What do you guys think of my comic? It's heavily anime inspired,

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>>2875708
Not bad, but there's plenty of room for improvement in every aspect of it.
Composition, storytelling, figure and landscape drawing, color theory, values, etc etc.
Git gud, draw more.

>>2875708
The perspective is wrong in the third panel, you shouldn't be able to see that plateau, it's above the horizon line (simple rule of thumb: horizon line is the height of your own eyes/camera).

There's only a faint hint of perspective in half of the panels, and none in the other half. If you worked on your perspective and actually included features in your images to display your knowledge of perspective, you'd be presenting something much easier to enjoy.

Like this guy said >>2875782 you've got room to improve every aspect of your comic, but I think you should work on your perspective first, because I get the feeling it's something you're interested in, and I think you only need to move a little bit in the right direction for noteworthy improvement.

There are tons of videos on youtube on the subject of perspective, and probably plenty of resources in the sticky. I haven't seen this but it was one of the first results, and it's probably good enough: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLBiW8y5LSHK425SYwHDIcLhXux8PfSzkw

I'm assuming there's some missing context here, but I can't tell what's actually supposed to be happening in these thirteen panels (Is that supposed to be a complete barrier? All of the characters are on the same side of the barrier? what are they retreating for?), and the dialog is equally confusing. So I would recommend the next thing you work on is storytelling. Try to think in terms of what your viewer is seeing, not what you're trying to tell them.

>>2875708
>>2875834
>I haven't seen this but it was one of the first results, and it's probably good enough: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=
Nevermind, that video series is garbage. In both of his one point perspective videos he draws repeating objects receding into the distances without measuring them in perspective. He can eyeball it and make it look decent (kinda) because he's fairly experienced, but if you don't understand how it works you'll have a harder time.

Just download this, it's comprehensive:
"Perspective Made Easy" by Ernest R. Norling
>https://mega.co.nz/#!yEVH0RzI!hExkmbL9WTEV20aI10De7q9J4rf3t3A6uluz4cT9FbM

>>2875708
You're not the real ColdFusion. He doesn't seek advice.