Interested in feedback. I will post a few and if people are interested I will share more.
>>2947099
You need to add line weight for it to look more interesting
I like your style, do you have any desire to colour them ? Could be great with a crazy range.
Pic found on /ic/ related
>>2947108
Thank you! Ive received that feedback once before.
Suppose I should start thinking about it. I feel about ready/comfortable
>>2947111
Thanks! I do have the desire...
I feel addicted to line drawing atm. I keep pushing color into the future. Telling myself I dont have just enough drawings yet and I need to practice more.
This is all Ive colored in the past year
Instead of your new works can you post a very old one?
>>2947113
>Ive received that feedback once before.
>Suppose I should start thinking about it.
So you got a critique and completely ignored it till now. That's awful.
You're not gonna make it.
>>2947116
I know that feeling.
It's looking great imho
>>2947111
>crazy range
>typical analogous color scheme
Do you even color theory?
>>2947123
Heres one from 2011. I didnt draw a lot until last october. Finally settled down in my personal life and have time for art
>>2947125
>person receives a critique more than once and admits they should examine it more closely
>start squealing ngmi
Not everyone is going to be able to magically fix every problem proposed in a critique overnight, nor should every critique be given equal weight / urgency in solving. But if you hear the same thing from multiple people it obviously warrants more consideration.
>>2947125
I agree I should have listened sooner
>>2947139
I felt this way but didnt want to start a 4chan argument and derail things. Thanks
Good sense of depth. Got any sceneries to post?
>>2947147
Thanks anon!
Not too many... Something like this?
Gotta go offline here soon. IRL beckons
>>2947150
yeah that's cool
You could try some more complex ones, and advance your perspective a bit. Got blog?
>>2947157
Thanks! I'll keep at it. Appreciate the feedback
Yeah, I try to make new stuff as much as possible. I work full time though
https://www.instagram.com/joshua.smith.art/
Thanks everybody for the feedback, I gotta run for a couple hours
For shits and giggles heres a digital work I made a few years ago
thanks again
>>2947182
I have, no idea what I'm looking at...but I like it!
this thread reminds me of https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NhheiPTdZCw
>>2947116
That's pretty sweet anon! You have an interesting mind!
>>2947210
Thanks! I dunno whats going on there either but it definitely felt infantile when I made it. Heres another from that same time
>>2947315
Man if I could animate like that I think Id be eternally satisfied. Love it
>>2947561
Thank you! Always wanted to draw it too, pretty happy with how it turned out.
I tried to draw Dave in the helmet with all the light reflecting off of it but wasnt happy with the result. Very cool challenge though, I will go back to it.
Drew this tonight, quick linework maybe 20-30 mins. Felt the groove.
This whole thread has been so inspirational for me. I will definitely be drawing all night.
>>2947125
Are you retarded? Nobody should just change his stuff around because of one line of text on the internet.
You gather much feedback, then consider the common points.