About 50 pages into this. Is it just a rip off of the Bible? Or does it get better after all the Valar parts?
>>9018811
>Or does it get better after all the Valar parts?
It doesn't
>Heavy Bible influence
>Bad
>>9018824
There's a big difference between being influenced and just changing the names boss.
>>9018811
Its only purpose is to explain elf linguistics
>>9018849
they played us like a damn fiddle, boss!
All literature is a rip off of the bible
>>9018811
Changes focus pretty drastically once the Noldor go walkabout