Dazzling Thread #172

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>>25728406

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>>25728406
Getting close to Christmas again. Finally able to post all these pictures in season.

It lives?
Awesome.

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Wanted to do a "Fuck it we Bloodborne now" Edition, but couldn't find a suitable pic with all three.

>>25728516
It's for the best. I would have just shitposted the whole thing anyway.

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>>25728503
Considered an "Omg it tastes like friendship Edition" too.

Xth for mods please ban this thread

Watched Rainbow Rocks with my 4 year old nephew today. He told me Sonata was his favorite. He said it was because she was light-blue. I asked if he Liked Rainbow Dash because she is light-blue. He said he didn't like her because she was a boy.

>>25728503
we need more images of Adagio with Christmas decorations in her poof

>>25728661
>boy
top fucking kek
your nephew knows whats up

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>>25727250
Well they do channel the cosmos at one point

>>25728661
Your nephew is a faggot and should kill himself already. Sonata is clearly the worst Dazzle.

>>25728913
whats a ranbo dursh fag doing in a dazzling thread?
:^)

>>25728661
Tell your nephew to go fuck himself.

>>25728981

You seem upset.

>>25728661
topkek

>>25728475
BUILD WALL

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>>25728661
your nephew has the makings of a scholar.

Any comfy Christmas dazzle stories?

>>25729206
Always liked the Winter section of
http://pastebin.com/17mYg3Q9

>>25727235
>I awoke to my bed with Anon and myself in it, wrapped up in blankets.
>I was facing towards him, as I always ended up doing.
>When had I gotten into bed...? Sighing, I realized that Solo or one of my sons must've carried me to my room.
>Turning my focus over to Anon, I smiled. There was just something about his warm breath on mine and the feeling of his nose just glancing the tip of my own that I'd come to love.
>If possible, I would always find a way to fall asleep before him, but last night I had been feeling exceptionally tired.
>Still, I let him sleep in.
>Rolling out of bed like a woman half my age, I exited my bedroom, smelling the scent of breakfast.
>Following my nose towards the smell, I was greeted by Solo's usual "Morning, Misses Mous."
"Sonata." I stated plainly in response.
>"Right, Misses Mous." he replied, coolly.
>I glared in his direction, but he grinned back at me over his shoulder.
"What has you cooking this early?" I asked nonchalantly, taking a seat at the counter near the stovetop.
>"Well, I figured I'd have something out for everyone this morning." he replied, running his spatula through the skillet he had set up.
>I could see now where the smell was coming from, as he fried potatoes and sausage together.
"Very considerate of you." I chimed in, before stifling a yawm
>"That's what you pay me to be." he replied, focusing more attention on the food again.
"Not so, I pay you to help us around the house. You're naturally a considerate person." I complimented, doing my best to make sure he knew how much we valued him.
>He smiles genuinely, turning back to attend to breakfast. "If you say so."
>Smiling, I leaned back slightly in my chair before he chimed in again.

>>25729361
>"Though I do have to ask you something."
"Yes?" I replied, a little confused.
>"Are you alright, Misses Mous?"
>A silence filled the air for a moment, before I could respond.
"Excuse me?"
>I was a little taken aback. It was a simple enough question, but his tone made me wonder.
>He turned towards me, lowering the flame on the pilot.
>"Are you alright? You seem... really off, lately." he stated, trailing off.
>I felt my brow furrow, but not from any sort of anger.
"What do you mean?" I replied, somewhat uneasily.
>He sighed heavily, before continuing.
>"You... don't notice it?"
>At this my lip curled into a pout that would have been much cuter, was I still twenty.
"Now listen here young man, what do you mean by that?" I stated, getting a little upset at that. I hated it when people would ask questions, and then be vague with responses.
>"Nothing, don't worry about it." he replied, the expression on his face tightening up a little.
>I knew that look.
>When someone wants to tell you something, but can't bring themselves to do it.
"Tell me." I said, standing up and putting my hands on my hips.
>"Like I said, don't worry about it."
>I felt a blush creeping onto my face. This young kid- he was treating me like a child, when I'm more than three times his age! "Y-you should be more r-respectful of your elders!" I declared.

>>25729366
>"I am, that's why I'm doing this. Don't worry about it, Sonata. Just change and I'll have breakfast ready for the family."
>I open my mouth to argue, but I couldn't find the will to continue.
>He used my given name like I've always asked him to.
>Like it was an exchange. If he lost that battle, I had to lose this one.
>An equal exchange, much like trading pawns in chess.
"F-fine!" I exclaimed as I turned away from him and stormed back to my bedroom to change.
>Solo laughed behind me, probably due to how childish I just acted. No one said you have to act old when you get old. Some things don't need to change.

>>25729377
>I returned to my bedroom in a bit of a huff, but made sure to calm down a little once I was there. I didn't want to wake 'Nonny up.
>Donning a long white gown, I pulled a high collar blouse over it before tying a little purple ribbon around the neck of the collar.
>Looking it over, I brushed my hands over it a few times before smiling. I loved this particular blouse.
>It was a gift from Adagio, many years ago.
>Leaving Anon to sleep though, I pulled myself from my thoughts and put some slippers on.
>Moving back downstairs, I quickly ate my breakfast.
>Solo really was a good cook.
>I'd always give him that.
>Standing up as he took my plate away though, I had a sudden urge to go to the balcony.
>It was that same urge I always had; to go watch the crashing waves in the morning.
>Our home overlooked a beach, one that Anon and I loved visiting.
>Walking towards the stairs, I came face to face with my son.
>Stopping, I gave him a hug.
>"Mornin' mum. Where're you going?" he asked, before rubbing his eyes.
>I gave him a distant smile.
"To go look at the ocean. It's always so pretty in the morning." I responded, stepping past him.
>He gave me a concerned look, but quickly made his way towards the kitchen.
>Reaching the hallway, I walked to the very end and opened the sliding glass door that led to the balcony itself.
>I stood out there, in the brisk morning breeze which ruffled my gown and pushed my hair from my face.
>I always enjoyed the view of a blue horizon. I liked the idea that the world didn't have an end, that there was always something unexplored where the eyes couldn't see.

>>25729392
>A yawn from behind me caught my attention though, and as I turned I saw that Anon was approaching.
>He had tossed on a plain white shirt and some khakis.
>A light grin crossed his face, before he wrapped his arms around me. It was then that I noticed it was one of his old dress shirts.
"What's the occasion?" I inquired, genuinely curious.
>"Well sweetheart, I really need to talk about something important with you." he whispered into my ear.
>I leaned back into his embrace.
>His heartbeat was in sync with mine, akin to the soft crashes of ocean beneath us. I had that sound memorized, even with the changes that medicine and pacemakers had caused for him. I couldn't forget it. Its very feel.
>"Yesterday, when you asked if I was lying about something?" he started.
"Yes?"
>"I sort of was." he replied.
>I frowned, before reaching a hand up to tug at his cuff.
"So, something is the matter?"
>He was silent for a moment before responding.
>"Something is the matter."
"What is it?" I asked, my grip intensifying as it shifted up to take hold of his wrist.
>Worry began to fill my mind. We'd made it this long, can't we keep going?
>"I think it's time for me to go."
>I pulled out of his grasp, turning to face him.
>"I can't eat as much. I'm always tired. I think...it's time."
>Grasping at him, I brought his face down to my level.
"Come on, don't be like that. I don't want to lose you." I said rather calmly.
>"I think it's time I went." he replied, closing his eyes.
"N-no..."
>My composure wavered as I fell into his arms.
>Tears began to stream down my face unbidden.
>It was too soon.
>It would always be too soon.

>>25729408
>"It happens to everyone, sooner or later." he stated, before reaching out a hand to wipe away my tears.
"B-but, your p-promise!" I argued, stammering again at him.
>"I know, I know. It's gotten me this far, but everyone has their limits. I'm sorry. I just don't have the same amount of energy that I used to. I remember that I have to do anything you say for breaking the promise." he finished, giving me light caress on my cheek.
>"Would you listen if I told you not to leave?" I pleaded, the sudden realization that he just might go sinking in.
>He sighed, pulling me forward and kissing me on the forehead. "I wish I could, but I can't."
>I sobbed once into his chest as the tears began to escape me again.
>He felt so warm. I never wanted to be without him.
>"Just... don't worry, okay? I'll always be here. Don't forget that, Sonata." he murmured into my ear.
"O-okay... I w-won't." I choked out, not wanting to accept defeat.
>Holding him tightly, I felt as though if I didn't let go, he wouldn't leave.
>Until I heard a voice call to me.

>>25729421
>"Gran-mama?"
>Opening my eyes, I saw that Sonatina was standing in front of me in the doorway to the balcony itself.
>"Why are you crying?" she started, her big eyes looking up at me in confusion.
>I didn't like to lie. So I told her.
"Saying g-goodbye is hard. That's why I'm crying." I managed to choke out, stifling my tears.
>She tilted her head a little, her brow furrowing.
>"But... who are you saying goodbye to, gran-mama?"
>What?
>...
>A sense of confusion washed over me as a small realization, turned into a huge one.
>Turning, I began to look around frantically.
>Anon?
>I turned back to my great-granddaughter as something escaped me, something intangible.
>Like someone unplugged me and there was no more energy in my body.
>Kneeling down, I heard more footsteps from inside.
>"Sonatina, you know better than to run away from your momma. What are you doing up here anyways?" Allegro called to her daughter.
>Sonatina pouted as she turns to her mother. "Talking to gran-mama! She was saying goodbye to someone who isn't there."
>A look of horror crossed the woman's face, as my eyes met hers.
>"Alright, go back downstairs to uncle Forte. I need to talk to Grandmama." she ordered, her daughter quickly running off to comply with her mother's orders.

>>25729431
>A pregnant pause held in the air, before she spoke.
>"...Mom?"
>I smiled up at her.
>Empty.
>"Who were you saying goodbye to?" she asked, the look in her face saying she already knew the answer.
"Your father. Anonymous." I stated plainly, my voice devoid of emotion.
>"...Mom. Dad's been dead for ten years. I hate asking you this, but have you been taking your dementia medicine?"
>I opened my mouth for a moment, placing a hand to my lower lip. Without a thought, an ashamed smile appeared on my face.
"Ah, no. I've forgotten for a while, actually. I hadn't asked Solo to refill it recently."

>>25729440
>In my mind, something cracked under a great weight. The memories started to peel themselves back, revealing what was really there.
>Anon was just a memory I had been projecting into my life, to give me some kind of solace in my loneliness.
>The teacups were set by Solo, one for myself and my lost loves.
>The happenings between the two of them never happened.
>The chess game, I had played with myself.
>Solo draped the blanket over me while I slept alone on the couch.
>Every time I said 'our' or 'us', everyone realized I was talking about Anon and I, and I was the only one who didn't realize he wasn't there.
>They set his plate and filled it with food to entertain my delusions.
>The space besides me in bed had always been empty.
>Solo and everyone else knew that I was steeped in a lie and encouraged it, because it made me happy.
>Now though, I could see it in my daughter's features. It hurt her to see me lost in my own mind.
>"I'm sorry, mum... I just,..." she trailed off. "I hate seeing you like this." she finished, unsure if that was all she had to say, but stopping anyways.
>She was right, though. It was wrong to live like this. To keep lying.
>My eyes were overflowing again.
>Anon was gone.
>Yet...
>He said he was always there.
>But he wasn't, other than in my crumbling mind.

>>25729452
>'I guess that's what happens when you get old. You start living in memories, just so you can make it to tomorrow.'
>It's sad, but it's true, isn't it?
>Sitting there on my knees, I heard more voices calling to me.
>My son, my grandchildren.
>All asking what was wrong.
>And why I'd dropped to my knees, crying incoherently.

>>25729466
Dassit.

>>25728503
Adagio could have moved. She chose not to.

>>25728955
>No mentin of Dash
>"Yo-you're just a Dashfag!"
Sonatafags everyone.

How the fuck is this still going? It's been a year with like no new content.

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>>25729874
>Just had green posted
>No new content

>>25729466
Saw that ending coming from the start, but it was still nice.

Pg 7 bump

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Nobody called first for best dazzle.
So first for best dazzle.

>>25730599
>Don't know that the Imperial shitbag ruined the thread by posting Shitnata first
You don't need to type a phrase you cumguzzler. Now, start a fight with me to feed my waifu.

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>>25730710
fuck you m8 see me in da streets with them hands boi

>>25730729
I would, but I have bed now.

>>25729466
;_;

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>>25729466
Fuck you. There's tears swelling in my eyes.

>>25729907
Some Anons are never satisfied

>>25731342
Much like our mistresses.

>>25728475
go away mexican otaku

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>>25721635
King Midas fingerblasting Adagio green when?

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We dead again?

>>25728406
What are your ideas to save Sonata's cliche from being the token "stupid" one? Should she actually be temperamental like Sour Sweet? Im building my headcanon here

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People on these threads deserve to be hugged.

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>>25732925
Like I would want a hug from any of you baka

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>>25732940
then

>>25732782
I don't think she'd be temperamental. That's more Adagio than anything.

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>>25732782
Ive never felt that Sonata was "stupid". I just think she goes from aloof to excitable.

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Good night /dzg/.
also could a drawfeg make a dazzling edit of pic related? any one of them or all three I don't mind.

>>25733109
i agree. i think immature would be more accurate than stupid honestly

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>>25733279
Sweet dreams, friendo

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>>25733479
>Shit excuse for an image
>Made infinitely better by adding Dagi

>>25733109
Sonata definitely showed a calculating sinister side when she tricked Trixie into dropping the Rainbooms

>>25733479
Fucking beautiful. It belongs in a museum.

>>25733887

I think that was sheer dumb luck. Get it?

>>25732782

There's various kinds of stupid people. Sonata wasn't less malicious than the others. She was just more dependant and unfocused. She otherwise knew exactly what to do in order to achieve what she wanted.

Kinda like a highschool slut. She may not know integrals but she knows who to seduce and how (which some might argue is more useful as it gets you more and faster).

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>>25729874
>no new content

Is green not considered content or something? Jeez.

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>>25729874
>no new content

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>>25733479
>>25729466

>>25735366
Based

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How goes the night /DZG/?

>>25735924
Oh god, its just so... girly! It just makes me want to hold her hand.

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>>25735952
WOW that would lead to some serious consequences. Would you take responsibility?

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Will be here in a few weeks. What do you think /dzg/?

>>25736205
im jelly. point me in the direction to obtain one for myself please.

>>25736050
>tfw you will never rub Aria's naked body down nonsexually with betadine

I need this soo hard.

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>>25736050
>she kept the belts on

By the way, regarding Make A Mistake With Me, do you guys wamt smut or heavy cuddles? We're approaching that point in the story.

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>>25736957
HEAVY CUDDLES

>>25736957
Cuddly feelsy smut.

>>25736226
Commissioned from EpicRainbowCrafts. Makes damn good plushies if you have the shekels to pay for them.

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>>25736957
Smut with hand holding all throughout

>>25737123
>Commissioning such a shit Dazzle
At least it wasn't the worst one.

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>>25737150
wot?

>>25737175
>Sonata
>Kicking ass
It's amazing how shitty artists can be with in character logic.

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>>25737150
>>25737175
>>25737209
Oh boy! A disagreement that will be resolved with mutual respect to both parties! Don't let me down anons.

>>25737209
I respect your opinion even if its different then my own.
>>25737310
Hows that?

>>25737341
I just wanted to start a fire. I thought that this was gasoline.

>>25737341
Agreed. Please, enjoy your differing taste.
>>25737310
Ask and you may receive.

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Guys, I just met Knigit today
the guy's a pastry chef and he's actually pretty cool. He wanted me to tell you that he misses you all and that when work slows down he'll be back to do requesting again.

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>>25737396
>he's actually pretty cool

>>25737175
>sonata beating three people on her own
into the trash

>>25737396
Neat
>>25737419
I hope that Cheetah doesn't hurt himself from laughing too hard.

>>25737447
He's good. Cheetah know how to have a good time.
>>25737396
Is that your hand?

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have u ever pooped yourself but u were sleeping and u were like yay i was sleeping, but then u woke up and also poo'd ur bed irl?

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>>25737792
yes

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>>25737815
>>25737142
>>25736205
>>25736050
>>25735924
I want to hug_____ Aria.

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25737792

>>25737396
Never knew that faggot drew those.

It's interesting that he's not above drawing porn, but rule fags like a motherfucker against porn?

Somethings fucky about the whole thing.

>>25732054
?The Golden Cooch

bg9 is never coming back

>>25738185
Only thing fucky is your memory. You're thinking of knightsavant

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>EQG saves mlp in japan

You and I both know it was RR that saved the franchise over their.

>>25738569
Yeah I am. I saw the white knight signature and connected the dots.

Seems like I tried to call victory by connecting 1 dot in connect 4.

derp.

drawfag get on that, Sonata calling victory at connect 4 with one chip in place and Adagio telling her off.

>>25737396
Neat.
I love the stuff that faggot draws.

>>25738576
>inb4 japan makes it's own kawaii, animu, eqg spinoff

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>>25733479
Thanks man. Just noticed that """"she"""" has a dick.

>>25739331
I miss trapdagio

>>25739528
I miss running him out.

>>25733479
This is awesome.

>sees boner
THIS IS AMAZING.

>>25737396
Woot, love knigit's stuff.

>>25736986
Dubya-Dubya-E World Heavyweight Cuddles

>>25737396

Wait, so the lonely low income chef was him? Huh.

>>25741023
>lonely low income chef
I'm afraid not Sal, that was some other anon

I like to think that the Dazzlings go out and eat sushi whenever they feel homesick.

>>25741095

What kind of pastries do you cook, you rich ladykiller bastard?

>>25740732
i realize i'm an edition too late, but i really wanna see some art of aria in wrestling gear with the world heavyweight belt

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>page 10
Never fear, Aria's crotch is here.

>>25742887
I'd fuck that.

Why has dagi been running around the board stating random facts?

>>25728475
mexican otaku thursdays wants to leave

>>25740607
>Woot, love knigit's stuff.
I really need an explanation of this. How do love someone so mediocre at best?

>>25741369
>I like to think the Dazzling eat pussy
whenever they are home sick.

Fixed.

>>25741644
Are you ready?

>>25743653
yes

>>25743653
For the survivor series?

>>25743653
now i also wanna see DX dazzlings. though nWo might work better because the numbers match

>>25743681
>>25743903
>>25744019
THIS SUNDAY NIGHT

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>>25728406
>that image

Oh my God, can you imagine the entirety of Snowball Effect, only replace Spongebob and Patrick with Adagio and Sonata and Squidward with Aria?

>>25743903
Survivor Series was last month dude

>>25744019
Doesn't C+C have nWo dazzles, sorta?

>>25744152
Fuck you I want this!

>>25743236

Like many drawfags, Knigit has a particular drawing style. People who like it will see past any roughness his sketches have. And of course people who hate it will oversee any effort on his part and shit on him.

Take John Joseco for example. His work is very good. There was a time when he was among the top 10 of the fandom's drawfags. And yet there are people who've called him utter shit because of "muh sameface". They dismissed things such as percpective, geometry, lighting etc and instead they called him overrater because of his style. The most grating part was that the characters from the show itself *are* fucking sameface.

Personally I agree that Knigit has a lot of improvement ahead of him, but at the same time I find that his drawings already have elements I like. For example I like his Sonata's rather characteristic bangs. Plus, you need to take a few things into consideration when you judge a drawfag's ability to draw. Knigit hasn't been drawing for years, so why hold him to such a standard?

My advice is, if you think his stuff isn't worth the praise then point out the flaws in his work. If they are a matter of preference then you might as well live and let live. If it's not then he might improve and eventually not annoy you because you'll consider him worthy of the praise.

Plus, people are dump and blind animals (everyone except me) and can't for the life of them see flaws and issues. You'll have to point them out for them so they can see your point and share your opinion.

>>25743607

>Aria buried her face between flustered Sunset's legs and sniffed hard
>"Oh yeah, smells like tuna..."

>>25744426
we can always count on you to be the voice of reason, Sal

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>>25744426

>>25744152
>Adaigo being SB
>Not them all as Squidward and Ponka/Twilight and the aggressors
>>25744426
Sameface is shit, but it doesn't make the entirety of his art shit.

WK is a shit artist, but he hasn't been here long enough to say if he has potential or not.

It doesn't matter how long he's been doing it, if the art is bad it's bad. Like writing, as long as you improve your start isn't really relevant.

I never said it wasn't worth praise, I asked how you can love mediocrity. I was just curious what it was that he loved since he obviously isn't top in the thread.

That's the issue isn't it? People here and for the most part the site itself will take any content regardless of whether it's good or not. Just look at the older /dzg/ threads and you'll see this. We had horrible artists and writers, but people were on the Dazzling bandwagon and would eat it all up regardless. Now that we're not the flavor of the month our content needs to be held to higher standards.

Are you the new FNS?

>>25742887
IT'S COMING RIGHT AT ME!! ( opens mouth)

>>25744562
We can? I always thought Sal was the odd-smelling uncle at the attic.

>>25745245
>odd-smelling
Smelly Dazzle green?

>>25745282
That begs the question: what do Dazzles smell like? Does Sonata smell like blueberries? Does Aria smell like grapes? Does the Poof smell like tangerines?

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>>25745358
They all smell like pone.

>>25745475
I want to smell pone

>>25737396
The guy needs help. You should bone him.

Sincerely, a friend of his.

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>>25744801
Who gives a shit what you think?

>>25745807
Are you upset?

>>25745807
It seems that Sal and you both.
>>25745851
Fife too apparently. Also AA is trash and we know it. That's the joke. WK seems to be serious so he needs to get better. Stop sucking his dick because he draws you shit and help him improve.

>>25746029
It's like you think he hasn't been improving at all in his down time.

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>>25744801

I see your points and agree with most of them. But the thing is that, good or bad, a characterization won't do anyone as much good as pointing out flaws and commenting on them.
Hell, I even do this with my top 3 artists.

I used to be the new FNS back when Hype was the new MTG. With Hype away and Fife back I don't know who I am.

>>25744990

Hah! I laughed and clapped.

>>25745245

I know, right? I thought he was being sarcastic at first. Though I can't say I'm familiar with the stereotype you mentioned.
I like to think of myself as Whirl from More than meets the Eye.

>>25745358

Adagio: 30$ shampoo and a touch of perfume.

Aria: Fruit gum and/or cigarettes. Maybe cologne too.

Sonata: Dunno. She's taking care of herself and knows charm is her greatest asset, but I think she indulges in any food or drink that strikes her fancy atm so I guess her breath smells like coffee and her sweat smells like a fat woman's.

Regardless, maybe sirenkind has evolved more active pheromonal glands over the generations in order to attract food, so all three probably emit them like crazy.

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>>25746056
Hardly from what I've seen. My point is that instead of shittalking anyone who doesn't give the guy praise, point out what he's doing right and wrong. You're just as bad for him as those who hate him.
>>25746063
I guess I do agree with that. Thing is he'd need to post his real art and not a little doodle for me to point out real flaws. This isn't even finished by the looks of it, although he's one of the artists that has eye brows over the bangs. That's already an art flaw.

You jump into random conversations to throw out your opinion, helpful or not. That's how old fife was.
>Dazzles
>Smokers
Funny how the idiot who would give into peer pressure the easiest is who takes the most care of herself.

>>25746132
Do me a favor anonymous, you talk quite negatively about the drawfags here and it's your right to do so, but is there anything about them you like?

Can you praise them at all or would that be impossible for you since they have all these flaws that you constantly point out?

Just curious is all.

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>>25746174
I like Fig, and although I'm not a fan of when Wee uses the more tiny style, her artwork isn't bad. Even WubCake can draw, although I don't like the style.

When have I got on all of the artists? Are you the one who always calls samefag when someone doesn't share your opinion?

>>25746233
Nah, I don't call samefag. There isn't a surefire way to verify it that I'm aware of. Just was wondering if you're able to give positive feedback as well instead of just calling everyone shit.

Thanks anonymous.

>>25746174
It thinks our contributors will stop contributing if it shits on them every other thread. Don't know why other thread bothers it so but that's the case.

>>25746063
Aria = cigarettes? Sal you flirty bastard.

>>25746260
our*
not other

>>25746255
I am capable of it. So you're welcome.
>>25746260
>It
Nice job assuming I'm trying to chase everyone off because I said one artist wasn't good.

>>25746233
And its samefag because no one shares your opinion.

>>25746300
Alright man. I'm the only one here who thinks he isn't this great artist. Glad we confirmed it.

>>25746283
I've another question if you would be so kind. Is there anything that you like about WK's drawings.

Also do you find it strange that I'm "talking" to you in a polite manner? Hardly seems fitting given the environment, but more caught with honey and all that.

>>25746332
Well, he's pretty generic right now, but in >>25737396
her side hair is pretty nice.

I actually have to go now. Enjoy your day, Fife.

>>25746385
Not Fife Anonymous, just another Anonymous like you. Enjoy the rest of your evening.

If you have noticed yet, it's that grim reaper autist doing all the shitposting as of late.

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>>25729874
>no new content
>all of this green

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>>25746565
How do you figure?

>>25746132
>You jump into random conversations to throw out your opinion, helpful or not.

Some times I do it because something engaged my interest and there's no harm in participating for fun or to keep the thread active. Other times I'm subconsciously pushed by my need as a social animal to be included and noticed. This need often leads me to resent people who are networking without me even when I make no effort to network with them due to agoraphobia.

>>25746261

Just imagine her sitting by the window during recess with one leg and an asscheek on it and blowing smoke rings through her purple, kissable lips. She's looking your way as she does that. She gives you a bothered glance. Is she bothered because you're staring at her? Or because you haven't picked up on her subtle invitation?
I'm not into smoking though.

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>>25746725
I like smoking when it comes to photography and art but I cant stand it when its in my presents

>>25746385
He's not me, breh. But thanks for assuming.

>>25746806
Usually Santa gives out coal, but you must have really pissed him off if he's giving you burning coal.

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>>25746873

>>25746725
You say you don't like it, but you sound like you're trying to hit on MistakeAnon.

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>>25746806
>>25746873

Pic related.

>>25747121

I'm with >>25746806 on the subject. It has it's visual appeal and a measure of eroticism that tickled my fancy for a moment.

>>25746806
>>25747725
As a smoker (and someone whose ability to smell was long since destroyed by napalm) can I ask: what's the most disgusting thing about it in real life? The smell?

>>25747825
Yes its just awful. I dont know how people can take it. I assume when you smoke it just doesn't bother you at some point but for a non-smoker its not something I want to be around.

>>25747825
For me it's because it's uncomfortable to breath around it.

>>25747825
>>25747883
>>25747909
Once you get used to it it isn't even that bad anymore. Even better if your gramps smoked apipe, not one of these little tar-laden lung-damaging shits.

>>25747920
Its fine when Im walking around and someone smoking passes by but when Im in tight area the smoke just fucks me right up

>>25747121
Sal doesn't need to hit on me. He's played Rogue Trip. He's got all my homo.

>>25746591
I think they meant no new official content.

>>25747825
The smell and how it sticks to anything it touches. I lived with my grandfather most of my life and he smoked like multiple packs a day and it wasn't 'till I went to someone elses house that I could smell how bad I was.

>>25747920
I'm used to it and I can say I think it smells bad, but I do sometimes enjoy it for nostalgic reasons. It really is a nasty habit though and I can't stand to see a smoker just cough up a storm, they also tend to spit a lot which is gross.
As weird as it sounds air and breathing are really important to me and polluting your lungs willingly just seems totally insane to me.

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>>25748181
I want to marry Adagio

>>25748247
This
Also, it's the tar

>>25748181
i need all of this in my life

>>25741369
I'm in the production kitchen for all events on property so I do a wide variety of pastries rather than having a set menu at some restaurant. My Brioche is the best truth be told.

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>>25746565
>Someone doesn't praise a contentprovider
>Must be the same doomsayer
>>25746591
>Eliza
I like you.

>>25748266
Not if I marry her first!

>>25746725
I was just pointing out the similarities. Nothing wrong with adding your two cents here.

Interesting. I now wonder if that's how other people are when it comes to visiting this site.
>>25746872
I just assumed since you were the one yelling at me. I didn't realize a new guy was being civil. My mistake.
>>25747121
MistakeAnon? Is this some guy I missed?

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>>25746806
Smoking is always shit. Can you explain this fetish to me?
>>25748075
>No blue shirts
How will I know who the based doctor is?
>>25748181

>>25746806
I can't stand it when I get it for Christmas too, man

>Walking along the park on a snowy day
>suddenly you hear something strange
>you try and ignore it but somehow gets louder
>you then realize you walked towards some sort of Christmas carol session
>you wonder if this is a practice session because they sound horrible
>like really horrible
>if you could compare it's like hearing a group choking seagulls
>you notice their hair
>good lord that orange poof is huge
>she seems to be trying her hardest to get the notes correct
>good luck with that..
>the one with the twintails was more focused on keeping herself warm
>not surprising since her clothes don't look weather appropriate
>in fact the group aren't wearing anything that's weather appropriate
>you wonder why they aren't wearing jackets when the girl in twin tails starts yelling at you
Aria-AB
AB: HEY JERKOFF. We are trying to practice! If you're gonna stare, do it while we actually perform!
"Sorry, I'm just wondering why you aren't wearing any jackets."
>AB: None of your business jackoff!
>rude.

>>25749571
"I'll be going now."
Adagio Dazzle-AD
>AD: Hold it right there.
>she says it like she's authority
>AD: Have you listened to us?
"What?"
Sonata Dusk-SD
SD: We wanna know if we sound good, is that alright?
>The ponytail girl looks like she's a lot more nicer so you answer to her
"You guys..."
>in the most polite way possible
"Suck."

>>25749571
Work on your context/formatting guy. You don't want to start a part with AB: to define who is speaking.

You want to have them do their piece and let it flow like a normal dialogue. LIke

"HEY JERKOFF! We're trying to practice here!" the purple one called out to you.
>You looked around, a little confused before your eyes met hers again.
"If you're gonna stare, do it when we perform. Now piss off." she finished, a growling tone in her voice.

That just flows better IMO

I only come here for the dazzle pictures.

>>25749628
Huh, that actually sounds better (and more in character)

Thanks, this is something That just popped in my head and I'm writing it around midnight where I should be sleeping.. I'll probably fix this up later.
Then again not sure if I'll continue this.

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Please don't hurt her.

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>>25749717
Ah another face of horror and pleading to the pile. I'll put next to the one I've been having nightmares about

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>>25749748
Kinda like this one?

>>25749759
I wish it were faces like those. I just hate this feeling in my gut that says "you could have stopped this, help them". I fucking hate it

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>>25749774
Actually I feel you.

>mfw I'm not the only one.

>>25749783
It's the worst with >>25749748 her. Seriously why do I feel the most pain for her!?

>>25749748
...Dear lord I know where that's from.
I really hated that.

>>25749806
Exactly this, it's the reason I haven't fapped since last December. It's just recently I've been having bad nightmares of her

>>25749803
Maybe its because of her innocence. Although I feel that even that is to vague of an explanation.

>>25749806
DESU the eyes are from the same image.

I would know because I made the edit.

>>25749649
If you need any help/advice just ask mane. I'm more than happy to help with formatting and context.

>>25749830
I don't even want to do anything sexual to her, just keep her safe and sound.

>>25749803
>>25749830
Or maybe because she's getting horribly raped in all holes.

You guys are fucking pussies and I feel the same way about it.

>>25749843
Fine enough and I sincerely apologize for any disturbances.

Also disregard the DESU on my post, I have no clue where the hell that came from.

>>25749853
Its okay... only because you're not the culprit.

>>25749774
Just out of curiosity... is it possible if you can give any details of these recurring nightmares?

>>25749853
The whole reason of why is also a factor.
>Dark elf captains find a dark elf child with excessive corruption magic
> crown her queen and use her to power a 200 year long conflict
> only given her knight and let her "advisors" make all the decisions
> mercenaries storm the fortresses
>"Advisors" tell her to jeep a shield around the fortresses
> know full well it won't last and high tale it out of there
> leave her and her knight alone to their fate.

She was nothing more than a battery

>>25749894
>mercenaries storm the fortresses
They better be with an empire.

Anyway, why would you be watching porno for the story? Is it that good? You'll never rescue her and make those scumbags suffer.

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Sonata getting pounded and abused in front of you in all her holes...

...how would this affect you - seeing all the innocence deprived from pic related?

>>25749919
I honestly laugh. She's a shit tier Dazzle and deserves all of it. No Aria would make me cry.

>>25749409
I find civil discussions are much more enjoyable old chap, although I have been known for going off my rocker. Besides there are plenty of spergs around to do my dirty work for me eh?

>>25746872
My Garand came in the other day mate. I could have cute the finest diamonds in the land while I held it.

Did a little tiptoe over the /k/ and asked around. A couple of Anonymous suggested to use this gas plug. Also went about doing some research and found a blacksmith to asses the inner workings of the rifle and give it a cleaning. I've neither the knowledge or the tools to do so myself and would like to fire the weapon as soon as possible.

http://www.garandgear.com/ported-gas-plug.html

>>25749889
It's usually me try to fight this fucker. I don't have any special armor or sword. Just some leather armor and a bronze sword. I get struck down by him multiple times while she's being held from both arms by two orcs. I fail every time to beat him and end up on the ground. He makes some boasty comment about winning and goes to claim his prize. She looks at me begging for help.

>>25749928
There will be large, unhygienic, obese and sweaty men smothering her in their fat while fucking her like apes. I hope you can picture your precious Aria the same way now.

>>25749962
damn.... I never experienced anything of this personally but I definitely wouldn't want anybody else to experience it either.

>>25749649
I brought it up in another thread, but that writing format makes it look more like a script one would memorize for a stage play, than a story one would read from a book.

I'm by no means telling you that you should stop or that you're no good, just offering some constructive criticism lad.

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>>25749759
Something like this?

>>25749976
I can deal with being struck down, the boasting, and it being a VERY unfair fight. But those eyes always fucking break me.

>>25749996
That again, are we still down for Dazzling Things?

>>25749961
>Besides there are plenty of spergs around to do my dirty work for me eh?
Sadly there are.
>>25749963
Not him, but that's actually kinky for some people man.

>>25749998
And I am to imagine that it is worse if it were Sonata in a similar, if not, the same scenario?

Only asking because I was wondering if that was what was keeping you up at night.

>>25750007
That I do know and while its not my cup of tea I won't go into an outrage just because someone else finds pleasure in it. Its fine for them.

>>25750025
Agreed. Although I'd like to know just how fat they have to be to have her be smothered by it.

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Are you lot really telling me that you're suffering ptsd from a hentai rape scene? I've no reaction for this.

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>>25750014
I just can't bear the thought of anyone being in that situation.
> This man invading your dreams every night just to strike you down, boast, and then have his way with someone.
I wouldn't wish this on anyone

>>25750040
Eh, look up Ken Davitian. That or Don Vito. Or put them both together...

>>25750052
>PTSD
Nope, I just find it to be sad considering. I still fapped to it a few times.

>>25750052
I personally don't have any real feeling for said scene either.

Because I've jerked off to it plenty of times before.

>>25750068
I once had a strong fear of this back when I was about 16-17. Thankfully its gone since that was the only thing that would make me cry easily.

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>>25749962
Try bringing in someone to level the playing field

>>25750069
I'll just leave it a mystery, thanks.
>>25750068
>>25750093
>Being such pussies
You should be striking him down and raping girls.

>>25749961
Told you it's a thing. Oh shit I was at my shop today and this old bastard came in and straight up gave me a pair of M1 bayonets when I mentioned I had a couple garands. It's fantastic stuff.

Regardless, let's see this baby.

>>25750078
>>25750085
That being said, which ones your favorite scenes? The whole spit roast is pretty hot, but I enjoy the princess/queen scene more. She's so confident that her spell would keep her from being violated and then proceeds to get fucked, literally and figuratively mind you.

>>25750143
I only ever scene the spit roast one. I was on a porn site when I saw it.

>>25750143
I don't remember much. Was this the one with the knights getting raped by the goblin things? Or was that different?

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What the fuck is this?

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Some of us are loved.

>>25750127
you little shit

>>25750203
gorgeous pic ;)

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Aria is cool

>>25750203
Not you though.
>>25750194
We're having a discussion. You're welcome to join in.

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>>25750194
What the fuck is this?

>>25750218
that left eye is unnecessarily small

>>25749962
Green when

>>25750231
Her left elbow and wrist also look unnatural.

>>25750219
All DazzleFags should be loved.

>>25750248
I was talking about Abusednata.

>>25750240
This

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>>25750272
Oh ok cool

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>>25750127
Not a photographer, but here are a couple.

>>25749962
It seems that you're a kek, anon.

>>25750293
The other three are over the image limit. Let me upload on imgur and I'll drop a link.

>>25750152
Ah, you should check out the scene after that one. I'm sure you could find it easily enough.
>>25750175
Well the first one was a knight and the second one was her queen or princess.

Then again there was another hentai I've fapped to that I thoroughly enjoyed that was essentially the same thing except it was just humans instead of elves. I'd give you a name for them both, but that is saved on my PC and it's packed away at the moment.

>>25750314
http://imgur.com/a/WV42G

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Tell me that I am a fucking piece of shit

>>25750361
If you're talking about this one this the orc gangbang would be my favorite. It's also the only one I can remember, besides some prison thing. That had some old shit though.

>>25750110
>Ainz comes in to wreck volt and his men
I'd watch it

>>25750460
Weren't all the scenes the same?

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>Kulivrian, Makionezinax Ivinezinebrentina Singijirariu Goraganaryo Nambezena Kenterenatu.

wut do?

>>25750484
No one had some old guy molesting a girl, another had some normal guys raping, the one I liked had big dicked monsters raping and leaving a creamy brown elf. Similar though.
>>25750496
Kill those ugly things.

>>25750507
Kinda sounds like they just copy and pasted the scenes

>>25750388
She's pretty. I'll give her that. Which grade did you get?

>>25750522
Watch it yourself then. It's a rapeflick, so it's all going to be rape. Different things raping in different ways is what makes it though.

>>25750507
>>25750522
Quick search and I found the one with the spit roast and queen/princess scene after. Never knew they made four episodes. Going to have to go look for the third one later. Link to episode one and the episode 2 and 4 are below. Not sure if they have episode 3 on that site or not.

http://streamhentaimovies.com/kuroinu-kedakaki-seijo-wa-hakudaku-ni-somaru-episode-1/

>>25750542
Yeah I understand but they seriously Don't add anything else to spice it up?

>>25750550
See >>25750545
I haven't seen it in years. I just remember snippets of the shit.

We need a Dazzling rapeflick now.

>>25750570
Agreed. Even better it it includes Dazzling suicide.

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>>25750545
Wow, I never thought I could be disappointed by porn this badly

>>25750578
I prefer Anon being a serious madman and having nightmares of being killed. Kinda like that 1980's horror movie, Maniac.

>>25750600
So make a green of this?>>25749962

>>25750600
>Anon
Thanks for saving my time. I am interested in this movie though.

>>25750612
Sure

>>25750613
Its pretty nice I'd say. The ending is a pretty big mindfuck but I won't spoil it if you don'y want me to.

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>>25750397

>>25750540
Service Grade M1 Garand M1 Garand, Luck of the draw for Springfield or Harrington & Richardson manufacturer (I got Springfield). Rifle shipped in CMP hard rifle case. $730 total and Free Shipping.

Sorry for the delay, power faded out for a split second, but long enough to reset the router and modem.

>>25750651
Yer good. Last one I got was a second Special grade, but got an H&R.

SA is still fantastic though.

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So, rape porn, nightmares, guns. Is there anything we won't have good discussions about?

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>>25750688
I seriously don't know, I just got here and I'm trying to decipher this

>>25750564
>>25750598
Found the other one Inda No Himekishi Janne. Link in the spoiler. The best part of this one is that the ogre sneaks into the princess's room through the toilet solid snake style.

http://hentaidream.me/inda-no-himekishi-janne-episode-1-english-subbed/

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>>25750700
Your dubs confirms.
>>25750704
Dazzlings in Smash. What would they be like? I personally see them like Zelda/Pokemon Trainer.

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>>25750545
That's just a Donut steel version of guts

>>25750496
>Kulivrian, Makionezinax Ivinezinebrentina Singijirariu Goraganaryo Nambezena Kenterenatu

The fuck does that mean?

>>25750875
Suddenly, the sea demons from the depths appear before you.

>>25749962
Perhaps you feel there's some aspect of your life that's beyond your control. Maybe you feel like you're being taken advantage of?

>>25750741
>dazzlings in smash
Would it work like Pokemon Trainer in Brawl?

>>25751006
That, or split them up into three different characters. It could also work like DH Dog and have Aria/Sonata come out during certain attacks/final smash.

>>25749962
You need to wreck his shit in. You have a weopen and one thing he doesn't have, determination. Once he comes at you, you need to go at him with more force. Use all if you hate and anger in your attacks!

>>25749919
my heart would break
then I'd hurt the rapist as well as I could and try to stop her from being hurt and abused more

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>She smiles and nods, but notices you weren't guiding her through it this time
"Aren't you going to help me?"
>"No. I have confidence that you can hit a bull's eye without any help at all."
>Adagio once again takes up the arrow and pulls it back
>With one deep breath she lets it fly
>To her disappointment, she completely misses
>You see tears begin to form in her eyes
>She was such a perfectionist that girl
"I-I'm... I'm sorry."
>She can barely get the words out
>"What's there to apologize for?"
"I... I..."
>She gulps
"I missed."
>"So what?"
>She looks at you, wondering if you're serious or not
>"You tried your best. You just need some practice. You don't think I made my first shot do you?"
>She hugs your and cries into your belly
>Maybe you overdid it
>You try to comfort her just to see AJ with Sonata and Aria walk up
"Tryin' some archery ah take it?"
>"Yep. Adagio is a crack shot. Just like her old man."
>Adagio wouldn't stop hugging your side, tears still leaking down her cheeks
>"So did you girls enjoy the horses?"
>Sonata perks up
"Aye!"
>You smile and brush the tears out of Adagio's eyes
>"You did great ok Pumkin? I'm not mad. I'm actually very proud."
>Dagi smiles
"Aye sir."
>The rest of the day was spent goofing off and helping AJ set up the rest of her Halloween spectacle
>It was hard work, but that night made it all worth while
>The girls were now all dressed up
>Sonata in her Dino outfit, Adagio dressed as an angel, and Aria in her vampire zombie astronaut
>You noticed just how beautiful Adagio was. Not in the creepy incest sort of way, but the fact that your daughter was finally growing up
>She had become quite a beautiful young woman since you first met her
"Um dad? Why are you smiling like that?"
>You snap out of it and see Adagio giving you a 'wtf' stare
>"Oh nothing sweetie."
>Aria looks around through her mask
"So now what?"
>"Well what would you three like to do? We can go through the corn maze, we could go into the haunted house, the hay ride?"

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>>25752020
>Aria sees this as the perfect opportunity to pick on Sonna
"Well we wouldn't want to go into the haunted house. It might scare a certain little baby."
>Sonata gets huffy
"Hey! I'm not a baby!"
"Are too."
"Are not."
"Are too."
>"Girls! Enough. How about we go to the corn maze first. That should be fun eh?"
"Aye sir."
"Fine, if that's what you want."
>Sonata was still huffy and crosses her arms
"Aye.."
>"Alright, then it is settled. Let's get a move on."
>You walk them too the corn maze. The fact that it was totally dark outside made the mood even better.
>All that lit your path was the dim light of the full moon
>"Alright girls. You ready?"
>Dagi jumps in the air
"Aye sir!"
"Aye!"
"Yeah, sure, whatever."
>"Oh Aria. Quit being such a stick in the mud."
>She sticks her tongue at you
>You all begin to walk through the opening
>The fog machines covered the entire ground in a thick mist
>It made it all the more creepy that everything seemed to go silent after the first few steps
>You begin to walk around coming up to dead end after dead end
>Aria was getting visibly nervous
>"Everything alright Aria?"
"O-of course. I'm not scared. Not one bit."
>She could barely talk with her teeth chattering
>You walk further through the mazes twists and turns when a man in a wolf costume jumped out directly in front of Aria making her jump so high, she nearly broke through the atmosphere
>She ran and hugged you so tight you could barely breathe, her legs shaking like a tree in a breeze
>Sonata, however, remained unfazed
>In fact, she thought of the whole thing as a joke, laughing hysterically
"Again! Again!"
>Once Aria realized what had just happened, her face turned as red as a watermelon
>Adagio just couldn't take the irony of the situation and started to laugh
"Oh Aria! You should have seen your face!"
"S-shut up Adagio! I-I wasn't scared! I-I-I just wanted to make S-Sonata feel better that's all!"
>The man pulls back his mask to reveal the face of Big Mac

>>25752020
>>25752072
WHERE WERE YOU

>>25752020
>>25752072
Oh BG9, you scamp. It's almost Christmas. What are you doing?

>Not in the creepy incest sort of way
BG pls

>The man pulls back his mask to reveal the face of Big Mac
AHHH FUCK!

>>25752144
Been places, been doing things.

Long story short, I have been working overtime. Why? So I could have 2 weeks vacation to write for you all and to chill. It's gonna be good.

>>25752196
Scamping as usual! :) I worked some massive overtime to so I could get two weeks off. Now I can just write and chill out.

>>25752243
>Long story short, I have been working overtime. Why? So I could have 2 weeks vacation to write for you all and to chill. It's gonna be good.
Thank you based BG.
Though don't expect much right now, everyone's asleep.

>>25752243
Sounds great BG! We're glad you're back!

>>25749841
Thank you I really appreciate it!

Also this thread is really starting to derail x.x

>>25749984
I accept the critique but right now I'm stopping because sleep and work.

I'll probably continue when I have the chance.

Yo dzg, I heard you have a skype group, whats the name, I wanna join

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>Late lunchtime, and the cafeteria's almost deserted: empty tables and abandoned trays. Stragglers drift and hangers-on chat, but, yeah, it's pretty much empty.
>Good enough, anyway.
>With deep breaths, you walk over to the table Sonata's commandeered. Empty plates -- cleaned of leftovers -- surround her.
>And she's alone. No purple grump or orange frizz to smirk and make sly comments.
>Perfect.
>Sonata looks up as you sling yourself into the seat next to her, and smiles. Crumbs and bits of lettuce are stuck under her blue cheeks, and as if her face were a mirror, you find yourself smiling back.
>"Hey Anon! I haven't seen you around in forever!"
"We had class together just before lunch."
>"Huh." She twiddles a fork round, gathering up spaghetti. "Well, I guess it just kinda felt like forever, y'know?"
"That is some chee--"
>"Here!"
>There's fork full of spaghetti in front of your mouth. There's two choices, here: either eat or have it choo-choo trained until you do.
>You chew it down, reflecting, as Sonata babbles happily on.
>She's been doing this for over a week, now, and it's odd. Sonata does not share food with anyone, not even food she's scavenged.
>All the signs point to it, buddy. All you've got to do is stop being a pussy and ask.
>You swallow.
"Sonata?"
>Here it goes
>"Hmm?"
>"Do you... You wanna go out with me?"
>There's a pause that feels like aeons as you stare at the crockery and suddenly wish that you hadn't said anything, or had said it better, or had told her after you'd just done something so incredibly awesomely cool that there was no way she could--
>"Nah."
>The world stops.
>"It's gotten kinda cold, so I don't really want to go outside -- there's totes nothing to do, anyway -- and, like, classes are starting again in five minutes.
>"If you're heading to the shops, could you pick up some pens for me, though? Aria won't give any of mine back."

>>25752585
I'm interested. It could use some work but I like your style.Dialogue and descriptions, while like I said needs some work, feel really nice.

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I want to motorboat Sonata's tits.

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>>25752961
I want to go fishing with Sonata

>>25752585
tsk tsk gotcha

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>>25749571
REWRITE
>You were at the park in a regular winter day
>The snow stopped falling hours ago and it looked really nice out for a walk
>Suddenly you hear some strange noises
>Thinking it's a bunch of kids pretending to be windigos you ignore them and moved on with your peaceful walk
>however the sound started getting louder every step you took
>is someone following you?
>you look behind you
>but no one was there
>you are starting to wonder where the noise is coming from
>you decide to find the sounds
>as you get closer you notice something about them
>are they... Singing?
>you find yourself in the middle of the park
>a very popular area due to its wide space and hill in the middle that's currently covered in snow
>there you found the source of the "singing"
>Three young girls were looking at the books while attempting to sing
>they must be part of a caroling group
>no surprise since the holidays are near
>you notice the orange singer in the middle
>mostly her outrageously poofy orange hair
>she looks like she's trying her hardest
>good luck with that
>they sound like choking seagulls
>the purple one looks like she's trying to stay warm rather than sing
>no surprise considering she isn't wearing anything weather appropriate
>in fact none of them are wearing anything weather appropriate
>they are wearing clothes more suitable for spring
>the blue one with the ponytail however is enjoying herself even if she is off tone.
>as you wonder, the purple singer started yelling at your direction
"HEY JERKOFF! We're trying to practice here!"
>you look around to see if she was talking to someone else and then back to the group
"If you're going to stare, do it when we perform. Now piss off." she said with a growling tone.
"Sorry! I'm just wondering why you aren't wearing jackets. Aren't you three cold?
"None of your business, jerkoff!" The purple one snapped back
>rude.
>you feel no need to be here any longer
"I'll be going now."

>>25753293
give them poor girls jackets

>>25733526
>>Shit excuse for an image
Well I thought it was nice

>>25753293
>but before you moved, the orange poof reached her hand out
"Hold it right there."
>she says it like she's authority
"Have you listened to us?"
"What?"
"Did you hear us sing?"
"Um.."
>would you really call that singing?
"I guess?"
>the blue singer popped out of her position and waved while asking
"How did we do? Pretty good?"
>you stood there trying to think of the most polite way to answer this
"Your singing.."
>they look with anticipation
"It's sucks!"
>you turn to see some kid yelling at them and then running away
>you turn to see the purple girl get really angry
"Get back here you twerp!"
>she grabs some snow and throws it at you
>it hits you right in the face
>the snow was soft but it still kind of hurt
"What the hell was that for?!"
"I was aiming for the kid, jerkoff!"
>a likely story considering the kid stood at least three feet next to you before running off
>in response you grab a huge chunk of snow and throw it back at her
>direct hit on the face
>some of the snow got on the orange one
>both of them got very upset while the blue was giggling behind them
>the orange started to speak
"Aria. Sonata. Grab some snow. I want payback."
>The three of them gather some snow
"Hey how about this?"
>the blue one found a huge piece of snow that had the shape of a boulder
>uh oh
"Perfect! Let's throw it at him!"
>you are about to bolt out of there until you were hit by two snowballs in the face courtesy of the purple one
>you manage to get the snow off your face to see the trio holding the giant piece of snow on top of the hill ready to throw
>but
>the purple one assuming she got impatient threw her side of the snow chunk
>some of the snow dust fell of the chunk on her
>her reaction to sudden snow in her face caused her to slip and fall
>her slipped foot trips the orange one
>orange poof foot trips the blue one
>they all fall right into the snow
>snow dust from the chunk fell on them like a blanket
>you just stood there watching this all go down, literally