what can I do to make this more realistic??? my art teacher said

Read the sticky, post in the beginner thread

>>2501208
There's a lot of symbol drawing going on (horns, eyes, snout etc)

>>2501208
Skin a goat and glue the fur, horns and teeth on the drawing.
don't forget to attach the hooves on the other side of the sheet

>>2501208
reeks of new
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>>2501227
>>2501234

too much detail on the horn.

>>2501208
contrast famalam

>>2501236
kek
like to see him get called out on that.

>>2501208
Have you tried telling your art teacher to go fuck themselves?

>>2501208
Add darker values, if youre not just a hobbyist get rid of your symbol drawing aswell.

>>2503117
Are you kidding?

>>2501208
Face has zero form. The way you did the horns give them a 3d shape while the face is completely flat. Draw short lines on it face to symbolize it's fur while keeping in mind the animals form.

Ask your teacher for advice not /ic/

>>2503117
this is a good idea OP

>>2503915
Art teacher obviously has no idea what they're doing, so there's a better chance of learning something here.

You're s beginner, OP, you suffer from so called symbol drawing, meaning you don't draw what's there, but what you think is there. You need to analyze things better.

Read the sticky, particularly Keys to Drawing. There are no quick magic tricks,art is learnt over many years and you might as well start now.

>>2501208
Probably meant shading and value rather than detail.

They're speaking in vague terms probably because they have no fucking idea what they're talking about but they're right your drawing is unfinished.

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>>2501208
>>2503860
>draw short lines
Idk the fucking technical term for it (hashing lines?) But I mean like pic related. This sheep's face has FORM made from nothing but a bunch of small lines, simultaneously giving the appearance of texture (hair) and also form or SHAPE. Your picture has some other problems with it but detail is the biggest. I learned how to do this as a young kid trying to draw dragons. I had this book called "dragonology" idk wtf is was about or anything like that but it had some cool looking dragons in it and one of the artists trends for drawing them was drawing a whole bunch of little lines and it really gave them alot of depth and texture in the process, very cool.

I saw that aaron blaise tutorial on youtube