>Fuck men. Men are garbage who hurt women. Especially my dad.

Your post is worse than the book.

>>9832786
>>Fuck men. Men are garbage who hurt women. Especially my dad. Fuck my dad. And fuck white people. But mostly fuck men.


You know...if you break your stanzas up and work on the rhythm a little more, this could be something.

>>9832788
it's called redpill, moron, and its a fucking ride

because it has a voodoo curse placed on it to make it sell another ten thousand copies every time a thread gets about it on /lit/

milk and honey is literally the most talked about book of poetry on /lit/ ever.

It's because it's easily approachable and relatable for many. You might not be the target audience for it, and that's okay.

>>9832786
I bought this book when I was first getting into poetry and it's sat on my bookshelf ever since. From what I've seen on /lit/ it seems pretty shitty.

My gf really likes Lang Leav though. Has anyone here read any of her work? What do you guys think.

>>9832841
fuck yourself

>>9832786
Fuck men.
Men are garbage
who hurt women.
Especially
my dad.
Fuck my dad.
And
fuck white people.
But
Mostly
fuck men.

- rupi kaur

i wish women
werent so stupid

robi kor

>>9832786
Stupid people feel better if their inadequacies are tge world's fault.

>>9832786

OP sounds like a whiny bitch, the poems are clearly about this person's individual experiences with breakups

However the writing in this "book" is pretty much objectively shite. It's popular amidst 20 year old libfems with tumblr-level attention spans in the same way that Twilight was popular back when 14 year olds knew how to read

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>>9833388

you forgot the accompanying artwork

>>9832786
this post makes me want to buy this book

>>9833501
I just bought seven copies myself.

>>9832786
dude
lmao
look at my
line breaks
and
no punctuation
gimmick

-rupi kaur

Feminists think that the same tired slam poetry tropes over and over again are good, why are you surprised that they have shit taste?

>>9833500
lol

POO