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Interested in feedback. I will post a few and if people are interested I will share more.
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>>2947099
You need to add line weight for it to look more interesting
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I like your style, do you have any desire to colour them ? Could be great with a crazy range.
Pic found on /ic/ related
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>>2947108

Thank you! Ive received that feedback once before.

Suppose I should start thinking about it. I feel about ready/comfortable
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>>2947111

Thanks! I do have the desire...

I feel addicted to line drawing atm. I keep pushing color into the future. Telling myself I dont have just enough drawings yet and I need to practice more.

This is all Ive colored in the past year
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Instead of your new works can you post a very old one?
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>>2947113
>Ive received that feedback once before.
>Suppose I should start thinking about it.
So you got a critique and completely ignored it till now. That's awful.

You're not gonna make it.
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>>2947116
I know that feeling.
It's looking great imho
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>>2947111
>crazy range
>typical analogous color scheme
Do you even color theory?
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>>2947123
Heres one from 2011. I didnt draw a lot until last october. Finally settled down in my personal life and have time for art
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>>2947125

>person receives a critique more than once and admits they should examine it more closely
>start squealing ngmi

Not everyone is going to be able to magically fix every problem proposed in a critique overnight, nor should every critique be given equal weight / urgency in solving. But if you hear the same thing from multiple people it obviously warrants more consideration.
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>>2947125

I agree I should have listened sooner
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>>2947139

I felt this way but didnt want to start a 4chan argument and derail things. Thanks
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Good sense of depth. Got any sceneries to post?
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>>2947147

Thanks anon!

Not too many... Something like this?
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Gotta go offline here soon. IRL beckons
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>>2947150
yeah that's cool
You could try some more complex ones, and advance your perspective a bit. Got blog?
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>>2947157
Thanks! I'll keep at it. Appreciate the feedback

Yeah, I try to make new stuff as much as possible. I work full time though

https://www.instagram.com/joshua.smith.art/
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Thanks everybody for the feedback, I gotta run for a couple hours

For shits and giggles heres a digital work I made a few years ago

thanks again
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>>2947182
I have, no idea what I'm looking at...but I like it!
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this thread reminds me of https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NhheiPTdZCw
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>>2947116
That's pretty sweet anon! You have an interesting mind!
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>>2947210

Thanks! I dunno whats going on there either but it definitely felt infantile when I made it. Heres another from that same time

>>2947315

Man if I could animate like that I think Id be eternally satisfied. Love it
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>>2947101
i love this one OP, great work. dig the lines. >>2947174
also nice 2001: a space odyssey art. i've always wanted to draw that scene actually
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>>2947561
Thank you! Always wanted to draw it too, pretty happy with how it turned out.

I tried to draw Dave in the helmet with all the light reflecting off of it but wasnt happy with the result. Very cool challenge though, I will go back to it.

Drew this tonight, quick linework maybe 20-30 mins. Felt the groove.

This whole thread has been so inspirational for me. I will definitely be drawing all night.
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>>2947125
Are you retarded? Nobody should just change his stuff around because of one line of text on the internet.
You gather much feedback, then consider the common points.
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