I'm thinking of a scene where a character is reading in

Go melancholy, you're already writing My Immortal.

>>9270392
Maybe consider the meaning of all of those isntead in relation to the story?

>>9270401
I am?

>>9270392
I like the cool breeze and how it foreshadows the inevitable rimming scene.

Must the breeze be cool? Just the moonlight breeze and the on-again off-again sound of trees outside. Gives the reader the chance to notice something. For instance, the rustling stops and he pulls his head up from the book. What is he thinking? Hopefully not about (((her))) unless 'her' is his grandmother, who died last year. Maybe something she said....

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>>9270392
what time of year is it? what emotions are the character experiencing? what has just happened, or what is about to happen? what is the character reading?

why do we care about the weather?

Moonlight is an utter bitch to read by, unless it's a full moon shining straight in through the window. There should be a candle at the very least.

>>9270768
>why do we care about how a scene feels

Did your mother drink paint while she was pregnant with you?

>>9271403
I came here to say this. Only one of these options makes sense.

>>9271539
Yeah, I envision glass balcony doors with moonlight shining through.

>>9271544

It's still an unrealistic notion, if a pleasantly romantic one. The average reader won't be bothered.