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2017-01-16 06:57:08 Post No. 2818448
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Rookie artist. Tell me what you liked or disliked, and how I could improve. Thanks

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Anonymous 2017-01-16 07:05:00 Post No.2818463
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>>2818448
blog? :^)))))))))

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Anonymous 2017-01-16 07:18:08 Post No.2818473
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>>2818448
i love it
> more?

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Anonymous 2017-01-16 07:21:08 Post No.2818477
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>>2818448
There is nothing to improve as there is no ambition I can't see reached in your pic
By that I mean that you made "cartoony" instead of real anatomy or shading or whatever. It would be better if you said in what you want to get better.
Coloring?
Rendering?
Shading?
Dynamism?
Anatomy?
Art style?
Composition?
Perspective?
Strokes/lineart?

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Anonymous 2017-01-16 08:07:23 Post No.2818530
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>>2818448
Considering the artstyle you're trying to pull, it looks disconcerting for the head to be so far forward
Bring it back a bit and shorten the neck a WEE bit, while simaltaeneously making the neck wider, but not too wide
You'll get what I mean as you're doing it

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Anonymous 2017-01-16 08:29:17 Post No.2818540
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>>2818448
Bitch got goat hands.

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