>"Telling instead of showing" throughout almost the entire book
Literally unreadable.
>No discernible talent throughout almost the entire book
Literally unreadable.
>>8792854
is that really what you got from the book? holy shit
How's your freshman year treating you, OP? Make any friends yet?
>>8792854
feel bad 4 u
>>8792854
>Uses words as a medium
>"It doesn't show enough"
Fucking hell you're retarded
>>8792883
kek
>>8792854
rules like that are only valid for authors critics dont like, not those that they enjoy.
>>8792854
She's hot. Who is she?
I love GGM, but god that book was confusing.
>>8792854
who is this semen demon
>>8792854
>reading a translation of Cien aƱos de soledad
sad!