Alternative Art/Stylization General

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WIP.

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Critique please.

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>>2728095
Done.

>>2728112
>...and then she farts!

>>2728204
You are far from done if you think you could pass with those fucking hands.

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Sakura you forgot your kneepads and panties again!

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Posted this towards the end of the last thread. If I could get any feedback/red line before I go further, that'd be great.

>>2728204
interesting line, how u do it? the legs are a mess tho pls save them, the drawing is quite worth of it

>>2728220
cute :3<

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toned it down

>>2728220
>and panties again!
prove it

>>2728095
>>2728204
How would you go about planning perspective in a picture like this?

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>>2728264

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>>2728073
>File
Hi, it's me, unappealing coloring book guy... how did am i doing?

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some poses

>>2728284
blog?

>>2728287
paradoxjelli.tumblr.com

>>2728220
cmon kyle where the feet at

>>2728204
are those weapons 3d models or you are crazy enough to draw all that by hand?

>>2728282
mei's right eye is noticeably smaller I dont know if this was an attempt at perspective but that shit looks weird. get a ref, also the symmetry on dva looks really uncanny

>>2728220
you are the best im always looking forward ur pic's.

>>2728302
okay, thanks.

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Is it just me or am i making it progressively worse?

>>2728431
If you got rid of the animoo head it wouldn't look as bad desu.

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how to render anime without fucking everything

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>>2728436
But i'm an animoo person.
I wanna get like AS109 with cool rendered animes with well defined volume and depth.

>>2728439

Well then get through some head studies, that's the first thing that sticks out.

>>2728437
EEEEWWWWWWWWWWWW this fucking mouth holy shit.

Find someone who does it well and take a good fucking look. Krenz Kushart, AS109, and White Datura are the first things that come to mind, just open fucking pixiv and browse the top.

>>2728431
Yes, you are. Both the speculars and the cast shadows are DA tier.

>>2728437
Small changes in value, keep it subtle.

>>2728431
I like the face on the first one and then when you stuck the thing in her mouth it started sucking (no pun intended)

>>2728442
I actually dig some of the works they do, but cant really understand the mechanics behind that clean render.

I noticed the mouth is a bit strange, but how should i fix that?
>>2728445
Noticed that kind of subtleness in tim lochner works, it looks easy, but it's actually pretty hard to do =(

>>2728437
such an abomination!!!my friend think before you post....better think before you draw, you hungry? not enof pussy?

>>2728504
thank you

>>2728513
didnt want to be mean sorry, but the first impression i had was like "such a low level shit" no offense please....if people is crazy for porno good for them....as we say here in europe germany "machst gut" or good luck, or best wishes....

>>2728522
No problem, this is 4chan, everyone is already used to people like you.

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last one of her, trying to make this one dramatic

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Things I should have done differently?

>>2728685
Calf-to-thigh ratio

>>2728685
Lines. For most of the body they're fine but for the face the gritty, sketchy texturey look really takes away from the focus imo. Also that's a very manish hand.

>>2728685
not drawn the same boring subject matter as a million other horny neckbeards

>>2728687
>>2728688

Thanks for the feedback. Really hard to find a brush I like for inking.
Should probably just use the standard brush
>>2728690
I keep my facial hair neat and groomed :/

>>2728704
>wasting time/energy on grooming instead of drawing
never gonna make it

>>2728220
>no delicious feet
0/10

>>2728685
shape of the arm isn't good.
Study more muscles, it's lacking.
Skin color isn't good looking either.
shadows are lacking in quality as well.

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>>2728073
meme

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>>2728821
and ryomeme

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More half doodling.

>>2728437
try to work a bit slower maybe?
those whites on the skin look more like chalk than light. it needs more saturation

>>2728073
blog of OP image?

>>2728442
Are there any videos of AS109 or White Datura actually rendering?

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Is this a better face?

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>>2728442
>>2728504
>>2728873

after looking at some anime artist, i tryed to apply on something, does it look better now?

probally there are face mistakes.. im not really good on anim

>>2729046
the lift eye (on our right) looks bad
the nose is too short and flat but certainly better

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>>2728284
>>2728606
lovely

>>2728995
try youku

>>2729031

>>2729054
I'll make some tweaks and post it again later, maybe fresh eyes will work, ty.

>>2728431
yeah, shading was underwhelming

>>2729031
what happened to her forehead? Why did she become so wide?

>>2729143
got yourself out of drawing that leg. im sure some weirdo is fapping to this right now.

>>2729483
I am that weirdo.

>>2729160
he dab

How does one start drawing in anime style? Already studied the basics, planning on studying anatomy since people say is essential even for anime but what else?

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>>2729483
I was not lazy, I just didn't know where to put the mirror which as you can see is quite important

>>2729519
Achievement unlocked...yay!

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>>2728995
http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XODkwNDU2Nzc2.html
http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XNTAzOTUzNjQ0.html
http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XNjIwNTkwMTc2.html

>>2729688
Awesome. I am assuming I need to register to see the actual 1080p content?

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What the fuck is this layout and how do I revert to the old one?

>>2729697
Just go to settings.

>>2729701
And then? I've been there but I couldn't find anything to change it back.

>>2729046
neck's too short (regardless of angle)
hand is no good. she doesn't really have a palm.
eyes are also wonky. mainly they're too far apart. face as a whole is wonky

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>>2729795
>>2729054

Tried to fix the face and the hand palm, im sure she doesnt have down syndrome anymore at least.

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>>2729979
-again, neck was too short.

-eyes are better but it's still a bit weird. eyes are too small and too round, especially the closer one.
-you shouldn't treat the forehead like a giant round ball. and you had way too much space between the eyebrows.
(in my version the eyes are still too far away imo, but maybe that's just taste.)

-too lazy to do hands, but i think this sillouhette is more natural.

>>2730051
ty for paintover, the neck is really a problem, i better move for a next one, i took a look at the early sketch and it was a complete mess of proportions :s,

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>>2729979
jah jah

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>>2729979
Wanted to point out something i havent seen talked about yet. Hope it helps!

>>2728073
blog?

>>2730051
I disagree about the neck. I think it was fine shorter, irl humans dont have such long necks, just look at your own in the mirror in comparison to the rest of your body. But aesthetically your edit is nicer to look at, which is great for alternative art. So my point is he could go with more realistic shorter neck or make it longer for femininity and pretty points. Either way is fine.

>>2728073
Source on pic in OP?

>>2730169
How do you make these?
It looks nice.

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Color design

where do u think Krenz getting those references for man action poses ?

>>2728073
who drew the op pic?

>>2730324
This image lacks eyes bulging in the 3d effect. Nice.

>>2730324

When you put emphasis on the lines, the flow feels better compared to your non lined works.

>>2728437
wow, blog please.

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>>2730180
yow create a simple drawing with few pixels, then you choose transparent selection on ms paint, then you drag this little draing while pressing shift, then you see where it goes until you are satisfied

>>2730417
I would give you, but that drawing is a disgrace, and it makes me sad, i'll redo that shit.

>>2730169
>>2730468
Please put on a trip.

>>2730468
Ok, thanks!

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>>2730578
sketch i did way to late at night will try fix it up later today

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here you go guys, destroy the little talent i have

Part 1. youtu.be/LGYVsnrc1Xs

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>>2730686
I see you're trying to emulate 80s-90s style but you need to keep in mind the placing of eyes on her face.

>>2730690
you got an example? i always get that about my eyes placement and keep trying to fix them but always come out wrong.

>>2730402
How do I keep this flow as I render it?

>>2730686

You didn't choose a correct lightsource, and the volumes appear bad defined overall. Her face is really strange; maybe you tried to emulate an old manga style, but keep in mind that you have to know face anatomy really well to play with proportion before trying. Hair looks meh, semply because their volume isn't defined and they appear stiff.
Hands are really bad studied. The foreshortening of her right arm looks ok but her left arm is too long.

I would suggest you to go to /beg/, no offence, but you clearly made some basic mistakes on anatomy/proportions/volumes defining.

>>2730699
im here for feedback and thats what im getting, thats i will do just that!

>>2730699
do you recommend any books?

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>>2730693
I don't know if this is helpful.

>>2730704
Sticky ones are really good to begin with; I'm currently improving my anatomy/construction on them and real life copying.

>>2730051
No, you made her in to a fucking giraffe! The neck is fine here >>2729979

>>2730139
Thank you for the tips man, i looked at some ref and made some changes to the hand btw.

>>2730566
You're a tease, anon.

>>2730781
do you have eyes?

>>2731132
your proportions are pretty fucked, its most obvious in how tiny her hands are but overall her whole body tapers down. if you were going for perspective, its not working. also dont avoid drawing hands and feet, that doesnt help you to get better at them. and her mouth also doesnt read at all.
I think what would help you most would be to zoom out considerably, make sure you can see the whole figure and flip your image, you'll see a lot of the glaring issues pop out at you, its mostly studying human proportions that are going to help you improve that

>>2730781
man her neck was tiny, anon did a favor with that paint over

>>2731132
lmfao she looks like shes having her fucking period ahahahaha

>>2731185
My mind is pure, therefore I can unsee :^)

>>2731181
Thank you very much for your critique. I'm studying anatomy and yeah, I still have a lot to learn before being decent, maybe that PoV wasn't the best after all.
I will work harder to correct these and keep your advices in mind!

>>2731132
the handle of the sword compared to the blade, senpai. That would be ridiculously hard to swing.

and also the length of the lower leg (shin) to the upper leg(thigh), your lower leg shouldn't be so much shorter than the upper leg. Bodies have muscles too, and your arms lack those. The perspective isn't correct either.

Follow this guy's advice too.
>>2731181

>>2731198
Funny, a guy pointed me that the handle was indeed very small right now.
Everything's noted. I'm gonna pick up Loomis and do some exercises.

>>2731221

Facial outline is too bold, try thinner, fluid lines.

>>2730781

Jesus, anon.

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>>2731221

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>>2728073

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Working on this for my boyfriend, her tongue is supposed to be out thats not a bottom lip.

>>2731284
Miqo'te ears are higher up on their head

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learning vehicles

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>>2728606

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>>2721468
i was a dummy and accidentally lost the brush i made while reformatting and had to attempt to remake it
also unsure of how to represent milk overflowing from mouth and down the body, hard outline of liquid really only works with opaque-ish flat colors, correct? on top of that, her fur is white too so still thinking about how i can differentiate them

>>2731517
Yellowish cream white for the milk, blueish grey white for the fur.

>>2731132
Why do people point out things that are fucked up?
It's obvious you have no idea what you're doing. I'm certain you can't even connect basic shapes.

>>2731517
Blog/stream please.

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Working in that right now.
I just fucked up the hands and don't know where to go, i think I fucked more things, but don't know where.

>>2731741
Simplicity, simplicity, simplicity.

>>2731747
Are you saying to me be more simple and less detailed? be more clear please.

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What do you think?
Should i even attempt coloring it?

Also do you see the detail in your monitor?
Somebody told me they couldnt see shit in the dark/

>>2731768
Looks like a polished turd.

>>2731414
nice but why flat feet

>>2731768
sorry but it just got worse desu

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>I hate myself

Don't know much about leg anatomy and I think it shows here. Lighting is pretty fucked too

>>2731967
>Just realized that he looks like he's about to fall over

Fuuuuuuckkkk

>>2731414
I get that you probably go for an "innocent" style, but I wish we could tell it's a woman by hints of the female body type, slightly wider hips and a hint of boobs, cuz right now your character design only holds on to the hair, if there's a situation where this character won't display the hair in such a wild manner she will lose every aspect of womanhood

>>2728204
Her left eye is a little low and tilted at too harsh an angle

>>2730324
Hair doesn't fit well with the rest of the structure, has no definition

>>2731967
>Don't know much about leg anatomy and I think it shows here
The legs look okay to be honest, it's the hand and chest that are not drawn all that well I think.

>>2731970
>Just realized that he looks like he's about to fall over
He looks like he is running forward, and I thought it was intentional. When you are in an active pose of movement such as that, then the center of balance can be tilted.

>>2730139
the ratio of the upper arm to forearm in general is terrible in the redline

>>2731990
post your work.

>>2731980
I disagree. The face shape and proportions of the features indicate that it's a young woman pretty clearly. And I also think that the slender body type that he chose works well to emphasize her character and it compliments the shape of her staff. Regardless, I don't think that he was trying to make the character "womanly" based on the actions shes drawn in the overall design.

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>>2731994
Sorry about the shitty paintover, I don't have the tablet connected but doesn't this read a little better?

>>2731998
It doesn't really make a difference in how the character is read, I read it as a tomboy-ish girl in both the original and your edit. I actually don't like how bulbous the butt looks since it breaks that clean line reaching from the end of the pant to her arm. I think that it breaks the line of action a bit, and ends up losing some of the power that the pose had. I just find the additions unecessary, and I think that the original was a more interesting character design (since it read more clearly as a woman who doesnt portray overtly feminine traits) that flowed better with the magic swoop and staff.

>>2732007
>line of action
well, to each their own I guess
I really couldn't tell it was a young girl for the lack of any such hints of it in the facial structure, I just thought it was a grown woman with no T&A

>>2731990
lol please post

>>2732012
Ya, in the end its whatever the artist chooses as far as your suggestion. However, a grown woman without ta can very well be an interesting character design.

>>2731990
>criticizing the critique

>>2731998
Looked better before, clearly looked like a young lady, 14-20 age range. But maybe thats not what you meant to imply. Also her right foot looks like it is actually a hand. Look at a reference

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What should I work on most?

>>2732038
Forms. Very flat

>>2732041
There is no shading as of yet. The base colors have started to be laid down.

>>2732047
Dont give me dumb excuses. i dont even care about your colors, i was talking about the lineart

>>2732047
different anon here
That's not at all what forms mean, shading can't fix a wacky foundation. Drop the design and rendering and you'll see what I mean.
You basically draw the contours and place all the features like when playing "pin a tail on a donkey" (+ symbol drawing), the neck doesn't connect to the torso, the hands are stiff af and most importantly, your figure isn't drawn in perspective, so it doesn't even exist in space. It's just a blueprint of what a figure might look like.

Don't get me wrong, it's good enough to get you a commission work here and there on tumblr, slightly more if you're willing to draw gay porn. But if you want to improve, leave all pride at the doorstep and pick up Fun with a pencil, Drawabox and Proko.

>>2732038
Are they supposed to be on their tip toes? Doesnt look grounded. Also when other anon said "flat" the meant you dont seem to understand form. The character doesnt look like it could be made of anything but cardboard

>>2732016
14-16 was the age that I was going for, just awkwardly tall and slender so I'm glad that its reading as such
>her right foot looks like it is actually a hand
ah shit, thank you i'll rework that

>>2732246
No problem, i thought it was a gorgeous drawing before btw! When you fix the foot it will be a really cool drawing. Are you gonna make it a complete illustration with a bg and everything? It looks like it would be a really cool narrative piece. I'm curious to see what shes fighting

How do you guys deal with drawing? I got all these concepts and ideas in my head and eventually even want to animate something, but I keep getting stuck in the "can't draw" "need to practice to get better" "can't draw" cycle. However that's not really the killer here. How do you guys get over the stupid amount of time poured into this shit? 2-4 hours in I'll have somewhat neat lineart but then comes coloring and shading and all that jazz. How do you do it?

>>2732329

JUST

>>2732280
ah thanks!
i might go and add a background but for the story its going in, i havent design my villains/antagonists yet so its more or less to show contrast in the characters younger early look to her older self.
just depends on the feedback i get at portfolio reviews at ctn, who knows

>come into draw thread
>shitty art everywhere
>check title to see if its the beginner thread
>alternative art/ stylization


oh

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didnt finish my pokemon team

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>>2731407
uh, fucking blog?

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Something I'm working on, it's a little messy but I like the look of that.

>>2732738
It doesn't make any sense.

>>2732738
Yes, please explain.

The next page will explain it. it's god comes in turns the demon back to her original form to make truce with the stereotype hero bla bla bla sex the end lets all get along, it's more or less the story, it's going to be a comedy.

>>2732738
Nice

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>>2728073
I took a day off from studying yesterday and I made this. What do you guys think?

I'm not exactly sure how to do distance in perspective, so please tell me if the room feels elongated.

I've got a feeling the FOV is all messed up.

>>2732382
Now you know what comprises the bulk of /ic/

>>2732738
What the heck is going on here...?

>>2732329
Just draw it and fail so you know what to work on. You won't get it right on the first shot anyways. Only pros are consistent.

>>2731280
Wew lad that's some flat, life-less shit

>>2731221
The clavicle usually ends in the mid-point of the neck, and the Deltoid partially inserts on the end.

That's completely wrong, and it's mainly exposing your lack of muscular knowledge.

I think you should refrain from drawing people for now and mainly study anatomy and perspective.

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>>2731132
>Signing your name when your art is this bad

Not gonna make it, friend.

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>>2732402
wanted a loose style but this is a little much. ill clean it up soon.

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wip.

>>2733066

Tight as fuck mount right there

>>2732966
If that guy walks over to the door he would literally be at knob length. The scale of everything in the room is incorrect.

>>2733066
thought it was a distant castle based on the thumbnail lol

careful of the cloud pointing out of the pic and of cropping the pigs face in half like that

>>2728234
first thing i thought of was porco rosso

>>2733401
Is there an easy fix for this?
It seems that you could tell in 2 seconds.

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I saw a good looking butt so I mechanized it. Then I ruined it when I tried to color it.

>>2733659
looks good imo

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>>2728073
im just going to repost this

>>2733659
Only thing is that the back of her head kinda looks like a face, which makes the anatomy a bit hard to read.

>>2733659
looks good man, you got more?

>>2732418
Tangents galore.

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neck is too long, but I'm pretty happy with this otherwise

>>2734150
you shouldn't be

>>2734190
gonna provide critique or just be an ass?

>>2734195
Hes right you know

>>2734198
Samefag

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>>2729143

Someone said it looked too porny so I added some clothing

>>2734195
I'm neither

>>2734198
nor
>>2734190

but I, too, acknowledge that he's right.
You've got more work to do before you can be happy with something.

>>2734292
>tfw your leg gets absorbed by your arms and torso

>>2734292
>too porny
>where is her hijab

Not bad anon

>>2734266
Pathetic

>>2734357
not to sharp are ya?

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>>2734302

>>2734292
draw the leg you coward.

>>2734359
guess you're new in town...

>>2734292
whats bothering me about this is that her torso feels really long, the width of it is very constricted above the breasts and then below it expands. its like you added an extra half foot into her body and you put it right between her boobs and her shoulders.
i dont know how you'd go about fixing it though because you made the arms proportionate to her elongated body

>>2732996
looks nice, before you clean it make his right thigh longer, its pretty short
and redo that right hand/forearm completely, it would be worth it

>>2732919
left hand is wonky as hell man

>>2734292
I like it bro, your shading is pretty good
Her ass needs work but idk how, I'm not an artist.

>>2734297
Then provide some critique. I don't care if you say it's bad, I'm just frustrated with people not saying anything more than that.

>>2729483
>im sure some weirdo is fapping to this right now.

>>2734292
>Someone said it looked too porny so I added some clothing
>clothing

Yeah, sure bro...

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>>2732404

>>2734302
heh

>>2734306
>>2734421

Thanks

>>2734366
Can't change canvas rez on my phone after starting the piece, I might try to make an illustration if so I will try to render her left hand at the very least, here I honestly ran out of space

>>2734370
Seems like it works then. Anyway thanks for the observation I might try to fix it with liquify if I color and render it further on my pc

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>>2733871

Yeah I know. It was more something I mocked up in about an hour just to relieve some stress/art blockage. It's mainly the one wing creating so many tangents.

There are no question threads so I'm asking here.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aFP-2X3UI-c
How does she manages to combine both a multiply coloring and one that isn't (as in that hides the lineart below)) in only one layer? Am I missing something? The quality of the video is shit and the logo hides the top left, so it's hard to tell.

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I'd love some critique. Also, how can I stop myself from noticing errors only after I've completed the piece?

>>2734725
> Also, how can I stop myself from noticing errors only after I've completed the piece

Use a mirror or switch to digital.

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>>2734292
Are you this guy?

>>2734725
>>2734730
or if the piece you're currently working on is pencil on paper (and the page isn't too large) you can just hold it up to a strong light source with the part you're drawing on facing away from you

>>2734742
it's Firez.

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>>2733708
I like it, don't see a lot of well-drawn flabby girls

>>2734730
Tried out a mirror, funny how bad it all looks.

>>2734792
Read loomis
Or practise other art that isn't figure or portraits

>>2730324
blog

>>2730324
Why put no details on the hair? Looks really flat. The frontal part of panties doesn't looks good either, too flat.

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>>2734884
>>2734373
finished it some time back

>>2730051
the neck wasnt too short. the torso was just too big

>>2730147
>>2735092
>>2730781
listen, for the most part that was a quick copy and paste job, so not all of the parts fit. especially her clavicles and low cleavage make the neck seem a little longer than it should have. but again, it's because i just cropped and moved it.

but don't fool yourself, the neck was way too short in the original. you really only have to look at the shoulders to see they were way too high.

>>2735092
nope, not necessarily. you don't seem to realize how big that head is.

>>2734935
you're not finished that hand still looks bad

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>>2734549
trying to get a sense of the comp before i clean it

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>>2731741

>>2735371
You made it worse, how is that even remotely possible?

>>2731407
the vehicle looks like it's be 30 feet long, your foreshortening is a bit wonky
>>2733066
neat man i love this

>>2735371
mien dicka blog?

>>2735371
Blog?

>>2735371
is this flatty

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I'm not the best at shading and coloring. I was just wondering if anyone had any general tips on at least reaching something like this?

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>>2734792

>>2735153
I'd appreciate a redline at this point, I really cant see past this.

>>2734150
There are some elements of this that are decent. Be happy with the process and don't let these faggots suck the life out of you. Neck is too long, face feels a bit flat... pose seems stiff. I think you have some potential though.

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How'd I do?

>>2735641
practice

>>2735641
that guy has a channel with a lot of tutorials.. i think it's knkl

>>2735759
wrong guy

>>2735577
flatty is much better, this is mikufag
>>2733716
is this your take on sycra?

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>>2735103
wow look at how much better it looks and all it took was a smiple rescale on the chest. better get your eyes checked

>>2731998

What enormous feet.

>>2736278
big feet to rub my big dick

>>2736211
"wow" it still looks like she's pulling her shoulders up.
and what happened to when you said it looked fine? apparently it wasn't fine, just like i said. YOUR brilliant eyes couldn't even figure out that there was something wrong with the image.

get fucked you backpedaling piece of shit.

>>2736293
typical delusional dick breath, also youre quoting the wrong guy lol

>>2736301
oh so you're the other guy.
in that case i already told you. the head is already big enough. and her shoulders are still too high, the neck is still too short, you didn't fix the issue.

are you proud of being such a halfassed fuckwad?
>lmao just resize it bro!
>at least it looks better than before! see?

the fact that it looks better now is precisely because of the things i pointed out, the shoulders and neck.
otherwise go ahead and scale it down until the cows come home. see if it gets any better than this.

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finished this finally

>>2736485
that girls foot ever so slightly against that desk is triggering my autism

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>>2736485
the window is more interesting than the actual subject.

>>2736498
im ok with that
i want the setting to be the first thing you look at, then the girls, and then the rest of the room

>>2736502
if that really was your goal, then you've got it down well.

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>>2735641
this is very simple cell shading. two layers with a bit of smudging/ blurring at the softer edges. plus one light layer, really simple shit. just ask a friend of yours on that level, shouldn't be too hard to find someone to teach you with a video call or something

pic rel is a tutorial on cell shading that i personally found quite useful for stylized work

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Haven't really drawn anything significant in about 3 years, just got my first tablet monitor so I'm experimenting. I'd like to keep the ridiculous pose but her legs just look wonky. I think I should just rotate her right leg a bit?

Might completely change the pose on the left arm, too, and have it down at her side instead of in front of her chest.

>>2730170

Still no sauce :( pls

>>2736592

It's andrae0 and the other guy in the previous thread is circle-a.

>>2736290

Enjoy the Athlete's Foot Fungus (-:

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Feeling so lost at this point with the background it hurts.

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New to coloring and lining... Any help?
Already know I fucked up the light source.

>>2737047
fix the light source

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>>2733730
>>2733665
Thanks - I just noticed the head thing, there's always next time

>>2733867
Here have some more, I found a nice looking Cammy butt

Ink tomorrow, open to any general feedback

>>2737097
the perspective on the gun is really fucked. And it doesnt make sense how so much of its top is visible when we're supposed to be seeing it from below

>>2737100
thanks - i'll put some fresh eyes on it tomorrow, i think i need to adjust the arms too

>the league of noodling extraordinaires

>>2735751

>hidden hands

>>2734730

Flip images.

Get off the artwork for a day, get it off your mind. Get back to it the next day and you'll spot unflattering errors everywhere.

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>>2734357
it doesn't have to be anime right?

>>2737518
it does, only cute girls are accepted here.

>>2737524
Don't worry bud, he's not here to steal your weeaboo audience.

>>2737518
Lovely design and expression. Maybe work on your forms a bit more, I don't get a very strong feeling of this guy existing in space. Read Michael Hampton's book.

>>2737575
Apply yourself.

>>2737575
is the face trying to escape its mortalshell

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>>2728073
what do you think about this?

>>2737575

Nile when will you be on the front page of artstation?

>>2737852
I think she looks rather manly

>>2737907
already have been, but im guessing it'll become more frequent in 2-4 years if i work hard

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>>2738193
You can make those kind of characters look appealing too. A good example is sakura from street fighter
>>2737852
The biggest problem with the design is that is stiff. She looks like someone took an awkward photo

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>>2737575

>>2737025
sharpen your values, especially the lights and darks
introduce darker values in the background and focus on accentuating the rock's texture along with the trees, they're too similar
other than that its a fantastic piece, and I love where its going!

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Doing a character sheet and wanted a fun pose for this kid. I know that my foot is fucked up but don't know what it should look like. Any suggestions or redlines would be very very helpful so i wont waste time lining it looking like trash.

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>>2737097
tried to fix the gun, then did a quick ink. Maybe color next?

>>2737047
maga

>>2737575
someone post the sidemouth video

you know the one

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celebration doodle :3

>>2736178
sycra... no
thats just i drawing i did for a color color palette challenge

>>2731062
what is your blogspot again?

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Developing a train sketch(far right) charactor from last week.

>>2739462
I love it, amazing skills anon.

>>2739462
I like your style, mon.

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>>2730606
Love it

Mike

>>2739471
>>2739473
Thanks bros

>>2734742
Where is that from?

Blog?

>>2739538

Jace pls

a new thread >>2739824

>>2734742
>comparing firez to jace

Come on now anon