CRASH! We adopted a puppy. CRASH! My mail arrived. CRASH! Two

>>8892054
Actually, that works as a story.

1) You and your family adopted a puppy and were bringing it home in your car.

2) The deliveryman, in his truck, arrived with the mail.

3) Your car narrowly misses the truck, but you crash into something else.

The "CRASH!" guides us to consider how these things connect with each other. They also serve as a combination of a "lights flashing before my eyes" moment and "*record scratch* you might be wondering how I got here...".

Overall, not bad.

the puppy one always gets me because the arrival of a puppy could easily result in a crash, or multiple crashes

>>8892082
That would be pretty cool actually.

People on this board have better writing ideas than any author.

A crashing came across the kitchen. Mom made pancakes before, but there is nothing to compare to it now.
It is too late. The cooking continues, but it is all theatre. No batter anywhere. Above him hung skillets as old as iron queens, and glass somewhere far above that would let the light of day through. But it's breakfast. He's afraid of the way the adoption will soon be filed-soon-it will be a spectacle: the barking of a golden retriever. But coming home in total famine, without one single pancakw, only a great invisible crashing.

>>8892114
Lol

>>8892054

CRASH I hid this thread

>>8892091
And will result in many more crashes for months to come.