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Once upon a time there was a boy who went for a walk in the woods.

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Once upon a time there was a boy who went for a walk in the woods.
He met a rabbit, talked with it for a bit. He quickly became friends with the rabbit and asked, what are you going to do tomorrow? Tomorrow? it asked curiously. You know, they boy said, the day after today! The rabbit had never thought about tomorrow, and quickly asked, what kind of absurd question is that? The boy was just as confused as the rabbit, it went quite of a few seconds before the rabbit said, why would you ask about something which doesn't exist? The boy didn't understand what the rabbit ment, was it crazy? He looked at the sun, it was getting dark. The rabbit didn't seem to be in a hurry and sat quietly for a while and stared deep into the boys eyes. I have to go home, it's getting late, the boy said without moving. Late? The rabbit asked. The boy was getting annoyed with the rabbit's stupid questions and said angrily, Yes, I don't have much time, I need to be home at 9 o'clock or my mom will get mad! The rabbit looked at boy now more confused than ever, peculiar creatures you humans are, and jumped into the woods.
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>>8605484
>Once upon a time

Hack
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>>8605486
xd
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>>8605484
I like this.
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>>8605484
Replace "rabbit" with "wabbit" and it improves a lot trust me
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>>8605484
>it went quite of a few seconds
sounds dumb
>ment
REEEE
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>>8605484
Love it.
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holy... i want more...
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Glad whoever liked it, like it. I got inspired from Alan Watts :)
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>>8606014
How would you rephrase that?
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>>8606716
The usage of "went" is awkward, and "of" just shouldn't be there.

"quite a few seconds passed" or something like that would be more correct.
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>>8605484
I thought you had ripped off from Alice in wonderland for a while desu

And quite frankly, I'm surprised no one has pointed this out
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>>8607469
I actually didn't think about Alice in wonderland before after I wrote it. Also the rabbit was a random animal, any other animal could have been chosen, but a rabbit felt more natural for some reason.
>>8607462
Oh lol, I mean for not of, my mistake.
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