I just started paying for illustrator. Friend wanted me to draw

>>2728103

Good concept/design, but a bit boring execution for me. It's IMO a case of small things piling up: ribbons not having any fold, the right one could be fixed a little lower and fold to the left/up, a thing on its neck could use a contour in at least a part of it and more pronounced tilt on the left, front legs could be extended and fixed so the will lay on inclined ground plane like hind legs...

Generally I like it a lot, but as I say - I have a feeling from it that it is a bit plain. I think trying to tweak it a bit could improve it.

t. total n00b

>>2728116
Thank you! I appreciate your critiques. I am painfully aware of all the flaws. I copped out there at the end (towards the body) because I never had a rough sketch to start off with. Maybe if I plan out my pictures more instead of trying to rush them, I'll see fewer mistakes.

Your outline of Sylveon is the same width all the way around, this makes it look boring imo. For a start, try to use different sized pens on the outline to make it more interesting.

>>2728103
none of the feet are on the same plane. thin outlines on the interior of the form and a fat outline around the contour flattens the image. whole thing is off balance to the right.