Hi /ic/. So I drew this a few minutes ago. What can I do to

>>2814336
Also this was just a five minute doodle for fun if that helps.

>>2814340
If you want critique, put somework into it first.

>>2814351
>five minute doodle for fun
ey fuck you man

Stop pretentiously putting the pen on top of your work for one.

good job kid now draw something that matters

>>2814336
First you take your pen, move it out of the shot and then you shove it your bum you fucking deviantart user

>>2814336

Did you draw this on location?

If yes, then you may be interested in reading The artist's guide to sketching by James Gurney.

And you should lurk more, post in the draw thread and move your damn pen.

>>2816210
/board

For 5 minutes it doesn't look bad, I would expect it to be a full blown masterpiece. Keep working hard op.

>>2815346
why should we put effort into your drawing if you didn't try? why do you think this is so worth posting if you didn't spend any time on it?

>>2814336
Your mother should have modified that pen so she could shove it in her genitalia and have you aborted.

>>2814336
>5 min doodle
>crit me pls xD
I fart in your general direction. Your mother was a hamster and your father smelled of elderberries.

>>2814336
Why do people put their pen on the paper like that? I can sort of get it if the point is to show which tools have been used, but most of the time it's just a random pen.
If you want to show your shit, why have distracting objects all over it?

Fag.

>>2821525
I think the major reason people do it is that it's effective for getting Instagram likes. It's a retarded gag, but it makes the drawing seem more "real" in the mind of the normie.

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146KB, 170x584px

>>2821533
I don't get it.
No normies itt that mind filling me in?

>>2821525
the pen is drawn as well and part of the piece

>>2814336
The water at the base of the boat is what throws it off.

>>2821572
/ic/ could invent a new formulation of trolling with shitty doodles that have trompe l'oeil style supplies on top

>>2824444
*form

>>2814336
why is the anchor being pulled away? is the boat going in reverse and the anchor got stuck on some rocks?

anyway the mountains and the singular cloud in the background are lazy

>>2814336
burn it, the paper, the pen and the desk, stream it for giggles

>>2814336
I like the cloud