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When the sun shines a dark scarlet hue
and the children dance their songs in the cool embrace of the evening rain
I sit at a window of old pained glass and watch them with hope of their soon return
For the cold of night does not give leave
Not to man nor beast nor child at play.
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>>8754167
def cozyish, 4.5/5 blankets fluffed
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>>8754167
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>When the sun shines a dark scarlet hue
>and the children dance their songs in the cool embrace of the evening rain
>I sit at a window of old pained glass and watch them with hope of their soon return
>For the cold of night does not give leave
>Not to man nor beast nor child at play.
Lol waht the fuck is this shit? Are you trying to write poetry? Nigga hahah what the hell are you attempting here? Scarlet hue, what the fuck is a scarlet hue. Why the fuck are you waiting for the kids soon return, return from what? hahah nigga make your poem make sense.
Other then that its aight
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>>8754332
just letting off steam. I know it's not very good or even structured properly. Thx anyway.
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>>8754332
awful use of the tyler the creator tweet meme. kill yourself anytime soon
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>>8754167
is this a line from Middlemarch?
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