>“Yes,” said Paul automatically. As they entered a building,

Tao works quite hard on his books, and they're more than just "omg mumblecore alternative slacker" literature. /lit/ hasn't published anything because no one here actually knows how to write well. People here live in their heads, in their fantasies, in their pseudo-intellectual criticisms, in their ironic distance. They cannot do good work.

I have actually gotten a few short stories published. Nothing that pays yet, but it's a start.

Ive come to the conclusion that his writing is a sincere attempt at writing serious lit using vapid contemporary text speak. I guess he's progressing form? But taipei is so fucking boring, had to put it down

>>7893505
You're not wrong about /lit/, but Tao is an insufferable pseud without much to say.


go to bed, Tao.

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did somebody say SINCERE

>>7893497
This isn't too bad, in my opinion. I like how the writing gives a similar feeling to the reader of what Paul is feeling. You really feel that awkward vibe as your eyes dance along the words, in the same way Paul is assuredly feeling the same way while going through this experience with Michelle. In this case, I think it works well.