Because tonight is Christmas eve, here's a little something

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a peach wouldnt fall to pieces from hitting a gravel driveway 2bh F A M

>people not appreciating the best /lit/-produced work since taipei

>stationery
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>>7500281
this is nonsense. it doesn't make any sense and is quite incoherent. i have no idea what the characters are talking about. that's not how actual people communicate and that's not how to communicate to a reader.

>>7500347
It would if it was a shitty peach you retard

>>7500281
>me at first
Mira's going on a fun trip?

>me at end
Well fuck

>>7500281
This just made me a good kid of depressed. Perfect after christmas dinner with my family.

>>7500477
Makes perfect sense to me bub. Maybe subtlety just isn't your thing.

>>7500281
Thanks, I appreciate your stories, all of them. Be sure to publish them as soon as you have a decent collection. Keep up the good work.

>>7500578
>Well fuck
My thoughts exactly.

>>7500477
Have you tried reading it twice? Lmao

Have a christmas bump.

>>7500347
Do you even lift?

>>7501687
Thanks man, will do.