I wrote this. What do you think? My mind is a jail house, in

you just watched suicide squad, didn't you

>>9079986
Watched it on release and fucking hated it.

>>9079975
Very amateur desu, in meaning and execution. This might be ok if it was a poem you whipped out in 10 minutes or less.

>>9079975
holy.... i want more...

>>9080069
>Very amateur desu, in meaning and execution. This might be ok if it was a poem you whipped out in 10 minutes or less.
While 10 years old.

bullshit like no soul

>>9079975
its reasonably quite dreadful family

despite all my rage
i am just a rat in a cage

My mind is a cage,
in which I am jailed --
a raging rage, an eternal war.
I seek peace,
a life of salvation,
But the keys to this cage are lost,
and it is locked.

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down in flames
up in waves
the faux drama of this phrase
has stolen too many days
from my uncertain heart

Banged this out in like 2 minutes yesterday for that poetry thread and I really like it.

My soul is on fire,
This rage,
And my penis is bald.

>>9080292
Why is it bald? Am I not supposed to know?

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>>9079975
My mind is a nigger
in which I am a nigger
a raging nigger, eternal nigger
I seek nigger
a life of nigger
but this nigger is locked
and I can't find the nigger

>>9079975
Sounds like lyrics to a Linkin Park song

>>9079975
My mind is a jelly house
in witch I am saged
a raging war, eternal beige
I seek salivation
a life of piss
but this jelly house is cocked
and I cant find the kiss