>"Welcome to Sugarcube Corner! See anything you like

>>27007336
No, I can't eat sweets because diabetus

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>>27007336
Dat ass

Bompo!

Is the Anon who got stood up at the beginning of the story... that green still being written?

The playful scene with throwing sponges while Ponk magic cleans the kitchen was god tier, even when compared to professional prose. It was really tasteful and fun. Wish I knew who that author was.

>>27007401
>compliments the only thing that isn't visible in the shot

8/10 subtle troll

>>27007336
>sells food
>long un-netted hair
>I can totally trust someone that shows up to work dress like a skank to make me something that want kill me.
If aspergers has ever left me with a benefit it's that my brain is stronger than my dick.

>>27007582

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>>27008849
yeah, but in the show, foods probably riddled with hair. i mean, how would ponies even prepare food without it?

>>27008849
Anon, please: pinkie's hair / mane probably tastes like candy

>>27007336
Feeling a bit of Deja vu here...

>>27007955
I'm guessing you read the previous green.

>>27011006
Yep.

Anon bitching on her and Ponk enjoying it when?

>Tuesday
>Be anon
>Anon sitting down alone on a table.
>Well, regardless what place you chose you would be alone. The place is empty.
>Your new work place made this cafeteria so employees did not waste too much time walking to and from Berger King .
>Place looks good enough, decent. Very clean.
>It will take time for people to get used to it. You decided to be a pioneer and try it first.
>As to your knowledge the staff running it are a married couple, the Cakes.
>Weird name but very fitting you think.
>Also another girl. They specifically told the entire male staff to stay away from her.
>She was still underage and only worked part time as a hobby.
>Stop paying attention at underage so you never really got her name.
>While you eat your tortilla you see a speeding girl running across the place
>kek
>She probably was late
>"SORRY FOR BEING LATE MRS. CAKE"
>Oh god.. her voice.. is so fucking annoying..
>She barely notices you as her pinkie hair covers what is probably her face
>Although you must hand it to her. She quite has the body.
>Too bad for you she is 17.
>no motivation of going to jail today, or any time soon.
>Lunch break is over and as you get up cleaning your place you see the pink hair girl just sitting on the cash machine
>She looks bored. Blowing a lock of hair off her face was probably the most fun she would have in the next few hours.
>You walk up to her to pay your bill.
>As you get close she looks at you with a big smile
>She is indeed a cutie.
>"Oh hello there!"
>Oh god her voice. You had forgotten about it already.
"I.. just want to pay-"
>Before you could finish she grabs the 20 buckets and hand you the change.
>That was fucking fast.
>She is still smiling extremely hard
"Uh.. Thank You"
>As you turn and walk away you could perfectly hear her.
>Bet the entire building could.
>"Come back soon! Have a nice day!"
>bitch must be crazy.
>You rather walk to Berger Kong tomorrow
>Wendsday
>Burgur King is close.
>Sanity close it.
>Shit.

I need to know what part of the world waitresses look and dress like that.

>>27010770
It's still fur stuck in the food

You can get the fuck out of here you roastie bitch

>>27011249
Continue? This is good so far.
I would of liked it if she was 15/16 but yours is good so far without that.

>>27011561
17 is the right age you fuck fag
also im writing while doing a daredevil marathon and making house chores.
>patient

>>27011320
You need to go to Hooters.
They kinda dress like that.
http://imgur.com/5XTJaOp

>>27011596
I like it regardless.
You don't like teens?

>>27011616
Send me a 13 year old and shit will happen m8
I will give her candy

>>27011249
>You must now eat at the Cafeteria. Hopefully her hyper actitud was just for the first day.
>No surprise the place is full. The second closes Dinner was about 5 blocks down street.
>Aint nobody got time for that.
>You get in line. The pink girl is at the register machine taking orders and serving them at god speed timing.
>Well at least line is moving up fast you think.
>Finally is your turn
"I will take-"
>She Gasp
>Almost takes the air out of your own lungs by how deep she inhale
>"HEY GUYS LOOK! THIS WAS OUR FIRST CUSTOMER YESTERDAY!
>Can she be any more akward
>"EVERYBODY GIVE HIM AN APPLAUSE!"
>She can
>The rest of people slowly clap and soon return back to their food
>Spaghetti is all over the place.
>And is on offer, two servings for one.
>She is looking at you with glee and claps joyfully
"Can you please take my order now?"
>"Sure Nony"
"Thank. I. wait, what you called me."
>"Your new nickname silly."
>Nickname. How did she even knew my name.
>"Yesterday after you left I was super bored and decided to look up throught all the employees on the files of the manager and eventually found you so I decided I should do something special but I didnt knew what to do then I got sad but then I got happy because what makes you a friend faster then given somebody a special new nickname."
>That girl just made the longest run-on sentence you have ever hear.
>Your inner grammar nazi cringes.
"Listen... "
>"oh sorry. My name is Pinkie Pie. silly me"
>She smile leaning on the counter.
>Just now you notice her clothing is different from yesterday.
>She is wearing a crop top tied with a single knot and some mini shorts that still look almost decent for work.
>God bless her body because is work of art.
>You gulp and look at her eyes again.
"Listen. Miss Pie-"
>"Oh dont call me Miss. We are friends right"
>She smiles and leans closer
"Listen Pinkie Pie, thats nice and all but I would like to have my foo-"
>She ducks under the counter wiggling her butt

>>27007336
Yes. Your feet. Lemme hav em on a platter plz.
:3c

>>27011805
>Her round ass cheeks and tight jean shorts sure give a pleasant view.
>Coming back up she sets a tray with the exact same order you made yesterday.
"How did you knew"
>"Just a hunch"
>A hunch sure.
>Grabbing they tray you nod
"Thanks."
>"If you need anything, just ask for it."
>She giggle and winks at you.
>You are pretty sure she was trying to hit on you but meal is more important now.
>Sitting down you check your watch.
>Shit, 5 minutes remaining.
>Everybody is already leaving.
>Double Shit.
>You start gulping the food down the hatch as fast as you can.
>Now is empty and you are alone again. Might as well take my time.
>Decided to enjoy your lunch break you start eating slowly why reading some 4chan on your phone.
>Awful app, but does the work.
>With out notice locks of pink hair interrupt your view as you feel pressure on your lap.
>Pinkie is now sitting on you
>"So Nonny what you reading?"
>This is so not corrent.
>A teen girl wearing revealing clothes sitting on your lap while you are outside office hours.
"Pinkie Pie what do you think you are doing?"
>She looks back at you making the distance between your face mere centimeters.
>With a grin and a giggle she answer
>"I just want to spend time with my new friend"
>Nope. Not like this.
>You push her down making Pinkie fall on her bum
>"Hey thats mean"
"You cant go sitting on man's lap just like that."
>She gets up and puts both her hands on her waist
>"Well duh. I know that. I only do it with you because we are friends."
>Fixing her hair and fluffing it up she sits next to you this time.
"We just met yesterday and have barely even speak since them."
>Maybe you should leave.
>"Well this is the perfect time for us to catch up. Nobody is around, lunch break is over so I can take a break too."
>Shit. Lunch break was over about 10 minutes ago.
>Maybe you should leave.
"I'll leave now. Thanks for... yeah"
>You stand up and walk away not looking back at her. Fucking hormone crazed bitch

>>27012065
hope you fuckers are enjoying ma shiet

>>27012079
Kepp going it's good

>>27012065
>Tuesday, again
>The entire week was basically the same everyday
>You getting in line before having Pinkie Pie give you the same meal and sitting alone.
>Nobody wanted to sit next and be associated to the pedophile. Which is what everybody was thinking by this moment.
>She basically gave you special treatment. A dessert. Better portions and sometimes even cutting you on the line.
>Even you doubt if you arent already dating her and missed the memo.
>Say all that was great but she was still a minor. Legally at least. Bodies like those on girls like her should be punish by the law.
>And God knows you were a by the laws man since the day you were born.
>As usual you sit down and a couple of minutes later Pinkie Pie sits next you drinking a milkshake.
>She always had a milkshake when sitting next to you. Maybe you should accept her offer one day.
>But that would just rocket boost her to act even more out going on you. Which is the least thing you want right now
>"Imagine having chocolate rain clouds"
>Pinkie was just looking up at the ceiling slurping her milkshake almost empty
>That wins the random quote of the day for sure.
"Sorry what?"
>"Yes just imagine. Chocolate rain dripping over my body"
>She did it on purpose. She even wink this time
>You dont want to imagine that right now
>Yet you do
>Her tone naked white skin laying on the grass as sweet chocolate rain over her.
>Drops running between her cleavage and sorrounding Pinkie Pies smooth hips reaching her legs ending on her toes.
>Well shit that was a good job brain.
>Sadly bad moment
>A faint voice is hear
>"ANON DO YOU HEAR ME"
>Ok not so faint.
"Can you please not yell.."
>"Well sorry grumpy but im not the one who got zoned out thinking about my body"
>She giggle and slide closer to you.
>"Was it fun?"
>Bloody hell anon get out of here now.
"Im leaving now."
>You get up leaving your food behind and start walking to your office taking that metal image out of your head

>>27012212
>"Hey Anon. That bulge on your pants say you did have fun!"
>Shit.
>You look down.
>Fucking hell. Maybe nobody hear it.
>Too late.
>That same afternoon anon lost his job.
>Fucking bitch.
(gonna continue later)

>>27012212
>17
>not legal
What kind of shitty liberal vegan state is this anon from?
I bet it is California.

>>27012241
Go away clone!

>>27011606
Hooters is fucking trash fampai.

>>27012354
He wanted to know restaurants that had waitresses like op's pic. It was the only one I knew of.
I don't suppose you know a better one?

This thread should have more writers. It's an interesting topic with many ways for it to get lewd. Plus, since workers at restaurants are mostly 14teen to young adult, Unf

bumping for green

>>27012254
My story muh rules.
Also bumping until I can get to my computer

Boop

>>27007336
bump

>>27011561
Someone didn't play Phoenix Wright

>>27011596
>daredevil marathon
>tfw you just finished one yourself
Maaaaan, season 2 was such a huge fucking disappointment.

>>27012065
I am. A lot.

Just a fast comment.

Oh, and I use Clover for the phone and it works pretty well.

>>27012212
This green is great.
Please keep it up.

>>27015393
Wait, what has Ace Attorney to do with this green?

>Writefag writing from phone.
Computer died.
>play sound of silence
Sad day to be a writefag
I'm trying to fix it but if I can't will continue from the phone.

>>27010957
Why would a fast food place even have a number "45"?

>>27015487
Your green is gold, please keep producing it.

>>27015480
There's this girl called Maya, which is 17 years old in the first game. Phoenix is 24.
The game makes you grow pretty fond of her.

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>>27015487
>computer died
Have you tried turning it off and on again?

>>27015570
But there isn't anything involving romanticism in the games.
Except maybe for the finals of the 2nd and 3rd game but it's just Wright being himself.
also Maya is flat and we should stop going OT I don't want this thread to be /thrashed/

>>27015619
I agree.

Let us stoically wait for the green.

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>>27011666
Id make that whore my wife

>>27007336
That green.... So many wierd things.
>Young group of pre teens pay 15 year old woman to show her breasts.
>15 year old girl turns out to be a horse in a mechanical body.
>No explanation where the body came from.
>Main anon is attracted to said horse.
>Horse apparently comes from another dimension.
>Anon meets human girl, mistakes her for horse girl, and gets a good look at her tommy knockers.
>Said girl decides to have sex with him in the end.

Seriously what the fuck?

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>>27015986

boompan'

>>27012241

(writing from phone. All hope is lost for now)
>Anon is at his house. Unemployed.
>Fucking pink hair girl made you get fired.
>Your one decent job in the last 4 years and that teen just fuck it up.
>Laying on your bed thinking of option your scratch your dog's ear
“What to do?"
>Sighting you hear how it starts to rain. Sad day to be Anon.. At least is a chill night.
>Okay is now thundering and probably God got mad against mankind again.
>Anyway lights are flickering and your poor dog is going bat shit crazy over the lightning.
>Can something even worse happen?
>Shit you said it.
>Knock, Knock, Knocking on Anon's door.
>Grunting and grumbling you walk to the door
“Who is honestly crazy enough to be outside in the middle of the night under this-"
>“H-Hi N-Non-yy"
>A young girl is at your door shivering and completely soak, tho her smile is as beaming as always.
>Shit, what is she doing here.
“What are you doing?"
>She is still outside under the rain. Your grudge against her may have something to do with it.
>“I-I came to t-t-tell you that yo-our b-boss gave you the job back"
>Pinkie Pie smiles proud and still shaking. She is still on her tiny working uniform.
>If you could call that a uniform
>“I will go now.."
>Turning her back the trembling girl starts walking away.
>Wait. No car. No motorcycle.
>Not even a scooter. She walked all the way here alone.
>Dammit. You are not that much of a monster. Right.
“Pinkie Pie.."
>Still don't do it.
“Do you.."
>Shut up now and close the door
>“Want to come in"
>l-lewd
>She turns and rushes towards you.
>Imminent Impact in Oh shit she is here
>Ponka Ponk hugs you getting your clothes wet.
>Great.
>Her round, firms boobs press against your chest as she snuggles you
>Okay enough
“Enough Pinkie"
>She giggles softly
>“S-S-Sorry"
“Now let's get you something to dry off"
>She nods smiling
>>That feeling when you will never have your waifu at home… should I kill myself now or after your comments<<

>>27016287
After you finish green.

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>>27016287
Finish please, I'll pass out the kool aid for all of us

>>27016287
>As a good Christian your mom thought you to be you lead Pinkie Pie into your room.
>She is shaking and dripping in the middle of the bedroom as you are searching for some towels.
>Finding a clean one, thank god for that, you wrap it around her.
>The towel is big enough to wrap around her and provide enough comfy.
>Of maybe she was short.
>Thinking about you just realize she was actually shorter than OH God did she just kissed me.
>While you were distracted in your thoughts Pinkie gave your cheeks a small kiss.
>Her lips felt soft and cold.
>Her smile was dime but sincere.
>“T-Thank you.."
“Sure, no problem. I will leave you alone so you can change clothes."
>Walking outside you close the door and take a deep breath.
>You have 17 year old girl who has an obvious crush on you changing clothes while nobody knows she is here.
>Many would kill for this chance Anon.
>But you can't.
>Pulling all the will you can gather you sit down and open Netflix on the TV.
>Hope DareDevil is enough to keep my mind busy.
>Be Pinkie Pie
>Be on the verge of having a squee of joy.
>You skid your feet And giggle into your towel.
>You are inside Anon's house. Not just that but he is actually taking care of you.
>Whispering you sit on the beds edge.
“Oh Nonny.."
>You sniff the towel deeply"
>Calm yourself Pinkie Pie. >You are not a silly girl anymore. You can take this like a woman.
>While you extend the clothes you find out something.
>He only has man clothes. Figures.
>Taking your wet shirt and shot you end up on your underwear.
>"Sadly he has no spares for that hehe"

>>27017181
You think as you slide his gym pants.
“Hey they look nice on me"
>some more giggles happen and now you have a a jersey that honestly could easily hold two pinkie pie inside it.
>You walk out and see anon watching TV.
>With your best smile you speak up
“Im ready"
>Be Anon. Shot. Episode was getting good.
>pausing the video you stand up and stretch your bones
“Thats good Pinkie Pie. Let's get on the car. Rain is almost over. I'll drive you home"
>As you finish speaking you can see fear swell into her blue eyes
>“No! I can't go home tonight!"
>Well fucking bloody hell
“But why. They must be worried about you."
>She looks down at her hands as her fingers tangle nervously between each other…
>“I.. Maybe... Possibly.. I said I was going to a sleepover party"
Sweet Applepie. You have a girl who should be on another house in front of you.
>Bad luck is strong in you Anon.
“Then what was your plan. Huh? You can't do things like that. Do you have any idea of the consequences of your actions."
>Pinkie Pie's smile starts to erase.
>She holds her hand close to her chest
>“But Anon."
>No stopping now.
“Do you have any idea why I am so lonely at lunch? Because they think I date a minor!
>Her eyes start to water up. She is pressing her chest as the heartbeats start rising.
Do you know why I got fired today. Because they think I had sex with you! You are the reason I have no friends!
>Pinkie Pie is crying now trying hard to conjugate a sentence
>“I-I got your j-job ba-"
>You don't even let the girl finish.
“So what if I have the job back! My name is now stain forever because of your fault!"
>She couldn't take it anymore.
>Pinkie Pie broke into a deep sour cry
>She fell on her knees with hands covering her face and muffled words coming out.
>“Im sorry!"
>There she staid crying her eyes out on her knees at your feet
>Good Job asshole.
>You possible turned her first real crush into a nightmare

>>27017242
This took me two hours because app kept crashing. And had to rewrite.
No make a fucking positive comment you fags.

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>>27017279

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>>27017279
Please continue :D

I've been playing with an idea of Pinkie Pie is a waitress and Anon is the Sous Chef in the same restaurant in my head.

That's all I have fleshed out though, I figured Anon would learn Ponk is an amazing baker and he attempts to get make her the pastry chef at the restaurant.

I want to at least have most of the story in my head so I can avoid the fiasco in my last green.

We'll see; I may not even get this off the ground. Just thought I'd throw the idea out there.

>>27017747
Hey!
I remember you!
You became a write friend on a Anon the Stripper thread.

>>27017242
>You had 17 year old girl crying at you feet
>Perfect, only problem. It wasnt.
>Pinkie Pie was crying her to her soul and you are just standing there.
>sigh.
>You fucked it up.
>You get on one knee next to her and softly place your hand on her shoulder.
>She tries to stop her crying.
>Her face is covered in tears and her eyes have a light red of crying.
>She sniffs and tries her best to keep tears from falling.
"Sorry.. I should have not-"
>"No. You werre right nonny, I mean... Anon, Im.. a terrible person. Trying to force something like that."
>You want to talk but before words come out she is at it again.
>"Im sorry I damage your carreer.."
>Now Pinkie is crying and covering her mouth
>"and.. your life.."
>She starts crying like before.
>You grab her hand to which Pinkie blushes while looking up at you.
"Cmon get up cutie pie"
>To that her face turn literally pink.
>Such a cute blush.
>You help her up and she stands looking at her feet.
>Delicately you clean the tears from her face wiith your hands
>A soft smile forms on her lips as you tidy her up.
>"Maybe... You should take me home Mr. Ymous. I dont want to get you in more trouble"
>Now she is acting responsable. Whats done is done
"No, you can stay for the night. I dont want you to get in trouble with your mother."
>Pinkie Pie is now beaming with joy back to her usual self
>Good, at least now you sure you didnt mentally brake her.
>You sit down again infront of the TV about to hit play but she is still standing next to the couch.}
>Scoffs
"Cmon. Join me."
>She makes a squee and hops right next to you sitting down. If she was younger she probably be bouncing.
>You play the series again, she glances at you from time to time.
>Adjusting her hair locks and playing with her fingers but always having a smile.
>Maybe she is not as obnoxious as you thought.
>After few episodes you realize she starts getting sleepy and having tired eyes.
>Poor girl has probably never marathon a series.

>>27017820
moar pls

>>27017820
I have a MIGHTY NEED

>>27017820
KEEP GOING

Bimp

Boop

>>27017820
All systems. Full power.

>>27011249
>17
>under age
Where the fuck do you live? Commiefornia? Jew York?

>>27019467
Every where is underage if it's 17, pajeet.

>>27019478
>Be 36/50 States in the US
>Have age of consent at 16
>Commiefornians actually believe the US has a national age
Everyone who unironically lives in CA should kill themself.

>>27019512
I live in europoor and it's also 16 here IF you're talking of age of consent.
I supposed we were talking about major age..?

>>27017820
>Pinkie Pie lays down next to you and curls up her body.
>Her head lies on your lap while the pink hair makes a pillow for her
>Shit, what to do.
>With some hesitation you move your hand over her and softly caress Pinkie's cheek
>Her soft tender silk-like skin contrasts that rough leather you have as skin.
>She is purring now. Bloody hell this girl is cute.
>You cant hold a small smile as you look down at her.
>While she pours cuteness all over the place you just sit still letting her sleep on you lap
>Next morning.
>You fell asleep taking care of your pink ball of cuteness
>She is still there, just not so cute.
>Her hair is a mess and a trail of saliva is coming from her mouth
>Beside she is on the floor
>Probably a very active sleeper
>You get up and stretch your arms to scratch your head
>Its Wendnesday
>You would follow your usual morning routine but this is not a usual morning.
>Kneeling down you speak softly to her
"Pinkie Pie... wake u-"
>She round kicks you sending you back to the sofa
>Bloody nose, thank you cutie pie
>"uh.. where am i.."
>She smacks her lips as her eyes slowly open to find you bleeding to deaht on the sofa.
>At least she thats what she saw
>"OH NO IM SO SORRY!"
>So early and so noisy... cant she tone it down
>Pinkie stands up in a bolt and is anxious about what to do skipping a heart beat probably.
>>Will continue later. And to stop you all fags from going Off Topic hear me out.
>>Im following my countriy's law so deal with it. Not every country is so mind fuck to let teens have sex. Ok, pls dont shoot yourself. and if you do take a selfie.

>>27019555
Most states, you have to be 18. 18 is when you are an adult.
Some states have 16 I guess, but maybe 3 or 5

>Tfw TzWolf will never update

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>>27019651
>Most states, you have to be 18
>blue is 16
>dirty green is 17
>bright green is 18
>most

>>27019648
Pastebin?

>>27019702
Ok, wow, don't even know my own state's age of consent.
Went to look it up and it does say this is the age of consent, not the age of them becoming adults.
Which means it can be considered pedo if an adult tried to fuck a 16 year old? Just guessing this part here because 16 is still teen, regardless of consent.

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>>27019789
bloody hell thats brilliant

>>27019727
Im am currently making the pastebin for this story, but I will continue working on it

>>27019771
If someone is 16 in one of the blue states on that map, you can fuck them right in the pussy (or assistance, or ride their dick, as applicable) with no fear of jail.

But of you take a picture of their tits or genitals then it's off to the rapehouse.

>>27019854
Not really, there are still age gaps provisions to worry about. Not all states have those
Which means you have to talk to a lawyer about it.

>>27019648
>Not every country is so mind fuck to let teens have sex
Not every country is so mind fuck to decide that 18 is some magic fucking number where every damn thing in life just gets rolled out on you all at once. Seriously fucking kill yourself if you think there's a problem with ages of consent lower than 18 you fucking mudslime. Go blow up an airport, Hajib.

>>27019854
To be at least somewhat fair, I don't think anyone ever wrote those two pieces of legislation up side by side. They're the result of an evolved and ever changing set of rules.
It's why you get ancient laws in Europe about shooting Scotsmen with arrows on Sunday and shit like copywrite law in general.

Not saying it isn't stupid, but it's understandably stupid.

You all obviously want to speak more about where is legal to fuck younger girls so I will save my shitty green for another thread.
http://pastebin.com/msHuLanf[spoiler/]

>>27019872
No, we are discussion legal shit while waiting on you.
It's to pass the time.

>>27019863
True, in some states it's different if you're 21 or not.
>>27019868
All it is is age of consent laws being set by the state and porn laws being set by the feds.
>>27019872
Careful guys, Muhammad Al Mohammed is butthurt. If we really set him off he might come to one of our houses and Allahu Ackbar us.

>>27019872
pls write plox

am working on mah car so green will continue but not as fast as i expected
>>27019885
u better watch out m8

>>27019648
>Hard morning.
>No lewd included.
>You raise your head a tear a small rag of your shirt
"Help me up Pinkie Pie"
>She sits next to you grabbing the piece of rag with a shaky hand
>"W-W-What do I do"
"Just clean the blood. Carefully"
>You really stress the word carefully. Last thing you need is a finger up your brain.
>She presses the cloth on your face and starts cleaning your blood.
>She looks nervous and probably about to cry again.
>Dammit. You can't have her do that again.
>Trying your best you smile softly at her.
"Do I look like a vampire now"
>She first glances you with a confuse face to then giggle softly
>"Silly Anon..."
>Her hand moves apart few seconds later.
>Your face is partially clean. She did what she could.
>Putting the bloody rag away Pinkie sat next to you staring with her blue eyes at yours
>Her hair is a mess
>You smile at her and move a pink lock of hair from her face.
>She blushes and giggles looking away
>sigh
>You must do it, you know.
"Pinkie Pie. Why have you done all this.."
>She was surprise by your question
>"What you mean..?"
>Her blushing is now turning pink again
"Miss Diane.. Do you like me?
>At that question Pinkie Pie just stares at you directly into your eyes.
>She starts getting close to your face closing her own eyes.

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>this thread

>>27020477
>Her lips are centimeters away from yours and you can feel her breathing already
>Sorry but no.
>Placing your index finger on her mouth you stop her from moving closer.
"I ask a question and I expect you to answer with words."
>Your scolding proved to be enought to stop her.
>But she was obviously sad about
>Sad pik girl makes you sigh
"Pinkie Pie. Do you like me?"
>She back up a little and pull her hands to her chest. She is blushing and her eyes are looking down.
>"Y-yes"
>At least you have verbal confirmation now.
>How to deal with it will be another story.
"Look, Pinkie Pie. Im flattered you like me but-"
>She interrupted your very well prepared speech. Dangit
>Her voice was cracking and wavering
>"But Im too young for you right.."
>You nod slowly as she looks up at you
>"Dont worry.. I understand. Silly me trying something on you.."
>Her eyes are crying again as you reach her hands.
>"I just thought that maybe we could, have a chance"
>She sniffs and looks down again
>"Maybe I was wrong.."
>Pinkie Pie looks at you with a beaming smile. Like the one she had the first day you saw her.
>"Thank you Anon.."
>She is crying but not sad. At least that is what her smile tells you.
>"Thank you.. for being so kind to me."
>Pinkie launches herself and hugs you tight against her giggling
>You hug her back.
>Damn her boobs are big
>She just snuggles on you for a while.
>"Can you.. take me home now..."
>She smiles and breaks the hug while blushing
"Sure thing cutie pie"

>>27020698
Only left 1 or 2 parts until i finish it. I dont know if somebody still reading it but I hope is of your pleasure.

>>27020721
Liking it.
Do continue.

>>27020698
>Pinkie Pie blushes at your words smiles in glee
"You are cute, nice, sweet girl with cotton candy as her."
>You finish flicking her hair to receiving some giggles in response.
"You are a great girl and you have the most beautiful smile I have ever seen."
>She keeps blushing and playing with her hair tangling it on a finger
"Maybe someday. We can give each other a chance."
>You pull her chin up and kiss Pinkie on the forehead
"Just don't provoke many more man. Not everybody is very nice"
>She giggle and hugs you again tightly
>"Dont worry Nonny. I will be awaiting for you."
>Tuesday.
>Five months since Pinkie Pie slept at your house.
>Since then her actions towards you have significantly lower on intensity.
>She is still being the lovable cup cake with a smile printed permanently on her face.
>Just more under control now.
>Today you sit down alone again. Figures.
>But you have find the perks of being in solitude.
>Like having the table for yourself. Not that much but is something.
>Your lunch break is almost over.
>Before getting up you find a happy Pink girl infront of you.
>She is leaning over the table smiling at you.
>Her uniform just lets you see enough boobs as the first day.
>Pinkie extends her hands offering you a cupcake, it has a birthday candle on it.
>If you searched up joy on the dictionary you would probably see the face she has next to the word.
"Uhm.. Pinkie Pie.."
>"Yes Nonny?"
>Well she is the physical representation of happyness right now.
"Its not my birthday."
>You smile softly.
>"Oh I know Silly."
>She bends over getting close to your face.
>Pinkie blows the candle off and whispers
>"Its mine"
>>The bloody end Ladies and gentle colts. Scratch ladies. and gentle colts. probably we are all at the same level of autism in this thread. Pinkie Waifu is best waifu<<

>>27021046
And then he pounded the cupcake into submisful bliss.

>>27021114
pastebin is up, just in case anybody wants it for some reason

>>27021046
Huh, that was an adorable ending.

>>27021046
Won't lie, interested in sequel to this

>>27021287
wont lie, i want to make a sequel but i can only pump so much green out of me.
maybe next time.

Anyone else want to contribute to thread?
Lewd or non lewd green about this kind of situation with our silly but sexy Pie?

>>27022434
nope

>>27022434
I don't want to risk making greens given the current climate of /mlp/

>>27022543
Look around the board, there is nothing wrong with contributing green to threads. Just making a thread where the prompt is just something that ends with Wat do situation is wrong. It was show many times. Hell, Faggot13 made threads starting with green earlier, after the storm. He wasn't banned or shit.

>>27022434
I already made that green.
Maybe. Just maybe if the thread is still active by the night I will make the second part of it.
Active being actual content and not just bumps.
I don't want to be the only source of content on a thread.
Actually I like the attention so maybe I will. [spoiler/]

>>27022577
Basically, anyone can write green, just can't start a thread with something that is writefag bait. This thread already had writers before and after.

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>>27021046
Good on ya m8

>>27022577
>look around the board
Have you actually looked around the board? 5 threads so far whose main focus is pumping out greens got permanently axed from /mlp/ for no good reason and bans are being handed out fairly regularly.

>>27022760
Yeah, this is a thread.
We can write green in a thread.
If we could not, than why is the spiderman thread alive? The one with Sunset shimmer as spiderwoman.
Why is the Dazzling thread alive? Anonfilly Thread?
They have green in them, they should be killed for it.
This thread has green in it, it should be killed too.
That is all I'm getting from you.

>>27007336
>>27010187
Yeah. I'll take two of your jugs that you have on your chest.

>>27022875
Because they are deleting and banning them one at a time to avoid a mass outcry working their way up starting with the least popular threads.

>>27022909
You know there's always ponychan if you're mad.

>>27022909
If we are worried that much about this shit, than turn these damn things into fucking CYOA's. Just spew some bullshit and say it's a CYOA. That way, we can write what we want but say fuck you to the greentext rule, even though I just think you are just being a bit paranoid.

>>27022931
Last time someone tried doing ponychan and posted a pastebin, the anons were so fucking anxious that they thought a pastebin link were fake. Even with proof.

I don't know why everybody is so paranoid.
Why am I not ban. I been writing green from the day they started deleting just to piss them off.
I'm still here.
And my greens as well with all the threads surviving.
What am I doing others are not.

>>27023140
The mods are a lie /mlp/ has no mods.

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>>27023180
>Be mod
How dare you


>Be me
Will u ban me now mods!?
Maybe I should stop asking for it

>>27023212
>Maybe I should stop asking for it
I once asked a mod to ban me for no reason forever because the website was complete shit, they did it. True story never looked back.

Was full of retarded faggots spamming random crap.

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>>27007336

>>27023331
Yes sir, with and without tiny dicks

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>>27023413
Woah, no need for that. However I'd like it without.

>>27023433
That will come to a total of tree fifty

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>>27023443
Tanks

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>>27007336
There is only one thing I want Pinkie.

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>>27023483
>not sure if lewd but want it in my mouth regardless

>>27023483
Holy shit, what is that and how can I make it?

Thought it was going to be lewd there for a second.

>>27023543
It is a cookie cup.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vs3Ex6BlQ3g

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>>27023483
idc what it takes, I want it

>>27023619
make one yourself you failure at life.

>>27023619
We all do, Anon.
We all do.

>>27022577
>after the storm
I left just after S3 ended, I return at the start pf S6 and I see /mlp/ changed this much.
Would someone be so kind to explain to me what happened back then? Even a Tl:dr would be enough.

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>>27023619
>ifunny

I don't want to let this thread die. I want to write green but I have no ideas. So send a nice fucking picture and I will sure write green about it.
Unless is a shit tier fetish.

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>>27024079

>>27024079
FUTA, self sucking off.

No SFW pictures exist.

>>27024079
The op is nice enough.
But we do have some ideas...
Stallion on human Pinkie Pie? Teen or Adult?
The idea of a stallion tricking a human for sex, lieing to her about why sex is the way to pay from horseland, and her buying it is hot.
That's the only idea I have.

>>27024098
>>27024095
Eh, lets go with something that is kinda attainable here now anons.

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>>27024120

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>>27024217
And Anthro. Goodbye
Also, I wasn't the guy who offered to write, I was just some random anon

>>27024217
>>27024231
If you idiots want to post anthro, go to Ponychan.
Apparently Anthro is allowed there for a bunch of sick faggots like yourselves.

Well then. I see people gave some energetic answers to my proposal of green.
I think I will pick the stallion on human pinkie pie.
Sounds fun to write.
Expect the green to come later this night. I must go to church now.
Oh the IRONY
I should kill myself [spoiler/]

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Are we getting the foot story or not?

>>27024329
Nope. He has chosen!>>27024313

>>27024340
You still can work it into the story and have both.

>>27024349
Look, he isn't a foot fag apparently.
IF you want feet, than fucking go to ponychan with the anthros.
They celebrate everything there.

>>27024349
Maybe i will throw in some foot. Don't worry. Right now im on my phone. So I can't really make appropriate grin

>>27024455
>Phone
>During Church
Apparently this is a fake. Don't lie for the writer just so they have to do your shit

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>>27019670
Sorry dude, shit went down.
And with the whole Scruffening pt.2, I'm not all too keen on writing.

>>27024804
again, look around.
People are still writing.
Writing is allowed.
Just bait is not allowed. Paranoid as shit is what /mlp/ is

>>27007336
>Be Human Pink pony
>You been working at “Sugar Cube Corner" for 6 weeks now.
>The part time job has really help you keep at college.
>Maybe you should try getting a full job here.
>Well think about that later pinkie. Right now table 6 needs attention.
>Oh no. Another group of fat 12 year olds.
>Maybe you should try changing your working clothes
>Nah
>You giggle as you walk swaying your hips. You also like to tease those little bastards
>Leaning forward showing as much breast as legally possible you speak
“Hello and welcome to Sugar Cube Corner! May I take your order"
>They fat kids are already sweaty and nervous.
>Jackpot.
>“I-I-I want"
>He is already nervous. How cute.
>Maybe you would go easy on them this time
“Let me guess."
>You speak pressing a finger on your chin.
“You three want a triple banana split with extra cream and chocolate fudge on top"
>You smile and giggle at them
>Speechless the trio nods in awe looking at your breast.
>Do they even know the color of your eyes?
>Silly plebs
“Oki doki. I will bring your order right away"
>Skip and a hop later you find yourself in the storage room.
>Wait. What's that.
>Behind the door you see a faint light glow
“Sparklyyyy!"
>You get close and see a farm through what could only be described as a portal
>You try to touch it but find your hand starting to get pulled
>“Oh oh. Not good."
>Now is sucking you inside it
“Not good Not good Not good!"
“Help me!"
>Black. No racism implied.
>You open your eyes again.
>What happened brain.
>Brain? Oh right.
>You giggle and look around
>Is this.. A farm. Am I dreaming.
>Far on away you see what was probably a red horse.
>Where there are horses must be people close right.
>Yes. Pinkie is right.
>You decide to walk up to them.

>>27025464
Continue.

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>>27025577
Double dubs comfirm

>>27025464
>Doubles Dubs confirm it.
>a skip and a hop later you are at the farm
>okay
>many skips and hops later
“wa...ter..."
>You are dragging yourself on the ground.
>Get up pinkie you are over doing it
>You get up and clean your body.
>Still looking good at least
>You find a horse pulling on a cart full of apples
>Well then he must be very well trained.
>Let's be nice with him.
“HELLO HORSIE! ARE YOU DOING FINE TODAY!"
>you giggle
“Oh silly pinkie. as if he was going to“
>“Eup"
>He just talk.
>The red horsie just talk
>maybe you should lay down Pinkie
>On the ground
>Right now.
>Your eye twitches and you fall on your back unconscious.
>again black
>You should stop doing that
>You wake up in the middle of a building laying on a bunch of hay
>You shake your big fluff hair taking the hay out of it.
>Is in your clothes as well
"dinguses"
>You are cleaning yourself up and shaking your boobs getting the dirt of
>You always love to she the girls dance
“Now think Pinkie Pie. Where are you?"
>“At Sweet Apple Acres."
>A deep voice answer cutting your train of thought.
>Aw. That was your favorite train.
>Turning your back you see a red horse.
>“And who or what are you may I ask"
>The stallion got closer letting you see him better.
>He is so much smaller. Barely reaching your chest.
>Doesn't matter. That is a talking red horse in front of you.

>>27025968

is this going to end with her getting big mac'd?

>>27025968
>You are having a panic attack.
>Breathing heavily chest popping out you try to calm down. Is just a horse.
“A talking horse!"
>He seems to frown on it.
>“Well excuse me, but we don't appreciate gettin names call'd after helping a total stranger"
>He brought you here?
"you mean todo say you brought me here"
>"Eyup"
>…
"That must mean we are friends right!"
>Pinkie smiles brightly and sits on her bump
"So what are you?"
>She keep smiling looking at him and tilting her head sideways.
>"Am ah pony"
"A pony?"
>"eyup"
"Like a horse?"
>"nope"
>hmm
>She buys it.
"That sounds oki doki loki for me"
>she giggles and stands up
"Now if you would please tell me where I am I would be glad. Those poor children must be starving by now"
>that last part made her giggle
>Big Mac started rolling moving the hay around fixing it in a nice bunch
>"You ar' in Equestria. The land of the ponies"
>She frowned
"Wait. Just ponies?"
>"eyup"
"No humans?"
>he was about to speak but stopped himself from saying nope.
>"actually. There is another of what y'all call. Hooman"
>she giggles and tries to rectify him
"Silly pony. Its human"
>he just continues saying.
>"I could take you to him. If you want'd"
>Pinkie Pie is clapping fast and cheering
"Yes yes yes yes yes yes!"
>The Big Macintosh was placing down a cider barrel her had on his back.
>“But in here we like changing favors"

>>27026343
"Oh. What kind of favor? I can dash dishes, was clothes, mop floors, cook meals, make bakery, make an inventory of 300 different cupcake combinations in one day, draw smiley faces on them.."
>She goes on for a while losing count herself as she keeps spitting words.
>Little did she knew big Macintosh was walking up to her.
>he muffled her voice out while putting his hoof on her hips.
>She stopped talking feeling the contact.
>And then gasps
"You want snuggles"
>He scoffs and with a soft push send pinkie pie to sit on the floor again
"Ouchi. What was that for!?"
>the red stallion just glared at her
>" the favor ah want.. Is a reproductive one."
>Her face, even her pink hair lost all colors at that moment.
"S-Sorry what did you say"
>She heard him clear but was too shock to believe it.
>The truth is, Big Macintosh had no desires for Pinkie Pie.
>He could get any made he wanted on that town.
>Even Applejack that one time..
>But since the male human arrived he had seen no action whatsoever.
>Even Applebloom had a crush on him.
>Mating with another of his species will sure teach him.
>At least that was his plan. >back to the present.
>“You hear'd me"
>She was sweating already.
“Maybe I should g-go now. Thanks for everything"
>While Pinkie Pie tries to dash around him she felt a strong pull from her shorts.
>And then felt no shorts.
>The pony had her shorts, and underwear on his muzzle.
“AH please don't. I-I can do anything.. I promise."
>While she tries to escape Macintosh uses his body pushing her against a stack of hey.
>He quickly mounts her preventing any other escape attempt.
>She is crying begging for him to stop
“Please.. Don't.. I don't think.. I can take it.."
>She ready gets a glimpse of his horse cock as big Mac gets pinkie to spread her legs.
>Her ass is raised and her head against the floor making her body curve
>Without hesitation the pony penetrates pinkie pies human pussy with his horsecock

>>27026509
>Pinkie Pie clenches her fist and buttcheeks
>The thick horsecock of big mac starts getting deeper into her pussy
>She groans and cries of pain
"Please make it sto-o-op"
>Her tears keep flowing as the big cock starts thrusting inside her
"Ah! stop it! Is too big!"
"Its. Tearing me. It hurts.."
>she keeps crying trying to kick him.
>Her legs squirm in an effort to push him away just to receive another deep thrust inside her
>"Ah! Please... Don't it.."
>Pinkie Pie's body gave up under his weight. She is sobbing and her eyes are close as they keep crying
>he starts gaining rhythm as her body lays limp.
>Pinkie's pussy is stretch up enough to take all its size.
>She is softly changing her sobbing and crying into low moans
“Please... don't hurt me more...mmmm"
>Biting her lower lip as his horsecock is deeper yet not all inside
"oh.. Is..it.. All inside.. Mmm"
>She stopped crying completely and is moaning softly
>His cock keeps going deeper into her
"H-How l-long are OH YOU SHOULD NOT BE INSIDE THERE"
>His horsecock over extended her human vagina and went into her womb.
>>eh. Gonna continue tomorrow. I'm feeling for some horseporn now<<

>>27026795
If somebody likes this please do tell.

>>27025464
>Black. No racism implied.
Its 2016 anon everything is racism.
Only ask /pol/ or your local liberal on TV you using the word black is racism you not using the word black is racism.

Join the KKK and be a proud racist by not giving a fuck about liberals.

>>27026903
I don't.
But that's because I particularly dislike penetration.
I'm more a fan of teasing and squeezing and mashing all the round parts.

But fyi it's late, and decent feedback will arrive later since you're the active writefag now.

>>27011249
Wait a second friend. This is a self insertion story. This thread is breaking the Mods rules.

>>27026509
>Having sex with humans is bestiality.
>Bog mac confirmed to be a disgusting zoophile for wanting to put his dick in filthy humans.

>>27026937
I know is late. I left the message anyway.

>>27026944

M8. I hope it gets me ban for some days. It would be healthy for me.

>>27022434
Ill contribute
>be anon walking to the new building in ponyville.
>the sugar cubecorner.
>you're greeted by a pink pony who says.
>'wellcome to the sugar cube corner, how tough are ya?'
How tough am I?!?!
>You say as you rip off her balloon cutie mark and flip it upside down.
>'come right in.' she says as she opens the door allowing you in.

>>27026795
I like the story just the whole rape thing ruins it for me

>>27007336
bump

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>>27027241
>rape
>ruins

>>27026795
Somebody has to make the rape green
>Moaning and gasping pinkie let's big Mac fuck her
“Yes.. Just like.. That.."
>Her body has started to ignore the previous pain and focus on the pleasure
>The stallion puts his hooves on her back as he thrusts Pinkie's pussy
"F-Fuck... I didn't order the double Big Mac combo"
>She is looking back and winks at him while her face is velvet red (is velvet a fucking color? Idk)
>Pinkie Pie giggles at her pun
"Oh! Watch out big boy. My sexy body can only take so much"
"Mmmm.. Just like that...
>her moans gradually grow louder as she moves her hips for him to go all inside
"Oh fuck yes!"
>Her legs start getting shaky and she is drooling
>Lust has taken control over her.
>Pinkie Pie flips her body around
>The stallion is on top of her with hooves at each side. she grabs unto his coat pulling herself up
>He is slamming her pussy as she wraps her arms around his neck
"Fuck me harder..."
>She whispers to his ear
>The pone just keeps fucking her letting his large horsecock going all inside her body
"Oh yes. Ah.. Ah. Ah. Ah."
>she is panting and moaning
>the pink hair girl is a mess
>the pink locks are all messed up
>her clothes are torn and dirty
>and she is about to cum
"OH FUCK! YES! RIGHT THERE!

>>27007336
bump

Someone has more of this human PP?

>>27027241
This.

Bamp

>>27008849
This.
Aspergersfag here.
This Anon knows that we are the true master race.

>>27034355
Why don't you fuck off to /co/.

>>27034355
>>27034498
avatarfagging

>>27029006
>>27033165
>>27034498
Best Movie is best movie

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>>27034610
It is a good movie.

>>27034696
I have watched a crap ton of movies, and still haven't found one I like more.
And I don't even like the Gen One Transformers show.

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>>27034754
Well that's your opinion. I don't like Equestria girls so there.

>>27033860
>>27034780
Ok.
I like Equestria Girls, but I accept your opinion.
But what does this have to do with the Gen One Transformers movie?

>>27034796
I don't know, it's just Hasbro

>>27034820
I guess that's how easy Hasbro can change demographic

>>27034841
True, very true

>>27007336
>You smile

>Woah, you never thought you'd ever find yourself in that situation
>I mean, yeah faggot you DID thought about it
>But you never... I'm not going to finish such an obvious line of inner dialogue
>Thing is, there she is.
>Waiting for your order.
>Or a stupid pick-up answer
>Or both
>You have to say something smart
>You have to
>But CAN you?
>The pressure keeps piling on
>Not much time left
>Just half a second more and you're out of the nice-guy range and into the strange/spaguetti-man one.
>You play safe

"Yeah, I'd like a coke and the fish with chips combo"

>'Alright. Anything else?'

>You don't have even half a second here
>But man it's like she's asking for it
>Maybe you should?
>...
>Time's up
>You decide to play safe

"No, thanks."

>She turns and leaves
>You don't stare at her for too long
>You already know she's beautiful

>Whatever

>You should probably be thinking about those things you're supposed to be good at
>Like how to improve your day to day job
>Your neglected studies

>You look at the people walking around and be sure no one you know is waving at you or something

>Whatever

>You instinctively slide your hand down your pocket
>You stay confused for more than you'd like to admit as you move your fingers without really knowing what you were doing
>Then you remember you must be looking for your phone
>You also remember you forgot it today
>That's why you felt particularly weird this morning
>Like you weren't supposed to be so comfortable when sitting down
>Like that film you watched some days ago
>Where this general is told that he won the battle and he tells the messenger he can leave
>Then he takes a sit on his mighty general chair while exhaling most air from his lungs and turns to face the huge window every general should have behind their big mahogany desks.

>...

>Where were you going with this?

>>27035855
>Man you hate when this happens.
>It's like you're reminded that your brain isn't and will never be too good at what he's supposed to do even if you use it for every second of every day.
>It feels like wanting to sneeze and not have a bright light to look at
>Like feel*clink*"Thanks"ing an itch on your feet and not being able to properly localize it even after pulling off shoes and socks
>Lik-Hey! Your food arrived.

>Some faint extremely recent memories are brought back

>Oh shit you went full automatic mode back there
>At least you thanked her, you think.

>You begin eating your food
>It tastes good and you like the feeling of your stomach filling up bit by bit

>*cling**tsss*

>The pink girl is pouring you the coke
>She is leaning a bit in a cliche but still provocative pose
>And you can't be sure but you believe you made eye contact for a millisecond there when you raised your head
>Meaning that when she was pouring it, she was looking at you not the glass

>...

>That's not enough info

>You can't get friendly based on that
>You remember that on time you thought maybe you could throw a couple friendly lines with this rainbow coloured hair chick because of some hints you believed to have detected.
>It was in one of those clubs your friends used to drag you to a couple years ago.
>Thing is you did it, and the girl just looked at you and gave you a tight smile before looking away.
>The face she made was worth way more than a throusand words for you.
>You could see her emotions during your short interaction like them were in four dimensions all pulling away from you.
>All of them reminding you why you don't like clubs, nor small talk, nor people in general.

>>27035870
>...

>You must've focused like a frigging Kodak in that memory because your head feels hot and Pinkie has only just finished your glass.
>Pinkie, heh, get it? Because of her hair?
>Well aren't you the most awkward faggot in the cosmos?

>You play it safe

"Thanks."

>She smiles, turns and walks away.
>You look at her just enough to save those swaying hips on your mind for later
>Then turn back to your food

>You begin to eat again when you feel like your head is turning into a volcano
>Fucking useless blood pumping overheated your hardrive
>You take the cold glass coke and press it against your right temple
>There are probably tranquilizer pills for that shit but the few times you've been with a medic they'd just prescribe you the same shit they gave you the first session just because the second on you told them it was working.
>Looks like the rest of the following session where you told them it wasn't working anymore just don't stick to their little academic heads.
>Fuck, there goes the pumping again
>You put down the glass and decide to focus on eating

>You remember a couple scenes from series where the characters were eating and at the moment you wished you had what you have right know before you
>You feel content as you sate yourself

>Why is that fat security lady looking in your direction?
>She doesn't look happy
>You keep eating
>Maybe she thinks you're memorizing the cameras in the place given that you stared in all directions for quite a while until Pinks arrived.
>Man she maintained the stare
>You can tell because you have this faint image of her doing so in the corner of your eye
>That's also the reason you can see her approaching
>You begin to eat faster
>You could actually put this whole thing in your mouth in five seconds if you wanted
>But you remember you still have to pay
>If you don't, there WILL be a reason for the officer to detain you or whatever they're supposed to do according to their manual.

>>27035888
>You must not feel guilty or scared but offended, bothered.
>That's the correct posture to take
>So when she is- and she went past you.
>God, it was obvious.
>You can't say you feel embarrassed thought
>You always feel a bit of pride in being able to come up with such a bunch of useful tools in those kind of situations even if they never come to be

>Welp, you've eaten it all.
>Now you gulp down two glasses of coke and enjoy the third one
>Though you have a filling like something isn't... quite there.
>Like it's missing.

>OH DARN that was it!

>When the general sits down in that scene, after turning to face the window he shifts a bit to accomodate himself better
>After two seconds he does it again.
>Then again after a second
>Then again
>And again
>And again and again and again
>Then the move progresses and the general realises he sleeps better on the floor than on his bed, that he'd rather eat rice and bread than grilled meat with salad, that he doesn't like his job, etc.
>And in the end he ends up being a bum and telling everyone he's never been that happy before
>But what matters is the part where he keeps changing position, as if he was incapable to make himself comfortable enough

>And that's what you feel like without the mobile.

>>27035904

>You've finished your coke
>And here comes the part where you have to somehow not seem rude while asking for the bill
>To a girl nonetheless

>You wonder if you should call her
>Maybe you can think of a last save, say something nice and get a few friendly lines from her
>You think for a bit, but it's all trash
>And you already forced yourself too much so whatever comes out won't sound natural

>You decide to play it safe

>Better to look at her until you make eye contact and then you'll move your hand up a bit for her to come where you are
>Then you'll tell her you're done
>Then you'll pay
>Leave a tip

>You're at it for a while until you do make eye contact
>So you do that
>And what came next
>And what came next

>Then you wonder if you should leave a message
>But think it better and just leave a tip

>Not too much not too little

>You play it safe

>And leave

>>27035917
I like your type of writing but, is it going somewhere?
Anyway, please continue.

>>27036104
Writefag here.
First: thanks for the compliment.

Second: Tbh, I'm more of an inspiration-rush type and once I barfed out what I felt like writing I have pretty much finished it.
My story pointed more towards that sentence I repeat over and over: "You play it safe", and how things like this happen everyday everywhere and are never mentioned.

Resume:
>is it going somewhere?
Somewhere is:
Sex? No
Friendship? No
Edge? No
Then what? I don't know.

I just write, I don't analyze sorry.

Third: If you have any suggesiton to make, please go ahead. Anything that stuck out to you in the gree will make me look at things in my writing I didn't notice.

>>27036294
Unfortunately, I do not know anything to write a fluent story. The fact that eng is not my native language makes it worse in this situation; so most of the times I just stand here lurking and enjoying writefags story.
But since you made Pinkie appear in the story I was picturing anon to do something like talking to her in a situation, like meeting her off-work and maybe having an awkward and/or embarrassing moment or something like that.
Feel free to use this idea or not. It's your story after all.

>>27036402
Got it.
But don't feel held back by your native language.
Like you mine isn't english.
Just keep reading and eventually you'll find writing as easy as reading.

I'll think about continuing or not.

>>27035917
I like it. Very enjoyable. Far better than the big Mac and pinkie rape/I don't know what story I was making.

>>27036600
Thanks dub dubs.
So you were making it.
It wasn't bad writing style, just the topic the thing I'd have changed about your story.
But I read everything just the same, since it was nice and easy to read so that's a good trait you have there.

>>27037139
thank you no dubs.
And about that story it really took me nowhere.
I will stop working on it just pastebin so is not completely lost.
Probably will continue the first one I made.>>27011249

>>27037194
You were the same writefag?
Let me tell you: that first story was superior.
I really liked it.
I was one of the guys above asking you to continue it after the first posts.

I'm a bit sacred that by continuing it you're going to fuck up but hell, "do what you want, it's your story"!

Post the pastebin as well, I'm intrigued.

>>27037249
I just write on moments of inspiration and I am very new to writing stories.
Last time I wrote was about 2012 and it was an adventure time fanfic.
Not gud, I might add.
I am willing to continue if I wrap my head around a decent continuation

>>27007336
bump

>>27023483
Oh my god that looks tasty.

>>27037194
To be honest I really like the first one the second one does have a chance if you DO continue it id just lay back with the INSTANT RAPE that will just make it look poor but up till then the story was awesome maybe you can just start back before that happened and just get rid of it in the pastebin

>>27038915
I was thinking on something like that. I did had a larger story after the sex scene. I just got bumped out and lost interest.
But starting again sounds like a good idea.

I'm thinking on merging the second and the first. [spoiler/]

Going to continue this
http://pastebin.com/msHuLanf

later

>>27039297
Based writefag

>>27038326

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>>27039009
Ya any time just remember write what comes to mind, not with what comes to pone porn. ps. Im walking on sun shine oooooh. pss. I dont know how to black out sentences.

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>>27039610
wtf u mean m8

>>27042052
>don't know the term "based"
Pls leave

>>27042177
The amount of spaghetti dropping from my pockets is too much.
>ded