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An out-of-work, schizophrenic private investigator evades hospitalization while tracing the steps of their father, a missing police homicide detective.
It's my first time writing and I am using the snowflake method. I would really like some constructive criticism on what I have so far. I feel discouraged and like I want to give up because I feel like to make my story good I will have to make it sound like somebody else is writing it.
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Why is he evading hospitalization?
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what is the snowflake method
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As a psych patient they can't just put you in the hospital without a court order(theyd just drop you as a client and bill you ) and a welfare check requires you go voluntarily.
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>>9716641
The thoughts sound much more coherent and organized than I would expect from a schizophrenic.
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>>9716641
4skin
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The premise reminds me a bit of Monk as well as the Sherlock Holmes show with Lucy Lu.
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Nice image OP, never heard of the snowflake method. I assume your work sucks because you're posting it here. You should know better than to take the opinions of the locals seriously.
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do you actually know anything about schizophrenia, or just
>lol, voices!
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I liked it, OP. The situation seemed a little contrived, but I liked it.
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>>9716854
Just be as self-indulgent as possible
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