How do I make this better? Any one want to do a red line before i get to far to make corrections?
>>2961441
YOU DID IT AGAIN?!
*closes the door and locks it*
WHAT DID I TELL YOU, NEWFAG? WHAT THE *FUCK* DID I TELL YOU LAST TIME?
*undos belt*
*grabs you from behind*
STOP SHITPOSTING!
*throws you on the couch*
*starts beating you with the belt*
*smack*
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STOP *smack* SHIT *smack* FUCKING *smack* POSTING!!!
READ THE FUCKING STICKY! *smack*
POST IN THREADS THAT ALREADY EXIST!!! *smack*
*you're bleeding and crying now*
*smack*
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GET *smack* IT THROUGH *smack* YOUR SKULL!! *smack*
YOU'RE WHY MOMMY LEFT, YOU FUCKING IDIOT!! *smack*
STOP MAKING ME DO THIS!! *smack*
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FUCK!!
*throws you to the ground*
*you lay in a heap sobbing*
*reties belt*
I HAD BETTER NOT SEE ANOTHER *FUCKING* SHITPOST FROM YOU AGAIN. YOU POST IN THAT GODDAMNED /BEG/ THREAD WITH YOUR RETARD FRIENDS AND YOU DON'T COME OUT AGAIN!! YOU UNDERSTAND ME?!!!
*unlocks door*
*leaves you to find the loomis books*
>>2961591
Thank you daddy!
>>2961591
but you didnt tell me any thing last time...