Critique my Marine OCS 100 word statement /k/ The values and

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>>31631446

Hooah devil dog

USMC 74-74

>>31631509
kek

>>31631446
They'll probably eat it up.

Seems high school teir, not professional, a lot of 'I'. Idk what the statement requires so I can't really talk, if it were me I'd delve into honor, courage, commitment. Also don't pretend you've been this Leader and now your ready to lead in the troops.

>>31631527

Sic semper tyrannis devil dog!

HOOAH WATER TREATMENT MARINES

USMC 90-91 kicked saddam out of Afghanistan

>>31631570
More or less this. I'd also stray away from talking about daddy dearest. No one cares about you being legacy. Prove what you have done.

>>31631446
If you need a reference tell them there's a disgruntled 0311 that lurks 4chan. Tell them I told you both to fuck yourselves.

>>31631446

Cringeworthy

Here's a better one;

"I wanna be a muhreen becuz my daddy was a muhreen and I'm clinically retarded"

>>31631446
uuuu rah simplify devil frogs

invasion of portugal 1989

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>>31631446
>I have been a natural leader my entire life
>>31631570
This. Then again it is the Marines so the bar for your personal statement should be pretty low.

My girlfriend broke up with me and this will show her! Plus, the recruiter hasn't stopped bothering me since 8th grade, so I pretty much owe it to him.

>>31631446
>I read with a lot of interest your letter in regard to the Marine Corps. For your information the Marine Corps is the Navy's police force and as long as I am President that is what it will remain. They have a propaganda machine that is almost equal to Stalin's.

just remember, sometimes a lcpl knows more than you

"Since a young age I have gravitated towards the Marine Corps. I've utilized the core values and found success. This leaves me with an overwhelming desire to serve and lead. With a complete understanding of the leadership traits, and warrior spirit, I will have the tools for mission success. The motivated work ethic I pride myself on will help me learn from others, teach, and lead from the front. The Marine Corps Officer program directly reflects the goals, values, and lifestyle I want to achieve."

>>31631446

Oorah
Get Some Marine!!!!
USMC 79-81

>>31631446
go enlisted
because if i cant get paid as much as my SSGT right out of training you shouldn't either.
or get a commission.
you do you.
Just listen to your NCOs

>>31631446

tldr version: I love taking hot loads in my poz ass from gunny Jamal for the protection of the state of Israel and Saudi Arabia.

I wanna grab pussy and kill for my country. The end.