>finish my book
>reread it
>have literally no idea of what the fuck is going on
Goddammit /lit/ how the fuck do I write a coherent story that actually makes sense?
>>8786478
i plan everything out. that gets much harder when you have 3 characters and a non linear story.
Pretend it was deliberate and claim the critics just don't get it
>>8786478
Pay attention to the flow of narrative as you're writing. The problem you're having right now is hard to correct in editing, as it's probably more of a pacing thing, rather than detail.
>>8786486
Problem is mine has 1 character and a linear story
Structure your work first. Then edit like absolute fuck until it works.