Hello Lit. I need help editing a plea I made to a TV organization.

>>9653916
Please read and judge my essay

Hello CBS,

This is a plea to a group in authority.
I have been recently made aware of some rather disturbing content on the popular videosharing website YouTube. The gist is that videos with horrible "cartoons" impersonating Disney Cartoons get millions of views in days of being uploaded on YouTube

These are quite disturbing. Here are several links
It was posted 3 days ago, and is nearing 3 million views
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wQ6JkIeApo8 [Embed]

This "Cartoon was uploaded a few months ago, it has a viewship that TV episodes would be jealous of.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MW8UXR-bs5s [Embed]

This one was posted 12 hours ago from current time, it has 150,000 views
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9wiaqnwMPLg [Embed]


It is important to recognize that YouTube is an extremely popular platform, and content is viewed by millions of people, the "content" I'm referring to about is viewed by millions of toddlers and children who are rapidly losing their innocence.

Their parents are probably relieved that YouTube entertains their kids, but even toddlers know how to click on the suggested videos playlist, and end up watching these things in very large numbers.

This is corrupting the youth.
This is porn for kids that don't know what sex is yet. They're old enough to realize there's something interesting about it but don't quite understand why. They're easy to make and apparently grab kids attention, and they generate tens of thousands of dollars in ad revenue each.

We have already tried reporting these videos to youtube, contacting radio stations to raise awareness, but people are in denial, how can their cute cat video website contain such disturbing horror.

With respects,
_name_here_
A concerned Citizen

>>9653916
please sempai

I put effort into this :(