Post the opening lines or paragraph of your short story. Other anons will tell you if it's shit or not.
Crash, pancakes, golden retriever, one enemy, god, etc.
>>8890515
the first paragraph:
I am.
http://pastebin.com/ZmFZSC9x Probably the best thing I have ever wrote
Only one enemy remained; two if you counted God.
Shameless bump
>>8890532
Lot of views,no feedback? Was it really that good?
Dear Diary,
I am seated in an office, surrounded by head and bodies.
>>8890532
Sounds like Holden Caulfield meets DFW
Only one golden crasher remomed; two if God counted pancakes.