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I am trying to make a banner for an artists page. I never really make them so this isn't looking too great for me. I feel the letters look like shit with no flow. They are supposed to be painted behind her and that octopus is going to be scraped.
Any input /ic/?
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>>2903382
I suggest you bring the letters closer together. When they are too spaced out it looks awkward. I drew this thing in 3 minutes, it still looks like shit.
Make sure the edges of the letters blend together nicely.
>I feel the letters look like shit with no flow
Trust your inner art critiquer
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>>2903428
Try that except redo the N it looks horrible in mine
Also try to get the bottom left corner of the G to fit in with the A nicely.
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>>2903428
Thank you I appreciate the input
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bump plz
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>>2903382
Also the person's face is way too detailed.
Looks like the my feels dude
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>>2903737
Too much? I erased quite a few times trying different expressions. I tried to be as simple as possible.. should I ditch the lips?
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>>2903749
Meaning thats why it might look detailed (seeing the erased stuff). I am going for a simple cartoon look.
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I like the fox :)
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needs more loomis
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>>2904713
What is loomis?
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