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a few weeks back i posted here a digital painting of mine, and

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2016-07-15 20:50:29 Post No. 2604062
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Anonymous 2016-07-15 20:50:29 Post No. 2604062 [Report]
a few weeks back i posted here a digital painting of mine, and i got a lot of critique that i got the lightning and colors bad.

should i consider this a slight improvement ?

only serious answers pls. (i know the fine details, composition and others are still shit)
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Anonymous 2016-07-15 21:21:50 Post No.2604101
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Anonymous 2016-07-15 21:21:50 Post No.2604101 [Report]
Compared to what?

Also you already have the beginner and drawthread
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Anonymous 2016-07-15 21:25:17 Post No.2604105
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>>2604101
compared to this
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Anonymous 2016-07-15 21:27:52 Post No.2604112
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Anonymous 2016-07-15 21:27:52 Post No.2604112 [Report]
>>2604062
I don't see any lightning
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Anonymous 2016-07-16 00:02:08 Post No.2604287
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>>2604062
Colours are okayish. Kinda bland and there's no real focus, but you're on the right track
Better than >>2604105 but still far from perfect. The form is wonky and so the lighting is wonky, making the whole piece look wonky. Before you paint do you make an under sketch? Check your proportions and use a reference for the face, because it's broken as fuck.
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