this is the longest thing i've ever read. pretty comfy in

>>8775096
I love it.
The time skip could be done better, however.

Did you ever read Pact, also by Wildbow?

>>8777151
The whole thing isn't that tightly written, but the time skip is particularly bad. It's forgivable just because the setting is that good. I haven't read anything else by the author though, I know when I was reading Worm he was finishing Pact and starting up another serial

>>8775096
Very cliched and too enamored with capeshit stereotypes. Some of the characters were embarrassing to read.

>>8777705
I mean, how can you not write a superhero story without cliches? I agree that some of the character's aren't that great though, but some are. Which in particular did you not like?

>>8777725
Jack was especially terrible imo.

>>8777705
Pretty sure Wildbow said he wanted to use Superhero stables and stuff, otherwise it wouldn't be a superhero story

>>8778466
>Stables

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