critique my prose /lit/. i wrote about a stupid topic to make

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critique my prose /lit/. i wrote about a stupid topic to make it not a shitty diary thread

It's hard to explain if you haven't experienced it. something about spamming dog faces to thousands of people amuses me endlessly. there are thousands of people in an online chat room, reading what people are saying, and i have the power to force them to look at dog faces. jesus. this is the the state of the world and i love it. i can sit in a room and force thousands of people to look at a stupid fucking dog face. and the best part is, when i start making people look at dog faces, other people start making people look at dog faces. it's not the attention that the dog faces recieve that i care about, it's not the power to make people post or look at dog faces that i care about, it's the fact that this is the world that i live in and it's so comforting to know that in a world where terrible things occur and people are slaughtered and beaten and raped and destroyed on a level that can't be seen that i can spam stupid fucking dog faces to thousands of strangers.

thx senpai