/lit/, I need you help. HOW the FUCK do I stop writing a mediocre

Post it here so I can determine whether it has any value

Just flex yr muscles, mate.

>>10033853
Have the characters come together and write a chapter-long orgy.

>>10033853
don't stop. keep writing, faggot.

but do post some pages for us. please.

You have to keep going, if you don't then the zaibatsus win

>>10033853
Sell it under a pseudonym if it's bad. Still money.

>>10034044
>cyberpunk
>bad

That's a given innit?

>>10033853
introduce a minor character that would be played by Danny DeVito, and have him kill all the other characters in a way that ensures they can't be brought back to life. none of that "he killed an android double", or "we scanned his brain and he lives on in VR" shit.

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Fuck, I'll try to make some sense of it, I'll try and get a good chunk to post up here sometime soon. I think it's bound to be mediocre though.

>>10034127
Funnily enough, a piece of the narrative is going to be a loose-cannon murderer that I'll have kill a few characters sometime

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>>10034117
Don't talk to me or my seminal genre defining work ever again.

Finish the book. Who cares if it's mediocre? It's practice. Write a better one after that.

This is how you git gud.

>>10033853
bump because interested

>>10033853
Finish it and move on

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Alright folks. I've put together a tolerable draft of some opening paragraphs, about 2.5K. So, here's the pastebin: /tEXF6Wj8

Go easy please, it's not exactly a major commitment and I wrote most of it early in the morning in a not-so-clear state.

>>10033853
Write about feeling captive to your work since this is clearly the theme of your post.

>>10036128
or feeling captive to an idea, perhaps.

>>10035702
>where are the scalding reviews
pls