Is this sentence grammatically correct? If not, then can any

>>9057796
It's day eleven, I am into the Greeks and it keeps getting better.

>>9057796
it's fine you autist

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Once more into the Greeks, dear friends, once more into the Greeks

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>>9057816
>It's day eleven
Actually I'm following this chart so would it still be incorrect if I use "I'm on day eleven?"

>>9057830
The fuck?

>>9057796
Grammatically correct, but not A E S T H E A T I E C E A L L Y correct.

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Once you go Greek you never go back.

>>9057971
>not A E S T H E A T I E C E A L L Y correct.
Elaborate please?

>>9057796
It would be either:
>I am on day eleven of the greeks...
or,
>I am eleven days into the greeks...

You also have two independent clauses joined with a coordinating conjunction,,,,,,,,,, so you should have a comma in there.

I'm on the eleventh day of the greeks and it keeps getting better.

>>9057971
So can you make it A E S T H E A T I E C E A L L Y correct?

>>9058002
It's simplistic. Not that simplistic is bad, aesthetic is subjective, but people tend to prefer a more complex and/or pleasant way to read.

>>9058015
Fuck, english is not my first language, I'll give it some tries anyway.

"In the eleventh day, my reading into the greeks keeps improving"

"By day eleven, the joy of reading the greeks doesn't stop overcoming the day before"

"I could not be more surprised that, in the eleventh day, my reading of the greeks keeps getting more substantial, and I can feel their language and ideas resonate in my mind"

Idk I am not in your mind to say what you are trying to say, but language can unfold itself in imaginable endless times to fulfil its purpose and stylistics.

>>9058049
These are all fucking awful.

>>9058012
>I'm on the eleventh day
>I'm on the eleventh
>I'm on the
>the
Don't you think "the" is being irrelevant there, mate? Also, why "of" and not "into?" Can you say Greek literature instead of just "Greeks?"

>>9057796
I met the greeks eleven days ago and it looks like a promising relationship.

>>9059293
This is ludicrous

It is the eleventh day and the Greeks continue to bring me higher.

>>9059312
Is this right?

"Eleventh day into Greek lit"

I'm into the eleven year old greeks, and it keeps getting better

Is it "day eleven" or "day eleventh?"

>>9059418
"eleventh day"

and so he read the greeks
and on the 11th day he still read the greeks
and it kept getting better
and he looked upon everything he had read
and it was very good

It's not grammatically correct, faggots
>I'm on into

the greeks
he read.

eleven days
he read.

still it kept
getting better.
he read.

>>9057796
I've been reading the Greeks for eleven days and each day it gets better.

>>9059540
Not that you're wrong, but I found this >>9059531more coherent.

>>9057796
I'm at the eleventh day into greeks philosophies. It's keeping getting better.

ftfy

I'm curious to know how many of the posters in this thread are native speakers

I'm 11 inches deep into them greek boys and it keeps getting better