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2017-09-09 04:52:28 Post No. 3129785
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Anonymous 2017-09-09 04:52:28 Post No. 3129785 [Report]
/ic/, there's something very wrong with the character in this illustration but i can't pinpoint it. Are head and torso too small?

It feels like something unplanned that the artist tried his best with but woke up one day, found out it was his deadline, cleaned it all up a bit then delivered.

But I'm no specialist. Can someone with a bit more experience in digital painting shed a light here so I don't ever sell something that looks like this?
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Anonymous 2017-09-09 04:59:53 Post No.3129792
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Anonymous 2017-09-09 04:59:53 Post No.3129792 [Report]
>>3129785
>Human
>Draw dwarf
Also she ugly
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Anonymous 2017-09-09 05:01:52 Post No.3129796
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Anonymous 2017-09-09 05:01:52 Post No.3129796 [Report]
>>3129785
The composition is terrible because the values don't work. First time I looked at it, saw the face, but then I was confused because the scroll cuts up the top. Didn't even notice that was a scroll. First impression already failing. It's not even obvious what she's doing. Is she looting a corpse? I don't know. Also, it's very blue when the card is already blue, making it even more difficult to look at. It all just blends together.
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Anonymous 2017-09-10 08:14:10 Post No.3131648
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Anonymous 2017-09-10 08:14:10 Post No.3131648 [Report]
>>3129785
she looks like a dwarf instead of human
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Anonymous 2017-09-10 08:59:11 Post No.3131690
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Anonymous 2017-09-10 08:59:11 Post No.3131690 [Report]
>>3129785
right upper arm is too long
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