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I was never really a writer. I have never had any desire to really become one and still truly don't, but recently I came up with a story and began to write it down. I really enjoyed doing it, and now I would like your help critiquing it. It's my first story I've ever simply wrote just because, so I think it could use work, as anything can. I would deeply appreciate it.
The link is here:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MhvLZQOqygvsZAA_Aha-m972jOVGAzmc93L90ZObGB8/edit?usp=sharing
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I enjoyed your story; it reminded me of books that I had read in fifth grade.
I tasted a bit of Paulsen in there. Nice job.