Hello, /lit/. I am about to revise and rewrite my short story.

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You could do like Flaubert, read them out loud, even shouting when needed, make it alive. Even better, have a small audience when doing this. It certainly seems weird but after all it can be a nice moment with a few close friends.

let's see some more flexible girls.

>>9268223
...fuck
I better not have a new fetish

>>9268223
Am I the only one seeing the absolute horror in this picture? Where the fuck is her thigh?

>>9270472
The leg's been cut off. The muscles on the stump deteriorate when they're not used. What's so mysterious about that?