There's a saying I once heard and it goes if your relationship ship is like a bowl of cereal would you ever get tired of eating the everyday for the rest of your life? I've thought of this saying for so long and thought of it in a bad way not realizing I was misinterpreting it but instead
Our relationship is the bowl and this milk that that I will continuously fill after it starts to get low is our love the new and different cereal are experiences that we will both
What does /ic/ think of this poem thing I made for my gf of 2 years as of today, I wanted to show her but idk I'm kinda embarrassed and think it's dumb/cheesy/corny idk should I show her?
come to face together as I hold your hand throughout whatever lies ahead of us in the future, I love you so much
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OP, /ic/ is for critics of User-created artwork but only for visual art. You would have a better luck on /lit/, for sure they must have a poetry thread somewhere.