This is some art I made the other day. What can I do to improve?

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2016-10-22 08:53:32 Post No. 2721390
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Anonymous 2016-10-22 08:53:32 Post No. 2721390 [Report]

This is some art I made the other day. What can I do to improve? Aside from the obvious arm/leg proportion issues.

Anonymous 2016-10-22 09:04:13 Post No.2721396
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Anonymous 2016-10-22 09:04:13 Post No.2721396 [Report]

>>2721390
Anatomical bicep/tricep issues, no lats flat metal plating, overall unexciting design and presentation.

I'd advise keeping up the figure studios and reading, idk, some fucking book on character design. I like Matessi's Force but unless you know how to apply the concepts in a naturalistic way you'll probably discard it as cartoonist shit.

Either way, next time you should just post this in the Draw Thread. Not the beginner thread, because that shithole doesn't need to exist.

Anonymous 2016-10-22 09:08:54 Post No.2721398
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Anonymous 2016-10-22 09:08:54 Post No.2721398 [Report]

>>2721396
Thanks dude, I'll look at some anatomy books (Excited to check out Force!) And I'll try drawing some arms from multiple angles.

This is some art I made the other day. What can I do to improve?

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