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Slave Pony Auction

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>So what is this thread about?
Pretty much this thread is a collection of stories about anon owning a pony as a slave. He can do whatever he wishes, be it nice and not abusing or the complete opposite.

It is recommended that each story has to start off with anon purchasing said pony.
Also, if you're going to be writing some green, please name yourself. It will be easier to keep track of your story.

This thread will be every Thursday unless content slows down and will go to every other Thursday. (yes its Friday today but that's because the last one died today)

Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/u/SlavePonyAuction

Current authors:
My own Pinkie Pie! by GearsGearsEverywhere
http://pastebin.com/UMhEaZ6n

Helping Her (Scootaloo) by HeliAnon
http://pastebin.com/j5aR9qWb

Buying a Bookhorse (Twilight) by Lurkernon
http://pastebin.com/zvvD2hcE

Regards, anon (Vinyl) by IHLAOY
http://pastebin.com/AySUp8Ma

The Slave Auction -- In Progress (Applejack) by Jessi Jinx
http://pastebin.com/gFYqU1d5

Recovery WIP (OC) by Klaifferon
http://pastebin.com/DNvbjnQG

No title (Cloudchaser) by Unknown
http://pastebin.com/UQqcaF2Q

California Express (Twilight) by Unknown
http://pastebin.com/FuFTWFVt

Previous thread: >>25385994
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>>25424532
wow. you must not like my story at all.
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>>25424688
What story is it? I may of missed it or forgot to add it.
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>>25424532
That picture is making me so sad.
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>>25424532
>Buying a bookhorse
Is that the updated pastebin from the stuff last thread?
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>>25424810
I'm pretty positive it is.
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>>25424532
Do any of these have mind control/brainwashing of slaves?
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The go-to recipe for White Knight General ("You know it, I know it and everybody in this god damn room knows it, so who we BS'n?!") seems to be as follows:

>show how Anon obtained pone
>pone doesn't trust him
>awkward car ride
>instill heart ache in the reader by injecting varying exposition on the pony's abused past
>also through their distant/aggressive/submissive behavior at home
>exacerbate the drama with persisting distrust from the pony in question
>insert drama in which Anon earns some trust
>then the story finally seems to begin deviating from the others in ways other than writing style

So I was thinking that if IRL drama will get off my fucking sack for an hour, maybe I could continue my Derpy bit that I abandoned who knows how many days ago.

Question is, is a mild slice-of-life tone going to clash with what we've all come to expect? Would that practically be off-topic at this point in the ride?
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>>25424688
Not OP, but here you go (shotgun approach)

? (Rarity) by ?
No pastebin
last post: >>25406929

? (Sweetie Belle) by ?
No pastebin
last post: >>25334139

? (Applejack & Rainbow Dash) by ?
No pastebin
last post: >>25316512

? (Maud) by ?
No pastebin
last post: >>25356627


Also PLS writefriends, namefag your story. Or at least write its title into the name field.
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>>25424832
These all have the opposite. This thread is white knight general.
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>>25424844
Keep in mind that anon doesn't have to be a White Knight, it just seems that's what most people decided to write.
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>>25424855
I legitimately wonder why such nice characters would be in the business of buying slaves in the first place.
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>>25424532
>We aren't making this a general.
This should seriously be merged into SiM. It's already a theme that has been used in that thread, and having two OPs so similar is useless, and hurts the board.
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>>25424878
Same reason why mankind just decided to revert to large scale slavery for these. The story can't exist if they don't.
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>>25424884
Nope. SIM is the exact opposite of these stories. Also SIM is basically >rape in a different form
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>>25424884
This is probably going to last a few more threads at best, same thing that happened to the homeless ones, they are over at some point.
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>>25424897
Just because the current stories fit that description doesn't mean it's the only thing they welcome. The OP clearly states this type of story is OK. They've even had fully consensual stories before, so I don't see the issue. This thread is SIM in a new dress, and probably has a lot of shared viewers.
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>>25424878
Well, if you think of it as rescuing them then it makes sense.
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>>25424910
>The OP clearly states
OP is a trigger happy fag

Then lets just move the non rape and non Mr Nameless NMM universe ones to here. I only know one which satisfies these two criteria (I didn't read all the SIM stories):
Broken Bluebird (Rainbow Dash) by !sKAfVnup4Y
http://pastebin.com/G97Nn1XW
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>>25424733
the rarity one. several people mentioned it to you. and I even posted a pastebin.
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>>25424890
They should at least try some background building.
I want to know how things got that way.
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>>25424884
Honestly I feel like submission is mandatory leaves a deconstructive taste on the prompt.

Names and ideas have power. they dictate peoples general behavior even in the smallest of details. if we moved this over to SIM, invariably, it would become more like it, and less like it is. It's like 4chan itself and your real life. many of you will act differently in one or the other.

If the expectation here moves beyond the specialized kind of prompt it started from, I could see a merger of some kind working. but as long as a supermajority of the stories focus on the prompt I can see a need for the thread to keep it's current focus and energy.

>>25424890
basically this. the story has a basic prompt. you can try to explain it but unless its actually relevant to the plot there isn't any reason you actually should.
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>>25425012
Is it this? http://pastebin.com/BG2s2fnX
If so I'll update the pastebin list.
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>>25425063
thats correct.
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>>25425038
What >>25425041 said really.

Last thread I posted some idea where Equestria had become a big free for all because half of the invading forces had more important stuff to deal with on earth, leaving horseland to do whatever.

Whatever turned out to be slavery and air piracy.

But I suck at writing credible dialogue so neither that nor my other silly shit will get a green.

Either way, you could always just set it in older times to explain the slavery thing away. Or in a space opera for that matter.
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>>25425092
Alright, pastebin list updated.
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>>25424849
looks like half of the sweetie belle story got ate.
I miss archive moe.
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>>25425138
google desustorage
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>>25424532
I like how the you're not even bothering to pretend this isn't a general anymore. Honesty is the best policy after all
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WE GENERAL NOW
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Merge this shit with submission is mandatory already you fucking faggots, we don't need another fucking general.
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>>25425262
No.
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>>25425262
I love this kind of complaining, mostly because I know 90% of the people who shit post like this would never give up their own general.
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>>25425262
Your free keyword for today is sage!
This keyword can be used any time! Feel free to try it out!
If you are not satisfied with the results, you can always resort to the hide feature that you won last time! Using the hide feature does not have any side-effects.
If you still have any complaints, go fuck yourself.

Have a nice day!
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>>25425262
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Writefags, please take names already.
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>>25424492
We race war now?
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>>25424532
Anyone think applejack write friend would mind if I wrote in off this story?
Basically my idea came off this back way auction
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Are pet pones allowed?
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>>25425368
cmon. we know pony terrorism would happen if this was going to be taken seriously.
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>>25425373
The prompt didn't necessarily say it couldn't be.
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>>25425373
Sure, I'll allow it.
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>>25425099
Spoils of war, gotta love it.
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Not sure if anyone cares but it Cloudchaser anon here. My computer's on the fritz so I'm relegated to mobile and might not be able to do any updates.
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>>25425778
No one cares. You are off by one.

pls continue
btw you can connect an external bluetooth keyboard to nearly any phone
most android phones supports external usb devices too, you just need an otg cable
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>>25425341

How many honest troupes do you think we could muster?
i'm going to pull some numbers out of my ass, but let me hear what you think.

I would guess there are maybe 100-200 thousand fans of the show that one would even think could be a solder. With 20-40 thousand wiling to give their lives for the ponies. maybe 30-50 thousand if you included equal rights activists. Divide that by the % of people that could actually get here to fight.
Even those not willing to fight may feel sympathy for our cause. But who would train us? Who would supply us?


WE MUST protect them. but who would protect them from us?
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>>25426004
>But who would train us?
We dont need any training. We just roll over the enemy, and cut them to pieces with our edges.
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>>25425640
It would've been more about Anon getting his band together from freed slaves. You know like sometimes happened with pirates back in the days.
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>>25426004
>who would train us?
Let's take a census on how many people here are also /k/ommandos.
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>>25426047
but i guess an even bigger question would be who would lead us? would /k/ommandos fallow? Has gorilla warfare ever won a war that wasn't fought on their home land?
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50th post, no green
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>>25425373
The fact that Twilight just looks so fucking destroyed there... gives explosive diabetes to my preexisting cancer.
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>>25426210
>50th post, no green

Well that just ain't gonna cut it.
Strap yourselves in everyone, we gotta prove why we're here.

>”I’m going stargazing.”
“Do you want me to come?”
>”You can come if you want. It’s not like I have a choice.”
>You get out of bed.
>Throw on a coat, some cheap shoes.
>Head out the door.
>Vinyl was already waiting for you.
>She looks awful.
>Not even her hair is spiky anymore; it just droops down over her face.
>You take a seat and sit next to her in silence.
>Eventually, she speaks.
>”Do you remember Nightmare Moon?”
“What about her?”
>”I was just thinking, the stars helped her escape. You think they could do the same for us? Open a portal to Equestria and take me home? Equestrian stars are a bit magical like that. I figure you just need to wish hard enough until they hear you shouting.”
“You might wake the neighbours if you actually shout though.”
>”Heh, maybe. Your Earth stars though, they don’t have any magic in them anymore. They’ve stopped working. They’ve stopped taking my pain away and now it’s just building. It’s building and I don’t know how to stop it or what I’ll do when it bubbles over. My charade is slipping and I don’t think there’s any point in coming out here anymore.”
“If you need to let it out, Vinyl, I’m here to help. You’ll get through this.”
>Vinyl looks upwards.
>”Why do you believe in me so much? I don’t even believe in myself as much as you. How can you have such faith in how I’ll act? I won’t get through this. I’m not this strong, chill pony you think I am. I’m broken. I’m a broken wreck held together by memories and pretending that everything’s okay when it’s clearly not. When I know it’s not getting better. And I hate myself for being broken. For not being the pony I pretend to be.”
“Vinyl, have you ever wondered why I bought you at the Auction?”
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>>25426747

“Why, out of all the ponies there, I chose you?”
>Vinyl turns her head to face you.
“They tried to talk me out of it, you know. Said there were many better ponies for me, but I chose you. They said you were a lost cause. There was no way to tame you, no way to make you work, no way to train you. You were the most difficult pony they’d ever encountered.”
>She tries to crack a smile.
“They were going to put you down, they were so convinced you’d never change.”
>She loses her smile.
“But you had this look on you that instantly caught my attention. Like you just didn’t care how bad things were. You were slinging insults at anyone who walked past. You were smiling as they brought you up to the podium. You laughed as they set the starting price as low as fifty dollars.”
>”But that’s not me…”
“I’m not done. I kept watching you, Vinyl. Because after every joke, after every insult, there was this brief moment where you let it drop. Where you became a scared little pony again before deciding to let it go and trying again. And I realised, that was the pony I wanted to buy. I wanted to see if I could make that pony hiding inside you come out. The real Vinyl, not this carefree persona you carry.”
“You don’t need to keep hiding, Vinyl. I’m not going to hurt you. Not intentionally.”
>Vinyl doesn’t say anything.
>”I think it’s too late for me. I’ll go crazy if I have to face all the fucked up shit that’s happened to me. You either go with the flow or you go crazy. That’s the only attitude.”
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>>25426755

>”Where do we go from here?”
“What do you mean?”
>”Where do we go from here? What’s the next big thing you can do for me?”
“Well, we still have your music. I suppose we could ask around the Auction, it’s just a couple of blocks away, find out where Equestria actually is. Go there, find some real evidence. Or we could save up, buy you an instrument, have you make some new music, that sounds cool. Do you have any other pony friends we could look for?”
>”No. It was just me and…
“Okay, I understand. Then we’ll just need to make you some new friends. Other than that, though, I don’t know. We’ll take it as it comes. All I know is, we’re going to make this place feel like a home for you, okay?”
>”Right, just a home where I can never leave on pain of death or hold any real power whatsoever.”
“It’s your home as much as mine, inside, you have as much authority as me.”
>”That’s nice and all, but you’re a human. I’m not. I wasn’t born to have authority.”
“Doesn’t matter. Everything is going to be okay. Everything is going to work out. Who cares what your race is?”
>”If I was human, people would care.”
“If you were human, I wouldn’t care any less.”
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>>25426770

“I’m sorry, if it helps.”
>”Sorry for what?”
“For what happened to Octavia. And the whole enslavement thing. And the Auction. Everything that’s happened to you since you got here, really.”
>”Oh, don’t be that guy. You didn’t kill… It’s not like I blame you for anything. You’re fine, it’s those other assholes who are the problem. Imagine how much better things could be if they were…well, let’s not go there.”
>Vinyl scratches her head, “I mean, sure, I used to think all of you were terrible, but it’s not like I was right. You proved me wrong. If there were more people like you and less people like them than maybe things would be better. Humanity’s only mostly unforgivable and I won’t let the tiny spark of it that’s alright feel bad for things it didn’t do.”
“But I mean, we could have been better. Things should have gone differently.”
>”Should have, yea. But they didn’t. And here we are. And maybe it’s still not as bad as it could be.”
“But the others…”
>”Are you the others?”
“Of course not.”
>”So stop blaming yourself for what they do. You’ve already shown that you humans can do good. You gave me a home again. You gave me my magic. We’re going to get my soul back. For the first time in years I actually had a genuine smile. You were just too slow to fix everything. Tavi included. And that’s not your fault either.”
>”Stop saying everything is going to be okay though, because you said you wouldn’t lie to me. We both know things aren’t going to get better from here. After all, things don’t get better unless…”
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>>25426780

>Vinyl stands up suddenly.
>She looks down the street silently, before turning to you.
>”I’m going for a walk.”
“Where are we going?”
>”You’re staying here. I’m going for a walk alone.”
“I don’t think you’re allowed to.”
>”Are you going to stop me?”
“Well, no.”
>”Then I can.”
“I think there’s like, a law or something.”
>”So? I get caught they’ll just send me back to you. And I know you’re not going to do anything to me, so what’s the problem?”
“Where are you going?”
>”Just around, dude. I need to get away from this house for a moment. Get a breath of fresh air.”
“Then why can’t I come?”
>”Just trust me. I’ll be back before you know it. It’s not like I’m leaving forever. Just a quick jog to stretch my legs for once.”
>You consider vetoing her position.
>But she probably wouldn’t accept your veto anyway.
“Just be back before sunrise. I don’t want someone getting the wrong idea about you and thinking you’re trying to escape.”
>Vinyl steps out onto the street.
>”No problem, Anon. I’ll only take a minute.”
>She took thirty of them, but she did come back.
>Dried tears covered her face, but she looked…better.
>Just a little.
>Like she knew what she wanted now.
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>>25426747
Glad ur back pal

Got a question for thread though. How would any of you feel about a... Schindlers list esque story? No ovens or concentration camps of course, more like an anon who buys ponies to put them to work, which in turn allows them to live comfortably enough. He tries to get them to understand not only their position but his position as well.

There may be sexy times involved.

And possibly some philosophy.

I think it would have at least 2-3 ponies in it, unless it's safer to just go with one. Perspective would be from the Pone's angle.
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>>25426806
yes pls
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>>25422660
>mlp science autist discovered portal
>family thinks he went missing and colects all his science notes and equipment in a box
>mlp anon enjoys equestria for years
>until his parents went to a scientist to see what their reclusive son was working on
>scientists takes his invention and recreates it
>capitalism happens
>normies don't care about mlp so capitalism
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>>25426785
Won't ever have enough of this. Do your thing.
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>>25426785
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>>25426785
>>25427010

also, nice transition from "I just don't give a fuck if you kill me right now" to "maybe you can fix me"
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>>25426785
Oh god please buy her a friend she knew..or go on an epic adventure to find octavia
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>>25427525
Idea they go out on a journey for her music. But theres something odd about that ragged looking brown servant pony
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>be pol anon and Aryane
>be chilling with your wife whom you love
>well would be wife
>technically slave
>you wish the government would give them rights already
>you love Aryane so much that you even tried to protest once
>you showed up at a rally march, but then you were met with terror
>leftist
>kek musslim loving horrible people.
>you went to the head of the rally and slapped the shit out of the neon haired fagget.
>stole his mic.
>called them all nigger cock loving faggets.
>then told them if they wanted to free ponies then you better start acting like respectable shits.

>but right now youre at home watching the French get fucked.
>you decide that donateing money to pro pony freedom societies was more inline with your jewish values.
>she laughs at the french people being mostly Muslim
>then she is angry at them for tearing apart the white race.
>life is good, now only if you could marry it would be perfect.
>ugh
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>>25427647
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>>25427647
>>/pol/
>>if only i could marry my waifu
the irony is stong
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Bemp
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I'm not gifted with the power of WRITE, but I'v got a idea/question....do we have a Zecora
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>>25429382
Would need rhymes for that. The cookie cutter writefag won't touch that with a ten foot pole.
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>>25429382
Zecora is a bitch to write. Rhyming takes more work than it seems.
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>>25429382
Seems a little too easy, doesn't it?

Unless someone is really in the mood to write a 'your name is Toby' scene.
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>>25429411
>>25429418
Zecora could have had her rhyming habit broken by one of her previous owners who found it irritating.
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>>25429695
>Zecora can't rhyme
>struggles every time she speaks due to having to speak normally
I kinda like that idea.
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>>25429719
perhaps she has developed a stutter or some other confidence issues
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>>25429382
>>25429411
>>25429418
>>25429444
>>25429695
>>25429719
>>25429751
This sounds like a fun idea.
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>>25429785
She could be part of a convoy headed for an auction that was raided by a gang based in Compton.
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>>25429847
plz no rap battles
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Continuing California Express:

>”So… She made a dress using you as an… inspiration?”
“Not really, I think I was just there to sell it, something about Sassy’s marketing scheme.”
>”Then when it became a success… she stopped?”
“Yeah.”
>”Twilight. I think your friends retarded.”
>Twilight had her face against the glass, hooves up, admiring the coastal view of the 101.
“You know… Sometimes I think the same thing.”
>”I mean, artistic endeavors be dammed, you have a market success.”
“You weren’t there, it was killing her on the inside.”
>Anon grunted, having said his piece already.
“How close are we?”
>”About 30 minutes now.”
“How are you always so sure?”
>”I’m usually not, I just spit out an answer, this time however, this time I know for a fact.”
“… Because…”
>”Because this is where I grew up. Oh, forgot to mention, we’re staying at my friend’s house tonight.”
“You have friends?”
>”Believe it or not, I do have quite the budding social circle.”
>The highway turned away from the ocean and into a series of fields.
>Really, the highway came to a collapsed bridge and an impromptu road was made at some point.
>The fields were green and well ordered, what was growing seemed to be strawberries.
>In the distance a couple of figures holding rifles and standing at ease.
>Around them was a sea of different ponies all with their heads diligently down in the crops.
“Is this Monsanto?”
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>>25430168
>”Hell no, Monsanto would never let us drive through.”
>One of the figures waved them down and Anon came to a stop besides them.
>”Hey-o! I thought it was you when I saw this pile of junk heading our way.”
>The two men seemed genuinely happy.
>Anon simply relaxed, slowly easing into the home town vibe.
>”Mr. Moores, this is Twilight.”
>The Irish faced man leaned over to look at Twilight who hesitant waved at him.
>”Well it’s about damn time you bought yourself one. Look at that, you got one with wings and a horn.”
>A few of the closer ponies attending the crops looked up at the mention of an alicorn.
>Hushed murmurs of a princess this or royalty that echoed across the fields.
>Immediately the further of the two men turned and fired a shot into the air.
>The fields were silent again.
“Actually, I’m not on any contract. Anon here is.”
>Mr. Morres, looked at Anon.
>”Is this true.”
>Anon white knuckled the steering wheel for a second before responding.
>”Yep! Government contract and everything. Gotta take her to the east coast.”
>Mr. Morres Gave Anon the bug eye for a few seconds before slowly responding.
>”You always were a strange one.”
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>>25429785
Might do this tomorrow if nobody else does.
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>>25430216
>There was an awkward silence, from her view she could see Anon getting more and more tense.
>Mr. Morres rolled his jaw about before responding, simply looking at the rangers door handle.
>”Well… If you every need anything you know where to find me and mine.”
>He patted the door with a certain sadness and hesitancy before turning back to his ‘workers’.
>Anon immediate put the vehicle in gear and took off with a surprising lack of dust.
“You’re friends with these people!”
>”They’re practically family, and now, I’m not getting invited to thanksgiving!”
“Well I hope you enjoy it, just remember someone’s shooting over their heads.”
>”It was one shot! Besides your people made the portals, not mine.”
>The dirt road turned back into paved street, with houses starting to appear on either side.
“So, doesn’t mean that your people should be doing this.”
>”How many times do I have to tell you that I don’t think any of this is right?”
>Anon’s eyes stayed locked on the road, not a single facial feature moving.
>Twilight, not so much.
“Well, you don’t see me having hearthswarming eve dinner with the diamond dogs.”
>They reached the town center, a few people waved at the familiar ranger, Anon waved back out the window.
>He made a few few quick turns around some sandbags and defensive positions.
>”What the fuck do you want me to do, if I did everything by your moral logic I’d be sitting with the humanity front.”
“Eye for an eye makes the whole world blind.”
>”But fair.”
>The ranger came to a stop in front of a single story ranch house.
>Without a word Anon got out of the Ranger grabbed the gas cans out of the back and started marching up to the door.
>Twilight could tell that this conversation was over as far as he was concerned and that she was expected to let herself out.
>Rather than knock he simply kicked the door, his polymer toe caps clanging against it.
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>>25430271
>The door opened a creak as a short mixed race man with a great big jewfro stepped out.
>Both Anon’s and the jewfro smiled greatly and bumped fists.
>”Melly! I didn’t think you would be here.”
>Melly took one of Anon’s gas cans before responding.
>”I wasn’t, but… I was about to take off again for Vegas but I’d thought I’d wait.”
>”Vegas is open?”
>Before he could respond, Melly tapped Anon on the shoulder turning him in place.
>He looked at Twilight who had just finished gathering up her bags and was headed over.
>”Who’s the pony? You didn’t buy her contract did you? You fucking mong.”
>Melly tapped Anon in the kneecap with the edge of the empty gas can.
>Anon yelped and hopped, his natural overreaction.
>”Melly, this is Twilight, the job I was telling you about.”
>Twilight put out her front hoof, Melly knelt down a little, took her hoof and shook firmly.
>”You’r princess Twilight Sparkle right?”
“Uh, yes. You’re the first human to know.”
>Melly stood to his full height, which wasn’t much, before taking Twilights saddle bags without asking and heading inside.
>He spoke over his shoulder as he set the stuff down in the middle of the living room.
>”I work with a lot of non-humans, they talk about you a lot.”
“Hopefully good things.”
>Melly shrugged as a two new figures walked in, one male and one female.
>Anon reacted first.
>”Zed, Gwen, This is Twilight”
>They both nodded and said their pleasantries; Zed took Anon by the shoulder
>”Man, you’re gonna want to see what came for you the other day.”
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>>25430392
>Melly had laid down on the couch and had taken to reading an old copy of popular science.
>The furniture all reeked of cheap and Swedish, but the reinforced brackets and hand staining made it clear that these were poor people with a purpose.
>This left just Gwen and Twilight standing in the dusty, but well loved living room.
>”So… Do you cook?”
“Eh, sorry, I usually let spike do the cooking.”
>”Oh, I guess I’ll just get started on dinner then.”
“I can still help.”
>Gwen moved over to the kitchen on her stilt like legs.
>”It’s fine, just trying ta feel out your vibes.”
>What was it with humans and walking while talking, it’s like they never rested.
>Twilight stood there awkwardly for a few seconds until she heard music coming from the living room.
>It had only been a few days, but she was already beginning to hate the lack of music.
>Seriously, humans don’t sing daily, isn’t that weird?
>She slowly crept her way to the living room and peaked in, covering half her face.
>The suddenness of this land, and the speed at which moods changed here made her feel out of place.
>Maybe everything was the same in Equestria and it was her that was changing.
>Either way, Melly was sitting alone in the living room still, his sidearm on the table and a record on a player.
>He caught Twilight’s curiosity, and waved her in. He returned to his magazine.
>Twilight took up position on a ancient armchair that creaked with every movement, but showed no weakness.
>She took up one of the large books on the coffee table…
“‘shooters bible 2017.”
>After a few minutes, Zed and Anon came into the living room, Anon had a new gun.
>Both Anon and Zed began disassembling the rifle and Anon’s revolver, meticulously cleaning each part.
>At some point Gwen came back in, waiting for something to heat or cool, Twilight wasn’t sure.
>And every time a record finished Melly would put on a new one and everyone sat content until dinner.
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>>25430168
>“You have friends?”
kek
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>>25430520
>Even then dinner was a quiet affair.
>Until the lights went out and the five of them took to the back yard and started a small fire.
>Zed brought out a cooler of assorted lagers.
>The four humans were content to drink in silence and enjoy a slow night in their strange lives.
>Twilight wasn’t.
“So how do all of you know eachother?”
>Melly looked up pointed at Anon.
>”Roomates back in 2013”
>Then he pointed at Zed and Gwen.
>”Through Anon”
>Zed took a sip before picking up the subject.
>”Me and Gwen married right out of highschool. I went to middle school with Anon.”
“oh…”
>Silent drinking, except for Anon whipping pebbles into the fire.
“I thought there would be more of you.”
>Gwen stretched out before sitting on the cooler and replying a air far too casual for the subject.
>“There were, but you know, plagues, famine, poverty, and warfare.”
“You aren’t angry about it?”
>She shrugged. Melly used his words, his hands out by the fire.
>”No point.”
“No point?”
>Anon spoke this time, a cold low monotone voice.
>”Nope, just keep your head down and make the best life you can for yourself. The best we can hope to do is to stop things from getting worse.”
>He took a long pull from his fosters.
>”We’ll leave tomorrow around 9 or 10. Apparently the road to Vegas is open again; we’ll hitch onto a caravan from there.”
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>>25430667
Good work so far anon. I'll make sure to update the pastebin in the morning!
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late night bump
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I figured I'd try my hand at writing something for this thread. Let me know what you guys think so far.

>Okay, deep breaths, relax.
>You are Anonymous and your doorbell has just rung.
>You are well aware of what awaits you beyond your front door, but you are still struggling to collect your currently scattered thoughts.
>The power of the internet is really fascinating, sometimes you can't believe what you can purchase from the comfort of your own home.
>Several days ago, you gathered up your neetbucks and made an investment in a mail order roommate.
>And by that you technically mean pony slave but you really don't want to think of it like that.
>You'd been considering buying your own pony for a while now, but you finally jumped when you found a listing within your budget.
>The site's warnings of "poor physical condition and work ethic" and "withdrawn and skittish" did little to make you second guess your purchase.
>Crippling loneliness probably helped expedite the process some as well.
>Your thoughts are interrupted by your doorbell ringing for the second time.
>Your hands are sweaty.
>Come on you autist, just open the door.
>You haven't been this nervous to pick up a pony since your last trip to McDonald's.
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>>25431747

>You open your door to reveal a very indifferent and impatient looking delivery man.
>Next to him is a fairly large kennel accompanied by a much smaller postage box.
>"Anonymous?"
>The mailman looks at you expectantly while holding his clipboard.
"Yeah."
>"Need you to sign for your delivery."
>You take the clipboard and give the document a glance over.
>Apparently the postal box contains magic suppressants and an all purpose heavy duty chain for "product storage".
>"You know, I've delivered a lot of slaves since I started in the live cargo business, but this bitch here might just take the damaged goods cake. Just sat in that there kennel shaking the entire trip, wouldn't eat, drink, speak or nothing. Might get better bang for your buck returning her and buying yourself a nice sex toy pal, but hey I ain't one to judge."
>You can't think of a response to that in three words or less, so you just nod and sign the document.
>"Well, alright. I hope that works out for you. You have a good one, ya hear?"
"Thanks, y-you too."
>You pick up the kennel and move your pony into her new home.
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>Looking around the inside of your house, you feel bad about bringing another living being in here.
>Dirty dishes, empty food containers and other types of miscellaneous trash are littered everywhere throughout your living space.
>Shit can get messy if you don't have to keep up appearances.
>You clear a space on your floor for the kennel and set it down.
>Well, this is the moment you've been waiting for.
>You can feel your anxiety building up again.
>Breath in.
>Breath out.
>You open up the kennel.
>And nothing.
>You look inside.
>Curled up in the very back of the cage is a small, light blue unicorn.
>Due to the darkness inside the kennel and your efforts to keep your distance it is hard to make out her more detailed features, but she appears to have a two-toned mane and some sort of hourglass on her flank.
>Her deep blue eyes meet yours, they show nothing but fear.
>You feel horrible about this situation.
>It takes you a second, but you finally work up the courage to try to say something to calm her or at least get her to exit the kennel.
"Um, hey. My name's Anonymous, what's your?"
>The poor unicorn just seems to shake more.
"Well, uh, this is my house, and uh I'm excited to finally meet you. I hope that we can have lots of fun together."
>Your pony just tries to back herself deeper into the kennel.
>This is not going well at all, you really need to think things over before you say them.
>You are not in the mood for spaghetti, you have to get out of here.
"I-I'm just going to give you your space."
>You make a hurried exit to your bedroom and close the door behind you.
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>>25431774

>The light from your computer screen illuminates your otherwise dark room.
>You've been locked up in your bedroom since your attempt to make conversation in your living room this morning.
>Getting a pony was a horrible idea.
>You knew you were socially illiterate, but not even being able to communicate with someone you legally own is a whole new low for you.
>At least the people on your Chinese Cartoon Forum will get a kick out of it.
>Are you even going to be able to support this poor little horse?
>Your house looks like some hoarder tier bullshit and your income consists of whatever pity money your family or good ol' Uncle Sam wants to throw at you.
>You try to block out your worries and actually address the situation at hand.
>You find yourself resorting to playing out different ways you could try to start conversation with the seemingly broken unicorn in your living room.
>As time continues to pass, hundreds of different things come to mind, all with the same dismal, embarrassing and inevitable end result.
>You could just, uh... use her like the average slave owner does, but you're not that much of a degenerate no matter what your browser history may suggest.
>You try to consult google on different ways to help her with her skittishness, but by the time that thought had occurred to you, you were too tired to extract much info from the various pony slave info sites.
>It's probably about time to call it a night... or maybe an early morning.
>Eventually, you turn off the computer and lay down to reflect on the day.
>Feelings of regret slowly turn to loneliness, which is soon consumed by sleep.
>Maybe tomorrow will be better.
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>>25431782

>The sound of very gentle knocking wakes you up.
>Shit, what time is it?
>You take a quick peek out your window to see that the sun is already beginning to set.
>Well, fuck you too daylight savings time.
>There is another set of slightly louder, but still quiet knocks on your bedroom door.
>You're really grateful that the meek pony finally left her kennel, but it does little to relax you.
>It's so embarrassing you just woke up, and you're still pretty groggy, hopefully she doesn't catch on.
"Come in!"
>After a short pause your bedroom door opens, giving you your first good look at the pony you purchased.
>You cringe a little, it is not a pretty sight.
>Her light blue coat is spotted with dark bruises and what appears to be the occasional cut or burn.
>The look in her eyes and her frazzled mane practically screams the word terrified, she looks ready to run at a moments notice.
>The skepticism and fear in her voice when she first speaks just fuels your sense of pity.
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>>25431789

>"H-hey. I'm sorry for bothering you, master. My name is Minuette, I hope you're not mad at me for how I misbehaved yesterday, I'm sorry. I will be a better slave from here on out, master."
>You can tell she is trying her best to maintain composure, you'd say she's doing a pretty good job given what you can only guess she has been through.
>It's beyond you that she could somehow think that you were mad at her, but you know you need to clear the air in many different ways as quickly as possible.
>You pause for a moment to try and find the right words to say.
"Oh, no, it's okay. And you don't have to call me master."
>You really wanted to say more, but all of this was too much to handle at once.
>"I'm sorry, master. I-I mean I'm sorry. What do you want me to call you?"
"My name is Anonymous, but you can just call me Anon, if you want."
>At that point Minuette goes silent, but continues to stand uneasily in the doorway.
>An uncomfortable silence fills the room.
>You have to say something, the silence is killing you.
"Was, uh, there something... I mean, w-why did you knock? Not that I mind, just curious."
>Smooth.
>"Oh, I didn't want to bother you but I'm really hungry... and pretty thirsty too. I wanted to know what I could do to earn some food or water."
>Your stomach drops at the thought of you not feeding her before you ran off into your bedroom.
"Did you not eat yesterday after I went in here?"
>"No, master, I mean Anon, I didn't want to make you mad."
>You look at the nervous, malnourished unicorn in your doorway.
>There is only one reasonable solution to this problem.


That's all I got right now. Should lighten up in the near future. I was planning on writing more, but I write slow as hell and I'm pretty tired. If there is interest I'll try to update soon.
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Gibe moar Appul hoers, plox.
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>>25431801
Good so far.
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>>25431801
>If there is interest
There is
>should lighten up
Already pretty light what with the NEETness of anon, and all the ebin chins references, but goofy is good and all. I don't think we've encountered this type of pony slave before the obedient but obviously scared and skittish one. I want to see how this plays out.
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So why are you guys not in the "Submission is mandatory" thread again? This is the exact same premise.
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>>25432456
I know it's not bait, that's why the fuck I'm asking.
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>>25431801
Keep going
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>>25432711
>le bait XDD
I've not been here for the previous threads in which you might have answered this, so tell me: Why are you not in the Submission is mandatory general, other than to be special snowflakes and shitting the board up with more Anon generals?
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>>25432810
Why are you this mad at a series of threads that will at best last a few more?

This shit happens all the time, no need to autism over it.
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>>25432810
Just read the first 50 post of this thread
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>>25431801
>>not letting the poor thing keep calling you master
isn't that like riping a tongue off a frozen pole instead of just pouring warm water on it?
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>>25432810
everything about the topic you are asking about is here in this thread. the only thing relevant in previous threads is the pastebins.
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>>25433051
Who knows? On one hand its new and breaks old habits, which may be difficult, on the other its presumably a change for the better.

The more concerning part would be to just leave her be for hours after stammering some welcome. That has to be really confusing.
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>>25426785
update your pastebin pls
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Op here, I added the Minuette story and updated California express!
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>>25435463
In the pastebin of course: http://pastebin.com/u/SlavePonyAuction
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>>25432810
SIM is more about rape and domination while this thread about white knights and pets.
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>Anon needs a second driver to sign up for a couple of team races.
>Cannot find anyone willing or affordable.
>Nowhere in the rules does it state that ponies aren't allowed to partake.
>Buys one with whatever money is left.
>Trains them to drive and race proper.
>They actually get a license.
>Make a name for themselves by winning a couple of races.
Too bad I can't write. Have a bump.
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I have an idea for some short green. Would a complete lack of white knighting be a problem?
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>>25436266
If you don't go full sadist, why not.
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bump
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>>25436266
Yea do it faggey.
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>>25436266
>Would a complete lack of white knighting be a problem?
Not in the slightest.

Worst case scenario? You move it to Submission is Mandatory.
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>>25436266
Do it please. If ts ponies as slaves it fits.
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>>25426806
Sounds good to me. Been waiting for a green like that.
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Bumping for more bookhorse
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>>25435074

Updated.
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>>25439273
Moar Vinyl?
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I realy fucking want to write a story where anon fucks with his slave pony's mind, crazy rules, harmless threads, stuff like that.
Am i the onely one who could get off on a highly confused pony?
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>>25439870
"We have to lay down some rules pony. Rule number one, you must always, under all circumstances obey rule number two. Rule number two, you must never, ever obey rule number one under any circumstances. Deviation from these rules will not be tolerated."
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>>25439889
I'd read this.
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>>25439870
You have my interest.
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>>25439870
OH BOY YES PLS
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>>25432810
>>25435679
True but I always figured SiM is an AiE spin off while Pony Auction is a PiE spin off.
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>>25439870

Lurking
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On phone, but gonna try.

>Be Anon
>Fucking loner, living alone on money from the state.
>Playing games all day, basicly a waste of life.

>Found this place online doing a pony Slave auction, so you show up to see what you can get.

... Will fill more in here but wanna show direction of the story in a single post.

>Home, having had the pony delivered.
>You take off the covers from the cage and look at it, for a solid 10 minutes.
>By that time it's crawled into the back of the cage, making itself as small as possible.
>You then lie down with your hrad right next to it.
"Now that we are on the same level, let me explain the rules"
>You tilt your head to look at her but she just lays there, silent.
"Rule 1, whenever you break a rule you will recive punishment, choosen by me."
"Rule 2, you will speek onely when spoken too"
"Rule 3, the remote is always gone, should you find it, you must report it to me immideatly. Then recive punishment as if you broke rule 1."

will flesh stuff out more after sleep unless you tell me to >kill self.
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>>25426806
Twilight writefag seemed to be going in that direction, albeit with one pone and Anon perspective. Definitely worked there, so go ahead.
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>>25426806
Rarity fag here.
thats basically what horseman ship is, so you'll see that in one way or another in my story. horses are animals. and to get them to behave properly in domesticated life is a task that is requires work and understanding how horses think. then using that training to make them work, safe, and desensitised to the frightening stuff in our world.

shit will be different because Ponies are intelligent. but thats what the protagonist is working from.
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>>25440528
Can they still talk?
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>>25440452

Not bad, but don't be afraid to be more descriptive in your narration.
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>>25431801
das brety good mate

the extreme awkwardness is nice

Maybe she'll end up help him more than he realizes.
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>>25441311
yes, rarity has been trained not to however.
the following is spoilers on her back story, but not in extreme detail, just the overview

She was chosen because of her beauty by a rich girl who wanted to ride a white horse like a princess but couldn't get a horse. Slave ponies have far less strict requirements for purchasing, but she didn't want Rarity to act like a real slave, but rather, a horse, because it reflected poorly on her image


I normally like it when the ponies have to learn the language and the people involved start off with a language barrier, but others have already established that ponies can and do talk, so I'm not trying to buck that trend since I want to write in the narrative as others do. It would be neat to do a double session with sweetie author once Rarity is trained enough.

I also prefer this kind of art as the standard when involving human actors. It gives the ponies a fair amount of anatomy instead of cartoonish proportions. with this image, its easier to see how the expressive eyes are larger, and where the saddle, rains, halter, and any other tac sits on the horse, their body language, etc. I know a lot of people prefer smaller equines but generally in my stories adult ponies will be set around 10 to 15 hands.

Rarity is 11 and a quarter hands. Ponies have different and slighter builds than regular ponies, and weigh about half as much. Never the less, despite their weight ponies tend to perform very strong feats in equesteria, so that caries over to being able to be ridden.

Man I blather on endlessly, sorry. I can delete this if its too much horse spaghetti for you guys.
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>>25430667
>The house had enough couches and beds that no one was left on the floor.
>However, that said there was only one bed, which was given to Twilight despite her protests.
>She was woken up at around 8 by Zed, who came in carrying a tray of breakfast.
>Not being much of a morning pony Twilight didn’t move when he came in, only looking over at the food once the door clicked closed.
>She could hear a lot of movement.
>Slowly she rolled out of bed, flopped on the floor, and groaned with morning apathy
>The breakfast was simple, two pieces of toast with a glass of water.
>She ate at a slow pace. Until she heard the distinctive ‘thump-thump’ of a single piston.
>Piece of toast in mouth she struggled with the door knob, the lack of easy magic really starting to annoy her.
>Stepping into the hall she nearly bumped into Zed who was standing looking out the open front door.
>He had a mini-14 slung over his shoulder and a few homemade magazine pouches looped to a exposed belt.
>A man dressed in a naval uniform breezed past him talking to a quickly trailing Anon.
>”Right, I got some updated maps and some new info.”
>Anon stopped in the doorway, quickly regarding Twilight with a brief ‘mornin’ before returning his attention to the uniformed man.
>”You gave me a map three days ago in Portland, and yes I know Vegas is open.”
>The uniformed man rubbed his head, he had deep bags under his eyes and his skin seemed to be thinner than a piece of paper.
>He obviously didn’t sleep much. He only noticed Twilight when he took his hand off his head.

It's getting real quiet here guys.
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>>25442201
>”Princess.”
>He tried his best to salute, but in his state it looked insulting.
>”Look, just update your map with mine, I wanna get back to Hueneme.”
>All the humans present pulled out maps, almost perfectly in sync with one another.
>It was too early for Twilight to endure this strangeness, simply choosing to sit on the floor and try to eat her toast.
>Key word being try, how in the name Tartarus did earth ponies do it so easily.
>The humans squatted on the floor and began marking their maps with whatever they had on hand.
>Anon finished marking his map with a texpen, took a moment to regard it, and was immediately displeased.
>”You’re joking right?”
>The uniformed man looked a little too smug for Twilights comfort.
>”No, and in light of recent changes, the UN address has been moved back.”
“Moved back to when.”
>Twilight still had crumbs on her muzzle and a mouthful of toast.
>The three humans regarded her surprise, assuming a member of royalty wouldn’t speak with a mouthful.
>With a few seconds to compose himself the uniformed man responded in a measured voice.
>”Too whenever you get there… Now, I’m leaving, I have a bunk calling my name.”
>Anon stepped aside letting him out the door, the uniformed man walked uneasily to a large KTM endure bike.
>After putting on his helmet He attempted to kick start it, after failing a few times he called both Zed and Anon over.
>Twilight watched chewing on the crust, interested to see how these contraptions worked.
>She decided on buying a book about human transportation while the two men pushed the bike down the street.
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>>25442225
>Having brushed her teeth and her mane with a fair amount of difficulty and some assistance from Gwen she came into the morning sun.
>Melly was standing behind a open top baja bug, he had a flat head screw driver and was turning something on the engines carburetor.
>Zed and Anon both sat on the tailgate of the ranger waiting.
>Anon hopped off the tailgate, hailing Twilight with a raised arm.
>”Sleep well?”
“Better than last night.”
>”Good, good, it’s gonna be a long, probably shitty day.”
“What is it, dragons?”
>”No, the minotaurs and the diamond dogs are starting to close off the road to Vegas, so Melly and Zed are coming along.”
“Alright… Lets get this over with.”
>Zed lifted up the tailgate, shouting out as he did so.
>”That’s the spirit!”
>Anon was unfazed, responding his usual monotone.
>”That said, you have choice of luxury transportation. Melly’s junky ass bug, or the danger ranger.”
>Melly looked up from over the bug.
>”Did he just call my bug ‘junky’?”
>Twilight didn’t respond, instead trotting over to look at the bug, unlike the ranger it didn’t have bucket seats.
“I think I’ll save my spine and go with Melly.”
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>>25442260
>After some more idle adjustments by Melly the convoy was off, the bug was much more comfortable ride than the Ranger.
>Not only that but Melly had an ipod hooked up to the sound system.
>Looking about the vehicle Twilight noticed some oddities, namely the 8mm rifle hanging off the frame and the holster on the steering column.
>After about 20 minutes or so of driving Twilight attempted to read the book she brought with her.
>It was ultimately useless, Daring Do not having the same effect as normal.
>It made a certain amount of sense to her as she was living more like Daring now than on any of her previous adventures.
“So… Think we’ll make it to Vegas before tonight?”
>”If not, I’ll be surprised if we make it at all.”
“And why’s that.”
>”It’s open desert, tatzlwurms like to come out at night, eat whatever’s on the road.”
“Can’t we go offroad?”
>Melly looked over at her, a humoured expression across his face, Twilight couldn’t help but smile at the expression.
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>>25442282
>It was all in the jewfro.
“I’ll take that as a no then?”
>”No, both of the cars can take it off the road, but doing so puts us at risk of getting trapped by the d-dogs.”
“d-dogs?”
>”diamond dogs. If you stop a vehicle over sand they’ll getcha.”
>Thinking back to her own experiences this made more sense.
>A few minutes of silence passed before the ranger in front of them moved over to the middle of the road.
>With a gentle movement Melly followed along, leaning over to see past the ranger.
>”Looks like Monsanto got some new indentureds.”
“You mean slaves.”
>”Same thing really.”

sorry, cut the section in half.
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>>25442295
>Much to Twilights surprise the convoy had moved to avoid hitting a small crowd of ponies walking down the street.
>She pushed her hooves into Melly’s side.
“Wait, stop. Stop!”
>The bug came to a slow rolling stop. Melly looked about, confused.
>”What? Did something fall off the back?”
“No, what are those ponies doing?”
>”I dunno, but they’re walking into the Mojave. They won’t make it.”
“Well?”
>”Well what?”
>By this point the ranger had circled back and the ponies were getting close enough to make out individuals in the roads heat shimmer.
>The ranger pulled up facing the other way, Anon leaned out of the open window as Zed held out the other window.
>He had his ruger braced on his hip, giving the ranger as a whole a very militant look.
>Anon looked at the back of the idling bug.
>”Did something fall off?”
“No, we’re turning back.”
>She stood up in the seat, putting her hoofs against the frame giving her a better speaking platform.
“You’re going to give those ponies a ride to where ever they’re heading.”
>Without another word anon sat back into the ranger.
“You did it for those humans.”
>He didn’t respond, rather, he shifted the ranger into gear and headed for the Ponies.
>Twilight slide back into the plush seat of the bug.
>Melly stared at the road before angrily taking off his outer layer, revealing his telnyashka.
>”Thank you.”
“What?”
>”Thank you, I used to do stuff like that.”
“Why did you stop?”
>”I got jaded, we all did.”
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>>25442315
>The ranger came back with a bed full of ponies, some clinging to the roll cage, all scared and emaciated.
>It came to a stop next to the bug again; this time however Anon got out and walked to the bed and started pulling out boxes of supplies.
>Without speaking he started piling them into the back seat of the bug.
>Twilight hopped over the side of the bug and climbed up the ranger into the bed of ponies.
>After they got over the initial shock of their princess being in front of them they bowed, or tried.
>The ones on the roll cage couldn’t do much other than lower their heads.
“It’s fine, it’s fine… just… what are you doing out here?”
>The ponies all looked uncomfortably at each other as Zed got out and leaned against the bed having a cigarette.
>Within moments Anon and Melly joined them, every once in a while taking a cautious glance around.
>Eventually one of the ponies, a Pegasus mare with a dirty brown coat spoke up.
>”Our contracts ran out…”
“So you just left?”
>Anon took a drag from Zeds cigarette before passing it to Melly and responding in a cloud of smoke.
>”They kick them out, once the contracts done no company wants to re-hire a pony.”
“Don’t you know that this place is dangerous?”
>Her genuine concern was lost on the Mare as she looked down feeling a little stupid.
>”Well… we just thought that if we could make it to Vegas we could sell ourselves on a new contract.”
“No… That won’t do… Anon, they’re coming with us.”
>Anon shrugged, it was on the way.
>”Sure, we’ll make vegas before sundown anyways.”
“No coming with us for the whole trip.”
>He put his head down on the edge of the truck bed, sighed and brought his head back up.
>”Yeah, ok.”
>From behind Anon’s back Melly gave her a great big thumbs up.

I'm out for now.
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Up from 10 before bed.
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>>25442342
You haven't had much feedback for this so I'll give you some.
It's very different to the other stories and I'm quite liking it so far. It has a dystopian, almost post-apoc feel to it. The addition of supporting characters was nice as well. Gives some room for interaction outside of the main characters.
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>>25442342
do you have an outline/skeleton for the story or you are just making it up as you go?
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No Vinyl update today, sorry.

We're nearing the end, and it needs to be perfect. I'm not posting this until every word is right.

Pic not related, this won't happen.
It's far too optimistic.
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>>25443364
>We're nearing the end
noooooo
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>>25443364
Do your worst, anon. I'm ready.
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Bump incoming.
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>>25444049
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>>25436266
Working on this now. Should I use Apple Bloom or a different Apple filly?
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Still lurking.
Bump
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>>25443364
>Anon and Vinyl stumble upon a portal
>Explore the empty ruins of Equestria that was
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>>25442342
Take a name, faggot.
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>>25444832
Applebloom
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Still waiting for Applepone.
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>>25446219
We all are. That one needs at least some closure.
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Applehoers is best slave.
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>>25446341
Unf. I wanna whip her so hard her fur flies off in bloody little tufts.
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>>25446341
>>25446406
I'd love to read a quick harsh/cruel scene based on this pic. Applejack is trying desperately to please her master by pulling him in his cart, but he has it loaded down with so much shit her hooves skitter and clatter against the ground fruitlessly, it just won't budge, it's too heavy for her, but her cruel master doesn't spare her the lash for even a moment. The flesh of her rump ripples and twitches, her tail pressing flat against it in anticipation of each lash as she hears the whip sailing through the air, unable to escape its brutal sting, eventually breaking down into tears and begging for mercy, her exhaustive efforts both to pull the immobile cart and escape the pain of the lash eventually leading her to collapse under the onslaught.
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Is there a story with Applejack in progress? If someone can link it I would love to read it.
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>>25446596
>http://pastebin.com/gFYqU1d5

Guessin you didn't read the OP then.
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>be Anon
>start underground pone railroad
>never stop until all magical tiny colorful horses have been relocated to their homeland
>escape there with them to avoid prison/murder
>destroy portal/gateway/etc
>become venerated hero
>get tons of mare pussy
>stallion ass/dick too if you want it
>live happily ever after
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>>25446853
That's a lot of horses to get back home.
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>>25446853
>destroy portal/gateway/etc
>become venerated hero
>get tons of mare pussy
>stallion ass/dick too if you want it
>live happily ever after
>forget humans created the portal in the first place
>they make another soon after
>find your race traitorous ass
>publicly hang you for all the ponies to see
>their smiles and optimism: gone
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>>25446992
>humans created the portal in the first place
k
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>implying we'd enslave ponies
>implying we didn't learn our lesson already from the failed nigger fiasco
>implying we want another class of lazy violent victim-complex "citizens" after pony slavery is banned
>a.k.a. niggers 2.0
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>>25447137
Pony slavery probably wouldn't last nearly as long as nigger slavery did. Ponies are cute, so people will feel sympathy for them a lot sooner than they did the niggers.
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>>25447137
It's the same reason why sympathetic Anon keeps buying slaves, it's just a prompt.
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Continuing from http://pastebin.com/zvvD2hcE

"Come on, come on..."
> Glass crunches under your feet with each step you take through the ruined office, a circle worn through the rubble-littered floor floor from the pacing.
> Gritting your teeth, you dial the number again.
"Pick up, Twilight. Come on pick up!"
> You'd taught her to use the phone, answering and dialing with a stylus on the screen.
> So why wouldn't she be-
> "Hello?"
> Relief brings your pacing to a halt.
"Twilight? Hey, listen. I might be home a bit late tonight. Something's come up at work."
> "A bit late?"
> The skepticism in her voice is obvious, and you wince.
> Twilight had become quite good at guessing when you weren't telling the whole truth.
"Okay, pretty late. Look, I just wanted to tell you I'm alright, and you don't have to worry."
> "Worry? I'm not that needy, Anon."
> Ah, good.
> She hadn't watched the news, then...
"Well, uh - good. Uh, so I will probably be home by the time you get up in the morning. Feel free to raid the fridge, or take anything else you need."
> Pausing, you try to think of anything else she might need.
"If I'm not... I'll call in the morning. Anyone knocks on the door looking for me, tell them I'm still at work."
> "Did something happen, Anon?"
> Now the worry was tinging her voice, and not without reason.
> You tug lightly at the bandage wrapped around one forearm; it'd begun to itch again.
"Yeah. Something... happened."
> "How bad?"
> Shit, she must've heard the tone of your voice.
> Glancing out the window, your gaze falls through shattered windows on dark buildings illuminated only by the multihued flickerings of a dozen fire trucks' lights.
> And beyond them, a dull-red smoke still reaching to the sky.
"Bad."

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> Twilight isn't sleeping on the couch when you do finally arrive home.
> She isn't waiting at the door either, which considering that it is four in the morning is a good thing.
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>>25448112
You fucking shitdick

more
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>>25448112

> Endearing it may have been, that pony's neuroticisms left you seriously wondering at her health sometimes.
> At least the vet had cleared her - as clear as someone who'd been through her experience could be cleared, anyhow.
> Losing your bag and gaining a drink, you wander to your room - and promptly discover where Twilight had hidden herself.
> Well - not hidden, really.
> She was stretched out across your bed fast asleep, curled tightly as tightly as she could.
> A book rested just in front of her, it's page now slightly twisted.
> Chuckling softly, you reach out to snag the book and properly shut it; unfortunately, you are rather exhausted and your ninja skills are not quite up to snuff.
> Twilight shifts as the books is removed, one eye creeping open.
> "'non?"
"Hey, Twilight."
> Reaching out, you gently ruffle her mane.
"Sorry it took so long. Things were... messy."
> "I know. I watched the news after you called. I know you said you're safe, but-"
"Twilight. Come on. Not now, okay?"
> Grinning apologetically, you collapse on the edge of the bed and put an arm across her back.
"I'm home, I'm safe, and I really need to crash for a bit."
> Please, please don't let he keep ask-
> "What happened? They just said it was an accident, but they aren't reporting on any details..."
> Freezing, you hesitate for just a second - a second too long for Twilight not to notice.
"In the morning, Twilight."
> ...at least let her get this last night's peaceful rest before you have to drop this on her.
> Briefly Twilight fixes you with an accusatory stare, but levers herself upright in the end.
> "Okay. In the morning, but then I want to know everything aboooohsweetCelestiayourarm!"
> Wincing heavily at the sudden pitch of her voice, you sigh heavily.
"They're just bandages, Twilight. It's not broken."
> Holding up the offending limb, you show her the dressing wrapped around your arm.
"See? Not that bad. There was just some glass, but it's all out now."
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>>25448131

> "Did you get the cuts looked at?!"
"Yes, Twilight. I did. The paramedics patched me up and sent me home."
> One more lie can't hurt tonight, right?
> After all, you're going to hit her with enough things later on.
> No reason to lay another thing on her mind.
"I'm fine, Twilight. Go to sleep."
> When morning comes, you're surprised to find that Twilight doesn't wake you up.
> Ever since things had taken a turn for the better, she'd become something of a walking alarm clock in the morning.
> Any hope of mercy dissolves like smoke on the wind when you enter the living room to find Twilight already up herself - browsing away on her computer.
> When she looks up, a jolt runs through you.
> Her eyes are already wide and shaky; you should've forbidden her from looking up more about it.
> But, knowing Twilight, that would only have driven her thirst for knowledge...
> "H-Hey, Anon. I thought you might want to sleep in."
> Nodding silently, you move to take a seat next to her on the couch.
"I... appreciate it."
> "They're saying someone died now."
> Another wince runs through you - this one very physical as well as mental.
> Twilight sees it, too.
> "How many?"
"Six. Four humans, two ponies. At least, when I left last night - they were taking some others away to the hospital."
> Pausing, you steel yourself for the inevitable question.
> She was a smart girl, but didn't always notice your little cues.
> "What happened?"
> Sucking a deep breath in, you let go - and allow the words to flow.
"We were firing up a new system. Something entirely new, not tested before. It was coming up slowly, but some feedpipes ruptured and that knocked a gas line free; it was all down from there."
> "New..."
> The gears are turning in her head, mind circling ever closer to an inescapable question.
> "It wasn't..."
> Now it's Twilight's turn to drawn an unsteady breath.
> "One of mine?"
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>>25448164

> No avoiding it now.
"It's not your fault, Twilight. Even in that configuration, the pipes were barely under three-quarters load when they went. We knew there'd be additional pressure but it was within tolerances. They shouldn't have-"
> "That's not the answer!"
> A hoof beats against the sofa; her eyes have narrowed to slits and ears slammed down to either side of her head.
> "It was, wasn't it? It was a change I designed that you were testing!"
"...yes."
> Bobbing your head once, you let the last of the air rush from your lungs.
"Yes, it was one of your suggested designs. But Twilight, the entire thing shouldn't have-"
> It's too late.
> The stylus she uses falls to the floor; her eyes fill with tears as a barely-comprehending look fills her face.
> "I - I killed..."
"No."
> "Your arm - I hurt you too..."
> Reaching down,you cup your hands over both her cheeks, lifting Twilight's eyes to focus back on you.
"You didn't, do you understand? This isn't something you did. You couldn't have known - I couldn't even have known, and I was there."
> "No!"
> The next thing you know you're falling from the couch; you hadn't even felt Twilight touch you, but tumbling away you were all the same.
> "You don't - I - aaaargh!"
> A shrill scream echoes through the apartment as she knocks the computer away with a hoof, leaving you scrambling to catch it before it can crash to the floor.
> "This - this is why - I shouldn't."
> Drawing another shaky breath, Twilight lays her head down and lets her tears begin to flow for real.
> "I shouldn't be doing this. I shouldn't be... helping. I just get ponies - people - hurt. It's just like..."
> A little shake of her head, a sniffle, and she goes on:
> "I told you I was broken. Why didn't you listen?!"
"Because you aren't, Twilight. You're fine. This isn't your fault; we all looked at the designs-"
> "But I thought them up! It's my responsibility!"
> Now something new fills her eyes, bitter anger stabbing out at you.
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>>25448211
Don't interpret the fact that I fucking hate you as a sign that I don't want more.
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>>25448211

> "You... you pushed me into this. Why didn't you listen to me?! I told you I was-"
"I heard you! But I don't think it's right!"
> "And look at where that got us! Six are dead because of that!"
"Six are dead because a pipe wasn't built right. That's not your fault!"
> "It is! Every time - every time I..."
> There's no way she can go on; just as quickly as the anger had filled her it departs, leaving the empty, shaking shell of a pony in its place.
> "Please - don't make me do this anymore. I don't - I don't want this again. Not a third time; I've already failed twice so badly now."
> Again your mouth opens, but nothing comes to it.
> What can you say in a situation like this?
> Instead, you reach out to place an arm around Twilight; after a second's hesitation, she leans in against it and lets the tears run.
> Shifting closer, you simply remain silent - hand stroking back her mane and waiting for the worst of it to pass.
> Eventually her sobs fall to something less raw, sheer exhaustion despite the early hour silencing her cries.
"Now, Twilight. Listen to me. This - this wasn't your fault. You had no way of knowing-"
> "Not an excuse."
> Her voice is hoarse, but that doesn't mask the bitter pain in it.
> "I shouldn't have done that. Shouldn't have gone back to doing that."
> Outwardly you merely wrap an arm about her and squeeze gently, but inwardly you're wincing heavily.
> The blood-work results from Twilight's vet visit were due any day now; you'd been hoping to have some good news to buoy her over any bad news that came with them.
> But after this one-two punch...
> If you weren't careful, this could set her back a long, long ways.
"I know - I know this isn't easy, Twilight. Trust me, it's hitting me hard too - but, I still don't think you should give up. You didn't build it; you didn't damage the pipes."
> "If you order me...."
> Her head doesn't even rise, the words mumbled down towards the couch.
"Order you?"
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>>25448318

> "Did you forget? You bought me. I'm still yours."
> A hoof rises to touch the collar on her throat.
> "If you order me to make more of these designs, I.. will."
> If you order her.
> Racking your brains, you realize that you can't ever remember ordering Twilight to do any of this.
> Told her that work would be good for her, yes.
> Sometimes asked her to take a look at your job's details, and suggested the try to improve on them.
> Maybe even informally told her to get to work.
> But never given an explicit order to begin making the designs.
> Never indicated that was her duty to you as your property.
> If you made it an order now...
"No. I still don't think this is your fault, but I'm not going to force you to do more until you're ready."
> Mental issues aside, you'd seen before what happened when people in a bad mental state were pushed to work.
> Ponies didn't seem to be that different; if she produced the errors and mistakes you normally saw from distracted, unhappy workers then it'd only feed back into her.
> Laying her head back down, Twilight lets her eyes fall shut.
> "Thank you, sir. I should - you should keep me doing simple things. Basic things nopony can ruin. It'd be better that way."
> Sir.
> You shudder softly.
> Sure, you'd known what you were getting into when you bought a pony.
> But hearing her say it, hearing the word so totally ruled by pain and misery -
> That wasn't something you were quite ready for yet.
"Look, Twilight. I'm going to go get breakfast started. You just stay here, okay?"
> "Yes, sir."
> Wincing again, you rise and head for the kitchen.
> Something fancy today, you think.
> As you work, periodic glances are taken out into the living room.
> What you see isn't reassuring.
> Twilight was still splayed out on the couch, eyes staring off into nothingness.
> Well...
> It was only a few minutes since the shock had hit.
> Maybe it'd get better in time?
> Maybe.

That's it for now.
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>>25448340
>>
>”Ah don’t wanna do this no more!”
>With a tinge of guilt, you lock the last restraint around the mare’s leg.
“Sorry, Apple Bloom, but the fee is non-refundable.”
>You try to pat her head, but she jerks away from your hand. Hell, if all four legs weren’t anchored to the stand, she’d probably run back out to the fields.
>It’s a minor miracle she stood still long enough for you to tighten the leather strap around her barrel, let alone the leg restraints.
“Look, girl, I know this isn’t ideal, but with the corporate work camps and such buying up the last of the government’s prisoner contracts, we don’t really have much choice. We’ve already sunk the money into this deal and can’t afford to just throw it away.”
>She shakes her head frantically, refusing to listen to your words.
>You sigh – and Apple Bloom flinches at the noise.
>She’s knows you well enough to recognize your patience is running thin.
“You’ve been with my family for how long?”
>”T-three years, s-sir.”
“And we’ve treated you well in that time, haven’t we?”
>She doesn’t answer; a dark corner of your soul is tempted to beat some respect into her, but you need the mare as healthy as possible right now.
>Besides, that’s not your way.
>There’s no point in beating a lie out of her, no reason to hit her until she just tells you what you want to hear. You’d only be venting your anger and frustration on her, because there is no way a few kicks will actually make her happy about her situation.
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>>25448614
>Still, you wonder if you’re too gentle with the ponies – but your uncle was a harsh man, and you saw how that worked out.
>You’ve been running the place for two months, and despite having next to no idea what you’re doing, you suspect you can’t be running things any worse than he had.
>Sure, he’d made some good decisions, here and there, and this deal was probably one of them. But even at the end, he was driving the farm into the ground – the canner price for that stallion hadn’t even come close to covering the cost of his funeral.
>That damned pony would have been worth more alive and in the fields, but just like now you hadn’t had much of a choice.
>Standards must be maintained.
>”But… but… Ah changed my mind… sir,” Apple Bloom whimpers softly, shaking in the restraint. “Ah know what Ah said, but –“
“You don’t have a choice, girl, and neither do I. This deal was signed and paid for damn near a year ago.”
>You’ve been putting it off as long as possible, but time’s up.
“You’re the only mare in heat right now, Apple Bloom, and Steffords isn’t a patient man. It’s either now or never.”
>”Then Ah say never!”
“Sorry, but you don’t get a say.”
>Her legs are shaking so much you suspect that the metal stand is the only thing keeping her upright.
>You would sedate her, but after the last time you tried…
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>>25448630
>Ponies can be surprisingly delicate, and the farm can’t afford to go throwing away any more money like that.
>”Ah got rights,” Apple Bloom murmurs, staring at the wall. “You can’t do this.”
“First off, you’re damned lucky I told you about that -”
>She snorts angrily and futilely tries to pull free of the restraints.
“Stop that!”
>The mare freezes when you raise your hand – and you’re glad that’s all it takes.
>”You – you can’t hit me no more!” she stutters after a second. “You told me so!”
>Dammit.
>You lightly smack her flank, making her jump – as much as the restraints allow, anyway.
“No, the treaty we just signed with your princess says we can’t be cruel, and all that means is we can’t beat you for the hell of it. Doesn’t say anything about enforcing discipline.”
>”But – “
“Besides, girl, if it weren’t for the cease-fire driving the prices sky-high, those perverts would still be making their pony-snuff films, legal or not, so shut your mouth. Steffords’ll be here any minute and I already get enough crap from him about how much I let you all get away with!”
>You’d rather not deal with the man at all.
>Silently, you curse your departed uncle for setting this up – and paying for it so far ahead of time. Thinking “long-term” he had put it and you have to admit he had a point – stud fees had only gone up after the cease-fire last month, just like he had predicted.
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>>25448646
>”Ah don’t wanna do this,” the young mare whines again. “My sister always Ah should save myself for somepony Ah love!”
“And I don’t want to have to listen to Steffords bitching about how he deserves more money for this, but we’ve all got to do things we don’t want to do.”
>There’s no time for this; there’s still work to be done.
>You roughly – perhaps more so than necessary – grab her tail and yank it upwards, tying it the leather strap running around her barrel.
>Apple Bloom doesn’t scream – she knows better than that – but she does wince and shut her eyes.
>Dammit, you don’t really mean to hurt her.
“Dangit, girl, calm down.”
>”Ah can’t,” she whimpers softly. “Ah only said Ah’d do it so you wouldn’t hit me.”
“Well, you better, because I already made the mistake of sedating one pony and I won’t do that again. You saw what happened, didn’t you?”
>Their bodies didn’t react well to most medications. Too many generations used to doing things with magic, the scientists were saying; their bodies just couldn’t deal with the chemicals.
>True or not, there’s no way you’re letting one of the unicorns off its suppressants to sedate her magically. Even if any of the farm’s unicorns had that particular talent, your uncle’s funeral was closed-casket for a reason.
>You learned a lot from him – particularly from his mistakes.
>Never let the unicorns off their suppressants.
>Even if you treat ‘em right – and he hadn’t – the withdrawal will drive a unicorn mad.
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>>25448654
>Another reason you’re going through with this – you’d rather sell off the pointy-headed bastards if you could. The way you see it, they’re a liability, a mistake just waiting to happen, but right now the farm needs the workforce.
>With another irritated sigh, you wrap the heavy leather guard around Apple Bloom’s neck.
>”No! Ah –“
>She tries to jerk away, but you grab her head and pull it back.
“This is for your own good, girl.”
>She shudders at your angry growl.
>”Try sayin’ that when you’re the one locked up and presented to the whole world!”
>Her tail twitches as she tries to cover herself.
“You wouldn’t be, if you’d just do what you’re supposed to, girl! You think I LIKE using the stand?”
>No warning this time – you simply smack her flank with the flat of your hand, leaving a faint pink mark shining through her pale coat.
>”N-no, sir.”
“Then just stand there and take it!”
>”Ah… Ah’ll try.”
“You better, because I don’t know how this stallion will react if you start trying to buck him off. Like I said, this –“
>You tap the leather guard encircling her neck.
“ – is for your own good. Steffords’ stallion isn’t all there and he might try to bite you if you start acting up.”
>Apple Bloom is quiet for several long seconds before suddenly relaxing her body.
>She slumps in the stand, her head hanging dejectedly.
>”Fine,” she mumbles. “Ain’t like Ah got a choice.”
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>>25448669
“Sorry, girl.”
>You try to scratch between her ears, but she flicks away your hand.
>Good enough. At least she isn’t struggling anymore. You don’t need her to like you or even be happy about things, so long as she doesn’t make them any worse.
>Apple Bloom mumbles something you don’t catch, her soft whisper drowned out by the sound of a truck grinding to a halt outside the barn.
“He’s here.”
>You sigh for a third time and glance over at the mare.
“What did you say?”
>”What’s his name?” she asks again, just loud enough for you to hear. “Ah might… ah might know him –“
“I don’t know. Steffords doesn’t let his ponies have names.”
>The mare winces as a truck door slams.
>”T-then what’s his cutie mark?”
“Burnt off with a brand, so he doesn’t have one.”
>”But how can Ah –“
>You can barely hear her over the sound of Steffords stomping around outside. Even so, it’s a distraction.
“I’ve got work to do, Apple Bloom. I can’t deal with your questions right now.”
>She doesn’t fight the gag you shove into her mouth.
>Good, because it’s for her protection – if she used that tongue of hers on Steffords, he’d likely kick the shit out of her.
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>>25448688
“Look, I’ll try to find out, okay? All I know is this stallion is a damn big bastard and strong as hell. The only reason he’s in private hands is he didn’t come out of the war all there. Doesn’t talk, doesn’t fight back, but he can’t do a damn bit of work because he can’t remember anything for more than a heartbeat.”
>There’s the sound of a bolt being thrown – he’s getting the stallion out of the trailer.
“Pretty much all he’s good for is breeding, and Steffords is keeping things at a premium by demanding a live cover.”
>You sigh for the fourth time as your neighbor leads the massive stallion through the doors.
>Damn big bastard – you’d almost suspect he was a real horse if it weren’t for his bright red coat.
>Apple Bloom tenses up immediately; even though she can’t see the stallion, she must be able to smell him.
“Calm down, girl. This won’t take long.”
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>>25448700
>bright red coat
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>>25448700
You son of a bitch...
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>>25429751
>Be Anon.
>And even though the sleazy scum of a seller tried to convince you to empty your wallet on a pristine unicorn slave, your attention was pointed elsewhere.
>Namely, the only black and gray equine that stood out in the masse of vibrant colors.
>Leaving the seller to his rant, you make your way to the striped pony. It was just too intriguing to ignore, the pattern, the mowhawk and those almost glowing cyan eyes.
>Stopping by the cage, you hastily look over the summary;

ZEBRA
FEMALE
AGE UNKNOWN
TRAINED FOR; MANY DOMESTIC APPLIANCES, CLEANING.

>Brief least to say.
>But the jawdropper was the price.
>Barely a quarter of that unicorn!
>"Ah, Stripes caught your eye huh?"
>The salesman remarked with a chortle.
>"Yeah, she's pretty exotic but its damaged goods like hell. I dunno if-"
"What happened to her?"
>"Dunno. Previous owner's serving lifetime for some shit, cops just dumped her here with me."
>"No papers, ID or chip, and she can barely say anything at all... I was kinda uncertain putting her out for sale, I mean besides the exotic stripes, the vaccine I gave her is worth more."

Tired as balls, leaving this here and'll check on in the morning if any want >cont
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>>25448766
Assuming you wait until morning to read this...

WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU WAITING FOR
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>>25448340
>>25448318
>>25448211
So good. I hope you keep it up.
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>>25448849
>>25448340
this
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>>25448340
Goddammit anon. You got me.
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>>25448700
>bright red coat
OH SHIT NIGGER
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>>25448727
>>25448765
>>25449280
Just tell yourself the stallion is a Revolutionary War enthusiast. Unless anon demands more, that's it for this tale and you won't be proven wrong.
http://pastebin.com/DK21fjWz
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>>25448766
Man, don't even ask. The answer is always yes.
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>>25449328
Of we demand more. How can you stop there?
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>>25449446
Not if there's diapers involved.
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>>25448340

Verily you're doing a good work.
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>>25448700
no matter how you look at it, odds are this wont result in sex between the two. if big mac can even get it up, he'd still have plenty of incentive to tell the people who own him that if they plan on doing this to get a foal out of it monetarily speaking, he is an awful breeding partner because he is directly related. even if he was gagged for whatever reason he could still gesticulate.
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Going be continuing the Cloudchaser story in a bit, hope I don't step on anyone's toes.
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>>25448766
Oh yes, do continue.
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>Cloudchaser had reputation that, while not quite as visceral as Merribelle’s, was still to be respected.
>When the meathead came for Cloudchaser next, she clustered to Merribelle’s side and bared her teeth.
>Merribelle hardly registered the sudden contact, her mind evidently on the clippers she had frantically used and cast into the darkness as well as darker thoughts of things to come.
>Meathead, tired and bored, huffed and let them come as a pair, unwilling to go through the obvious hassle of separating them.
>With a quick smack from Cloudchaser to remind Merribelle they were going for the bigger picture and not simply savaging meathead’s back while it was turned, the duo followed him out from the alley and into the parking lot.
>In many ways, the thirty or so humans stood in the light of their cars bore many physical similarities to their purchases stood beside them in collars and cowls.
>The stallion from before was among them, his equally massive owner looming at the back of the crowd with a small herd of his own, most of whom Cloudchaser only vaguely recognised.
>Haggard, wet and either sent here in another's stead or simply hoping to scavenge the scraps of a rapidly shrinking market.
>Surprise flashed across Jacob’s face followed by a flash of anger directed at meathead, who shrugged and ushered the pair forward.
>Jacob had recovered by the time the pair had entered the harsh glare of the headlights, sheltered under the gazebo with Jacob bellowing behind them.
>Out the corner of her eye Cloudchaser spotted Merribelle’s final fading glance toward her, for once afraid.
>Cloudchaser paid her no heed, she would know what to do.
>”Well boys and girls, it’s been a long wait but here’s the wrap up lot for this year. Now we’ve got a real treat for tonight's final showing.”
>” Not only do we have a mare, qute frankly built like a tank with the disposition to match but also…”
>He flourished toward Cloudchaser.
>”...an ex guard herself.”
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>>25450054
>A few phones went to ears at that. four of the dwindling crowd left entirely.
>Jacob waited for the roar of their engines to die away before continuing, seemingly unfazed.
>”Now,” he began with a chuckle, “I wouldn’t exactly keep ‘em around kids but I’m telling you, these two are right good and proper breeding stock for those rings we all know need suppling.
>Cloudchaser curled a lip in disgust, shutting out the rest of his pitch.
>Fighting rings were outlawed soon after the sudden explosion in popularity they had during the Atlantic crisis and as with all legislation set during those turbulent times, was promptly ignored by anyone and everyone.
>The rain had started up again, a light drizzle that threatened to downpour.
>Sensing the diminishing resolve of the crowd to stay, Jacob accelerated his pitch.
>”So for Merribelle-” he gestured with a hand, “-we’ll start the bidding at fifty.”
>A quiver, most unlike Merribelle, ran down the rugged mare’s spine.
>Her eyes darted side to side beneath her muzzle as the pricing rose from fifty to a hundred.
>Cloudchaser grit her teeth, hoping Merribelle would hold it together long enough to enact the plan Cloudchaser had relayed to her in hurried, hushed tones.
>”Sold for one-twenty. Since this one comes with a muzzle there’s no faf there.” Jacob bellowed, his jubilation at managing to sell the untamable mare evident.
>”Mikey get the mare,” he said to the now fearful human in the back.
>Merribelle froze and Cloudchaser offered her a small nod of reassurance.
>The mare nodded back and breathed deep until a calloused hand gripped her muzzling by the strap.
>To Cloudchaser horror, Merribelle’s eyes widened and her pupils dilated in absolute terror.
>She wrenched her head away from the hand, the strap frayed by Merribelle’s frantic use of the clippers earlier, tearing away.
>Merribelle whipped her head back, free of the muzzle now hanging in mickey’s grasp, and bit. Hard.
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>>25450062
>The crunch of bone was drowned out by Mickey’s howling screech and pandemonium reigned.
>Cursing at Merribelle’s lapse in control, Cloudchaser leapt from the shelter of the gazebo, shoulder checking a punter as she went and diving into the mess.
>Instinct is hard thing to suppress and Mickey’s piercing wail gnawed at Cloudchaser’s need to panic and flee.
>She roared in pain and bounded onto one of the cars, setting off the alarm and adding to the racket.
>Ponies battled both their former and newer masters in blind panic whilst the more brain dead ones milled about and occasionally bit things that got too close.
>Jacob’s shouted orders ran undercurrent to the clamour and soon enough, those under his paycheck had waded into the fray with nooses and collars, Jacob's threats ringing in thier ears.
>When the first of the gunshots rang out many of the humans simply chose that moment to leave abandoning their purchases to run amok while they secured their cars in a disordered heave.
>Too bad the stallion from before had already begun preying upon those two slow to escape to the confines of their car.
>Cloudchaser ignored him and the small cohort he had managed to rally, bounding onto one of the cars.
>Law enforcement would be here soon and against ‘ferals’ they wouldn’t be taking any chances.
>A mare’s wail sliced through the din until it was cut off by a sharp crack.
>Cloudchaser chanced a glance and saw meathead throwing himself against the stallion, his bat stained and dripping.
>Cloudchaser spotted Brian, hopelessly lost on the wrong side of the brawl.
>Their eyes impossibly met and Cloudchaser took savage delight in his sheer terror, easily visible to her through the returning rainfall.
>Thunder crashed from on high and Cloudchaser leapt from the bonnet, skidding on the slickened floor and bolting after the now fleeing teenager.
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>>25450097
>For all the many pains shooting through her as atrophied muscles cramped and damaged nerves misfired, raw adrenaline powered her through.
>Shepherding him through the tangled maze of containers and ships was trivial, leaving behind the mess Merribelle had so excellently instigated.
>Cloudchaser shook off the peculiar thoughts invading her focus and pushed herself harder than she had in months, her mind cycling and revising routes and exits with each passing millisecond.
>Everything she had been taught at the Wonderbolts academy and honed to a razors edge during the war let her track the teenager’s flight through the densely packed storage units with ease, splashing through puddles and relishing the feel of the rain one last time.
>Cloudchaser’s wings burned with a phantom need to take flight
>Not an option any more.
>Cloudchaser snarled and vaulted an errant forklift, skating on the asphalt and heading off the teenagers latest break off attempt.
>Yelping he scrambled to change direction, toward the canal. Good.
>Cloudchaser had understood the perils of service when she had joined the reserves and reconciled with the harsh prospect of a violent end upon watching so many other meet theirs.
>At first she had spent sleepless nights sheltering from her own dark musings on the nature of her own end.
>She had wanted it to be in service of her nation, in defence of those she loved at the sides of those she admired.
>Alas.
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>>25450110
>Cloudchaser rounded the final corner as if it were a simple jaunt to the shops for milk.
>Brian’s utter desperation she found him at the dead end of the dock was palpable.
>His jacket was torn and his shoes sloshed with each backpedaling step.
>Like a dying gasp an old sensation of remembrance drifted across her mind’s eye.
>How she would sit on the pier with another whose name rested on the very tip of her tongue, looking out over the infinite waters and sharing foolish stories of what they wanted to be a decade away,naively assured in their own self perception.
>When colts were icky, stars were stories and the sea was the domain of pirates and long lost treasure.
>A choked sob brought Cloudchaser back to reality, where her wings hurt, her hooves ached and her mind could barely string two coherent thoughts together without them clashing.
>She had heard Jacob’s enraged howls punctuating the thunderstorm
>Even if it were nought but open field between him and her, he would still be too far, never mind through a sunken labyrinth of his species own devising.
>Tears were running down the insufferable ape’s face and his bumbled, snot filled pleas fell upon deaf ears, drowned amidst the rain beating off Cloudchaser’s ears.
“You take away my world.”
>She crouched low and that same lump of grey matter that had whipped the ponies into a frenzy seized Brian in a tight grip and silenced his pathetic bleating.
>Cloudchaser’s smile bared teeth.
“I take away yours.”
>She pounced.
>Something large and solid crashed into her side, flinging her featherweight body to the concrete with a crunch.
>With the last vestiges of conciousness she saw a bipedal figure she could not say she recognised..
>Time slipped away from her.
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>>25450054
>>25450062
>>25450097
>>25450110
>>25450144
Is this a continuation of something or something new?
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I am back. Will continue now on >>25446615

>>25446219
>>25446234
It'll get done eventually.

Fallout 4... it... it took me, Anons. I've been playing it non-stop since release. 79 hours so far. I have barely slept, eaten, and I'm ill as fuck, but... I don't care!

Anyways, writing continues.
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>>25450224

Same, had to force myself away and do something else. Sad thing is even after I complete it when the mods come out it's gonna start all over again...
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>>25450209
Its the cloudchaser story: http://pastebin.com/UQqcaF2Q

>>25450224
Good to see you back. I won't be able to update the pastebin with stuff you'll put out for about 20 hours until I get back from classes tomorrow.
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>>25450265
I haven't even followed the main questline beyond visiting Diamond City, Anon.

I've just been doing Minutemen shit and building. I do what I always do; venture to some random location for loot and gear, go back home, unload, upgrade where possible, and do it again. I'm level 43, and I just... love it.

The mods are going to be so based. SO based. I cannot wait for the SPESS MAREEN mods for the new Power Armour. Seriously, I'm gonna be roleplaying that shit so hard.
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>Bought a Pony today.
>I found this place online, they clamed to have a pony auction going on.
>At first i diddent beleave them because the theories i heard about the portal all claims it opened in USA, and i live all the way over here.
>But, a man can be desperate, so i showed up.
>The address lead me to the edge of town, a big warehouse.
>I entered through a rusty door and was greeted by noice, so much noice.
>People yelling, the smell of manure, and a voice over a speeker systen yelling many numbers realy fast, i assumed it was the auctioneer.
>A woman walked up to me and asked what she could help me with, she was wearing a white blouse showing her belly button, a black bubble platic jacked a pair of jeans and knee high boots.
>Long straight brown hair and way too much makeup on, her facial expression clearely showed that she diddent give a fuck about me but was in buisness mode.
>I awkwardly explained myself, and that i had read online that they had an auction going on today.
>She pointet me towards the big stage and told me that they had almost just begun.
>I pushed my way through the crowd, mostly consistent of loners like me or buisness men in suits. I payed them no mind.
>When i got into hearing range of the speeker system, i heard that they guy on the stage was already in the process of selling one of the ponies, a white unicorn was shown on the stage in a large cage.
>The current price was above my budget so i payed her no mind.
>I looked over the auctioneer to get a feeling of his character.
>Bowlerhat hiding a blading head, chubby features on the face, recemblance to a pig.
>A white shirt with a fancy black jacket worn loosly, clearely dirtied from handeling the ponies, black trousers with a brown leather belt and church shoes.
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>>25449328
You better continue it you blueballing faggot
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>>25450369
>All those spelling mistakes
>All those punctuation errors
>Full stops after greentext

You also don't into English, do you? What dirt country do you come from?
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>>25450144
>This is back
Eeeeexcellent.
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>>25448131
>> She was stretched out across your bed fast asleep, curled tightly as tightly as she could.

Sorry to poke man but if she's stretched out then she can't be curled up in a ball.
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>>25450413
back to >pick related then.
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>>25449328
MURRRRRRRRRRRRR
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Whoops, already had another post. Forgot about that.

I'll post it for reference.
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>>25387902

>You'd be here all day if you kept asking questions
>That's good, but also bad
>You had shit to do
"Kay, so you're sorted, I guess."
>Wait no
"Wait, no, cleaning stuff."
>"Ah already am."
"No, I mean like, stuff to help you clean."
>You grab a spray bottle full of bathroom cleaner from the cupboard under the sink
"I assume you're going elsewhere, this room looks pretty done to me."
>"Ya kiddin'?"
>What? No...?
>"Ya seen the state o' th' cupboards? Or th' walls?"
>Shit, you don't consider that stuff
"Huh, I suppose they are pretty icky."
>"Darn right, how'd you live in this place?"
"Easy, I just don't care."
>"Yeah ah noticed."
>She looks at the open cupboard where you took the bottle from
>It's full of cleaning supplies you don't tend to use
>She guesses, because she grabs a bottle of kitchen cleaner
>It's all the same shit really, just different labels to sell more of it
>At least, that's what you tell yourself
>"Look, jus' go back t' yer own cave, yer 'slave' got work t' be doin'."
>Jeez, you really don't get this. she's so stand-offish
>She has a right to be so annoyed though, dummy
>Stop thinking she owes you jack
"Fair enough, have fun doing whatever."
>"Bite me, bucko."
>Now now, play nice
>You move to take her hat, but she backs away before you get near
>"Touch th' hat an' ah'll slap ya."
>Rude
"Whatever."
>You walk away, back to the comfort of your room
>The PC beckons
>...
>You should probably sleep, actually
>It's like... 2am, now you glance at the time in the lower right hand corner
>Then again, you're not tired
>...Meh, sleep anyway
>Your comfy-as-fuck bed beckons instead
>...
>Aaaaaaand crashed out after taking off your clothes
>Must have been real tired
>Your dreams are filled with ponies, which is laughable
>Except you're not laughing, they're all enslaved
>Fuckers like Mr. Fedora grinning while they drag off their own blue pony
>Or whoever they manage to grab
>Shit's creepy
>When you open your eyes, the daylight pours in
>Sunlight! No!
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>be Anon
>have femdom fetish
>buy pony mare slave
>order her to act like your mistress
>she takes out her frustration from years of abuse on you
>doms you harder than you ever imagined
>most amazing sex of your life
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>>25450931
>she can't bring herself to treat you the way she was treated
>when she finds out you're not going to hurt her she curls up in a weepy mess in your lap and clings to you tightly
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>>25450931
>>25450983
I'd read this.
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>>25450793
>The day has come too soon!
>Why are the blinds open?!
>...Shit
>She cleaned the rest of your room while you slept
>The hell was the time, anyway?
>You grab your phone from the side of the bed
>...It's 2pm, fuck
>She said she worked on a farm so she probably always gets up real early
>May as well go have breakfast, fuck that it's way past lunchtime
>You raise yourself, only for the bed to creak horrendously
>...
>Oh right, you threw yourself onto it last night
>Probably broke it
>You get down onto the floor and lift the mattress
>Yep, as expected, you broke a few slats
>Good job, you're a skinny fucker that managed to break an oak bed
>Dumbass
>...No... you also put a crack in the frame where the slats were
>Bigger dumbass
>You still had some cash coming in soon
>You could always get another bed frame
>Wooden beds were more expensive than metal ones
>But metal ones didn't squeak
>Easy choice
>You power up the PC before going to the kitchen
>Honestly never seen it cleaner
>The counters shined and the walls were actually their proper lilac colour, as opposed to a dark shade of mauve
>Impressive little pony, that cowgirl
>Where was she, anywho?
>Your mind doesn't immediately jump to the thought that she ran away
>That would be rude
>...
>What if she did thou--
>Oh, here she is
>"Afternoon, Bucko. Y'aint a mornin' person, huh?"
"Heh, I don't really like the sun. I burn easy."
>"That why ya wear the nasty animal skin?"
"I'll take overheating in the sun over burning from it, anyday."
>"Seems stupid t' me, but whatever. Cleaned that bathroom o' yers. It was disgustin', same as yer room."
>"How th' hay d'ya even manage t' get so much hair an' dirt about the place? Ya don't even got no fur!"
>...You shave a loy
>Like... a LOT, a lot
>Not that you'd tell her that
"I'unno, I just... don't clean too often."
>"Have ya ever?"
>She turns away, huffing
>...You purposely look away as her tail flicks in annoyance
>You didn't want to see mare vagina
>Please turn back around
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>>25431801
very interest
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>>25448340
So not race war. Still worse somehow.
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>>25449811
That's assuming he doesn't try to kill them first.
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>>25450931
>>25450983
YES


>>25451179
Thank fucking god you're back
>not wanting to see mare vagina
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>>25451179
>"Ah'm done with th' house. Y'aint got much of a garden t' clean, thankfully."
>Oh right, you had one of those
>The state of that--
>"Th' state o' that garden is a crime, Bucko."
"Not really."
>"It is, aint no reason t' let weeds get that outta hand. Y'aint supposed t' let the bad nature overtake th' good."
"Never really been a green thumb."
>"If there's one thing ah am, it's a green hoof. That garden won't believe itself when it's all nice an' tidy."
"You sound like you'll enjoy doing that?"
>"Ah work on ah farm, ah take pride in bein' able t' work th' land. ...Even if it aint muh own land, s'the closest ah'm gettin'..."
>Oh, shit
>That means going outside
"Ah fuck... uh, cowgirl, not sure how to say it, so, just gonna say it: You can't go outside."
>She looks at you, but then stops
>"...Oh, right. That."
"Sorry?"
>"Ya should be, Bucko. Ya should be..."
>She trots off briskly, no doubt to her room
>Fuck
>You just keep doing so well here, dummy
>You just turn towards the fridge and grab a pack of bacon
>...Wait
>You place it back and grab a box of cereal off the top of the fridge instead
>She hated the coat, she'd hate the smell of dead, cooked pig, and seeing it be eaten, no doubt
>A bowl of Weetos were fine though
>But you wanted some Golden Nuggets
>You fucking loved you some Golden Nuggets
>You wanted to get some Lucky Charms
>That super tasty American cereal, that shit was real gorgeous
>You sing to yourself as you fill the kettle for a nice morning cup of tea
"Drive the cloud away,
We will fall from last to none.
The dark before the dawn,
The world will carry on.
Look for the light that leads me home--"
>"Nice singin' there, Bucko. What'cha brewin'?"
>You awkwardly stop singing as your face flushes from embarrasment
>You never were a good singer
"Just making a cup o' charlie."
>"Beggin' yer pardon?"
>Pony don't speak cockney, ya twat
"Tea, sorry."
>"...Got green tea?"
"Nah, don't like the taste."
>"Shame. Guess ah'll... go t' mah room."
>...Damn it
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>>25451691
Are all the slave pony fags not here or something? Nothing to confirm to our beloved green providers that we're still listening?

Cocksuckers.
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>>25451735
Hey now, don't call these faggots a bunch of cocksuckers, that's just rude!

Also, it's fairly dead here. I'm just writing this out because I want to finish it and not leave it hanging for those that are reading it.
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>>25451691
Reporting in as listening. Silence does not indicate absence; I'm waiting for them to finish dumping.

In any case - not sure if it's intentional, but AJ seems to be becoming more... familiar with Anon. Even her insults seem to be more for the sake of insulting (probably so she can keep the whole master-and-slave dynamic straight and her own bitterness fueled in her head) than any actual real personal grievance.
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>>25451761
Lurker here, thanks for deciding to finish it.
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>>25451812
It's just complete indifference. AJ hides her feelings on the inside as best she can. She does have outbursts, but for the most part she puts on a mask, same as she does in show.

At least... that's how I see her.

>>25451824
Oh aye, no probs.
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always lurking for greener greens
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>>25450931
>>25450983
I'll write a thing when I get off work tomorrow.
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>>25451845
Makes sense, yeah. She's just throwing insults around because it helps preserve the mask.

Patiently waiting to see the mask slip again.
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>>25451691
Song, for anyone interested.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2B8bXYXTb-o
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>You really don't want her to have fuck all to do
>The thought of entertaining her enters your mind again
>Although you doubt she'll go for it
"Hey, er, cowgirl, do... do you wanna come watch a film with me?"
>She barely supresses the laugh
>"Heck no. Ah'd rather be doin' nothin' in mah room than be 'round ya longer than ah need t' be."
>Ouch, hurtful
>But come the fuck on
>Cut the shit
"I'm trying to be nice here. I realise buying a slave was a bad move, but hey, think about it, better me; a scrawny piece of weakshit that wont hurt you, than some fat, greasy fucker like the guy that brought that blue pony."
"For all you know, he could... he could be doing some pretty bad shit to her. He's probably keeping her drugged like the seller recommended."
"From what I understand, you can't get home, otherwise you would have tore off and done it by now, and that sucks, I really, really do, feel for you. Honest truth there."
>You pause, her expression is stern, but she isn't butting in
"I aint drugging you, I aint... doing stuff to you. I just want you to clean house, that's all."
"But that doesn't meant I want you to be bored and alone. I don't want you to... to be alone. That's really bad. No one wants to be alone, cowgirl."
>You stop again, thinking over your words
>The comment about the blue pony would likely piss her off, but you'd deal
>And yes, originally you'd hoped, for some reason, that your fucking slave of all peopl-- er, ponies, would be happy and spend time with you
>She just glares, and snorts in annoyance
>"Ah don't care. Ah'd rather be alone than deal with ya at all."
>That had to be a lie
"You talk to me of your own accord. You don't like being alone. I can read people when they're being obvious."
"You don't like me? Fine, that I can handle, but don't fuck yourself over on account of me, alright?"
"Call me stupid all you want, but even a slave deserves friendship, right?"
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>this world is a dangerous place for ponies
>my master taught me all about it
>when master bought me I was really really scared at first
>it didn't take me long to figure out he wasn't gonna hurt me though
>he told me all the mean and nasty things that some other masters do to their ponies
>and he made me promise to never run away so that I'd never get hurt like they are
>I still miss my home back in Equestria but... since the portal was destroyed, I know there's no way I'll ever get to go back... I had no choice but to accept my new life here
>life's not so bad
>I mean, once you get past the idea that you're somepony--erm, *someone's* property
>master is always super nice to me
>always eager to give lots of hugs and kisses and belly rubs
>sure it gets lonely while master is away at work
>but I keep busy
>after all, it's not too much to ask for me to take care of the chores around the house in exchange for his love and protection
>master works really really hard to give us a nice home
>he never hurts me or threatens to punish me but he insists I earn my keep
>I don't mind
>in fact I enjoy doing the very best job I can to keep him happy and show him how much I appreciate everything he does for me
>he feeds me really yummy and nutritious food
>lots of fresh fruits and veggies, sometimes he'll even surprise me with a cookie or a cupcake, and he stocks up on the nicest first or second cutting of timothy-alfalfa hay every year and I get to eat as much of that as I want whenever I want
>my tummy never goes empty
>and whenever I get sick or hurt he takes really really good care of me
>sometimes he even misses work to stay home with me if he's really really worried
>I even have my own bed! It's super comfy, but most of the time I like to sleep with master...
>I always feel safe in master's arms
>I just wish other ponies could be as lucky as me...
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>>25452343
That last line hit pretty hard.
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>>25452343
>last line
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>>25452343
>You're not quite sure where all that came from
>But it was the truth; no one should be alone
>Hell, even Hitler had his wife and dog in the end
>Wait, bad example, he killed them
>The point was still there, sort of
>Kinda
>She just kicks a hoof
"Look, like you said, we aint gonna be 'besties' or whatever, but that don't mean we gotta be enemies, aye?"
"It might sound really gay, but... I just... you know, want you to be happy."
>She looks you in the eyes, and sort of... scrunches up her face
>You're not sure what she's doing, but she is thinking about something
>"Hold up a darn sec."
>Alright
>"Ya... ya didn't jus' buy me fer cleanin', did'ja?"
>Well... not really?
>"Did... ya want companionship? From a slave?"
>Yes! Er, well... sort of?
>"Ya gotta be kiddin' me, Bucko."
>Shit, her expression turned real dark
>Oh fuck!
>You barely have time to dodge the hoof as it flies towards you
>...You also don't manage to dodge
>Her hoof collides with your side and you cry out in pain as something definitely breaks
>Oh fuck, oh fuck, oh fuck!
>You're going to die at the hands of a pony!
>Hooves, rather! Whatever!
>You don't fight back, fuck that, she'd hurt you more
>All you can do is cower, tighten into a ball, and hope she doesn't fuck you up too bad
>"YA WERE GONNA DO THINGS TA ME, WEREN'T YA!?"
>Another hit, more pain, but nothing else cracks
>Ribs really hurt...
>"YER A NASTY CREATURE, YER DISGUSTIN', AN' AH'D NEVER DO ANYTHIN' LIKE THAT WITH YA!"
>You never wanted that! You... just wanted a friend...
>You were in so much pain
>The hits kept coming
>They smack against your back, your legs... the arm that covers your chest, and the one protecting your head
>No caved in skulls or sternums here, please
>...
>...It finally stops, everything hurts so much
>Tears are just pouring down your face, but you refuse to cry like a little bitch
>You remove your arm from your face, pain lancing through your body
>She's sitting on her arse, crying her eyes out...
>The fuck?
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>>25452512
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>>25451735
It's past midnight in some places. Give it time.
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>>25452512
Man, this guy is such a bitch.
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>>25452512
>Patiently waiting for the mask to slip
>2 story posts later it slips, hard.
Writefag delivers!
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>>25452512
>Why the FUCK is she crying?!
>You're the one that just got your arse kicked by your little pony
>She raises a hoof again, so you cover up, again
>No hit comes, thankfully
>She's back to pissing her eyes out
"Why... the fuck... are you... crying..."
>You manage it out between breaths, it's hard to speak
>Kinda hard to do for some reason
>Oh wait, the pony just fucked you over
>That's why
>But... there's no rage from you
>You're not angry
>Well, okay, you're a little angry; you're the one on the floor and SHE'S crying
>You're mostly hurt, and confused
"Fuck... this..."
>You just about succeed in pulling yourself to your feet
>Leaning against the wall and gingerly hugging your side, you move towards front door
>You snatch the car keys from the side table when you manage to get there
>Cowgirl pone continues to sob to herself
>...You know what? Fuck her
>Not literally, but just... forget about it all
>She wants to go? You won't stop her
"When I... get back... you... don't have... to be here..."
"I don't... care... anymore..."
>Fucking hell your ribs hurt
>Using everything you can for support, you drag yourself to your rustbucket of a car
>You aint even wearing proper clothes yet
>You're still in a T-shirt and... tight boyshorts
>Not the best clothing choice, really
>Shit it's not like you planned to get your ribs broke
>You get in your car and slam the door shut
>...You take a breather for a moment
>You didn't close the door, but fuck it, it doesn't matter
>The car protests, but eventually starts up
>The engine growls, and you go towards the local hospital
>The journey takes time, much to your displeasure
>Your side burns, and you can feel the other places cowgirl punched coming out in bruises
>You carefully lift your shirt as you reach some red lights
>The area where your ribs broke is a sickly, angry red, and the skin is ever so slightly broken
>Fuck... pony hits hard
>Her strength was... scary

>>25452582
Not every man is a tough guy.
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>>25448766
But if anon be white knight true.
then what the fuck will you do.
if zebra he saves
and no longer enslaves.
Who's linguistic traits.
and the horrific debates.
of writing such dialog emanates?
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>>25452672
Thank god you're back! I'm really enjoying your green
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>>25452672
I really hope I don't see where this is going.
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>>25452531
>>25452638
>>25452723
Yay responses.

>>25452734
Colour me intrigued; where do you think this is going?
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>>25452746

>Anon goes to ER
>Gets treatment
>Tells them his pony did it
>Law gets involved
>Pone relationship is jeopardized
>All because every story in the world has a mindless protagonist with absolutely no foresight
>wasnt even smart enough to lie and say it was somebody else's pony, like a pink one with a fucking... hair dryer cutie mark or something


Just a guess.
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>>25452777
HA. No.

But spoiler alert: I love bad ends.
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>>25452790
Gonna spite you with radio silence for a while for this.
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>>25452777
I miss read that as, they removed her cutie mark and branded her.
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>>25452777
>>25452790
>>25452801
>Anon dies from his injuries
>authorities find applepone in Anon's home and it turns out they don't give a fuck, end up selling her to >>25446341 , >>25446406 , or >>25446531
>bad end
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>>25452790
But everything here is going that route. Be original. Have a good end.
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>>25452847
Anon, if it makes you feel better, I am preparing a story with a good end
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>>25450443
Whoops. Missed a bit there, yeah - I meant her legs were curled against her body.
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>>25452863
Not really. This is the story I'm invested in
:^(
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>>25452820
>Anon dies of his injuries
>Authorities find applepone in Anon's home
>Autopsy reveals Anon died form blood-loss caused by several, deep laceration caused by pony hooves.
>Apple pone is put down by the ape man.
>end
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>>25452891
>Apple pone escapes the ape man
>We then follow her as she adventures across America's heartland
>Jumping from one location to another as she tries to figure out what to do with herself a-la Of Mice and Men.
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>Want to write a story involving Roseluck
>never been a writefag before
>typing up ideas in advance before just jumping in
>thinking slice of life/sappy/good end bullshit

Please don't let this die too soon
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>>25452951
We've got at least another thread, maybe two before we reduce the frequency of Slave Pony Auction threads to a weekly basis. Take your time.
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>>25452672
>Almost an hour and much pain later, you arrive
>You park near A&E as opposed the car park around the way
>Stepping out the car, you rest on the bonnet for support
>Your determination is really the only thing that gets you to the doors of A&E without collapsing
>...You do collapse when you get inside, thankfully against a wall
"Doctor... I require...some... assistance... please..."
>Yes you were using TF2 quotes, fuck off, you're allowed to, you're injured
>A nurse rushes up to you with a wheelchair very quickly
>"You look like you got into a fight with a horse!"
>Oh lady, if only you knew...
>She sits you down gently, wheeling you to somewhere where there is presumably a doctor or nurse that can treat you
>"I'll need to know a few things; how did youget like this, for one?"
>Oh that's easy, nurse; my little pony beat me up
"Fell... down... some stairs..."
>"That is what most people say, yes."
>"If you don't wanna tell me that's fine, but whoever I take you to is going to be more direct."
"No, really... I had... a few drinks... and fell... down the pub steps..."
"I'm... a clumsy drunk..."
>"Speaking pretty coherently for a drunk guy."
>Shit why was this lady so intrusive?
>She stops you as she nears a desk with a receptionist
>"Is there anyone available in X-ray? I think this mans ribs are broken. He's having trouble speaking and his breathing isn't level."
>She taps a few keys on her computer and looks up not a moment later
>"Dr. Sturges is available in 5 minutes. She'll be in X-ray shortly."
>The lady nods
>"Good, good, thankyou."
>And you're off again
>You pass several wards, you lose track of how many turns you take though
>Every hospital you go to, it always looks like the place was built piece by piece rather than built at one time, it's all a massive misjoined maze
>Oh wait, X-ray, next turm
>She wheels you in as a doctor enters from a side door
>"Ah, afternoon, sir. I'll be seeing to you for this X-ray today, my name is Dr. Sturges."
>Hey doc
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>>25452951
>Topcute flowerpone
I will be looking forward to this.
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>>25452982
>Looks like you got into a fight with a horse
kek

I'm heading off for tonight, but keep this going. I'll be back tomorrow in search of more.
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>>25452982
Keep going with the glorious green!
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>>25452375
>live the good life
>anon busts his ass all day to bring home a paycheck to support both of us
>all I have to do in return is keep the house clean and be good company
>and they say I'm the slave...
>heh
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"Hey there, doc."
>The nurse helps to lift you up, assisting you as you sit down onto the gurney
>They both help you lay back, and neither one has commented on your current state of clothing, yet
>"So, my first question to you, sir, is why are you half naked?"
>...There is is
>"Woke up... pretty late..."
>"And then went straight to a pub half naked?"
>Jesus, lady, shut up
>"Let me guess, he 'fell down some stairs'?"
>The other lady holds back a laugh
>"Yep, he's also apparently pissed."
>The doctor looks you up and down
>"Doesn't look drunk to me."
>The fuck is this, the C.I.A?
"Damn... doctors are... way more... intrusive... these days..."
>"Can't do our job well if we can't help fully."
>Just scan me, lady
>The nurse heads out as Dr. Sturges moves that scan machine over
>You don't know its name, you just know it does a scan of your bones
>"Hold still, please."
>No problem there, doc, hurts if you move
>...
>...
>...
>"Alright, just stay there for now. I'll get these up."
>You're left alone for a moment as she leaves to another room
>You need to think of something, they wont let this go, apparently
>Then again they can't hold you here
>...What should you say?
>You're obviously not going to say 'An orange pony with a cowgirl hat beat me up'
>Then again, she might buy that and think you're off medication or something
>But then if she thinks its hard drugs the police would get involved
>...She's back rather fast
>Placing the scanned images up onto a lightboard, you can see a lot of damage from where you lay
>"Hm. Damage to the Scapula, going from the 4th and 5th rib, going onto the 6th rib proper, damage goes onto the Costal Cartilidge, displaced on the Sterum, and a hairline fracture going through the lower Body near the Xiphoid."
>"That is very extensive. Did you piss off a donkey?"
>What is with these people today?
>"Nope... I just..."
>"Fell down some stairs? Yeah, got that part."
>"What about the bruises all up your arms and over your legs?"
>Shit, didn't notice
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>>25453198
Almost forgot I wasn't supposed to be talking to you.
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>"Look, I can deal with doctor-patient confidentiality just fine."
>"But I hate liars. So please just tell me the truth here, sir."
>She says this while grabbing a needle
>No! No! Fuck that!
"No... needles!"
>"Sir, you're very injured, you need something to lessen the pain. Our operating rooms are full right now and you'll need to wait."
"No... please! Just... just give me... a medi drink... or something..."
>"Sir, those are made for persons aged 15 or under."
"Then give me... a triple dose... or something... but fuck... needles... please..."
>She looks at you, but nods
>"Alright."
>Thank fuck
>It takes her a minute to grab what she needs and create the right dosage of the purple stuff
>You knock it back the second she hands it to you
>Tastes awful
>"While that kicks in... I need to ask you a few things."
>"This looks to me, like domestic abuse. Do you have a... boyfriend? Does he hurt you?"
>The fuck, woman?!
>You're not gay!
>Why does she think you have a boyfriend??
>"Not to openly assume, I just, you know; you're wearing womens boyshorts, you have long hair, you've shaved your arms and legs, and you're... well, effeminate?"
>Er, lady, you're REALLY assuming, there's a whole LOT of open assumption here!
"I'm not gay... Dr.... I just... don't like being... hairy... is all..."
"Looking nice... doesn't make... someone... a homosexual..."
>She raises her hands in defence, clearly seeing that annoyed you
>"I'm sorry, sir, shouldn't have assumed. Sorry. But I need to know, is it partner abuse?"
>"I really should have said partner, I'm sorry, I really do say silly things sometimes. Been warned before..."
>Well, at least she admits she's a twat sometimes
"No... no girlfriend either... I live alone..."
>She raises an eyebrow
>"There's no way you could do this to yourself... did you get into a fight, then?"
>Fuck, just roll with it
"Fine... fucks sake... fine... I got... into a fight..."
>"See? Was that so hard?"
>"I'll pass you to a ward until we can treat you, okay?"
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Anyway, my fellow wankers, Fallout 4 has finished downloading on my personal PC, so I'm off to play that now.

Updated my pastebin, so gonna play Fallout, sleep, and continue this later. Promise ya, aye?

This story aint as long as my gay femboy Spike story in pastebin, this is 1030 odd lines so far, that one is double about.

But I think this'll end up being a bit more or longer.
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>>25453398
Don't forget about us in the Commonwealth. Make sure to visit.
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>>25453402
Oh aye, mate. Gonna clear out some Raider dens, kill some Muties, repair some shit, find legendary loot, shag Macreedy if I can, and get back here soon as to continue.

>tfw your F04 toon is AJ
Got me Salvadio's Hat and the Gunner Harness. Cowgirl as fuck.
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>>25453425
Once you start playing fallout 4, you won't ever want to stop. In 4 days i've racked 40+ hours. Definetly worth the money.
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>>25453398
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Well. I don't have things planned out too far in advance but I've got some general ideas and a bit to post before I run off to bed. Rose story incoming!
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>>25450467
meh. don't let that asshole discourage you. it's not like anyone will know it was you.
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Rose-colored glasses:

>You’re not really sure what you’re doing here in this stuffy warehouse. The smell of sweat and livestock permeates the air as shady looking individuals crowd around a small raised platform in the middle of the building.
>This isn’t what you had in mind when you mentioned needing a maid but when Chris gets like this there’s no stopping him.
>You met Chris back in High School and ended up friends throughout college.
>Chris was always more proficient than you at everything. Looks, friends, girls, work, etc. In no time after graduating University he was more successful financially than you could ever hope to be.
>His only real flaw is he tends to drink more than he should and throw his money away on whoever is around.
>This time it was you and he insisted he buy one of these unfortunate animals to “assist you”.
>“Hey anon, what about that one? She’s got a sweet ass man!”
>Chris whoops, smacking you on the back. He motions to one of the animals chained to others in a line awaiting their turn to be sold.
>It’s a sad looking unicorn mare with a yellow coat and a cerulean mane.
>Her coat looks dusty and her mane is obviously in need of care, but she does have fairly plump haunches. Two blue hearts and a green heart accentuate her flank.
>Your face goes red.
"Come on man, fuck you, I’m not porking some dumb horse…Besides don’t the ones with horns need special meds or something?"
>It’s been three years since ponies were enslaved and integrated into the human world as property.
>You’re not wholly unfamiliar with them but you never planned on owning one yourself so you don’t know much about them.
>You vaguely recall some news story from a few weeks ago about a unicorn that stopped taking magic suppressants and turned on its owner.
>You don’t want to get into something like that.

Like I said, first time writefagging so I apologize if it's rubbish.
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>>25453565

>Chris continues to stew in his drunkenness and jab at you every so often when he notices a particular pony he wants you to consider.
>You act disinterested in all of them.
>You’re still unsure about this whole thing.
>Some of the ponies are mumbling incoherently to themselves. Most are crying silent tears.
>Chris starts to get insistent on you choosing one before they’re all sold.
>His buzz is fading, making his mood turn sour.
>He grumbles about you letting the one with the sweet ass get taken.
>You start making up excuses for each pony to buy more time.
>Too thin. I’ll have to spend a ton in food getting it back in shape.
>That one has a weird butt mark. It’s a dolphin, what does that even mean?
>I don’t like that one’s colors.
"They all look so sad man. Honestly we should just go home."
>You watch as a purple pegasus is sold to an enthusiastic buyer and the next pony is unchained from the rest and led in front of the crowd.
>She’s one of the regular kind without any horn or wings.
>You think they’re called Earth ponies but you don’t remember why or how you know that.
>Her coat is a soft cream color. Her mane and tail are two-toned. A deep raspberry with lighter streaks.
>Adorning her flank is a mark in the shape of a flower. A single rose.
>There’s something off about this one though.
>This one is actually smiling.
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>>25453462
You're too late. A friend of mine decided to be a fag enough to spoil it.
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>>25453604
I'm not aroused but I'm hard.
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>>25453604
Not bad for your first green. Keep going!
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>>25453604
>This one is actually smiling.

Creepy
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>>25453604
>Whereas you witnessed a few others being forcibly dragged onstage this one practically prances onto the platform with no hesitation.
>The auctioneer starts reeling off important details before the bidding begins.
>Young
>Previously owned and experienced
>Obedient
>Good health
>Suitable for housework, breeding, whatever your pleasure
>He’s really talking her up and in between each point he makes she gives a playful little twirl of her tail or turns herself around cheerfully to let the bidders see her from multiple angles.
>She seems to be deliberately showing herself off and smooths her mane back with one hoof.
>All the while her light green eyes shine bright and she has that sweet little smile on her face.
>Compared to the others it’s absolutely bizarre.
>Chris has a shit-eating grin on his face and before you can stop him he shouts out some ridiculous figure.
>No one else can even come close to matching it, the rich fuck.
>The auctioneer pounces on the offer.
>The little rose pony gives a happy squeak and does a quick little dance on her tiptoes (Tiphooves? Whatever.) like she can’t contain herself.
>Your eyes dart around nervously. It’s too cute and it gives you an uncomfortable feeling that she’s so happy to be property.
>You catch a glimpse of the ponies that are left unsold in chains and you notice a few of them are looking at the cream colored mare with odd expressions.
>You're unsure if it's resentment or just sadness.
>Just like that she’s led offstage on a leash and a worker approaches Chris to take care of the paperwork involved with his purchase.
>Somehow the leash ends up in your hands. >She’s looking up at you with those big eyes and an expectant smile.
>”Hello Master! Thank you so much for your generosity. I’m going to be a very good girl for you!”
>F-fuck your heart.

That's all I've got so far. I've got to leave but let me know if it's worth continuing!
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>>25453659
>corny enough to denote acting on Roseluck's part
>awkward enough to be completely sincere, leaving room for alternate character development
>sperggy enough to appeal to my inner autist

more
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>>25453768
what
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>>25453778
What did I miss
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>>25453659
Who is this pone? Is it an OC?
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>>25453813
His exact words:

"and save every fucking scrap of aluminum and anything with gears in it like those fans. anything with oil is good too"
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>>25453871
You joking m8? It's Roseluck.
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>>25453871
>not reading the thread
>>25452951
>>25452994
>>25453678
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>>25452375
>>alfalfa
flake your hay!
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>>25453659
i liked it. man it's goin to be hard on her when she realizes hes not rich.
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>>25453659
Yandere slave/maid Roseluck?
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>"Hm. Damage to the Scapula, going from the 4th and 5th rib, going onto the 6th rib proper, damage goes onto the Costal Cartilidge, displaced on the Sterum, and a hairline fracture going through the lower Body near the Xiphoid."
This cunt. This goddamn cunt.
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>>25446531

Here's something I shit out.

>The whip cracks through the air.
>Applejack flinches as it lands on her coat, cutting a clear line on her flank as it does.
>A faint red line drips from the wound.
>”What kind of horse can’t pull a cart? Put your back into it!”
>Applejack grits her teeth and tries to pull herself forward.
>The rough leather rubbed against her skin.
>Despite her best efforts, the cart doesn’t move.
>The whip cracks down again, leaving its sting.
>Holes begin to form under Applejack’s hooves as she tries to move.
>Her hooves slip under her, and for a second she’s simply suspended in her harness until she finds the ground again.
>Pain flashes through her back as the whip hits her again.
>It’s relentless, never giving her any rest.
>The leather digs into her sides as she tries to pull the cart, only for it to stay still.
>Another lash hits her back.
“Please, I’m trying. It’s too heavy, you need to take something off. Please stop hitting me.”
>”Are you talking back to me? Bad horse. Bad.”
>The whip cracks down again, harder than before.
>Tears begin to spring into her eyes.
>There’s another lash.
>She should be stronger than this.
>Back in Equestria, she would have been able to pull this cart easily.
>But that was before the starvation and imprisonment destroyed her muscles.
>She keeps trying to fulfil her impossible task.
>The pain of the whip pales in comparison to the pain of her own weakness.
>The whips strikes her again.
>Her flank is a mess of red and orange by now.
>Her tail tries desperately to protect her, but is torn apart under the leather of the whip.
>There’s a brief break.
>”I should have brought your idiot brother. He’d be able to pull this cart. Unlike you.”
>Applejack takes a pained breath.
>”Please, I’m trying. Please stop.”
>She’s replied by the whip.
>Through the pain, she takes a deep breath.
>And pulls.
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>>25454652

>The cart doesn’t move.
>The whip comes down in increasingly cruel strokes.
>Her legs, having dug great tunnels beneath her, finally give out.
>Her master gives her several more whips while she’s down.
>Applejack only flinches and cries.
>She should be stronger than this.
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>>25454652
>>25454656
Brutal
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>>25455690
>>
>Dear Princess Celestia,
>I bought your student last month at the pony auction and I have to say, money well spent.
>Things were a bit rough at first. I had to punish her severely several times. Did you know that unicorn horn grows back after you cut it? Me and Mr. iron file sure found out. Say what you will about Twilight, but she can scream like a banshee when she has too.
>Anyway, It only took me two weeks to break her in properly. She really hates it when I fuck her in the ass, but she knows that if she doesn't let me do it to her then that filly I bought with her gets to take her place.
>I've not once had to fuck that filly. You should be so proud of her.
>You may be wondering how I even got to send this to you. I've been weening her off her magic suppressant drugs. You shouldn't worry about my safety though. If I should die then ownership will pass to my brother, and he isn't near as nice as I am. Twilight found that out on the two weekends I lent her to him.
>Sharing is caring after all.
>I've enclosed a whole photo album to show you how she is getting on and what wonderful things she's learned. Best wishes and love.

>Sincerely,
>Anonymous

>p.s. She was gagging on my dick the whole time I wrote this letter. If she knows what's good for her she'll finish the job when she's done being passed out.
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>>25453659
Well, this is different! I'll hang on to see where this one is going then too.
>>
>Be Rizzle
>You go to the auction house to buy some slaves
>You sit down
>You get up
>You buy a beer
>You sit back down
>You wait
>Five minutes have passed
>You're staring at your watch
>Place is beginning to fill up
>Auction still hasn't started
>Thinking about leaving
>Auction starts
>You get back in your seat
>You swallow some saliva
>First item is some crack
>You wait for the crack to be auctioned off
>Some hillbilly buys it
>Second item is a slave child
>Too weak and not sexually appealing enough
>What's the point of having a slave if you don't get to fuck it?
>Third item is a rare plushie
>Gets auctioned off to a dweeb
>Fourth item is a lamp
>Getting impatient at this point
>Fifth item is a slave pony
>Thank fuck. Was thinking about leaving
>Looks afraid
>Looks sexually appealing
>Looks more physically able than slave child
>Had some very good physical restraints attached
>In that moment, You knew that slave was worth buying
>Fuck yes
>Bid started at $25
>You volunteered $50
>Some faggot bid $70
>You bid $100
>No one was willing to pay upwards of $100
>Fucking score!
>People start to file out
>Collect slave pony
>You lead her along while she stares at the ground
>Buy another beer
>You head home
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>>25453398
I will be waiting, you glorious feelsthief.
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>>25453325
I need more, I need resolution.
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>>25456747
>>25456311
Seconded.
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>>25453659
Added your story to the pastebin.
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>>25456102
Toppest of kecks, good sir.
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>>25456221
>not just buying the lamp and wishing for best pony as your slave
>>
>ponies are a slave race
>attach themselves to a Host race
>serve them
>unknown to the Host race, as long as the ponies are treated well and lovingly there is great prosperity in their world
>however
>if the ponies are mistreated, the ponies magically disappear and the Host world is destroyed in its entirety
>the ponies then move on to find a new Host race
>Earth isn't the first Host world
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>>25459266
Would enjoy being on the human end of this regardless of the outcome.
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>>25459266
Meh. I don't imagine ponies would bring anything new to that.
But the war between the ponies and the DearS for the right to serve mankind? That I would read.
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>The big day has finally arrived. The auction of the century, something ten years in the making.
>The last of the pony royalty to be sold. The initial price was already one hundred million dollars, with a minimum bid of five million.
>The projected final price point was, of course, around five hundred million. The wealthier Actors, businessmen, Saudi Royalty—people from all walks of life were set up to bid
>So, of course, you were planning on showing up and ruining absolutely everything.
>You scroll upwards on your phone as your driver turns off the highway. Twilight Sparkle. Alicorn. Female. Intense magical prowess. You wonder briefly how they kept that in check, until you notice a subtle discoloration in her horn. Hm, must have filed the real one down and glued a fake one on. Surprisingly common maneuver for things like this.
>You stretch out in your car, yawning. The only question now is when to bid. Just at the final moment could be interesting, of course, but letting the poor girl suffer in agony... Well, you were going to cause her agony enough. You might as well have her tender.
>"We're here, sir."
>You sigh and step out of the car as your driver speeds away. You're going in through the back entrance, of course. You would rather avoid the media frenzy that is likely to follow if you enter from the front.
>You nod to the security guard as you open the steel door, stepping inside the concrete building. The Paris Auction house. You're rather insulted that they didn't have this in the New Orleans market, but you suppose that the French did have an eye for detail southerners lacked.
>Your shoes make almost no noise on the floor. That's what you get when you pay for quality craftsmanship. And they're damn comfortable too.
>The auction house is already filling up by the time you walk in. You wear sunglasses inside, but you're not the only one. No, there's plenty of people here who don't want to be known.
>Thirty minutes until auction time.
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>>25454652
>>25454656
Nice. I liked it.
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>>25459614
>You look over the crowd again. There's a few faces you know. Not many of them friendly, of course. The high-class slave market is quite competitive.
>You grab a glass of wine from a nearby server, taking a sip
>It's French wine, of course. Not nearly as good as the stuff from California, in your opinion. An opinion you might not share with most actual wine critics, but it's what you grew up on.
>Still, it's decent enough. Something to calm your nerves a bit.
>It's been quite a while since your last purchase. You're looking forward to having some new blood in your slave-house.
>"Ladies and Gentlemen, I would like to welcome you to this very special auction."
>Ah, it's starting.
>You listen to the man's description, which matches the website exactly
>He does throw in a tiny detail with a crusty smile, however:
>"And we can confirm that she is, indeed, a virgin!"
>Your heart rate increases a bit
>This auction was almost ideal before, but now...
>Yeah. You're doing this first bid. You have to have her.
>They bring the trembling pony out onstage in chains
>She tries to keep a brave face, but the terror in her eyes is obvious
>Aw. It's adorable.
>"Prime condition. No scaring from capture. Turn around, now..."
>The pony does a little turn, showing off the side
>"All that time hiding out in the badlands has made her a little skinny, but it's nothing a good diet won't fix! Our physicians have verified that she is in peak condition."
>The pony turns around again, to face the crowd
>"Alright, then, folks. The bidding shall start at $100 million. You may write your bid on one of the provided cards. Raise it above, and I shall call the highest bid."
>You grab a card from a nearby table and scribble down your bid
>"Alright. Ready? The auction begins..."
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>>25459701
>A gavel slams on a pedestal
>"Now!"
>You hold up your card
>"I see one oh five, I see one fifty, I see two hundred, I see—"
>The auctioneer's eyes land on yours
>"I see a jokester!"
>You take off your sunglasses, and he pales
>"O-Oh."
>He clears his throat
>"Seven hundred and fifty million."
>The room goes silent as everybody turns to face to you
>"God DAMMIT, Anonymous!"
>Ah, Ricardo
>You always hated that fucker
>You smirk in his direction
>"Well, if there are no more bids..."
>The gavel slams again
>"Sold!"
>You smile
>Easy.
>For a moment, you and your new property lock eyes
>Man, if looks could kill...
>Not to worry, though. You'll soften those eyes soon enough.
>They always soften in the end.
"My transport is already in the bay. Bring her there."
>You turn and walk away
>The crowd behind you murmurs
>"Well, there's the last we'll ever see of her."
>It's true.
>You never paraded your property out in public, like most other high-level slavers.
>You have your reasons, but the speculation... well, it's wild.
>A lot of people think you just kill them immediately.
>As if. If murder was your thing, you'd be a lot smarter to purchase a bunch of $75K maids or whores
>It would be more economical
>Well, let them think what they think.
>You don't give a rat's ass anyway. What matters is that Twilight Sparkle now belongs to you, not what other people think.
>You have big plans for her.

I'm getting dinner. Should I continue this?
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>>25459760
>>Ah, Ricardo
>>You always hated that fucker
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>>25459760
Not the perspective I'm addicted to but tastefully written. I'd stalk this shit. More.
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>>25459760
i'm cautiously excited...continue
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I'm surprised to have not seen the scootaloo anon or sweetie anon in this thread yet. Guess they must of had a heart attack or something.
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>>25459760
Wait, is this going to be Anonymous betrays Equestria? 'Cause hell yes I'm down for that.
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>>25459760
>You settle into the transport
>Not as comfortable as the sports car that bought you here, but that would be much too small to carry your new slave. And, of course, your current priority is her.
>She stands chained in front of you, looking at the floor.
"They replaced your horn."
>The words hit her like a physical blow. She shudders and the chains shake violently against the loops they're fastened to.
"Yes, I know. So any plans you had about threatening me aren't going to work."
>She doesn't respond.
>Hm. Hopefully this is more strong silence than submission.
>Submission would be... problematic.
"Do you know who I am?"
>No response
"Answer me."
>"Go to hell."
>Ah, that's more like it
"Oh, I undoubtedly will. You see, I am Anonymous. You know—of Nameless Portal Technology Holdings."
>Her face whips upwards, teeth grit
"Yep. I'm the one responsible for all this. Bridged our worlds and brought all that misery upon you. Of course, that was indirect. This is... Going to be less so."
>You turn over your shoulder, at the Plexiglas wall that separates you from your diver
"A bit of privacy, please. I was going to wait until back at home, but this is too delicious to resist."
>The wall goes dark instantly
>Twilight snarls and tries to lunge at you, but she's held back from her chains
"You have retained your maidenhood. I'm impressed. That's rather hard for... ponies out there."
>Your mouth starts to go dry, heart pounding in your chest
>"I don't intend to lose it."
>Her voice is low. Dangerous.
>Alluring.
"Hm. Honey, I don't think your intent matters."
>You glance over at the wall again
>Good
>You press a button on the wall and her chains unlock
>She looks down at them, mouth open.
>Then she dives at you, pinning you to the chair
"I'd... appreciate it if you let me explain before killing me."
>"Talk. Fast."
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>>25459760
Moar
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>>25459760
Please for the love of God continue this. White knighting is fine and all but I need a good bad guy slave owner story. One that doesn't disappear forever in a few posts.
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>>25459787
I don't know what the gif is supposed to mean in this context.
>>25460214
"You aren't the only person out-of-world in this car. I'm Anonymous, but not the right one."
>Twilight tilts her head downwards, pointing her horn down at you
>Christ, this is tense
>It's also turning you on, which is pretty fucking awkward
>"You expect me to believe that?"
"I had you tied up in chains, completely defenseless, two seconds ago. At the very least you should believe I don't intend to harm you."
>"They talked about you."
>Her voice is barely audible
>"About the other slaves you purchased. About—about my friends."
>Her voice cracks there
>"None of them were ever seen again."
"They're alive."
>"Safe?"
"Not really."
>She grunts and jabs a hoof into you
>"What do you mean?"
"I've... I've only been here for three years, Twilight. I can prove that much. But that means that the other guy..."
>"No excuses. Tell me, right now."
>You exhale
"Post traumatic stress and all sorts of abuse issues for Applejack, Fluttershy, and Rarity. Dash is mostly okay, but he had a few of the Wonderbolts too, and a, uh, a thing for breeding. She's... She's a good mom, but, well..."
>You swallow
"Pinkie is my newest acquire. She, uh, didn't take well to the mental state of the others."
>Twilight is shaking again
>Probably with rage instead of fear this time
"I—I swear, that was not me. Not—not the me you're talking to, anyway."
>Twilight doesn't respond, keeping you pinned to the chair
>"You have thirty seconds to prove to me that you aren't lying."
"Here."
>You grab your phone and use your fingerprint to log in. The security camera app is where it normally is. Page one, bottom-right corner. You navigate to the slave den section and hold it up for her.
>Even though you were unable to select a camera (Twilight isn't letting you turn your head), the image on the screen is apparently enough
>She snatches the phone away from you and gazes at it, captivated.
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>>25460381
the plot thickens
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>>25460381
>Dash is mostly okay, but he had a few of the Wonderbolts too, and a, uh, a thing for breeding
Unf.
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>>25460279
>>25460253
Oh shit I think I betrayed you guys.

I was intentionally making it seem like a bad guy story so I could pull this twist, I'm sorry.

Really hope this isn't tanking the story
>>25460381
>"Oh Celestia, Fluttershy—your wing. Oh Celestia, your wing. What did..."
>She swipes again, then covers her mouth with her hoof
>That must be Rarity's camera
>You had about the same reaction when you first saw this shit
>She swipes again
>"Dash—Dash. Pinkie. I..."
>Another swipe.
>You recline back in the leather seat. She hasn't killed you yet. So far, so good.
>You barely have time to exhale before she's on top of you again
>"You did that. You had to."
"I—Look, we've been over this!"
>"You really expect me to believe that?"
>Twilight takes a step onto the chair for better leverage
>In doing so, she brushes against your crotch
>Her eyes go wide in shock
>"Are... are you..."
"Yes, I am, I know! I can explain that too!"
>"You're—You're sick!"
"I know! L-look."
>You take a breath
"The world we're in is—it's like a version of my world but with everybody's bad qualities amplified. Not quite the evil universe stereotype, but it's a world where everything is just a dozen times worse. Or, at least, that's what I think it is. I don't know. Unlike my counterpart, I am not an award-winning scientist."
>"So..."
"So my bad qualities are a weird tendency to fantasize about other places and, uh, the shitload of weird kinks I have. Amplify that and you get a universe-hopping sex terrorist."
>Twilight blinks
"I know, I know. So he invented portal technology and, uh, you know what happened next."
>"And how did you get here?"
"He used his portal to get into our universe and then committed suicide."
>"What?"
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>>25460545
Don't sweat it, anon, the edgefags have Submission is Mandatory if they want a bad guy story, I'm intrigued by this so far, please continue.
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>>25460545
>alternate universe award winning scientist with a perpetual boner
I....Okay. Sure. I want to see where you're taking this.
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>>25460570
I feel thats why we havnt merged with SiM, we are the white knight version and i love it
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>>25460532
>Breeding Spitfire
Double unf
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>>25460545

Welp, now I'm interested as well.
You better not disappear like the others did.
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>>25460545
"My universe, not ours. I—Okay. So one of my other really bad qualities is this, uh, weird desire to be loved by people without deserving it. So, when his slaves didn't eventually start loving him, it... drove him a bit nuts. Then he saw my world, where I was... You know, I was doing okay, I guess. I at least had friends. Which he didn't."
>You swallow
"So he shows up in my room one night. Crying and screaming about how he couldn't make them love him. Then he, uh, well... blew his fucking brains out."
>"You expect me to believe this nonsense?"
>You roll your eyes and grab your phone again, pressing your fingerprint to it once more
>You navigate to a folder in its media section. It's marked off with a lock, so you press your finger to it again.
>The folder opens, and you select the relevant video, then hand the phone to Twilight.
>It's not a very long clip
>You only thought to start recording near the end
>Twilight watches until just after he pulls the trigger.
>Not that there's much after that
>Your phone was covered in blood by that point
>"Okay. I... I will choose to believe this for now."
"Yeah. So I, well, I had a portal in front of me, and an alternate version of me had just finished rambling about being insanely rich but unhappy. So of course I decided to check it out. Then, once I got there and saw what he'd done, well."
>You swallow
"I had to try to fix it. Somehow."
>"Three years. That means all your friends..."
"Yeah, they all think it was me who blew my brains out. Probably. I haven't been back."
>"Hm."
>Twilight steps off you again.
>You glance down at your phone
>Fucking shit
>You're going to be at the airport in five minutes
"Okay. Look. You have to get those chains back on, like, right now."
>"Chains? I will not—"
"Yes you fucking will, because everybody thinks I am some kind of weird monstrous sex pervert and I cannot blow my cover."
>Twilight stamps a hoof
>"You're expecting me to be awfully trusting."
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>>25460570
>implying SiM isn't a tripfag circlejerk husk of a CYOA that has all abandoned clop for "complex" stories

Is it so wrong to seek out my >rape fix in a thread that explicitly covers that area? It was agreed on and even put in the OP that this isn't solely white knight general

>>25460545
I'm still with you m8 I enjoy the white knight stuff here to. I just thought this was going to be different.
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>>25460666
Please Satan, may we have some more?
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>>25460666
This is a bunch of mind fuck right now satan. But I like it, its diffirent and has a kind of a twist to it.
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>so, a slave auction, definitely a new place for you
>but thanks to a few connections you are in on the first one
>And according to your friend this one is perfect
>These six were perfect, they were apparently the heroes of their world, and a prime sampling of what it had to offer
>2 of each race, sure to satisfy a buyer's need
>The place wasn't as crowded as you expected, though considering this was all underground it shouldn't surprise you
>meandering around the floor were an amazingly diverse set of people, some were the fat encouraged lot you expected to see, but others were completely normal.
>The typical neighbours you never expect
>Before long the goods were finally trotted out for display
>they slowly crossed the old wooden stage, chained together, not one of them willing to meet the gaze of onlookers
>A cacophony of jeers erupted from the crowd
>It was a true, a new species, sentient, but not human
>Enough to get around those pesky laws, and still serve a purpose
>The crowd went silent as the auctioneer yelled for attention, dragging forward the first piece of meat.
>It was an orange pony, cowboy hat on it's head, covering its eyes
>No text was wasted as the auction began, bids came from everywhere around the room
>eventually it settled on a middle aged man, surprisingly, who played a sum of 2 thousand for his prize
>Though you couldn't see her eyes, you could see tears hitting theme floor, as she said something to the rest of her friends.
>pulling out a black book, you quickly not down whatever details you can on the pony and winner, before they bring her back stage and start anew on the next horse
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>>25460666
"There is literally no time to fucking argue about this. Chains. Now."
>Twilight takes a moment to look you in the eyes
>She squints. Then, mercifully, she steps back into the shackles.
>You press a button and they latch onto her again
"Okay. Try to look, uh, traumatized. I—Shit. Okay. Do you mind if I punch you in the face?"
>"What?"
>Twilight's voice is enough of a shout that you worry for a moment that your driver will hear her
"He thinks I was raping you and the other guy was known for violence, okay?"
>"This is—"
>You groan. Well, if she isn't going to cooperate willingly.
>You swing backwards, then drive your first forwards
>Right in the eye socket
>Twilight falls to the ground, mouth open in shock
"Sorry. Also, uh, try to salivate a lot. Like... Like get it all over your face."
>"S-Salivate?"
"So it looks like you just got done performing fellatio on me."
>Twilight shakes her head
>"I will not do that."
"Okay, fine, whatever. Now, look traumatized."
>You take a moment to adjust your tie.
>Big mansions. Gold bars. Science. Rape.
>Now back in character, you press the button on the wall once again, turning off the privacy section.
"We are near the airport, yes?"
>"Half a mile away, sir."
"Good. I trust everything is safe to transport her with me?"
>"Yes, sir."
"Even better."
>The entire process of loading the plane takes about an hour
>You're so terrified throughout most of it that you barely notice what's going on
>Twilight fucking Sparkle
>The complete set
>All six
>If this plan actually works...
>Eventually, you find yourself sitting on the plane.
>You set out a bottle of wine and pour yourself a glass. Twilight stands chained a few feet in front of you
"Want a drink?"
>"Water. If—if possible."
>You nod and reach into a fridge, pulling out a bottle
"Spring water. That stuff is ten dollars a bottle. Tastes good, though. Or—expensive, at least."
>Twilight struggles to lift it with her mangled horn
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>>25460753
>The process continued down the line
>a slave was dragged up, auctioned off, and pulled backstage
>surprisingly none of them put up a fight
>you wonder what treatment they must have had before this
>The only one you truly felt bad for was some white unicorn who got auctioned off to some fat autist in a fedora and trench coat.
>Thought people like that were just a meme, but here he is, spending his NEET money on a fucking slave.
>Halfway through the auction their was a bit of a break
>You took the chance to meet up with your connection
>really just a friend of a friend, but he was enough to get you in
>And thankfully a bit of a braggart
>he was on the team that captured the ponies, and was awfully proud of getting the jump on them
>He was now working security for the auction
"So, is this the turnout you expected?"
>"hmm? Oh, hey Anon, yeah, was hoping for more, but hey, easy money is easy money. I think once people realize this is the real deal the money will come rolling in."
"If this is the best their species has to offer, it shouldn't be hard to get more
>"oh man yeah, they were so trusting when we arrived, they had no idea what was coming, we were ju-"
>with a quick hand wave you cut him off from the rest of his story, the rest of the auction was about to begin, and you had to be ready
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>>25460545
I much, much, much prefer this version. Thanks, anon
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>>25460840
>Even so, she manages to lift it to her mouth and drink
>She chugs the whole thing in one go, tossing it aside. She then glances down at her chains.
>"Can you let me out of these?"
>You press a button on your chair and they unhinge instantly. From what you could gather, the other guy made them like that so he could play with his pets easier on trips. Most other transport planes kept the slave in constant bondage, for obvious reasons.
>"The others. Celestia, Luna. S-Shining. What about them?"
>Fuck
>You were hoping she wasn't going to ask that
>"They're, uh... Somebody else's property. This guy Ricardo."
>"Ricardo?"
"Yeah. He's, uh, probably the worst fucking human being I have ever had the misfortune of interacting with. Extremely wealthy, though. Unfortunately, other me didn't really care for alicorns, so they wound up in his hands."
>"And? Are they alive?"
"Yeah. They're... they're alive."
>Twilight's face falls
>"Your tone of voice makes it obvious that something horrible has happened to them. Can you cut to the chase?"
"He brings them out in public a lot. Dresses them up real nice. Takes them to operas and charity dinners, that sort of thing. Even Shining."
>"That... doesn't sound so bad."
"Well, I've actually talked to them. Me and Ricardo bump elbows fairly often, even though I try to avoid it."
>You swallow again
"He's a breeder. So... They're, uh—I'm not going to get into the details. But the stuff the other me did with Dash is, uh, well, that's smalltime compared to this."
>Twilight bites her lip
>"I—is there anything you can do?"
"I've tried. He won't sell them to me. The guy hates me because I cut all contact with him. Real me, not other me. Other me was using him for tips on, uh, the stuff with Dash, and promised him the foals. A promise I went back on, of course, because it was fucking horrible. He didn't see it that way."
>Twilight sits down
>"H-how did my brother react?"
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>>25461020
"Shining? He's the primary broodstallion. Strong muscles, good genetics. It was obvious, really. I suppose that's the best outcome for him, really—at least he can make sure he doesn't hurt them. I mean, I do think they're all treated fairly well, I just... something about it doesn't sit right with me, you know? Treating them like cattle. It's almost worse that he treats them well, because I know he's just doing it to keep the value of the offspring."
>Twilight closes her eyes
>"At least they're okay. B-Better than Fluttershy."
"Yeah. Even if that isn't saying much..."

Done for tonight. I will try to continue tomorrow but it's probably gonna be a bit rushed because I have a lot of things going on in my life and I can't really afford to devote a shitload of time to this

Sorry
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>>25460601
Kinda like a SinM (submission is not mandatory)

image related because i miss my defective pony green
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>>25460951
>You made your way into the center of the crowd as the next round of bidding began
>surprisingly someone managed to buy both of the next slaves, a couple pegasi.
>they looked relieved to be together at the very least
>Though looking at the buyer you didn't seem so sure they would be happy.
>Late twenties, skinny little shit with glasses, looked like he hadn't seen the sun in years.
>doesn't matter, writing down what you can you wait for the main real reason you came.
>A purple unicorn was the last on the chopping block
>Like the others she refused to look into the crowd, but you could see in her eyes a look of defiance
>good
>The bidding began at 2 thousand
>You upped it to two and a half
>after a quick, but frustrating bidding war you raised your hand
"Ten thousand"
>And that was it, you just bought yourself a slave
>The auction was over, but the crowd was assured more were coming, and soon.
>The patrons all left save for the five of you who made a purchase
>led backstage you found the ponies stuffed into individual cages
>You were first to claim your purchase, and after a few assurance, and a rather uncomfortable looking collar and chain attached to her, you were ready to go
"Come"
>You command with a hard tug. She follows, looking down at the floor
>No time to waste as you drag her out into the garage.
>She could barely keep up as you moved to your car
>And old Wrangled, but it did it's job.
>You practically threw her into the back.
"Don't go anywhere"
>You slam the door behind you send quickly make your rounds through the garage
>When you got back she was still there
>In fact she hadn't moved a muscle
>It was only a few moments before you were on the road home, she was still sitting there, though now staring daggers at the back of your head
"Well little pony today is your lucky day, now, how is that magic of yours?
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>>25461079
Godspeed writefriend
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>>25461079
>>25461159
This is some good stuff you two. I'll added em to the pastebin tomorrow when I get back from classes.
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>>25461079
This has my interest.
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>>25461159
>She wasn't happy with that
>No, in fact, she was passed
>"I feel so lucky being taken from my home and sold off to some alien, oh, and just so you know, no, my magic doesn't work here, sorry to ruin whatever series plans you had"
>Unfortunate, but her mind was still useful
"And what plans did you think I had?"
>Your casual demeanor seemed to just make her angrier
>"Oh, I don't know, cleaning your home, cooking your food, doing other... things to me?"
"Things?"
>"Don't play dumb, I saw how you people were staring at us."
"Twilight, and yes I know your actual name, I think you'll like my plans for you, especially since they involve saving your friends"
>A quick look of shock flickered across her face before being replaced with the same rage from before
"Do you think that's funny?"
>"Its not a joke, I actually do want to help you"
>She didn't say anything for the rest of the ride
>probably still trying to decide if you were telling the truth
>It wasn't long before you arrived home
>living in the middle of nowhere has its benefits
>nobody to see you dragging a purple pony into your house
>popping the collar off you walked into your kitchen to pour yourself a drink
>despite trying to act calm, inside you the nerves were still raw
>You actually bought a slave
"Sorry about the mess, didn't have time to clean up"
>You saying making a drink, not bothering to pay attention to her probable look of disgust at what was your living room
>behind you you here her playing with what sounds like some pieces of metal
"What the he'll are you"
>turning around you see her magic does actually work
>In fact, she is using it to point your Nugget at your face
*click*
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>>25461079
Actually fuck it sleep is for the weak
"I just... Okay. How are you feeling?"
>"What?"
>Twilight tilts her head in the same way you've seen dozens of puppies do. She's just as cute, too. With the big eyes and the little collar.
>...Right. The collar.
"I asked how you're feeling. Because, uh, I have... I've been pretending to be this horrible, terrible person for three years. And I haven't had anybody to talk to. Dash, sometimes. Spitefire. But they—they went through a lot. They both have kids to look after. So that was...."
>The glass of wine catches your eye. Yes, that will help. You down it all in one go.
>"Are you okay?"
"No."
>You pour yourself another glass, hands shaking.
"I'm better than your friends. I've suffered, far, far less trauma. But I'm still not okay. So... Do you mind if I yell for a bit?"
>"Yell?"
"Yes. Yell. This room is completely soundproof. I often yell in here, actually. But mostly that's just to myself, and it doesn't have the same feeling, you know? I mean—that other guy went to an entire other universe to have somebody to yell at. Not that I was the target of his yelling. I was just somebody to—absorb emotion, I guess."
>You take a pause to drink the glass of wine
"And right now I could use somebody to absorb some emotion. But you've been through a lot, so—"
>Twilight holds up a hoof
>"I was mentally preparing myself to be forcibly deflowered up until several minutes ago. I don't think that yelling is going to effect me much."
"Alright. Uh, just, stop me if you need to."
>You take a deep breath
"I fucking hate this. I hate it. Like—Okay. So this is, this is a lot of really, really complex feelings here. So just—first off, this world isn't—a lot of this stuff isn't entirely unpleasant to me. There's—"
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>>25461361
Nothing turns me off faster than lousy capitalization and punctuation bro.
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>>25461361
Not bad man, keep going.
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>>25461361
And then any intent to help her went out the window and Anon savagely beat and raped her, right?
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>>25461422
>You pause for a moment
>No, that's not right
"Okay, step back. Everything here is unpleasant. It's horrible. But this guy is still me, just worse. So every fucking thing he does is something I like, but taken to a level where I hate it. And, uh, fair warning, some of this is going to be sexual."
>Twilight shrugs
>"I guessed that, from how, er, 'excited' you were earlier."
"Yeah. Okay, cool. Great. So we're on the same page. Awesome."
>You take another breath
"So I'm like a sex weirdo. I have fetishes that are a bit extreme. And this guy has those too, and he puts them into practice, and it's horrifying. The shit with Fluttershy? That's bondage–something I enjoy—taken to this level where it's so fucking horrifying that I want to throw up. I think that impregnation shit is hot, and this other guy decides to forcibly breed sentient beings. Rarity is mentally fucked up because that guy forced her to act like a pet, and beat the fucking SHIT out of her when she was bad. I happen to like that kind of thing in moderation and with consenting partners. All the shit he did is just a worse version of stuff I'm into. That's the only reason I didn't fucking flee back to my own world immediately. I had to stay and prove to myself that I wasn't this guy. That I was—that I was a GOOD person, and he was the BAD one."
>You notice that Twilight is sitting on the floor, resting a head on a hoof
>Studying you
>Well, fuck it, let her
>Maybe she'll be able to find out something useful, because you sure as hell haven't
"But—but beyond just me. I HATE this place. I hate every stupid motherfucker in it. I hate them. I tried—I tried to find good, but—"
>You run out of air and take a breath
"That auction they sold you at was TELEVISED, and he advertised your virginity. Fucking TELEVISED, and they aren't even PRETENDING. Every single motherfucker here is just—just totally okay with this shit. And I hate it. I can't—I HATE it."
>You take another breath
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>>25461568
"There's something just so—I hate that shit. I mean, if you're killing people, you're at least acknowledging that they might be a threat, right? You respect them at least a little bit. But that—just treating them like property. God. That's the most evil shit you can do."
>You stand up
"So—So just—Okay."
>You feel the anger slowly melting out of you
>Yeah, okay
>You're starting to calm down
>Or maybe that's the alcohol
>Whatever
>"I... understand your anger."
>Twilight's voice is quieter than before
>"I spent ten years out there. Listening to reports. It was sickening, but I held on. Held out hope. When I was captured, I... Well, it was hard to feel anything but terrified, I suppose. Then you bought me."
>She looks up
>"I guess this is about the best I could ask for. So... thanks. For being a decent creature."
"Anytime."
>You look out the window

oh fuck I'm starting to regret putting this bit in

was it too much?
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>>25461361
a chicken nugget? I don't get it. But please by all means continue.
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>>25461652
Nope

Keep going
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>>25461665
>He doesn't know the moist nugget meme

Your newfag is showing lurk retard
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>>25461652
That was cringey as fuck
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>>25461689
Yeah, that's what I was worried about.

I sort of tried to capture how the protagonist is basically going fucking insane, but I think a lot of my own cringe-worthy feelings on this kind of shit bled into it.

Fuck.
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>>25461652
meh a little weird but seemed mor like a shortcut way to explain the situation.

got a meh from me not that big of a deal. not bad just meh
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>>25450372
>blueball
Not the reaction I was hoping for, though it really is the one I should have expected.

>>25448700
>She bucks wildly, straining at the leather straps and steel cuffs.
>You’re no longer worried about the stallion hurting her – not half as much as you are about her hurting herself.
“Dammit, Apple Bloom!”
>You drop down beside her to hiss the words in her ear, trying to keep Steffords from hearing.
“Didn’t you tell me the most important thing in your life was your family?”
>She moans through the gag and continues to wrench her body this way and that, trying to pull the breeding stand apart.
“Your brother and sister and grandmother – you’re always going on about how much you miss them, right?”
>”Can’t keep your animals under control, can you, city boy?” Steffords laughs, though his stallion is straining at his lead. The poor pony stumbles at the end of the rope, obliviously lurching forward over and over, but never quite managing to go anywhere.
>Bastard can’t even remember how to put one hoof in front of another, or he’d be dragging Steffords along the floor.
>You try to ignore the man’s twisted cackling.
“Apple Bloom.”
>Her eyes are squeezed tightly shut, but she can’t keep the tears from spilling out.
“Apple Bloom, I can’t give you back your family –”
>The mare pulls at the neck guard with such force, you’re not sure what will give first – her neck, or the strap.
“ – but you can have a new one. Wouldn’t you like that?”
>She jerks her head back and forth frantically.
>Shit.
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>>25461740
“Is there anything I can do to convince you?”
>Apple Bloom continues to shake her head.
“Fine.”
>With a sigh, you heave yourself up and dust off your hands.
“Then I guess we’re done talking here. I’ll just have to hope this takes and you change your mind later.”
>Her eyes flare open in utter panic and she strains at the leather strap around her barrel. The buckle starts to give, the leather slipping bit by bit through the metal.
>If you don’t stop her, she’s going to hurt herself; if she hurts herself, maybe she’ll finally learn to listen to you.
“Go ahead.”
>You nod towards Steffords.
“Let’s get this over with.”
>”Sure thing,” he answers with a shrug. “Not like I’m getting paid by the hour.”
>You wait for it…
>”Probably should be, though. Hell, with the way stud fees have gone –“
>There it is.
“Just get on with it, Steffords.”
>You slump down on the floor – not too close to Apple Bloom, but not too far either.
>”You gonna sit and watch?” he asks with a sneer, nudging the stallion towards your mare with a riding crop. “Shoulda figured you for a horsefucker, the way you treat your ponies.”
“Just trying to protect my investment.”
>”Uh-huh.”
“I know that pony of yours doesn’t exactly know what he’s doing. I don’t need him killing my mare.”
>”Don’t you worry about that none,” Sheffords snaps back with a smirk. “Been doing this for four years and haven’t had one complaint yet.”
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>>25461429
Writing on a tablet, it has a mind of its own, sadly the damn thing did an update which erased all of my previous saves to its dictionary, trying to catch what stupid auto corrects I can

>>25461361
>Before her mind can even register what happened you grab the rifle from the air with one hand, and slap her across the face with other
"Really?! I say I want to help you, and you respond by trying to kill me?
>"I-I didn't know"
"Didn't know it wasn't loaded? Smooth move genius, These things kill, as in no more anon. Fine I know you've been through some shit, but is it that hard to trust someone enough not to kill them?!
>she's in tears now, holding her cheek
>"Trust?! How am I supposed to trust some ape who bought me at some horrible slave auction, why should I trust any of you when all you've done is hurt me?"
>Not the response you expected
>You storm off into your room without another word, only to return with a pistol in your hand
"You want trust? Here you go"
>She desperately kicks her way across the floor, into the corner
"Cmon Twilight, we're going to play a trust game"
>You say pulling the slide back and releasing it
"Take it"
>She shakes her head
"Take the fucking pistol"
>Hesitantly she grabs it with her magic
"Good, now, Pull the trigger"
>You can see the tears pouring down her face, her eyes clenched shut
>"I can't! P-please just stop. I'm sorry"
"This is why you'll never see your friends again, why your weak little species will just be slaves, bought and sold like cattle, because we're better. Because you don't have the guts to protect them. Hope your friends enjoy rape"
*click*
>Her eyes flash open, only to see your smug face staring back
"I'm not giving you a loaded gun you dumbass horse."
>You say grabbing the gun from her hold and placing it on the counter
>"you're crazy" she says between sobs
"The guy who caught you said none of you even put up a fight, I had to make sure you actually have a shit. Things are only going to get crazier
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>>25461752
>He whacks the stallion again, driving him towards Apple Bloom.
>Something – probably the scent of a mare in heat – provokes a natural response that no amount of brain trauma can erase.
>Apple Bloom screams into her gag as he awkwardly pulls himself onto her.
“Well, what about you? I don’t see you going anywhere.”
>Sheffords shrugs and stuffs his hands into his pockets.
>”Just like watching ponies get put in their place,” he answers after a moment. “Or anything, really.”
>There’s an awkward moment of non-silence – the stallion’s grunting and Apple Bloom’s sobbing are too loud for you to ignore – before the other man sits down beside you.
>”You know, you ever need someone to beat some respect into those ponies of yours, I’d be willing to help out.”
>Asshole.
>”Free of charge,” he laughs at your frown. “Just being neighborly.”
“At least none of my ponies are like that thing.”
>You jerk your chin towards the stallion.
>”Obedient, you mean?” Steffords cackles and grabs a small rock off the bare floor. A flick of his wrist sends it bouncing off the scar tissue covering the stallion’s head. “See? Boy don’t even flinch.”
“He probably can’t feel it.”
>”Course he can’t, but obedient is obedient. Don’t care much how it’s done.”
>Dammit, you hate this fucker. He just takes things too far.
“I gotta… check on something.”
>You laughs again as you stand and wander over to workbench at the far end of the barn. There’s some rope here that you pretend wasn’t coiled right, a few tools and bits of gear you shuffle around as if putting them away.
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>>25461762
>But mostly, you’re just trying to pretend you aren’t pissed that he’s right.
>Every squeal and moan from Apple Bloom stabs at your heart – that damn mare should just be quiet and do what she’s supposed to.
>”YOU’LL NEVER HERE ANYTHING LIKE THAT FROM ONE OF MY PONIES,” Sheffords yells, more amused than disapproving. “NOT LESS I WANT TO!”
“WHEN’S HE GOING TO BE DONE?”
>God only knows how much longer you’ll be able to put up with this piece of filth.
>”OH, IT’LL BE A GOOD WHILE,” Sheffords shouts back. “PONIES AIN’T QUITE AS QUICK TO FIRE AS REAL ANIMALS.”
>Shit.
>”GOTTA SAY, THOUGH, YOU GOT YOURSELF SOME GOOD STOCK. DAMN MARE OF YOURS DAMN NEAR LOOKS LIKE SHE’S GONNA RIP THAT STAND IN HALF. BET YOU GET SOME GOOD FOALS OUT OF THIS.”
>You better, considering the amount of money that was dumped into this deal.
>”I MIGHT EVEN BE INTERESTED IN BUYING ‘EM OFF YOU.”
>Apple Bloom screams again, so loud it hurts.
>Fuck this rope.
>Fuck all this shit.
>You sweep the workbench clear with your hand, throwing everything to the floor.
“WHAT’D YOU DO TO HIM?”
>”HUH?”
“WHAT’D YOU DO TO MAKE THAT FUCKING STALLION SO QUIET?”
>Aside from the stallion’s grunts, there’s total silence. You have to glance towards Apple Bloom just to reassure yourself she’s still conscious – and alive.
>She is, her ears standing straight up.
>”DIDN’T HAVE TO DO A THING!” Sheffords laughs. “THE SHRAPNEL BASICALLY DID IT ALL FOR ME!”
>Right.
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>>25461776
>The war.
>You shuffle back to the other man and throw yourself on the floor.
”Seems like the kind of thing you’d do to the rest of your ponies.”
>”It’s tempting,” Sheffords admits, “but the brain is a tricky thing – even theirs. His got torn up something terrible by that shrapnel and even them pony doctors couldn’t explain how he was still living. Not that they’d know a damn thing, anyway. Wanna know the best part?”
“Not really.”
>”Damn idiot kept mumbling about his family – that’s all he could say. Had to get back to his family and shit like that.”
“I said not really.”
>”But once they cut out the damaged bits, he shut right up.”
>You glare at the man, but he doesn’t take the hint.
>”I hear the government people tried to repeat it with some of the other prisoners, but all it got them was a pile of dead ponies and some official investigation into misconduct or something.”
>You pointedly look elsewhere. There – at that knot in the wall.
>Anything but at him or the ponies.
>”Course, it ain’t really all that special,” Sheffords continues. “After their first week, none of my ponies are much worse. See, that’s proof enough that those Humans First bastards are wrong – ponies are intelligent creatures. They’re capable of learning, so long as you beat ‘em hard enough and long enough. Not HIM, though.”
>You points towards the stallion.
>”He’s the exception. Haven’t had to put the boot to him even once.”
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>>25442342
I'll post when everyone else is done.
>>25443227
Very rough outline.
>>25446208
Fine
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>>25461784
>Dammit, she’s crying again.
>Should have brought some goddamned earplugs or something. Used a thicker gag, maybe.
>”Heh, looks like he’s almost got her broken in,” Sheffords chuckles. “Not much fight left in her now, but I know you like your ponies willful and disobedient, so I’ll do you a little favor and buy her off of you for –“
“No.”
>Sheffords shrugs and leans back against the wall.
>”Yeah, probably wouldn’t be worth it, anyway. That stallion’s probably only got another good year left – doubt I could get a decent line from these two in that time.”
“Bullshit, ponies live longer than that.”
>”Complications from his injuries or some shit like that. But you take my advice and close breed that mare – maybe you can get something good out of it. Too risky for my tastes, but you seem the right kind of desperate to give it a shot.”
>He pauses to give you a wry grin.
>”Assuming you get a decent foal out of this, I mean.”
“I better.”
>”Well I –“
>One look at you and whatever he was about to say disappears from his mind.
>”Yeah, I hope you do.”
>The two of you sit quietly, waiting for the big bastard to finish up. It’s not too much longer – just long enough for you to memorize the pattern of the woodgrain on the boards opposite you.
>”See you tomorrow, neighbor,” Sheffords says as he collects his pony and drags him away from Apple Bloom before he can start a second round. “We got, what, four sessions written up in that contract?”
“Yeah, see you then.”
>You don’t watch him leave, your eyes glued to the quivering, sobbing mare strapped to the breeding stand.
>Tomorrow, you’re bringing earplugs.

And that's another decent stopping point for the story. There will be more only if anon demands it.
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>>25461756
So anon is actually evil? What a twist!
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>>25461963
>anon demands it.
You're Damn sure we want it.
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>>25461756
>walking to the kitchen you down the drink you poured and take a deep breath
>She is still in the corner, crying
>"I didn't know it would kill you, the ones who took us, they had something similar, but those just put us to sleep. I swear, that's all I thought would happen."
"Most guns don't do that, they were using tranquilizers Twilight"
>You walk over to her corner and slide down the wall to the ground next to her
>You don't know what to say anymore, you knew she would be a little screwed up, but how can you calm a colorful talking horse dragged and enslaved into your world
>maybe you went a bit far with the whole 'shoot me' something
"I'm sorry, this isn't right, not at all."
>Her body is shaking, her head tucked into her legs.
"But I have an idea of who bought your friends, I'm sure we can track them down, save them. I know you don't trust me, but I know you're smart, that's why I picked you."
>Finally she picked her head up to look at you, her face still soaked with tears
"So grab some sleep, we get started tomorrow, and I need that brain of yours rested. You can use the couch, and if you're hungry, anything in the kitchen is fair game."
>You get up and walk back to your room, hopefully with the door posed you won't hear the sobs
>you're confident she won't run, you gave her enough hope to stick around
>with all this work, that bastard from the auction better be right
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>>25462032
Also, going to bed, will continue tomorrow
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>>25462032
So anon wasnt bad after all? Jesus christ these twists and turns are like a slip n side.

>>25462039
Goodnight. Very good work so far.
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>>25461963

Forced bigmac on AB, didn't know I wanted it this badly till now.
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>>25461710
I thought it was okay...
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>>25462093
Does AB even realise its him?
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>>25462203
Not yet but I'm sure she will. I wonder if he'll be able to stop himself or if he'll realize since it mentioned him not being all there mentally.
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>>25460057
>People were still interested in Sweetie Belle Story

Guess I'll dust off my old word doc then.

>>25441971
>It would be neat to do a double session with sweetie author once Rarity is trained enough.

Im confused as to what you mean by that
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>>25461963
Might as well finish the despair you've set up.
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Am I in the clear?
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>>25462239
I'm pretty sure she did realize it when he walked in iirc
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>>25442342
>Due to the recent increase in passengers the Bug was driving with just Melly.
>The ranger had given up it’s load of supplies to accommodate the ponies with Twilight choosing to sit with her kind.
>Even if they were ponies of a different world and life station it was still comforting to be around her own kind.
“So, it was the lack of work that drove you to earth?”
>The brown Pegasus, Bluegrass Wind with a cutie mark of a banjo, was by far the most talkative of all the ponies they had picked up.
>”Well… With the recent struggles people just aren’t interested in singing anymore.”
>Twilight scribbled this down in her note book, slowly getting used to using her wings to manipulate the pen.
“And you thought that earth would be better?”
>”We were promised food, and work, it seemed like a good deal.”
“Do you regret it?”
>”Well, I guess it’s better than starving on the streets, the influx of human music has put me and mine out of work for a while now.”
“But live performances have always been popular.”
>Bluegrass put her head down as if the weight of the two worlds was crushing her.
>”yeah.”
>The bed of the truck was silent once again, aside from the two humans in the cab singing ‘land down under’.
>Their voices were wrecked by smoke and hydrocarbons, but it was a true and soulful singing.
>Bluegrass’s head turned to look at the cab, listening to their incompetent attempt at music.
>”Sometimes… sometimes I really envy them.”
“huh?”
>”They never learn their calling; I wonder if they know how much freedom that grants them.”

I guess I am.
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>>25462536
>As the convoy rolled on distant gunshots could be heard.
>First they only heard the deep booms of heavy rifles and shotguns.
>Then the pops of pistols and small bore rifles.
>With a pitched whine of a flat four engine the baja bug came up alongside the ranger, occupying the oncoming lane.
>She couldn’t hear them over the wind noise but judging by the hand motions they were discussing the gun shots.
>After a few seconds a deep thump was heard and a red flare flew up into the sky before a long absence of gunfire.
>Zed climbed his way out of the passenger window until he sat on the door itself.
>He turned and shouted over the wind, Twilight could see that he had himself clipped to the frame of the truck to keep him from rolling out.
>”We’re going to help, you and the ponies wait her, Melly will stay with you.”
“Maybe we can help.”
>Zed smiled, a crooked smile of someone who just watched another shoot themselves in the foot.
>”Sure thing princess… No way to talk you out of this?”
>Twilight shook her head; Bluegrass simply looked up a tired stare.
>She didn’t say anything, rather her stare conveyed the ‘what the fuck princess’ message.
>Anon yanked on the steering taking the Ranger off the road as the bug followed.
>Looking behind the ranger Twilight could see Melly raise a very large handgun and fire.
>The cloud of black powder trailed behind the bug mixing with the exhaust fumes as the red response flare flew forth.
>She kept watching as Melly laid his 8mm rifle across his lap, and racked the charging handle.
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>>25461710
Well your on the my little pony section of a anonymous image board so this the correct place to test out possibly cringe inducing writing. Next time try to narrate anon saying how much he hates living in this particular world and hates acting a certain way instead of directly stating how fucked up something is. Just imply it through anon's bitching as it tends to read more natural if a character is being more selfish when they're bitching. Also try not to directly say how horrible something is morally when its really fucking obvious why its horrible. The characters disgust with it should be enough to give the implications if done right, otherwise it feels like preaching.

>>25461963
I know you didn't intend for it to be read this way, but that was hot m8.

>>25462032
So does anon have another motive behind this other then just saving them? Hard to tell he keeps flipping from white knight mode to mastermind villain mode. Don't know if this is intentional.
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>>25462553
>Looking forward, her regret for her decision doubled.
>Anon handed Zed his revolver, Zed tucked it into his belt as he leveled the mini.
>Her eyes caught Anons for a minute, there was no time to talk but she knew she’d hear about this later.
>A second flare sprung up in front of them, immediately followed by more gunfire.
>If the ride was bumpy before it was almost unmanageable now, the ponies clinging on any surface.
> The Ranger crested a hill and nearly ran over a middle aged human women with a .30-30
>All the ponies flew forward and groaned or yelp in pain and shock as the vehicle came to a sudden stop.
>Her ears turned to ringing as Zed immediately fired, and again. Quick imprecise shots.
>Melly leapt over the bugs windshield and ran to join the trio of humans.
>The woman pointed to the middle of a small valley where a kia Sorento had sunk into the ground.
>Taking a quick peak over the rangers cab Twilight could see the large bulky silhouettes of minotaurs ducking back and forth trying to close the distance
>Very few bullets were flying back at the humans as they hid behind their slight rise of dirt.
>The vast majority of the projectiles coming back were arrows or crossbow bolts.
>The woman ran back to one of her own and started speaking hurriedly as Anon lurched out of the ranger dragging his rifle with him.
>Turning around he grabbed the winch hook off the front of the ranger and motioned for Twilight to stay down.
>With that he turned and ran at the Kia as the humans laid forth a new barrage of fire.
>She tensed for a moment, Bluegrass making eye contact with her and shaking her head.
>Vaulting out of the bed she ran fourth, after all, she was the princess of friendship.
>Plans formed in her head about how to bring an agreement between the two parties.
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>>25462573
>As she ran past Melly made a lunge for her, but only managed to grab the end of her tail.
>She stumbled forward a little but quickly started running again, flapping her wings for a slight boost.
>The shooting suddenly stopped as she entered open space, Anon took a glance back from under the half sunken Kia.
>He had a look of pure fury, but quickly went back to hooking on the winch.
>Twilight slowed to a trot as everyone had stopped fighting.
“What caused all of this?”
>She could only hear the ‘s’ sounds of the minotaur’s words as they spoke amongst each other.
“If it’s an easy target you want I’m sure we can reach an agreement!”
>The humans on the other hand took this chance to top off their guns.
>Anon gave a thumb up to Zed who ran back to the winch, and waited for another command.
>Without warning a Bolas came flying out from the minotaur lines, catching three of her legs.
>Both sides resumed firing.
“By authority of the Caterlot crown, stop fighting!”
>With a wave of his hand the Kia started moving, being dragged out by the power of smittybilt.
>The kia moved quickly, the series wound winch hauling the vehicle across the soft sand.
>Anon jogged alongside the Kia firing over his head.
>Coming up to Twilight he grabbed her by the bolas and kept running.
>”And I thought you were smart.”
>With a flurry of motion the humans piled into their vehicles, but this time Zed stood in the already crowded bed of the ranger.
>he clipped himself to the roll cage and began firing again, the ponies below shielding themselves from the hot casings.
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>>25462582
>Anon threw Twilight into the passenger foot well of the ranger, before jumping into the drivers seat and shifting into reverse.
>As the truck sped up the disconnected winch almost took out the leg of the middle aged woman as she ran to the drivers seat.
>Twilight couldn’t see what was happening but soon the rocking and bumping smoothed out and the sound of gun shots disappeared.
>After a few more minutes of silent driving, save for the ringing in her ears, they slowed to a stop.
>she attempted to move her head to look up, but couldn’t get the right angle to see anything other than the bottom of the ranger’s glove box.
>Suddenly her bonds were cut and she was lifted out of the uncomfortable position and set down on the hot tarmac by Melly.
>He had a grim look as Zed unclipped himself from the roll cage, and started looking down at the ponies.
>”Anypony hurt?”
>The bed of ponies gave various replies, most no, a few sarcastic, one or two complaints about getting bruised on the ride.
“I’m fine.”
>Zed looked back down at her with an unreadable expression.
>As Melly gave her a ruffle on her head Zed put his rifle down on top of the cab and let out a sigh, Anon put his rifle against the truck and ran a hand through his short hair.
>Melly smiled at Twilight.
>”It was a nice try, glad to see someone still cares.”
>Anon walked over to the Kia which had a mean sounding idle problem
>He smiled put his hands on his hips, and spoke out in a loud, but not yelling voice.
>”How bout you kia people?”
>The door swung open and the middle aged women brought her .30-30 to a low position.
>”You’re not a slaver are you?”
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>>25462590
>The rest of the doors on the Kia opened as a few more humans piled out, young children, they had their weapons close.
>She could see Zed grip his rifle.
“No! No, they’re not slavers.”
>The lady turned to the ponies in the bed.
>”Well?”
>They shook their heads, she relaxed.
>”Sorry, just, looking out for my kids is all.”
>With that out of the way they stopped in the road for a quick group lunch.
>Twilight was still very on edge, the sudden change seeming unnerving to her, but natural to everyone else.
>As a thankyou the family in the Kia brought out a big 5 pound bag of honey sweetened granola.
>The sugar was just the sweet thing Twilight didn’t know was missing.
>The Melly, Zed, and Anon had taken to the side of the road with the young kids and a few of the ponies.
>Anon had said that when they reached Vegas he needed to talk to her privately, she already knew about what.
>Bluegrass and the few remaining ponies took a place in the shade of the vehicles and napped their quick break away.
>A soccer ball flew back and forth as they played their improvised game.
>This left Twilight with the Mother of the children.
“So… You don’t agree with the use of indentured servants?”
>The mother scoffed, leaning back against the Kia and watching the soccer match.
>”Please honey, they’re slaves plain an simple.”
>Twilight struggled trying to eat the grainy granola with her hoofs.
>Even the most basic of tasks had become near impossible in this world.
>”So why you heading to Vegas?”
“Oh, actually were heading to…”
>It might have been the recent events, but suddenly she didn’t feel so comfortable telling random humans where she was heading.
“Boston.”
>”Good luck.”
“I think we’ll be fine, After all, these three seem to know how to… not die.”
>C’mon Twilight, you can think of something better.
>”Well, jus know that the Griffons are takin’ over d-dog land. Better armor up that truck there.”
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>>25406929
>The wind gently swept through your ears.
>You could hear her every breath. The way she turned from tense to relaxed.
>Her gaze was difficult, filled with brimming emotion that was difficult to decipher.
>You are Rarity
>And you are confused, miserable, and hurt.
>It started with your feet. Nails drove a beautiful looking silver shoe into your hooves.
>Ordinarily it was so beautiful you would have been amazed at the quality and make.
>The joke was of course with no magic and no desire to let their new live stock and draft animals make use of it, that meant driving the horrible thing into your hoof with nails.
>You had been walking on metal for months, and your hooves felt constricted, sore, and soft from the metal constantly pounding against it with every step.
>For the first time in a while, did not have to feel horrible soreness at every step.
>Your hooves are covered in something this new human put in.
>They reminded you of their own shoes.
>Soft on the bottom, with some kind of elastic substance, they didn't fully help, but broke the impact of the shoe with the hard ground.
>There was hay everywhere, flaked over green but sparse grass.
>You felt too on edge to eat, but that seemed to be the intention.
>This was a round pen, you'd been in one before.
>Your first owner, before the shoes, seemed to delight in running you around with a whip non stop in here.
>Even now, despite your quivering fear and uncertainty with the human in front of you, the dominant part of you simply said to run in circles.
>But you weren't being threatened or moved.
>You lowered your head a bit, taking a nibble of the grass, both green and hay.
>It was Rye and Fescue.
>It was bland but far from awful.
>Even eating, you could clearly keep an eye and ear on the human.
>She still didn't seem interested in you.
>Even thinking about her and your circumstances caused fear and shakes
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>>25463181
>It wasn't so much that you didn't think you could take her, but that you knew you couldn't get away with it.
>To add insult to injury, you could feel that she was getting to you.
>She didn't fight fair.
>But that sounded so hollow as well.
>Fair? She approached you with a garden tool and nobody protection despite your reputation
>If you weren't worried about breaking or tearing something in your leg, you could have taken some scrapes from that rake.
>She wasn't afraid of you.
>And because of that confidence, fear trilled your spine.
>It was the kind of confidence that you only ever really saw in one pony.
>You didn't want to think of her right now.
>Your feet still hurt, but they where better, and with the halter and rope draped loosely, despite being caught you felt unconstrained.
>It would have to change, but it would change.
>Hooves trembled and shook as your gentle quivering turned to quaking.
>And right now at least you didn't have the courage or endurance to keep fighting.
>"The slow way is the fast way" you hear her mutter.
>She seemed unusually loose with her lips and yet contradictingly tight with them.
>Why would she be so silent, and yet when speaking, never seem to say much directly to her at all
>Maybe that was part of her plan to break you.
>You where just an animal to her, nobody that had to be talked to.
>And the worst part was that it was working.
>Not even a day and you where shaking like a small filly.
>The trembling sometimes outshone the pain of your injured hooves.
>Joints ached from being primed for use after being so stiff and cramped.
>And now you where in this circular pen, given free range of movement, and hobbled no more than a lead rope drawn over your withers.
>The isolation from before, the angry and loud men, that haughty woman who was responsible for your dreams of having your hooves amputated.
>All of those things seemed to vanish into your new handler's clarity.
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>>25463191
>Made all the more remarkable by how successful the awful strategy was.
>Fight, and you will be run ragged, Obey, and you received instant release.
>Even when she was lying she gave you space, cajoling you gently.
>The feeling of ropes, bits, pain, and panic where instead replaced with the slow poison of a step by step procedure.
>All to allow you to remain calm while she stole away your freedom.
>Never so slow as to let you get distracted
>Always slow enough to feel the full force of shame at your suddenly submissive behavior.
>You grazed and grazed, you knew little time passed, and yet it seemed like hours already in your mind.
>Piecing together the realization that this human was winning by a land slide, and as dull as you had become from months of mistreatment, you figured out why.
>It was easy to fight when that was just as easy as obeying.
>Your previous owners didn't ever give you any sense that obedience could make things less unfathomably torturous.
>And by the time you realized what your new handler had been up to, it was too late.
>In your confusion you obeyed, in your confusion you stood and contemplated, facing her.
>She moved away, and it repeated, and in that short time, you had made the ultimate folly, and tasted the sickly sweet drug of obedience.
>If you told yourself ahead of time, to ignore it, to realize it for what it was, maybe you could have avoided it.
>But now you knew exactly why your bones trembled and your back seemed to sting with ominous fear and submissiveness.
>Because it knew how to make it all stop.
>What was once before an unending battle, your body, lesser mind, and instincts all knew to get reprieve all you had to do was obey.
>Face forward, ears forward, both eyes, like a school filly before class started.
>It was horrible, awful, the worst possible thing!
>Because you needed to fight, you needed to keep going, to preserve your momentum.
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>>25463195
>But you wouldn't. you could feel it from your hooves to your ears.
>Kill her, cripple her, get her to go away so you could wind up with someone who was too stupid to let up from the abuses you endured.
>It would be so easy, but you where poisoned.
>Your heart and hooves would not let you do what your mind knew you must, they rebelled from rebellion, to become turncoats of submission.
>Wobbling, your hooves bring your barrel to the ground.
>The sound of nickering and a newborn child emanated unquenchably from your throat.
>Salted rivers bubbled down your cheeks, matting fur and the halter together.
>You shut her out, vision swimming under the sea of your misery, unable to behold the catalyst that broke the dam that held your angst.
>In between your cries, you greedily sucked in saliva and swallowed, while your subconscious was finally forced to address the disharmony you had been dealt.
>Unable to bring yourself to say their names, despite almost needing to, shouting them in your mind for your quivering and singing voice box that refused to
>Twilight, Rainbow, Pinkie, Applejack, Fluttershy, I wasn't strong enough, I wasn't strong enough.
>Your cries followed the tempo and tone, but enunciation was beyond your delicate mind.
>Even still, roughly, and nearly unintelligibly, you called out.
>"Oh Sweetie belle" pained vocal chords cry out.
>Your sobbing continued, and even as shock and fear flowed through your distracted mind from her touch, you did not flail, flee, nor rise.
>Soft, gentle, though they seemed so much like claws in their thin-ness, the texture and gentleness were more like a minotaur's hand.
>Eyes peeked through swimming currents, to see her distorted shadow fall over you as she knelt, poised to spring up, and yet without her rake.
>Disgust and need warred with you, your malefactor behaving like the benefactor you needed so much right now.
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>>25463207
>Weak and self loathing as you are, you don't give in and let her draw you forward.
>But even so, you correctly let her comfort you without incident, and even her posture shows a distance, she loomed to the side rather than over you, not even truly facing you.
>Eventually, her hand withdrew and she gave you more distance.
>You yourself were able to pull yourself out of your misery.
>You lumbered to your sore hooves, feeling the blood work its way into your legs where the nails did not constrict its flow.
>Desperately you shake images of your panicking sister, pulling on her collar as you stand horrified, dumbfounded, and impotent from your mind.
>Not enough, never enough, there wasn't a price humans could pay to fix all this.
>Anger and weakness fills you.
>You are as emotionally raw and resentful as you are tired and unwilling to fight any more.
>Bringing even a battered shadow of harmony to your mind had taken much of you.
>Even still you can feel your handler was too a bit frayed.
>Never the less, she approached you confidently.
>She took the lead rope, in her other hand was the rake.
>This time, the blunt end was facing your way.
>You are almost mesmerized by the way she seems willing to bare more encumbrance for no benefit in cajoling you.
>That is until you feel it press against your croup, and hear her click your tongue.
>Instinctively you move your hind legs away, but your tired mind takes a bit to piece together the order.
>She's stepping behind your withers as she pushes with the rake, and even to your tired mind, the answer seems straight forward.
>'move'
>You are reminded of the man for a moment, heedless and implacably swinging a whip as he flailed about striking you for seemingly any imperceptible motion
>Numbly, you begin to appreciate unconsciously the complex skill this human seemed to be dealing.
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>>25463209
>Definitely not in any way in admiration, nevertheless, the tight control she had not only over her body, but the way she seamlessly presented herself was night and day from your old owners.
>'turn away'
>She would speak only with her body, stepping for you with the rake cutting in front of your fore hooves and drawing her hand with the lead rope back, before swapping the two as you slowly learned to complete the motion.
>'turn in'
>She would counter your turn as you looped around her, this time you stumbled, your natural inclination was to move away, but with your aching hooves and with a blurring of time, minutes? An half hour?
>You slowly understood without any words her motion, stepping back instead of in, yet still in front of your forward motion.
>She switched hands frequently with the rope and the rake as you passed.
>Ironically she seemed to regard the implement with as much contempt as you did.
>Never the less you did make her use it a couple of times in your confusion.
>The both of you never seemed in much hurry, You where not forced to tire yourself out needlessly.
>Always when you seemed to get frustrated by confusion, the human seemed to know.
>She'd bring the lead rope in, and shrink down, as if she where cold.
>You'd come in to face her, resisting the temptation to nibble, head but, or push her.
>Sometimes she'd send you off sooner than others that part at least you where not as of yet understanding of.
>And yet despite all your anger and self loathing at the betrayal of now even your mind, something changed about the way you saw her.
>As frustrating and demeaning at first that she just wouldn't talk, it became more and more obvious that she was talking.
>She talked to you with her body, with her emotions, confidence.
>Her frustration with the rake and her patience when you did not perform to your expectations
>She never seemed to take it personally even as your anger at times frayed.
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>>25463216
>It felt poetic and, you hated yourself for daring, maybe even empathetic.
>That she was teaching you to behave under the constraint of silence, just as your voice had been beaten away from you till you where a quieter thing, more broken than Fluttershy.
>No, she was even more generous with her silence, if a horrible slaver could be so called.
>For even her body language had taken pains to reduce the noise of anger, stress, fear.
>It reminded you of the Wonderbolt performances.
>The lead flyer directing the squad even as sound and the impracticality of voice stripped away until there was nothing but their bodies, the air, and harmony.
>In the most fulfilling and awful poisonous way it rankled you.
>It spat on everything you understood and perceived about these humans.
>That somehow this slaver was trying to bring both herself and you into a state of harmony.
>A philosophy upon which you embodied a very element of, a magic powerful enough to contend, if apparently not always defeat, the forces of chaos.
>You would throw a fit if you had the energy
>You couldn't accept it.
>Slavery could not be a form of friendship.
>But your poisoned heart couldn't pump out the venom either.
>Eventually, you faced her again.
>Once more, she gently lay the lead rope from the halter over your withers.
>She began that slow bodily mantra, touching you and drawing you into a disarmed state.
>You once again found yourself helpless to it.
>Gentle movements that where slow and perfected drew you out of your submissive stupor in the pleasant and awful touching of Master upon slave.
>Human arms where not that long.
>You should have expected it, in fact, you were not even all that upset.
>Why not? Of course the human would use the rake that both of you seemed to have a distaste for to groom you into accepting its touch.
>You could understand the implications, but you forced yourself not to.
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>>25463221
>Lowering your head back into its submissive and gentle incline, you emptied your head and mind, and let her do what she wanted,
>If she was going to turn you into some animal slave then the least you both could do for yourself is spare yourself the horror of fixating on what exactly was being done to you.
>Your withers felt so heavy even with nothing but that rope on them already.
>Eventually you were sent off on a gentle trot.
>Your human handler disappeared behind the gate.
>At this point you where too pliant and lost in your own fatigue to care.
>Hooves ached and legs trembled, you felt just alert and stressed enough to avoid laying down, but forced yourself to anyway
>Your human handler would surely be back for you.
>You would probably be holed up again, you should enjoy the open air and feel of grass rather than a cramped stall or worse.
>Your tail and mane swished, well dry by now, and lustrous again.
>Defending yourself against flies by lazily swishing both was not all that difficult.
>Maybe a little nap.
>It was safe enough right?
>Despite the trill of fear, the lead rope subconsciously reminded you of her.
>You lay your blue eyes shut, and let them rest the weary soul inside you.
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>You, once turning the corner, shook out a heavy sigh.
>In your chest, a weight was on your heart.
>Only now could you let yourself truly catch up with the emotions you had been feeling in there.
>The rake safely tucked outside the round pen.
>The only one inside there now was China glaze.
>You didn't like leaving an unstable mare in there alone, sentient or not, but you had to do something before you could spread back to your other duties.
>You are Samantha Tanner.
>And no matter how awful you felt you still where getting paid to do this job.
>And every second you wasted suffering the emotions of that mare wouldn't just get taken out of your own work ethic, but also the lives of every mare you didn't spend enough time with.
>You had to go track down Pinion.
>She had to be kept away from the other horses while she healed, but Pinion was a good mare, who's coloring and comeliness where the main reason she was not yet out the door to a new owner.
>The corral was not an auction.
>Prospective owners where vetted for a minimum of horse related experience, appropriate accommodations.
>Technically, the new Ponies where still equines, so your job had legal right to deny anyone owner ship as if she where a real horse.
>That bought you a fair amount of latitude in dealing with customers though.
>You fetched another halter and lead rope, just in case.
>You wouldn't need your crop though.
>While sometimes Pinion got nervous you put China glaze with her specifically because you worked with her and knew you could count on her to be a good girl even with China messing up the program.
>It took you about 20 minutes to track her down.
>You found her drinking from a Horse water fountain near a domestic horse gelding named Dusty.
>It was a simple reconfigured sink. Even domestic horses where smart enough to operate it if you trained them on it.
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>>25463236
>It was wide enough to accommodate the Equine sense of distance, and there where traditional water buckets, so the high horses wouldn't keep the rest thirsty.
>Other than being a bit nosey though Dusty seemed fine with letting Pinion drink despite not being near the herd much.
>Pinion was smart enough to keep away from the herd if she became too much of a draw.
>She spotted you and you saw her ear pivot towards you.
"Good girl. Everything okay Pinion?"
>You force the words out of your mouth.
>One step at a time, you'd get used to talking to horses for real.
>Pinion was quiet around you, you suspected, because you where quiet.
>She was inclined to ignore you, and since you didn't put any pressure on her she busily drank before turning to you and responding.
>"Yes Ma'am"
>She uttered quietly.
>"lets put you back in the stall. I need to check your bandages while China glaze is out."
>You offer directly, still trying your hand at avoiding simple directions through the body.
>She seemed just as awkward as you about the whole thing, and trudged back, avoiding too much pressure on her injuries as you lead her back without rope or halter or even body direction.
>The shifty pegasus rubbed her head against you slightly as you moved the spacious stall door open.
>Only a few more weeks and Pinion could be allowed to go back to socializing with ponies and horses at her choosing.
>It would be another month after that before she could begin actually working though.
>It was just as well in your opinion.
>As much as you felt guilty, her injury was a delay that gave you more time to familiarize with their off shoot of the species.
>There was so much you didn't know that you needed to.
>Everything seemed well on Pinion and you spent a bit of extra time grooming, relaxing, and maintaining her hooves.
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>>25463241
>A timid and whimpering tone came from Pinion that you where not sure how to answer
"I.. Is she go-going to be calmer?"
>Breathing a sigh and holding your silence for a bit, you look Pinion in the eyes.
>You really weren't sure.
>You had tried to avoid thinking about China glaze but that problem wasn't going away.
"Was she like that the whole time?" you ask slowly.
>"E-every time we heard foot steps..."
"If she's aggravating you injury or keeping you from resting I can separate you two. I figured you'd prefer the company though..."
>"I... do ma'am... I just..."
"You need to listen to us, not her. When we aren't there, you can fall in line with her if it's comfortable to you. But between our word and hers, you know which to obey."
>"y-yes.. Ma'am" she answers with a head downcast and a lilting tone of a fearful child being told that monsters where not under the bed.
"It's okay to be scared, but you still have to listen" You offer gently.
>It wasn't all that balming in words, but you felt that it embodied something that should be.
>Her owners would watch out for the scary things and keep her safe even if she was afraid.
>Still, you felt like maybe sometimes that meaning got lost with the way Pinion normally reacted to that.
>You really need to take some of your lunch break figuring out how to convey that lesson better.
>A bit more socializing and you locked up Pinion in her stall leaving to go fetch China glaze.
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>>25463247
Another installment in Rarity's story, this time from her dominant perspective. I hope I did her justice. I hope it was enjoyable. I'd love to hear any comments, but I understand if it's not the wild hotness of some of the more popular ones.
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>>25463209
click her tongue ^
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>>25461652
you have my attention with this multiple parallel universe thing
also when Twi asks about Luna,Celestia and Shining why didnt she asks about Cadence too?
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>>25461963
The anons demands it.
At least the talk between AB and Anon.
Or is he going to have AB chained up in there for 3 more days?
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>>25463255
This has been a really visceral, comfy story, with just enough garnishing depression to keep it interesting. I'm really disgusting that this is like the second reply you've gotten. I'd definitely read more.
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>>25463247
Ffs, can't you see how hard to distinguish one writefag from another? Use fucking names.
Yes, I'm mad.
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>Dear Princess Celestia,
>What the fuck is up with this slave auction in town? And why am I the only one invited? I know some of the ponies in town are down for some kinky shit, but this is too much for me.
>I suspect Twilight is behind it since there is a law that states "All humans must attend."
>The real question is, am I being auctioned or am I supposed to buy ponies?
>If forced too I'd choose the latter, but I'd rather not be involved in the first place.

>Sincerely,
>Anonymous.

>p.s. I knew I should have never lent Twilight that history book.
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We already mentioned that. They wont.

Probably think that just because we can't filter them. We'll read their SiM stuff.
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>>25463810
You know, this will be fun to read.
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What happened to that confused slave story...
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>>25463255
>>25463255
Has my interest at least;
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boop
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>>25463255
Damn. I love the way you're handling this.
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>>25462607
Shoulda known this was you, Moss. No one does stranger in a strange and violent land better.
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>>25461776
Is this a Wolfenstein reference?
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>>25464585
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>>25464145
thanks for the motivation. glad you are enjoying

>>25463749
I don't really like the infamy associated with names. I have enough problems being identifiable anyway. sorry if this is a problem. I'll start prefacing my dumps with what story they are to compensate.

>>25463493
Yeah, thank you for your explanation for why it appeals to you. I do think there's some pretentions but thats inevitable when you deal with someones expertise. I'm glad that the foremost impression you have is the combination of the raw emotions of rarity's submission, fear, anger, sadness, and hope. Samantha is a bit more controlled in her emotions, and she's always dead tired, so hopefully she doesn't come across as too boring.
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>>25462590
>>25462032
>>25461963
Added all of your stories to the pastebin.

>>25463255
Fuck I forgot to add your story again. I also can't add to the pastebin since I'm missing stuff from the thread before the last thread.
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>>25448340

> Twilight screamed that night.
> There was no mistaking it, a horribly familiar high-keening left you scrambling from bed to try and silence her before the neighbors complained again.
> The following evenings, merely 'mundane' nightmares take the place of her typical night-terror.
> Neither did the waking hours offer any respite for her; more than once.
> Having taken up semi-permanent residence on the sofa seat nearest a window, you often caught Twilight staring wordlessly through the glass.
> It wasn't just that she was watching something across the street, or anything like that; that look in her wasn't an unfamiliar one.
> You were losing her again.
> Or, more accurately, Twilight was losing herself.
> Allowing whatever shell she'd built to protect herself during the worst times to close up again.
> And no matter what you did, you couldn't pull her back out of it.
> Not with force, anyhow.
> No suggestion, no idea alone would drag her up from the clutches of despair.
> Instead, you fell back on simply making her as comfortable as possible.
> The first time you thought of that, it shook you how much that sounded like caring for a terminal patient.
> But, you supposed, Twilight was dying.
> Not of a physical illness, but the insidious mental claws of depression.
> And much like caring for a patient, it settled into a routine.
> Wake in the morning.
> Make some breakfast in the meager hope that Twilight would show some sign of appreciating it.
> Build a list of simple jobs for her to handle throughout the day to keep her from stewing ceaselessly in her own misery.
> Go to work, and deal with the lingering results of the disaster.
> Come home in the evening, and find Twilight again lost in herself.
> Go to bed.
> Wake up in the middle of the night to deal with her near-inevitable nightmare.
> Get up again in the morning, and repeat.
> Of those, only one did Twilight seem to take any real pleasure in.
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>>25466255

> No matter how the task, she always seemed to put in extra effort to make sure it was done absolutely right.
> That alone is enough to keep your hope from guttering out completely.
> Pained and guilt-ridden she may be, but Twilight still seemed to care for your approval of her work.
> The soft jingle of an incoming email draws your attention.
> 'HAPPY HOOVES PARAEQUINE VETERINARIANS: Your report is now available!'
> May as well take a look.
> The medical report, is largely what you'd expected.
> 'minor musculature decay associated with long periods of inactivity and/or malnutrition'
> 'signs of past use of physical discipline'
> 'reflexes slightly below average, probably from birth'
> 'overall health trends are positive since previous medical records'
> The last time being long before you'd found her.
> In other words, Twilight had been through a lot - but was doing well now.
> Scrolling through the rest of the report, you chuckle at the absurdity that you were going to have to find a horse psychologist soon at this ra-
> Wait.
> Shifting back up, you read the few lines carefully again - knitting your eyebrows in surprise.
> That... wasn't possible.
> Or -
> After a second's hesitation, you look about to make sure Twilight is busy, then dial the office's number.
"Yeah. Hey, listen, I just got the official documentation from my last scheduled visit with you - yeah, no, it came through fine."
> ...
"No, listen - uh, section 5-B. Yeah, that - listen, that result is wrong. Can you have the lab re-run the test or something? There's no way she could be - yeah, I know you're the doctors, and I know it will cost me. Still."
> Setting the phone down, you stare at the few lines of text - mind furiously working through the implications of what they mean.
> Rising, you pad near-silently to the next room.
> Twilight was there, using a penknife gripped in her jaws to carefully cut away a coupon from the flyer it had come in.
> The lab had to be wrong...
> Right?
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>>25450443
lol yeah that halted my reading as well
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>>25466255
FINALY
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>>25450443
>>25466286

Schrodinger's sleeping pony. It's both sprawled out and curled up at the same time.
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>>25466269
Shit. I thought for sure he'd loose his job.Hopefully they rebid still using her plans and it will help too ;_;.
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>>25466269
Either her magic is returning or she's actually dying. What will it be, writefag? What will it be?

>>25466539
>loose
This triggers me
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>>25466269
That's fucked up if it is what I'm thinking.
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>>25466593
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IAeu7_jRySA
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http://pastebin.com/DNvbjnQG - Recovery

Continuation, mates
Sorry for not being active, i was tripping on shrooms last few days.

>the cauliflower is done
„….I'll just dump this into the kettle for a few minutes to boil. Don't worry, not gonna let it boil completely, that would taste like crap. Then fry it along with some garlic and onion, seasoning and it's good to go.“
>“You humans fry a lot, do you?“
„The ones who can't cook properly do. It's not that healthy, but it's something.“ you smile
>“Raw fruit and vegetables aren't that bad, why not eat that?“
„I dunno. We're just so used to having our food somehow prepared, we almost don't eat it raw at all.“
>“That sounds soo unnatural.“
>you chuckle
„Soon you'll know, that humanity and nature are like two counterparts. Sometimes it seems like we're mortal enemies...It's not something i'm proud of. Don't know why i even bring something like this up, let's talk about something else, shall we?“
>“Ok.“
>silence
>“Hey, what's in those bottles over there?“
>you look what's she pointing at
„You mean those bottles? That's beer. You do have beer in Eq- your world, do you?“
>„Nope. What is it?“
„An alcohol. It gets you drunk.“
>“Drunk?“
„You know, being all dizzy and careless. It's fun. You sure have something like that, where you came from. Like wine or something.“
>“So, it's something similiar to wine?“
„Yup. Except different taste.“
>“That's...nice…………...But I never tried wine. Or anything similiar.“
„What? You're kidding.“
>“I'm really not. That's for older ponies.“
„Wait, just how old are you? And how old you have to be to considered mature?“
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>>25466601
Anon I...
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>>25466578
She's pregnant?
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>>25424532
I just read My own Pinkie Pie!, is it finished?
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>>25466630

>“I'm 17. B-but almost 18! Except you have to be 20 to drink wine. But not many ponies do that anyway. And when they do, it's usualy on special occasions...But, hey, can i have at least a little sip? Just to try it, you know.“
>you chuckle
>how in the world can something be so uncorrupted? Not even knowing what alcohol is.
>Bet she's virgin as well
>shut up brain
>You're not sure if you wanna be the one to corrupt her. It feels wrong, knowing you'll probably be the one to show her all these things
>you don't wanna set her on the wrong track in her life
>but how can possibly someone resist a face like that?
„Of course. But you'll probably won't like it anyways.“ you say as you handle her a bottle you just opened
>you'd expect her to take a small sip first, but instead she gulps at least ¼ of the bottle at once
>“Ew, that's disgusting. You really drink that? Yuck.“
„I warned you.“ you laugh. „It's not something, you'll like instanly.“
>“It's so bitter.“ she frowns. „Does all alcohol tastes like this?“
„Nope. There's a lot of it. I still have some wine in the fridge, so you can try it later if you want. But hey, i don't want you to eventualy become an alcoholic. Everything in moderation, especialy with this stuff.“
>“Alright, alright. And I do feel a bit dizzy, is this how being drunk feels?“
>jesus, why does this of all things interests her so much?
„Basicaly yes, but you'd have to multiply it few times.“
>a big smile appears on her face
>“All these new things here are so interesting! Inertet, TV, alcohol, those big carriages that move on their own... Can't wait to see it all!“ she got a little bit too excited there
>Well, if you show me of course. And explain. That would be great.“
„Don't you worry, i will. And there's a whole lot of it.“
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>>25466630
>„

I have to ask, why do you keep adding this instead of quotation marks?
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>>25466716
iirc yes
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>>25466751
Dang, pretty lame end for such an interesting story.
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>>25466696
Yep
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>>25466745
I guess he's a deutschfag.
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>>25466760
The pastebin hasn't been updated apparently.
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>>25466760
>>25466787
I haven't seen the pastebin but I read it in the thread. The real ending was kinda lackluster as well. A lot of build up for little payoff
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>>25466630
was reading the postben and thought for a second this was a lyra storry i had missed.

a little sad but still glad your around
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>>25466795
It's their first green, with a primary conflict that would be hard to resolve. You can't expect much.
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>>25466213
You have my story in the authors paste bin list. I already updated my paste bin. I wouldnt mind a prime spot but you didn't forget to include me.
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>>25466740
She cute
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>>25465973
The fact that Samantha is boring is emphasizing the qualities of the ponies. That's only a plus, Anon.
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>>25466861
Oh shit, I didn't realise. I thought I must of added it at sometime but I wasn't too sure.
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>>25466696
fuck that. writfag need to let the girl some time to recover before hitting her with something like that.
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>>25466696
>pregnant
>no magic
>thinks she killed ponies and people
>is a slave
jesus I dont know if i could handle all that, it almost seems like a bit much to me
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>>25467118
Who would the father be?
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>>25443364
Sooooo more green when ?
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>>25462368
>despair
>mfw I realize nearly every piece of green I've written has something horrible happen to the CMCs.
Well, best not to fuck with tradition, I guess.

>>25465200
Afraid not. He was originally just going to be PTSDed to hell, but some comments made me decide he needed to be a little more visibly fucked up.

>>25466213
There's enough pronoun screwups in my story (and the asshole neighbor's name magically changed halfway through) that I have to wonder just what the hell I was drinking last night. You can either copypasta the fixed one from here http://pastebin.com/DK21fjWz or just link to that instead.
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>>25467470
Not soon enough anon. Not soon enough. Looks like we'll probably have to start a new thread before tomorrow as well.
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>>25467438
should pregnancy be a thing in the story it will be justified as being a stallion she met along the way probably at a slave auction or an attempt at breeding, though i dont feel like it would fit all that well
the attempt at breeding wouldnt make sense because they wouldnt sell breeding stock
the stallion she met along the way may make sense to a point, but based on how fucked up she is i doubt she would have fallen in love, leaving rape as an option. still kinda meh
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>>25467676
or it could be an abomination

Either way that would just be way to dark for my tastes.

maybe she has had her magic back for a while but just has never tried?
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OP here.
Since the thread is about to hit the limit soon, we should hold back until Thursday so that the current authors can either take time off or continue to work on it so that they can post new stuff right away.

Still kinda sad we haven't seen Helianon with his scootaloo story in this thread yet.
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>>25448700
After rereading this part I realized why i couldn't figure out where my confusion was coming from. She should have known who it was since it's a neighbor
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>>25424979
Thank you based anon I've been looking everywhere for a recent version of this story
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>>25461652
Well.

I officially have no fucking idea how to continue this.

...Shit.
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>>25468364
well theres the obvious of bringing her home and introducing the other mane 6 and having her try her best to get everyone to act the same again
past that, i dunno
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>>25468364
With Twilight's help, Anon has to slowly work on fixing the broken ponies.
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>>25468364
>rape
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>>25468101
Bluebird here. You can always try searching my trip on the archive to find the most recent update.
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>>25462032
>Another day, another dollar
>Considering last night's events you expected to have a bad night's sleep
>But damn it's amazing how comfy that bed is
>It was hard to get up, you had to still go to your job, but made sure to get up early to prep Twilight
>quick change of clothes and you were ready to go
>Opening your door you find her sleeping on the couch
>well, it was still 7am, so no big surprise there
>You had to wake her though
"Hey Twilight, Twilight wake up"
>nothing, she was snoring away
>You didn't have time for this
>You start poking her in the face
>softly at first, then harder as she somehow slept through it
>You eventually just gave her head a shove
>She responded by flailing back and yelling
"Oh hey, you're awake, great"
>jumping up from the couch it took her a moment to realize where she was
"Calm down now, it's me, anon, remember"
>"Y-yes, you bought me"
>She spit the word bought, the very idea seemed to be souring her mood
"Yeah, well hey, I need to go to work, but I wanted to talk to you before I left"
>a nod is all you get in response
>Pulling out your black book you place it on your desk and boot up your PC
"I don't know if you eat breakfast, but I have plenty of food in the fridge, some eggs, bacon, I think some leftover chicken as well"
>"I don't eat meat"
>Oh yeah, a horse, that makes sense you suppose
"Well, I have some veggies in there as well, and some grapes in the freezers. Also apples, you eat those, right?"
>"yes"
"Yes, horses love apples"
>"Pony"
"What?"
>"I'm a pony"
"Oh, alright, well look, in this book is all the information I gathered on your friends and who bought them, looks, license plate numbers, which are like identification numbers for cars, which is what I picked you up in last night"
>She just started at you, those odd, giant eyes"
"Aaand this thing here is a computer, it is connected to the internet, which is something your primitive pony brain probably couldn't comprehend"
>odd, now she looks angry
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>>25469092
>your primitive pony brain probably couldn't comprehend
NOW YOU FUCKED UP
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>>25461652
"I will need you to increase the amount of feed you deliver."
>"Of course, sir."
"Good. Now, I want to be completely undisturbed for the next twelve hours. Only come if I call you, or something extremely disastrous has happened. Understand?"
>"Of course, sir."
"Good. Now, if you excuse me, I have a new toy to play with."
>You slam the door to your slave-house, cracking your knuckles. The soft light from above shines down on the Turkish carpet.
>"Can you let me out of this?"
>Twilight taps on the wall of her kennel. You cross the distance between the two of you and press your thumb to the keyhole, the door swings open. At the same time, the chains spring off her.
>"My friends. W-Where are they?"
>You gesture at the mahogany door behind you
>Twilight jumps out of the cage and rushes up to it, but stops before she enters. She lays a hoof on the door and stares up at it.
>"I... I haven't seen any of them in ten years."
"You did see pictures. Technically."
>"That's—that's different."
"True."
>You lower your voice
"Before you go in there you need to know a few things."
>"Like?"
"Well, first off, Fluttershy, Rarity, and Applejack all kind of... drift in and out of reality. Half the time they can't remember that I'm not the one who—you know. So I have no idea how they're going to react. I didn't tell them I was buying you. Didn't tell any of them, actually. So you'll be a nice surprise."
>"Maybe... maybe you should go in first."
>Fear
>Natural. Even though you'd done your best to turn the place behind that door into a sanctuary, it still felt like the belly of the beast.
>You sigh and step forward, pressing on the door
"Girls! I'm home!"
>"Master Anonymous!"
>Rarity happily trots up to you, holding a tray with her magic
>Fuck. Of course she has to be—
>"Can I get you anything? A glass of wine? Something more... carnal?"
"No, R—Bitch. Go—go back to—"
>The tray falls to the ground
>Fuck
>"T-t-t-t-"
>Rarity's breathing rapidly increases in pace
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>>25469092
>"primitive?! You don't know anything about Equestria, how dare you call us primitive? I'll have you know I was a student under the princess herself, and our people are the most advanced society in our world. We have trains that can cross Equestria in days!"
>wow trains, well come to the 19th century Mrs. Fancy pants
>You make sure not to say that of course
>but damn it was tempting
"Well, this here is like a giant library, you have libraries where you're from, right?"
>"Yes, of course we do, I lived in one"
>You couldn't tell if she was serious or if that was a turn of phrase
>What a nerd
"Right, well using this thing here, you can look up whatever you want about a world, you just use the mouse to click, and press the buttons on the keyboard, here"
>You click around to show her how it works, then brought up Google for her
"So, what would you like to know?"
>"What's the population of your world?"
>You type the question right in and Google spits out the answer
>7 billion
>She stares at it in shock.
>"That many of you, how?"
" technology is a helluva thing Twilight."
>She starts playing with it as you move out of the way
"Enjoy, I will be back later this afternoon, just look up whatever you can, I don't really expect much, but it's better then sitting around"
>She was busy nerding out and typing things into the computer when you left
>Oh well, it should keep her entertained until you get back
>But oh boy, was this work day going to suck
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>>25469277
> leaving a pony unsupervised on the Internet
This can never end well
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>>25469277
Can't wait for her to discover porn.
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>>25469234
>"NonononononoNOOOOOOOOOOOOO"
>Shit, that's a loud scream
>Louder than she normally gets
>"NOT HER! NOT HER! NOT—"
"Silence."
>Rarity freezes up
>You feel really, really bad about taking advantage of her training like this. But, of course, you have little other choice.
>"Rarity, it's okay! I'm fine! This is all fine!"
>"Y-You're here. That's not—THAT IS NOT FINE!"
>Shit
>She's either so angry that she's going against year of mental conditioning, or she's starting to snap out of it
>A positive development either way
>"You–You must run, darling, you must FLEE! This is—this... this..."
>Rarity shakes her head, then turns to face you
>"This—Anon. How nice to see you again. I—I had the most peculiar dream that—"
"Yeah she's standing right over there."
>Rarity's head snaps to the left
>"Twilight? Twilight! It really is you!"
>Rarity springs forward, pulling her friend into a hug
>"Oh, I can't believe it! Are you hurt? Are you alright? Those slavers, they're not—not often kind, but—well of course, you'd fetch a high enough price that they wouldn't want to damage you, would they?"
>"I'm—I'm okay, Rarity, I'm okay."
>"Anon, why did you not tell me! Oh, I—I should have made something for this occasion. Some kind of gift. It's not every day you get to see a friend you haven't seen for ten years—and safe and sound, at that!"
>Rarity squeezes Twilight a little tighter
>"Oh, I am so glad you're here. Or, here now. Not before. Before was—well, let's not dwell on that, shall we?"
>Rarity chuckles nervously
>"It's—it's still not as good as Equestria was, I'm afraid, but it is a home! And the–the owner is much nicer than the old one."
"That's a fucking understatement."
>You sit down in a nearby chair
>Well. Rarity has gone well so far.
>Hopefully the others will be the same.
>"Oh you must see Dash and little Starlight, she's just the cutest little thing."
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>>25469415
Okay fuck this

This shit's too hard

I'm done for tonight
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>>25451761
Good good. My story will be picking up where urs started. I'm a lazy fuck and haven't posted anything yet. As long as I don't get much overtime tonight I should get something written up
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>>25469425
take some time to think it over, hell take notes if you want. you dont have to spoon feed us when the stories are slow darling
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>>25469277
>yep, it sucked alright
>How are you supposed to pay attention to some stupid financial reports when back home you have a talking pony slave
>Eventually the day ended, and you practically sprinted out the door
>A quick drive later and there you were, home.
>You open the door quickly, raising you arms in the air, and loudly thanking the Lord for another day of work over
>across from you is your pony, she responded to you with a look of disgust, it looked like she had been crying
>Oh shit now what
>OH SHIT YOU DIDN'T CLEAR YOUR HISTORY
"Those...girls were eighteen and you can't prove otherwise!"
>"What?"
"Huh?"
>"What are you talking about?"
"I was wondering how your day was"
>smooth
>"It was good up until I looked up your people's history"
"What about it?"
>"Well it turns out ponies aren't the first slaves you've had, you people even enslaved your own kind!"
"You people? Hey, I never enslaved anyone"
>She glared at you
"Oh, yeah, right sorry about that. Well listen that's all in the past, slavery is illegal now, well human slave anyway"
>"And how you treat your ponies here?"
"They aren't sentient, just animals, and we still have laws against being cruel to them. Now did you find anything about your friends"
>"Yes, actually, I think I found Applejack."
"What? Wow, already? Who is Applejack?"
>"You had her written down as 'Orange hick horse/cowboy"
"Holy shit, how did you find her already?"
>"Well, you marked down where the truck was from, and I just looked up the state where that number you wrote was from. Turns out there is a website were complaining about him, he's not a very good driver apparently."
>Thank god for whiny assholes on the internet
>"I've narrowed it down to some place in northern Maine, according to your Google it's not too far."
>her skill with the internet is scary
"Alright, well grab your stuff, we're going to Maine"
>"I don't have any stuff, remember?"
"Perfect, a light packer, I like that, let me get a few things and we'll be off"
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>>25466740
loving it
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>>25469589
I am thoroughly engaged
more like moderately entertained
Please continue
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>>25469425
I'm liking the dimension hoping spin you have with this green, the best explanation I have seen so far as to why the planet is suddenly
slaverville
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>>25469415
>Picking up a story you're struggling with
>Dumping at the end of a thread too
You're a good writefag, anon. I liked this bit a lot more; you should keep trying.
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>>25469425
Take your time. This is getting fun.
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>tfw I thought this thread was going to be all edge all the time.
>mfw I was wrong and this is some bomb ass green in here.
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>>25469699
/thread
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GAAAAH MAKE A NEW THREAD
pls
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>>25461963
>Steffords is long gone and you’re still sitting on the ground.
>Minutes pass – maybe hours, you’re not sure – but Apple Bloom doesn’t stop shaking.
>You have to let her out of the stand eventually, because there’s no doubt in your mind that leaving her in overnight would kill her. Or she’d kill herself trying to get out on her own.
>The gag comes off first.
>If she’s going to make a fuss, best she do it now where the other ponies won’t hear.
>Shit, it comes away speckled with blood – the corners of her mouth are raw and torn were the cloth rubbed against them.
>You don’t say anything.
>You don’t know what you can say without admitting… something that you shouldn’t admit.
>”What did I do to deserve this?” she finally croaks, her eyes downcast.
“Nothing, but it wasn’t so bad, was it?”
>She refuses to meet your eyes, jerking her head away the second you undo the neck guard.
“Was it, Apple Bloom?”
>”Yes.”
>Her answer half-catches you by surprise. Not what she said, but that she answered at all.
“Then imagine what it’ll be like if I have to go and find you tomorrow.”
>The mare almost falls when you undo the strap around her barrel; her legs can’t support her weight. You have to hold her up as you undo the cuffs on her legs.
“Be here at the same time, okay girl?”
>She nods slowly as you lower her to the ground, where she curls up on herself.
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>>25469977
>You had expected her to flinch away from your touch, but she’s too exhausted to do even that.
“Do you want me to –“
>”Just leave me alone,” she sobs.
“Alrighty, girl, just rest up. I’ll send one of the other mares by later to check on you.”
>”Don’t,” she pleads softly as you rise to your feet. “Ah don’t want nopony to see me like this.”
“Fine, I’ll check on you myself.”
>To your shock, she gives you a brief nod.

>You mull it over as you trudge back up to the house, but it makes sense. Just like you couldn’t let the rest of the ponies see Apple Bloom making a fuss, she can’t let them see her being weak.
>Most of your ponies seem to look to her for some reason, despite her young age – she’s always putting on a brave face whenever other ponies are around, talking back and fighting with you every chance she gets like she has a reputation to uphold.
>Yeah, you can understand why she wouldn’t want any of them to see her like this, sobbing like a scared little filly.
>You’ll check on her after you eat, take some food down for her – something nice, maybe some fruit.
>But not an apple, never an apple. Despite her name, the poor girl hates them for some reason.
>The front door is unlocked – not really any point when your closest neighbor lives about an hour’s drive away – so you just waltz on through and hang your hat on a nearby hook.
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>>25469988
“Hey, Roma! What’s for dinner?”
>”Sorry, it’s a bit late!” the mare answers from the kitchen. “Fried chicken, but it’ll be a few minutes!”
“S’alright, girl. I need to wash up anyhow.”
>You’re feeling a little dirty, and the quick shower you take does little to help but pass the time.
>Roma has the table set and food laid out by the time you get back downstairs.
>”Again, sorry it was late, sir.”
“Not a problem. I’m guessing your other work kept you out in the fields?”
>”Yes, sir,” she answers promptly. “Sorry –“
>Her mouth clamps shut as you sigh loudly.
“Stop that, you don’t have to apologize for me giving you so much to do. I know I put a lot on your shoulders.”
>You slump in your chair and blindly stare at the table.
>”Is… is something wrong?” Roma asks, cautiously edging up beside you. “Is there something I can do? If you want something else –“
“Dangit, girl, I’m not my uncle.”
>”I – I know, sir.”
“I’m not going to beat you just because I decided on casserole instead of chicken.”
>”I know, would you like me to make a –”
“Don’t I treat you ponies well?”
>”Very well, all things considered. Particularly compared to some of your neighbors.”
“Then why the hell are you acting so scared all of a sudden?”
>”I’m always this scared,” she answers with a dry smile. “You usually just don’t notice, sir.”

>Pear in hand, you slowly push open the barn door.
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>>25469996
“Apple Bloom? You still in here, girl?”
>”Y-yes, sir.”
>She hasn’t moved from where you had set her down, still curled in a tight ball.
“I brought you something to eat.”
>You set the pear down by her head when she doesn’t move to take it from you.
“Have you had a chance to think things over?”
>She nods.
“Change your mind about all this?”
>She doesn’t respond.
“Don’t you want a new family, Apple Bloom?”
>Again, she doesn’t answer.
>You sit down beside her – not too close, just barely at arm’s reach.
“Anything we can do to make this easier on you, girl? I mean, as long as you don’t fight, we don’t have to use the stand.”
>”C-can Ah see him?” she mumbles. “Tomorrow, can Ah see him?”
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>>25469996
all the stories are pulling me through a feel trip, but this one..i cant tell what to feel
so heres an image of a sea creature
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>>25470011
Oh, boy. This is going to end well.
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>>25470028
>i cant tell what to feel
Is that a good thing or bad?
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>>25470011
This actually hurts... keep going

>>25469589
Is he just going to break in and take her or something? I don't know about this anon he seems... off

>>25469425
See this is what you get for writing a nice anon. If he was a common rapist slaver this story would be incredibly easy to write.

>>25466740
This pony is adorable

You should fuck it
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>>25470011
Maybe it isn't her brother and writefag is playing a ruse? Maybe this won't go horribly for all involved?

By the way what is the course of action in horse breeding if it is discovered that the stud and the mare are closely related?
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>>25470191
i dunno yet
I wont tell you to stop though
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>>25469996
>>”I’m always this scared,” she answers with a dry smile. “You usually just don’t notice, sir.”
it's a crime to let this guy around live stock, but he is better than his neighbors.
I wonder if he understands the wake up call he just got.
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>>25469425
Goodnight writefriend. You'll have 2 days to get stuff together as we've reached the bump limit.

Keep in mind my writefriends, this thread will be back thursday, so I hope to see you there!
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We're way past bump limit. New thread when?
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>>25470489
Thursday. We don't want to take board space all the time. Plus, some people get upset and tell us to "go to a general hur hur".
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all things considered i never saw the point in having more than one thread unless this one dies.
why do days matter? front page used to be a big deal but now days you just go to the catalog and search for the right threads.
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>>25470532
Besides, that gives us writefags a chance to think on our green and get some stuff pre-written without the pressure to post. See you all Thursday.
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>>25470570
Seconded. I think just the mild stress of an impending thread is the tipping point that keeps me from making more green. I'll appreciate this.
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>>25470532
Who cares? Should just put up the new thread, been enjoying these stories I don't want to wait till Thursday for new green.
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>>25470532
Well that's bullshit. This thread has been flooding with green. It isn't remotely a bump general yet. If we're making it a weekly/monthly thing now then it's only because for some reason we want to validate the people bitching about "MUH BOARD" and "OMGGG GENERALSS!!@@"

So, you know, if you want to give those faggots a say in how to run this thread then by all means, make the next one Thursday
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>>25470532

>We don't want to take board space
>What would people say
>hur hur

Alright wtf happened to you kek heads. This place is meant to be a chaotic clusterfuck of glory not this bullshit.

Grow a pair and get a new thread happening, We wait for writefags for long as it takes them like the green whores we are.
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>>25470532
>Plus, some people get upset and tell us to "go to a general hur hur".
Why would you care what people think here. I agree with idea that we should wait a day for writers sake but worrying about what fuckers here think about you is the fucking gayest thing I've seen here bar none.

Stop being such an insecure faggot.
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You know, I could make a new thread.
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>>25470703

Do it faggit
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>>25470703
yus
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>>25470732
Do we have any gassy pony slave stories, or is that an untapped resource at this point?
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>>25470748
On second thought just kill yourself.
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>>25470748
What a __bad idea
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>>25470703
If you're making a new thread now, use the preset from the pastebin.
pastebin.com/u/slaveponyauction
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>>25470748
How would that even work? Why would anyone want that? Are you actually fucking retarded?
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>>25470798
or ya know, they could give time for writefags to makes stuff?
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>>25470815
Or maybe we can make it now so even more writefags can hop on board and then the old ones can come back when they damn well please? No one is forcing the fuckers to post right now, if they aren't ready then fucking don't post. It isn't rocket science.
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>>25470810
I'm going to make one just for you now.
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>>25470748
>you are Anon
>and you just bought your first pony slave
>a purple unicorn named Twilight
>usually ponies can be shipped to your house if you don't have care space
>but they specifically told you that this particular pony had to go with you
>you questioned why, but at the rock bottom price she was at you didn't argue
>you put her in the backseat of you small broke ass car
>its a pain since the windows don't roll down
>5 minutes into you hour long drive back home, its a long drive from your place to the slave market, you hear a sound
>pfft
>did the pony just far-
"Oh sweet Jesus what just died in here!"
>the smell is otherworldly
>nothing compares to the rancid stench that the pony has unleashed on you
>and you grew up next to a paper mill
>pfft
>despite the fact you know the windows don't work, you press hard on the button futility
>you see why she was so cheap, and why they would ship her to you
>no one would want to be in a tight place with this thing
>you contemplate taking her back, but the seller said no refunds
>pfft
>your eyes are watering, and the urge to vomit is hard to hold back
>pfft
>oh God, you think you're losing consciousness
>you should pull over, but you can't think straight
>the smell is overwhelming
>people talk about tasting strong smells
>you can feel it
>an oppressive beast crushing your body like the pressures of the deep ocean
>pfft
>that's it
>your mind make the decision for you
>it shuts itself down to save itself from the torment
>unfortunately, doing 65 down the interstate is a bad time and place to lose consciousness
>when emergency crews came to the scene of the accident, they couldn't get close enough to the wreckage for days
>they had to wait for the smell to dissipate
>you survived the crash, but you're paralyzed from the neck down
>the nurses were kind enough to leave your pony, who never left your side while they were rescuing you, by your bedside
>pfft
>you wish you had died
>>
>>25470862
10/10
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>>25470862
You make me proud.
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>>25470552
nothing? nobody agrees with this? well color me surprised
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New thread >>25470890

Fucking forgot the title. Goddamnit.
>>
New thread again. Had to delete previous one. >>25471027
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>>25470901
(You)'s are not upboats friendo. If you read even a few post towards the end of the thread you could clearly see there are quite a few people who don't think there is a point in waiting to make a new thread.
>>
>>25469425
>This shit's too hard

I agree I don't even really care for rarity and that was hard on my soul. I have a feeling by the time you reach the rest I'll be a sobbing mess.

"Time heals all wounds"... R-right? p-please PLEASE.
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>>25471042
Had to delete again because im such a pleb. Gimme a min to get it going again
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>>25471042
>delete and redo thread
>still no title
lel
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>>25471094
>>25471096
Ok, all good this time. >>25471109
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>>25471118

3rd time is a charm
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>>25448766
write more you slut
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>>25450931
>>25450983
yes and yes
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>>25469425
if it's any consolidation you've done pretty damn well for a first time writefag on /mlp/
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>>25470862
fucking dying.
Thanks, anon
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>>25461361
Wow this is so similar to what I'm planing
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>>25466745
there was a request in previous thread to separate dialogues for easier recognition of who is speaking, by putting > in front of her lines.
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>>25466269
Who is the father?
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