Finally started painting again after 6 years, turns out I'm shit
Made this with any pencil work or guidelines, went straight to paint on paper
How can I improve this?
Without* any
>>2986404
With Pencil work and guidelines.
Lots of practice
Visual reference.
A critical eye.
And the intelligence to recognize that you should stop posting on 4chan, because there is no productive help or advice to be found here.
If you have any genuine interest in improving, go somewhere else where people who take the time to tap out a reply will actually be trying to help you.
>>2986410
Where are those forums??
Because this can be said about deviantart as well
>>2986410
I love this board because people are hateful and criticize every possible thing. It makes the positive comments worth their weight in gold.
>>2987282
Thing is neither party knows what the fuck they're talking about when they criticise or praise.
>>2987286
The advice I have been getting has been pretty congruent. First time using that word, congruent. It just came to me, I googled it, and sure enough, it fits.
Be sure to post it upside down next time.
>>2986404
You can improve the color. Everything is off and the lighting doesnt make sense. The sky shoukd be a lighter tone/tint than the foreground. Fuck guidelines and references and representational work, you will improve more if you go 100% abstract and focus on color harmony, composition, and scale. Painting is not illustration, use your pallette to make a SHIT TON of mid tones
>>2987726
Thanks for that, I'll study on those
But yeah for me doing pencil work really puts me off painting and sometimes stresses me out too much, but I always ended up doing it, this time I tried to do it without any pencil work, I enjoyed it much more.
>>2986404
Btw for those who do t know la la land, this is the reference picture I used
An anime version would look better than this normie art.
>>2990699
Faggot anime is normie art for the japs, it is the cliche shit used in commercials and ads. You stupid weeaboo faggot.
>>2991090
>Butthurt normie
>>2988992
>Btw for those who do t know la la land
Is there anything worse than poorly made "pop culture" art? Jesus man just do anything but that and you'll improve in my eyes
>>2986404
That's really good for a 6 year old.
>>2995098
Be more creative if you want to shit talk, you yourself sound like a kid with that statement
>>2995366
I agree.
>>2995098
Post your work faggot.
Better than most people on /ic/