/m/, rewrite Unicorn You have to keep all the mobile suits (except

Or we all agree that OP is a faggot and that rewritefags are just as bad as headcanonfags and fanfictionfags

>>13626090
Can I keep the Neo Zeong if I want to?

Set it after Victory, change some details regarding the dates and boom - everyone loves Unicorn now.

>>13626090
Keep it like it is and add more Neo Zeongs

>>13626090
I refuse to keep the Banshee. I'll keep the Neo Zeong before I keep that horrendous piece of shit.

So banana gets into the unicorn and launches, Full frontal pops a beam into the cockpit, show over. Improved about 10000%.

Banagher pilots the Neo Zeong

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>>13626182
>mass produced Neo Zeongs
>mfw

>>13626090
bald dude is pilot.
lose the treasure hunt.
lose the son goku super mode.
fukui is fired.

>>13626090
Why would I wanna rewrite it? It's among the best Gundam series.

>>13626193

> Fukui is fired

Not gonna make much of a difference really, since he was just writing to an outline provided by Sunrise and Bandai executives. He himself has openly stated he didn't like several elements like the Unicorn getting a god mode and Banana going on a trip through time and yet they're in there because as he himself put it, he doesn't actually have as much control as people think and everything has to go through a committee.

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>>13626090
They all die of foxdie. The end.

>>13626193
I prefer the opposite, go full Super Saiyan with it. Have Banagher actually grow a spine and not be so buddy-buddy with Zeon when Zeon was responsible for killing half the human population during his lifetime. Turn the Shamblo scene into the first time he uses the NT-D intentionally and make it a real beatdown. At the end either ditch the god angle or play it all the way through, have God Banana take Mineva and go off to explore the cosmos never to be seen again. As it stands they just leave the fucking Unicorn sitting around fully functional and with no explanation for why it doesn't help when civilans are being mass-murdered by flying buzzsaws a few years later.

>>13626414
That always irked me.
What the fuck happens to the Unicorn after, well, Unicorn? It's a really fucking advanced piece of tech. Hell, it's probably better than most suits in F91. Anaheim probably won't scrap it, because it's their masterpiece. Maybe somebody destroys or hides it because it's too powerful?

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I wouldn't rewrite it but I will make a short sequel to explain how it leads into the Future Century and why Riddhe became Master Asia.

>>13626090
>/m/, rewrite Unicorn
>Marida and Loni survive
>Banagher bangs them and Micott while Mineva watches
Done.

>>13626430
I have a dream that Banana finished school, became a paid pilot with the Feds and becomes a SUPER PIROTTU with the Unicorn to remove Zeek.
Then he retires, but in the events of F91 he comes back to fuck shit up, even better than the ZZ in Crossbone.

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>>13626090
Bright slaps the man into BananaG at some point.

BananaG chooses to support Zeon.

Marida breaks free of mind control and steels the Banshee and lives to the end. Her Banshee is upgraded with parts from her Kshatriya.

Mineva creates a new Zeon that's actually at peace with the Feds, and both decide to fight the Sleeves who don't like to follow Mineva's Zeon.

Riddhe is 100% more buttblasted about everything and goes insane earlier on, and is reduced to an angry mentally retarded cyber newtype screaming BANANAG!!!

Full Frontal is a confirmed homosexual and Angelo is his walking anal onahole.

There will be a ton more battles just for more MS porn. We'll add in the ReBawoo, Delta II Kai, the Sleeves variants of the Dom/Dreissen and Doven Wolf, and some others only present in the novels.

The plot will still be about a metal plate. And fighting over control of said metal plate. At the end, said plate is used as part of the new Zeon symbol.

New Zeon is named something other than New Zeon.

>>13626193
Congratulations, you just made Unicorn garbage.

Full Frontal and Sleeves wins.

The world becomes a better place under the rule of spacenoids and future uprisings like the crossbone vanguard and Zanscare Empire don't happen because age monarchy and feminism is stupid.

Make Unicorn do more weird shit early on and have the endgame be it zerking out Ideon style.

Give people a damn good reason to fear psychoframe bullshit for the time being, until they're really ready to embrace the transhuman consequences.

And then maybe there'll be a followup deep into the far future of UC that touches on that.

>>13626090
NT-D system gets perfected, now Unicorn can be in permanent Destroy Mode without frying the pilot's brain. Rest of the anime is the Unicorn's enemies trying to figure out how to destroy it.

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Add these guys and this shit show is fixed.

>>13626459
>add the generic mustache-twirling villains

>>13626441
>New Zeon is named something other than New Zeon.
reported

>>13626090
make banagher not be a fence sitting faggot

Kshatriya used to its full potential. Does not lose to uniform in such a retarded fashion. Marida survives. Riddhe gets killed.

Change nothing.

The original work was fine, it's highly acclaimed, it's just a minority on /m/ that doesn't like it based on the polls we've had.

>>13627739
Back to >>>/MAL/ you go.

>>13627777
I'm talking about the polls we've had here on /m/, you dumb fuck. The ones where Unicorn placed as the fifth or sixth most popular show, and was liked far more than disliked?

>>13627797
Sounds like lurkers have shit taste

>>13627739
>>13627811

I hated Unicorn and I didn't bother voting in any of those stupid polls. It doesn't even deserve a show of opinion.

>>13626090
Production quality on Mobile suits were improved so that they were not made out of foil and scrap. The main characters all died quickly.

>>13626188
I'd keep the Banshee but keep Marida as the pilot.

>>13626442
>You just made Unicorn garbage

Anon, it's already garbage.

>>13626090
Why not give banana a personality? that might be nice.

>>13626090
MUST:
Add Yazan, having him do his stuff. Great foil that guy, totally helps make banana less idiot if there are still guys like Yazan around.
Have him remark about the box at the end
Keep Marida on the EFSF forces
Have Riddle never pilot again after traumatic violation of his Delta plus by Marida, giving him character development to realize what a child he is in comparison to the shit occurring around him. This means marida pilots the gundam into space instead and gives her eventual sacrifice some weight.

Want:
have a scene with Paptimus Ghost Laughing at the three of them for being right.

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>>13626090

first things first:
I bang marida.

banshee is never a thing.

more understanding scenes with banagher and loni

kobe byarlant kills riddhe and marrys mineva

the laplace box is NANOMACHINES SON either that or getter rays

unicorn transfomation is hand animooted

micott is replaced by nena trinity clone

ksshatriya and sinanju get redesigned, none of the stupid black/white black/yellow parts

neo zeong gets replaced by a very powerful mobile suit. something about the size I can afford in 1/100 scale.

full armor unicorn is never a thing. it gets a mobile armor pack like the dendrobium instead

i bang marida again

sinanju gets a glowy psychoframe destroy mode thingy

>>13628774
>ksshatriya and sinanju get redesigned, none of the stupid black/white black/yellow parts
lost me there

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>>13628784

>>13628789
I'm saying that i don't agree with you anymore

>>13628794

I'm surprised I didn't lose you before that.

>>13626190
It better be Mineva's idea

Extra episodes reveal Unicorn's plot is just a distraction for what's really going on: Amuro, Judau, and Char vs. Ideon.

>>13628844
Mobile Suit Gundam vs. Giant God: Counterattack of Gigantis

>>13627518

They would have punched annoying people in the face ie 80% of the cast, it would have been worth it.

>>13628844
>Neo Zeong is a mini-replica of Ideon.