get some more biters than some poor randos who drop their fic and then wait eagerly, only to get NL replies and has to watch the topic turn back into sucking out farts from a Griffons asshole or Pegapets or whatever flavor of the month meme the foefetish crew to push.

So I reccomend reuploading to Fimfiction on the off chance you get some actual good feedback. Up to you if you want to or not.

Also of course you are well known. You also were the only content creator who replied to my post.
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>>27327280
haven't seen the doom beta reviews yet? That blunder might get topped. They also killed Prey 2.

Part of not wanting to keep it on Fimfic was the numbers game that tends to get played over likes/dislikes. Having a visible popularity contest just seems like it itches in the back of the brain, and could drag the story down if I suddenly decided to asspull something that seemed to get more likes. It wasn't about getting a high number of fans, but people that actually enjoyed what was appreciated without having to believe I should asspull for more views.

Getting the story done is one of the hard parts on a technical level at this point as well as the shame of not actually doing anything for two damn years, as writing The Hunger is a bitch to actually make scary.
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>>27327280
To be frank I don't really blame FO4,
The place was already in a state of accelerated decline after, roughly spring 2015
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>>27327280
Hey I resent that remark on Foefetish, we have 3 guys who are willing to push fetishes.
One does pegapets, but only after its started in thread.
One is a lazy git that needs to write and draw more so he can be blamed for bellies/pregnancy goldie x Fisher.
And Riddles.

I'm avoiding fetish stuff in favor of these reviews and content delivery.
That's why I haven't published anything in a few months.



Part of the issue I think is that when its all said and done, a lot of really good fics have died partway through.
These dead fics remain open and invite readers in, but then the death disheartens them and makes them think we're a dead fandom.
Functionally, there should be a culling bot on Fimfic that punts all fics that haven't updated in 6 months without clicking complete to the back of the list.
This would allow newer fics to show up first, and even more so developing fics could be placed before the titans and allowed some publicity.

Still wishing Ouroboros would continue, psychic waterworld esque shenanigans with tech and a search for home would be interesting.
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>>27328156
You forgot about me, shitboot.
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While we're on this topic, y'all need to help me get Ham to write.

When I'M the one blasting out 1400 words in one sitting and Ham's watching videos on youtube, cleaning his keyboard out, and chatting with PA instead of writing with me you know there's a problem. Lately he just wants to vidya with his free time and I'm worried about his motivation.
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Hey, it worked!

neonovus dot tk

I now have a website.

PS, there is a hidden surprise if you explore the server.
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>>27328180
I wager part of it is "ending" fatigue.
He finished the primary portion of his fic, the whole affair with Copper is that copper like the metal or like the law enforcement and arrest individual? and now he set himself a bigger question.

As writing goes, he should wind this up, if not already have done so with Malice's offer and made WECON 2.
That effectively, he is on the next book, and this part of his motivation issue.

Alternately, don't you two have handcuffs?
Could always just trying be the top for once...

He's welcome to ask in Foefetish, we're willing to help.
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>>27328180
I don't know what would help. He has his editors and plenty of other people to go to if he's stuck, so you're probably right about it being a motivation issue. Giving him comments on fimfic or discussion here might get him going, but I don't know what to talk about and I still haven't read the latest chapter.
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>>27328237
The issue is entirely within his brain.
Clearly, we must remove Ham's brain to remove his motivation block.
This is a good plan, and I nominate Tofu to assist by fucking his brain out or lewding him off.


Because really, lost motivation doesn't come back with out some drugs, and I don't know if either of you can get adderall or something else like that for help.
You could try buying Attend, though that will take some time to start working, and it burns all the way down.
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>>27328183

Link it?
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>>27328375
its a tk domain, so 4chan flags it as spam sadly.

just replace the dot with a . as normal

http://neonovus dot tk/StableQuest%20-%20Index.htm
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Updating on weapons, armor and such

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eP5PwdEvaTw&oref

This is what happens when you have steel plate and some kevlar weave.

Please remember that small arms are shit and arm your ponies appropriately with SLAPHE 12x76 rounds.
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>>27328674
>SLAPHE 12x76 rounds.
Or you fucking leave specifics out of it because that's the most rookie mistake a novel author can make.

You keep it vague, you keep it simple. Introducing hard facts raises multiple issues and tears holes in the narrative. That's why most professional authors out there either use generic nomenclature like pistol, revolver, submachine gun, or they go with a simple manufacturer name like Colt or Beretta.
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>>27328728
The thing is that none of those as demonstrated are a threat.

This was showing that armor can easily mean the hero just has lots of bullets hit without issue, and actually hurting them rapidly gets into high caliber and mounted weapons.

Most weapons are around 2.5 KJ for intermediate (assault rifles) and a kilojoule (typically half for pistol rounds)

This is very easy to shrug off with armor, even more so given that ponies are abnormally strong or running around with hidden gems.

Basically, most of the shown fare in fics is well below the point of piercing armor, leaving limb shots where the armor doesn't cover, or getting into very big guns.
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>>27328728
Another big reason for non-specifics in published fiction is that arms manufacturers charge for the likenesses of their products.

The other reason is that for the purposes of telling a story the specifics don't matter. A flintlock is as good as a Desert Eagle for the role of "gun" in most non-military scenarios.
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Does that mean a surface to air missile could be used on feathered freaks and the occasional unicorn skeet?
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>>27329206
Does what mean a surface to air missile could be used on feathered freaks and the occasional unicorn skeet?
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>>27329225
Just saying tha its a surface to air missile and then showing the superiority of earth ponies?
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>Hey so you don't mind me being here? Like my place is your place and all that?
>Cool cool cause there is just like this huge misunderstanding and people are just shooting me a lot right now.
>Don't mind, I just need to borrow a gun right now, I'll bring it back right after I'm done with it.
>No no, stay down, I can take care of it myself.

How can you work battle banter and talk into a fic, given its a way to have a lot of fun?
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>>27329365
You're going to need the right type of character.
A stoic won't banter.
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>>27329422
Such as like this asshole here.
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>>27329422
Well I mean more midbattle, like while killing people or jumping over tables.
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"You better take your eyes off my rear anon, unless you reaaaally want a closer look."
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>>27329494
Yes, I know.
Most won't be cracking witty one liners while getting shot at.
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>>27329769
Grit turning into Alloy and showing her how she comes across if she's more assertive and cocky when?
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>>27329784
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4j9x_vPefn8
Unleashed assertive Alloy.avi
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>>27329769
But what if I want to write one, i just don't know how to put musings in line with combat.
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Well a decent line post combat at least would be
>Through the hypnotic power of my swaying flanks, and a combat shotgun, I convinced all these ponies they were dead in Heaven.
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>>27330030
>You will never secretly fap to a cute wastelander dashing around the battlefield and being a whirl wind of death.
>You will never be completely mesmerized by their thick swaying flanks as they jump and do impressive acrobatic feats, unconsciously giving you an impressive show.
>You will never do this at the expense of all your raider buddies, getting slaugthered by the Wastelander, as you creep up on them, lost in a trance.
>You will never actually get right behind them and pounce, burying your face into their luscious flanks, covered by tight and form fitting Leather Armor that keeps their dignity, but leaves nothing to the imagination.
>They will never try to weakly fight you off, too surprised to properly react, and then too aroused to stop you, soon moaning in pleasure and telling you to keep going.
>You will never strip them right there after thoroughly massaging their flanks, making passionate love right there on the battlefield with your all your former raider friends either running away or lying dead.
>You will never be invited back to a nearby hotel to clean up and continue your furious lovemaking.
Why live
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>>27330147
I just love how Pip's tongue detaches from the bottom of her mouth there.
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>>27330178
Tofu pls fix
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>>27330194
>can't use the fill tool
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>>27330178
>>27330194

It's not detached, it's curled.
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>>27330231
>>27330178
>>27330194

>Pip had cleft palate as a filly!
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Don't worry, I fixed it.
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>>27330355
STOP ALTERING MY SHIT

REEEEEEEEEEEE
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>>27330383
You can't tell me what to do.
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>>27330614
>removed freckles
You beast!
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>>27330614
NOW THAT'S JUST TOO FAR, SIR
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>>27330614
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>>27329365
>>27329494
>>27329980

Something like this?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-kAyFNwNf1o
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>>27331106
Sort of.
More just the constant quipping like in Deadpool.
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>>27330614
>removing Pip's cute freckles
You've crossed the line anon. You're officially worse than Somber.
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Lookit this QT pa2T. My favourite happy zebra scout/brawler, Naiara.

Guy who did it is doing ten buck commissions. People should go get some.

http://timsplosion.tumblr.com/
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>>27331982
>Naiara
literally who
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>>27331982
Who
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>>27332083
>Who
Tim Allenby, of the Timsplosion tumblr. Does cheap commissions.
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>>27331997
>>27332083
She's from Old Souls.
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>>27332308
Pay up for what?
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Reading new chapter of Heroes, but I can't remember who Moondancer is.

Can anyone help?
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>>27332358
Flare's niece.
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>>27332350
Nothing, you're being robbed.
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>>27332380
Can I tag in some other anon here? Half of them would probably get off on being 'oppressed' like that.
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>>27332469
I thought you liked Caltrop? Don't you want to throw all your money at her and hope she leaves without breaking your nose first?
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>>27332500
I'd just pat her on the head and keep walking.
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>>27332516
Bro that's like turning your back on a rabid dog.
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>>27332469
And the other half would help make you suffer.

So who you gonna tag in there boy?
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>>27332537
Caltrop, as has been shown since her reintroduction, doesn't attack without purpose. She had a front to put on for her posse, so she broke Mach's nose because he was rude. In the pic shown, she's alone. She's got no reason to start something.

Still, if she felt like putting on another show...

>>27332623
I'unno, PromptAnon?
>>
Authors, how did you flesh out your story? More specifically, how did you get the idea for the premise and then how did you decide what the events of your story were going to be?
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>>27333683
I barely consider myself an author because I've been too busy to start writing my story, but I finished planning it out in its entirety fairly recently, so I might be able to help.

I got the idea for the premise by thinking of what I wanted to write about and worked from there. All I knew was that I wanted to write about Steel Rangers, have it set in an interesting, semi-unique place, and keep its length manageable. Then I came up with a protagonist, gave her goals and motivation for accomplishing them, and made an antagonist to oppose her with goals and motivations of his own. This kinda created and drove the events for most of the story, and made coming up with shit a lot easier.

For pacing and story structure, I started by planning out the beginning and the ending, along with how the characters and the world around them changed by the end. Then I filled in the body of the story with events that lead to these changes. Basically, as long as something in the story, whether it be a character or the plot, is changing or developing at a reasonable pace, you're doing alight. There are different ways of designing the order of events, of course, one of them being the three act structure, which can work just as well in writing as it does in film, but you don't need to follow it if it doesn't work for your story. A general rule of thumb is to have the body of your story put your character, plot, and your readers through high points and low points of mood and excitement. You don't want the events of your story to drag on in a low point forever, like PH, or for the plot to feel rushed and out of control. Murky does a good job of alternating between highs and lows, but sometimes overdoes it, which is a criticism that it receives a lot, so be careful.
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>>27333683
>Flesh out your story
Usually small ideas like what scenes I would like to see the characters in would come to mind, and then I would just start asking myself questions. How, why, what, where etc. And I asked myself that in regards to more than juat one or two details in the scene. Those scenes are either encounters where the protagonist or their group meets an important side character; or its a discovered location to explore.

You gotta ask those questions until you can give it a good reason to be.
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Don't go to bed.
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Need new thread soon. Who's doin the honors?
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>>27335280
No worries, I got an eye on it.
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>>27335158
If you don't want me to go to bed why are you posting pictures of great reasons to do so?
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>>27333683
To me the premise kind of popped up while thinking about the FoE universe.
From there I started by defining the initial situation, the main character and supporting cast, with their roles and personalities. As soon as you have that, you can start thinking about how they will interact with each other, and that's 90% of the story. Before I actually started writing, I had to have an ending, so I did that while defining the universe in which the story takes place (places, items, settlements, factions, etc.). Currently a couple of chapters in, but I'll have to find an editor before I publish anything
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So all things considered, what are ways to get a disabled gryphon flying again?
Would having a stripped down Enclave armour with its lift talismans work?
What of attaching jet engines to a harness like is done today?
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>>27326539

The best, stupid, most terrible thing Somber ever thought about was a militant-atheist story where aliens destroy jerusalem to prove a point that religion is "muh bad" and that religious people are cancer, etc.

I can pull the logs with a bit of digging.
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>>27336071

Thirsty anon in need of pone.

disgusting.
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Commence ritualistic bellyrubs
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>>27336100
Good idea.
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>>27336100
Didn't we kill a pegasus last time doing that?
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>>27336260
we just need to rub bellies properly.
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>>27336270
Clearly then the answer is not to rub the belly, but have the belly rub us.
I propose we pin the wings and then have them flap, such that at worse it is our own hands that suffer, not the pegapus.
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>>27336297
But that means the birdie is doing all the work, and defeats the purpose of her fully relaxing, reclining and letting anon do his magic.
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>>27336358
Given our school of magic is combustion, I think this is a good idea.
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Would a tale of personal slavery over the more general factory slave be interesting?

A basic concept of a unicorn having to deal with being someone's bitch and having no say in their life?
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New Thread
>>27336570
>>27336570
>>27336570
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Thread ender:

I want to cut the wings off pegasi.
Take the horns from unicorns.
And strap them all onto the now even more superior earth pony.
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>>27336591
I support this course of action.
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>>27336687
And just think, once done, all those filthy ponies will be upgraded to a more superior earth pony form.
Their pathetic mutations will be removed.
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>>27336591
Poor pretty pegabirds.
Crying cute coneheads.
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>>27336780
We should take this to the next thread.
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>>27337022
Nah how about we let abuse fizzle out.
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>>27337107
Why?
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>>27337107
The abuse will never end so long as these evil poners persist.
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I think we need a unicorn version of sapphire
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