ok guys.
I'm planning on making a short interactive comic or a small videogame (something between those two mediums).
My goal was to first to write a short story to have a guideline over what to work from.
Sadly, I'm a taco, taco, burrito seƱorita brown manlet and I'm not a good english writer (my grammar skills aren't top notch).
Here it's the spanish text:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1K5XObLJyxru8AbfAmbaA_6LD8Xwuo1g4RwhQm9LgBow/edit?usp=sharing
Sorry bout no being an english speaker.
>>7672764
Es mierda hijo, mierda.
>>7672833
I know.
but I need to finish a lot before making something good.
do you think Borges didn't wrote crap at the beggining?