Wanted people's ideas. I used Patrick from Titus andronicus

stop drawing on lined paper.....also /beg/....
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read the sticky....

It was done on a whim during class. I didn't have printer paper. I used to have copic markers and stuff but sold them to pay for tuition, so I used whatever color tools I had. I want to focus on the skills rather than the tools. I didn't like how the hands and the camera lens for the arms came out. I always have a hard time with proportion because of it.

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IN THIS ORDER, LEARN:

>/////Construction/////
Your drawing has little structure, so it comes off as sloppy and ill planned, as well as feeling absurdly 2D.

>/////ANATOMY/////
Self explanatory. You had some luck with baggy pants and long sleeves, but even then it's clear that you don't have an understanding of the human body.

>/////PERSPECTIVE/////
You do not understand how to translate spacial relationships from 3D to 2D. Will help with that "camera lense" problem.

As for the design and concept, it's pretty highschool. TA is a great band, but bringing that into what you're doing is not interesting or original. Conceptual stuff like that CAN be learned here/ in this type of environment, but you're better off exploring the arts as a whole and further advancing and maturing your own tastes.

Also, don't make a thread for yourself. We don't have it in the sticky, WHICH WE SHOULD (cough mods cough), but now you know. Also read the sticky, it has all the information you need to address the issues stated above.

God speed anon.

PS A ream of printer paper isn't that expensive, quit making excuses