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I took an anon's advice to not make my outlines black. Is

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Anonymous 2017-06-21 01:10:38 Post No. 3029714 [Report]

I took an anon's advice to not make my outlines black. Is there anything else I should fix?

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Anonymous 2017-06-21 02:32:14 Post No.3029822
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Anonymous 2017-06-21 02:32:14 Post No.3029822 [Report]

I think the crown is maybe off but I'm not sure. Should I fix the placement of her crown?

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Anonymous 2017-06-21 02:47:28 Post No.3029846
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Anonymous 2017-06-21 02:47:28 Post No.3029846 [Report]

I think there should only be one 3d bit on one side of the top of the crown

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Anonymous 2017-06-21 03:26:03 Post No.3029887
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Anonymous 2017-06-21 03:26:03 Post No.3029887 [Report]

>>3029846
Ok thanks!

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Anonymous 2017-06-21 09:30:13 Post No.3030936
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Anonymous 2017-06-21 09:30:13 Post No.3030936 [Report]

>>3029714
the outlines still look black to me

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Anonymous 2017-06-21 09:42:55 Post No.3030950
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Anonymous 2017-06-21 09:42:55 Post No.3030950 [Report]

>>3029714
Fuck the guy with the line color critique (black lines are perfectly acceptable, use construction (the character is sloppy and flat and has weird proportions) and give your lines hierarchy (in which thinner lines are used for smaller details) because they are all too thick and it kills the perception of depth.

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Anonymous 2017-06-21 09:49:29 Post No.3030957
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Anonymous 2017-06-21 09:49:29 Post No.3030957 [Report]

>>3029714
Use brown outlines

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Anonymous 2017-06-21 10:32:49 Post No.3031013
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Anonymous 2017-06-21 10:32:49 Post No.3031013 [Report]

>>3030950
Ok I go do that. Thanks anon.

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