I hope this isnt too pretentious,
>made a BeHance today
>loaded up a project of 7 illustrations
they follow a theme and are in my most comfortable style
to get to the point, I'm hoping you guys can give me some criticisms and help develop this style, weed out some more obvious flaws a novice like me cant really grasp.
https://www.behance.net/gallery/38023291/Welcome-to-Rehab
thanks in advance
I'll self bump this once.
Here bud, I'll bump it for ya'.
>>2549547
Nice stuff but currently too tired for crit sorry
>>2550911
second self bump
A style like this would go great with vibrant color. If you don't already know about it I suggest checking out TripTank and perhaps Felix Colgrave. A better, more attractive font would suit you. Your current writing is cliché and dirty (no offense).
>>2551861
>vibrant color
i've been messing with watercolors, you think I should try out markers? theyve always intimidated me.
>Triptank
>Felix Colgrave
I'll check these out, no I didnt know
>better font
no offense taken, I agree with you I've never really put much effort into my writing's appearance, but you pointing that out tells me it's worth the time investment.
Any suggestions where to start on that?
>>2551895
>Markers
They're definitely worth the effort. I recently messed around with markers for the first time in years and I saw a huge boost in creativity and enjoyment. I was just doodling so I didn't put in much effort, but it was really fun and I liked the result.
>Font
I honestly don't know how to help on this one, I've never been much of a font guy. Perhaps you could check out calligraphy and through that develop your own style that you feel suits your art. TripTank will also help with this.
>>2551991
thanks for these tips man, I'll look into some markers, see what suits me, and I'll the same for font.
First order of business is to enjoy some Trip Tank and Felix.