Write the 'lightest' sentence you can: But I think,

He was a good friend.

And in the night, all tiptoes fall slight on eternity's ear.

>>7529639
The sun rose.

>>7529639
It was Monday morning, and boy it couldn't be more of a Mundane morning.

He sipped his coffee and looked out the window at the people below.

But these noises, the distant cawing of the seagulls and the retreat and advance of the tide, had become silent to her as well.

You might think there's some symbolism in my wearing this cock costume everywhere, but there's not.

She woke.

I love you and I miss you dearly.

"Peep," sez mice.

OP was straight-up gay—a faggot, one might say.

The store was closed.

A breeze was blowing.

>>7529755
what else can a breeze do?

>>7529777
fuk ur bitch desu

>>7529777
Brush you face, faggot.

By the end of its entirety, it seemed to me that it was all in vain; thus I started over.

>>7529777
Breeze.

>>7529777
lift a girl's skirt up so you can see her undies

>>7529686
>onomatopoeia

are you four years old?

>>7529832
cut "of its entirety", the comma, "to me", and "thus

you prolix pud-man

>>7529783
haha jokes on you, I don't even have a bitch

>>7529639
Some sand blew in through the open door way, coming to rest in a corner under the fluttering white curtains.

>>7530124
it could have blown in through the closed doorway?

>>7529658

all the sheets were folded and put away into the linen closet

>>7529639
Light of World Star neon, the sun shining and slow.

I started over.

>>7529639
"He'll be half flaccid, half high."

Several blue-tails rustled up from the canopy below, swirling in the open sun, all a-twitter.

>>7529654
winner

>>7529981
>He's literally this salty about a valid grammatical device

wew lad

Go!

caine skin
pearl eyes
pure sex
sin
escape from
isolation
into
bright lights white flight dove nights crooked sights and
doh doh doh doh doh dododooddo
she bleeds gold
her tears crystalize
shattering the light
like a feather
drowning in
milk
white blood, mothers love
dazzles violently
street sweeper
timekeeper
husbands who beat their
records and
cd's
breathe easy now
inhale the light
the future's bright

Moths flitted noiselessly around the buzzing yellow lantern

>>7529639
What does 'lightness' refer to in this context?

>>7529688
chuckled

>>7530139
there are two door ways, or maybe openness is important to the rest of the passage, maybe the gap under the door is larger than you'd expect. you aren't smart.

>>7529777
are the closed door way guy? what a boring faggot you are

>>7529639
She never thought she'd fuck him again but here he was- deep inside her pussy. The light was nowhere to be seen. And then he came and then he came out of her pussy. Like a cock or a cockroach. It was a beautiful dream he'd never had before. Lucid dreaming he thought is the reason people rape others. Also, God is dead. His name was Gregor Friedrich Samsa Jr.

Make sense? I am trying stream of consciousness.

Make sense?

>>7529689
I enjoy reading this as an African American would.

>>7530168
I really like this one.

>>7529639
Lexington Avenue- a strip of all-American suburbia, captured by the warmest apricot glow. The sky, blue, the grass green, the people, at home. Not perfection, but comfort- that is enough.

One day you'll miss me and then.

>>7529983
thank you for that. I am very entry-level /lit/

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>>7529639
The wax and wane of a will-o-wisp.

>>7530444
what

>>7530444
>>7530439
the majority of people in the thread don't seem to be making those mistakes